Oh, sure. I don't know if I want a NHI or a ENHI spread though, so if you make normal, ideally it can be under 3 stars to deal with both situations.ryuu wrote:
if u want, i can make normal :о
Oh, sure. I don't know if I want a NHI or a ENHI spread though, so if you make normal, ideally it can be under 3 stars to deal with both situations.ryuu wrote:
if u want, i can make normal :о
smallboat wrote:
[ryuu's Normal]SPOILER00:43:401 (3,4,6) - I recommended can add whistle (3 and 4 at slider head) this here,because if add it,the vocal can strong effect of expression,imo. done
00:49:923 (5) - Cancel the medium whistle? continuous whistle feel a bit noisy. If cancel , it will be useful sense of rhythm. but.. it's a rhythm of whistles :c please, can i leave it? ;___;
00:58:401 (4) - Nazi,stack crooked off. okay
01:00:357 (2) - Forget add clap? (Beacuse this part is 24clap at this here.) done
01:02:640 (3) - Forget add clap? (Because 01:01:336 (1) - you add clap at end,so I think add here,have a good effect.) done
01:05:249 (1) - Strong beat,add finish at head? i add soft finish. because i don't want it to be too loud :<
01:09:162 (1) - Why not add finish? done
01:10:466 (3) - Cancel the clap at head ? ( Seems a bit noisy(no rhythm sense) at this here) ugu
01:15:031 (2) - ^ i like it :< clap, clap, clap
01:16:336 (4) - Why not add finish at end? okay
01:17:640 (1,4) - As the same 00:43:401 (3,4,6) done
01:19:596 (1,3) - Add whistle in slider end ,reason in the same 00:43:401 (3,4,6). ugu
01:22:205 (1,3) - ^ ugu
01:25:466 (2) - whistle? ugu
01:32:314 (5) - Add whistle? (Because you add 01:29:379 (3,4),have the same rhythm.) really
01:53:285 (3) - Change a rhythm , so I suggest NC here. ugu
01:54:999 (1) - Why not add hitsound at here? You can add finish or clap,will be fit. done
01:56:714 (4) - Change a rhythm , so I suggest NC here. ugu
02:00:142 (2) - ^ done
02:08:714 (1) - As the same 01:54:999 (1). done
02:15:571 (1) - Add finish in slider head? (Strong beat)
02:28:575 (3) - Add whistle in slider head?
02:48:466 (4) - Cancel the clap at head ? ( Seems a bit noisy(no rhythm sense) at this here) i like it :<
02:57:923 (1) - Add finish in slider head? (Strong beat) done
03:04:445 (2) - ^ ^
03:05:749 (1) - ^ ^
03:09:662 (3) - Cancel clap in slider end and add 03:10:314 (4) ? (24 clap) done
Everything else was done, and I remapped a lot of shit.Azer wrote:
greetings traveler My Greetings.
[Insane]
[notice][list]Considered starting the diff at 00:14:379 ?
[*] 01:06:553 (1) - angle is ugly Not sure what you mean?
[*] 01:11:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pretty uncharictic of the song, nothing really wrong here but i feel making this part streamier would be better Its something i've been considering for while, I'll keep it in mind but i'll leave it for later.
[*] 01:14:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - pentagon pls Its visually hard enough to find because of the length of the pentagon, but I guess it can't hurt.
[*] 01:17:151 (3,4,5) - distance a bit too low I feel like lowered distance is better going into a new section (especially a quieter one).
[*] 01:24:651 (1,2) - I don't think suddenly having red tick sliders is good here really, takes you by surprise Better than notes, what would you rather me do? Sliders are easier to hit.
[*] 02:08:285 (3,4) - stack and maybe switch order (slider-circle instead of circle-slider) I don't feel like it makes a difference? Especially since slider circle and circle slider is more of a playing preference, and doesn't physically make anything easier or harder
[*] 02:08:714 (5,1) - ^ ^
[*] 02:12:249 (1) - replace with two circles I don't feel like this particularily makes anything more worth emphasizing emphasized. Its more fitting for a relaxed section as it is.
