1. Dekaane's Hard (4.92 stars, 249 notes)
2. Easy (1.03 stars, 78 notes)
3. Normal (3.33 stars, 140 notes)
4. Overdrive (5 stars, 494 notes)
5. Para's Lunatic (5 stars, 383 notes)

• General
  
  Remove your nick form the tags, it's not needed. Add Ten Desires to the tags.

• Easy
  
  Circle size -1?
  
  00:10:320 (2) - Overlapping isn't a good idea in lower diffs, I would suggest you to try and not overlap this with the previous slider.
  00:21:355 (1) - Second point of the slider 6 grids left and 1 down.
  
  nothing more, good diff.

• Normal
  
  Since this is a short map you could add +1 to OD, not neccessary, though.
  
  00:04:803 (1) - You shouldn't make more than 1 repeat on diffs below hard, as it's hard to read for newbies. You can leave 2 repeats at some parts, but it's not recommended.
  00:21:355 (1) - Overlap, you should avoid this.
  00:55:665 (1) - Lots of repeats for a normal, consider changing this to another pattern. If you want to leave it as is (which you shouldn't) end the slider at 00:56:355
  01:06:700 (1) - ^ . If you want to leave it as is, end it at 01:07:389.
  01:13:079 (1) - ^
  01:18:596 (7) - ^
  01:21:700 (5) - Overlap, why don't you move this to x:256 y:240? It fits quite well there.
  01:26:010 (5) - again, lots of repeats

• Dekaane's Hard
  
  Drain rate +1, OD +1
  
  00:19:803 (3) - mmm... why don't you make it like this? http://puu.sh/1TpiA (of course, if you do that you'll have to respace 00:20:894 (1))
  00:52:389 (3) - Something like this? http://puu.sh/1TpkC
  00:55:838 (2) - Remove this, move 3 to 00:55:838 and 4 to 00:56:182 (and respace this pattern)
  01:06:873 (2) - ^
  01:01:527 (1) - End this slider at 01:01:700

• Para's Lunatic
  
  Hitsounds are too low, aside from that I can't find anything special to remark. Nice map.

• Overdrive
  
  Sorry, but I'm not good enough to play this, much less mod it.

Akareh wrote:

• Dekaane's Hard
  
  Drain rate +1, OD +1 /*I'll take HPD +1, I'll keep OD until some one else suggests something about this.
  
  00:19:803 (3) - mmm... why don't you make it like this? http://puu.sh/1TpiA (of course, if you do that you'll have to respace 00:20:894 (1)) /*I want to keep that symmetric, adding that the flow there is nice.
  00:52:389 (3) - Something like this? http://puu.sh/1TpkC /*Fixed in another way, I found that part a bit squeezed due to it is in the edge of the map
  00:55:838 (2) - Remove this, move 3 to 00:55:838 and 4 to 00:56:182 (and respace this pattern) /*I'm following piano there, and it's a fun and playable pattern.
  01:06:873 (2) - ^ /*^
  01:01:527 (1) - End this slider at 01:01:700 /*Added a repeat instead.

Nichiyouki wrote:

Dekaane's Hard

1. 00:05:493 (3) - Try to make slider is curve more than this. If you have no idea, may move (2) to x:240 y:172. Then make to this code? /*Nice one, done.
   

   304,144,5493,2,0,P|364:108|392:44,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:30:665 (1,2) I don't like to put note overlap to slide of slider. I think that you should avoid it. /*Moved away.
3. 00:52:907 (4,5,6) - Speed of slider began to decrease. I think that you should stack these. /*It'd break the flow, it never stopped in parts like this.
4. 01:01:527 (1) - I try to listen in the rhythm. You should repeat this slider. /*Already reversed (Update pls)
5. 01:02:217 (1) - Remove NC on this, but add it on 01:02:734 (4) instead. /* (1,2,3,4) are in the same part of the melody, I don't change this.
6. 01:03:941 (7) - Add NC here. /*Done
7. 01:13:079 (2) - ^ /*It is already (1) o3o
   
   Comment: It's look good, but may want more work.

Good luck~

1. preview time is not same between diff. you must change it.
2. tag and source is same as above.
3. your mp3 is 320kbps. you must change 128~192kbps. use this.

1. 01:03:078 (2) - unsnapped note.

1. 00:51:700 - two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, Irreversible

M4M request in pm in-game
My map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/70967

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. The bitrate for ZUN - OLD YUANSHEN.mp3 is 320 kb/s. You must adjust this file by it should not exceed 192 kb/s.
2. Move preview time of all diffs except for Para's Lunatic diff to 18596, to same as Para's Lunatic diff.
3. Dekaane's Hard diff haven't source name which other diff are have it. You must add "Touhou" in source name on Dekaane's Hard diff.
4. Tags in Dekaane's Hard s different with other diff, but other diff have you in tags, too. Please change tags in all diffs is "Seiga Kaku Parachute DakeDekaane"
5. Please resnap 2 green line sections on start and end of kiai time in all diffs, by start on 01:19:286, and end on 01:41:355.

