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Topic Starter
Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
eee
I made a storyboard, cause I thought this deserved it
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?z4ql2mzmmmz
no kudosu please

EEEdit:
Ha, thx
but, apparently, they don't allow you to storyboard over a video, and the storyboard was just a joke, soooo.
I think the video can stay, but if anyone wants to see the storyboard with an non-updated version, click the link ;)

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Topic Starter
Andrea
Lol cool, but please you can do again? Because i've updated the song :(

Thank you, eee.
EEeee
awww, man I love this song, wish I could make a difficulty, but I'll just mess up ur map
fuffolo
Really nice!

Andre i love your map <3

Starred
Larto
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Andrea
All fixed ^_^
EEeee
I'm not sure, but the video, was good, until I saw a mans C***, dunno, its sorta, uhhh, blahh
video = male nudity/ewwww
I'm too scared to look again, could be wrong..
Topic Starter
Andrea
Just dont watch :/
fufe
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Andrea
Ok, im trying to cancel that c*** xD But i need help for do an image ahaha XD

EDIT: Larto says isn't necessary.
yaya
man . you have a lot of progress . haha .
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you YAYA :D
Larto
Tutti:
00:52:15 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - That pattern is so booring D:

Frutti:
You didn't really made the spacing in the beginning not weird yet :|


UPDATE: Both fixed, but... I noticed your hitsounds were pretty awful to be honest, no offense~
Please get some hitsound expert there.. I don't wanna bubble a map that is only technically correct. And you really don't want assholes that give your map a 1 star rating just because the hitsounds are bad.
Topic Starter
Andrea
Ok, im waiting for Mogsy :3
Diasios
starred
Hara
I'm going to mod a little but one note before I do it.

[Tutti] - 7.6 million max score - 4.68 stars - 42x notes or something
[Frutti] - 9.x million max scire - 4.61 stars - 511 notes

This alone is weird. Then the map just feels weird [Tutti], I just want your input on how you were thinking when you made this. Will post about modding Frutti - Summer and the easiest later today.
Topic Starter
Andrea
If frutti gives more score of tutti isn't important :|
Mogsy
Hitsound work, you say? Well, I'm going to stagger-mod this. Each difficulty takes so long to work with that I'm going to treat each one to a separate mod post. Not to mention that each difficulty post is going to be about a kilometer long.

Love:
-00:04:61 (2) - Whistle goes here.
-00:05:07 (3) - New Combo mark goes here; remove the Whistle.
-00:07:84 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:08:30 (2) - Whistle goes here.
-00:08:76 (3) - New Combo mark goes here; remove the Whistle.
-00:11:53 (6) - Whistle goes here.
-00:12:46 (1,2) - Remove the Whistles.
-00:16:96 (1) - Remove the Whistle, put a Finish here.
-00:17:999 - Remove the timing section here.
-00:20:30 (3) - Clap goes here.
-00:21:69 (5) - No hitsounds here.
-00:24:92 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark, put a Clap here.
-00:25:38 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:27:69 (6) - Clap goes here.
-00:28:61 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark, put a Clap here.
-00:29:07 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:30:92 (4) - Put a Clap here.
-00:31:84 (1) - No Clap here.
-00:32:53 (2) - Finish goes here; no Clap.
-00:36:922 - Delete the timing section here.
-00:39:69 (3) - Clap goes here.
-00:40:38 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:41:99 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:43:38 (3) - Clap goes here.
-00:43:84 (4) - ^
-00:44:30 (1) - Remove the Whistle, and then place a Whistle on the very last part of the slider.
-00:45:23 (2) - ^
-00:46:15 (3) - Clap goes here.
-00:46:61 (4) - ^
-00:47:07 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:47:53 (2) - Place a Clap on the grid endpoint of the slider (so where the slider would normally end) and a Finish on the final point of the slider.
-00:48:92 (3) - New Combo mark goes here, as well as a Whistle.
-00:50:30 (6) - Clap goes here.
-00:50:999 - Delete this timing section.
-00:51:23 (2) - New Combo mark goes here. Also, remove the Whistle.
-00:52:15 (3) - Remove the Whistle.
-00:54:92 (6) - Replace the Whistle with a Clap.
-00:55:38 (1) - Only have a Finish on this.
-00:57:69 (1) - ^
-00:58:61 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Remove all the Claps.
4: Clap
5: Clap
6: Finish
7: Finish
-01:03:230 - Remove the timing section here.
-01:08:53 (4) - Clap goes here.
-01:11:76 (7) - Whistle goes here.
-01:14:76 (3) - Repeat this once more.
-01:16:15 (4) - Nudge back 1/2 a beat, put a Clap on it, respace.
-01:28:15 (3) - Finish goes here.
-01:36:23 (3) - ^
-01:36:92 (4) - Delete this, delete the break after it, reinput the break.
-01:43:38 (3) - Clap goes here.
-01:43:84 (4) - Angle this a bit more, also add a New Combo mark.
-01:47:99 (1) - Clap goes here.
-01:48:92 (3) - ^
-01:49:38 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:49:84 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark, add a Clap.
-01:50:76 (3) - Clap goes here.
-01:51:23 (4) - New Combo mark. Also, place a Clap on the very end of the slider.
-01:52:61 (6) - Clap goes here.
-01:53:53 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark, put a Clap on the beginning of the slider.
-01:54:46 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:55:84 (3) - Remove the Whistle.
-01:57:23 (5) - Replace the Whistle with a Clap.
-01:59:53 (2) - Clap goes here.
-02:02:76 (1) - Finish goes here.
-02:05:53 (1) - Clap goes here.
-02:05:99 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:11:53 (5) - Clap goes here.
-02:12:46 (1,2,3) - Remove the Whistles.
-02:14:30 (4) - Repeat once more, place a Finish on it, then put a Clap on the endpoint, replacing the Finish.
-02:16:15 (1,2) - Remove the Whistles.
-02:18:92 (5) - Clap goes here.
-02:22:61 (4) - Replace the Finish with a Clap.
-02:31:84 (1,1) - Whistles on both of these.
-02:38:30 (5) - Finish goes on this.

