Zero__wind wrote:

凑个热闹先

1. Normal = Just Suggestions for reference ovo
2. Blue = Strongly suggest you do this
3. Red = Unrankable stuff 0.0..

1. Source:Vocaloid , and put Hatsune Miku to tags because of the new rules .-.
2. try adding more tags , use this for reference >>
   such as nanahoshikangengakudan(ナナホシ管弦楽団) since 不純異性交遊P uses this as his nico id

1. 00:04:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WTF with the hitsound here ? at least remove the claps on 3 and 7 and it will sound much better than it is.
2. 00:05:523 - didn't see why it should be put empty here.try add a circle? otherwise 00:05:985 (1) - sounds strange .
3. 00:06:139 (2) - consider moving the last tick upper to make better flow
4. 00:06:755 (4) - NC for changing SV . it is not necessary but much more helpful for players to read this pattern . same as all SV changes in this map
5. 00:08:293 (7) - (x=364,y=108)? its current position and overlay with 00:08:447 (8) - makes it ugly during game play :/
6. 00:09:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 00:04:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
7. 00:10:293 (2) - move it down for better flow , or it's not so comfortable when playing .. (x=0,y=168) <-- maybe try this
8. 00:14:600 - try lower volume in this part ~00:34:447 - 50-60% will work imo , the current one is ... to annoying ; there is not vocal but loud whistle/clap sounds ...
9. 00:14:601 (1,2,3) - meaningless anti-jump and it will only make players hard to read ;; try make bigger spacing
10. 00:23:985 (3) - really ugly overlay with 2 and bad blanket with 1..
11. 00:33:216 (1) - fix the shape for better blanket with 00:33:678 (2) -
    
    use the following code if necessary .
    

    424,192,33216,6,0,P|440:96|360:20,1,210,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

12. 00:34:755 (1) - try silence this slider end (5% volume) and i am sure it will sound much better
13. 00:37:985 (8) - end at 00:38:293 - and add clap on slider end ？
14. 00:39:832 (5) - why end it at 00:40:062 - ? it doesn't fit the music at all ! end it at 00:39:985 - plz
15. 00:39:832 (5) - end at 00:39:985 - (吐槽:不要无意义的压蓝线如果不合音乐实在是难听)
16. 00:43:062 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove finish and whistle on 3 (吐槽:本来音量就这么响 一个串这么多音效戴耳机我听着耳朵都疼)
17. 00:43:678 (6) - really , really bad stack , move 6 or 7 away or it is terrible for playing
18. 00:46:678 (4) - end at 00:46:831 - it won't be that hard to hit
19. 00:49:216 (1) - ...ugly , can you just make it better
20. 00:53:216 (4) - meaningless stack same as 00:43:678 (6) - try move 4 away (吐槽：打图的时候肯定会觉得一直在走 这么短一个点还要停一下是有多蛋疼)
21. 01:02:832 (9,10) - 2 notes ? isn't a single slider that fits the music better ? i strongly suggest you delete 10 , end 9 at 01:03:062 -
    also start 9 at 01:02:832 (9) -
22. 01:06:139 (4) - fix the shape for better blanket with 01:06:447 (1) -
    code here if necessary
    

    260,356,66139,2,0,P|284:296|316:275,1,105,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

23. 01:06:909 (2,3,5,6) - these streams are ... not so necessary as they don't fit the music/rythem well , try to change them into different patterns ..orz
24. 01:08:370 (2,4) - remove claps

1. 01:23:832 (2,3) - 反过来会好一点吧
2. 01:25:216 (9) - try this?稍微拉好点blanket
   

   384,84,85216,2,0,B|344:104|344:104|312:48|244:44|204:100|208:144,1,210,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:57:139 (2) - 建议删
4. 02:22:601 (6) - 变速NC

Zero__wind wrote:

这种图我不会mod 只能随便说说 而且你滑条太艺术了我也不会改

Insane
00:06:754 (1,2) - 和00:19:370 (1) - 这种的相比 感觉变速理由不明
00:07:985 (6) - http://puu.sh/2ewdT
00:44:601 (1) - 感觉和前一个滑条首尾相接比较好
00:53:447 (2) - 删掉
00:58:755 (2) - 或者stack好或者（424,236）吧
01:00:754 - 突然没东西了有点奇怪
01:02:832 (9) - 感觉finish不必要
01:07:678 (7) - 头上finish？
01:09:370 (7,10) - 干嘛不让7被10包起来
01:13:216 (1,2) - 不太喜欢这里的变速 虽然不是说不能打
01:35:524 (11,1) - 再稍微分开一点点
01:37:447 (9,10) - 再想想吧 太近了
02:02:447 - 和前面观点一样 我比较倾向于在02:03:062 - 这个时间点加速 你现在加速的这个时间点如果要加也别直接2x 我觉得
02:10:139 (5) - 这个也感觉不像加速的音 个人感觉不同吧
02:17:678 (2) - （408,332）
03:29:985 (9,10) - CTRL+G？

膜姐
00:23:984 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2eyRu
00:25:830 (6) - CTRL+G ？
00:40:292 (3) - 考虑到hitburst的话感觉这个位置很难看
00:48:446 (6) - http://puu.sh/2eyQ1
00:49:522 (2) - （164,336）等距
00:57:215 (3) - CTRL+G？
00:59:522 - 刚连打完 突然没东西了 有点怪
01:48:753 - ^
01:53:676 - ^
01:23:676 (1,2,3) - 把顺序调换成3 1 2 （滑条反向）怎么样
02:21:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉不太顺
03:05:676 (4) - 这个很漂亮

Hard
00:09:832 (7,8) - 这种结构出现在Hard感觉有一定风险 我不确定
00:29:216 (2) - finish不必要
00:54:139 (1,2,3,4) - Kiai段这种无理短间距不好 要保持流畅
01:03:985 (2,3,4) - ^
01:12:447 (3,1) - 有风险
01:28:139 (1) - 无理间距
01:40:216 - 这个tick音感觉多余
01:46:447 (3,5) - 稍微再分开一点点
02:28:909 (3) - 这个tick音……我受到惊吓 这里明明节奏强度变弱了的 2个音应该都去掉
02:29:832 (5) - ^ 吓

