XinCrin wrote:

Oh I love this song
Star for you ~

Roxas wrote:

Need a GD~?

Pink Agate wrote:

好图！其实每次看见POP map总会来支持

1. There is no diff below 3-stars difficulty. So if you want to get this ranked, you need to add an Easy diff
2. Missing Skin Files: spinner-background.png; spinner-circle.png; spinner-approachcircle.png; spinner-metre.png
3. Inconsistency in combo colours: make them the exact same in both diff
4. Inconsistency in kiai times: make them the exact same in both diff
5. Inconsistency in tags: ^

1. Hitsound consistency: why are you using Soft sampleset on 00:09:435 (3) and not on 00:14:274 (2) ? I think these notes should have similar hitsounds. Consider adding clap on both of these too.
2. 00:17:903 (5) - add clap on reverse arrow point?
3. 00:23:225 (1) - ^
4. 00:27:096 (1) - ^
5. 00:29:999 (5) - ^
6. 00:47:419 (2) - ^
7. 00:54:193 (3) - ^
8. 00:28:306 (3) - add clap
9. 00:51:290 (3) - add clap on end
10. 00:55:161 (4) - ^
11. 00:59:032 (4) - ^
12. 01:35:806 (2) - ^ (etc until the end of the map. tl;dr Add claps on red ticks)
13. 01:31:935 (1,1,1,1) - too hard to read for such a diff, change this
14. 02:55:887 (3) - this blanked can be improved

1. Same comments as normal for hitsounds, there is a lack of it
2. 00:17:903 (3,4) - not very pretty sliders
3. 00:25:887 (3,4) - ^
4. 00:20:564 (4,5,6) - this doesn't look so good. Stack or space normally, or at the very least rework the curve and put more distance between them. For instance, I think 00:30:604 (1,2,3) look much better
5. 00:38:225 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
6. 00:45:483 (1,2,3,4,5) - much better if you ask me
7. 01:37:137 (7,8) - stack perfectly with end of 01:36:532 (6) which means x:162 y:340
8. 01:43:306 (2) - anti jump not smooth imo. Too hard to read, change the spacing.
9. 01:44:032 (4) - ^
10. 02:02:419 (3) - ^
11. 02:56:612 (3) - ^
12. 03:00:725 (2) - ^
13. 01:56:491 (6,7) - stack perfectly with end of 01:55:887 (5) on x:256 y:113
14. 01:58:306 (4,5,6) - same issue as before
15. 02:28:790 (1) - a regular blanket would look much better, tbh
16. 02:51:048 (4,1) - I'm not sure what it isbut the placement of these look a bit odd
17. 03:03:629 (2) - wtf? To quote the wiki "When including a slider velocity change, there should be a discernible change in the map's tempo." This is obviously not the case here so there is no reason for such a SV change. Plz fix.
18. 03:11:370 (1) - ^
19. 03:16:209 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this doesn't look good. Maybe the idea is not bad with decreasing DS, but do it better, as of now it just looks messy

SuperMoutarde wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue!

Blue means rankability issue
Black means my personal suggestion

[General]

1. There is no diff below 3-stars difficulty. So if you want to get this ranked, you need to add an Easy diff we are trying to reduce the rating for easy, so no worries~
2. Missing Skin Files: spinner-background.png; spinner-circle.png; spinner-approachcircle.png; spinner-metre.png im gonna make that
3. Inconsistency in combo colours: make them the exact same in both diff alright im gonna check that
4. Inconsistency in kiai times: make them the exact same in both diff sure, i will make them the same
5. Inconsistency in tags: ^ > <

[Dull]

1. Hitsound consistency: why are you using Soft sampleset on 00:09:435 (3) and not on 00:14:274 (2) ? I think these notes should have similar hitsounds. Consider adding clap on both of these too.
2. 00:17:903 (5) - add clap on reverse arrow point?
3. 00:23:225 (1) - ^
4. 00:27:096 (1) - ^
5. 00:29:999 (5) - ^
6. 00:47:419 (2) - ^
7. 00:54:193 (3) - ^
8. 00:28:306 (3) - add clap
9. 00:51:290 (3) - add clap on end
10. 00:55:161 (4) - ^
11. 00:59:032 (4) - ^
12. 01:35:806 (2) - ^ (etc until the end of the map. tl;dr Add claps on red ticks)
13. 01:31:935 (1,1,1,1) - too hard to read for such a diff, change this
14. 02:55:887 (3) - this blanked can be improved

[Curious]

1. Same comments as normal for hitsounds, there is a lack of it
2. 00:17:903 (3,4) - not very pretty sliders
3. 00:25:887 (3,4) - ^ i think they are cute
4. 00:20:564 (4,5,6) - this doesn't look so good. Stack or space normally, or at the very least rework the curve and put more distance between them. For instance, I think 00:30:604 (1,2,3) look much better pretty much the same, i will try to make a better curve
5. 00:38:225 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
6. 00:45:483 (1,2,3,4,5) - much better if you ask me
7. 01:37:137 (7,8) - stack perfectly with end of 01:36:532 (6) which means x:162 y:340 done
8. 01:43:306 (2) - anti jump not smooth imo. Too hard to read, change the spacing.
9. 01:44:032 (4) - ^
10. 02:02:419 (3) - ^
11. 02:56:612 (3) - ^
12. 03:00:725 (2) - ^ im gonna ask for more mods to see if its ok or not... thanks for pointing out
13. 01:56:491 (6,7) - stack perfectly with end of 01:55:887 (5) on x:256 y:113 done
14. 01:58:306 (4,5,6) - same issue as before
15. 02:28:790 (1) - a regular blanket would look much better, tbh i would let this go for now
16. 02:51:048 (4,1) - I'm not sure what it isbut the placement of these look a bit odd i will find some more help for that:D
17. 03:03:629 (2) - wtf? To quote the wiki "When including a slider velocity change, there should be a discernible change in the map's tempo." This is obviously not the case here so there is no reason for such a SV change. Plz fix.
18. 03:11:370 (1) - ^ its pretty nice to me thou, more mods required
19. 03:16:209 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this doesn't look good. Maybe the idea is not bad with decreasing DS, but do it better, as of now it just looks messy changed a little bit, i dont think its messy thou..

thanks for modding~!

