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Draw The Emotional - Sad Spring

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smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi,Nyquill,#modreq.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.Tag is not consistent,"RLC's Hard" no add the tags,add it?
2.Insane diff un select " wide screen support",select it?
3.Combo color is not consistent (RLC's Hard)

[ryuu's Normal]

SPOILER
00:43:401 (3,4,6) - I recommended can add whistle (3 and 4 at slider head) this here,because if add it,the vocal can strong effect of expression,imo.
00:49:923 (5) - Cancel the medium whistle? continuous whistle feel a bit noisy. If cancel , it will be useful sense of rhythm.
00:58:401 (4) - Nazi,stack crooked off.
01:00:357 (2) - Forget add clap? (Beacuse this part is 24clap at this here.)
01:02:640 (3) - Forget add clap? (Because 01:01:336 (1) - you add clap at end,so I think add here,have a good effect.)
01:05:249 (1) - Strong beat,add finish at head?
01:09:162 (1) - Why not add finish?
01:10:466 (3) - Cancel the clap at head ? ( Seems a bit noisy(no rhythm sense) at this here)
01:15:031 (2) - ^
01:16:336 (4) - Why not add finish at end?
01:17:640 (1,4) - As the same 00:43:401 (3,4,6)
01:19:596 (1,3) - Add whistle in slider end ,reason in the same 00:43:401 (3,4,6).
01:22:205 (1,3) - ^
01:25:466 (2) - whistle?
01:32:314 (5) - Add whistle? (Because you add 01:29:379 (3,4),have the same rhythm.)
01:53:285 (3) - Change a rhythm , so I suggest NC here.
01:54:999 (1) - Why not add hitsound at here? You can add finish or clap,will be fit.
01:56:714 (4) - Change a rhythm , so I suggest NC here.
02:00:142 (2) - ^
02:08:714 (1) - As the same 01:54:999 (1).
02:15:571 (1) - Add finish in slider head? (Strong beat)
02:28:575 (3) - Add whistle in slider head?
02:48:466 (4) - Cancel the clap at head ? ( Seems a bit noisy(no rhythm sense) at this here)
02:57:923 (1) - Add finish in slider head? (Strong beat)
03:04:445 (2) - ^
03:05:749 (1) - ^
03:09:662 (3) - Cancel clap in slider end and add 03:10:314 (4) ? (24 clap)

[RLC's Hard]

SPOILER
00:47:314 (2,3) - Add clap (3 add end)? I think have 24 clap, it will be sense of rhythm.
00:51:227 (1) - Add finish in slider head?
00:53:836 (3,4) - As the same 00:47:314 (2,3)
00:56:118 (1) - Add finish in slider head? (Strong beat)
00:57:260 (1) - Feel move to (368|216) fit the music.
00:58:075 (4,1) - Feel can add finish or clap in slider head ?(Have strong beat at this here.)
00:59:379 (3) - ^
01:02:640 (1) - Perhap can add finish at head.
01:18:292 (1) - Perhap can add finish.
01:20:901 (1) - ^
01:23:510 (1) - ^
01:26:118 (1) - ^
01:32:477 (4,5,6) - Seems can move to (332|328),fit the music (and triangle)
01:37:205 (1) - Recommended add finish at here,it can be good sense.
02:17:285 (1) - I think this hitsound is add finish,not add clap. Are"t you feel add clap have a bit strange rhythm?
02:17:392 (1) - And , here can add finish,have a good rhythm effect ,too.
02:36:972 (7) - I think this hitsound is add finish,it will be sense of rhythm.
02:42:271 (7) - ^
02:44:879 (7) - ^
02:46:184 (2) - ^
03:00:532 (1) - ^
03:08:684 (2,4) - I think add (24)clap at head,seems have good sense of rhythm.
03:09:988 (2,4) - ^
03:10:966 (1) - Add finish, it will be a good effect.

[Insane]

00:25:303 (6,7) - Seems this two objects close the scoreboard? Suggest move down a bit.
00:39:162 (6) - I feel here can use NC,feel add it can read easy.
00:40:303 (11,12,1,2,3) - Perhaps can be a arc.
00:42:749 (9) - Turn an angle?
SPOILER
00:45:031 (6) - Perhaps can stack 00:46:010 (2) ? Have a good effect.
00:47:640 (7) - Recommded use slider head stack 00:46:010 (2),too. Have the better flow.
00:49:434 (4) - Perhaps can stack 00:47:640 (7) slider head.
00:55:955 (10) - Not stack (7)? On purpose?
00:56:607 (2) - Feel this note not good flow, try stack 00:56:770 (3) ?
01:05:249 (5) - Change a rhythm (vocal) , so I suggest NC here.
01:10:466 (7) - ^
01:15:683 (9) - ^
01:18:292 (7) - I think add finish in slider head have a good effect.
01:23:510 (6) - ^
01:32:640 (12) - I think add finish have a good effect.
01:36:553 (6) - As the same 01:05:249 (5).
01:37:205 (14) - I think add finish have a good effect.
02:04:214 (9) - As the same 01:05:249 (5).
02:10:428 (4) - I think add finish have a good effect.
02:13:857 (4) - Add whistle? I feel fit the music.
02:36:401 (6) - Change a rhythm (vocal) , so I suggest NC here.
02:37:053 (11) - Add finish?
02:57:760 (1) - ^
03:09:662 (1,2,3,4) - Try this? Feel so good pattern :
SPOILER
03:10:314 (5) - NC?

