Leader
I love you guys, i really think you're doing great! sorry there were a lot of disagreements, but you had several good points that i just felt wasn't for the best of the map. thanks again nonetheless.Leader wrote:
I testplayed Another and I have something to say before it's totally ready to go.
[Another]Map is really good, it reminds me of Shiirn's style, and I think I'm not be the only one who will notice that haha. that's what i wanted to convey - he was a great inspiration!
- 00:08:157 (4,5) - I'd stack them i think it plays better with the spacing
- 00:10:490 (4,5) - What about changing pattern rhythm to this one http://puu.sh/456Lk.jpg? I think it fill well one of these 1/1 breaks. seems to work out nicely
- 00:33:157 (1) - A 1/1 slider will works great after that tough pattern, i think a minor break fits well - it's also fitting considering the full stop-feeling of this moment in the song
- 00:46:990 (4) - Can you curve it a bit while keeping the same direction? Nicer to see sure
- 00:51:990 (6,1,2,3) - That really breaks map flow in my opinion: even if it's a calm part of the song, I found it awkward to play. I'd replace circles with sliders, in this way http://puu.sh/456XV.jpg i'd rather keep this part as is, following the piano with circles is the only way i can get in more fun patterns in a hectic song like this
- 00:58:990 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, but since rhythm here is different from general one, you can keep it ~ same reason
- 01:00:323 (5) - Replace with a 1/2 slider, you are missing a quite loud sound in 01:00:490 i see, added
- 01:06:490 (5) - I'd replace with a triplet or a 1/2 slider i don't think that fits all that well with the style i'm going for in this spot, though
- 01:25:323 (1,2,3) - Well, kinda bad to see, at least stack (1) on (2) functionally this just changes the direction and cuts the spacing between the notes in half - i don't think it's weird looking at all, plus it makes the 1/4 1/2 1/4 hits easier to read
- 01:29:157 - There's a sound which needs to be mapped imo, so you can fix this as I said in 01:00:323 (5) that works
- 01:51:323 (4) - 1/2 slider suggestion as above i think the stream fits better with a 1/1 space in front of it, just like 00:47:323 (5,1)
- 01:51:657 (5,6,7,8,1) - well, they are really bad to see in my opinion ;~;, it would be cool if they were stacked to slider or more spaced (I'd choose the first one) they're basically just a stack in a reversed direction, i think stacking them wouldn't change anything but rather look weird
- 01:57:490 (6) - You can try this http://puu.sh/457KO.jpg i added one, but pointed it towards the left more so it wouldn't overlap with the next (4)
I've just pointed out what I felt while playing: all these 1/1 breaks (or even more) which can interrupt flow badly, care of checking this stuff through the map and it'll become even better as it is, in my opinion. So, good luck~ gotta say i disagree there - i think a map can flow even without constant pressure! but i guess it's a matter of style - thanks for the mod, though!
you're mother.Dolphin wrote:
lolwtf 85SP and not ranked after 9 months and still not ranked you doing it wrong -GN. shame on u. :-(