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Frostmourne
Hi ~

Sandpig's Easy
00:36:769 (2) - end this slider with normal sample? , it will correspond with the previous slider with bass sound and I see you don't add finish here,which makes you change to soft hitsound and consistency with 00:42:416 (3) - 's head
00:59:887 (6) - since this is the easiest diff , new combo to help for hp drain? it fits with its phrase in music

Normal
00:02:004 (1) - this one after spinner is very fast for Normal diff. I would suggest you map through the spinner like this
00:14:004 (2) - nazi , move left a bit , try to make it more balance , x:198 y:68 would be the best
01:22:828 (4) - ugly curved slider, compared to the rest

Melo's Hard
00:36:769 (3) - add clap along with whistle on this slider's head to make it less empty

Collab
set audio lead in to 1710 to 1760
00:29:584 (7) - move this note to place like this because 4, 5, 6 have large distance which make this jump plays strange

Insane
00:43:387 (2) - add note here because real music is sounding here
01:09:945 (3) - whistle with finish on the head slider
01:10:475 (5) - whistle ^ if you added this one
if you don't whistle these points , remove whistle on this one's head 01:09:416 (1) -
01:32:887 (1) - remove new combo?
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi ~ hi ></

Normal
00:02:004 (1) - this one after spinner is very fast for Normal diff. I would suggest you map through the spinner like this this is the same as 01:12:416 cant get rid off of two spinners ==, also its not easyest diff in mapset, lets stay like this
00:14:004 (2) - nazi , move left a bit , try to make it more balance , x:198 y:68 would be the best yup
01:22:828 (4) - ugly curved slider, compared to the rest fixed :3

Insane
00:43:387 (2) - add note here because real music is sounding here yes ur right, changed a bit, added slider instead
01:09:945 (3) - whistle with finish on the head slider there was this kind of whistles already, i decided to remove it, right before ur mod
01:10:475 (5) - whistle ^ if you added this one ^
if you don't whistle these points , remove whistle on this one's head 01:09:416 (1) - yes i will stay with this
01:32:887 (1) - remove new combo? no ><, cute note! same as at start of map~
thx a lot for mod Frostmourne!
Mythol
thx frost fixed~
http://puu.sh/1hRNA
KuronumaSawako
Mod requested in my queue.

This is song is so catchy *--*
*put at my cellphone*

[General]


  1. Why two mp3 with the same song? Ok i think i understand why.
  2. Why Collab diff don't have kiai?

[Sandpig's Easy]


  1. Unsnapped green points at:
    00:31:093
  1. Well, this Easy diff is very good, but i miss the use of soft-hitclap2 here.

[Normal]


  1. 00:04:475 (1): Finish
  2. 00:07:298 (1): ^
  3. 00:10:122 (1): ^ in end too?
  4. 00:12:239 (4): Finish in end?
  5. 00:20:004 (3): Rotate selection centre to -31?
  6. Nothing special to say here...it's like i say in easy, but listening to the song, normal soft-clap would fit here too.

[Melo's Hard]


  1. Don't see problems here.

[Insane]


  1. I think AR-1 is better since AR in collab is 9 too. Nothing special to mention here.
  2. 01:22:475 (1,2,3): Loved this part *---*

[Collab]


[*]So amazing *--*

Sorry for making a shit mod with a full of suggestions, but map is really excellent. Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

Mythol wrote:

thx frost fixed~
http://puu.sh/1hRNA
updated!

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Mod requested in my queue. thx :3

[General]


  1. Why two mp3 with the same song? Ok i think i understand why. :3
  2. different mp3, different offset, different lead in :3
  3. Why Collab diff don't have kiai? added~

[Normal]


  1. 00:04:475 (1): Finish i think its unnecessary, will looks like finish spam
  2. 00:07:298 (1): ^ ^
  3. 00:10:122 (1): ^ in end too? yes
  4. 00:12:239 (4): Finish in end? added~
  5. 00:20:004 (3): Rotate selection centre to -31? hmm, i tryed but it will cause spacing error, so no
  6. Nothing special to say here...it's like i say in easy, but listening to the song, normal soft-clap would fit here too.