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.So good map ,let me learn more place and flow, I shoot 2 stars.
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu

smallboat wrote:

[ryuu's Normal]

SPOILER
00:43:401 (3,4,6) - I recommended can add whistle (3 and 4 at slider head) this here,because if add it,the vocal can strong effect of expression,imo. done
00:49:923 (5) - Cancel the medium whistle? continuous whistle feel a bit noisy. If cancel , it will be useful sense of rhythm. but.. it's a rhythm of whistles :c please, can i leave it? ;___;
00:58:401 (4) - Nazi,stack crooked off. okay
01:00:357 (2) - Forget add clap? (Beacuse this part is 24clap at this here.) done
01:02:640 (3) - Forget add clap? (Because 01:01:336 (1) - you add clap at end,so I think add here,have a good effect.) done
01:05:249 (1) - Strong beat,add finish at head? i add soft finish. because i don't want it to be too loud :<
01:09:162 (1) - Why not add finish? done
01:10:466 (3) - Cancel the clap at head ? ( Seems a bit noisy(no rhythm sense) at this here) ugu
01:15:031 (2) - ^ i like it :< clap, clap, clap
01:16:336 (4) - Why not add finish at end? okay
01:17:640 (1,4) - As the same 00:43:401 (3,4,6) done
01:19:596 (1,3) - Add whistle in slider end ,reason in the same 00:43:401 (3,4,6). ugu
01:22:205 (1,3) - ^ ugu
01:25:466 (2) - whistle? ugu
01:32:314 (5) - Add whistle? (Because you add 01:29:379 (3,4),have the same rhythm.) really
01:53:285 (3) - Change a rhythm , so I suggest NC here. ugu
01:54:999 (1) - Why not add hitsound at here? You can add finish or clap,will be fit. done
01:56:714 (4) - Change a rhythm , so I suggest NC here. ugu
02:00:142 (2) - ^ done
02:08:714 (1) - As the same 01:54:999 (1). done
02:15:571 (1) - Add finish in slider head? (Strong beat)
02:28:575 (3) - Add whistle in slider head?
02:48:466 (4) - Cancel the clap at head ? ( Seems a bit noisy(no rhythm sense) at this here) i like it :<
02:57:923 (1) - Add finish in slider head? (Strong beat) done
03:04:445 (2) - ^ ^
03:05:749 (1) - ^ ^
03:09:662 (3) - Cancel clap in slider end and add 03:10:314 (4) ? (24 clap) done

thank u for ur useful mod :3

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Azer
World Cup Organiser
1,107 posts
Joined December 2012
Azer
greetings traveler

[Insane]
  • Considered starting the diff at 00:14:379 ?
  1. 00:25:792 (8) - blanket or make straight for aesthetics
  2. 00:30:031 (1,2,3) - weird flow, how bout something like this
    SPOILER
  3. 00:31:336 (1,2) - thats a massive jump man
  4. 00:38:021 (3,4) - weird flow, curve 3 downward and make 4 straight
  5. 00:40:303 (6,7,1,2,3) - this looks really ugly, fix angle pls
  6. 00:41:770 (1,3) - fix blanket
  7. 00:50:249 (6,7) - too close to eachother, move 6 to ~ x362 y246
  8. 00:54:814 (6,7,8) - youve got the emphasis backways, move 7 closer to 6
  9. 01:01:336 (1,2,3) - make distance consistant
  10. 01:06:553 (1) - angle is ugly
  11. 01:11:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pretty uncharictic of the song, nothing really wrong here but i feel making this part streamier would be better
  12. 01:14:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - pentagon pls
  13. 01:17:151 (3,4,5) - distance a bit too low
  14. 01:19:678 (2) - nothing in the song here, replace 01:19:433 (8,1,2,3) - with 4 circles with distance snap
  15. 01:20:901 (6,7) - try a reverse slider here and changing the following objects
  16. 01:24:651 (1,2) - I don't think suddenly having red tick sliders is good here really, takes you by surprise
  17. 01:28:727 (5) - move up left, too close to 6
  18. 01:56:499 (7,8) - huge jump
  19. 02:04:428 (10,11) - ^
  20. 02:08:285 (3,4) - stack and maybe switch order (slider-circle instead of circle-slider)
  21. 02:08:714 (5,1) - ^
  22. 02:12:249 (1) - replace with two circles
  23. 02:15:571 (1,2,3) - too close to eachother, spread apart for better consistency
  24. 02:21:727 (2,3) - huge jump
    [* ]02:52:379 (8,1) - unstack

    NC
    1. 00:26:118 (9) - NC
    2. 00:27:423 (13) - NC
    3. 00:27:749 (1) - remove NC
    4. 00:28:564 (1) - NC
    5. 00:31:336 (5) - NC
    6. 00:33:781 (4) - NC
    7. 00:36:553 (6) - NC?
    8. 00:41:770 (5) - NC
    9. 01:07:857 (7) - NC?
    10. 01:10:466 (7) - NC?
    11. 01:53:499 (9) - NC?
    12. 01:56:928 (8) - NC?
    13. 02:00:357 (8) - NC?
    14. 02:03:785 (8) - NC?
    15. 02:17:285 (7) - NC?