I'll wait until you're done before I finish modding the other diffs thenRLC wrote:
oh right i still need to finish hitsounding this
okay, lazy mode disengageNyquill wrote:
RLC has completed hitsounding a while back. Everything is updated.
thank u11t wrote:
[ryuu's Normal]
- 00:24:162 - 01:06:553 - To be honest I don't really understand your normal whistle rhythm in these sections but it's not like they sound bad or anything, so it's fine. Though your whistles sort of stop halfway through the kiai at 00:56:118. i added some whistles
- 01:16:336 (4) - Consider using normal whistle on this slider's start (keep soft hitnormal though) i like my silence
- 02:03:571 (1) - Finish on end done
- 02:10:428 (2) - Normal clap works better than soft finish here I think. Or you could use both, like at 02:12:999 (2). done. finish and clap
- 02:48:466 (4) - This slider start is a bit too far up in the (1,2,3,4,5) line. I think 340,297 works better. done
- 03:10:966 (1) - Consider silencing slider end to 5% volume. Oh, and this is also a suggestion for Insane as well. has lowered to 10
Everything else was done.rEdo wrote:
[Insane]
01:02:966 (2) - These claps are completely random and don't fit at all. Get rid of them.
You might need an Easy difficulty for this mapset. Everything else is fine for me. Good luck!
all doneGiralda wrote:
[ryuu's Normal]
00:34:271 (5,6) - The pause here between the two circles feels a little difficult to play and it felt a little awkward to me during my first play through. The issue is not its readability, but more-so the ability for a new player to be able to play the note. To avoid the break in flow, I would suggest using a 1/1 slider from 00:34:597 to 00:34:923 to fill that drum part in the music. I would also recommend to copy the slider at 00:35:249 (1), remove the repeat and place the head at x:412 y:96 to perfectly fit into distance snap range.
00:39:488 (3) - Same reason as above. Note the following, that new players tend to panic when are seen far apart from each other. The pause is rather difficult to play and as a result we should use a slider to avoid this problem. Add a 1/1 slider starting from 00:39:488 to 00:39:814. Something like this:
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all fixedTrust wrote:
[ryuu's Normal]
Try AR4 and see if that works for you. It's not that the current AR bothers me, it's just that the next difficulty in the set is AR8.
- 00:38:510 (2) - Whistle on the head? It catches the vocal nicely and makes sense considering you use one for 00:41:444 (2).
- 00:43:075 (2) - Swap NC so the new combo starts here. Makes more sense because of the musical change.
- 00:45:357 - Unneeded green line.
- 00:53:510 (6) - NC here is consistent with the combo patterning. Remove on 00:53:836 (1) to fix.
- 01:56:714 (4) - Spacing inconsistency, correct it to a 1.2x interval.
- 02:58:901 (2,3,4) - I would add a whistle to the tail and circles for the high pitch vocals like 02:52:706 (1).
osu file format v12
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thank uLunarSakuya wrote:
ryuu's Normal
00:24:162 (1) - I think using Normal sample set would fit more. With this powerful song, the intro here comes out a bit weak imo done
00:24:814 (1) - Finish would sound nice to introduce the stanza ^
00:45:684 (1) - Finish on head for similar reason^ ^
01:16:336 (4) - Normal set with clap on head perhaps~ follows the bgm drum, which does not die down in this case i very like my silence. please, let me leave it.
