supercell - Giniro Hikousen (PV ver.) · forum

Azure

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Azure 2013-01-30T04:08:47+00:00

看到supercell就進來了

這首我原本也想做的，不過沒梗

[General]
Title:Ginniro Hikousen (PV ver.)
BG上有寫lol
Source:Nerawareta Gakuen

[Easy]

00:48:187 (1) + finish (還是本來有加?)
00:58:775 (1) + finish
01:15:540 (2) 折返
01:55:908 (3) 拿掉 (2) 折返 01:57:011 +cb
- [Normal]
1. 01:33:187 (3) 尾巴+finish
2. 01:37:599 (1) +finish
3. 01:18:618 (1) +finish
[Mintong]
1. 00:09:364 (1) +finish
2. 00:16:422 (1) ^
3. 00:27:011 (1) ^
4. 00:34:070 (4) ^
5. 00:41:128 (3) ^
6. 00:48:187 (4) ^
7. 00:58:775 (1) ^
8. 01:05:834 (1) ^
9. 01:05:834 (1) ^
10. 01:34:070 (1) ^
11. 01:37:599 (3) ^
12. 01:51:717 (1) ^
13. 02:05:834 (1) ^

總覺得都是nazi...
長白線2.4是+finish的地方，看你聽起來如何再決定要不要加吧..
怎麼沒有Lyrics SB 好可惜 D-:

Good Luck~

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-01-30T05:56:44+00:00

Azure wrote:
看到supercell就進來了
這首我原本也想做的，不過沒梗

[General]
Title:Ginniro Hikousen (PV ver.) orz 没看到....
BG上有寫lol
Source:Nerawareta Gakuen ok

[Easy]
00:48:187 (1) + finish (還是本來有加?) 觉得不要比较好, 会吓到玩到治愈的人因为声音突然变得那么大~
00:58:775 (1) + finish ^
01:15:540 (2) 折返这是Easy Diff 不好吧...
01:55:908 (3) 拿掉 (2) 折返 01:57:011 +cb 修改了一下

[Normal]
01:33:187 (3) 尾巴+finish
01:37:599 (1) +finish
01:18:618 (1) +finish
[Mintong]
00:09:364 (1) +finish some fixed~
00:16:422 (1) ^
00:27:011 (1) ^
00:34:070 (4) ^
00:41:128 (3) ^
00:48:187 (4) ^
00:58:775 (1) ^
01:05:834 (1) ^
01:05:834 (1) ^
01:34:070 (1) ^
01:37:599 (3) ^
01:51:717 (1) ^
02:05:834 (1) ^
總覺得都是nazi... 没有啦...有些对我很有帮助
長白線2.4是+finish的地方，看你聽起來如何再決定要不要加吧.. 我知道..可是这首真的很好听听到我都不想加了orz
怎麼沒有Lyrics SB 好可惜 D-: 那就求你帮我做吧 : D (自重

Good Luck~

thanks for mod

其实我不想放Video的, 能的话拜托你做lyric Sb了

hibarirailwayz

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hibarirailwayz 2013-01-30T06:30:23+00:00

Hi!
via my mod queue
These are my opinions; you should not accept all my suggestion, but if you skip my suggestion, I want you tell me the reason!

The Marks I use.

SPOILER

Standard

^= same contents as upward
NC=New Combo

Taiko

d=don(none)
k=kat(whistle or clap)
D=big don(finish)
K=big kat(whistle/clap and finish)

[Easy]
Rhythm and Placement

01:54:364 (2,3) - this timing confusing beginner as 01:56:128. suggestion
02:08:481 (2,3,4) - ^.suggestion

New Combo and Hit Sound

00:50:834 and 00:52:599 - change NC. start voice of lyrics　here.
02:10:687 (4) - NC? Insane is used.

[Normal]
Rhythm and Placement

clear

New Combo and Hit Sound

00:06:717 (1) - remove NC. Easy is not used.

[Mintong]
Rhythm and Placement

00:22:599 (4,5,6) - This curve is not much good. suggestion.