[RLC's Hard]
wow i cant find anything rlc op
  1. 01:56:285 (6,1) - weird flow
    LITERALLY NOTHING

And I'm sorry to ryuu but I don't know shit about normals orz
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
1,781 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Nyquill

Azer wrote:

greetings traveler My Greetings.

[Insane]
[notice][list]Considered starting the diff at 00:14:379 ?

[*] 01:06:553 (1) - angle is ugly Not sure what you mean?
[*] 01:11:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pretty uncharictic of the song, nothing really wrong here but i feel making this part streamier would be better Its something i've been considering for while, I'll keep it in mind but i'll leave it for later.
[*] 01:14:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - pentagon pls Its visually hard enough to find because of the length of the pentagon, but I guess it can't hurt.
[*] 01:17:151 (3,4,5) - distance a bit too low I feel like lowered distance is better going into a new section (especially a quieter one).
[*] 01:24:651 (1,2) - I don't think suddenly having red tick sliders is good here really, takes you by surprise Better than notes, what would you rather me do? Sliders are easier to hit.
[*] 02:08:285 (3,4) - stack and maybe switch order (slider-circle instead of circle-slider) I don't feel like it makes a difference? Especially since slider circle and circle slider is more of a playing preference, and doesn't physically make anything easier or harder
[*] 02:08:714 (5,1) - ^ ^
[*] 02:12:249 (1) - replace with two circles I don't feel like this particularily makes anything more worth emphasizing emphasized. Its more fitting for a relaxed section as it is.
Everything else was done, and I remapped a lot of shit.
11t
Elite Storyboarder
299 posts
Joined November 2012
11t



[Insane]
  1. 00:24:488 - The hitsounding in this section sounds too abrasive for me. I personally think that using soft-hitnormal would have worked better. For sections like 00:35:249 and 01:06:553 using normal-hitnormal sounds perfect, but in the beginning here there isn't that continuous bass guitar playing low 1/4s to sort of justify using normal-hitnormal in my opinion. Instead, the guitars focus on the mid-high range in this section so I think soft-hitnormal would have been better.

  2. 00:29:053 (1) - Slight aesthetic issue; this circle isn't linearly aligned with the previous objects. 245,86 looks better. It's really not a huge deal but I did notice it during actual play so I thought I should point it out.

  3. 00:47:966 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I really like the flow here, especially the pair of sliders at 00:49:434 (1,2). One of my favorite Nyquillisms which has had a huge influence on my own mapping is your backtracking flow after straight or very slightly curved 1/2 sliders, these sorts of things really demonstrate your mastery over slider leniency.

  4. 01:06:553 - The symmetry plays really well in this section, and you've also kept things interesting by alternating between repeats and triples.

  5. 01:11:770 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part feels a bit empty in comparison to the instrumentation. It plays fine though and I guess it acts as a sort of break between two streamy sections, but it still feels weird to be clicking on 1/2 sliders when all you can really hear in the music is 1/4 bass and the occasional snare. This is probably the best way to map things though, since you couldn't have continued with triples and repeats since the 1/4s are constant instead of segmented, and a huge stream probably would've been too much difficulty-wise for this map. Anyway I'm probably just repeating things you've already considered.

  6. 01:32:640 (12) - Sorry orz. When I'm looking at it in the editor it really doesn't seem off at all but in actual play for some reason this looked awkward. Try 455,179?

  7. 01:37:857 - Artist: screamo guy feat. Draw the Emotional
    no kds

  8. 01:50:714 (1) - omg I wish there were a hitsound for these vocals. Still, only having soft-hitnormal doesn't mesh well here. Maybe try soft-hitwhistle2? Or maybe you could just lower the volume for the slider start.

  9. 02:08:285 (3,4,5,1) - These feel awkward for me, especially 02:08:285 (3,4) which has a 1/4 slider start on a blue tick. I think it would be better if you changed (3-4) into a triple instead, though if you do end up keeping it like this, there is a slight spacing inconsistency between the (3-4) gap (2.67x) and the (5-1) gap (2.44x). If that was intentional, then it's totally fine.

  10. 02:18:793 (3,4) - I have a feeling that decreasing the spacing between these two sliders could make the tempo change play more smoothly. Currently the spacing is pretty large in comparison to the spacing at 02:18:142 (1,2,3) and while that's expected (1/2 gap vs. 1/4 gaps), the actual clicks made by the player are all spaced 1/1 apart here. Having 3 semi-closely spaced 1/1 clicks and then a largely spaced 1/1 click right after a tempo change could be a problem. My suggestion would be to move 02:19:119 (4) to 56,116; doing so spaces the ends of (3) and (4) to roughly the same distance as between 02:18:142 (1,2,3). This could be a good visual indicator of the consistent click rhythm, while still keeping the actual spacing between (3-4) further apart. The distances between (4) and 02:19:445 (5) and (5) and (6) also become roughly the same (2.22x) after this change.