Normal
00:07:370 (1) - 第一次折返的箭头被hitburst遮住一部分 很危险
00:33:985 (6) - 不应该再长二分拍么？
01:40:139 (6,1) - 去掉6 让1在6那个时间点开始 结束时间不变
01:55:678 (5,1) - 交换NC 然后01:57:524 (2) - 或者01:58:139 (3) - NC
02:01:216 (3) - 你这是作死
02:31:062 (6) - ^
02:35:062 (1,2,3,4) - 老老实实1.0x
02:38:755 (3) - ^
02:42:447 (2) - ^
02:44:909 (1,1) - 这种的是可以接受的
02:46:755 (2) - 这个就不能
02:51:678 (4) - ^
02:54:139 (4) - 新人吃电视了
我估计还要不少我没挑的 spacing慢慢改吧 大工程 Normal不好包就别包了

Banana姥爷
00:20:293 (2) - （380,176）
感觉不能多说

就这些了
累死

angelfix wrote:

第一段的逆时针旋转太多了，卡手

angelfix wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/b/151229
对比你的图和这张图，其实你的节奏下法和用梗什么的包括slider的画法都差不多了，最明显的差别我认为在于布局上。他的排列整体走势包括连打的间距一直在变化，随便抽出一小段来看的话连打段和紧跟的slider还有接下来几个note摆出来的外形都很有张力，换句话说很酷霸拽。相比之下你的图就显得有所拘束，明明画的是很厉害的slider，但排列却还是像一般图一样的下法，主要以anti-slider jump和顺时针旋转的loop为主，尤其开头段比较明显，其实你可以在不破坏图的美感前提下做一些大胆的尝试，比如这里的下法http://puu.sh/2fXZd，就很不错。又比如这里http://puu.sh/2fY8K，你可以用接下来的串把上个slider尾部包起来然后再做几个重复，增加一些小的细节会让你的图更精彩。加油！

1. 00:51:216 - 这个点不该有音...而且难度也不适合normal
2. 01:13:831 - finish和clap并用好一些?
3. 01:35:985 (5) - NC
4. 02:03:062 - 同01:13:831
5. 02:44:293 (3,1) - spacing略坑

1. 00:07:370 (7) - NC 于是 00:08:909 (1,7) - 交换NC
2. 00:53:370 (7) - 不好看 砍了重练
3. 00:56:601 (9) - NC
4. 01:00:447 (8,1) - 交换NC
5. 01:06:447 (9) - NC
6. 01:13:678 (4) - 来个clap?
7. 01:26:139 (4) - 做成这样不如直接弧形得了...
8. 01:30:293 (1,2) - 195bpm还这么大spacing 简直哭哭哦
9. 02:35:062 (1) - 同样不好看...
10. 02:41:832 (8) - ^

1. 00:13:984 (4,5,6) - 这个如果是摆△的话摆好点吧233
2. 00:56:292 (4,5) - 00:58:138 (5,1) - 00:58:753 (5,1) - 01:00:292 (3,4) - 01:04:907 (6,7) - 01:05:215 (1,2) - 01:05:830 (4,5) - 01:07:676 (1,2) - 01:07:984 (3,4) - 01:08:292 (5,6) - 01:11:061 (4,5) - 为什么是1/8 orz
3. 02:26:753 (7,1,2,3) - 不在一条直线上...

1. 00:09:062 - 这里空着不带感啊...
2. 00:13:524 (2) - NC for speed change
3. 00:37:216 (4) - 真心难看orz
4. 01:12:985 (2) - 把head的音效转到tail上吧...现在这样巨违和
5. 01:13:216 (1,2) - 变速意义不明
6. 02:02:447 (1,2) - ^
7. 03:15:062 (3) - ^

Zero__wind wrote:

膜姐
00:23:984 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2eyRu done
00:25:830 (6) - CTRL+G ？ 考虑到读图，不了谢谢
00:40:292 (3) - 考虑到hitburst的话感觉这个位置很难看 ……但是我也没什么好的位置可以改
00:48:446 (6) - http://puu.sh/2eyQ1 ……虽然不知道你想表达什么 但是还是收拾了一下感觉没什么区别(?
00:49:522 (2) - （164,336）等距 done
00:57:215 (3) - CTRL+G？ 。。这个大概改不改都一样
00:59:522 - 刚连打完 突然没东西了 有点怪 这里改了好几处节奏都不合适就只好这样
01:48:753 - ^ ^
01:53:676 - ^ ^
01:23:676 (1,2,3) - 把顺序调换成3 1 2 （滑条反向）怎么样 。。这个大概也是改不改都一样
02:21:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉不太顺 ……但是我也没什么好的位置可以改
03:05:676 (4) - 这个很漂亮 ……感谢

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

[fay]
02:27:676 - 这段有点乱o.o 能不能试着摆整齐点 这段什么也没有啊。。
02:36:907 (1) - 大圈跳 或者五角星 233 。。这个大概改不改都一样
03:22:599 (4) - 196|116 bybf 神mod。done

wantuole wrote:

[Fay]
红线记得改 改什么？
02:02:446 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这很难。。真的 当然很难！
03:15:061 (3) - ctrl+g？ 2下2上没什么吧。。
好吧 没什么吐槽的 233

a3272509123 wrote:

[Fay]

1. 00:13:984 (4,5,6) - 这个如果是摆△的话摆好点吧233 done
2. 00:56:292 (4,5) - 00:58:138 (5,1) - 00:58:753 (5,1) - 01:00:292 (3,4) - 01:04:907 (6,7) - 01:05:215 (1,2) - 01:05:830 (4,5) - 01:07:676 (1,2) - 01:07:984 (3,4) - 01:08:292 (5,6) - 01:11:061 (4,5) - 为什么是1/8 orz 绿线变速搞错了orz!!感谢指出
3. 02:26:753 (7,1,2,3) - 不在一条直线上... 还好？

Banana wrote:

[Fay]
00:03:984 (1) - 开头消音滑条我倒是不讨厌 不过..后面一串连打用滑条尾巴开始没打击感有点奇怪 乱按过去 能连上的【
00:15:676 (6,7) - 就排列分布方面 建议向右上角移动一些 不过spacing就划不来了啊
00:16:138 (8) - ctrl+g? ……不了谢谢
00:18:138 (5,6,7) - 同样排列分布问题，建议右下移动 同上上
00:35:522 - 由于vocal的关系空拍略奇怪 后面也有红线clap干脆跟vocal？ 诶？我觉得空着感觉很带感啊 我再考虑看看ww
00:43:984 (1) - 前面跳有点不容易读 后面又不是stack滑条尾 感觉得修不过又没啥建议我就提一下好了... 同上 有人提我再看。。
00:53:830 (1) - 若干尾巴没snap的滑条 似乎改了速度没修 你说的队[蜡烛]
00:53:830 (1) - 滑条尾向右三个像素（这nazi过头了喂 上一个改完这个好像自动fix了
02:22:753 - 如果一定要在这边结尾个人感觉用五连不合适，建议02:22:446 - 3/4滑条结尾五连打放在02:21:984 (4) ……没懂 我觉得这边五连和前后两段比较照应而已
02:25:830 (3,4,5) - 这三个不跳后面用慢速梗有点搞不懂 很跳了。。
02:29:061 (3) - 略反人类的节奏+排列 是我就删了这个滑条 删！
02:33:061 (3) - 前一个还好 这个听着就有点奇怪了 不奇怪吧。。我考虑看看。
03:05:676 (4) - 圈？ 不 就滑条wwww

sherrie__fay wrote:

8-)

Zero__wind wrote:

膜姐
00:23:984 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2eyRu done
00:25:830 (6) - CTRL+G ？ 考虑到读图，不了谢谢
00:40:292 (3) - 考虑到hitburst的话感觉这个位置很难看 ……但是我也没什么好的位置可以改
00:48:446 (6) - http://puu.sh/2eyQ1 ……虽然不知道你想表达什么 但是还是收拾了一下感觉没什么区别(?
00:49:522 (2) - （164,336）等距 done
00:57:215 (3) - CTRL+G？ 。。这个大概改不改都一样
00:59:522 - 刚连打完 突然没东西了 有点怪 这里改了好几处节奏都不合适就只好这样
01:48:753 - ^ ^
01:53:676 - ^ ^
01:23:676 (1,2,3) - 把顺序调换成3 1 2 （滑条反向）怎么样 。。这个大概也是改不改都一样
02:21:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉不太顺 ……但是我也没什么好的位置可以改
03:05:676 (4) - 这个很漂亮 ……感谢

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

[fay]
02:27:676 - 这段有点乱o.o 能不能试着摆整齐点 这段什么也没有啊。。
02:36:907 (1) - 大圈跳 或者五角星 233 。。这个大概改不改都一样
03:22:599 (4) - 196|116 bybf 神mod。done

wantuole wrote:

[Fay]
红线记得改 改什么？
02:02:446 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这很难。。真的 当然很难！
03:15:061 (3) - ctrl+g？ 2下2上没什么吧。。
好吧 没什么吐槽的 233

a3272509123 wrote:

[Fay]

1. 00:13:984 (4,5,6) - 这个如果是摆△的话摆好点吧233 done
2. 00:56:292 (4,5) - 00:58:138 (5,1) - 00:58:753 (5,1) - 01:00:292 (3,4) - 01:04:907 (6,7) - 01:05:215 (1,2) - 01:05:830 (4,5) - 01:07:676 (1,2) - 01:07:984 (3,4) - 01:08:292 (5,6) - 01:11:061 (4,5) - 为什么是1/8 orz 绿线变速搞错了orz!!感谢指出
3. 02:26:753 (7,1,2,3) - 不在一条直线上... 还好？

Banana wrote:

[Fay]
00:03:984 (1) - 开头消音滑条我倒是不讨厌 不过..后面一串连打用滑条尾巴开始没打击感有点奇怪 乱按过去 能连上的【
00:15:676 (6,7) - 就排列分布方面 建议向右上角移动一些 不过spacing就划不来了啊
00:16:138 (8) - ctrl+g? ……不了谢谢
00:18:138 (5,6,7) - 同样排列分布问题，建议右下移动 同上上
00:35:522 - 由于vocal的关系空拍略奇怪 后面也有红线clap干脆跟vocal？ 诶？我觉得空着感觉很带感啊 我再考虑看看ww
00:43:984 (1) - 前面跳有点不容易读 后面又不是stack滑条尾 感觉得修不过又没啥建议我就提一下好了... 同上 有人提我再看。。
00:53:830 (1) - 若干尾巴没snap的滑条 似乎改了速度没修 你说的队[蜡烛]
00:53:830 (1) - 滑条尾向右三个像素（这nazi过头了喂 上一个改完这个好像自动fix了
02:22:753 - 如果一定要在这边结尾个人感觉用五连不合适，建议02:22:446 - 3/4滑条结尾五连打放在02:21:984 (4) ……没懂 我觉得这边五连和前后两段比较照应而已
02:25:830 (3,4,5) - 这三个不跳后面用慢速梗有点搞不懂 很跳了。。
02:29:061 (3) - 略反人类的节奏+排列 是我就删了这个滑条 删！
02:33:061 (3) - 前一个还好 这个听着就有点奇怪了 不奇怪吧。。我考虑看看。
03:05:676 (4) - 圈？ 不 就滑条wwww

。。操你妈终于全改完了累死老娘了
你啥时候上QQ我发你。完毕

1. 00:13:524 (1) - 這加速。。。慢點試試。

1. 02:27:369 (2,3) - NC？

1. 00:44:062 (6,7,1) - 這裡感覺在H有點危險。orz。。
2. 01:27:370 (1) - NC?
   
   1. 01:51:370 (5,8) - NC?
3. 02:39:678 (4) - 試試減速

Athena Tennos wrote:

[L]

1. 00:13:524 (1) - 這加速。。。慢點試試。

[fay]

1. 02:27:369 (2,3) - NC？

[H]

1. 00:44:062 (6,7,1) - 這裡感覺在H有點危險。orz。。
2. 01:27:370 (1) - NC?
   
