Kokatsu wrote:

Muzukashii

Hitsounds are a bit too quiet for my taste, increase vol. by ~10%? Sure

00:09:130 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is rather hard for a "newer" player, since it only contains kats. Using a don for (4) would make the pattern easier to play while still sounding good. Following the music here. Plus the same color makes it easier, not harder, lol
00:18:430 (2) - Don, to keep it consistent. This serves as a leadin here. Plus it follows the music better.
00:19:030 (6) - Same as above. Same as above
00:28:330 (2,3,4,1,2) - kkk d k fits better here, IMO. The music clearly calls for ddd k k instead...
00:42:880 (2,3,4) - ddd, same reason as above. ^
00:47:680 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:52:480 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:57:430 (4) - Don, as above. ^
01:50:230 (2,3,4) - kkk? Following music here again ._. I use kat triples for the rim hits or w/e
01:55:030 (4) - Don, as above. Same as before
01:59:680 (2,3,4) - As above. ^
02:04:480 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:09:280 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:14:230 (4) - As above. ^

Kokatsu wrote:

Oni

To be honest, I hate that diff. It's not bad in terms of mapping, it's well done, but since you try to follow each beat in the music, it turns out to be a mess. Following the drums for a Taiko is totally not a bad idea in general, but here I feel that the song needs to be mapped instrument-related. This mod will be very poor since I disagree with the Diff as a whole and I can't really "improve" things here, since I woulöd have to follow your style which I don't agree with (at least in this map), so sorry for bad modding and hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. If you want, I can explain you what I don't like in IRC. "It's not bad but it's well done" lol you're kind of contradicting yourself. I'd also like to point out that (especially in this case) to follow the beat in the music I would say does the complete opposite of turning this map into a mess; it's called consistency. I don't want to turn this into an argument of "style", but I feel that mapping to the drums/bass in regards to taiko should be objective. That is just my humble opinion, and so as I respect the views of others, I expect the same from the modder. Therefore, I will map to the drums in this diff and continue to map to the drums/bass in all my future maps. It's completely fine, even encouraged to accent strong melodies or vocals for a short phrase once or twice in a map, but disregarding a beat in it's entirety breaks every rule I have in taiko mapping like consistency and flow. In songs such as the ones MuryokuP makes, the drums should most definitely be followed and that's why I have done as such. I am quite curious as to how you would "improve" this map and why you disagree with it as a whole other than the fact that it is mapped to the drums (consistency) and not the other erratic instruments throughout the song (inconsistency). Feel free to catch me in-game if you want to discuss this further since I have already stated my reasoning.

OD +1 I really don't agree with increasing the OD; the bpm is high enough for a challenge.

Same vol. change as in Muzu? Sounds good.

00:26:530 - It would be nice if you would use a pattern that represents the violins (are that violins? Instruments, whatever) here, somewhat like D d d D d d or K d d K d d. (Same goes for all other places in the song with the same structure) I understand what you are asking me to emphasize but I want to and completely intend to strictly follow the drums here [and throughout the entire map] since they are also as strong in the music as what you are asking me to represent. Also, if I were to follow your suggestion the next phrase and a half would literally just be repeating K d d K d d over and over again. :/
01:14:530 (4) - I know that there is a crash in the music, but the pattern just calls for a small don here. lol um, if there is a crash in the music then it should be represented accordingly, thus the finisher.
02:19:180 (1) - A kat creates a smoother connection, IMO. That's definitely a don there. Though your suggestion is one to consider, if I applied it, it ruins the emphasis in the next phrase where there is a kat in the equivalent of where you asked me to put one previously.
02:28:780 (1) - ^ ^

Kokatsu wrote:

Hello. o/

General

Mention the "real" difficulty in Creator's Words, e.g. "Omen = Easy". sure..in a few updates lol
I get somewhat earlier timing, only change it if you accept with it (not sure here, because hurzzzzzzzzzzzz song); I get 125 (-5 from current). i will keep this in mind when i check timing again
Remember to remove the SB-folder if you don't want to use it! im still wondering if i should do an sb or not lol, depends how much time i have

Omen

00:20:530 (2) - NC, bcuz after a spinner. fixed from previous mod
00:26:528 (1,2,3) - The rhythm here could be hard for beginners, even if you have the first reverse slider. Either use a Slider for (2) or add another repeat to (1) and delete (2). (You could also use the same pattern as in other parts with the same music, see later references)
00:36:128 (3) - Do the same as above, since it's the same music.
01:24:130 (1) - Same as above.
01:33:730 (1) - ^

Clean, orz.