  11. 02:24:010 - The flow in general in this section is great, I really like how you manage to construct oval flow even though you use primarily straight and slightly-curved sliders.
Gudo mappu! Your maps always strike a nice balance between linear and circular flow, and this map is no exception. In general I think your maps are very adaptive to different playstyles, there's always something for everyone to enjoy in a Nyquill map. I think that the secret behind this is in your use of slightly-curved sliders with a focus on semi-parallel arrangement. Most great maps are characterized by a diversity of flow to keep the playthrough interesting rather than becoming monotonous. In most cases this seems to be done by explicitly alternating between angular/linear and circular flow, i.e., triangle hitcircle patterns with blanketed sliders. However, this map in particular seems to diversify flow not explicitly, but implicitly, by giving players a choice between different methods of following your patterns. Your consistent use of straight or semi-straight sliders seems to suggest a linear flow, but the arrangement of your objects with the help of slider leniency presents the possibility of playing via circular flow as well.

In the end, I think that the beauty of this map and your maps in general comes from allowing the players to play the way that they want to play, rather than forcing them into a strict set of flow patterns. Making maps like this is possible only for someone who's truly mastered things like slider leniency: everyone clicks hitcircles in the same way, but tracing through sliders can be made a diverse experience depending on the construction of the map.

Your use of streams is moderate and not overdone. This helps to diversify gameplay, because too much stream makes a map a (sometimes frustrating) spamfest and too little stream makes a map feel too steady.

Aesthetically your patterns are well-designed and organized; the map as a whole looks clean and stable, with an adaptive structure well-suited for many types of flow. In many maps the structure is based too much on blankets or straight lines, and this tends to pigeonhole the flow into being either uniformly circular or uniformly linear. That isn't the case for this map; the aesthetic quality of this map comes from a structure that can adapt.

Overall, the primary characteristic of this map is definitely "balance". But by no means is this a balance formed from compromise, rather it's a balance created from doing everything so well that there are no identifiable weakspots or lacking elements.

It's rare that I don't have any general complaints about a map as a whole, but honestly I really don't see any aspect of this map that's lacking in some way. Everything that I've pointed out above are either minor grid issues, slight spacing suggestions, or hitsound adjustments. Usually here I would tell a mapper that they need to work on such and such, like maybe their map isn't as neat as it could be or that their object spacing needs work or that the rhythm is awkward, but for this map, there's nothing to say about things like that. Amazing work!
take itttttt ☆

brb with NH
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
1,781 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Nyquill
Thank you for the star! I think I'm going to give the stream section in the middle a bit more thought, give me a bit.

>EDIT: Done everything except for the streams.
RLC
Elite Mapper
1,006 posts
Joined August 2011
RLC
oh right i still need to finish hitsounding this
11t
Elite Storyboarder
299 posts
Joined November 2012
11t

RLC wrote:

oh right i still need to finish hitsounding this
I'll wait until you're done before I finish modding the other diffs then
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
1,781 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Nyquill
RLC has completed hitsounding a while back. Everything is updated.
11t
Elite Storyboarder
299 posts
Joined November 2012
11t

Nyquill wrote:

RLC has completed hitsounding a while back. Everything is updated.
okay, lazy mode disengage
h-here i go

no kds

[7's Hard]
Combo Colors:
Combo1 : 192,192,192
Combo2 : 109,109,112

Tags: 幽雅に咲かせ、墨染の桜 ～ Border of Life 東方妖々夢　～ Perfect Cherry Blossom ルシュカ neko yuyoyuppe c83 seated with liqour saigyouji yuyuko foreground eclipse RLC ryuu
  1. 00:41:934 (2,3,4) - This is okay, but the repeat doesn't totally fit here, and then the (3,4) gap feels a bit weird because of that.
    Honestly I would've preferred something like this
    image
    but like, this is a hard, so the (2,3) spacing there is probably too much. Still, I think this sort of rhythm would fit the music better here. You do end up skipping over the clap note at 00:42:423 though because it's in the middle of the (3) slider, so you could change the 1/1 (3) to a 1/2 repeat if you want to map the clap. And actually something like this
    image
    wouldn't be too bad either, and this maps the clap as well. The spacing is still probably a bit huge though so you should probably rearrange the pattern if you do decide to go with this object rhythm.

  2. 00:44:379 - 01:06:553 - this section needs claps (including the spinner that starts here)

  3. 01:01:336 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - this might be a problem for readability. I guess see if more people bring this up; it could just be me.

  4. 01:06:553 - I really like the way you handled the fast triples in this section.

  5. 01:16:988 - 01:37:857 - this section needs claps too, like on the circles at 01:18:292 (1) and etc.

  6. 01:22:694 (5) - Midpoint to 220,144 and endpoint to 119,198 fixes this blanket.

  7. 02:13:857 (1) - Start point only to 81,53 makes this blanket look neater.

  8. 02:17:392 (1) - Finish on end works better here than bare hitnormal I think.

  9. 02:37:135 (1) - Clap on end

  10. 02:39:662 - For this section, consider adding Finishes on the objects just before the gaps, like at 02:42:271 (7) and 02:44:879 (7) etc. Or soft whistles, or drum finishes, or something to give those notes a bit more aural impact.

  11. 02:47:488 - Hitsounds missing from here until the end
Naisu mappu
(:3[_____completed hitsounding_____]
[ryuu's Normal]
  1. 00:24:162 - 01:06:553 - To be honest I don't really understand your normal whistle rhythm in these sections but it's not like they sound bad or anything, so it's fine. Though your whistles sort of stop halfway through the kiai at 00:56:118.

  2. 01:16:336 (4) - Consider using normal whistle on this slider's start (keep soft hitnormal though)

  3. 02:03:571 (1) - Finish on end

  4. 02:10:428 (2) - Normal clap works better than soft finish here I think. Or you could use both, like at 02:12:999 (2).

