1. Easy (1,41 stars, 73 notes)
2. Hard (4,14 stars, 134 notes)
3. meiikyuu's Insane (4,93 stars, 186 notes)
4. tutuhaha's Normal (2,47 stars, 86 notes)

montyan wrote:

Hi from BPM / Offset Queues
BPM = 120. 000 Offset = 520

If you want to set down beat surely

plz try this

meiikyuu wrote:

kokia <3

• 
  your map reminds me of old times ;w;
  small notes ,longgggg sliders...
  So i'd suggest you to change the sliders' shape at the beginning of the song.If you intend to do this just ignore this.
  It's monotonous since there's few "fun part" in the song...

• 
  00:14:520 (1) - I thought you follow the vocal in all the song.And this
  
  part you're following the beats,a liitle strange..
  
  00:27:270 (1,2,1,2) - maybe tooooo far?
  
  00:45:020 (3) - the end of it almost touch the HP bar
  
  00:52:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - intend to follow the piano sound "didi"?
  
  a mistake if so.(I'm not sure if it's piano )(anyway it's a little strange here.)
  
  01:00:020 (2) - I suggest to add a note here,cuz you did it here 00:57:520 (2) -
  
  00:59:520 (1) - it touches the score bar D:

• 
  use Distance snap carefully in easy diff.
  
  00:08:020 (4) - the objects before this are not to the beat....

N E K O wrote:

[General]

• 
  your map reminds me of old times ;w;
  small notes ,longgggg sliders...
  So i'd suggest you to change the sliders' shape at the beginning of the song.If you intend to do this just ignore this. Well, yes. The original idea was to take the character's weapons as sliders into the map. I think about changing it though to make it simple-looking.
  It's monotonous since there's few "fun part" in the song... Well, yes. The sond repeats most of the time.

[Hard]

• 
  00:14:520 (1) - I thought you follow the vocal in all the song.And this
  
  part you're following the beats,a liitle strange.. I tried to change it.
  
  00:27:270 (1,2,1,2) - maybe tooooo far? Fixed it... a little.
  
  00:45:020 (3) - the end of it almost touch the HP bar Fixed.
  
  00:52:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - intend to follow the piano sound "didi"?
  
  a mistake if so.(I'm not sure if it's piano )(anyway it's a little strange here.) Uhm, I tried to follow the piano and then the... drums?
  
  01:00:020 (2) - I suggest to add a note here,cuz you did it here 00:57:520 (2) - Fixed.
  
  00:59:520 (1) - it touches the score bar D: Fixed.

[Easy]

• 
  use Distance snap carefully in easy diff.
  
  00:08:020 (4) - the objects before this are not to the beat.... I don't quite understand what you mean... It sounds finde to me :/

It's a nice song of KOKIA , and i think the map has much room for improvement Indeed, but I'm a newbie at mapping so I'm not very good at it ^.=.^"

1. the mapset must have a well-designed spread of difficulties,so i think you need a normal diff.

1. 00:00:520 - 00:11:520 reduce 10% volume may sounds better
2. 00:08:020(4)Not completely symmetrical
3. 00:24:270(3)a slider with repeats may not suit the music imo.
4. 00:36:520(1,2)remove this nc and nc at 2
5. 00:32:020(3)this rhythm may better to me
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:44:520(2)i think this slider can end in 00:46:020
7. 00:54:770(3)maybe remove this note?
8. 01:01:770(7)maybe add a note here for consistence

1. 00:00:520(1)i dont really i like this sharp slider
2. 00:14:145(8,1)not perfect stack
3. 00:24:270(4,1)something like this?
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:29:020(1)move this nc to 00:30:020(2)
5. 00:45:020(3)slider touch the HP bar
6. 00:47:270(5)maybe put this circle in 00:47:520
7. 00:59:520(1)slider touch the score bar
8. 01:12:895(2,3)not perfect stack

1. 00:14:395 (4) - move forward 1/4 beat and end sliders at white tick. it's easier to follow.
   
2. 00:24:270 (3) - new combo here
3. 00:25:270 (1) - remove nc.
4. 00:26:020 (1,2) - change them to slider ?
5. 00:53:520 (2) - clap at the end of this slider.

