1. Doll (4.99 stars, 738 notes)
2. Easy (1.72 stars, 185 notes)
3. Hard (4.78 stars, 507 notes)
4. Normal (4.25 stars, 322 notes)

1. Inconsistency in Kiai times. They should be exact same for all difficulties. Also, I think your kiai times are too short.
2. Inconsistency in red timing sections: the Doll difficulty has offset 1 ms later than the other two
3. Preview point: you need to set a preview point in all difficulties and this must be the exact same for all three
4. Not enough breaks, plus inconsistency in breaks. There should be a break about every minut so you need to add some more breaks. ALso make sure breaks are the same in all difficulties
5. If you want to get this map ranked, you need to add a normal diff, you cannot "skip" a difficulty

1. 00:24:859 (6,7) - Make these two symetrical.
2. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:33:418 and 02:43:713. Check those in all difficulties plz
3. 01:00:859 (1,1,1,1) - these are too short, to make sure your spinners are long enough, test it with autoplay and see if osu! scores at least 1000 bonus points on each spinner. If it's not the case, spinners are too short

SuperMoutarde wrote:

Hey ^^ from modding queue

[General]

1. Inconsistency in Kiai times. They should be exact same for all difficulties. Also, I think your kiai times are too short. done
2. Inconsistency in red timing sections: the Doll difficulty has offset 1 ms later than the other two done
3. Preview point: you need to set a preview point in all difficulties and this must be the exact same for all three
4. Not enough breaks, plus inconsistency in breaks. There should be a break about every minut so you need to add some more breaks. ALso make sure breaks are the same in all difficultiesdone. except Doll
5. If you want to get this map ranked, you need to add a normal diff, you cannot "skip" a difficulty

done

[Hard]

1. 00:24:859 (6,7) - Make these two symetrical. done
2. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:33:418 and 02:43:713. Check those in all difficulties plz done
3. 01:00:859 (1,1,1,1) - these are too short, to make sure your spinners are long enough, test it with autoplay and see if osu! scores at least 1000 bonus points on each spinner. If it's not the case, spinners are too short

done

[Easy]
Distance snapping is not consistent at all throughout the map. You need to remap this entirely with a consistent one.
Also, you should not stack notes in easy diff like this: 01:29:787 (2,3) it will confuse new players remap?I think it's good enough for new players,should I make sliders more?

That's all for me, good luck with this!

remap?I think it's good enough for new players,should I make sliders more?

SuperMoutarde wrote:

remap?I think it's good enough for new players,should I make sliders more?

You need to remap the Easy diff because you do not use distance snapping. It's real problem that needs to be fixed, not just suggestion.

Read this if you are not sure what it is:
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Distance_Snap

so..when I remap,if I use many sliders,will it be okay?

SuperMoutarde wrote:

sliders are fine, circles too, the problem is the distance between items. Make sure you keep the Distance snap option always locked in on the right when you place notes and it'll be ok

1. PreviewTime还没有设置，就是当你在游戏里选中这首歌的时候开始播放的时间点，设置方法是
   
   SPOILER

   
   这玩意儿是要求每个难度都一致
2. 设置你自己的combo colour
3. 你的map里有很多物件都超出了范围 比如
   SPOILER

   
   就以左边而言以这个为最大边界
   SPOILER

   
   上下右同理
4. map的整体音量太大，显得很吵，适量调低点，这图可以试试60%

1. AR-1
2. OD-2
3. easy 和noraml diff的话除了特殊情况一般会全程开着distance snap来作图，尽量减少遮挡和难读的梗
   slider velocity1.5太高了 1.0到1.2应该比较合适
4. 01:04:287(5)nc
5. 01:16:073(1)删掉nc 再后一个slider加
6. 01:28:287(1,2)这种折返条太多了 建议改掉大部分
7. 02:02:573(1)spin应该在02:06:002结束
8. 02:19:716(5)nc
9. 02:26:573(5)^

1. AR-1
2. OD-2
3. slider velocity降到1.4以下
4. 同样还是折返条略多
5. 00:19:716这一段break太长了

1. OD-2~3
2. slider velocity降到1.6以下
3. 很多地方的节奏跟其他diff几乎一样 尽量避免这么做
4. 00:59:144这段很短break可以不要
5. 02:23:144(3)nc

1. OD-3 (OD10怎么玩233
2. 02:33:431从这歌地方开始 你的map的排列几乎一直在顺时针转 避免这种情况