  5. 02:48:466 (4) - This slider start is a bit too far up in the (1,2,3,4,5) line. I think 340,297 works better.

  6. 03:10:966 (1) - Consider silencing slider end to 5% volume. Oh, and this is also a suggestion for Insane as well.
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu

11t wrote:

[ryuu's Normal]
  1. 00:24:162 - 01:06:553 - To be honest I don't really understand your normal whistle rhythm in these sections but it's not like they sound bad or anything, so it's fine. Though your whistles sort of stop halfway through the kiai at 00:56:118. i added some whistles

  2. 01:16:336 (4) - Consider using normal whistle on this slider's start (keep soft hitnormal though) i like my silence

  3. 02:03:571 (1) - Finish on end done

  4. 02:10:428 (2) - Normal clap works better than soft finish here I think. Or you could use both, like at 02:12:999 (2). done. finish and clap

  5. 02:48:466 (4) - This slider start is a bit too far up in the (1,2,3,4,5) line. I think 340,297 works better. done

  6. 03:10:966 (1) - Consider silencing slider end to 5% volume. Oh, and this is also a suggestion for Insane as well. has lowered to 10
thank u
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rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo
Finally getting there.
[General]
Specify the source on all difficulties as 'Touhou' for consistency with other Touhou covers.

[ryuu's Normal]
02:17:285 (1) - I wonder if this spinner isn't quite too short to be in mapset's easiest difficulty.
03:10:966 - Add an extra note here, on the huge white tick.

[RLC's Hard]
Missing tags. Copypaste them from either Insane or Normal.
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01:13:075 (1) - This finish sounds quite overused to me. Either decrease its volume or delete it completely.
02:17:392 (1) - Add a finish?
02:47:488 (1) - Move it a little to the right (select (2,3,4) and see the distance snap). It doesn't really look neat like that either.
02:56:456 (1) - Delete new combo. I also personally kinda dislike how you shaped this slider.

[Insane]
I'd rather you used OD8. A seven is way too forgiving for a map like this.
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00:27:423 (1) - Add a soft whistle?
00:36:553 (5) - I'd suggest a new combo here.
00:39:162 (6) - ^
00:45:357 (7) - If you increased the distance from (1)'s end a little bit and this note, it would look quite neater.
00:51:553 (3) - Missing a whistle here.
00:53:510 - 01:00:031 - This is a section where you should add a few new combos. These sections are way too long as they are now.
01:02:966 (2) - These claps are completely random and don't fit at all. Get rid of them.
01:03:618 (4) - I'd add an another clap at the red tick reverse.
01:14:216 (4) - This could be placed a little further. Kinda doesn't fit placed this close with such a velocity.
02:12:249 (1) - Rorate it a little bit so its vector is directed to (2)'s end (like here).
02:34:119 (7) - This is quite too close to (6)'s beginning.
03:08:765 (6) - Nice half-assed distance snap change.


You might need an Easy difficulty for this mapset. Everything else is fine for me. Good luck!
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu

rEdo wrote:

[ryuu's Normal]
02:17:285 (1) - I wonder if this spinner isn't quite too short to be in mapset's easiest difficulty. made a slider instead
03:10:966 - Add an extra note here, on the huge white tick. i want to leave a spinner on "tuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum" sound :о
thank u :3
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Nyquill
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Nyquill

rEdo wrote:

[Insane]

01:02:966 (2) - These claps are completely random and don't fit at all. Get rid of them.



You might need an Easy difficulty for this mapset. Everything else is fine for me. Good luck!
Everything else was done.

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Giralda
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Giralda
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[General]
Set Widescreen Support = 0/Untick Widescreen Support for RLC's Hard and ryuu's Normal.

[ryuu's Normal]
00:34:271 (5,6) - The pause here between the two circles feels a little difficult to play and it felt a little awkward to me during my first play through. The issue is not its readability, but more-so the ability for a new player to be able to play the note. To avoid the break in flow, I would suggest using a 1/1 slider from 00:34:597 to 00:34:923 to fill that drum part in the music. I would also recommend to copy the slider at 00:35:249 (1), remove the repeat and place the head at x:412 y:96 to perfectly fit into distance snap range.
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00:39:488 (3) - Same reason as above. Note the following, that new players tend to panic when are seen far apart from each other. The pause is rather difficult to play and as a result we should use a slider to avoid this problem. Add a 1/1 slider starting from 00:39:488 to 00:39:814. Something like this:
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[RLCs' Hard]
00:26:118 (1) - Just a small suggestion here. The flow feels slightly jagged with the direction that this slider goes and repeats at. Maybe rotate it 15 degrees, selection centre for a smoother flow?
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01:34:923 (1) - A fun suggestion: I notice a lot of nice placements at areas like 00:27:423 (1,2) and 00:40:629 (3,4). I think it would look and flow pretty nicely if you do the same for this part as well, but rotated to maintain the flow.
SPOILER

01:57:571 - Maybe try this rhythm to avoid pausing: Take out one repeat, delete the 01:58:428 (1) and fill in the gap with a 1/1 slider from 01:57:999 to 01:58:428
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03:10:314 (3) - NC here to show that it's on 1 repeat instead of the 2 repeats at 03:09:662 (1)