204,216,22599,1,2,0:0:0
240,232,22820,1,0,0:0:0
280,244,23040,2,0,P|316:252|364:248,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

New Combo and Hit Sound

clear

Overall, this is nice map!
Good luck!!☆

Azure

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Azure 2013-01-30T11:20:08+00:00

SB Done 0.0
http://puu.sh/1UQ51

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-01-30T11:29:45+00:00

Azure wrote:
SB Done 0.0
http://puu.sh/1UQ51

wa 好神 0.0

@hibarirailwayz some fixed, thanks for mod 0.0

sunshy_old

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sunshy_old 2013-01-30T15:14:22+00:00

mod for req

感觉note那亮黄色有点扎眼……跟我上课用的荧光笔一个颜色要不要调暗一点(R-243 G-204 B-20 随你

[Hard]

不知道你是怎样加NC的我更习惯每句开头加如00:08:481 (4) - 00:19:070 (5) - 00:26:128 (4) - 这个看你风格
00:19:952 (1) - 音量小些有点吵
00:51:717 (1) - ^
01:34:731 (3) - 01:38:261 (4) - ^这种滑调中间有节点的音量要不要再小点
01:27:672 (2,3,4,5) - 不怎么好看的样子
01:38:261 (4) - 觉得胖起来点比较好看另外vocal长音插根绿线慢一点试试
01:29:437 (4) - 01:48:187 (1) - 这锚点拉的有点酷炫拉完两次ctrl+g
02:10:687 (1) - 感觉原速或者慢速更好点

[Normal]
~~瞎了才1星这是要多良心~~
01:38:261 (2) - ^慢点长点?

没了

[Easy]
~~墨的无力建议取缔~~

这么慢的歌两diff得了 normal和easy都很简单难度没什么差距

normal往难了做做？

渣mod no kd

lkx_Shore

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lkx_Shore 2013-01-31T07:01:35+00:00

[General]
kiai的finish都换成自带的吧,用30%的音量.kiai time结束的那一下用10%音量

[Normal]
01:34:952 (4) - 在01:34:952开始就好了,01:36:717结束
01:38:261 (2) - start:01:38:481

[Other]
没什么问题.

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-01-31T07:20:32+00:00

sunshy wrote:
mod for req

感觉note那亮黄色有点扎眼……跟我上课用的荧光笔一个颜色要不要调暗一点(R-243 G-204 B-20 随你好

[Hard]

不知道你是怎样加NC的我更习惯每句开头加如00:08:481 (4) - 00:19:070 (5) - 00:26:128 (4) - 这个看你风格重音 (downbeat)NC一次
00:19:952 (1) - 音量小些有点吵 ok
00:51:717 (1) - ^
01:34:731 (3) - 01:38:261 (4) - ^这种滑调中间有节点的音量要不要再小点
01:27:672 (2,3,4,5) - 不怎么好看的样子
01:38:261 (4) - 觉得胖起来点比较好看另外vocal长音插根绿线慢一点试试
01:29:437 (4) - 01:48:187 (1) - 这锚点拉的有点酷炫拉完两次ctrl+g
02:10:687 (1) - 感觉原速或者慢速更好点

[Normal]
~~瞎了才1星这是要多良心~~
01:38:261 (2) - ^慢点长点?

没了
[Easy]
~~墨的无力建议取缔~~

这么慢的歌两diff得了 normal和easy都很简单难度没什么差距

normal往难了做做？

渣mod no kd

@lks_shore: except hitsound other fixed.

thanks for mod

wonders

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wonders 2013-01-31T08:44:19+00:00

awesome~
[mintong]
排列：
00:23:040 建议这里换成note，并且在 00:23:481处原地加一个note的堆叠起来，这个音有悬停的感觉（可能需要调整后面一系列的位置）
00:33:187 建议这里换成1/2短slide，后面的音有减弱
01:09:805 这里的slide删掉，在原slide尾部加一个note在01:10:246 这个slide起的不舒服
01:34:731 个人感觉这个slide的形状还要修
02:07:820 这里加个note更加流畅一点
02:10:687 太快，换成1.2并且拉远
音效：
00:16:864 add a whistle
00:48:187 add a finish 10%
01:32:084 add a whistle
01:49:952 ↑
01:57:011 add a finish
02:04:070 ↑
02:08:040 add a whistle
02:11:128 5%

[Normal]
01:19:952 10%

[Easy]
fine

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-01-31T12:06:21+00:00

angelfix wrote:
awesome~
[mintong]
排列：
00:23:040 建议这里换成note，并且在 00:23:481处原地加一个note的堆叠起来，这个音有悬停的感觉（可能需要调整后面一系列的位置）
00:33:187 建议这里换成1/2短slide，后面的音有减弱
01:09:805 这里的slide删掉，在原slide尾部加一个note在01:10:246 这个slide起的不舒服
01:34:731 个人感觉这个slide的形状还要修
02:07:820 这里加个note更加流畅一点
02:10:687 太快，换成1.2并且拉远
音效：
00:16:864 add a whistle
00:48:187 add a finish 10%
01:32:084 add a whistle
01:49:952 ↑
01:57:011 add a finish
02:04:070 ↑
02:08:040 add a whistle
02:11:128 5%