Phew. That's a lot for one difficulty. You fix this up, and I'll get to work on the next one.
Topic Starter
Andrea
Very very thank Mogsy <3.


All fixed :D
Diasios
Why all mods check ALWAYS osuplayer111's maps??
...
Anyway...
...
Good Map...
Mogsy

xxheroxx wrote:

Why all mods check ALWAYS osuplayer111's maps??
...
Anyway...
...
Good Map...
Don't whine, please.
-Anyways, will edit this post with the mod post for Summer when I'm done with it-
Diasios

Mogsworth wrote:

xxheroxx wrote:

Why all mods check ALWAYS osuplayer111's maps??
...
Anyway...
...
Good Map...
Don't whine, please.
ah ok... SORRY!

Love:

Non mi piacciono gli slider, sono brutti.
Inoltre in quesl punto della canzone fai così (segui l'immagine)


Summer:

25:153 = brutto jump, non mi piace, evita di crearlo

Tutti:

2:04:845 (6) = orrendo O_O crea qualcosa di diverso
3:29:307 = perchè questo jump? evitalo
Kyocciola
Allora, ricorda che sono una maniaca dell'estetica delle mappe e quindi andrò giù abbastanza pesante (come mio solito e Fabio ne sa qualcosa...). Ricorda che NON DEVI ASSOLUTAMENTE seguirli per forza, visto appunto che sono una maniaca pignola >_>"


Love
00:10:15 (2) - 1 quadretto a sinistra
00:11:53 (4) - 1 quadretto a destra
00:15:23 (1,2,3,4) - se sposti tutti di 2 quadretti a destra il 4 ti va in centro
00:19:84 (2) - 2 quadretti a destra
00:20:30 (3) - 4 quadretti a sinistra + 3 in giù
00:24:92 (7) - new combo e lascialo solo X3
00:26:76 (3,4,5) - 2 in giù
00:29:07 (1,2,3) - 1 in su
00:40:38 (1) - 1 a destra
00:43:84 (5) - 1 in giù
00:44:30 (1,2,3,4) - 1 in giù
00:47:07 (5) - 1 in giù
00:47:53 (6) - 1 in giù
00:52:61 (3) - 1 a sinistra
00:54:92 (5) - 1 in giù
00:57:69 (1) - 4 a sinistra
00:59:07 (2,3,4,5) - 1 in giù
01:04:15 (2,3) - 1 a sinistra
01:09:69 (5) - 2 in su
01:11:30 (6,7,8) - 2 in giù
01:13:84 (2) - 1 in su
01:17:07 (1) - 1 a sinistra
01:27:23 (1,2,3) - 2 in su
01:47:99 (1,2,3) - 1 in giù
01:49:38 (1,2,3) - 1 a sinistra
01:53:53 (1,1) - 1 a destra
01:58:61 (1,2) - 3 a sinistra
02:00:46 (1,2,1) - 3 in giù
02:00:46 (1,2,1) - 1 a sinistra
02:12:46 (1,2,3) - 1 in su
02:22:61 (4) - 1 in su