[Insane]


  1. I think AR-1 is better since AR in collab is 9 too. Nothing special to mention here. AR 9 ><
  2. 01:22:475 (1,2,3): Loved this part *---* *---*

Sorry for making a shit mod with a full of suggestions, but map is really excellent. Good Luck :)
thx for mod KuronumaSawako!
BeatofIke
Greetings h3k1ru! Request from my modding queue.
My goal is to offer mapping/modding assitance to the osu! communtiy!
Do you think I went too far in modding this map? XD


[General]
-> Near the end of the video has some NSFW content I believe. Although, I still like the video. :3

[SandPig's Easy]
00:01:651 (1) - I was thinking, try adding a clap at the end of this slider. It helps emphasize the drum and gives the map that extra moe~ effect! :3
00:03:063 (2) - To finish off that moe~ effect I suggested above, try adding a whistle at the reverse arrow and a clap at the end of this slider to finish off that effect. Please consider, you won't be disappointed! :3
00:04:475 (1) - Same as I suggested in 00:01:651 (1). Try adding a clap at the end of this slider for consistiency. It helps emphasize the drums. :3
00:05:887 (2) - Similar to 00:03:063 (2). Please consider adding a whistle at the end of this slider for consistiency.
00:06:945 (3) - Continuing from above suggestion, consider adding a clap here to emphasize the drums. :3
00:07:298 (1) - For consistiency, try adding a clap at the end of this slider as well to emphasize the drums :3
00:08:710 (2) - To finish off that effect, add a whistle at the reverse arrow and replace the finish with a clap at the end of this slider. Although, the finish you added is actually not bad. The reason why I suggested you to replace it with a clap is mainly because of hitsound consistency and because the claps will help emphasize the drums more than a finish.
00:10:122 (1) - At the end of this slider, try replacing the finish with a clap to help emphasize the drums. This is simialr to what I suggested on 00:08:710 (2) XD. The finish at the start of this slider fits very well with the music so please don't remove that finish.
00:11:004 (2) - I fully recommend replacing this finish with a whistle here. For a pattern like this, a "finish-whistle-finish" hitsound pattern will sound better than a "finish-finish-finish" hitsound pattern. You tend to spam finishes at 00:10:122 (1,2,3) making this part sound to plain and generic. So please consider this change. I think you might find it interesting :3
00:13:651 (1) - Be cafeful here. Since this circle is at the center of this grid, it stacks with the previous spinner's hit circle. Beginners can sometimes get confused by this, so I would suggest to move this circle to a more "beginner friendly" location. If this was a Hard and insane difficulty, I wouldn't have even suggested this. This is something to keep in mind.
Please keep this in mind.
00:14:357 (2) - Adding a clap at the end of this slider sounds better than a whistle since it emphasize the drums. Using a whistle to emphasize the drums usually doesn't fit imo. So please consider replacing it with a clap instead. :)
00:17:181 (2) - Same as I suggested above. Replace the whistle at the end of this slider with a clap since it helps emphasize the drums.
00:20:004 (2) - Same with this slider as well.
00:21:416 (3) - Remove this whistle at the end of this slider. There's really nothing to emphasize here.
00:22:475 (4) - Replace whistle with a clap instead to emphasize the drums. :D
00:22:828 (1) - Consider replacing this whistle with a clap as well (at the end of this slider).
00:24:945 (1,2) - Try adding a clap at the end of these sliders. You can hear drums playing here.
00:27:769 (1,2) - Same as above: You can hear drums playing here, so add a clap at the end of these sliders to match the drums.
00:29:887 (1) - Add a clap here too (at the end of this slider). Those drums in the music needs some emphasizing. :3
00:32:181 (2) - Similar to 00:11:004 (2). A "finish-whistle-finish" hitsound pattern will sound better than a "finish-finish-finish" hitsound pattern. So replace this finish with a whistle at the beginning of this slider.
00:33:416 (1,2) - What's the point of using the whistle to emphasize the vocals? it's usually a bad idea to use any type of hitsounds to emphasize the vocals. I recommend that you avoid doing this for the most part.
00:34:122 (3) - Consider replacing this finish with a whistle (at the end of this slider). A bit similar to 00:32:181 (2).
00:36:239 (1,2) - Very awkward pattern. Try adjusting this pattern like this (You don't have to adjust spacing afterwards):
SPOILER