That's it for me. GL with your map!

Pink Agate wrote:

好图！其实每次看见POP map总会来支持

SuperMoutarde wrote:

SPOILER

Hello, from my modding queue!

Blue means rankability issue
Black means my personal suggestion

[Dull]

1. Hitsound consistency: why are you using Soft sampleset on 00:09:435 (3) and not on 00:14:274 (2) ? I think these notes should have similar hitsounds. Consider adding clap on both of these too. Yeah you're right
2. 00:17:903 (5) - add clap on reverse arrow point? the first part is a soft part in this song, so I don't prefer claps here
3. 00:23:225 (1) - ^ sorry, I don't like a clap between two whistle
4. 00:27:096 (1) - ^ ^
5. 00:29:999 (5) - ^ the hitsound here is special
6. 00:47:419 (2) - ^ Fine
7. 00:54:193 (3) - ^ ^
8. 00:28:306 (3) - add clap ^
9. 00:51:290 (3) - add clap on end ^
10. 00:55:161 (4) - ^ ^
11. 00:59:032 (4) - ^ ^
12. 01:35:806 (2) - ^ (etc until the end of the map. tl;dr Add claps on red ticks) ^
13. 01:31:935 (1,1,1,1) - too hard to read for such a diff, change this kind of upset
14. 02:55:887 (3) - this blanked can be improved

fixed

That's it for me. GL with your map!

Gloria Guard wrote:

SPOILER

Hi -Baby Strawberry (:3」_)=3

From my queue


[Dull]

00:14:516 (3) Ctrl+G? Flow can be more smoothly. I think they're the same and no need to change

00:38:709 (1,2,3,4) this is shape change? fixed

01:34:838 (1) slider head add finish fixed

01:49:838 (1) remove NC fixed

01:50:322 (2) add finish and NC fixed

01:53:709 (1) remove NC changed a series of them

03:09:549 (1,2,3,4,1) This is pattern shape, Can be further improved. nope, not well combined with the latter sliders

Good luck

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi -Baby Strawberry (:3」_)=3

From my queue

[Curious]

00:23:951(3,1,2) Ctrl+G? Pattern for a little more fun. good idea, but still im gonna keep that for now cauz its a bit strange to me, donknow why..

00:26:854 (3,2) 3 slider head and 2 slider end stack ok

00:54:193 (5) add NC yes

01:17:419 (1) remove whistle and add finish dont really wanna do that

01:20:927 (2,1) stack ok

01:38:709 (3) add NC better at 5

01:49:112 (3) stack ok

01:49:838 (1) remove NC not a big difference thou..

01:50:564 (2) add NC

02:37:499 (4) Ctrl+G? bad flow n a big jump appears

02:38:346 (1) remove NC that would be nice

02:38:709 (9) add NC

02:45:967 (1) remove NC

02:46:451 (5) add NC

02:53:709 (1) remove NC

02:54:193 (5) add NC

03:01:935 (5) ^

03:05:806 (3) ^

03:09:677 (5) ^

03:17:419 (7) ^

hmm new combos are really messed up, so im gonna recheck from the beginning
Good luck

1. 00:25:161 (4) - 这个滑条从00:24:919 - 这里开始比较好，如果这样做滑条尾拉长至00:25:645 - 结束
2. 00:29:032 (4) - 这个也是，为什么不从这里开始00:28:790 - ，我觉得这里开始不会显得太快又能跟好人声
3. 00:42:580 (1) - spinner试试在这里结束，这里有个鼓点，00:46:451 - 在这结束感觉接后面的circle显得太快了
4. 02:15:483 (1) - 这个滑条，从02:15:725 - 这里开始比较好，感觉大部分新人都会先听着人声来按

• 这个难度我觉得太赞了，打起来很舒服[，真的找不出那里不好的地方，感觉高潮部分连打可以放大间距[/list]

Pink Agate wrote:

好，我来MOD了

[Dull]

1. 00:25:161 (4) - 这个滑条从00:24:919 - 这里开始比较好，如果这样做滑条尾拉长至00:25:645 - 结束 fixed
2. 00:29:032 (4) - 这个也是，为什么不从这里开始00:28:790 - ，我觉得这里开始不会显得太快又能跟好人声 ^
3. 00:42:580 (1) - spinner试试在这里结束，这里有个鼓点，00:46:451 - 在这结束感觉接后面的circle显得太快了 feels like all the same. And there're a whole beat in between, it's not too close.
4. 02:15:483 (1) - 这个滑条，从02:15:725 - 这里开始比较好，感觉大部分新人都会先听着人声来按 fixed

抱歉没帮上什么忙

yachiru4 wrote:

Hey, from my playback queue

[Curiosity]

Only because I suck at those small streams of hit circles lol. I played it twice though so...

it was really fun! Jumps look neat, and I can definitely imagine this map being ranked already

Cheers!
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Fk yea, english skin!!! Love the hitbursts