   1. 01:51:370 (5,8) - NC?
3. 02:39:678 (4) - 試試減速

o(︶︿︶)o 唉~沒技術的mod。。。。我來混SP了。、orz。。。
nice song~鬼畜圖。orz。。Star☆~

1. can you find a higher quality mp3 file for this map? the present one is just 112 kb/s and sounds really inefficient and have a bit noise.. anyhow the Kbps more than 128 is recommendation.
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2. also, you did different bpm on the different difficulty. that means unrankable. to sure that consistency timing point (the red lines) on all diff.(including guest's diff)
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3. you forgot to set Preview Point as well.. also make them consistent..

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. as for a Easy diff, i recommend to set all notes on the white tick for closing to downbeats and easily to catch for beginners.(the sliders are not counted on. yea, any notes on red line would be a bit confused however it's all depend on where it is. okay that's all i want to say firstly.
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   2. 00:11:062 (2) - try avoiding the overlap? there is good flow and i want it happen, but the overlap here looks really wired and seems a bit closer than normal spacing.. i think it'll be got a more reasonable situation and comfortable to play if you try the positions and shapes of sliders like this~
      SPOILER

      
   3. 00:12:293 (1,2,3) - btw, if you changed above, why not try symmetry here~ (don't forget to make a small adjustment on the following slider (4) for correct spacing..
      SPOILER

      
   4. 00:31:678 (1) - i'm thinking if the spinner be started at long white tick here 00:31:985 rather than the present timing.. people would be prefer to spin when the guitar sound starts instead of the drum does? anyway, just suggestion.
      ---
   5. 00:45:832 (2) - looks randomly here.. maybe you can make the blanket more perfectly even it is just small one, also distinct during play. e.g.
      SPOILER

      
   6. 00:48:600 - rhythm issue. they are really out of the music. try to make the arrangement like this.
      SPOILER

      
   7. 01:45:523 - also about rhythm, why you make difference with 00:56:293 ? there are identical melody and the present rhythm sounds really unreasonable for the song.. just keep consistency pls. (same on the last refrain.
      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:19:678 (1) - try to set finish here? seems that they are really silence for the song.. not very suitable. and do same thing on 00:24:601 (1) and the head of 00:29:524 (1) for consistency~.
      ---
   2. sounds like you missed lots of claps on refrain parts. checking by yourself to sure that each third beats of bars has clap on that..
      

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:40:293 (3,4) - any anti-jump is too difficult for beginners as Normal diff. it broke the flow completely.. also i think there has more reasonable shape of that slider, so why not try this new one?
      SPOILER

      
   2. 00:41:216 (1) - inconsistent spacing with the previous circle (4) on pattern. should be moved onto x.56 y.100 for correct one~
      ---
   3. 00:42:139 (2,3,4,5,6) - umm.. firstly about the cambered notes (2,3,4,5) i highly recommend to make the trajectory more circular since the present arrangement looks not perfect.. try to make them like a symmetrical trapezoid? on the other side, about the rhythm i feel that the beat of circle (6) is useless and hardly to catch for newbie, maybe tring to make (5) to a 3/2 repeat slider and removing the circle (6) as well. e.g.
      SPOILER

      
   4. 00:49:216 (2) - this slider has totally out of the screen and you can find the effect by my screenshot.. take it easy.. just re-arrange this part 00:49:216 - 00:50:908 . (notice the spacing between 00:48:755 (1,2) - , that's confusing for people who that mapped for..
      ---
   5. 00:56:601 (3) - touched hp bar.. since it's not unrankable, feel free to fix it or deny. just suggestion, because it looks really wired during play..
      ---
   6. 01:38:447 (2,3) - also about spacing and overlapped.. looks really bad. try this?
      SPOILER

      
   7. 01:41:832 (3) - try to avoid making kick slider of many repeats on that normal diff.. it's a bit confusing and not really fit the song.. maybe you can split it to 2~3 slider like this.(also same at here 02:02:447 (1).
      SPOILER

      
   8. 02:44:909 (1) - removing the NC here would be a better effection for calling off the combo burst appeared on the previous slider (3), since it is really unreasonable for that.. so..
      ---
   9. 02:59:678 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:42:139~ try to make them more roundish~
      SPOILER

      
   10. 03:01:524 (6) - looks really wired.. and awkward to play.. remember there is just normal and do it normal just. make the adjustment for that spacing including the position of the next slider (1). would be a better flow imo.~
       SPOILER

       
   
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 02:21:523 (1) - why the volume of hitsound decreased here? sounds wired since there has a downbeat on the end of that spinner.. just remove the inherited point here for raising back?

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:31:369 (9) - looks not straight completely.. sorry for nazi that however it would be a better effection if you moved the head anchor of that slider onto x.304 y.340
      ---
   2. 00:37:369 (2) - umm.. maybe the blanket is more suitable here.. also about the arrangement on following notes, try this? (and also stacking the circle (5) on centre of the screen then moving the slider (6) onto x.164 y.128 for artistic~
      SPOILER

      
   3. 00:45:984 (6) - overly curved imo.. the same circular measure with the previous slider is not very appropriate here since the changed angle of the slider. i'd like rather making the slider like this and also moving circle (7) right-up away (as x.472 y.52) for spacing balancing. e.g.
      SPOILER

      
   4. 01:02:446 (4) - why not to make it parallel with the previous (3)? moving the anchor on that slider's end onto x.164 y.244 would be a much better effort for me. :3 (since the present looks randomly..
      ---
   5. 01:09:215 (2,4) - if you did above, also do the same thing here.. unless you denied them all since you could just made the tiny angle of difference deliberately.. these sliders are also in the identical angle which is also in the same order..~
      ---
   6. 01:35:522 (2) - should be an 1/2 slider here rather than the single circle.. it would be more suitable for the song as well~ also try this shape of that slider if you decided to make the change?
      SPOILER