03:10:966 (1) - Try adding a note here with finish, with the spinner right after it would leave a nice final impression imo =v= done
nice~
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Tags:幽雅に咲かせ、墨染の桜 ~ Border of Life 東方妖々夢 ~ Perfect Cherry Blossom ルシュカ neko yuyoyuppe c83 seated with liqour saigyouji yuyuko foreground eclipse RLC ryuu
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424,160,130428,1,12,1:0:0:0:
240,100,131285,2,0,L|164:72,1,79.9999999999999,8|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
156,168,132142,6,0,L|68:136,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
24,220,132999,1,12,1:0:0:0:
180,332,133857,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,288,134714,2,0,L|456:304,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,135571,6,0,L|352:192,2,79.9999999999999,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
468,120,136857,1,8,1:0:0:0:
376,88,137285,2,0,B|263:63|263:63|240:16,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,208,138793,6,0,P|192:264|204:328,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,140097,2,0,P|84:180|24:188,2,79.9999999999999,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,116,141075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,84,141401,6,0,L|392:96,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,156,142053,2,0,L|472:252,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,320,142706,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,316,143358,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,208,144010,6,0,B|168:176|168:176|184:112,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,60,144988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,92,145314,2,0,P|391:97|436:84,2,79.9999999999999,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,60,146293,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,140,146619,6,0,B|184:124|172:92|172:92|120:132|60:108,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,208,147597,2,0,P|72:248|68:300,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,148575,2,0,L|344:316,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
392,240,149227,6,0,L|428:112,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,184,150532,2,0,L|340:100,2,79.9999999999999,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,136,151510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,204,151836,6,0,P|124:212|75:241,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,327,152488,2,0,P|132:318|168:300,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,248,153140,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,88,153793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,88,154119,1,0,1:0:0:0:
228,52,154445,6,0,B|260:28|300:48|344:72|388:48,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,112,155423,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,200,155749,2,0,B|412:244|424:280|424:280|384:280|348:304,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
260,340,156727,1,0,2:0:0:0:
176,296,157053,6,0,P|132:292|84:260,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
60,188,157706,1,0,2:0:0:0:
152,164,158032,1,0,2:0:0:0:
224,100,158358,2,0,P|319:73|289:121,1,240,0|8,2:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
384,148,159662,6,0,P|388:228|376:324,2,160,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,236,162271,2,0,P|124:156|136:60,2,160,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,163901,2,0,P|256:284|300:308,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,316,164553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,316,164879,6,0,L|416:136,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,166184,2,0,P|192:80|104:68,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,252,167488,5,8,0:0:0:0:
148,268,167814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,284,168140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,297,168466,2,0,L|372:185,2,79.9999999999999,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,312,169445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
476,124,170097,6,0,P|436:139|393:135,2,79.9999999999999,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,44,171075,1,8,0:0:0:0:
422,44,171401,2,0,B|302:28|302:28|254:52,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,136,172706,6,0,L|84:56,2,79.9999999999999,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,160,173684,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,176,174010,2,0,P|332:172|380:140,1,79.9999999999999,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,172,174662,2,0,L|472:272,1,79.9999999999999,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,344,175314,5,6,0:0:0:0:
348,316,175640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,304,175966,2,0,P|208:324|160:324,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,264,176619,2,0,P|120:196|104:100,1,160,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,60,177597,1,10,0:0:0:0:
280,88,177923,6,0,L|376:64,2,79.9999999999999,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,184,178901,2,2,L|372:160,1,79.9999999999999,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,220,179553,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,220,179879,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,180532,12,0,183140,0:0:0:0:
144,244,183793,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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44,200,186727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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284,160,188032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,191048,12,0,197570,0:0:0:0:
sorry about the hitsounds, the wrong ver of my diff was uploaded gggg gg g11t wrote:
[7's Hard]Combo Colors:
Combo1 : 192,192,192
Combo2 : 109,109,112
Tags: 幽雅に咲かせ、墨染の桜 ~ Border of Life 東方妖々夢 ~ Perfect Cherry Blossom ルシュカ neko yuyoyuppe c83 seated with liqour saigyouji yuyuko foreground eclipse RLC ryuu
- 00:41:934 (2,3,4) - This is okay, but the repeat doesn't totally fit here, and then the (3,4) gap feels a bit weird because of that.
Honestly I would've preferred something like this
but like, this is a hard, so the (2,3) spacing there is probably too much. Still, I think this sort of rhythm would fit the music better here. You do end up skipping over the clap note at 00:42:423 though because it's in the middle of the (3) slider, so you could change the 1/1 (3) to a 1/2 repeat if you want to map the clap. And actually something like this
wouldn't be too bad either, and this maps the clap as well. The spacing is still probably a bit huge though so you should probably rearrange the pattern if you do decide to go with this object rhythm. I really want the players to hit on beats 3 and 4 to emphasize the sudden cymbal- 00:44:379 - 01:06:553 - this section needs claps (including the spinner that starts here)
- 01:01:336 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - this might be a problem for readability. I guess see if more people bring this up; it could just be me. made them all the same
- 01:06:553 - I really like the way you handled the fast triples in this section.
