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Hanae - Kamisama Hajimemashita [Taiko|Osu]

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CrestRising
163 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
CrestRising
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 3, 2013 at 4:29:44 PM

Artist: Hanae
Title: Kamisama Hajimemashita
BPM: 146
Filesize: 1760kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (3.54 stars, 177 notes)
  2. Hard (4.88 stars, 228 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.87 stars, 124 notes)
  4. Normal (3.66 stars, 100 notes)
Download: Hanae - Kamisama Hajimemashita
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Second beatmap.
Last edited by CrestRising , edited 15 times in total.
Royston
187 posts
Joined June 2012
Royston
Hi, M4M from your queue.

[General]
I strongly recommend setting your slider tick rate to 2, fits a lot better with the music.
Your BG is really bad quality, lol. It needs to be at least 800x600 resolution to be rankable. Here's the same image in better quality: http://puu.sh/1EDcr

01:09:630 - Here I'd keep the volume at 60%, 80% seems a bit too loud.

[Normal]
First, a few general comments:
  • Overall it's a bit... linear? I would try to add more curves to your sliders and arrange some stuff in arcs since it's a little rigid at the moment.

    The distance snap is pretty low. I would consider reducing the slider velocity a bit and upping the distance snap. The distance between notes is also pretty inconsistent, which you should try and avoid in a Normal diff.

    Multiple repeats can be confusing for lesser skilled players, I would consider removing them or a least not having a note 1/2 after it ends. It would simplify the rhythm as well, which is important for your easiest difficulty. What you could do for some of these is instead extend them so that they end at the same place in the timeline but without any repeats. e.g. at 01:07:986 (http://puu.sh/1ECLS) If you set the slider tick rate to 2 then you'll still be following the lyrics

    Also, in terms of difficulty settings I would make these changes:
    Approach Rate - 1
    Overall Difficulty - 1
00:40:041 - Slider velocity changes can be confusing and cause slider breaks, in lower difficulties especially. - I would change the slider velocity here to something like 0.75x here instead of 0.5x so it's less jarring.
00:46:000 - Sounds weird having nothing here, I would move 00:46:205 (5) - so it starts there
01:09:219 (3) - I would reduce this to just one repeat and add a note at 01:09:630 - It sounds weird atm since there's nothing in the music at 01:09:527
01:22:780 (1) - Shorten this slider to the red tick

Hitsound suggestions
00:15:383 (3) - remove clap from slider start? you don't have it at 00:35:109 (3) in a similar phrase in the song
00:18:671 (3) - Finish at end?
00:34:082 (1) - Clap on slider end?
00:40:041 - In this slower section I would add some soft-whistle hitsounds, on the big white ticks or something.
00:56:068 (2) - Finish on slider end
00:59:767 (1) - Finish on slider start?


Overall it's an okay difficulty, and playable as is, but could use improvements as it feels and plays a lot like an older map :P

[Hard]
Hp Drain - 1
00:15:383 (1,2) - Why this sudden jump? Doesn't go with the music imo
00:55:863 (1) - Delete note?
00:56:068 (1,1,1,1) - Don't think this new combo spam is necessary honestly
01:01:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I really like this pattern!
01:04:493 (1,2,3) etc. - Don't think triplits fit in these spots, I would delete the notes on the blue ticks in this section
01:09:425 (1) - - delete note
01:09:219 (1,1,1,1,1) - Again, unnecessary new combos
01:22:369 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:24:013 (3) - Finish here

Nothing else really jumps out at me particular, though the hitobject placement is pretty messy. It plays decently though. I would focus on improving the hitobject placement (By that I mean on the grid, not on the timeline - you've followed the music quite well imo).

Overall the same sort of things as I said in normal, try and cut down on linear patterns, add more curves yada yada.

Can't mod taiko, sorry.
Good luck!
CrestRising
163 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
CrestRising

Royston wrote:

Hi, M4M from your queue.

[General]
I strongly recommend setting your slider tick rate to 2, fits a lot better with the music. I kind of like it in some places but in others I kind of don't I'll keep it as is for now. Nvm, I decided to change it.
Your BG is really bad quality, lol. It needs to be at least 800x600 resolution to be rankable. Here's the same image in better quality: http://puu.sh/1EDcr So much better. Thank you so much.

01:09:630 - Here I'd keep the volume at 60%, 80% seems a bit too loud. OK.

[Normal]
First, a few general comments:
  • Overall it's a bit... linear? I would try to add more curves to your sliders and arrange some stuff in arcs since it's a little rigid at the moment. I see where you're getting at but I like it as is for now.

    The distance snap is pretty low. I would consider reducing the slider velocity a bit and upping the distance snap. I'll think about it for a while. The distance between notes is also pretty inconsistent, which you should try and avoid in a Normal diff. I don't really understand. I used distance space the whole time...

    Multiple repeats can be confusing for lesser skilled players, I would consider removing them or a least not having a note 1/2 after it ends. It would simplify the rhythm as well, which is important for your easiest difficulty. What you could do for some of these is instead extend them so that they end at the same place in the timeline but without any repeats. e.g. at 01:07:986 (http://puu.sh/1ECLS) If you set the slider tick rate to 2 then you'll still be following the lyrics Agreed.

    Also, in terms of difficulty settings I would make these changes:
    Approach Rate - 1
    Overall Difficulty - 1
OK.

00:40:041 - Slider velocity changes can be confusing and cause slider breaks, in lower difficulties especially. - I would change the slider velocity here to something like 0.75x here instead of 0.5x so it's less jarring. I think it was mostly due to wanting a bit longer slider. I'll see how 0.75x looks.
00:46:000 - Sounds weird having nothing here, I would move 00:46:205 (5) - so it starts there OK.
01:09:219 (3) - I would reduce this to just one repeat and add a note at 01:09:630 - It sounds weird atm since there's nothing in the music at 01:09:527 OK.
01:22:780 (1) - Shorten this slider to the red tick Don't why I haven't thought of that.

Hitsound suggestions
00:15:383 (3) - remove clap from slider start? you don't have it at 00:35:109 (3) in a similar phrase in the song OK.
00:18:671 (3) - Finish at end? A clap seems better to me.
00:34:082 (1) - Clap on slider end? Sure.
00:40:041 - In this slower section I would add some soft-whistle hitsounds, on the big white ticks or something. OK.
00:56:068 (2) - Finish on slider end No thank you.
00:59:767 (1) - Finish on slider start?
Doesn't seem right.


Overall it's an okay difficulty, and playable as is, but could use improvements as it feels and plays a lot like an older map :P < Well I kind of like it as is.