      
   7. 01:47:369 (5,5,1) - make them straight way?
      SPOILER

      
   8. 02:54:753 (1,3,5) - the link of these slider seems not very ideal. you can try to move the single notes between the sliders on the same line with the head of next slider. such as this way. and would be look much better imo. :3
      SPOILER

      
   9. 02:57:215 (1) - a bit nazi again.. however i think you should moving the arc of that slider a little down, since the present angle is a bit bullish and not looks very well~ just change them like this? (including the following slider (2), by ctrl+GH on this slider (1)~
      SPOILER

      
   10. 03:08:907 (9,10,11) - seems like the gap between here and previous slider (7) is larger than (6,7). try moving this three notes onto x.308 y.68 for avoiding that?
       ---
   11. 03:22:599 (4) - wired.. stacking on the previous slider's start broke the whole flow we have on this part.. personally i'd like to move it onto x.432 y.216 for more smooth moving and balance spacing(maybe)? and looks better also.
       ---
   12. 03:25:676 (8) - NC here?
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:33:369 (7,8,9) - should be finishes here. really suitable and more drastic for the song~.

Strawberry wrote:

　
[].Guest by banana
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. as for a Easy diff, i recommend to set all notes on the white tick for closing to downbeats and easily to catch for beginners.(the sliders are not counted on. yea, any notes on red line would be a bit confused however it's all depend on where it is. okay that's all i want to say firstly. all circles are on white ticks, i'm sure about that
      ---
   2. 00:11:062 (2) - try avoiding the overlap? there is good flow and i want it happen, but the overlap here looks really wired and seems a bit closer than normal spacing.. i think it'll be got a more reasonable situation and comfortable to play if you try the positions and shapes of sliders like this~
      SPOILER

      
      overlap is fine to me, and most of the time i use overlap deliberately, here is one of them
   3. 00:12:293 (1,2,3) - btw, if you changed above, why not try symmetry here~ (don't forget to make a small adjustment on the following slider (4) for correct spacing..
      SPOILER

      
   4. 00:31:678 (1) - i'm thinking if the spinner be started at long white tick here 00:31:985 rather than the present timing.. people would be prefer to spin when the guitar sound starts instead of the drum does? anyway, just suggestion. will consider
      ---
   5. 00:45:832 (2) - looks randomly here.. maybe you can make the blanket more perfectly even it is just small one, also distinct during play. e.g.
      SPOILER

      
      done
   6. 00:48:600 - rhythm issue. they are really out of the music. try to make the arrangement like this.
      SPOILER

      
      fixed, in another way
   7. 01:45:523 - also about rhythm, why you make difference with 00:56:293 ? there are identical melody and the present rhythm sounds really unreasonable for the song.. just keep consistency pls. (same on the last refrain. mapped them separately here
      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:19:678 (1) - try to set finish here? seems that they are really silence for the song.. not very suitable. and do same thing on 00:24:601 (1) and the head of 00:29:524 (1) for consistency~. done
      ---
   2. sounds like you missed lots of claps on refrain parts. checking by yourself to sure that each third beats of bars has clap on that.. every 2nd and 4th beats have clap, will consider it later
      

1. 鬼畜年年有，今年特别多。

1. 没找到什么问题
   
   
   
   Useless Green line
   
   
2. Fine
   
   
   Rhythm
   
   
3. Fine.
   
   
   Sound Effect
   
   
4. Fine.

• Useless Green line

1. Fine
   
   
   Rhythm
   
   
2. 00:44:110 - 这里要来个note节奏会更好
   
   
   Sound Effect
   
   
3. 没啥问题

• Useless Green line

1. Fine.
   
   
   Rhythm
   
   
2. 00:31:726 (2) - 请使用1/2 slider
3. 00:41:110 (1) - blanket 没用好。
4. 00:42:495 (5) - 没叠好。
5. 00:44:110 (6) - 减少两个折返
6. 01:47:726 (1) - blanket.
7. 01:53:264 (1) - 既然blanket了就要包好。
8. 02:53:879 (8,1) - 为什么包的这么紧？不能留点间距？
   
   
   Sound Effect
   
   
9. 02:43:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不许偷懒，使用渐进音量。

• Useless Green line

1. Fine
   
   
   Rhythm
   
   
2. 00:04:033 (1) - 菲姐你这个真是够坑. （纯属感叹）;_;
3. 00:08:956 (7,8,9) - 这三个slider最好都ctrl + g 换个方向，flow会好些
   
   Sound Effect
   
   
4. mod不能。能力不足。

• Useless Green line

1. Fine.
   
   
   Rhythm
   
2. 01:45:572 (6) - 挪到 434|167
   
   
   Sound Effect
   
   
3. mod不能，咱能力不足。

384059043 wrote:

hi!

[General]
Preview Point?

[香蕉's Easy]
* 00:16:033 - 这之后的一段有些无聊，加点slider怎么样？

[NM]
* 这个diff滑条炫酷
* 00:44:649 (1) - spacing，给normal玩略不善良 0.0 不是1.0的ds么
* 01:27:725 - 加个note no
* 01:33:880 (1) - 和前面的stack起来 0.0
* 01:41:880 (3) - XD XD
* 02:50:495 (2,4) - 尾巴stack起来 0.0
* 03:02:187 (1) - spacing k

[Lechenaultia]
不愧是神麻婆 好图又爆星
* 01:33:572 (6) - 这个滑条可以再扭曲一点，比方说往两边张得更开一些no thx
* 03:30:673 - 这里的红线变速不怕被unrank吗0.0 真的要用的话把别的diff也统一一下再用2.0x吧233 就这个和膜姐的是full再者说了 我哪有用x2.0啊orzzzz

就mod那么多吧._. 这图太神了 mod没用的话就不要给kds了

wtf

Regou wrote:

來還債來mod

[General]
不可以這樣啊比我的還鬼畜
不加kiai time?