Darknesssssssssss

00:14:530 (1,2,3,4) - It looks slightly off, like it's supposed to be all mirrored and symmetric but it feels like it's all rotatet with like 5°, might just be my stupid eyes kidding me.
01:17:530 (2) - Add NC, because it follows a Spinner.
01:19:330 (1,3) - They could've been done better, havin the same wave on both parts of the slider and the red sliderpoint on the slidertick.
01:50:530 (1,2) - Would be nice to have the red sliderpoint on the slidertick for extreme perfect symmetry, orz.
02:19:330 (1,2) - Copy and flip (1) to get (2), they are slightly different (and that bothers me, yes.)

Nightmare

00:09:730 (1,1) - Why are they not stacked on the same place? It looks weird for me since it's the same music.
00:26:530 (1,2,3,4) - IMO, (2,3) should have their reverse higher, to match the pattern. Aim for something about 80~90° angle between the sliders (1,2) and flip it.
00:47:080 (4,5) - Blanket on the reverse could've been done better.
00:56:230 (2,3) - This confused me so much when playing the map for the first time, I guess it's because of the red-tick slider. However, I also dislike the slidercut from (2), since it's a rather short slider and a cut doesn't fit for it IMO, maybe change it?
00:58:330 - nice timeline you've got there, lol.
01:26:380 (6) - I don't see any reason for this note, it adds nothing to the map and it disturbst the nice whistle-slider before, I'd recommend to remove it.
01:33:730 (1,2,3,4) - Keep the angle consistent, (3,4) got a different one.
01:50:530 (1) - The "wave" you create with the red sliderpoints is too huge IMO, they only fit when they are smaller, so aim for a smaller distance between these red sliderpoints?
02:04:330 (5,1) - I know it looks neat and stuff, but it's a huge spacingerror and it kept me from FC'ing this. :/
02:33:730 (7) - A slider doesn't really represent the music here, a single note with finish would do the job.

CATACLYSM!

OD +1? HP and OD both on 7 are not that hard to SS.

00:09:730 (1,1) - Why one Slider and one singlenote? Same music, same pattern pls. fine
00:23:530 (6,7,8,9,10) - These patterns bugged me alot, the slider-into-stream stuff doesn't fit the music (it's just a downward going "stream" there) and it plays just bad. Generally, use two kicksliders or a long stream for these parts, I will mention the other ones later. i will try to change some of them, but not all
00:28:330 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:29:230 (2) - Is there any reason for putting a 1/1 slider here? If it would fit, it's on (1)'s position, following the guitarriff, but here it's just random. Use a 1/2 reverseslider instead. i think it flows fine for now..i want the other 1/2 sliders to circle around that slider neatly
00:33:130 (7,8,9,10,11) - This pattern is actually fine, it plays much better than the above mentioned one. ok
00:37:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Was it intentionally that the stream's curve increases? A static curve would fit better here IMO.
00:42:730 (7,8,9,10,11) - As above.
01:16:330 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:16:930 (1,2) - After that rising movement before, this feels like a sudden stop, which doesn't fit. You've build up tension with rising patterns (increasing density over time) and now you break it with a 1/1 break. A 1/1 Slider would fit much better here, it follows the guitarriff and keeps the tension.
01:23:680 (8) - I don't know why you put a triplet here, you've mapped the whole map mostly according to the music and this seems just random here. Use two 1/2 circles instead.
01:30:730 (7,8,9,10,11) - As above.
01:45:130 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Again, this stream looks weird, since the curve increases.
02:04:630 (10) - Why did you curve this kickslider? You haven't done that with any other kickslider aswell, so please keep them straight.
02:24:130 (1,2) - Stackingerror. i moved (2)
02:35:830 (5,6,7,8,9) - Replace them with a 1/1 slider, similar to 01:25:930 (1). fixed

Sorry it took so long. :/

Good luck with rank. ~

Firce777 wrote:

[Oni]
00:23:905 - add d? It was originally like this, but for this map I prefer using simple, shorter patterns rather than longer, more complex streams.
00:28:705 - add k? ^
00:33:505 - same as 00:23:905 ^
00:38:305 - same as 00:28:705 ^ (all of these suggestions were how I originally mapped this, but alas I changed them in favour of simpler patterns)
00:52:630 (5) - d? hmm... I actually like this. I applied this suggestion to 00:43:030 + 01:40:630 + 01:50:230 + 01:59:830 + 02:09:430 as well for consistency. Now there's not so many kkkkk k patterns!
00:57:130 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - kkddd d? ddkkk k flows much better with the previous two patterns (ddk).
01:21:505 - same as 00:23:905 same reasoning as before.
01:26:305 - same as 00:28:705 ^
01:31:105 - same as 00:23:905 ^
01:35:905 - same as 00:28:705 ^

i found this map is too many copy parttens, try to make more variability ? I considered making the second kiai more dense for variety, but as much as I try, it just feels like unnecessary overmap to me.
nice taiko anyway~ thank you~