Summer
00:15:23 (1) - 3 a snistra
00:15:23 (2,3,4) - 2 a sinistra
00:29:53 (3,4) - 1 a sinistra
01:06:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 1 a sinistra
01:09:69 (4,5,6,7) - 2 a destra
01:17:07 (1,2) - 2 a destra
01:41:07 (2) - centralo
01:51:22 (1) - centralo
02:32:76 (1,2,3) - 1 in giù
02:32:76 (1,2,3) - 2 in giù



Frutti
00:10:84 (4) - 1 a sinistra
00:24:23 (7) - 1 in giù
00:30:23 (6) - 1 in su
00:32:99 (6) - 1 a destra
00:38:07 (3) - 1 in su
00:38:99 (4,5,6) - 1 in su
00:41:07 (4,5,6,7) - 1 a sinistra
00:48:46 (1,2,3) - 2 in giù
00:49:38 (1,1) - 1 in giù
00:53:53 (1,2) - 1 a destra
01:07:38 (3,4) - 1 in su
01:10:84 (5) - 1 a sinistra
01:20:53 (4) - 1 a sinistra
01:36:69 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - forse se fai tutto uno spam unico è meglio, aggiungendo 2 beat dove hai lasciato gli spazi
01:43:84 (3) - 1 in giù
01:44:76 (1) - 1 in giù
02:09:23 (1,1) - 1 in giù
02:12:23 (1,2,3) - 1 a sinistra
02:15:57 (5) - 1 a destra
02:18:69 (2) - 1 in giù
02:30:92 (3,4) - 1 a destra
02:45:46 (1) - 2 in giù
02:46:38 (1) - 3 in giù
03:26:53 (2) - 1 a destra


Tutti
00:26:30 (9) - 1 in su
01:09:69 (3,4,5,6,7) - x renderle più armoniose aggiusta il 5 senza l'uso del grid snap
01:48:23 (2) - 1 in su
[02:04:84 (6) - che CARIIIINA *W*]
02:10:38 (4,5) - 1 in su




Mappa davvero molto bella! Starred~
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you Kyocciola <3
Mogsy
Summer:
-00:15:922 - Remove this timing section.
-00:18:691 - ^
-00:19:38 (2) - Clap goes here.
-00:20:30 (5) - ^
-00:21:23 (3) - ^
-00:23:07 (2) - ^
-00:23:99 (5) - ^
-00:24:92 (3) - ^
-00:25:268 - Remove this timing section.
-00:26:30 (1) - Clap goes here.
-00:37:38 (1) - Remove the Clap.
-00:38:30 (2) - Realign with 1 and remove the Clap.
-00:38:30 (2,1,2,1) - Exactly match the endpoints of all of these.
-00:37:38 (1) - Clap goes here.
-00:41:07 (1,2) - Remove the Claps.
-00:41:99 (2,1,2,1) - Exactly match up the endpoints.
-00:44:76 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Same hitsound pattern as phrases before it.
-00:50:30 (3) - Finish here instead of a Clap.
-00:51:114 - Remove this timing section.
-00:55:268 - ^
-00:56:07 (3) - Whistle goes on the endpoint.
-01:05:595 - Remove this timing section.
-01:07:38 (3) - Clap goes here.
-01:08:30 (6) - ^
-01:09:23 (3) - ^
-01:10:15 (6) - ^
-01:10:38 (7) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:10:84 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-01:12:23 (4) - Finish on this, Clap on the endpoint.
-01:13:11 - Remove this timing section.
-01:13:38 (1,2) - Remove the Whistles.
-01:14:076 - Remove this timing section.
-01:18:922 - I feel like there should be a beat here.
-01:25:384 - Turn the hitsound volume all the way up here.
-01:26:07 (1) - Clap on the endpoint.
-01:28:15 (3) - Add a Finish.
-01:40:153 - 01:52:614 - A few things to note...
-For every group of 4 beats (1,2,1,2, like 01:40:15 (1,2,1,2) for instance), use this hitsound pattern:
1 = Nothing
2 = Nothing
1 = Clap
2 = Nothing
(Yes, the phrase 01:51:22 (1,2,3) will have a 1 and 2 without hitsounds)
-Make sure all the endpoints are lined up perfectly where you attempted to do so. If they are not, adjust until they are.
-01:52:84 (3) - Finish goes here.
-01:54:92 (1) - Spacing (it's too far away from the previous beat). You can highlight the entire pattern and move it while still having it make sense spacing-wise.
-01:54:14 - 1:54:80 - Delete these timing sections.
-01:58:037 - Delete this timing section.
-02:01:38 (1) - Realign this slider so it's straight and that its endpoint matches up with the other endpoints.
-02:04:61 (3) - Clap goes here.
-02:08:076 - Delete the timing section here.
-02:08:76 (1,2) - Remove the Whistles.
-02:09:460 - Delete the timing section here.
-02:09:69 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:09:69 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Remove the Whistles.
-02:10:15 (5) - Clap goes here.
-02:11:07 (8) - ^
-02:11:99 (3) - ^
-02:15:23 (5) - Finish goes here.
-02:17:53 (1) - Clap goes here.
-02:18:46 (4) - ^
-02:18:92 (5) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:19:38 (7) - Clap goes here.
-02:19:84 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not a fan of this; I'll make hitsound adjustments if you're not willing to change it.
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks again mogsy <3 All fixed again.
mtmcl
Markstarred. Is there still more hitsound fixing to do? If nothing else, I'll bubble it. But for a moment, we'll wait and see~

