Irreversible wrote:

I FFFFFFF----- LOVE THAT MAP!!!
TAKE THAT STAR! xD

kajiyatta wrote:

Nogard
Placement
01:17:670(1,2,3,4) like rotationally? nah

SPOILER

02:08:219(4) Ctrl+G? it's to be symmetrical done
02:11:980(3,4) same ^ nah

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:24:535(3)　delete whistle at reverse? it sounds good imo nah, i like how it sounds
00:30:178(5) at end only whistle is good i prefer finish
02:00:930(3) add finish fixed, should be in (3) and is in (2)

kajiyatta wrote:

from PM
General
譜面できてるのでtagに　Blue Dragon 追加 Add all diff.
Normal
official wiki によるとAR5以下に設定する必要があるのでAR6はUnrankbleです fixed
またHPも4で良いと思います 確かにそうですな。fixed
Rhythm
00:54:159(2)　この1/8スライダーを何度も使うのは少しむずかしい気がします　e.g) 提案の音が凄い良かったので参考にさせていただきました。

SPOILER

01:12262～　^ サビという事もあり、多少難しいというのと変更した上での流れの変更が難しいのというのが現時点なのでここは保留にしておきます。
Hit Sonud
00:42:168(1) clap削除？手前のclapで詰まってるノートの音と同じ場所なので一応此処もclapを付けてあります。
00:46:635(2,3) ここだけ終点にclapがついていないのは？見落としですfixed
01:03:563(3) リバースにclap?ここだけ空いているのはやや不自然です 同じくです。。助かります！
01:04:504(1) finishは大きいような気がします、clapで十分かなと ok

Hard
Placement
00:20:303(2) 見栄えの問題ですが、(1)を反転させてやると綺麗だと思います 流れという点で現時点で好みなのでkeepをします。

SPOILER

01:11:187(3) 20ずつずれているので　x:196へ fixed
01:10:617(2)^ x:68 fixed
01:11:157(4)^ x:48 fixed

Insane
Placement
00:13:250(4) もう少しずらすと見栄えが良くなると思います fixed

SPOILER

02:09:159(4) ここはジャンプさせないでDS通りにしてみては、BPMがBPMなのでジャンプさせなくても十分だと そうですね、Ctrl+gで配置を変えずにjumpを減らしました。

Rhythm
02:01:871(3,4,5,6) やや音取りが不自然だと思います ありがとうございます。参考にさせていただきました。

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:17:482~　前後のヒットサウンドのパターンと違っているのは？個人的には揃えた方が聞こえがいいと思いました 確かに混乱を及ぼしますね。fixed
01:45:648(1) 終点にfinish追加 fixed

overall quite difficult, I can't pass...

こういった曲は勝手がよく分からないのでmoddingの出来もあまり良くないと思います
その時は no kdsで構いません　good luck~

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi!

General
いい

Normal
00:30:648 (1) - Finish, 00:21:244 (1) - 見たい? その二つ終わりに静かです~ maybe fix
00:40:523 (5) - NC
00:53:219 (1) - 初めに finish, bg music 聞く
00:56:980 (1) - ^
01:17:670 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/615582 フリップ? だからそれはとても右に集中していない =v=
01:44:002 (4) - NC
02:12:215 (1) - 初めに finish
02:15:977 (1) - Finish
02:19:739 (1) - ^
02:31:965 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/615587 スワールパターンがあります? xD
all fixed

Hard
00:26:651 - ここで何かを追加 keep now. confused mapping this place._. sorry finally Done
00:30:648 (1) - Normal 見たい fixed
02:12:215 (1) - 初めに finish fixed
02:19:739 (1) - ^ fixed
02:46:071 (1) - NC 消す fixed

Insane
00:30:648 (1) - Normal 見たい fixed
00:41:933 (1) - これ消す, このパートをマップしてください i hope fit sppiner. keep for now. Finally Done.
01:07:913 (4,5,6) - スライダを使う, 何らかの理由でこれをできません xD np o.o/
01:42:356 (4) - NC fixed
01:56:933 - 何か追加? circle put.
02:12:215 (1) - 初めに finish, Normal/Hardと同じ fixxed
02:15:977 (1) - ^ fixed
02:19:739 (1) - ^ fixed

ずいぶん楽しい!! がんばっ~!!

Flower wrote:

Hi~ m4m~

[General]
02:00:930 - maybe a kiai flash here? keep now

[Normal]
01:03:563 (3) - reverse arrow partially overlapped by hit300. fixed
suggestion:

SPOILER

01:19:551 (1) - I suggest not putting a spinner right in the best part of the song. Make some tricks? fmm, keep np

[Hard]
00:57:333 (2,3,4) - I think not suitable in hard and is easy missed. fmm?
01:45:648 (6) - NC? fix

[Insane]
OD9 but rather easy to play... stress od8
I think this diff is hardest, but don't know why
00:09:958 - I find that you only add claps 1 in 4 bars. This does not sound good, but is up to you. maybe you can add soft whistles as BD does. keep. i lose now
00:27:121 - remove clap? no
01:03:093 (3,5) - separate to make them look better no
01:17:670 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - why not form a straight line or an arc? current pattern is rather hard to read why? not hard part
01:19:551 (1) - same as normal keep now

Good luck~

• 
  - Nothing to say :/

• 
  - 00:16:894 (3) - how about clap? ( 00:18:775 (3) - and this too )
  - 01:33:070 (2) - whistle on start is better than end
  - 02:13:508 (4) - place on red tick hears weired try next white tick with clap on start , isn't it better?
  - 02:21:032 (5) - ^
  - 02:43:485 (3) - delete clap and 02:43:603 (4) - adding it on start

• 
  - 00:14:425 ~ 00:14:543 - why not using soft hitsound here? feels better
  - 00:46:871 (3) - http://puu.sh/256QQ try this( if you do this, stack (4) note with (1) would be great )
  - 01:34:598 (1) - whistle on end

• 
  - 00:56:745 (9,10) - i'm recommend to these 2 notes change to 1/2 slider becuase that's make a bad flow to click 1/2 at same place and a stream after it
  - 01:36:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this timing pattern http://puu.sh/256Kq
  - 02:40:429 (1,2) - finish on start

• 
  - 01:57:168 (3,4) - whistle on slider body?
  - 02:01:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/256tx this rhythm is better for rhythm imo
  - 02:16:683 (4) - missed clap?
  - 02:42:662 (2) - using Ctrl G is better for play imo flows good and feel more exciting when i'm playing this

1. i found some places which add finish is good
   - 02:40:781 (2,7) - start
   - 02:42:309 (1,2,1) - start
   - 02:44:190 (1,2,1,2) - start

LunarSakuya wrote:

Nogard
00:09:841 (8) - Use 1/8th rhythm if I'm hearing this right fixed
00:15:483 (4) - use a similar slider like 00:11:722 (9) - nah o.o
00:21:009 (8) - 1 grid up so stream is evenly spaced fixed
00:53:219 (1) - Finish at beginning done
01:07:443 (2,3,4) - Make a reverse slider instead? Cursor might flow better into the next slider or i'm too noob to get this I like the flow it has on this D:
--
01:13:438 (3,4) - i kinda feel like the flow is weird here, so my suggestion: switch the positions of these
01:13:908 (5,6) - then Ctrl + G each of these separately
01:14:378 (7,8) - then switch the positions of these
Should look like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/615658 & http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/615659 I did something else in this part so yeah, fixed I guess?
--
02:07:043 (1) - Delete NC, feels kinda useless done

Flower wrote:

[Nogard]
00:26:886 (1,2) - maybe there is better pattern. current one looks dumb. how does a pattern even look "dumb"? it's fine, not changed.
01:07:325 (1,2,3,4) - I think the jump is too hard to read, but it's up to you. I still don't see a problem with it, but i'll change if many people keep complaining
01:18:610 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe a bit closer? a bit hard to read made them a bit closer
01:21:432 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - they just don't fit the difficulty. all other parts are quite easy, despite these notes. There must be a more beautiful way to implement the difficulty. this is WAY easier than the squares, lol, this is just zigzag.
02:11:745 (1,2,3,4) - looks bad imo doesn't look too bad
02:17:035 - add clap? uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no?

Good luck~

HelloSCV wrote:

[Nogard]

• 
  - 01:57:168 (3,4) - whistle on slider body? no D:
  - 02:01:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/256tx this rhythm is better for rhythm imo i'm following the guitar here..
  - 02:16:683 (4) - missed clap? added
  - 02:42:662 (2) - using Ctrl G is better for play imo flows good and feel more exciting when i'm playing this done

1. i found some places which add finish is good nooo, finish spam
   - 02:40:781 (2,7) - start
   - 02:42:309 (1,2,1) - start
   - 02:44:190 (1,2,1,2) - start

i like renard haha i'm expect to this map! good luck~

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

[Normal]

• 
  - Nothing to say :/

[Hard]

• 
  - 00:16:894 (3) - how about clap? ( 00:18:775 (3) - and this too )
  - 01:33:070 (2) - whistle on start is better than end
  - 02:13:508 (4) - place on red tick hears weired try next white tick with clap on start , isn't it better? okay.. next be careful.
  - 02:21:032 (5) - ^
  - 02:43:485 (3) - delete clap and 02:43:603 (4) - adding it on start
  other fixed.

[Insane]

• 
  - 00:56:745 (9,10) - i'm recommend to these 2 notes change to 1/2 slider becuase that's make a bad flow to click 1/2 at same place and a stream after it sure.but, i want thinking time this part.
  - 01:36:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this timing pattern http://puu.sh/256Kq k
  - 02:40:429 (1,2) - finish on start k

i like renard haha i'm expect to this map! good luck~

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Request from my Modding queue c:

Hard

1. HD + 1 or 2, I suggest. High..
2. 00:26:651 - add circle, because if you add a note here you can connect (4) with (1).

sorry keep like

Insane

1. 00:52:043 (3,4) - ctrl+> maybe, looks better.

EHH,,,Unrankble

Nothing else I can see!

good luck P o m u t a nwn~

P o M u T a wrote:

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Request from my Modding queue c:

Hard

1. HD + 1 or 2, I suggest. High..
2. 00:26:651 - add circle, because if you add a note here you can connect (4) with (1).

sorry keep like

Insane

1. 00:52:043 (3,4) - ctrl+> maybe, looks better.

EHH,,,Unrankble

Nothing else I can see!

good luck P o m u t a nwn~

all no. sorry. but,thx modding~

1. 00:08:077 (1) - i tried 25% 50% 75% and i always hear only 2 beats here. why are you using a repeatable slider?
2. I'd like to suggest remapping of several parts before the 1st spinner to keep consistency:
   00:10:899 (1,2) - repeat of the first slider not following anything anyway, only breaking the fun.
   00:17:482 (1) - this one has a proper repeat but it still different from others so kinda spoils the mood.
   00:19:363 (1,3) - these too. why not make them shorter and fill the blank spots?
3. 00:39:700 (5,6) - suggest moving them away from the straight line with the previous circle, kinda like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/623416
4. 00:41:581 (5,6) - and here ^
5. 01:12:262 (2,3) - why not map beats between these notes?
6. 01:13:438 (3,4) - here too ^ later you have same thig again, but jumps there awe wide and hard. these are too easy imo.
7. 01:22:372 (1,2) - flip vertically? cursor movement feels more natural this way.
8. 01:36:479 (8) - if i'm reading your patterns right, there must be a NC here.
9. 02:19:739 (1,2) - suggesting this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/623434 might also consider reversing (3)
10. 02:39:488 (3,4,5) - move this away from 02:39:841 (1) maybe? keeping cursor in one place for so long is tiring.

1. part before 1st spinner at 00:21:302 (1) sounds kinda plain, it barely has any hitsounds in it. care to add some whistles?
2. 00:14:308 (4) - what is this even? starts by following one set of sounds, ends following the other. kinda hard to follow.
3. 01:08:266 (1) - at this part too, why not add some whistles? it's gonna add some variety to the map.
4. 01:19:551 (1) - this spinner is useless. i'd map this part instead of wasting it on a spinner.
5. 01:33:070 (3) - why slider? should be a note imo (and you use notes instead of sliders later too so this must be a mistake?)
6. 02:17:270 (6) - clearly too close to slider, doesn't look pretty.
7. 02:41:604 (5) - maybe use 2 notes instead like you did before?

1. 01:36:244 (6) - missed a note in this slider?

1. 01:33:070 (2) - circle instead of slider here? you've used it before at 01:32:129 (3) too..
2. 01:36:714 (2) - and here you can make a slider instead.
3. 01:45:648 (1) - increase velocity here and make it wiggled?

1. 00:17:482 (4) - curve this slider? http://puu.sh/26eae

senaya wrote:

Harrou~
[Insane]

1. part before 1st spinner at 00:21:302 (1) sounds kinda plain, it barely has any hitsounds in it. care to add some whistles?　add whistle (1)
2. 00:14:308 (4) - what is this even? starts by following one set of sounds, ends following the other. kinda hard to follow. fmm, i think no problem
3. 01:08:266 (1) - at this part too, why not add some whistles? it's gonna add some variety to the map. add whistle
4. 01:19:551 (1) - this spinner is useless. i'd map this part instead of wasting it on a spinner. sorry keep now ._. i want thinking time
5. 01:33:070 (3) - why slider? should be a note imo (and you use notes instead of sliders later too so this must be a mistake?) fix~
6. 02:17:270 (6) - clearly too close to slider, doesn't look pretty. fix!
7. 02:41:604 (5) - maybe use 2 notes instead like you did before? fix!!