[Normal]
01:19:952 10%

[Easy]
fine

some fixed o.o thanks for mod o/

Autumn

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Autumn 2013-01-31T16:11:16+00:00

米桶 0 0
Mod from 火星

[General]
我怎么打不开视频...本地的视频文件名最好改一下,改成Video之类的防止乱码
另外音效声音太小了...25%就几乎静音了，建议音量调整到25-30%，Kiai time 40%左右

[Easy]
因为歌曲本身很慢，这个难度其实和Normal分不太开
我觉得只留一个Normal其实就行了

[Normal]
一颗星的Normal orz
和前面一样，建议改叫Easy，然后去掉原来的Easy.
另外AR+1似乎打起来舒服一点
00:57:011 (4) - 对齐强迫症

SPOILER

01:09:584 (1) - 建议换成一个单点

把01:34:952 (4) 和 01:38:481 (2) 换成两个转盘如何？没转盘BPM又低恐怕...漫天SS

02:11:128 (1) - 对齐强迫症：

SPOILER

另外这个貌似用Whistle比较好。

有关音效方面的可以参考我下面的建议。

[Mingtong]
吐槽下难度名..我觉得用自己的ID当难度名一般只适合于GD...其实可以叫银色啦飞行船啦之类的，或者直接叫Normal..
OD最好小于等于AR，所以推荐 AR=OD=5

音效方面：
------------------
可以用Finish的地方：
00:09:364 -
00:23:481 -
00:27:011 -
00:34:070 -
00:37:599 -
00:41:128 -
00:44:658 -

另外从00:51:717 开始可以混合Clap，一路whistle到底难免无力

试试在每根长白线上下Finish，在长白线的前后两根短白线下clap。一直用到01:19:952 ..后面你主要跟Vocal，实际上Clap也没用处了

Kiai Time 可以一路Finish+Clap交替放（都是在白线上）你现在用的太安静了啦 lol

Flow方面：
--------------------
01:32:084 (3) - 往下放一点：

SPOILER

其他挺好的蛮喜欢你的Flow

大爱Supercell 加油~ Star~

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-02-01T10:34:23+00:00

fixed some o.o thanks~

我真的不想把Easy删除啦...so, don't tell me to remove the Easy and change Diff name again. thanks~

Fumika

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Fumika 2013-02-02T16:16:57+00:00

Add "koeda" in tags oAo

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-02-02T16:20:45+00:00

Fumika wrote:
Add "koeda" in tags oAo

ok. i frogeted oAo

Nwolf

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Nwolf 2013-02-03T16:03:16+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue

[Easy]
00:14:658 (2) - Move middle slider point to x:240 y:128
00:34:952 (2) - Move middle slider point to x:172 y:224
00:45:540 (1) - Move middle slider point to x:432 y:112
01:08:481 (2) - Move middle slider point to x:216 y:88
02:00:540 (3) - Finish

[Normal]
00:09:364: (1) - Move to x:288 y:128
01:08:481 (4) - Circle here
01:08:922 - If followed suggestion above, 1/4 slider here

[Mintong]
00:58:775 (1) - Finish
01:27:011 (1) - Finish

Great song, great map, couldn't really find anything except very minor issues. Great job and good luck getting this ranked soon!

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-02-04T09:23:11+00:00

fix some thanks o.o

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

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Flask 2013-02-06T07:16:33+00:00