Download: The Birthday Massacre - Kill The Lights (Priestess In Yellow) [sdfgsdbyrvyrfdvtb].osu
Topic Starter
Andrea
Mark bubble it please! I have completed all hitsounds and i dont want to change! :D
mtmcl
Looks like no one is making suggestions on the other two difficulties' hitsounds, so...

Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks !! <3
Kyocciola
Ciao Andre! La tua cara Kyo ti aiuta anche quì con gli sfondi


http://image.maniadb.com/images/album/175/175070_1_f.jpg


Se ti serve più piccola in modo che si veda in maniera diversa mentre si gioca, fammi un fischio, tanto sai dove trovarmi :P
Topic Starter
Andrea
Grazie D:
Mogsy
Well, since you're perfectly certain that you don't want hitsounds fixed on the last two (I don't want to get into a debate about this right now, but oh well, I'll talk to you later about it), bubbled. Consider it fragile, though, since I'm going to re-nazi this.
Yuukari-Banteki
[Love]
00:03:23 (1,2) - move this 1/2 earlier
00:05:07 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesnt sound like it fits the music
00:10:61 (3,4) - move this 1/2 earlier
00:13:61 (3) - move this 1/2 later
00:18:46 (1) - slider shape doesnt fit song imo
00:22:15 (6) - ^, also this does not need this much whistle but should
repeat one more time
00:37:38 (1) - slider looks retarded
00:39:23 (2) - line this up with 1
00:40:38 (1) - add a note 1/2 after this?
00:45:23 (2) - why the turn at the end?
00:47:53 (6) - ^
00:50:76 (1) - stack on the end of the fading 2
01:01:15 (6) - stack on fading 3
01:11:30 (6) - align with the end of 5
01:11:76 (7) - remove whistle
01:17:07 (1,2,3,4) - too much whistle
01:28:15 (3) - line this up with 2
01:45:69 (3) - finish?
01:49:38 (1,2,3) - move so that 2 and 3 arent under the fading 1 and 2
01:52:15 (2,3,4) - can you make this equilateral?
02:05:99 (1) - why the turn at the end?
02:07:38 (2) - hitsound this?
02:09:69 (3) - why the turn at the end? also whistlespam is ugh
02:16:15 (1) - line this up under 4
02:27:23 (3) - can you make the two segments perpendicular to each
other?
02:30:92 (2) - line this up with 1
please try to use hitsounds in a less aggressive, painful manner


