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h3k1ru wrote:

[Santa-San]

00:18:918 (2) - Add a whistle on the end. I think it goes best w/o here

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Santa-San: Do you hate me or something? T_T, so many overlaps but I love them ;w;
Normal/Aesthetics Mod:
00:02:733 (4,5) - these overlaps are not great to look at (00:03:260 (5,1,2,3,4) - flipping all of these notes vertically will avoid this issue) flipping would indeed solve it, but the flow would be completely different. I did think about it when I mapped it
00:08:523 (4,1) - ^ This is the best way imo. I had to sacrifice little to gain more
00:25:628 (2,1) - ^ same, I can't move it further down. It would appear outside the play-field
00:36:418 (4,1) - the curved slider doesn't flow well with the straight slider I think it kinda fits. A rugged/edgy slider fits less imo
00:36:944 (1,1) - overlap This was intended for various reasons (e.g. 00:36:944 (1,2) - )
01:05:365 (4,3) - ^ Can't do any better than this. Yeah I can flip this vertically, but the flow would be different imo
01:34:312 (1) - please consider moving this down so it does not overlap the hp bar kinda hard to do with distance snapping on. also

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Combo mod:
01:00:102 (4) - new combo to be consistent with your previous combos where there was 1 combo every downbeat okay~
01:04:312 (3) - ^ done
01:21:154 (5) - ^ done
01:25:365 (3) - ^ done

1. Add Saten in tags because that's the present name of Saten-san.

1. 00:08:523 (4,1) - If only you could find a better way to overlap these sliders.They don't look good right now to be honest.
2. 00:09:576 (1,2) - I prefer you use red on this combo cause you are forming a heart pattern.
3. 00:18:918 (2,3) - Hmm. This slider seems to be tricky and can be a bit confusing for players since they are not starting on a white or red tick. I can't suggest anything though. You may ignore this though but I really feel like you should change this. lol
4. 01:10:628 (1) - One reverse is enough here for me. Try mapping the empty spaces instead if you remove the last reverse. I think it'll be better.
5. 01:37:602 (1) - This spinner enters too early. Move it on 01:37:733 instead so players won't be shocked.
6. 01:41:154 - It feels like the last spinner should end here. I think the sound fully stopped here.

1. 00:07:207 (1) - The new combo here doesn't make sense at all because there's no change in rhythm on this part. Remove new combo here then mark a new combo on the circle that comes after this.
2. 00:17:470 (1) - Same as my suggestion and comment above. It feels like you're combo is going with the pattern, not the music. D:
3. 00:49:312 (1) - I don't here any vocals on this part yet so better delete this circle because it might make the music a bit confusing.
4. 01:02:207 (4,1) - This part will look better if this sliders are parallel.
5. 01:09:839 (1) - I'm not comfortable with the combo too here. I hope you are getting my point here. You're patterns are great but they're not going with the music to be honest. Try fixing up your combos. It feels weird cause I can't find the flow of your combos. Doesn't mean it's a new pattern, doesn't mean you should add a new combo.
6. 01:32:733 (2) - Mark a Ctrl+G on this slider so that the spacing of circles between this slider will be a bit more closer
7. 01:41:154 - It feels like the last spinner should end here. I think the sound fully stopped here.

1. The video has been removed. NSFW
2. Added Japanese charaters in the title.
3. Removed muted slidertick2

Lally wrote:

\:D/ gratz

ykcarrot wrote:

The video has been removed. NSFW

Seph wrote:

damn the video got removed