[Lechenaultia]
00:12:341 (1) - Slow down意義不明 XD 先不管这个
00:53:264 (4,1) - 強力建議不重疊 k
01:05:264 (1,2,3) - 個人覺得這樣排不順 没梗w 先放放
01:23:726 (1) - Remove Clap k
01:24:187 (4) - ^ k
01:29:572 (5) - Add clap k
01:29:880 (7) - 這樣不好看? 没梗+1
01:44:341 (6) - Ctrl+G?好像有比較順 改前面的note的位置就顺了
02:39:726 (4) - 好像有些什麽不對的 要不在02:40:341 - 完結 k
02:43:110 - 刪掉這條綠線,不好聽 不删 但是都改成D音效了XD
好 坐等這張進2013 Best100

mod 2 diff不算騙kd吧/.\ 先這樣

1. PreviewTime没设

1. 00:44:341(7,1)这个间距和后面00:45:879(3,4)太像但节奏完全不一样建议改一改，毕竟这是个normal diff
2. 01:32:033(3)x:256 y:280
3. 01:47:879(2)感觉删掉这个note会好些
4. 02:35:418(2,3,4)往左一格0.0
5. 02:47:418(1,2,3,4)摆正一点吧

1. 00:08:956(7,8,9)感觉复制一下做成一样的比较好看
2. 00:44:033(1)感觉这里应该是这个样子
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:35:571(2)不加个nc么
4. 02:16:648(11)nc
5. 02:28:956(2,3)x:296 y:104

1. 00:06:033(1)这里试下这个节奏
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:51:725(5)试下摆成这样
   SPOILER

   

Melt wrote:

Mod as request

看了好多遍啊，实在不会摸这类图，所以只有一点建议233

[General]

1. PreviewTime没设

[Normal]

1. 00:44:341(7,1)这个间距和后面00:45:879(3,4)太像但节奏完全不一样建议改一改，毕竟这是个normal diff k
2. 01:32:033(3)x:256 y:280 k
3. 01:47:879(2)感觉删掉这个note会好些 k
4. 02:35:418(2,3,4)往左一格0.0 k
5. 02:47:418(1,2,3,4)摆正一点吧 k

[Lechenaultia]

1. 00:06:033(1)这里试下这个节奏 k
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:51:725(5)试下摆成这样
   SPOILER

   
   k

大概就这样 good luck :3

Athena Tennos wrote:

[fay]

1. 02:27:369 (2,3) - NC？ ……这唯一一条宝贵的mod偏偏我觉得改了跟没改一样……

o(︶︿︶)o 唉~沒技術的mod。。。。我來混SP了。、orz。。。
nice song~鬼畜圖。orz。。Star☆~

Strawberry wrote:

[]

[*]Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )

1. 00:31:369 (9) - looks not straight completely.. sorry for nazi that however it would be a better effection if you moved the head anchor of that slider onto x.304 y.340 done
   ---
2. 00:37:369 (2) - umm.. maybe the blanket is more suitable here.. also about the arrangement on following notes, try this? (and also stacking the circle (5) on centre of the screen then moving the slider (6) onto x.164 y.128 for artistic~ 没看懂 我自己也没找到你图里摆的那个pattern 怒跳过(
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:45:984 (6) - overly curved imo.. the same circular measure with the previous slider is not very appropriate here since the changed angle of the slider. i'd like rather making the slider like this and also moving circle (7) right-up away (as x.472 y.52) for spacing balancing. e.g. 我觉得这个地方弯下去其实手感不错的:3
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:02:446 (4) - why not to make it parallel with the previous (3)? moving the anchor on that slider's end onto x.164 y.244 would be a much better effort for me. :3 (since the present looks randomly.. done
   ---
5. 01:09:215 (2,4) - if you did above, also do the same thing here.. unless you denied them all since you could just made the tiny angle of difference deliberately.. these sliders are also in the identical angle which is also in the same order..~ done ……nazi狂魔
   ---
6. 01:35:522 (2) - should be an 1/2 slider here rather than the single circle.. it would be more suitable for the song as well~ also try this shape of that slider if you decided to make the change? 这地方的vocal偏偏是点而不是线……
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:47:369 (5,5,1) - make them straight way? ……故意的pattern..真有那么必要去改么？
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:54:753 (1,3,5) - the link of these slider seems not very ideal. you can try to move the single notes between the sliders on the same line with the head of next slider. such as this way. and would be look much better imo. :3 一样是拐点。。我的拐点在note上 草莓建议的拐点在slider上……大概问题也不大
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:57:215 (1) - a bit nazi again.. however i think you should moving the arc of that slider a little down, since the present angle is a bit bullish and not looks very well~ just change them like this? (including the following slider (2), by ctrl+GH on this slider (1)~ done
   SPOILER

   
10. 03:08:907 (9,10,11) - seems like the gap between here and previous slider (7) is larger than (6,7). try moving this three notes onto x.308 y.68 for avoiding that? done
    ---
11. 03:22:599 (4) - wired.. stacking on the previous slider's start broke the whole flow we have on this part.. personally i'd like to move it onto x.432 y.216 for more smooth moving and balance spacing(maybe)? and looks better also. spacing太远了 我是听从其他modder的意见把这note放到这里来的
    ---
12. 03:25:676 (8) - NC here? done

　
[*]Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )

1. 00:33:369 (7,8,9) - should be finishes here. really suitable and more drastic for the song~. 你不觉得这是spam finish么

[/list]
---------------------------------------------
that's all for now.. sorry for skipped Hard and Insane diffs, anyway maybe complemented someday however i have so tired..
really nice song. Good luck with ranking.

