Those copypasted high spaced stars don't really represent the song.
Also why is there 3 timing points with decimal BPMs? Set the first one to 120 and delete the other two, then resnap your objects to the timeline.
I'd say the map isn't that bad for a first map, well done! Low bpms are kinda hard to map compared to more standard BPM songs, like cheerful anime openings. So for the next map you make, pick a easier to map song (with around 180 BPM).
If you do that, feel free to poke me out via in-game chat so I can give you some tips to improve your map.
Just keep in mind that non supporters can only have 4 pending maps.
If you seek for this map to reach the ranking status, let me tell you that it won't, so I recommend you to just abandon it (after 1 month of no updates, it will get graveyarded). If you still want this song to get ranked, you can always rework it in the future once you have better mapping skills. You can revive graveyarded maps, so don't worry in letting it die.
Good luck!