[Hard]
Hp Drain - 1 OK.
00:15:383 (1,2) - Why this sudden jump? Doesn't go with the music imo Idk. I like it.
00:55:863 (1) - Delete note? Feels too empty.
00:56:068 (1,1,1,1) - Don't think this new combo spam is necessary honestly Idk. I'll consider it.
01:01:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I really like this pattern! Thank you. :)
01:04:493 (1,2,3) etc. - Don't think triplits fit in these spots, I would delete the notes on the blue ticks in this section OK.
01:09:425 (1) - - delete note Again, feels too empty.
01:09:219 (1,1,1,1,1) - Again, unnecessary new combos Again, I'll consider
01:22:369 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ ^
01:24:013 (3) - Finish here I don't feel its particularly necessary.

Nothing else really jumps out at me particular, though the hitobject placement is pretty messy. It plays decently though. I would focus on improving the hitobject placement (By that I mean on the grid, not on the timeline - you've followed the music quite well imo). I thought I did a pretty good job following the music too. I'll

Overall the same sort of things as I said in normal, try and cut down on linear patterns, add more curves yada yada.

Can't mod taiko, sorry.
Good luck!
Thank you for you mod. It was really helpful. :)
Last edited by CrestRising , edited 1 time in total.
kelvinli
160 posts
Joined April 2011
kelvinli
Hi~ M4M here :)
Apologize of my poor English first.
Feel free to ignore if I can't help.

[General]
Tags:Hanae CrestRising - they are not necessary as they are already in the Artist and Map Creator.
[Hard]
00:14:561 (4,5) - If I were you, I would do a blanket here.Like this: http://puu.sh/1FQ5B
314,269,14561,2,0,P|392:272|456:344,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:15:794 (3) - Since you used a jump on 00:15:383 (1,2) , why don't you snap this note a bit further like before?It plays better. :?
00:17:438 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think you could keep the spacing of these notes consistent(Be it jump or not). It plays awkward .
00:55:657 (1,1,1,1,1) - Seriously I agree with Royston. The part before these notes are not some notes that kills your HP. So, they are not really necessary.
01:27:711 (1) - I suggest to add a green line that is with a volume of 50% here. Sounded better IMO.
Hitsounding
00:40:863 (5) - Whistle
00:42:507 (4) - Whistle
00:44:151 (5) - Whistle
00:44:562 (7) - Whistle
00:45:794 (3) - Whistle

This diff is fine, and I like some claps in some parts you used. Good as of your first map, but you have potential to improve it.

[Normal]
00:32:233 (4) - I think you could split it up into more sliders. Some players only expecting it to repeat once, especially new players.
00:46:000 (1) - I suggest you to put this closer to 00:45:794 (2) like before. Since new players may recognize them as 1/1 note.
00:47:644 (2) - How about new combo here?
00:49:288 (3) - ^
00:52:370 (2) - Same, split it up into more pieces.
00:54:836 (4,1) - It is confusing! 1/2 note after a slider repeating 4 times can be very confusing for weaker players :o
00:58:123 (1) - ^, I would repeat it only once and left 00:58:740 empty
01:01:411 (1) - ^,I would repeat it only once and left 01:02:027 empty
01:09:219 (3) - 1/4 slider? why? :? I would use only 1 circle here to follow the vocals
01:26:068 (1) - why not use a clap in the end of this slider?It is quite bland.
01:27:711 (1) - same as hard.
01:27:711 (1) - again, I suggest to add a clap in the end of this slider.

It is fine.Could be more newbie-friendly IMO.

I am not a Taiko player nor mapper nor modder, sorry here.
Good luck on ranking :D
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21
Hi XD M4M via your queue X3

[General]
- Your Map got no diff under 3 star.. which means unrankable.. so thats means, you should reduce the difficulty in normal o_o
- 00:52:370 - add kiai time at here o3o , remove the kiai 01:09:219


Okay.. Follow the mod first.. and you will know why this and why there X3

[Normal]
00:08:808 (3,4,5,6) - just linear? How bout (4) and (6) 2 grid up
00:10:863 (1) - like this? http://puu.sh/1FKAG I prefer it this way... because (1) looks more symetrical/alined with (6) and its does symetris with (5) owob and why (2) there? yes.. i make it aline with (6) so.. its makes a good pattern. XD
00:12:096 (3,4,1,2) - http://puu.sh/1FKXr and http://puu.sh/1FLj1 like this? why? yeah.. yeah.. because mostly of your map, sliders looks linear or curve etc, how bout making those slider? owo and (4,1) will looks symmetrical that way.. of course (1,2) for symmetrical reason too
00:16:616 (5) - aline the slider's head and end. o3o will look more tidy..
00:15:383 (3) - ^ and then, like this?
00:17:849 (2) - change this curve slider into an "S" slider
(break)
00:32:233 (4,1) - Too much reverse ;A; and a half notes ;A; because you don't have easy here.. We should say Normal should be the easiest in this map. so.. http://puu.sh/1FLqE . that long slider's tick sound is depute the vocal
00:36:342 (1) - copy past from 00:35:109 (3) and flip them ctrl+H ctrl+J and re-replace it at x:400 y:256, note that your (4) spacing is inconstant
00:37:164 (6,7) - move this somewhere else if you change ^
(add break)
00:40:041 - not recommended to use a change SV multiplier in normal/easy tho... but.. idk if you want to remap that part :/ (if you don't change this, go on with the mod, If you remap that part, ignore this coloring mod)
00:40:041 (1,2) - x:496 y:88 to make it not replaying/replacing at here 00:43:329 (1,2)
00:43:329 (1,2) - 1 grid up 1 grid to the right to make it aline with 00:40:041 (1,2)
00:44:973 (1,2,1) - flip this Ctrl+H
00:49:288 (3,4,5,6) - more fit like this o3o http://puu.sh/1FMf7
00:49:699 (4) - curve this
00:52:370 (2) - change this into 1 long slider to reduce the difficulty cause the slider tick sound depute the vocal
00:56:890 (3) - http://puu.sh/1FMn8 ? more fit that why I think X3
00:58:123 (1,2) - turn them into 1 long slider or 1/1 slider with reverse
01:01:411 (1,2) - ^
01:03:055 (4,5) - curve this.. too much linear o3o
01:08:192 (2) - you will know what i'll talk about this
01:09:219 (3) - in a normal diff? oh please no.. please don't dear.. its scary.. you'll make a newbie player have a heart attack and they won't calm down after seeing that note
01:11:273 (1,2,3,4) - this looks not tidy.. i mean messy.. ;A; change pattern please
01:16:205 (1,2,3,4,1) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/1FMvA ? instead of using that square pattern ;A; too much square pattern I mean
01:21:136 (1,2) - move this somewhere else please ;_; its so messy if you them there. at least stack them please ;_;
01:24:425 - add break please ;A;