1. 00:08:270 (1) - spinner are too close to the slider end. start it 1/4 beat later.
2. 00:17:770 (1) - ^ same
3. 00:21:520 - end spinner here ? tone changed after this.
4. 00:58:020 (2) - move to 00:58:270 instead. sounds better

1. 00:21:520 to 00:50:520 - DS around here aren't nice D: choose one: 00:24:270 (4,1) or 00:27:270 (1,2)
   (also it's the same as 00:52:645 (1,2,3,4) )
2. 00:56:020 (3,4) - swap these two and curved the other way.
   
   this makes a better flow for jumps
3. 01:04:020 (4) - same logic applies here too.
   
4. 01:20:895 - remove nc spam

Froztic wrote:

hi, from popner's queue

all are suggestions unless underline.

[Easy]
please keep the spacing between 1.18x~1.22x if you are using 1.2x DS

1. 00:14:395 (4) - move forward 1/4 beat and end sliders at white tick. it's easier to follow. No for now because I wanted to follow the "RAkikota" which I wouldn't do elsewise. I'll consider it though if other people mention it, too.
   
2. 00:24:270 (3) - new combo here Okay.
3. 00:25:270 (1) - remove nc. Okay.
4. 00:26:020 (1,2) - change them to slider ? I'll keep it for now.
5. 00:53:520 (2) - clap at the end of this slider. Sounds good.

[...]

[Hard]

1. 00:21:520 to 00:50:520 - DS around here aren't nice D: choose one: 00:24:270 (4,1) or 00:27:270 (1,2)
   (also it's the same as 00:52:645 (1,2,3,4) ) Uhm, the little jumps between NCs are intended but it's supposed to be the regular "slowing" distance between the objects of the same colour. I'll keep it for now and if someone else thinks of it as weird, I might change it. (I hope my words are comprehensable, my english isn't very god)
2. 00:56:020 (3,4) - swap these two and curved the other way. Okay.
   
   this makes a better flow for jumps
3. 01:04:020 (4) - same logic applies here too. Okay, but in a different way.
   
4. 01:20:895 - remove nc spam Nope, it has some meaning.

GL Thanks and thanks a lot for your mod ^.=.^

1. 00:00:520 (1) - Move the fourth slider point (x=284,y=136) one grid right for the symetry (nazi, i know).
2. 00:03:520 (3) - I think it looks better at x=344 y=240.
3. 00:26:020 (1,3) - Try making them at the same high.
4. 00:44:520 (2) - Move the middle slider point two grid right.
5. 00:59:020 (2,3,1) - No. 1/2-beat stack like this aren't allowed in easy because beginner have trouble playing them since it's more difficult to see the rythm.
6. 01:20:520 (1,2) - They should have the same hitsounds but in 1 there isn't anything on the arrow but there is a whistle on 2's arrow.

1. 00:08:145 (1) - I remember being told that in Normal and Easy diff spinner should be at least 1/2 beat far from the last note/slider.
2. 00:08:145 (1) - Finish?
3. 00:17:645 (1) - Same suggestion about the spacement.
4. 00:28:520 (1) - Not very good looking. Try putting the start and the end at the same high like 00:30:520 (1).
5. 00:44:020 (2) - It's nearly a blanket. If you really wanted one you should move it to x=240 y=276.
6. 00:58:520 (3,4,1) - 4 and 1 are aligned so why not 3 and 4?
7. 01:14:645 (1) - Same here (and finish).
8. 01:23:020 (1) - Finish.

1. AR-1
2. 00:00:520 (1) - It doesn't loog good (at all). I think you should change the slider.
3. 00:04:520 (1) - ^ (if you don't know what to do go see other map, there are always a ton of good slider that you can inspire of)
4. 00:10:020 (1) - ^ (in this case i think you can put a spinner here)
5. 00:22:520 (3) - It should end 1/4-beat earlier.
6. 00:30:770 (2,3,4,5) - Move them all one grid down.
7. 00:50:520 (5) - I think the middle can be smmothen a little. Like this:
   
   
8. 00:58:270 (3,4,5,6,7) - Looks random. Try doing some pattern.
9. 01:06:270 (7,8) - Unrankable. The only exception are when the slider is another color or when ar si 9 or 10.
10. 01:10:020 (7,8) - Move 7 to x=308 y=140 and 8 to x=200 y=140.
11. 01:20:520 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Jump are too long to be accepted in a Hard and even if it's pretty the NC aren't allowed. Sorry.