- 01:16:988 - 01:37:857 - this section needs claps too, like on the circles at 01:18:292 (1) and etc.
- 01:22:694 (5) - Midpoint to 220,144 and endpoint to 119,198 fixes this blanket. fixed
- 02:13:857 (1) - Start point only to 81,53 makes this blanket look neater. fixed
- 02:17:392 (1) - Finish on end works better here than bare hitnormal I think.
- 02:37:135 (1) - Clap on end
- 02:39:662 - For this section, consider adding Finishes on the objects just before the gaps, like at 02:42:271 (7) and 02:44:879 (7) etc. Or soft whistles, or drum finishes, or something to give those notes a bit more aural impact.
- 02:47:488 - Hitsounds missing from here until the end
rEdo wrote:
[RLC's Hard]
Missing tags. Copypaste them from either Insane or Normal.
01:13:075 (1) - This finish sounds quite overused to me. Either decrease its volume or delete it completely. no longer exists yay
02:17:392 (1) - Add a finish?
02:47:488 (1) - Move it a little to the right (select (2,3,4) and see the distance snap). It doesn't really look neat like that either. I realize that it's off DS-wise, but i want the gaps between 02:47:488 (1,4,7) - to be similar sized, and 02:47:488 (1,7) - to be vertically aligned
02:56:456 (1) - Delete new combo. I also personally kinda dislike how you shaped this slider. Nah, this keeps consistency with the 1 measure combo lengths. i would've put NC at 02:55:314 (6) - , but that just looks kind of nasty
Giralda wrote:
[RLCs' Hard]
00:26:118 (1) - Just a small suggestion here. The flow feels slightly jagged with the direction that this slider goes and repeats at. Maybe rotate it 15 degrees, selection centre for a smoother flow? sure, i suppose
01:34:923 (1) - A fun suggestion: I notice a lot of nice placements at areas like 00:27:423 (1,2) and 00:40:629 (3,4). I think it would look and flow pretty nicely if you do the same for this part as well, but rotated to maintain the flow. the reason i did this one differently is because i want there to be a slight pause between the two sliders, hence why the tail of (1) is on the head of (2)
01:57:571 - Maybe try this rhythm to avoid pausing: Take out one repeat, delete the 01:58:428 (1) and fill in the gap with a 1/1 slider from 01:57:999 to 01:58:428 but but i kinda like that pause D: helps contrast with 02:04:857 (5) - where there is no pause
03:10:314 (3) - NC here to show that it's on 1 repeat instead of the 2 repeats at 03:09:662 (1) sure, done
Trust wrote:
[RLC's Hard]
- Combo colours should be the same as Normal and Insane.
- 01:30:357 (2,3) - These two can fit together better. You can arrange the intermediate nodes like this to get a nice curve around the tail of (2): tweaked slightly
- 02:08:071 (4) - Perhaps a whistle on this? It fits well with how you've used them so far. oh that one is actually supposed to be normal sampleset; oops
- 02:51:238 (1) - Add a whistle on the slider-body to accentuate the vocal. done
- 02:53:847 (1) - Same as above. done
- 02:56:456 (1) - This one as well as it had for the previous kiai. done
copied over combo colors from nyq's diffLunarSakuya wrote:
RLC's Hnng
- Set some custom combo colors?
01:12:423 (2) - Perhaps shorten this to the white tick to match 01:13:727 (2) - . this symmetry in rhythm may help players expect the prolonged repeat sliders better, it's also a neat buildup to 01:14:379 (1,2,3) - with the drums and stuff imo lol the 1/2 gap between 01:12:423 (2,1) - makes (1) stronger, and then 01:13:727 (2) - relaxes. The 1/1 gap at 01:14:053 - was intended to be a brief pause before the new rhythm pattern. idk
omg <3LunarSakuya wrote:
ok bubble tea'd <3
Giralda wrote:
SENDAI DASH
jonathanlfj wrote: