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Here's the mod you were requesting and here's my first mod as a MAT :3
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Here's the mod you were requesting and here's my first mod as a MAT :3
[General]
- Dat video... I tried to talk with other MATs/BATs about it and the best solution would be to make a separate map with video linked in the desscription,if you really want to keep it. As now I'm afraid it is unrankable :U
- 00:05:232 - Uhh,I know you wanted to use a Normal inherited section here,but anyways 25% of volume is too much low... You can't really hear the hitsounds used there. Instead make the volume higher (40% would be a pretty good value) or just switch to soft ones. It doesen't have much sense using this kind of inherited sections
- 00:08:276 (1) - What about using a whistle at the top of this slider? Starting the whole pattern with a whistle doesen't fit really bad,and it'll keep the 2/1 consistency used there! The same applies for 00:56:971 (2) - !
- 00:31:319 (2) - That's really a nazi and unneded thing,so just fix if you want: what about putting this note at x:320 y:236? It is a really minor thing,but anyways it follows the dropoff given by 00:30:232 (1) - ,and flows really good with 00:31:754 (3) - ! Again,that's a minor thing,just fix if you want.
- 00:33:493 (1) - I know you wanted to start the pattern with a finish there,but anyways that does not fit really good... It would be better if you removed this,it's just unnecessary imho.
- 00:37:189 (1) - Whistle at the repeat? It fits pretty good with the guitar chord and as you already followed them it would keep the consistency too
- 01:08:276 (4,5) - I kinda understand what are you trying to follow here,but anyway this is a bit confusing to play. What about instead making those 2 sliders following the vocals using a 1/2 gap? It makes much more sense rhythmically-wise and it's pretty good to play! See what I've done above:
A possible pattern that would use this rhythm setting could be this,see if you like it!SPOILER20,96,68276,2,0,B|52:56|108:32|160:36,1,159,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,60,69145,2,0,P|252:72|320:64,1,106
408,24,70015,5,4,0:0:0
388,128,70449,1,0,0:0:0
456,204,70884,2,0,B|444:256|408:300,1,106,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 01:24:797 (4) - Not really an issue or somthing else, but it would be cool if you moved this above 01:23:058 (2) - 's beginning to follow the dropoff given by 01:23:928 (3) - instead of going upwards. Here,I tried to modify the pattern in this way. See if you like it!SPOILER
160,352,84797,1,0,0:0:0
80,284,85232,1,2,0:0:0
116,184,85667,6,0,B|172:192|220:172,1,106,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,80,86536,2,0,B|112:72|64:92,1,106,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,184,87406,1,4,0:0:0
180,268,87841,2,0,P|288:272|348:196,1,212,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 01:26:536 (2) - Please,add a soft finish at the top of this slider. It fits really good,as the cymbals here are playing over and over again,and following them with this 1/1 pattern would be pretty cool imho.
Pretty nice diff! As you see there are just some rhythmical/hitsounds "issues",and anyways this diff flows pretty good,good job!
- 00:05:667 (3) - What about adding a new combo on the top of this note? It fits pretty good delimitating/emphatizing the change of rhythm that is siituated in this part. It is a minor thing thoug,feel free to ignore this.
- 00:15:015 (2) - Why are you using a whistle to follow the cymbals there? As you always used finishes to follow them using a finish here would fit quite better as well,as other than keeping the consistency it will match much more clearly these instruments.
- 00:18:710 (2) - The actual 1/1 repeated slider does fit well,but I would prefer using instead a 3/4 repeated slider, by moving the spinner 1/2 backwards.
Other than following much more literally the vocals being played there,it continues perfectly the rhythm with 00:19:580 (1) - ! Here's how it should be: - 00:28:276 (3) - What about instead of blanketting this with 00:27:841 (2) - moving it further encircling 00:29:145 (4) - and following the linear flow created with 00:26:536 (1,2) - ? It is a little thing, though it will make the whole pattern smooth and it will make the flow natural to play. Here's what I have done here to explain it more clearly!SPOILER
212,168,26536,6,0,P|176:140|128:140|96:168,2,126,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,252,27841,1,2,0:0:0
332,332,28276,2,0,P|364:360|412:360|448:332,1,126,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,252,29145,1,0,0:0:0
444,168,29580,1,2,0:0:0
424,72,30015,6,0,P|384:16|312:32|312:32,1,126,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 00:32:623 (1,2,3) - I really didn't like how you mixed this,as other than not matching completely the vocals it feels a bit harsh to play the transition between the slider/note part and the note/slider part. Instead I would create a different arrangement with the use of 3/4 sliders... Something like this would fit pretty good actually!
I again created a pattern based on this. See if you like it!SPOILER16,136,32189,1,2,0:0:0
28,236,32623,6,0,P|44:304|116:320|116:320,2,126,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
16,136,33928,1,2,0:0:0
100,80,34363,2,0,P|72:48|20:36,2,94.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,128,35232,1,0,0:0:0
212,144,35667,1,2,0:0:0
256,232,36102,2,0,P|224:244|192:244,2,63,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,196,36754,1,0,0:0:0
264,96,37189,6,0,P|264:28,2,63,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - From 00:40:449 - to 00:47:406 - : I see you didn't use any hitsounds to emphatize the drums being played in this part... Why don't you add them? They fit so good here! In this spoilerbox I'll tell you what to add if you want to follow the drums too:SPOILER00:40:449 (1) - Replace the whistle at the end with a clap
00:42:189 (3) - Clap at the end
00:43:493 (4) - Add a drum finish there,it matches exactly the drum being played there
00:44:797 (2) - Clap here
00:45:667 (4,5) - Clap at 00:45:667 (4) - 's end and at 00:46:971 (5) - ,replacing the whistle - 00:47:406 (1,2,3,4) - Oh well... I'd revert 00:48:058 (2,3) - 's position in the timeline,as it follows the vocals much better than the current setting. Here's the outcome:
- 00:50:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - Minor aestetical thing,please ignore if you don't agree: what about using a penthagon shaped pattern here? It's just for graphical purposes,as it looks really good and kinda fits there! Here's what I have done,see if you like it!SPOILER
60,296,50884,5,4,0:0:0
148,348,51319,1,2,0:0:0
224,280,51754,1,0,0:0:0
184,188,52189,1,2,0:0:0
84,192,52623,2,0,P|84:116|152:96|152:96,2,126,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,188,53928,1,2,0:0:0
280,308,54580,6,0,P|256:360|196:352|196:352,2,94.5,4|6|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,112,56102,5,4,0:0:0
184,196,56536,2,0,P|181:194|248:236|301:186,1,126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,104,57406,1,2,0:0:0
456,72,57841,1,0,0:0:0
500,168,58276,2,0,P|504:248|444:272|444:272,1,126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 01:08:276 (3,4) - Please,replace the whistles at the beginning with some finishes instead. They fit much better with the cymbals being played there, as they totally match with them.
- 01:16:971 (1) - Did you forget a finish at the end of the slider? It should follow again these cymbals. The same applies again for 01:18:493 (2) - 's repeat and 01:19:363 (3) - 's beginning
- 01:21:102 (2) - Using a 1/1 repeated slider on the red ticks right now doesen't sound/play that good. Again, I expected something following the vocals,as I can't really understand what this is supposed to follow. Using againa 3/4 slider along with a 1/2 circle goes fine there,as here:
- 01:25:232 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Whoops,it seems that you have forgot some finished to follow the cymbals being played there. Here, I have added them and I tried to make the penthagon at the end a bit more pleasing to see. See if you like it!SPOILERNice diff,even if I'm not fully convinced by it (probably because of the rhythm used there)...
260,20,85232,2,0,P|180:20|148:72|148:72,1,126,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
84,148,86102,5,2,0:0:0
44,240,86536,1,4,0:0:0
112,316,86971,1,2,0:0:0
204,272,87406,1,4,0:0:0
192,172,87841,2,0,P|216:104|292:100|292:100,2,126,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
- 00:01:210 (x)- What about keeping your 1/2 consistency here by following the synth and adding a note here? This doublet does actually play pretty good,so I can't see why not using it! The same applies for 00:02:949 - !
- 00:55:667 (1) - Wouldn't it be better if you started this 1/2 before and made it 1/2 longer too? Other than following the drums it would follow the synthesizer too,and that would actually sound pretty good! (other than making the spacing with 00:54:580 (1) - more consistent)
- 01:03:058 (3) - What about adding a New Combo here? It fits pretty good as other than being consistent with 01:04:797 (1) - and as it delimitates the new vocal phrase!
- 01:24:689 (2) - As you have actually used a finish on the top of 01:24:363 (1) - , putting it at the top aswell sounds pretty good,as it follows the synthesizer along with the other finish!
- 01:27:949 (2,3) - Using these 2 sliders here does not feel that right,as it doesen't follow the synthesizer's held that good. What about instead using a note/slider/note progression,which it could fit pretty good that held? Here's what I have done here:
Awesome diff! Sorry for my poor mod here,this diff is already ready for ranking imho >_<
- 00:13:276 (4,5,6,7,8) - That's a really personal thing,just fix if you want: What about making this instead a star jump pattern? That would flow extremely good,especially because it makes 00:13:928 (7,8,1) - a triangular jump fun to play,other than making the whole jump consistent! As I said however this a REALLY little and maybe nazi thing,apply just if you want:SPOILER
336,344,13276,1,8,0:0:0
448,204,13493,1,2,0:0:0
272,252,13710,1,8,0:0:0
440,312,13928,1,0,0:0:0
344,168,14145,1,10,0:0:0
168,220,14363,5,4,0:0:0
336,344,14689,1,0,0:0:0 - 01:01:754 (2) - After 01:00:884 (6,1) - being opposed sliders,I actually expected this reversed to "complete" the oval flow used there. What about using this kind of pattern? Imho,it flows pretty good!SPOILER
364,108,61754,2,0,B|409:198,1,100,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
448,288,62189,1,0,0:0:0
328,336,62406,1,8,0:0:0
240,208,62623,1,0,0:0:0
52,256,62841,1,10,0:0:0
120,88,63058,6,0,B|104:144|140:196,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 01:16:319 (5) - What about adding a New Combo just to delimitate the jump to make it slightreadable without any problems? That's a little thing though,feel free to ignore.
- 01:21:971 (4) - The 1/4 drum stream is still continuing,I can't understand why you semplified all here with a 1/2 slider. What about instead continuing with the 1/4 stream until the end by splitting the slider into a 1/4 slider and a note? Here's the outcome:
- 01:28:710 (2) - Again,that's a really little thing,so consider doing it just if you want: what do you think of moving this circle to x:152 y:64 just to follow 01:27:949 (4) - 's dropoff and oval flow?
This diff right now is so fun! It's really awesome,sorry for my quite poor mod there