[Insane]
Lunatic difficulty name pls lel

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ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu

Giralda wrote:

[ryuu's Normal]
00:34:271 (5,6) - The pause here between the two circles feels a little difficult to play and it felt a little awkward to me during my first play through. The issue is not its readability, but more-so the ability for a new player to be able to play the note. To avoid the break in flow, I would suggest using a 1/1 slider from 00:34:597 to 00:34:923 to fill that drum part in the music. I would also recommend to copy the slider at 00:35:249 (1), remove the repeat and place the head at x:412 y:96 to perfectly fit into distance snap range.
SPOILER

00:39:488 (3) - Same reason as above. Note the following, that new players tend to panic when are seen far apart from each other. The pause is rather difficult to play and as a result we should use a slider to avoid this problem. Add a 1/1 slider starting from 00:39:488 to 00:39:814. Something like this:
SPOILER
all done
thank u :3
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Trust
1,240 posts
Joined March 2012
Trust
As requested here are few suggestions,

You're welcome to use any.
[ryuu's Normal]

Try AR4 and see if that works for you. It's not that the current AR bothers me, it's just that the next difficulty in the set is AR8.
  1. 00:38:510 (2) - Whistle on the head? It catches the vocal nicely and makes sense considering you use one for 00:41:444 (2).
  2. 00:43:075 (2) - Swap NC so the new combo starts here. Makes more sense because of the musical change.
  3. 00:45:357 - Unneeded green line.
  4. 00:53:510 (6) - NC here is consistent with the combo patterning. Remove on 00:53:836 (1) to fix.
  5. 01:56:714 (4) - Spacing inconsistency, correct it to a 1.2x interval.
  6. 02:58:901 (2,3,4) - I would add a whistle to the tail and circles for the high pitch vocals like 02:52:706 (1).
[RLC's Hard]
  1. Combo colours should be the same as Normal and Insane.
  2. 01:30:357 (2,3) - These two can fit together better. You can arrange the intermediate nodes like this to get a nice curve around the tail of (2):
    Example
  3. 02:08:071 (4) - Perhaps a whistle on this? It fits well with how you've used them so far.
  4. 02:51:238 (1) - Add a whistle on the slider-body to accentuate the vocal.
  5. 02:53:847 (1) - Same as above.
  6. 02:56:456 (1) - This one as well as it had for the previous kiai.
[Insane]
  1. 00:50:249 (3) - This is really unnoticeable but the slider has a little kink in it and bends sharply with a white node strangely. Maybe correct it to something straight or move curved.
  2. 00:58:727 (1,2) - Mhm the tight blanket (and the slider in general actually) don't really fit in well with the overall design of this difficulty, at least in my opinion. The two objects also come dangerously close to touching. Try this:
    Example
    344,60,58727,6,0,B|336:133|336:133|290:144|262:193|285:238,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 01:27:096 (6) - Perhaps add a clap for strongest beat of the drum roll.
  4. 01:31:336 (5,6) - Consider swapping these on the timeline to get the most emphasis out of that whistle like you did for 01:28:890 (6) which plays similarly.
  5. 02:18:142 (1) - I found it easy to misread this as having one fewer repeat than there actually is because of the spacing and usually ended up with a 100 for the slider-end because I jumped to 02:18:468 (2) too early. Consider moving this a bit closer to the next slider.
  6. 02:23:929 (10,1) - Shift this to the right a bit so stack leniency isn't causing (10) to slightly touch the tail of the previous slider.
mostly just nazi placement shit, good map

sorry if it doesn't help.
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu

Trust wrote:

[ryuu's Normal]

Try AR4 and see if that works for you. It's not that the current AR bothers me, it's just that the next difficulty in the set is AR8.
  1. 00:38:510 (2) - Whistle on the head? It catches the vocal nicely and makes sense considering you use one for 00:41:444 (2).
  2. 00:43:075 (2) - Swap NC so the new combo starts here. Makes more sense because of the musical change.
  3. 00:45:357 - Unneeded green line.
  4. 00:53:510 (6) - NC here is consistent with the combo patterning. Remove on 00:53:836 (1) to fix.
  5. 01:56:714 (4) - Spacing inconsistency, correct it to a 1.2x interval.
  6. 02:58:901 (2,3,4) - I would add a whistle to the tail and circles for the high pitch vocals like 02:52:706 (1).
all fixed
thanks ~
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LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
6.9 mb

General
- I think you forgot to reencode your mp3 to 192kbps

- ur bg is one pixel off what lol

- Source: Touhou

- get rid of "～" in tags; Also where are RLC's tags lol

- Make sure Widescreen support is unchecked for all diffs

- Pencil must be sharpened


ryuu's Normal
00:24:162 (1) - I think using Normal sample set would fit more. With this powerful song, the intro here comes out a bit weak imo
00:24:814 (1) - Finish would sound nice to introduce the stanza
00:45:684 (1) - Finish on head for similar reason^
01:16:336 (4) - Normal set with clap on head perhaps~ follows the bgm drum, which does not die down in this case
03:10:966 (1) - Try adding a note here with finish, with the spinner right after it
SPOILER
would leave a nice final impression imo =v=
nice~

RLC's Hnng
- Set some custom combo colors?