Easy

1. 00:15:838 (2,1) - Spacing between these is too close, please use spacing is 1.00x
   
   Comment: Good diff, but I think CS is too high for Easy diff. However, it hasn't problem for what you do.

Normal

1. 00:15:838 (2,3) - Spacing between these is too close.
2. 00:21:335 (1) - Slider (3) shouldn't stack with (1) because it will makes the player confused.
3. 00:26:527 (5) - Same as previously. I suggest that move it to x:316 y:20.
4. 00:28:596 (3,1) - Spacing is too far. Please fix it.
5. 00:40:492 (5,1) - Use a slider instead of 2 circles.
6. 00:43:769 (2) - Same as 00:21:335 (1).
7. 00:46:182 (1,2,1) - Spacing between (1,2) is too far. Please reduce spacing by move 2nd and last point of this slider. Then try to make 00:48:941 (1) by make to this code.
   

   336,100,46182,6,0,P|431:96|328:280,1,440
   256,192,47907,2,0,P|256:320,2,110
   176,100,48941,6,0,P|81:96|184:280,1,440

8. 00:59:796 (8,1) - Add NC on (8), but remove it on (1) to following the rhythm.
9. 01:18:251 (6) - Same as 00:21:335 (1).
10. 01:36:010 (2) - I think remove a note be better.
    
    Comment: This diff has many overlapping notes, and NC I feel that it was not associated with rhythm which on my modding, I will not said NC more than this. So you should consider what I mentioned.

Dekaane's Hard

1. 00:05:493 (3) - Try to make slider is curve more than this. If you have no idea, may move (2) to x:240 y:172. Then make to this code?
   

   304,144,5493,2,0,P|364:108|392:44,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:30:665 (1,2) I don't like to put note overlap to slide of slider. I think that you should avoid it.
3. 00:52:907 (4,5,6) - Speed of slider began to decrease. I think that you should stack these.
4. 01:01:527 (1) - I try to listen in the rhythm. You should repeat this slider.
5. 01:02:217 (1) - Remove NC on this, but add it on 01:02:734 (4) instead.
6. 01:03:941 (7) - Add NC here.
7. 01:13:079 (2) - ^
   
   Comment: It's look good, but may want more work.

Para's Lunatic

1. 00:35:148 (1) - Move to down 1 grid to reduce spacing between this and next note.
2. 00:42:045 (7) - Add NC here.
3. 00:47:648 (7,8) - It's weird for me. Please remove this note. Then add NC on next note. uhm.. no o: but i added a nc
4. 00:53:079 (5) - Add NC to following the rhythm.
5. 00:53:769 (9) - Add NC here
6. 00:54:458 (13) - Add NC?
7. 00:57:045 (1,2) - Try to stack them because these have spacing 0.02x
8. 00:58:596 (9) - Same as 00:53:079 (5)
9. 00:58:769 (10,11) - Move to up 2 grids.
10. 01:37:303 (9) - It's weird for me. Please remove this note. this definitely not ^^
    
    changed all other things i think, thanks :3
    
    Comment: Same as Normal diff. NC want consider more than this.

Overdrive

1. 00:24:113 (5) - Add NC to following the rhythm.
   
   Comment: Awesome

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.
Note: I would not say the hitsound because you said ><

Good luck~

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
M4M~
> My mod <
[Dekaane's Hard]
- Non-Downbeat Kiai Times:
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:19:288, ends on 01:41:357. Move to 01:19:286 and 01:41:355 /*Fixed my Kiai
01:35:665 (1) - Remove NC /*This part (1) and (2) is mapped in 1/3, it's a single part in the melody and it would look weird if (1) belongs to another combo.
01:35:838 (2) - NC here. /*^

That's all i can found.
Good luck.

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi Irrversilble ^^/

From my modding queue

[Dekaane's Hard]
00:52:907 (4,5,6) specing -> http://puu.sh/1Z3DH change please /*It's already fixed in last version (Irre update pls :c)
00:53:596 (1) remove slider and add note? /*Done
00:59:200 (2,3,4) This beat seems to be more appropriate -> http://puu.sh/1Z3FB /*Done
01:03:251 (5) remove slider and add note ? /*Done
01:03:941 (7) ^ Hard is difficult for players /*Done
01:04:631 (9) ^ /*Done
01:09:951 (1,2,3,4) specing -> http://puu.sh/1Z3Ld change please /*Changed in something like patterns before
01:26:010 (1) remove slider and add note, Hard is difficult for players /*Done
01:31:527 (7) ^ /*I'll keep this as this goes along with the piano
01:31:286 (6) ^ /*^
01:35:665 (1) remove slider and add note, Hard is difficult for players.. too /*^
Good Luck.