[Hard]
First of all.. I want you to Ctrl+A and see what you did.. You map only in the center =____________________=
00:15:383 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer you swap (2) and (3) position and stack (4) above (1). a Jump too right? :o
00:17:027 (2) - stack (2) below 00:18:055 (6) please..
00:17:027 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - how bout make a flower pattern? http://puu.sh/1FME6
00:30:589 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make other pattern please.. its looks boring if you just do it linear
00:32:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - circle pattern would be good here.. http://puu.sh/1FMPF
00:35:931 (5) - distance this will make a good jump XD
00:37:164 (2,3,4,5,6) - make this into a flower pattern X3
00:52:986 (4) - 3 grid right
00:46:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - replace this somewhere else ;A; all are to in the center o3o
00:56:068 (1,1,1,1,1) - don't spam NC here
01:22:369 (1,2,3,4,1) - curve this stream

[Kantan]
00:36:753 (43) - shouldn't this be a d?
00:40:041 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - D K D K D K D
00:46:616 (58,59,60,61) - D k D k
00:50:726 (63) - why not k? just make them constant all.. because its Kantan X9
00:56:479 (72) - D
01:26:068 (121) - turn this into 2 circles :o

Not planning on Oni diff? its a waste ;-;

[Futsuu]
00:08:397 - add note here.. it feels awkward if you put that half note
00:08:397 (4,5,6) - kdd if you add ^
00:20:315 (34,35,36) - its futsuu.. You can put up notes like this. Move (35) to 00:20:931 , add note 00:21:548
00:23:603 (40,41,42) - ^
00:27:301 - add note
00:28:123 - ^
00:40:657 (76,77) - dk
00:42:301 (79,80) - ^
00:43:945 (82,83) - ^
00:47:438 (89) - delete this.. just follow the louder backsound/drum
00:49:082 (91) - ^
00:46:616 (87,88) - D D if you change ^
00:48:260 (89,90) - ^
01:26:068 (168) - turn this into 5 notes ;_;

Imo you should do an Oni too.. Because it is a waste if you don't. Mostly people like to do an Oni and they need kantan/Muzu/futsuu.. But you ain't need 'em.. just make one XD


GL XD
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
KingKrishna
For your M4M QUE
Normal
Her voice is just so addicting o..o
00:12:096(3,4) these sliders are kinda weird, why not like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544294
00:37:575(3) ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544298
01:20:109(3,4,5) change it to something like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544310
01:21:598 (5,6) ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544313

HARD
00:27:476 (1,3) these sliders are just doesnt look that good http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544322
00:33:466(7) add a finish sound?
00:55:555 this stream looks pretty, but i think there was a rule on this type of new comboing check on it
01:16:205(1) add a finish sound ?
CrestRising
163 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
CrestRising

kelvinli wrote:

Hi~ M4M here :)
Apologize of my poor English first.
Feel free to ignore if I can't help.

[General]
Tags:Hanae CrestRising - they are not necessary as they are already in the Artist and Map Creator. There's no way to search for the Artist specifically and some people already put their name in the tags, so I think its fine.
[Hard]
00:14:561 (4,5) - If I were you, I would do a blanket here.Like this: http://puu.sh/1FQ5B I already had something like that, but your code makes it look a bit nicer.
314,269,14561,2,0,P|392:272|456:344,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:15:794 (3) - Since you used a jump on 00:15:383 (1,2) , why don't you snap this note a bit further like before?It plays better. :? A bit better.
00:17:438 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think you could keep the spacing of these notes consistent(Be it jump or not). It plays awkward . OK
00:55:657 (1,1,1,1,1) - Seriously I agree with Royston. The part before these notes are not some notes that kills your HP. So, they are not really necessary. I thought I fixed it, but now its fixed. Also, I decided to delete 00:55:863 (1) from Royston's suggestion.
01:27:711 (1) - I suggest to add a green line that is with a volume of 50% here. Sounded better IMO. I don't see a point in doing so.
Hitsounding
00:40:863 (5) - Whistle
00:42:507 (4) - Whistle
00:44:151 (5) - Whistle
00:44:562 (7) - Whistle
00:45:794 (3) - Whistle Fixed all :)

This diff is fine, and I like some claps in some parts you used. Good as of your first map, but you have potential to improve it. Yeah, I know.

[Normal]
00:32:233 (4) - I think you could split it up into more sliders. Some players only expecting it to repeat once, especially new players. OK
00:46:000 (1) - I suggest you to put this closer to 00:45:794 (2) like before. Since new players may recognize them as 1/1 note. Its the actual distance spacing, btw, but I do think you're right. Also increased the slider velocity.
00:47:644 (2) - How about new combo here? OK to both
00:49:288 (3) - ^
00:52:370 (2) - Same, split it up into more pieces. OK
00:54:836 (4,1) - It is confusing! 1/2 note after a slider repeating 4 times can be very confusing for weaker players :o Changed the slider and removed the circle.
00:58:123 (1) - ^, I would repeat it only once and left 00:58:740 empty
01:01:411 (1) - ^,I would repeat it only once and left 01:02:027 empty Idk, I think its ok.
01:09:219 (3) - 1/4 slider? why? :? I would use only 1 circle here to follow the vocals Changed some things around.
01:26:068 (1) - why not use a clap in the end of this slider?It is quite bland. OK
01:27:711 (1) - same as hard. same as hard.
01:27:711 (1) - again, I suggest to add a clap in the end of this slider. OK

It is fine.Could be more newbie-friendly IMO.

I am not a Taiko player nor mapper nor modder, sorry here. That's fine.
Good luck on ranking :D
:D
CrestRising
163 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
CrestRising
SPOILER

Teru21 wrote:

Hi XD M4M via your queue X3

[General]
- Your Map got no diff under 3 star.. which means unrankable.. so thats means, you should reduce the difficulty in normal o_o I have an Easy taikio, so I think it'll be fine.
- 00:52:370 - add kiai time at here o3o , remove the kiai 01:09:219 Hmm... I'll consider it, but I like my Kiai as is for now.l