352,80,36239,6,0,B|384:148,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,180,36769,2,0,B|320:204|320:264,1,105,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:36:239 (1,2) - After fixing the above, consider adding a whistle at the end of slider 1. Also, add a finish at the start of slider 2. Adding a whistle or a clap at the end of slider 2 doesn't sound bad either. :3
00:37:651 (1) - Try adding a whistle at the reverse arrow. It sounds pretty good here imo.
00:39:063 (2) - Remove this finsh since there is no finish audible in the music. If you want, you can also add a whistle here as well. :3
00:39:769 (3) - In this case, a "finish-whistle-whistle" would sound more fitting here. Spamming finishes isn't the way to go imo. In other words, replace the finish (at the reverse arrow and at the end of slider) with a whistle instead. :3
00:41:887 (2,3) - Simlar to 00:36:239 (1,2). Add a a whistle at the end of slider 2. and add a finish at the start of slider 3. Also adding a whistle or a clap at the end of slider 3 doesn't sound bad either. :3
00:43:298 (1) - Try adding a whistle at the reverse arrow of this slider. It sounds pretty nice imo.
00:44:710 (2) - I prefer a whistle here instead of a finish, since this sound is softer (more quiet) than at the prevoius circle (circle 1) and the next circle (circle 3).
00:46:122 (4) - Opposite of what I suggested at 00:39:769 (3). A "whistle-whistle-finish" would sound more fitting here XD. In other words, replace the finish with a whistle at the beginning of this slider. Also, add another whistle at the reverse arrow.
00:49:651 - 01:09:416: Some of your hitsound patterns you used in the kiai section sounds a bit strange to me (especially the claps). It sounds very inconsistent with the music. I recommend using the same hitsounds as the Normal Difficulty, since it's actually consistent with the music.
01:12:239 - 01:21:945: Follow the same hitsound patterns I suggested at the beginning of the song (00:01:651 - 00:11:357) to give it that moe~ effect and so that it's consistient with each other. :3 Also at 01:24:239 - 01:33:239, follow the same hitsound patterns I suggested at the beginning of the song.
01:33:239 (3) - Add a clap at the end of this slider to emphasize the drum.
01:34:122 (1) - Add a finish here to emphasize the finish here.
01:34:475 (2) - And lastly, add a whistle at the beginning of this slider and a finish at the end of this slider. :3

EDIT: This whole mod is ONLY for Easy Difficulty! I'll let Saten's mod handle the rest :3
Saten
[General]
What's the point in having a finish with the exact same sound as clap?
Why doesn't every diff use video? (Hard & Collab)

[Collab]
00:01:701 (8) - Regular soft-finish
00:24:113 (7,8,1) - NC on (7) instead, looks better on triple stacks imo
00:29:760 (8,9,1) - ^
00:48:113 (7,8,9) - increase the volume here, can barely hear the whistles here.
00:55:260 (7,1) - NC on (7) instead
00:56:584 (4,5,1) - ^
00:57:995 (6,7,1) - ^
01:17:760 (6,7,1) - ^
01:35:584 (SB) - Fade out collab_end.png as well?

[Insane]
00:06:945 (6) - Regular soft-finish
00:12:592 (1) - ^
00:23:710 (3) - regular soft-finish on tail
00:30:239 (2,1,2,3) - make equal spacing here?
00:32:534 (1) - regular soft-finish on head
00:34:122 (1) - ^
00:34:828 (4) - Regular soft-finish
00:35:181 (8) - Finish really necessary here?
00:42:416 (1) - Regular soft-finish
00:56:181 (2,3) - switch places with each-other (Ctrl+G)
00:59:357 (3) - Regular soft-finish
01:04:475 (1,2) - move these so (2) lands on 01:03:592 (1,2,3) -
01:10:828 (8) - Regular soft-finish
01:17:534 (5) - ^
01:19:828 (2,1,2,1) - make the spacing equal here?
01:28:827 (5) - Regular soft-finish

[Melon]
00:31:298 (4,5,6,7) - custom stacking on (6) it's kinda hard to see otherwise
00:31:651 (5) - set this back to auto (it's currently on drum)
00:50:357 (4,5,6) - NC on (4)? (5) was kinda hard to see
01:34:298 (1) - NC?

[Normal]
00:12:239 (4) - regular soft-finish on repeat
00:22:828 (3) - regular soft-finish on end
00:24:239 (4) - regular normal-finish
00:34:122 (4) - regular soft-finish on repeat
01:17:887 (1) - regular normal-finish
01:22:828 (4) - regular soft-finish on end
01:28:828 (6) - regular soft-finish
01:29:181 (1) - regular normal-finish


Will skip [Easy] because I just saw BeatofIke's mod lol
Don't wanna mention something that has already been brought up

Goodluck~
Melophobia

Saten wrote:

[Melon]
00:31:298 (4,5,6,7) - custom stacking on (6) it's kinda hard to see otherwise yes it is. will think of another pattern.
00:31:651 (5) - set this back to auto (it's currently on drum) ..ok
00:50:357 (4,5,6) - NC on (4)? (5) was kinda hard to see keep 1/1 newcomboin' here
01:34:298 (1) - NC? yes i think i should
Fixed video as well

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Melo's Hard]
00:54:240 (2,3) - too large spacing :< but not that hard

senaya wrote:

[hard]
01:19:828 (5) - stack it on (3)? no
01:20:357 (7,8) - reverse? no

Frostmourne wrote:

Melo's Hard
00:36:769 (3) - add clap along with whistle on this slider's head to make it less empty added finish instead
Thanks guys for mods~ :3
http://puu.sh/1i7xn
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

BeatofIke wrote:

[General]
-> Near the end of the video has some NSFW content I believe. Although, I still like the video. :3 it will be censored soon. i guess

Saten wrote:

[General]
What's the point in having a finish with the exact same sound as clap? they are not actually the same, but different volume
Why doesn't every diff use video? (Hard & Collab) i believe i added the video to Hard.. anyway Melo-sama already fixed that. about the Collab, it use SB instead of video~, as i know u cant use both video and SB.

[Insane]
00:35:181 (8) - Finish really necessary here? no, removed
00:56:181 (2,3) - switch places with each-other (Ctrl+G) looks good owo

this is the only stuff i fixed, sorry but i reject that soft finish changes, mostly because there already normal-finish used or other sounds like handbell, i really dont want to change em to soft-finish, sorry ><

[Normal]
00:12:239 (4) - regular soft-finish on repeat yup
00:22:828 (3) - regular soft-finish on end ok
00:24:239 (4) - regular normal-finish i stay with soft finish here~
00:34:122 (4) - regular soft-finish on repeat yup
01:17:887 (1) - regular normal-finish ok
01:22:828 (4) - regular soft-finish on end yes!
01:28:828 (6) - regular soft-finish hmm, no, want to stay with normal hit here
01:29:181 (1) - regular normal-finish yup

Goodluck~ thx!
thx for mod BeatofIke and Saten-san!