[Normal]
I had to draw slider because osu!editor currently doesn't support slider changes =_=

1. 00:17:482 (4) - curve this slider? http://puu.sh/26eae

fixed

[General]
You can also fix kiai if you want http://puu.sh/26c03 fixed Insane and Normal


Done  

EmPao wrote:

nice map
It is fun to play~
Star o.o

1. 00:16:306(5)one grid up
2. 00:26:416(2)ctrl+g here?
3. 00:39:817(6)miss a clap?
4. 01:36:479(8)nc?

1. 00:41:933(1)i think use a spin here are not a good idea
2. 00:51:690(2)copy 1 and make a slider like this may look better
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:16:330(2)x:48 y:204
4. 02:40:193(8,9,10,11)looks a little crowded here,change them into a straight line?
5. 02:41:604(5)Parallel to 02:41:134(3)

1. 01:16:259(3)slider touch the score bar
2. 02:01:753(2)detele this circle will make the rhythm better,imo
3. 02:45:836(3)whistle sounds better

Melt wrote:

\I love my internet friends/
Request from my queue
Just some suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:41:933(1)i think use a spin here are not a good idea
2. 00:51:690(2)copy 1 and make a slider like this may look better
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:16:330(2)x:48 y:204
4. 02:40:193(8,9,10,11)looks a little crowded here,change them into a straight line?
5. 02:41:604(5)Parallel to 02:41:134(3)

All Done!
So cool~ star of course
Good luck :3

jaehn215 wrote:

Modding queue~

Normal

Isn't Normal...

HP Drain -1 4 is better.

00:15:601 (1) - more curve please. -> http://puu.sh/295IQ try
01:40:711 (5) - change slider point -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631585 maybe fixed. i hope
02:46:071 (9) - add NC fixed

Hard

01:06:385 - add timing point -> http://puu.sh/295RM keep sound.
01:33:070 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:39:065 (1) - ^ No. confused NC.
02:46:071 (4) - add NC fixed

Insane

01:06:385 - add timing point -> http://puu.sh/295RM fmm... keep sound
01:21:902 (5) - NC please.. No. maybe people confused NC
01:44:355 (6) - add NC fixed~
01:44:472 (1) - remove NC fixed~

DoKo, Nogard guest diff.... So hard... approved

GL

senaya wrote:

[Nogard]
01:36:244 (6) - missed a note in this slider?  I wanted to create a good flow with the next combo, since it already starts with a bunch of 1/2 hitcircles

Melt wrote:

[Nogard]
01:16:259(3)slider touch the score bar I do not fix HP bar issues.
02:01:753(2)detele this circle will make the rhythm better,imo I prefer the way it is
02:45:836(3)whistle sounds better nah, clap sounds better with the next note

jaehn215 wrote:

00:30:178 (5) - remove finish sound..? why? D:
01:13:908 (5) - add NC done
01:42:592 (5) - add clap sound. done

andrei7 wrote:

Just a random mod.

Hard / 8/10 \

1. 00:49:809 (2) - do you have a reason for that slider? Usually, it will be something like that:

SPOILER

No
2. 01:00:389 (3) - upper slider control point should be 2 grid up and 1 grid left. maybe done.so,end point

3.01:32:482 (4,1,2) - -_-

SPOILER

keep for now.
/// 02:43:250 (2,3) - if I were you, i would make a slider instead that 2 circles /// i like now pettern.

Insane / perfect \

1. 00:14:896 (6) - Not sure, but maybe 3 circles? nope. i like keep it.

2. 00:19:010 (12) - delete repeat? why? sound natural.

3. 00:21:009 (4,5,6,7,8) - there must be 2/6 slider with 3 repeats. sorry, this stream is good sound.

Normal - I dont know how to improve that map.

Lundlerol wrote:

Hi~
P o M u T a 's mod req~

Let's mod~

[Zukisinx's Taiko Muzukashii]
01:00:742 (1) - D
02:12:215 (88) - ^
02:15:977 (103) - ^
02:19:739 (122) - ^


finished~
good luck taiko mapper _(:3 」∠)_

Lundlerol wrote:

Hi~
P o M u T a 's mod req~

Let's mod~

[Backfire's Taiko Oni]
00:30:648 (1) - d?
00:46:929 - k
00:51:161 - ^
02:28:379 - ^
02:36:491 - ^

finished~
good luck taiko mapper _(:3 」∠)_

Nanika133 wrote:

[Insane]
01:01:212 ~ 01:07:325 : Lower the hitsounds to 40~50 % okay,but,70→60% ~.

I want this ranked now .__.