Rotte wrote:

[Fay]
Rhythm
[list]
[*]00:04:033 (1) - 菲姐你这个真是够坑. （纯属感叹）;_; ……
[*]00:08:956 (7,8,9) - 这三个slider最好都ctrl + g 换个方向，flow会好些 ……

Regou wrote:

來還債來mod

[Fay]
怎麼不用Custom hitsound 不想用没看见
01:00:802 (3) - 沒blanket好,中間那點往中間拉 不懂意思
01:35:264 (1,2) - 這裡Antijump感覺不太合適... 但是我也想不出什么更好的主意……
01:49:955 - 不好看 差評 fixed
02:16:648 (11) - NC done
02:17:264 (1) - 去NC done
02:17:879 (2) - 這裡NC 不想加NC太碎了
02:59:418 (5,6,1) - 這樣會不會比較好? 中间空着一块很难受

SPOILER

03:31:571 (1) - 中間的slidertick弄小聲點? fixed

Melt wrote:

Mod as request

看了好多遍啊，实在不会摸这类图，所以只有一点建议233

[General]

1. PreviewTime没设

[Normal]

1. 00:44:341(7,1)这个间距和后面00:45:879(3,4)太像但节奏完全不一样建议改一改，毕竟这是个normal diff
2. 01:32:033(3)x:256 y:280
3. 01:47:879(2)感觉删掉这个note会好些
4. 02:35:418(2,3,4)往左一格0.0
5. 02:47:418(1,2,3,4)摆正一点吧

[Fay]

1. 00:08:956(7,8,9)感觉复制一下做成一样的比较好看 嗯……
2. 00:44:033(1)感觉这里应该是这个样子
   SPOILER

   
   …………就是1/3 不服来辩((
3. 01:35:571(2)不加个nc么 fixed
4. 02:16:648(11)nc fixed
5. 02:28:956(2,3)x:296 y:104 哈？

大概就这样 good luck :3

mod 2 diff不算騙kd吧/.\ 先這樣

tutuhaha wrote:

[Fay]
嘛....只有一个地方你需要用到0.5X而且还比较可有可无........还是继续不能理解要这么玩的必要...看着一堆1.8x有点晕@A@
00:09:264 (8,9) - 俩都ctrl+g一下 没什么必要
00:13:879 (3,4) - 这俩照我的理解应该间距还要大一点 ^
00:25:264 (3) - 应该ctrl+g一下，后面的根据这个前提调整一下 ^
00:27:725 (3) - ^ ^
00:29:264 (1,2) - 间距大点 ^
00:35:571 (X) - 理解不了为啥要空着 00:39:522 - 和这里对应的
00:38:648 (6) - ctrl+g 。。顺着鼠标来的为啥都要反过来 无法理解
00:59:110 (1,2) - 建议把红线note加上，前面节奏那么密集这块空听起来很奇怪 好
01:02:187 (3,4) - 搞平行点 done
01:11:725 (7,8,9) - 同前面的理由 。。。哈？
膜姐多注意下排版........真随性@A@...........
然后我还是不怎么建议空红线拍，所以基本上后面你空的我都会建议填上.......... 好了
然后最后slider
03:31:571 (1) - 只要有个红线，他永远是unsnap的，建议换note 。。没有红线啊

好累，感觉不会再爱了

tutuhaha wrote:

[Lechenaultia]
00:05:264 (2,1,1) - 这块反差严重，前面你放了那么多note这边突然空缺听起来非常的奇怪，要是我的话我会把那俩填上note，要是不想填的话建议删前面的1/4
00:06:802 (1,2,3) - 这块建议这么摆，打的时候就感觉像是画圈打，嘛我最近比较喜欢这么放就是了.............
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/693502
00:09:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这块你既然加了clap强调出了那4个音，我建议是直接拿4个音做文章而不是加一溜的1/4
00:10:341 (2,3,4) - 按照你这个原来的感觉2应该是放在上方的，现在建议的话是3和4都ctrl+g一下，反正间距也差不多
00:12:803 (2,1) - 这块明明rhythm很stress你这边这么空一下除了坑爹还是坑爹
00:13:572 (1) - 搞扭曲点
00:15:418 (6,7) - 就听来说这块没必要那么大间距
00:16:341 (2,4) - 个人对这种摆法比较反感
00:17:572 (2) - 1到2的间距再稍微大一点
00:29:264 (1) - 搞扭曲点
00:29:264 (1,1) - slider用那么夸张的SV的话强烈反对这俩就这么点间距，很容易因为惯性点成1/4
00:33:187 (X) - 这边应该有音，加note
00:35:726 (4,5,6,7,8) - 多余的1/4有点多
00:39:880 (5,6) - 这个拖拍听起来有点奇怪
00:43:418 (5) - 有点理解不了这个加速
00:49:264 (1) - 这个slider在前面的slider里显示出了它那不怎么扭曲的个性，求改扭曲点
00:50:495 (7,1) - 这块也应该是跳这么点间距不科学
00:52:341 (7) - ctrl+g一下
00:56:571 (x) - 按照听觉惯性我觉得这里有音
01:06:957 (2,3,4,5,6) - 怎么听怎么奇怪，建议找另一种方法诠释这块
然后关于以上时间段的那个疑似kiai的这么一段有点话要说
首先按照现在那些外国权限的尿性，百分之二百会被嫌弃1/4过多
要我说呢....他确实是有点1/4过多............
在00:54:187 (1) - 到 01:13:880 (3) - 这个时间段就我来看其实有些slider跳设计的蛮好的，但是过多的重音1/4盖住了原本音乐突出的地方
我也曾经试过做这个P主的歌，我觉得把该用长slider的地方就用长slider，或者搞点1/2note跳，但是用连击盖过去并不是一个很好的选择
01:24:341 (5,6) - 6这个音让我觉得很奇怪...听起来
01:30:495 (2,3) - 不能理解这里为啥要这么大跳...音乐也没显示要大跳的感觉.......
01:32:033 (5,6) - 我倒是觉得这俩应该大一点
01:36:341 (2,3,4) - 照我来看这仨的间距应该是一样的
01:37:495 (9,10) - 你都这么强调这俩了干嘛不间距搞大点
01:38:187 (4,5) - 然后这块感觉间距太小
01:39:033 (X) - 这块感觉应该有note
01:40:033 (2,3,4) - 间距有点略小
01:41:957 (2) - 这个真心多余，你应该好好想想怎么拿那4个重音做出一个跳起来很哈皮的东西而不是在这么明显的rhythm上再加多余的重音
01:47:571 (7,1) - 太近了
01:49:572 (8,9) - 听着好别扭
01:51:110 (5,6,7) - 6和7的间距太小5和6的间距太大
01:55:110 (3,4) - 和音乐的话这边间距应该要大一点
01:59:879 (11,1) - 太近
02:00:495 (4,5) - 全盘移动这里停一下感觉特别奇怪
02:17:264 (1) - 搞扭曲点
02:17:264 (1,2) - 然后在前面那么多1/4之下这块显得空虚寂寞冷
02:20:957 (4,5) - 还是不能理解在全盘移动并且这里的节奏并没有重到需要这么强调的地方干嘛想不开要用这么小的间距
02:21:572 (1,2) - 拉大点
02:22:187 (3,4,5) - ^拉大点
02:27:110 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 照我说你这个难度里不怎么应该出现这种排法，前面你都是模糊式狂加各种1/4这边突然一下clear了还用这种较为坑爹的方式来摆有点那啥
02:36:957 (1,2,3,4,5) - 稍微参差不齐点
02:47:264 (12,1) - 找骂.........加note吧.........
不知道为什么，可能是你到最后是懒了呢还是准备按照正常路线走了....最后的1/4part的节奏很干净很利落
就我来说我很喜欢你在最后1/4part的节奏掌握
你可以自己看这图，看前面的高潮部分然后直接拉到后半段的高潮部分，然后你就可以很清晰的听清楚你在最后所design的和在最开始所design的有什么不同
这个难度我是建议你统一一下方式
是主要连击向还是主要跳向，因为明显有些段落你没怎么加多余的音来进行修饰，可是在另外一个有着同样节奏的地方有着比前面1.5倍多的物件
顺便一说要是连击向的话......现在这风头有点不适合.........会被喷死的...............