Melophobia wrote:

http://puu.sh/1i7xn
updated!
alacat
Hi heki >ω< and ero mappers ^^/

[General]
●If you can , change to BG size 800 x 600 → 1024 x 768 "collab_end"
●I think Lead in 2000 is better !

[Sandpig's Easy]
●00:31:298 (1) - remove new combo ?
●00:36:769 (2) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? easy to play imo !
●00:40:828 - remove finish ? it doesn't follow nothing ><
●00:44:357 - volume down to 40% ? and 45% in here.00:45:063 -
●00:48:769 - volume up to 50% ? Volume is slightly smaller ;_;
●00:58:122 (5) - add new combo
●01:07:651 - add note ? like this in here.00:56:357 -
●01:24:239 (1) - move to near the center ? too far o.o

[Normal]
●00:08:710 (4) - middle point to x:192 y:264 and end point to x:120 y:216 for stack on here.00:11:004 (2) - ah ,looks better !^^
●00:12:239 (4) - add finish at the head instead of whistle? I think needs finish sound :3
●00:13:651 (1) - 1 grid right(tiny) Because Make the spacing equal here >< 00:13:651 (1,2,3) - it is shifted a little!
●00:24:239 (4,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern ? stronger sound on here.00:24:239 (4) -
●00:27:063 - add new combo ~ same as ~ stronger sound!
●00:39:769 (4) - mmm try this ?
http://puu.sh/1iIEK
●00:44:004 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?
●01:19:298 (4) - end point 1 grid dwon(tiny). The reason is the same as here.00:08:710 (4) -

[Melo's Hard]
●00:00:945 (3) - 始点にwhistleを追加?
●00:34:828 (8,9) - 好みの問題ですが、直線ではなく00:43:298 (6,7) - ここのように段差をつけたほうがよく見えると思います。
●01:17:004 (7) - もっと曲げた方がいいと思います。
●01:31:651 - ここと01:33:239 - ここのfinishの音量は同じ大きさに聞こえるので60%か70%でそろえてみてはいかがでしょうか><

[Collab]
-SB-
●01:40:525 - I think it needs fade at last >< !
-xsrsbsns-
●01:00:289 (1) - add finish or whistle ?
-Mythol-
●00:23:937 (6) - add finish ?
●00:53:584 (6) - more spacing ? :3 make jump !

[Insane]
●00:11:710 (1,2) - hmm .. I think clap sound is better around 40% volume
●00:37:122 (2,3,4) - like this ? should turn to the right a little more, the flow is good ></
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473407
●01:27:416 (4) - Ctrl + G ?

cRyo(ノ・ω・)ノ ~ cRyo(」・ω・)」 ~ cRyo(/・ω・)/ ~ !

sry poor mod ;_; Hope you fine this helpful ~ :3
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

alacat wrote:

Hi heki >ω< and ero mappers ^^/ >///<

[General]
●If you can , change to BG size 800 x 600 → 1024 x 768 "collab_end" isnt SB images restricted to 800x600? i thought so~
●I think Lead in 2000 is better ! 1760 lead in + 240 offset = 2000 ^.^

[Normal]
●00:08:710 (4) - middle point to x:192 y:264 and end point to x:120 y:216 for stack on here.00:11:004 (2) - ah ,looks better !^^ ok!
●00:12:239 (4) - add finish at the head instead of whistle? I think needs finish sound :3 uhm no, its follows to 01:22:828 also~
●00:13:651 (1) - 1 grid right(tiny) Because Make the spacing equal here >< 00:13:651 (1,2,3) - it is shifted a little! ok~
●00:24:239 (4,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern ? stronger sound on here.00:24:239 (4) - hm.. no..
●00:27:063 - add new combo ~ same as ~ stronger sound! but the combo following vocal, not the music here ><
●00:39:769 (4) - mmm try this ? need ask mythol ww
http://puu.sh/1iIEK
●00:44:004 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ? ok!
●01:19:298 (4) - end point 1 grid dwon(tiny). The reason is the same as here.00:08:710 (4) - fixed~

