so yeah not sure about 01:33:992 (1) - not being right because it sounds pretty spot on to me the timing on this is solid if you have never messed with ingram's work before it might seem that way but it is right he mixes live performances with machine music as well so things can get confusing
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Re-check~ no kd for this post.
[Easy]
00:20:656 (1,2,3) - hmm this still bothers me and it doesn't look nice if (1) is overlapped like that, so i'm suggesting this code to make it look neater IMO.
[Insane]
00:15:531 (8) - consider a whistle at the end of this slider since it'll emphasize the vocals like the beginning.
and that's all for now.
[Easy]
00:20:656 (1,2,3) - hmm this still bothers me and it doesn't look nice if (1) is overlapped like that, so i'm suggesting this code to make it look neater IMO.
SPOILER
432,140,20656,6,0,P|488:212|413:279,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,294,22156,2,0,L|209:270,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,180,23156,2,0,P|160:192|156:232,2,75,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Insane]
00:15:531 (8) - consider a whistle at the end of this slider since it'll emphasize the vocals like the beginning.
and that's all for now.
i think everything looks good and ready to go, so here's your bubble 
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.One thing to mind: 01:25:156 - causes the next timing section to be unsnapped by 36, and 01:27:718 - causes the next timing section to be unsnapped by 28ms, and so on. Find the right bpm values that make these all snap because you can.
Additionally, in Easy, you have sliders like 01:30:347 (1) - that cross timing points, which cannot happen since they will leave the slider end unsnapped as the slider keeps the initial slider velocity as indicated by the section in which it started.
Additionally, in Easy, you have sliders like 01:30:347 (1) - that cross timing points, which cannot happen since they will leave the slider end unsnapped as the slider keeps the initial slider velocity as indicated by the section in which it started.
the timing points have been fixed and it should be resolved, so here's your bubble back.
irc mod
2013-07-12 16:43 pimpG: hi there
2013-07-12 16:43 CDFA: hi :3
2013-07-12 16:43 pimpG: i see you are close to rank becoming popular <3
2013-07-12 16:43 pimpG: but what about the video?
2013-07-12 16:43 CDFA: Yup <33~
2013-07-12 16:43 CDFA: what about the vidoe? owo
2013-07-12 16:44 pimpG: it has video b4
2013-07-12 16:44 pimpG: and with good quality
2013-07-12 16:44 pimpG: oh wait
2013-07-12 16:44 pimpG: the video is in the folder
2013-07-12 16:45 CDFA: lol :3
2013-07-12 16:45 pimpG: but i dont see a "no video" in the download page
2013-07-12 16:46 CDFA:
2013-07-12 16:46 pimpG: weird bug 0_0
2013-07-12 16:46 pimpG: did you noticed that already?
2013-07-12 16:46 CDFA: When I look at it from the beatmap listing, it says there's a novid link
2013-07-12 16:47 CDFA: but it's not on the page D:
2013-07-12 16:47 pimpG: ah, and the video still have audio
2013-07-12 16:47 CDFA:
2013-07-12 16:47 CDFA: oh
2013-07-12 16:47 CDFA: no
2013-07-12 16:47 pimpG: i can give you a no audio version
2013-07-12 16:47 pimpG: yes still include audio
2013-07-12 16:49 pimpG: http://puu.sh/3BkAI.png proof
2013-07-12 16:49 pimpG: i'll remove the audio and send it to you
2013-07-12 16:50 pimpG: haha, now the video is 9 mb
2013-07-12 16:50 CDFA: oh dam it does
2013-07-12 16:50 pimpG: that proves that it was audio included
2013-07-12 16:50 CDFA: o//o
2013-07-12 16:50 CDFA: And the audio is dam nice too like omg
2013-07-12 16:53 pimpG: you should contact the bats about this bug i guess
2013-07-12 16:53 pimpG: or maybe it will fix itself when you submit the new video >w<
2013-07-12 16:53 CDFA: Yay >w<
2013-07-12 16:54 pimpG: http://puu.sh/3BkPe.flv
2013-07-12 16:54 CDFA: yay thx bby <3~
2013-07-12 16:54 CDFA: ilu
2013-07-12 16:54 pimpG: : 3
2013-07-12 16:55 pimpG: did my timing gave you much trouble?