Pereira006 wrote:

Hello sorry long wait, Who that name girl ? i love see face that girl I almost put in avatar lol is hard make avatar XD anyway here my mod uhh...i think she's from a game called Sword Girls xDD

[Omen]

Gameplay:

1. 00:24:730 (1) - Can be same shape that slider with 00:23:530 (3) like this http://puu.sh/219rC if do that will be nice to gameplay if you fix this you need fix spacing at 00:25:630 (2,3)
2. 00:36:130 (3) - Need NC because the melody is really strong here when I listen that mean is change so that really fit IMO ok
3. 01:14:530 (3) - I feel this really need NC because the drums and melody are really strong here that would make sense IMO
4. 01:19:330 (3) - NC same happened at 00:36:130 (3)
5. 01:27:130 (3) - ^ same happened and same patterns at 00:26:530 (1,2,3,1,2)
6. 01:27:130 (3,4) - grid one up to better align with 01:25:930 (2) in end slider
7. 01:57:730 (1) - RNC the melody look still continue
8. 02:07:930 (4) - grid 2 down to better align 02:06:130 (2) also the flow would good too

stuff cool, the gameplay is good but i would like see improve NC patterns

[Darkness]

Gameplay:

1. 00:26:530 (4) - This really need add NC because the melody is change there part, also would fix you patterns like other diff's
2. 00:36:130 (5) - ^ same happened also Omen diff too if fix patterns combo color
3. 00:48:130 (1) - this slider arc look weird for me try be more nice curve ?
4. 00:49:330 (2) - ^ same
5. 00:50:830 (3) - need NC because you patterns previous like this 00:40:930 (1) and after patterns like this 01:57:730 (1), so should be NC
6. 00:57:130 (1) - RNC (remove new combo) is don't sense because the melody look like still continue
7. 01:14:530 (1) - IMO IMO I don't feel this spinner fit this song because i don't feel the melody are not long this part is random better remove and add something here IMO the spinner don't fit
8. 01:17:530 (1) - grid 1 up to align with 01:18:730 (3)

stuff cool, gameplay is good too, but is same happened in Omen diff is combo color patterns

[Nightmare]

Gameplay:

1. 00:43:780 (2,3,4) - try the (2) and (4) more blanket with (3) like this http://puu.sh/21bCg IMO
2. 00:56:230 (2,3,4) - this make me confuse is hard read with skin default try remap this part to easy read
3. 01:14:530 (1) - is really same happened in Darkness
4. 01:43:330 (5) - Really need NC because there guitar is change as i can listen there guitar start so high that make sense also RNC in 01:44:530 (1) like this http://puu.sh/21bJO this make sense lot IMO IMO also would fix you patterns consistency

cool

[Cataclysm]

gameplay:

1. 00:51:730 (1) - The melody and drums look like is still continue i don't feel is change i mean strong listen so RNV
2. 01:21:130 (1) - don't matter how number are long, just don't sense because the melody and drums look like still continue just do it RNV IMO ok
3. 01:25:930 (1) - can be rnc ? like pattern in Darkness diff at 01:25:930 (5) that would sense IMO fixed
4. 02:13:930 (1) - same happened 01:21:130 (1)

stuff cool, i m enjoy this but i would like see improve combo color IMO

Opinion about this map

I really enjoy this map, really, but why lack hitsound ? I really wanna this add more hitsound also i can see the finish hitsound are inconsistency other diff's example in Darkness 00:23:530 (4) - have finish in end slider and other diff's don't, you should recheck finish hitsound I can't mod hitsound because is too much lack I m sorry ;_; and combo color i would like see improve to sense. But Really I enjoy play this map good map
[]
Any question about my mod pls ask me in-game i can try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye!

tetsutaro wrote:

Explain the tag: "sweet_serenitee".

tetsutaro wrote:

[Taiko diffs]
<Oni> 00:28:330 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) and similar - Currently it is kkddk_k_D, and it is quite inadequate with respect to the rhythm. Consider kkddkkddd, or if you must retain the large note, kkddkkd_D I'm going to have to disagree with you here since if you listen to it on 25% playback, you can clearly hear the patterns of the drums as kkdd (which you allowed me to keep), but after the dd, it's clearly a line of snares until the crash on the downbeat, which is why there is a finisher and also missing kats before it to make this pattern rankable.