01:12:423 (2) - Perhaps shorten this to the white tick to match 01:13:727 (2) - . this symmetry in rhythm may help players expect the prolonged repeat sliders better, it's also a neat buildup to 01:14:379 (1,2,3) - with the drums and stuff imo lol

Looks good~! Though I did feel a bit of a difficulty jump from Normal to this...it's like a borderline light insane? Mainly the big stacks and such but I guess this kind of song kinda warrants them anyway xD

Insane
00:29:216 (2) - felt a bit tight with the surrounding notes. like during play, i expected to kinda leap off from 00:29:053 (1) - into some nyquill jumpflowism but then i pass it occasionally like a ghost xD idk, consider stacking this on (4) or something with similar spacing
01:37:205 (9) - try making a long slider that ends on the timing line
SPOILER
(ignore the shape if you want ofc) I feel like that BAM-ugh-that-felt-good at the end is like really inviting for a Finish there & also follows the vocals lol
01:48:571 - FAST BREAK GETS THE FIRRST (note) WRUUNNNG(wrong) ok
02:32:651 (3) - maybe a bit sketchy with the hp bar

that was fun let's do it again
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
[Insane]
不叫Lunatic?
00:28:564 (5,6,1) - 这个连打的角度有点难看，应该往下弯
01:05:901 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 同上，要我肯定这么摆：
SPOILER
01:08:510 (3,4,5) - 没在直线上。

Acc好低啊
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu

LunarSakuya wrote:

ryuu's Normal
00:24:162 (1) - I think using Normal sample set would fit more. With this powerful song, the intro here comes out a bit weak imo done
00:24:814 (1) - Finish would sound nice to introduce the stanza ^
00:45:684 (1) - Finish on head for similar reason^ ^
01:16:336 (4) - Normal set with clap on head perhaps~ follows the bgm drum, which does not die down in this case i very like my silence. please, let me leave it.
03:10:966 (1) - Try adding a note here with finish, with the spinner right after it
SPOILER
would leave a nice final impression imo =v= done
nice~
thank u
SPOILER
osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 45684
Countdown: 0
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Mode: 0
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Title:Sad Spring
TitleUnicode:Sad Spring
Artist:Draw The Emotional
ArtistUnicode:Draw The Emotional
Creator:Nyquill
Version:ryuu's Normal
Source:
Tags:幽雅に咲かせ、墨染の桜 ～ Border of Life 東方妖々夢　～ Perfect Cherry Blossom ルシュカ neko yuyoyuppe c83 seated with liqour saigyouji yuyuko foreground eclipse RLC ryuu
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468,232,92640,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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104,260,115857,1,4,0:0:0:0:
292,232,116714,1,8,1:0:0:0:
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408,68,126142,5,12,1:0:0:0:
216,72,126999,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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176,308,128714,6,0,P|251:335|344:324,1,160,0|12,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
424,160,130428,1,12,1:0:0:0:
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156,168,132142,6,0,L|68:136,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
24,220,132999,1,12,1:0:0:0:
180,332,133857,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,288,134714,2,0,L|456:304,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,135571,6,0,L|352:192,2,79.9999999999999,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
468,120,136857,1,8,1:0:0:0:
376,88,137285,2,0,B|263:63|263:63|240:16,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,160,140097,2,0,P|84:180|24:188,2,79.9999999999999,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,116,141075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,84,141401,6,0,L|392:96,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,156,142053,2,0,L|472:252,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,320,142706,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,316,143358,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,208,144010,6,0,B|168:176|168:176|184:112,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,60,144988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,92,145314,2,0,P|391:97|436:84,2,79.9999999999999,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,60,146293,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,140,146619,6,0,B|184:124|172:92|172:92|120:132|60:108,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,208,147597,2,0,P|72:248|68:300,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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392,240,149227,6,0,L|428:112,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,184,150532,2,0,L|340:100,2,79.9999999999999,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,136,151510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,204,151836,6,0,P|124:212|75:241,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,327,152488,2,0,P|132:318|168:300,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,248,153140,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,88,153793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,88,154119,1,0,1:0:0:0:
228,52,154445,6,0,B|260:28|300:48|344:72|388:48,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,112,155423,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,200,155749,2,0,B|412:244|424:280|424:280|384:280|348:304,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
260,340,156727,1,0,2:0:0:0:
176,296,157053,6,0,P|132:292|84:260,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
60,188,157706,1,0,2:0:0:0:
152,164,158032,1,0,2:0:0:0:
224,100,158358,2,0,P|319:73|289:121,1,240,0|8,2:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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148,268,167814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,284,168140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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436,312,169445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
476,124,170097,6,0,P|436:139|393:135,2,79.9999999999999,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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RLC
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RLC

11t wrote:

[7's Hard]
Combo Colors:
Combo1 : 192,192,192
Combo2 : 109,109,112

Tags: 幽雅に咲かせ、墨染の桜 ～ Border of Life 東方妖々夢　～ Perfect Cherry Blossom ルシュカ neko yuyoyuppe c83 seated with liqour saigyouji yuyuko foreground eclipse RLC ryuu
  1. 00:41:934 (2,3,4) - This is okay, but the repeat doesn't totally fit here, and then the (3,4) gap feels a bit weird because of that.
    Honestly I would've preferred something like this
    image
    but like, this is a hard, so the (2,3) spacing there is probably too much. Still, I think this sort of rhythm would fit the music better here. You do end up skipping over the clap note at 00:42:423 though because it's in the middle of the (3) slider, so you could change the 1/1 (3) to a 1/2 repeat if you want to map the clap. And actually something like this
    image
    wouldn't be too bad either, and this maps the clap as well. The spacing is still probably a bit huge though so you should probably rearrange the pattern if you do decide to go with this object rhythm. I really want the players to hit on beats 3 and 4 to emphasize the sudden cymbal

  2. 00:44:379 - 01:06:553 - this section needs claps (including the spinner that starts here)

  3. 01:01:336 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - this might be a problem for readability. I guess see if more people bring this up; it could just be me. made them all the same

  4. 01:06:553 - I really like the way you handled the fast triples in this section.