[Collab]
-SB-
●01:40:525 - I think it needs fade at last >< ! nope, the score appears faster than SB ends~


[Insane]
●00:11:710 (1,2) - hmm .. I think clap sound is better around 40% volume why clap there o:, nono, whistle
●00:37:122 (2,3,4) - like this ? should turn to the right a little more, the flow is good ></ yes!
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473407
●01:27:416 (4) - Ctrl + G ? yup, also changed a bit

cRyo(ノ・ω・)ノ ~ cRyo(」・ω・)」 ~ cRyo(/・ω・)/ ~ !

sry poor mod ;_; Hope you fine this helpful ~ :3
thx for mod alacat!
Sandpig
http://puu.sh/1jdeP

fixed some, thx for mod :3
Lita_old_1
go Go GO!!!!!!!! 三三☆

Nice Map &Good Luck!!!
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

Sandpig wrote:

http://puu.sh/1jdeP

fixed some, thx for mod :3
updated!

Yusura Sakurae wrote:

go Go GO!!!!!!!! 三三☆

Nice Map &Good Luck!!!
thx star Yusura Sakurae!
Aleks719
We fixed:
  1. Too long Audio lead-in in Easy
  2. Wrong snapped preview in Collab
  3. Some patterns and hitsounds in Insane
  4. Unsnapped note in Normal
  5. couple of whistles were added on normal
Video has one questionable moment, but i guess it shouldn't be a problem. And video doesn't work in collab diff specially because of SB.
Good luck :)
pufff
Topic Starter
h3k1ru
thx a lot Aleks719!
Topic Starter
h3k1ru
selfpopped

reason: changed video to more censored version

no other changes have been made
Aleks719
repaired~


i'll be first, who will say it in this thread in a right day /(ovo)/

Happy birthday, cRyo :)
Andrea
Time to go! Happy birthday cRyo!

Ranked~
Mythol
Happy Birthday!!! ♥
xsrsbsns
wooo happy birthday cRyo~!
Topic Starter
h3k1ru
thx a lot Andrea! and Happy Birthday cRyo (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)♥
BeatofIke
SO moe~ I love it!
Happy birthday! :)
_Azusa_
gratz!
and Happy Birthday cRyo ^^
cRyo[iceeicee]
Thanks Aleks719 & Andrea :)
And Thanks too everyone especially (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)♥ for this present www ><
<333333333333333333333
Markie
nice map, gratz!
Melophobia
Congratz h3k1 and Happy birthday cRyo!! <3
ryuu
congratulations, sandpig, mythol, h3k1, melophobia and xsrsbsns \>w</

and happy birthday, icee-nyan \;wwww;/
alacat
(」・ω・)」cRyo ~ !(/・ω・)/cRyo ~ !

(」・ω・)」happy ~!(/・ω・)/birthday ~!


congrats on Ranked heki \^^/
Kite
grats! happy birthday cRyo ><<<<
Vicho
HAPPY BIRTHDAY cRyo-sama!! ヾ(。・ω・。)
KSHR
gratz ranked~!

and.. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, cRyo~ (ღ˘˘ღ) ♥
Quilt
gratz and happybirthday :D
Sandpig
wake up seeing this ranked

happy birthday cRyo \:D/
mana vayne
gratz! and happy birthday Cryo~ (ღ˘˘ღ) ♥
Kawayi Rika
Happy birthday moe cRyo <333
Lita_old_1
Congratulation !! & Happy Birthday! cRyo!
senaya
крио, желаю тебе больше хекиры в твоей жизни :3
Scorpiour
Happy Birthday \cRyo/
Aleks719

senaya wrote:

крио, желаю тебе больше хекиры в твоей жизни :3
ahaha


be careful, you can get overdose \(ovo)/
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