1. Easy (1.72 stars, 268 notes)
2. Flower (4.07 stars, 646 notes)
3. Normal (1.89 stars, 345 notes)

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
For two for those beatmap:
There is many circles and sliders close to the scorebar and down. Try to place it somewhere else.
[ZX's Dance]
There's no breaks. Your choice to put some.

KanpanRin wrote:

IRC mod

Vee-tyan wrote:

GENERAL
Maybe change the colors under BG?
For example:
Colours fix
Combo1 : 208,230,209
Combo2 : 28,204,165
Combo3 : 82,141,123

Remove "Lead-in". fix

EASY DANCE fix
00:52:982 (3) - Reduce to 1 revers and add more hits and sliders.
01:25:382 (2) - overlap revers 01:26:582 (1)

HARD DANCE fix
00:33:782 (1) - Maybe replace this spinner? A very small distance from the end of the spinner 00:35:582 - to 00:35:882 (1)
01:02:582 (1) - Reduce to 1 revers and add more hits and sliders.
01:09:782 (1) & 01:11:882 (3) - overlap.
01:28:982 (1,2,3) - ^
01:54:182 (3) & 01:55:682 (2) - - ^
03:09:182 (4) 03:09:782 (1) - ^
03:12:782 (2,3) - ^
03:38:582 (9) - inappropriate slider. Changed. + 03:37:082 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - OVERMUCH OVERLAP
03:44:282 (4,5) - overlap
03:45:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - not nice

Sorry, ZX's dance very difficult for me.

Good luck!

1. 这个曲子很安静 最好音效音量稍微小些~ 还有 默认的音效有些生硬 好像不太适合这个曲子 可以试试和这个时间点类似的音效01:33:182 (6) -

1. 如果easy和hard是表示难度的话 应该还少个normal

1. Hard 没有放开做 是normal的难度指标

1. 加sliderslid无声音效 消除滑条滚动声

1. 00:40:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这几个音连续用clap不太好 因为新手本身击打的不准确 音效太明显的话会让他们产生自己打错的错觉 建议只有3circle 6circle 3circle 5slider尾用clap好些 后面还有这样的地方

1. 00:46:682 - 00:49:082 - 00:56:282 - 00:58:682 - 02:55:082 - 03:13:082 - 03:22:682 - 03:41:882 - add a circle？（原因：为什么这里都指出要加 因为乃类似这些地方03:44:282 (2) - 都加上了 可是咱指出来的地方都没有加 这样有些乱 会让玩家有些confused

1. 01:01:082 (4) - 去掉circle

1. 01:06:782 (2,1) - 如果包住的话希望包好

1. 01:11:882 - 01:19:082 - 01:56:282 - 01:53:882 - 02:53:882 - 03:14:282 - add something？

1. 01:54:482 - add a circle？

1. 02:23:882 - 这里的breaktime可以加一个连续的折返滑条 只要按住不动的那种 而且这里的breaktime 和其他难度的不一样

1. 03:38:582 (1) - 只需要折返一次就可以了

1. 音效建议同^

1. sv有些小1.8？

1. 00:32:882 (2) - 开1/6sd做折返滑条

1. 01:09:782 (1,2) - 不太好看

1. 01:14:582 (1,2) - 弯的都有些尖了 不好看 弯度要小一点

1. 03:19:382 (1) - 这个改成circle+spinner吧

1. 03:28:982 (1,2) - 不平行 不够细心

1. 01:58:982 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 03:37:382 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这里明显是一串连打 不要分开更不要跳

1. 02:45:482 (8) - 距离突然变远 不好

1. 03:34:082 (2) - unrankable 这里的滑条尾被circle的300成绩挡住了

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

呜> < 先占位置 一会来编辑~
In game queue~ 一些渣建议 希望可以帮到乃~
[General]

1. 这个曲子很安静 最好音效音量稍微小些~ 还有 默认的音效有些生硬 好像不太适合这个曲子 可以试试和这个时间点类似的音效01:33:182 (6) -

音量降低了些 至於音效我不太會用..

1. 如果easy和hard是表示难度的话 应该还少个normal

那個Hard其實原先是Normal 不過AI判定是Hard 就姑且改成Hard了 求大師GD

1. Hard 没有放开做 是normal的难度指标

如上所示

1. 加sliderslid无声音效 消除滑条滚动声

不曉得怎麼弄
[Easy Dance] 已修改

1. 00:40:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这几个音连续用clap不太好 因为新手本身击打的不准确 音效太明显的话会让他们产生自己打错的错觉 建议只有3circle 6circle 3circle 5slider尾用clap好些 后面还有这样的地方

1. 00:46:682 - 00:49:082 - 00:56:282 - 00:58:682 - 02:55:082 - 03:13:082 - 03:22:682 - 03:41:882 - add a circle？（原因：为什么这里都指出要加 因为乃类似这些地方03:44:282 (2) - 都加上了 可是咱指出来的地方都没有加 这样有些乱 会让玩家有些confused

1. 01:01:082 (4) - 去掉circle

不太曉得為何要去掉 就先保留了

1. 01:06:782 (2,1) - 如果包住的话希望包好

這個並沒有包著 所以就沒改了

1. 01:11:882 - 01:19:082 - 01:56:282 - 01:53:882 - 02:53:882 - 03:14:282 - add something？

1. 01:54:482 - add a circle？

1. 02:23:882 - 这里的breaktime可以加一个连续的折返滑条 只要按住不动的那种 而且这里的breaktime 和其他难度的不一样

1. 03:38:582 (1) - 只需要折返一次就可以了

[Hard dance] 已修改

1. 音效建议同^

1. sv有些小1.8？

我覺得1.5應該就ok了來著

1. 00:32:882 (2) - 开1/6sd做折返滑条

1. 01:09:782 (1,2) - 不太好看

1. 01:14:582 (1,2) - 弯的都有些尖了 不好看 弯度要小一点

1. 03:19:382 (1) - 这个改成circle+spinner吧

不知道大師指的是不是這樣

1. 03:28:982 (1,2) - 不平行 不够细心

[ZX's dance] 已修改

1. 01:58:982 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 03:37:382 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这里明显是一串连打 不要分开更不要跳

1. 02:45:482 (8) - 距离突然变远 不好

1~8都改了排法 求指點

1. 03:34:082 (2) - unrankable 这里的滑条尾被circle的300成绩挡住了

就这么多了，之前写过一次好长的 没传上去也没有备份 这回又写了一次

Squirrel wrote:

Hellow! c:
(I've never tried modding before,
so I'll just give you a few suggestions and stuff, hope they help somehow. ;o;
And I'll leave out hitsounds, cause I really suck at that..)

General

I think it's a really nice mapset (and song),
but at some points you can make sliders look more interesting. c:
I'll give you a few examples below.

+ it might be a good idea to use Grid Level 4 instead of 3, it's muuuch more precise! I think... 3 is enough

The Kiai Timeee~ I think it has to be the same in every difficulty. Try to fix
In Easy/Hard it's okay like this, but it's kinda "sad" that the last Kiai Time is only there for a split second..
You could switch it around to have one really short Kiai Time at the beginning and a longer one at the end. c:

Easy Dance

00:28:982 (1) - I think a curved slider looked more interesting here or maybe a slider in form of a N.. like this. Try to fix
00:44:582 (5,1) - it's okay like this but the overlapping parts don't look that great.. you could switch the direction of 1 and 3 around.. the first one goes down, the third up. Try to fix
00:46:982 (3,1) - if you do the change above they overlap as well, so change them, too, if you do at all. I can't find overlap
00:51:782 (2) - move it to x208 y280, doesn't look so "crowded" then. c: Try to fix
00:55:382 (1) - if you flip that one horizontally I have the feeling it's way easier to get, somehow.. Uh .. stay the same. Sorry
01:00:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe that are a bit too many circles for a beginner, you could replace half of them with a slider. Try to fix
01:03:782 (1,1) - I'm not really sure.. but the spinner might be a bit too short.. and maybe you should leave a bit more free time after the spinner. Try to fix
01:06:782 (2,1,2) - looks better if you position the last one at the exact same spot as the first. Try to fix...?
01:24:182 (1,2) - if the curve of the sliders is more like this it looks "smoother". Try to fix
02:21:782 (1,1,1,1) - it looks great with that many colours, but it might be really confusing, especially for beginners. Consider longer combos? o: Try to fix
02:31:382 (1,1,1,1) - ^ (the one in between is in a straight line, so it's not really a problem to read the pattern)
02:36:182 (1,1,1,1) - ^
02:38:582 (1,1) - again, might be better to "leave more space" after a spinner. Try to fix
02:57:782 (1,1,2) - - ^ + the same at 01:24:182 (1,2) Try to fix.. But... read on to know
03:03:782 (2) - a curved slider might look more intersting. Try to fix
03:19:382 (1,1) - spinner, see above Try to fix
03:48:482 (1,1) - it looks great, but please don't place a circle at the middle of the playfield directly after a spinner. It's really really confusing for beginners, cause it's the same spot where the lighting of the spinner is and therefore might be seen too late. stay the same.
03:55:382 (1,1) - ^ Try to fix

overall you could think about reshaping some sliders to add variety. Try to fix a little
+ since the break time is really long you could consider splitting it up, cause the part is mapable and two short breaks instead of one long might be better. c:

Hard Dance

since it's a hard difficulty you could change the slider velocity multiplier.. that'd be a lot of work to redo some parts, but it might add more variety to the difficulty.

00:40:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - that are so many straight lines.. ;o; my suggestion~ Try to fix
01:19:382 (1,2,3,4) - just wanted to say I love that part. Me too
02:01:382 (1) - you could delete the spinner and put a short stream here. like this stay the same.
02:36:182 (1,1,1,1) - it's alright that way, but you have many stacks at the center of the playfield, consider placing them somewhere else! Try to fix..?

Overall you can add more short streams here and there or create a bit of confusion if you change the order of circles in a straight line. (make it go like 1 2 4 3 5 6 for example)

Flower Dance

You don't have to use distance spacing, but in the beginning it might be too much to jump all over the playfield.. try to use it. c:

01:46:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it does look a bit.. extremely random(?).. maybe you find a nice pattern you can use there. Try to fix

..yep can't say much, cause I suck at Insane difficulties.. :c

Anyway, good luck with your map and hopfeully I could help you a bit. ^o^/

smallboat wrote:

路過

MyNameIsByeBye wrote:

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