Okay.. Follow the mod first.. and you will know why this and why there X3

[Normal]
00:08:808 (3,4,5,6) - just linear? How bout (4) and (6) 2 grid up Nice idea.
00:10:863 (1) - like this? http://puu.sh/1FKAG I prefer it this way... because (1) looks more symetrical/alined with (6) and its does symetris with (5) owob and why (2) there? yes.. i make it aline with (6) so.. its makes a good pattern. XD OK
00:12:096 (3,4,1,2) - http://puu.sh/1FKXr and http://puu.sh/1FLj1 like this? why? yeah.. yeah.. because mostly of your map, sliders looks linear or curve etc, how bout making those slider? owo and (4,1) will looks symmetrical that way.. of course (1,2) for symmetrical reason too 3 and 4 is a definite no, I'll think about 1 and 2.
00:16:616 (5) - aline the slider's head and end. o3o will look more tidy.. I'm not sure what you mean by aligning the head and end. It looks fine imo.
00:15:383 (3) - ^ and then, like this? ^
00:17:849 (2) - change this curve slider into an "S" slider Idk, maybe.
(break)
00:32:233 (4,1) - Too much reverse ;A; and a half notes ;A; because you don't have easy here.. We should say Normal should be the easiest in this map. so.. http://puu.sh/1FLqE . that long slider's tick sound is depute the vocal Changed it in a different way from.
00:36:342 (1) - copy past from 00:35:109 (3) and flip them ctrl+H ctrl+J and re-replace it at x:400 y:256, note that your (4) spacing is inconstant OK
00:37:164 (6,7) - move this somewhere else if you change ^ Obviously. :P
(add break) No.
00:40:041 - not recommended to use a change SV multiplier in normal/easy tho... but.. idk if you want to remap that part :/ (if you don't change this, go on with the mod, If you remap that part, ignore this coloring mod) I changed it to 0.75X. Imo, I think its fine.
00:40:041 (1,2) - x:496 y:88 to make it not replaying/replacing at here 00:43:329 (1,2) I think its alright.
00:43:329 (1,2) - 1 grid up 1 grid to the right to make it aline with 00:40:041 (1,2) No
00:44:973 (1,2,1) - flip this Ctrl+H No
00:49:288 (3,4,5,6) - more fit like this o3o http://puu.sh/1FMf7 Not to me...
00:49:699 (4) - curve this I curved it a little bit.
00:52:370 (2) - change this into 1 long slider to reduce the difficulty cause the slider tick sound depute the vocal Changed it in a different way.
00:56:890 (3) - http://puu.sh/1FMn8 ? more fit that why I think X3 I'll think about it.
00:58:123 (1,2) - turn them into 1 long slider or 1/1 slider with reverse No, I like it my way better.
01:01:411 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:03:055 (4,5) - curve this.. too much linear o3o Idk about that...
01:08:192 (2) - you will know what i'll talk about this No, because I already changed it. :P
01:09:219 (3) - in a normal diff? oh please no.. please don't dear.. its scary.. you'll make a newbie player have a heart attack and they won't calm down after seeing that note ^
01:11:273 (1,2,3,4) - this looks not tidy.. i mean messy.. ;A; change pattern please I had high doubts about that too.
01:16:205 (1,2,3,4,1) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/1FMvA ? instead of using that square pattern ;A; too much square pattern I mean
01:21:136 (1,2) - move this somewhere else please ;_; its so messy if you them there. at least stack them please ;_; I remapped it a little so these may or may not be resolved.
01:24:425 - add break please ;A; No point.

[Hard]
First of all.. I want you to Ctrl+A and see what you did.. You map only in the center =____________________= That's a pretty wide "center" to me imo.
00:15:383 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer you swap (2) and (3) position and stack (4) above (1). a Jump too right? :o Changed in a different way.
00:17:027 (2) - stack (2) below 00:18:055 (6) please.. OK
00:17:027 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - how bout make a flower pattern? http://puu.sh/1FME6 No thank you.
00:30:589 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make other pattern please.. its looks boring if you just do it linear OK
00:32:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - circle pattern would be good here.. http://puu.sh/1FMPF ^
00:35:931 (5) - distance this will make a good jump XD Not to me...
00:37:164 (2,3,4,5,6) - make this into a flower pattern X3 No thank you.
00:52:986 (4) - 3 grid right No thank you.
00:46:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - replace this somewhere else ;A; all are to in the center o3o I think its alright.
00:56:068 (1,1,1,1,1) - don't spam NC here I know.
01:22:369 (1,2,3,4,1) - curve this stream No thank you.

[Kantan]
00:36:753 (43) - shouldn't this be a d? OK
00:40:041 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - D K D K D K D I'll consider it.
00:46:616 (58,59,60,61) - D k D k OK, but I put lowercase d's instead.
00:50:726 (63) - why not k? just make them constant all.. because its Kantan X9 OK
00:56:479 (72) - D No thank you.
01:26:068 (121) - turn this into 2 circles :o I'm not sure.

Not planning on Oni diff? its a waste ;-; Thanks for the encouragement. :|

[Futsuu]
00:08:397 - add note here.. it feels awkward if you put that half noteNo
00:08:397 (4,5,6) - kdd if you add ^ No
00:20:315 (34,35,36) - its futsuu.. You can put up notes like this. Move (35) to 00:20:931 , add note 00:21:548 I'm not sure what you're getting at...
00:23:603 (40,41,42) - ^ ^
00:27:301 - add note No
00:28:123 - ^ ^
00:40:657 (76,77) - dk OK
00:42:301 (79,80) - ^ No
00:43:945 (82,83) - ^ OK
00:47:438 (89) - delete this.. just follow the louder backsound/drum Imo, its fine.
00:49:082 (91) - ^ ^
00:46:616 (87,88) - D D if you change ^ No
00:48:260 (89,90) - ^ No
01:26:068 (168) - turn this into 5 notes ;_; I'll consider it.

Imo you should do an Oni too.. Because it is a waste if you don't. Mostly people like to do an Oni and they need kantan/Muzu/futsuu.. But you ain't need 'em.. just make one XD Sorry, what exactly is an Oni? Anyways, I think we have to much hard/Insane Takio diffs imo.


GL XD btw, for the takio mod, some of the combo numbers didn't correspond to the time so it was a bit tricky to follow those mods. :? I was looking at the wrong difficulties for both. What a fail. I'll re-look at your Takio mod some other time.

SPOILER

mebins wrote:

For your M4M QUEUE
Normal
Her voice is just so addicting o..o o..o
00:12:096(3,4) these sliders are kinda weird, why not like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544294 I'll think about it...
00:37:575(3) ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544298 Tried to replicate what you're talking about.
01:20:109(3,4,5) change it to something like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544310 Hmm... Idk
01:21:598 (5,6) ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544313 No

HARD
00:27:476 (1,3) these sliders are just doesnt look that good http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544322 Yeah it does look a bit weird, but I think I like my way better.
00:33:466(7) add a finish sound? No
00:55:555 this stream looks pretty, but i think there was a rule on this type of new comboing check on it This is the forth time someone mentioned that :?. Its finally changed now.
01:16:205(1) add a finish sound ? No


Thanks to both of you for your mods :)
Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Tari
Oh Hey.

16:10 Taris: Hey~
16:10 Taris: You mind if I mod this?
16:10 *Taris is listening to Hanae - Kamisama Hajimemashita
16:10 CrestRising: Sure
16:10 Taris: k
16:10 Taris: Wait can I do an IRC mod?
16:10 Taris: I need to save time right now ><
16:11 CrestRising: Um sure if you want
16:11 Taris: ok
16:11 Taris: So
16:11 Taris: First off
16:11 Taris: isn't this an anime OP?
16:11 Taris: when I search the song up, it shows as an anime OP
16:11 CrestRising: I don't think so
16:12 CrestRising: no
16:12 Taris: ?
16:12 Taris: Are you sure?
16:12 CrestRising: yeah
16:12 CrestRising: try searching the japanese name for it
16:12 Taris: ok
16:13 Taris: oh
16:13 Taris: and your clap
16:13 Taris: sounds baaaad
16:13 CrestRising: ok
16:13 CrestRising: where?
16:13 Taris: oh
16:13 Taris: I have a clap you can use
16:13 Taris: It sounds better than the default one
16:13 Taris: You want to use it?
16:14 CrestRising: yeah if it sounds better
16:14 Taris: k
16:14 Taris: http://puu.sh/1G82V
16:15 Taris: You know how to add it right?
16:15 CrestRising: that doesn't sound too much like a clap...
16:15 Taris: Its a clap
16:16 CrestRising: k let me see how it sounds
16:17 CrestRising: hold on I don't think I added it right
16:17 Taris: o.o
16:17 Taris: You need to name it
16:17 Taris: soft-hitclap
16:17 CrestRising: its already named that o.o
16:17 Taris: Go to Timing
16:17 CrestRising: k
16:18 Taris: Click the yellow button
16:18 Taris: Rename all your lines
16:18 CrestRising: yeah
16:18 Taris: Custom 1
16:18 Taris: S:C1
16:18 CrestRising: got it
16:18 Taris: leave
16:18 Taris: after you done so
16:18 Taris: make sure you save changes
16:18 CrestRising: k
16:18 Taris: and go back in
16:18 Taris: and it should work
16:19 CrestRising: ok let me try it out
16:19 CrestRising: it sounds a bit weird to me
16:20 Taris: its fine
16:20 Taris: you can stick with default clap
16:20 Taris: but i think thats sounds worst
16:20 CrestRising: ok
16:20 Taris: and you need
16:20 Taris: some hitsound help
16:20 Taris: 0.0
16:20 Taris: I wanted to say some general stuff
16:20 Taris: before I mod
16:20 CrestRising: yeah i know that
16:20 CrestRising: ok
16:21 Taris: you planning to keep the clap?
16:21 CrestRising: I'll use the default clap
16:22 Taris: hmm
16:22 Taris: Can I have a crack at hitsounding this?
16:22 CrestRising: sure
16:41 Taris: k
16:41 Taris: I finished
16:41 CrestRising: k
16:41 Taris: so
16:42 Taris: http://puu.sh/1G8Gb
16:42 Taris: Put that into your song folder
16:42 Taris: like you did with the clap
16:43 CrestRising: what do I save it as?
16:43 Taris: leave
16:43 Taris: it
16:43 Taris: same name
16:44 Taris: so when you put it in your map
16:44 Taris: it will say if you want to replace it
16:44 Taris: you click yes.
16:44 CrestRising: wait um
16:45 CrestRising: how do I download it from the link?
16:45 Taris: o.o
16:45 Taris: when you click
16:45 Taris: you get alot of text right?
16:45 CrestRising: yeah
16:45 Taris: k
16:45 Taris: copy all that text
16:45 CrestRising: i did
16:45 Taris: ok
16:45 Taris: you need to go to your normal diff
16:45 CrestRising: oh normal diff
16:46 Taris: click file
16:46 Taris: and then click
16:46 Taris: Open .osu in notepad
16:46 Taris: and paste it in there
16:46 CrestRising: do I replace the text you gave me in the link with the text in Normal?
16:46 CrestRising: I mean the other way around
16:47 CrestRising: nvm I got it
16:48 CrestRising: ok it worked
16:49 CrestRising: now what
17:04 Taris: uh
17:04 Taris: sorry
17:04 Taris: had to go
17:05 Taris: now you should have it
17:05 CrestRising: yeah i do
17:05 Taris: how does it sound?
17:05 CrestRising: it sounds better
17:05 Taris: o.o
17:06 Taris: So
17:06 Taris: the clap isn't bad right?
17:06 CrestRising: yeah it isn't bad
17:28 CrestRising: Um Taris
17:28 Taris: ?
17:29 CrestRising: Are you still modding cus I have to go right now
17:30 Taris: oh done
17:30 Taris: but
17:30 Taris: let me savelog
17:30 Taris: :D
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21

CrestRising wrote:

[spoilerbox]

Teru21 wrote:

Imo you should do an Oni too.. Because it is a waste if you don't. Mostly people like to do an Oni and they need kantan/Muzu/futsuu.. But you ain't need 'em.. just make one XD Sorry, what exactly is an Oni? Anyways, I think we have to much hard/Insane Takio diffs imo.
you know, Taiko diffs. Kantan - Futsuu - Muzukashii - Oni so Oni should be the hardest..
CrestRising
163 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
CrestRising

Teru21 wrote:

you know, Taiko diffs. Kantan - Futsuu - Muzukashii - Oni so Oni should be the hardest..
Oh, ok. But that would mean that I have to make two other Takio difficulties. Besides, I don't think an Oni would fit for this type of song imo.
Ushiro T
240 posts
Joined October 2010
Ushiro T
here's mod for m4m !



Normal

00:17:849 (2) - not contact with 00:16:616 (5) - slider. thaT looks batter.

00:39:219 (1) - add circle ?

00:44:973 (1,2,3) - how about move the other side?

01:27:301 (2) - add circle ?

01:27:301 (2) - ^



Hard

00:44:562 (7,8) - how about replace one slider

00:56:171 (3) - delete

00:59:562 (5) - add circle or slider

01:08:808 (4) - move x:234 y:209

01:09:630 (1) - clap

01:12:712 (5) - same with 00:59:562 (5) -



Done :D
Nice Song :3
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
General tips

next time try to add note that suit the instrument also not just only fit the vocal
this keep the note goes well with good constant rate not just blanket when not have a vocal


and don't copy or use similar pattern to much it's boring
like this in normal diff 01:19:493 (1,2,1,2) -
Hard

try to add finish hit sound every 2 big white tick

sample
00:07:164 (1) - head of slider
00:10:452 (1) - head of slider
00:13:740 (1) -
00:17:027 (2) -
and go on..

01:26:068 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - try to do better position or nice pattern

2x copy is not good

01:31:000 add normal greentiming here

normal
same finishsound mod as hard

01:24:013 (2) - add break here you forgot ? or remove break for make the 2 diff same (require for ranking)


Goodluck

my map for m4m
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/69493

and i don't know how to map taiko or play it sorry.
CrestRising
163 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
CrestRising
SPOILER

enlxodutls wrote:

here's mod for m4m ! Just for future reference, you don't put numbers on the suggestions where you said to add a circle or slider.

Normal

00:17:849 (2) - not contact with 00:16:616 (5) - slider. thaT looks batter. The distance spacing won't allow me to. Anyways, I don't think its too noticeable outside the editor.

00:39:219 (1) - add circle ? A very nice idea, but I'm not sure if I could make it work due to the velocity change screwing up the distance spacing. I'll try to fit it in, if I can.

00:44:973 (1,2,3) - how about move the other side? No, I want to keep symmetry with 00:43:329 (1,2) to an extent.

01:27:301 (2) - add circle ? There's no way to add a circle without looking weird or messing up the pattern, but I'll keep it in mind.

01:27:301 (2) - I want to give the players enough time to react to the spinner, so no.



Hard

00:44:562 (7,8) - how about replace one slider I would, but it wouldn't look too good.

00:56:171 (3) - delete MUCH better, thanks. :)

00:59:562 (5) - add circle or slider No, I want to follow the lyrics for that.

01:08:808 (4) - move x:234 y:209 The distance spacing doesn't allow me to move it that far, but I think it looks better now.

01:09:630 (1) - clap Sounds too weird.

01:12:712 (5) - same with 00:59:562 (5) I want to keep consistency with the first part of the chorus.



Done :D
Nice Song :3

SPOILER

regenz wrote:

General tips

next time try to add note that suit the instrument also not just only fit the vocal
this keep the note goes well with good constant rate not just blanket when not have a vocal Not sure what you're talking about with the blanket. Imo, I don't think its necessarily bad that I just followed the lyrics. There wasn't really too much of an instrumental too map that was more interesting than the lyrics.


and don't copy or use similar pattern to much it's boring I'll keep that in mind.
like this in normal diff 01:19:493 (1,2,1,2) I don't really think that was too bad in my opinion...
Hard

try to add finish hit sound every 2 big white tick Um... No thank you. I prefer claps, the finishes sound too weird.

sample
00:07:164 (1) - head of slider
00:10:452 (1) - head of slider
00:13:740 (1) -
00:17:027 (2) -
and go on..

01:26:068 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - try to do better position or nice pattern

2x copy is not good I'll think about it.

01:31:000 add normal greentiming here Useless in my opinion.

normal
same finishsound mod as hard

01:24:013 (2) - add break here you forgot ? or remove break for make the 2 diff same (require for ranking) I didn't realize that, thanks.


Goodluck

my map for m4m
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/69493 You already posted in my queue, you don't have to post it again here.

and i don't know how to map taiko or play it sorry.

Thanks to both of you for your mods! :)
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
hi, from your queue (M4M request)
General
nice song!

Normal
AR4 seems better for newbie because this diff doesn't have "Easy" diff.
Placement
00:17:849(2) move like this? maybe it's more beautiful
SPOILER
00:31:411(3) well, this slider doesn't seem clearly imo. e.g.) of course you fix it, don't forget to change another notes.
SPOILER
01:11:274(1,2,3) make beautiful blanket.
SPOILER
01:21:137(1) wrong spacing
Rhythm
00:40:041 for the easiest diff, you shouldn't change BPM multiple for newbie imo.
00:46:616 unnecessary green line
01:09:836 ^
00:40:041(1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) to follow the vocal is one of the way, but it's boring and a bit weird for me, so you can try to fit to music like this?
SPOILER
00:58:123(1) umm it's weird. like this?
SPOILER
01:01:411(1)^
Hit Sonud
00:56:068(1) add finish at end
01:09:630 80% hears loudly, maybe 60% better.

Hard
Placement
00:14:562(4,5,1) make beautiful~
SPOILER
00:40:041(3) put NC here because BPM will be slow down.
01:04:288(6) 1 grid left to be same with (3)
01:14:356(6) stacked better at (3)
Rhythm
00:46:616 unnecessary green line
Hit Sonud
this hit sound pattern seems suck and weird for me, you can put clap at 2,4 (back beat) in below picture. that is to follow the music and sounds nice.
SPOILER
00:56:479(1) add finish at head.

umm, this map needs more work but good job for newbie mapset and sry for short modding, I can't mod taiko diffs because of my suck skill :P
starred. and if you only mod 2 diffs inmy map, it's ok because I did it :3
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Meru
well yeah.. I'm going to m4m this map
let see what can I do xD (since I'm not modding anything recently)

[General]
  1. overall dif for osu! standard please try to stack some objects for appeal's sake (?)

[Futsuu]
  2. 00:11:068 - k
  3. 00:11:890 - ^
  4. 00:37:370 - ^
  5. 00:39:219 - kdkdK
  6. 00:41:479 - d
  7. 00:42:096 - d
  8. 00:42:301 - remove

[Normal]
  1. 00:37:575 - move it to x:160 y:160, you can get a neat potition I think lol
  2. 00:58:123 (1) - remove the clap here because it will break the flow of hitsound, only clap on the reverse and slider's tail is better
  3. 01:02:027 (1) - put clap here maybe? becuase this ^^^^
  4. 01:09:630 - You know, IMO 80% is too high you can feel the different when the volume is still 60% kinda awkward but it's not that, I suggests around 70~75%
  5. 01:20:726 (1,2) - hmm spacing? your regular spacing was 0.9x and this part is different
  6. 01:31:000 (1) - put whistle/finish, well I prefer whistle xD

[Hard]
  1. 00:10:041 (8) - remove the clap, there are too much claps I think so for not make it awkward remove it
  2. 00:12:096 (5) - ^ but not too much, it is just... hmm don't really force to put clap?
  3. 00:12:507 (6,7,8) - put the clap only on (6) and (7)'s slider head and put clap on (8)'s slider tail
  4. 00:14:562 (4) - want to try this curve? it makes this diff more neat
  5. 00:18:671 (7) - whistle is more fit than finish so try it
  6. 00:34:082 (1) - remove the clap
  7. 00:37:164 (2,3,4,5,6) - please only put clap on (2,3) and (6)'s slider head and
  8. 00:44:356 (6,7,8) - since this is the hardest diff maybe put the jump here, triangle jump is okay
  9. 00:47:027 (5,6) - you put the clap in the wrong way!! move the clap to (5) and (6)'s slider head
  10. 00:48:671 (5,6) - ^

[Kantan]
  1. 00:40:041 - D
  2. 00:40:863 - K
  3. 00:42:507 - K
  4. 00:56:479 - D
  5. 01:09:630 - D
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Did someone say m4m

Overall:
These singers suck.
You need an easier osu!standard diff, to the best of my knowledge. I haven't been as active in the modding scene as I used to be, but I think that 3.65 is a little high for the easiest diff in a map, even if it is a normal.
I thank you for using claps on 2 and 4. However, it sometimes feels like it's too much, as you're using the claps to follow the rhythm instead of the drums. Let the song and the notes create the drive while the claps stay on 2 and 4. If it feels too empty, soft whistles can add a nice touch. I could say a lot about the hitsounds, but it's pretty amazing how much "Add claps on 2 and 4" does to make a map sound better.
00:56:479 - even if you don't use kiai here, add a 1/4 long kiai to use the fountain, it feels fitting as it contrasts heavily from the rest of the song.
01:24:014 - End kiai here
01:29:355 (1) - Add finish or whistle here?

Hard:
00:13:329 (8) - Change this pattern so it doesn't overlap with (7)
00:16:616 (1) - Stack with (2) of the previous pattern to make this look cleaner
00:28:534 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how this goes upward and overlaps. Maybe change to something like this? (NOTE: Rough sketch) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/553160
01:12:095 (3) - ULTIMATE NAZI: I like how your offcentering allows for stacking to not mess things up. However, (3) is a LITTLE below perfect stacking. This is a total nazi, lol
01:15:588 (6,7) - Plays awkwardly because of the weird stacks. Maybe just make it follow the path it was going on before it had to overlap?
01:16:410 (2,3) - Weird how this plays, maybe just make it follow a path or have all three stacked

Normal:
Seems very 1/1y, especially in the beginning. You can do creative patterns and still have a normal diff~
00:17:849 (2) - Move this so it doesn't overlap
00:37:575 (3) - ^
00:40:041 - For this slow section, put the claps on the third white tick (the note) instead of at the end of the slider
00:54:219 (5) - NC, and move it so it doesn't overlap
00:56:068 (1) - Add finish at the end of slider
00:58:123 (1) - What
01:01:411 (1) - ^
01:26:068 (1,1) - Maybe make these ( ) sliders, so it's easier to space out (right now, normal players would hit the second (1) way too early for the wrong reasons.

Cool. Not a taiko modder, all the notes are snapped, so yay.
CrestRising
163 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
CrestRising

kajiyatta wrote:

hi, from your queue (M4M request)
General
nice song!

Normal
AR4 seems better for newbie because this diff doesn't have "Easy" diff. I think its fine as is.
Placement
00:17:849(2) move like this? maybe it's more beautiful I tried my best to replicate.
SPOILER
00:31:411(3) well, this slider doesn't seem clearly imo. e.g.) of course you fix it, don't forget to change another notes. OK
SPOILER
01:11:274(1,2,3) make beautiful blanket. Can't really do that too well. :(
SPOILER
01:21:137(1) wrong spacing Oops.
Rhythm
00:40:041 for the easiest diff, you shouldn't change BPM multiple for newbie imo. I'll think about it some more.
00:46:616 unnecessary green line That was just there because I thought it would mess up the offset if there wasn't one there, but I was wrong.
01:09:836 ^ ^
00:40:041(1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) to follow the vocal is one of the way, but it's boring and a bit weird for me, so you can try to fit to music like this?
SPOILER
I'll consider it.
00:58:123(1) umm it's weird. like this? I'll give it some thought.
SPOILER
01:01:411(1)^ ^
Hit Sonud
00:56:068(1) add finish at end OK
01:09:630 80% hears loudly, maybe 60% better. 70% for now, but might change it to 60% later.

Hard
Placement
00:14:562(4,5,1) make beautiful~ Lol you use beautiful a lot. It would've been nicer if you gave me some code, but I think it looks better now.
SPOILER
00:40:041(3) put NC here because BPM will be slow down. OK
01:04:288(6) 1 grid left to be same with (3) OK
01:14:356(6) stacked better at (3) OK
Rhythm
00:46:616 unnecessary green line
Hit Sonud
this hit sound pattern seems suck and weird for me, you can put clap at 2,4 (back beat) in below picture. that is to follow the music and sounds nice.
SPOILER
Someone else mentioned that too. Will redo the hit sounds.
00:56:479(1) add finish at head. OK

umm, this map needs more work but good job for newbie mapset and sry for short modding, I can't mod taiko diffs because of my suck skill :P
starred. and if you only mod 2 diffs inmy map, it's ok because I did it :3
Thank you for the mod and star! :)
Nanika133
192 posts
Joined August 2012
Nanika133
Hi! Thanks for your mod :D

General:
Nice song, I like it (nice mapping too)
Is this a Cut Version? If yes, just add it in the Mp3 (It's not a rule or anything like that but ...)

Normal:
00:07:986 (2) - Why not 1/1 slider? It fits with the vocals
00:08:603 - You can add here a circle but dunno.
00:38:397 - Break maybe? Even if the Drain rate is low...
00:58:123 (1) - Lower the sound or remove the claps. Or just snap it on the 1/2, I feel like it don't fit
01:01:411 (1) - ^
01:24:014 - Same as 00:38:397
01:26:068 (1,1) - Slower SV?


Hard:
Lower the claps sound, sometimes, it's too much
00:40:760 (4) - Look down
00:42:404 (3) - Remove? Or don't stack
00:44:048 (4) - Same
00:45:794 (3) - ^
01:24:013 (3) - Maybe 3 grids right to fit the symmetry
00:54:836 (4) - Uh, I don't like 4 repetitions, maybe 1 repetition and 2 circles? Do what you want, it's personal taste

For the futsuu, a little higher SV? I feel it too slow. x1.0 can be good since it's low-BPM song.
A muzukashii can be good but only if follow the percussion and the piano ( I think it can be cool 8-) )

Hope I was useful, good luck for the rest :D
CrestRising
163 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
CrestRising
SPOILER

Matoryoshika wrote:

well yeah.. I'm going to m4m this map
let see what can I do xD (since I'm not modding anything recently)

[General]
  1. overall dif for osu! standard please try to stack some objects for appeal's sake (?) I'm not quite sure what you mean here...

[Futsuu]
  2. 00:11:068 - k OK
  3. 00:11:890 - ^ OK
  4. 00:37:370 - ^ OK
  5. 00:39:219 - kdkdK OK
  6. 00:41:479 - d OK
  7. 00:42:096 - d OK
  8. 00:42:301 - remove No, but changed it in a different way.


[Normal]
  1. 00:37:575 - move it to x:160 y:160, you can get a neat potition I think lol Changed it in a different way.
  2. 00:58:123 (1) - remove the clap here because it will break the flow of hitsound, only clap on the reverse and slider's tail is better OK
  3. 01:02:027 (1) - put clap here maybe? becuase this ^^^^ I already fixed that.
  4. 01:09:630 - You know, IMO 80% is too high you can feel the different when the volume is still 60% kinda awkward but it's not that, I suggests around 70~75% ^
  5. 01:20:726 (1,2) - hmm spacing? your regular spacing was 0.9x and this part is different It was just a mistake. I just forgot to re-distance snap it.
  6. 01:31:000 (1) - put whistle/finish, well I prefer whistle xD I was considering that, but since I don't have anything else to put on it, I'll put a whistle on it.