[Summer]
00:02:30 (3) - add a finish
00:03:23 (5) - should be 1/2 earlier imo
00:05:99 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:01:38 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you need
hitsounds in here
00:13:38 (1) - add a finish
00:21:46 (4) - align with 1,2,3
00:24:46 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing is inconsistant
00:32:30 (4,5,6) - imperfect stacking
00:33:46 (9) - delete and replace break
00:37:38 (1,2,1,2) - claustrophobic spacing
00:41:07 (1) - improper stacking (its slightly too far to -->)
00:42:92 (1) - improper stacking
00:44:76 (1) - ^
00:46:61 (1) - ^
00:48:46 (1) - ^
00:49:38 (2) - ^
00:50:30 (3) - ^
00:55:38 (1) - align underneath 10
00:55:38 (1,2,3) - inconsistant spacing
01:14:30 (3,4,5,1,2) - too much whistle
01:15:23 (4) - stack the end on the fading 2
01:17:07 (1) - stack under 5
01:41:99 (1) - improper stacking
01:43:84 (1) - ^
01:45:69 (1) - ^
01:47:53 (1) - ^
01:49:38 (1) - ^
01:51:22 (1) - ^
01:52:84 (3) - stack this imo
01:54:92 (1) - add a finish
01:57:69 (7) - stack under fading 4
02:12:46 (1) - align with 3
02:13:84 (2,3) - align with 1
02:13:84 (2,3,4,5) - should be 1/2 earlier
there are dead areas with not enough hitsounds and then the places
where you break my ears with whistlespam


[Frutti]
00:05:07 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - clapspam
00:05:53 (3) - slider is ugly
00:06:69 (5) - stack on the fading end of 3
00:12:46 (1) - improper stacking
00:12:69 (2,3) - can you move these so they arent under 5
00:12:46 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - whistlespam
00:16:61 (6) - add a finish
00:20:07 (4,1) - can you map this dead space?
00:21:69 (1,2,3,4) - whistlespam
00:24:23 (7,1) - dead space
00:28:84 (1,2,3,4,5) - whistlespam
00:32:99 (6) - align with 5 and put a finish on the last hit
00:41:07 (4) - change this so that it both isnt under 3 and doesnt have
that ugly turn at the end
00:46:38 (4) - why the slight curve at the end?
00:47:99 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5) - needs some hitsound
00:51:23 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whistlespam
00:53:76 (2) - add a whistle
00:55:84 (2) - why the turn at the end?
00:58:61 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,1) - clapspam
01:03:46 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 and the end of 5 could use hitsounds
01:16:84 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - whistlespam
01:27:23 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - clapspam
01:28:61 (6,1) - dead space
01:34:15 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - whistlespam
01:36:69 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - while i appreciate the lack of
finishes on a few of these, i think you still have too many
01:43:84 (3) - stack the end on the fading 1
01:43:84 (3,1,1,1,1) - clapspam (try alternating beats)
01:47:30 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - clapspam, imo hitsound the 2's and nothing
else
01:54:69 (3) - end with a finish
01:55:38 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - too much whistle
01:58:03 (1) - end 1/4 earlier
02:00:80 (3) - stack the end on the fading 2
02:01:61 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - needs hitsounds
02:07:15 (5) - end with a finish
02:07:15 (5,1) - dead space
02:09:69 (1) - add a finish
02:10:15 (1,2,1) - align with the green 1 horizontally
02:10:15
(1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
- whistlespam
02:17:76 (4) - improper stacking
02:28:84 (8,1) - dead space
02:31:38 (4) - improper stacking
02:35:76 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:38:76 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
02:42:46 (1,2,3,4) - finishspam
02:47:99 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:49:84 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - hitsound spam
02:53:99 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - clapspam
03:03:92 (5,1) - dead space
03:05:76 (5,1) - ^
03:07:84 (3) - straighten this out and then stack 4 properly under it
03:09:69 (1,1,1,1,2...) - REPETITIVE AS FUCK plz use a different
pattern
03:10:61 (1) - add a finish
03:09:69
(1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2) -
whistlespam
03:15:46 (2,1) - dead space
03:19:61 (1,1) - ^
03:36:69 (6) - align with 5
03:43:15 (3,4) - improper stacking
hitsounds make me want to cut my ears off to save them the pain


[Tutti]I ran out of time, I'll get to this later
Mogs said he'd take the last difficulty.
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Andrea
Finishhh, Waiting for a rank <.<
Larto
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Andrea
Lol mark bubble, mogsy bubble, larto bubble, now an heart? :3
Mogsy
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AgentSieg
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sawworm
Bananas, melonas
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