1. 00:28:330 (3) - i think whistle will fit the music
2. 00:34:930 (2) - this make no sense, 3/2 repeat will better than 1/2.
3. 00:37:930 (4) - add whistle if you agree me
4. I found you can add some clap: 00:52:330 (5), 00:48:130 (1) 's end, 01:14:530 (3)'s end, 01:15:730 (4,5), 01:21:130 (4)'s beginning, 01:30:730's beginning, 01:40:330 (4)'s beginning, 01:44:530 (5)'s end and 01:49:330 (4)'s end.
5. 01:25:930 (2) - add whistle likes before
6. 01:50:530 (1,2,3,4) - I'm sure you should add clap at the 3rd beat per bar
7. 02:17:530 (3) - remove this random whistle please :3
8. 02:19:930 (1) - also this, i think clap is better than whistle, same with others.

1. 00:09:730 (1,1) - add break between them likes nightmare diff, this empty is too long
2. 00:12:130 (1,1) - ^
3. 00:42:130 (3,4) - rhythm doesn't sound good imo, the reason is that you've changed to follow drums here suddenly, how about this?

1. 00:15:730 (1,2,3,4) - square it better! it looks ooooooooooooooodd
2. 02:14:530 (1,2) - 2 is a bit far, make it closer?

1. 00:15:730 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern isn't quite square, check the spacing between notes, try using ctrl+> and ctrl+< when making it.
2. 00:35:230 (6) - I prefer straight slider to curved since your 345 are straight.
3. 00:41:530 (3,4) - I dont hate 3/4, but actually it's too sudden. I guess you can make a same part at next bar, for example change 00:42:130 (5) to 3/4, that will make sense
4. 01:08:529 (3) - add clap in the beginning? and these: 01:09:730 (1) 01:10:930 (4)
5. 01:10:930 (4) - try adding normal sampleset in the middle and the end, only whistle sounds too simple
6. 01:12:130 (1) - you have forgot finish o.o
7. 01:36:130 (1) to 01:44:830 (7) - if you can add some whistle in this part, it will make sense :3
8. 01:58:930 (5) - same with 00:41:530 (3,4), change 01:58:330 (3) to 3/4 or use 1/2 instead of 3/4.
9. 02:36:280 (1) - start it at 02:36:205

goodbye wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

[Omen]

1. 00:28:330 (3) - i think whistle will fit the music fixed
2. 00:34:930 (2) - this make no sense, 3/2 repeat will better than 1/2. ok
3. 00:37:930 (4) - add whistle if you agree me fixed
4. I found you can add some clap: 00:52:330 (5), 00:48:130 (1) 's end, 01:14:530 (3)'s end, 01:15:730 (4,5), 01:21:130 (4)'s beginning, 01:30:730's beginning, 01:40:330 (4)'s beginning, 01:44:530 (5)'s end and 01:49:330 (4)'s end. fixed all
5. 01:25:930 (2) - add whistle likes before fixed
6. 01:50:530 (1,2,3,4) - I'm sure you should add clap at the 3rd beat per bar fixed
7. 02:17:530 (3) - remove this random whistle please :3 fixed
8. 02:19:930 (1) - also this, i think clap is better than whistle, same with others. fixed

[Darkness]

1. 00:09:730 (1,1) - add break between them likes nightmare diff, this empty is too long fixed
2. 00:12:130 (1,1) - ^ fixed
3. 00:42:130 (3,4) - rhythm doesn't sound good imo, the reason is that you've changed to follow drums here suddenly, how about this? hmmm i just don't want to have the same sliders all the time lol, it might get boring ..

[Nightmare]

1. 00:15:730 (1,2,3,4) - square it better! it looks ooooooooooooooodd i think its a bit better now xD
2. 02:14:530 (1,2) - 2 is a bit far, make it closer? 2 used distance spacing though :0

[Cataclysm]

1. 00:15:730 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern isn't quite square, check the spacing between notes, try using ctrl+> and ctrl+< when making it. fixed
2. 00:35:230 (6) - I prefer straight slider to curved since your 345 are straight. fixed
3. 00:41:530 (3,4) - I dont hate 3/4, but actually it's too sudden. I guess you can make a same part at next bar, for example change 00:42:130 (5) to 3/4, that will make sense i see~
4. 01:08:529 (3) - add clap in the beginning? and these: 01:09:730 (1) 01:10:930 (4) its ok i sorta like it silent here
5. 01:10:930 (4) - try adding normal sampleset in the middle and the end, only whistle sounds too simple sure
6. 01:12:130 (1) - you have forgot finish o.o fixed
7. 01:36:130 (1) to 01:44:830 (7) - if you can add some whistle in this part, it will make sense :3 hm i just want to keep consistent sounds for now x)
8. 01:58:930 (5) - same with 00:41:530 (3,4), change 01:58:330 (3) to 3/4 or use 1/2 instead of 3/4. ok
9. 02:36:280 (1) - start it at 02:36:205 ok