1. Aoyama (5 stars, 280 notes)
2. Misaki (4.14 stars, 101 notes)
3. Rita (2.73 stars, 76 notes)
4. Shiina (4.98 stars, 271 notes)

Qzectbumo wrote:

nice song~

Insane
00:02:850 - add a circle
00:10:538 (1,2,3) - move them 1/2 beat earlier and add a circle at 00:10:913
00:16:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - move 1/2 beat earlier and add a circle at 00:18:225
00:20:663 (5) - move 1/2 beat later and add a circle at 00:20:663
00:21:788 (1) - move 1/2 beat later
00:22:163 (2,3,4) - move 1/4 beat later
00:42:038 (1) - move 1/2 beat earlier
00:43:725 (2) - move 1/2 beat later
00:44:100 (3,4) - remove
00:45:038 (1,2,3) - consider to remove the second circle
00:50:100 (3,4) - move 1/2 beat later and consider to add a circle at 00:50:100
01:13:350 - consider to add a circle
01:16:538 (1,2,3) - consider to change like http://puu.sh/2chVd
01:21:038 (1) - move 1/2 beat later and remove 01:21:600 (2)

Normal
00:06:413 (1) - the spinner is too short for Normal

• 
  Add preview point
  
  Audio bit rate is larger than 192kbps.
  
  The tag of can be deleted.
  
  You can try a larger distance in aoyama diff ,if you planned it as a insane diff.
  
  Distance snap is not only a rule in mapping , it can help you make a beautiful map indeed.
  
  Check Misaki diff and Rita diff with Distance snap carefully :3

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  00:10:538 (1) - increase the distance of 1 and 8 to make it better
  
  00:10:913 (3,4) - Try to change it like this and of course the next slider's position
  
  slider's position will be changed.
  SPOILER

  
  
  00:13:538 (1,2,3) - i think your sliders are randomly set...it's not good for the appearance of the map,or if you planned to do it like that , just ignore.
  
  00:17:475 (5,1) - too near i think
  
  00:20:850 (5,1) - a blank part like this make it strange while playing..
  
  
  00:22:350 (3,4,5) - add two notes to fit the song like this.
  
  
  SPOILER

  
  
  00:38:663 (6,1) - I think there're many thing can be done here,just lazy
  
  :3 ?
  
  00:52:538 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - wow it's not bad to set it like this , but the distance don't fit the overall difficulty(too far?).
  
  00:55:069 (5) - I'd prefer to add a note here
  
  00:57:413 (9) - put it to x.152 y.272
  
  01:15:881 (6) - try to put it here 01:15:975 (6) -
  
  01:22:350 (4) - add a note here to fit the song
  SPOILER

  
  
  
  01:22:538 (1) - add greenlines to low down the voice of spinner.

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  00:06:413 (2,3,4,5,6) - you intend to decrease the distance here?
  
  00:19:913 (3) - reverse
  SPOILER

  
  
  
  00:32:288 (3) - it didn't change the length of it...so use a normal end?And i suggest to change all the sliders you did like this.
  SPOILER

  to
  
  00:41:850 (1) - let the spinner end at 00:43:163
  
  00:43:538 (1,2,3,4) - I'd like to have a further distance :3

N E K O wrote:

RED means you have to fix it.
And others are my own suggestions :3
I like this song veeeeeeeeeeeeeeery much

[General]

• 
  Add preview point
  
  Audio bit rate is larger than 192kbps.
  
  The tag of can be deleted.
  
  You can try a larger distance in aoyama diff ,if you planned it as a insane diff.
  
  Distance snap is not only a rule in mapping , it can help you make a beautiful map indeed.
  
  Check Misaki diff and Rita diff with Distance snap carefully :3

[Aoyama]

• 
  00:10:538 (1) - increase the distance of 1 and 8 to make it better
  
  00:10:913 (3,4) - Try to change it like this and of course the next slider's position
  
  slider's position will be changed.
  SPOILER

  
  
  00:13:538 (1,2,3) - i think your sliders are randomly set...it's not good for the appearance of the map,or if you planned to do it like that , just ignore.
  
  00:17:475 (5,1) - too near i think
  
  00:20:850 (5,1) - a blank part like this make it strange while playing..
  
  
  00:22:350 (3,4,5) - add two notes to fit the song like this.
  
  
  SPOILER

  
  
  00:38:663 (6,1) - I think there're many thing can be done here,just lazy
  
  :3 ?
  
  00:52:538 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - wow it's not bad to set it like this , but the distance don't fit the overall difficulty(too far?).
  
  00:55:069 (5) - I'd prefer to add a note here
  
  00:57:413 (9) - put it to x.152 y.272
  
  01:15:881 (6) - try to put it here 01:15:975 (6) -
  
  01:22:350 (4) - add a note here to fit the song
  SPOILER

  
  
  
  01:22:538 (1) - add greenlines to low down the voice of spinner.

[Shiina]

• 
  00:06:413 (2,3,4,5,6) - you intend to decrease the distance here?
  
  00:19:913 (3) - reverse
  SPOILER

  
  
  
  00:32:288 (3) - it didn't change the length of it...so use a normal end?And i suggest to change all the sliders you did like this.
  SPOILER

  to
  
  00:41:850 (1) - let the spinner end at 00:43:163
  
  00:43:538 (1,2,3,4) - I'd like to have a further distance :3

Good luck,if you have any question just send me a in-game PM or in forum