好累，感觉不会再爱了

Banana wrote:

[Easy]
太蠢了remap plz

1. add kiai time in two insane diff

[ Fay]

1. 00:04:033 (1) - slope it?
2. 00:07:033 (9,10) - I think stack them is well
3. 00:08:956 (7) - traingle with 00:08:033 (4,6) -
4. 00:19:418 (1,2) - move whistle at the end of slider
5. 00:24:033 (1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 00:29:264 (1,2) - ^
7. 03:11:725 (1,2) - ^
8. 03:16:341 (1,2,3,4) - ^
9. 03:24:033 (1,2) - ^
10. 03:11:725 (1,2) - ^
11. 03:16:341 (1,2,3,4) - ^
12. 03:24:033 (1,2) - ^
13. 00:39:725 (1,2,3) - flow is not good
14. 00:48:956 (7,1) - ^
15. 01:28:341 (7,1) -
16. 01:39:418 (1,2) - ^
17. 00:57:879 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest don't make stream here, not fit your rhythm, also this 02:49:879 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -
18. 02:21:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so confuse..
19. 02:31:725 (4,1) - maybe stack is nice
20. 02:46:187 (1) - add
21. 02:54:725 (5) - highly suggest move this
22. 02:58:341 (4) - add
23. 03:01:879 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - move 13clap on those notes plz
24. 03:21:879 (1) - add finish at the beginning of it, and also 00:29:571 (1) - 02:17:264 (1) - 02:32:648 (1) - 03:02:187 (1) - 03:31:571 (1) -
25. 03:06:341 (1) - move finish and use whistle with soft additions
    
    Edit:03:31:571 (1) - maybe the green line is useless

[ Lechenaultia]

1. I think you can add a spinner at the beginning.
2. 00:05:726 (1) - keep the distance plz
3. 00:05:571 (3,2,3) - maybe you can make a triangle here
4. 00:11:110 (1) - make a triangle with 00:10:341 (2,4) - and 00:10:341 (2,3) -
5. 00:11:725 (3,4,5,6) - traingle
6. 01:00:187 (9) - don't stack here
7. 03:00:803 (1) - ^
8. 01:02:880 (9) - not good, maybe you should not use this slider here
9. 01:10:571 (11) - ^
10. 01:07:495 (5) - delete
11. 03:05:110 (2) - two notes are better than slider

Chloe wrote:

Hello~
First, sorry for late post because I'm busy D:

And just mod as suggestions, not necessary. : )

[General]

1. add kiai time in two insane diff

[ Lechenaultia]

1. I think you can add a spinner at the beginning.
2. 00:05:726 (1) - keep the distance plz
3. 00:05:571 (3,2,3) - maybe you can make a triangle here
4. 00:11:110 (1) - make a triangle with 00:10:341 (2,4) - and 00:10:341 (2,3) -
5. 00:11:725 (3,4,5,6) - traingle
6. 01:00:187 (9) - don't stack here
7. 03:00:803 (1) - ^
8. 01:02:880 (9) - not good, maybe you should not use this slider here
9. 01:10:571 (11) - ^
10. 01:07:495 (5) - delete
11. 03:05:110 (2) - two notes are better than slider

Fin.

Eggache0 wrote:

渣mod from qqgroup
感觉感受不到这曲子是啥意思……mod了一堆啥我自己都不知道
[L]
nc没看懂怎么下的 有些地方感觉没啥意思就一段一段下吧
00:06:033 (1) - 我的风格是在后面note上下nc 顺便删00:06:802 (1) - 的nc 总之nc都随你便
00:09:264 (1) - nc挪前面slider
00:13:264 (1) - nc感受不到 顺便建议叠着 没啥意思
00:26:803 (6,7) - 前面用的是slider 这里也用吧
01:02:341 (7,8) - blanket没做好
01:05:880 (4) - ^ 顺便这和3做一样间距是不是好一点
01:07:495 (5) - del
01:08:649 (5) - 我觉得可以blanket（这人没救
01:10:187 (10) - 01:10:803 (1) - nc换到前面那里 01:11:264 (1) - 这里可以加
01:13:264 (1,2) - 这个是真没体会到为啥加速- -...
01:27:264 (1) - 后面(还是哪里)nc挪到这里 01:29:880 (1) - 这里可以加
01:55:726 (1) - 不blanket么
01:58:495 (5) - 第五个点右拖1grid刚好
02:06:649 (7) - 尾巴扭的晚了点
02:44:803 (5) - 还是叠尾巴吧 这太可怕了
03:30:649 (3,4,5,6) - 34和后面糊了一脸 换个打开点的梗