[Hard]
  1. 00:10:041 (8) - remove the clap, there are too much claps I think so for not make it awkward remove it I'm going to redo the hitsounds. This applies to most of the other hitsound mods in the difficulty.
  2. 00:12:096 (5) - ^ but not too much, it is just... hmm don't really force to put clap?
  3. 00:12:507 (6,7,8) - put the clap only on (6) and (7)'s slider head and put clap on (8)'s slider tail
  4. 00:14:562 (4) - want to try this curve? it makes this diff more neat I can't replicate it that good. :(
  5. 00:18:671 (7) - whistle is more fit than finish so try it It wasen't even a finish in the first place.
  6. 00:34:082 (1) - remove the clap
  7. 00:37:164 (2,3,4,5,6) - please only put clap on (2,3) and (6)'s slider head and
  8. 00:44:356 (6,7,8) - since this is the hardest diff maybe put the jump here, triangle jump is okay It wouldn't really fit to well in my opinion, but I'll consider it.
  9. 00:47:027 (5,6) - you put the clap in the wrong way!! move the clap to (5) and (6)'s slider head
  10. 00:48:671 (5,6) - ^

[Kantan]
  1. 00:40:041 - D
  2. 00:40:863 - K
  3. 00:42:507 - K
  4. 00:56:479 - D
  5. 01:09:630 - D Yes to all. :)

SPOILER

CDFA wrote:

Did someone say m4m

Overall:
These singers suck. Lol its only one singer, unless you mean in general.
You need an easier osu!standard diff, to the best of my knowledge. I haven't been as active in the modding scene as I used to be, but I think that 3.65 is a little high for the easiest diff in a map, even if it is a normal. I have a Kantan (Easy Takio) so I think its fine.
I thank you for using claps on 2 and 4. However, it sometimes feels like it's too much, as you're using the claps to follow the rhythm instead of the drums. Let the song and the notes create the drive while the claps stay on 2 and 4. If it feels too empty, soft whistles can add a nice touch. I could say a lot about the hitsounds, but it's pretty amazing how much "Add claps on 2 and 4" does to make a map sound better. I've redone the hit sounds.
00:56:479 - even if you don't use kiai here, add a 1/4 long kiai to use the fountain, it feels fitting as it contrasts heavily from the rest of the song. That would be nice, but i don't want to do it in my Takio difficulties, and I think Kiai time has to be consistent in all difficulties. But if I can do it, then I will.
01:24:014 - End kiai here It doesn't make too much of a difference, but I'll go ahead and change it.
01:29:355 (1) - Add finish or whistle here? Whistle

Hard:
00:13:329 (8) - Change this pattern so it doesn't overlap with (7) I increased the spacing, so it might not look as bad now, but I'll change it if anyone else has a problem with it.
00:16:616 (1) - Stack with (2) of the previous pattern to make this look cleaner OK
00:28:534 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how this goes upward and overlaps. Maybe change to something like this? (NOTE: Rough sketch OKhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/553160
01:12:095 (3) - ULTIMATE NAZI: I like how your offcentering allows for stacking to not mess things up. However, (3) is a LITTLE below perfect stacking. This is a total nazi, lol I tested it out, and its not really noticeable, so no.
01:15:588 (6,7) - Plays awkwardly because of the weird stacks. Maybe just make it follow the path it was going on before it had to overlap? Changed it around a little. I hope it doesn't look too bad.
01:16:410 (2,3) - Weird how this plays, maybe just make it follow a path or have all three stacked I'll go with the latter.

Normal:
Seems very 1/1y, especially in the beginning. You can do creative patterns and still have a normal diff~ I'll try to work on that.
00:17:849 (2) - Move this so it doesn't overlap I think I just changed it (maybe, I'm not sure), so I'm not sure what you're talking about...
00:37:575 (3) - ^ I think its fine, but I might just change it anyway.
00:40:041 - For this slow section, put the claps on the third white tick (the note) instead of at the end of the slider I've removed the claps from the end of the slider, but I think I like whistles better on the third white ticks.
00:54:219 (5) - NC, and move it so it doesn't overlap I NC'd it, but I'm not sure whats overlaping what...
00:56:068 (1) - Add finish at the end of slider Already did.
00:58:123 (1) - What Yeah I know. I've changed both of them.
01:01:411 (1) - ^
01:26:068 (1,1) - Maybe make these ( ) sliders, so it's easier to space out (right now, normal players would hit the second (1) way too early for the wrong reasons. I can't make it perfectly ( ) because of the distance snap, but I did change it.

Cool. Not a taiko modder, all the notes are snapped, so yay.

Thank you both for your mods. I'll look at Nanika's in a bit.
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Nanika133 wrote:

Hi! Thanks for your mod :D Your welcome! :)

General:
Nice song, I like it (nice mapping too) Thank you. :)
Is this a Cut Version? If yes, just add it in the Mp3 (It's not a rule or anything like that but ...) You mean add it to the title? I think I'm going to add TV size to the title, since that's what everyone is doing nowadays.

Normal:
00:07:986 (2) - Why not 1/1 slider? It fits with the vocals I want to keep symmetry with 1. It does somewhat follow the lyrics if you listen close enough.
00:08:603 - You can add here a circle but dunno. You should have included that to the above, I would have given it a bit more thought if you did. I'm probably not going to though because of what I said above about the symmetry.
00:38:397 - Break maybe? Even if the Drain rate is low... It wouldn't really fit. The map isn't that long anyways, so I don't really need another break.
00:58:123 (1) - Lower the sound or remove the claps. Or just snap it on the 1/2, I feel like it don't fit Already fixed it.
01:01:411 (1) - ^ ^
01:24:014 - Same as 00:38:397 I thought I fixed that! Thanks for pointing that out.
01:26:068 (1,1) - Slower SV? I haven't thought of that. I'll take that into consideration.


Hard:
Lower the claps sound, sometimes, it's too much
00:40:760 (4) - Look down I don't see a reason why not to unstack these. If you listen closely enough, 3 goes with the music. I'm not sure what the instrument is called, but if you take a listen, you'll hear it.
00:42:404 (3) - Remove? Or don't stack
00:44:048 (4) - Same
00:45:794 (3) - ^
01:24:013 (3) - Maybe 3 grids right to fit the symmetry OK
00:54:836 (4) - Uh, I don't like 4 repetitions, maybe 1 repetition and 2 circles? Do what you want, it's personal taste I doubt that anyone won't catch the extra repeat, if that's your concern. If I was going to change it, I would do two sliders, not a slider and 2 circles. I will consider it for a while.

For the futsuu, a little higher SV? I feel it too slow. x1.0 can be good since it's low-BPM song. I was going to do something like this, but I must have forgotten. Ok.
A muzukashii can be good but only if follow the percussion and the piano ( I think it can be cool 8-) ) I might add one, but probably not.

Hope I was useful, good luck for the rest :D
Thank you for your mod and star! :)
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