oAo

The log that I've mod "Easy" via IRC has been lost ;w; ~~踹到主機我該死~~

這才不是irc mod

14:41 mintong89: 恩恩
14:42 Flask: 那就來Normal~
14:42 mintong89: ok
14:42 Flask: 00:12:893 (4) - 這個NC吧
14:42 mintong89: ok
14:43 Flask: 00:22:599 - 好像沒whistle
14:43 mintong89: ok
14:46 Flask: 01:34:952 (4) - NC吧
14:47 mintong89: ok
14:47 Flask: 01:55:908 (1) - 感覺跟鋼琴比跟vocal好點
14:47 Flask: 就是縮短1/4 然後搬到白線 因為突然來個藍線節奏怪怪的;w;
14:49 Flask: 02:11:128 - 好像沒太大必要NC
14:49 mintong89: Normal 有一个jump可以么？
14:49 mintong89: ok
14:49 Flask: 最好不要 o.o
14:49 Flask: 我afk一下
14:50 mintong89: o.o
14:57 Flask: 好了
14:57 Flask: 同學找我-.-
14:58 mintong89: 尼玛 #announce 的mint tear又HL我
14:58 mintong89: Ono 故意的
14:58 mintong89: ._.
14:58 Flask: 瞎
15:00 Flask: 來看mintong
15:01 mintong89: 嗯
15:02 Flask: 00:04:952 (3) - 感覺可以再curve一點 好醜啊
15:02 mintong89: ok
15:04 Flask: 01:19:952 (1,3) - 做個包?
15:04 Flask: 應該不難的 
15:05 Flask: 01:25:908 (3) - 這個應該結尾在紅線 好像也沒有特別的音在藍線233
15:05 mintong89: 好 233
15:07 Flask: 01:38:261 (4) - 彎再圓滑一點
15:08 Flask: 01:38:261 (4) - 
15:08 Flask: 阿不對
15:08 Flask: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/600530差不多這樣
15:08 mintong89: 诶这根本不是て了
15:09 Flask: 我覺得沒有人會在意那個像不像日文字
15:09 Flask: orz 
15:09 mintong89: lol...
15:11 Flask: 01:57:011 - 怎麼跑出個finish了
15:12 mintong89: 米桶のbug
15:12 Flask: 02:04:070 - 這個也是米統bug的樣子  lol
15:12 Flask: 其他沒了
15:13 Flask: 天啊這mod好水 快去泡掉好嗎
15:13 mintong89: lol

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-02-06T07:19:14+00:00

thanks orz orz

Pokie

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Pokie 2013-02-10T11:48:49+00:00

　General

As I've mentioned before, Ginniro≠銀色. Already confirmed from supercell's homepage Title should be Giniro Hikousen, please remove the duplicated n from it.
You still need a reversearrow.png for a complete circle skinset.
Use 5% volume for the last red section in both Easy and Normal too.

　Storyboard

th3.png should be written as こゑだ (supercell). Consider that koeda is a vocalist but neither a doujin circle nor music groups, her name shouldn't be placed inside brackets.
L05.png, font of the word "匂" should be fixed properly.
- - L11.png "帰", L14.png "変" are having the same issue
L16.png a mistake in sentence:もう一度あなたに会いたい

02:10:907 - Bugged code here, and seems you've forget adding the fade out effect.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\L16.png",320,240
 F,0,125172,125834,0,1
 M,0,125834,,239,289
 F,0,130246,130907,1,0

Difficulties are technically fine, but I still have doubt on the new combo usage and the choice of soft-finish hitsound...
So that's all for now. Good luck.

Last edited by Pokie 2013-02-11T00:40:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-02-10T12:56:12+00:00

thanks for mod o.o

and about Picture Storyboard Change, i will call Azure to fix~

Edit: Fixed~

Kiddo-Kun

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Kiddo-Kun 2013-02-18T02:46:59+00:00

Fixed timing.

Changed Difficulty Setting on Easy.

Changed one pattern in hard.

Nice calm map, BUBBLED!

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-02-18T02:47:27+00:00

thanks >///<!

those

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those 2013-02-18T03:19:20+00:00

[General]

I'm getting something like +7 for your offset. Can we get a few more opinions on this before we get serious?
00:19:932 - Red line at this white.

[Mintong]

00:30:300 (6) - Should do like 00:37:358 (5,1) - . S:C1 finish hits so hard and feels strange without it. Otherwise, change 00:37:358 (5,1) - to the longer slider to keep consistent with like, the rest of the map.
00:33:608 (4,1) - Spacing.
02:10:667 (1) - Would remove finish from the end. It has the same tone as 02:11:990 - 02:12:872 - etc. and these aren't mapped, and an emphasis on this final slider release should not be necessary. Apply to all diffs.

[Normal]

00:09:344 (1) - That's a loud one.
00:19:932 (1,2) - Many, many times better if both sliders were 1/1. Otherwise you can try swapping the two slider lengths, since as it stands now nothing starts at 00:21:255 - , but there's a piano tone at 00:21:697 - white.
01:08:461 (4,1) - Possible improvement here: as the only 3/4 sliders in the diff you should make these sliders different from the rest.

[Easy]

01:02:285 (1) - You cared so much to blanket 00:52:579 (1,1) - so much, so let's fix this one up a little bit.
00:48:167 (1) - It would take a bit of repositioning objects, but starting from this point, your map is nothing but sliders and circles going in a clockwise motion around the map. You can make better use of your sliders to change the direction of the flow so that it covers more areas of the map.

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-02-18T03:58:13+00:00

fixed some orz

those

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those 2013-02-18T04:12:12+00:00

which not, why

mintong89