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

As promised here is my mod:

[Easy]

1. 00:00:520 (1) - Move the fourth slider point (x=284,y=136) one grid right for the symetry (nazi, i know). Nothing wrong about that, as long as it doesn't consist of such things only. Fixed.
2. 00:03:520 (3) - I think it looks better at x=344 y=240. Uhm, okay?
3. 00:26:020 (1,3) - Try making them at the same high. Okay.
4. 00:44:520 (2) - Move the middle slider point two grid right. One grid.
5. 00:59:020 (2,3,1) - No. 1/2-beat stack like this aren't allowed in easy because beginner have trouble playing them since it's more difficult to see the rythm. Unstacked them.
6. 01:20:520 (1,2) - They should have the same hitsounds but in 1 there isn't anything on the arrow but there is a whistle on 2's arrow. I like it the way it is right now, but I'll reconsider it if someone else suggests it.

...

[Hard]

1. AR-1 Fine.
2. 00:00:520 (1) - It doesn't loog good (at all). I think you should change the slider. No, it's supposed to look like Luca's sword...
3. 00:04:520 (1) - ^ (if you don't know what to do go see other map, there are always a ton of good slider that you can inspire of) The problem here is that the slider should look like Iria's guns and even though I wanted more "simplistic" shapes that give you space for imagination, I couldn't think of a better shape. I'd change it if someone had a suugestion.
4. 00:10:020 (1) - ^ (in this case i think you can put a spinner here) I'll keep it and it was already used in other maps.
5. 00:22:520 (3) - It should end 1/4-beat earlier. Okay.
6. 00:30:770 (2,3,4,5) - Move them all one grid down. Okay.
7. 00:50:520 (5) - I think the middle can be smmothen a little. Like this:
   
   
   I tried my best.
8. 00:58:270 (3,4,5,6,7) - Looks random. Try doing some pattern. It's supposed to look like the Grand Chariot which is an Arte in the Tales series ._.
9. 01:06:270 (7,8) - Unrankable. The only exception are when the slider is another color or when ar si 9 or 10. I'll ask a XAT for this because the other modders didn't have a problem with this and even told me to move the circles precisely over the sliders.
10. 01:10:020 (7,8) - Move 7 to x=308 y=140 and 8 to x=200 y=140. Okay.
11. 01:20:520 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Jump are too long to be accepted in a Hard and even if it's pretty the NC aren't allowed. Sorry. I'll ask a XAT about this, too, because it took very long to make it symmetric and because I can't remember about this in the rules (even though you're probably right about the jumps being a little too big)

Good luck for your map ^^ Thanks a lot for your mod ^.=.^

• General

1. All good, nothing major to be found

• Easy

1. From here 01:12:520 (1) - doesn't sound too good, I suggest :
2. 01:12:520 (1) - reduce the repeat by 1
3. 01:13:645 (2) - Move it back 1 tick, change this into a slider until 01:14:020
4. 01:14:270 (3) - Last, add note here before the spinner start

• TUTUHAHA'S

1. 0:06:520 (2) - I suggest you to make this into a curvy slider like the other 3 slider before it
2. 01:20:520 - are you intentionally left it blank here? add notes here maybe imo

• Hard

1. CS-1?
2. 00:04:520 (1) - I suggest you to change this shape, idk.. Not really fit to the song
3. 00:03:895 (8,9) - change these two into slider? I feel too many circles there
4. 00:47:270 - Add note for triplet here?
5. 01:20:520 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - woot really big jumps, even harder than insane, I suggest you to reduce the spacing here for a hard diff.

• MEIIKYUU'S

1. 00:13:895 (2) - The NC should be here instead, don't you think?

AnreFM wrote:

Hello, I'll try to mod this map
Only suggestion though, feel free to object *Prepares Phoenix Wright*

• General

1. All good, nothing major to be found Yazors!

• Easy

1. From here 01:12:520 (1) - doesn't sound too good, I suggest :
2. 01:12:520 (1) - reduce the repeat by 1 Alright,
3. 01:13:645 (2) - Move it back 1 tick, change this into a slider until 01:14:020 Uhm, you mean back to the red tick, right? Did that.
4. 01:14:270 (3) - Last, add note here before the spinner start Alright.

• Hard

1. CS-1?
2. 00:04:520 (1) - I suggest you to change this shape, idk.. Not really fit to the song Replaced during remap.
3. 00:03:895 (8,9) - change these two into slider? I feel too many circles there ^
4. 00:47:270 - Add note for triplet here? Okay.
5. 01:20:520 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - woot really big jumps, even harder than insane, I suggest you to reduce the spacing here for a hard diff. Replaced during remap.

Well, I guess that's all, hope it helps
Sorry if it doesn't though It did, thanks ^.=.^
Anyway, good luck!