  5. 01:16:988 - 01:37:857 - this section needs claps too, like on the circles at 01:18:292 (1) and etc.

  6. 01:22:694 (5) - Midpoint to 220,144 and endpoint to 119,198 fixes this blanket. fixed

  7. 02:13:857 (1) - Start point only to 81,53 makes this blanket look neater. fixed

  8. 02:17:392 (1) - Finish on end works better here than bare hitnormal I think.

  9. 02:37:135 (1) - Clap on end

  10. 02:39:662 - For this section, consider adding Finishes on the objects just before the gaps, like at 02:42:271 (7) and 02:44:879 (7) etc. Or soft whistles, or drum finishes, or something to give those notes a bit more aural impact.

  11. 02:47:488 - Hitsounds missing from here until the end
sorry about the hitsounds, the wrong ver of my diff was uploaded gggg gg g

rEdo wrote:

[RLC's Hard]
Missing tags. Copypaste them from either Insane or Normal.
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01:13:075 (1) - This finish sounds quite overused to me. Either decrease its volume or delete it completely. no longer exists yay
02:17:392 (1) - Add a finish?
02:47:488 (1) - Move it a little to the right (select (2,3,4) and see the distance snap). It doesn't really look neat like that either. I realize that it's off DS-wise, but i want the gaps between 02:47:488 (1,4,7) - to be similar sized, and 02:47:488 (1,7) - to be vertically aligned
02:56:456 (1) - Delete new combo. I also personally kinda dislike how you shaped this slider. Nah, this keeps consistency with the 1 measure combo lengths. i would've put NC at 02:55:314 (6) - , but that just looks kind of nasty

Giralda wrote:

[RLCs' Hard]
00:26:118 (1) - Just a small suggestion here. The flow feels slightly jagged with the direction that this slider goes and repeats at. Maybe rotate it 15 degrees, selection centre for a smoother flow? sure, i suppose
SPOILER

01:34:923 (1) - A fun suggestion: I notice a lot of nice placements at areas like 00:27:423 (1,2) and 00:40:629 (3,4). I think it would look and flow pretty nicely if you do the same for this part as well, but rotated to maintain the flow. the reason i did this one differently is because i want there to be a slight pause between the two sliders, hence why the tail of (1) is on the head of (2)
SPOILER

01:57:571 - Maybe try this rhythm to avoid pausing: Take out one repeat, delete the 01:58:428 (1) and fill in the gap with a 1/1 slider from 01:57:999 to 01:58:428 but but i kinda like that pause D: helps contrast with 02:04:857 (5) - where there is no pause
SPOILER

03:10:314 (3) - NC here to show that it's on 1 repeat instead of the 2 repeats at 03:09:662 (1) sure, done

Trust wrote:

[RLC's Hard]
  1. Combo colours should be the same as Normal and Insane.
  2. 01:30:357 (2,3) - These two can fit together better. You can arrange the intermediate nodes like this to get a nice curve around the tail of (2):
    Example
    tweaked slightly
  3. 02:08:071 (4) - Perhaps a whistle on this? It fits well with how you've used them so far. oh that one is actually supposed to be normal sampleset; oops
  4. 02:51:238 (1) - Add a whistle on the slider-body to accentuate the vocal. done
  5. 02:53:847 (1) - Same as above. done
  6. 02:56:456 (1) - This one as well as it had for the previous kiai. done

LunarSakuya wrote:

RLC's Hnng
- Set some custom combo colors?

01:12:423 (2) - Perhaps shorten this to the white tick to match 01:13:727 (2) - . this symmetry in rhythm may help players expect the prolonged repeat sliders better, it's also a neat buildup to 01:14:379 (1,2,3) - with the drums and stuff imo lol the 1/2 gap between 01:12:423 (2,1) - makes (1) stronger, and then 01:13:727 (2) - relaxes. The 1/1 gap at 01:14:053 - was intended to be a brief pause before the new rhythm pattern. idk
copied over combo colors from nyq's diff
thanks everyone for your mods! http://puu.sh/7MqS0.zip
Nyquill
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Did everything and updated!
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ok bubble tea'd <3
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LunarSakuya wrote:

ok bubble tea'd <3
omg <3
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This is my favorite song of seated with liquour yay
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SENDAI DASH
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grats~
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SENDAI DASH
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恭喜
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Giralda wrote:

SENDAI DASH
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jonathanlfj wrote:

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hentai dash
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Nyquill grats ~ ! :)
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There is apparently an offset problem (i wasnt aware since i was able to get 98% on first try playing the Insane), will investigate further with other team members
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Set to +15
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grats man
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gosh i'm awful i said i was gonna mod this and forgot to
good job, though! osu! needs more dte
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