Put this map in a queue by replying to an open queue, rather than making a forum post about it.
That being said Just by opening it up in the editor myself, two major things stand out
1. This map is very mistimed. You will not be able to put any valid rhythms down if you dont time the map correctly.
For timing try 155 bpm at an offset of 325.
2. You have no combos and the notes are places in random positions so your arent representing anything in the song even if it was timed correctly.
What I recommend is for you to play some more standard maps until you get to ~rank 500k. That should get you up to lower hard diffs I think, and you may have a better idea of what to do for your own maps.