From the Christmas queue
[Storyboard]
01:17:632 - The scene should transition here
[スイス先生]
o.ob
[Normal]
00:38:432 (1) - Remove new combo since it's part of the phrase with the spinner
01:16:032 (1) - No finish?
01:27:898 (3) - This played better like this:
02:37:632 (1) - This was kind of boring for such a powerful part. A really long slider or emphasizing those 1/3 rhythms would drive this home much much better than bland 1/1 rhythms.
[Collab]
Change sherrie_fay to sherrie__fay in tags
[Chewin]
00:39:232 (1) - This part felt really busy and loud considering it's quite a calm part in the song. Consider lowering the number of beats here to compliment the mood change in the music.
01:22:432 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - You really should pace this in groups of threes. Breaking off into the new rhythm at beat 6 instead of 7 plays awkwardly. Something like this feels more natural:
01:26:032 (7) - This sounds wrong with that repeat
02:37:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kind of the same suggestion from the Normal here. Emphasize those 1/3 rhythms instead of just doing a bland stream. The 7, 8, and 9 sliders help, but the start of it takes away from the tension.
[Storyboard]
01:17:632 - The scene should transition here
[スイス先生]
o.ob
[Normal]
00:38:432 (1) - Remove new combo since it's part of the phrase with the spinner
01:16:032 (1) - No finish?
01:27:898 (3) - This played better like this:
02:37:632 (1) - This was kind of boring for such a powerful part. A really long slider or emphasizing those 1/3 rhythms would drive this home much much better than bland 1/1 rhythms.
[Collab]
Change sherrie_fay to sherrie__fay in tags
[Chewin]
00:39:232 (1) - This part felt really busy and loud considering it's quite a calm part in the song. Consider lowering the number of beats here to compliment the mood change in the music.
01:22:432 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - You really should pace this in groups of threes. Breaking off into the new rhythm at beat 6 instead of 7 plays awkwardly. Something like this feels more natural:
01:26:032 (7) - This sounds wrong with that repeat
02:37:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kind of the same suggestion from the Normal here. Emphasize those 1/3 rhythms instead of just doing a bland stream. The 7, 8, and 9 sliders help, but the start of it takes away from the tension.