2013-07-12 16:55 CDFA: It was really good timing, even ztrot liked it <3. I had to make some changes since those said it had to be snapped to the timeline and stuff, but it was very good :3
2013-07-12 16:55 CDFA: ACTION snuggles pimpG
2013-07-12 16:56 pimpG: great ^^
2013-07-12 16:56 pimpG: it was from 5 months ago
2013-07-12 16:56 pimpG: now im even better
2013-07-12 16:56 pimpG: you can ask me for more timing checks ofc
2013-07-12 16:59 CDFA: moe :3
2013-07-12 17:00 pimpG: desu!!
2013-07-12 17:00 CDFA: mya <3
2013-07-12 17:07 pimpG: found an issue and another thing
2013-07-12 17:07 CDFA: :O
2013-07-12 17:07 CDFA: Oh noes!~
2013-07-12 17:08 pimpG: 01:36:345 - easy - spacing was messed because of bpm, you should place with your eyes judgment, not ds
2013-07-12 17:08 CDFA:
2013-07-12 17:08 CDFA: moe
2013-07-12 17:08 pimpG: compare the previous / next
2013-07-12 17:09 pimpG: 01:36:288 (4) - hard - unsnapped
2013-07-12 17:12 CDFA: Both fixed <3~ moenya
2013-07-12 17:12 pimpG: ^_^
2013-07-12 17:12 CDFA: :3
2013-07-12 17:13 pimpG: last spinner in hard is 1/16
2013-07-12 17:13 pimpG: in insane its 1/4
2013-07-12 17:13 pimpG: is that right?
2013-07-12 17:14 pimpG: only hard starts on 1/16
2013-07-12 17:15 CDFA:
2013-07-12 17:15 pimpG: oh its rebubbled 0-0
2013-07-12 17:16 CDFA: OR IS IT
2013-07-12 17:16 CDFA: NOT WHEN I'M THROUGH WITH THIS BUBBLE
2013-07-12 17:16 CDFA: RRRAAUUGHHH
2013-07-12 17:16 pimpG: lol
2013-07-12 17:18 pimpG: if you are going to pop it can i post irc mod?
2013-07-12 17:18 CDFA: sure
2013-07-12 17:19 pimpG: thx ^^
2013-07-12 17:19 pimpG: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/205331 Daniel Ingram - Becoming Popular [Normal]]
2013-07-12 17:19 pimpG: ops
2013-07-12 17:19 CDFA: ops
2013-07-12 17:19 pimpG: / savelog
2013-07-12 16:43 CDFA: hi :3
2013-07-12 16:43 pimpG: i see you are close to rank becoming popular <3
2013-07-12 16:43 pimpG: but what about the video?
2013-07-12 16:43 CDFA: Yup <33~
2013-07-12 16:43 CDFA: what about the vidoe? owo
2013-07-12 16:44 pimpG: it has video b4
2013-07-12 16:44 pimpG: and with good quality
2013-07-12 16:44 pimpG: oh wait
2013-07-12 16:44 pimpG: the video is in the folder
2013-07-12 16:45 CDFA: lol :3
2013-07-12 16:45 pimpG: but i dont see a "no video" in the download page
2013-07-12 16:46 CDFA:
2013-07-12 16:46 pimpG: weird bug 0_0
2013-07-12 16:46 pimpG: did you noticed that already?
2013-07-12 16:46 CDFA: When I look at it from the beatmap listing, it says there's a novid link
2013-07-12 16:47 CDFA: but it's not on the page D:
2013-07-12 16:47 pimpG: ah, and the video still have audio
2013-07-12 16:47 CDFA:
2013-07-12 16:47 CDFA: oh
2013-07-12 16:47 CDFA: no
2013-07-12 16:47 pimpG: i can give you a no audio version
2013-07-12 16:47 pimpG: yes still include audio
2013-07-12 16:49 pimpG: http://puu.sh/3BkAI.png proof
2013-07-12 16:49 pimpG: i'll remove the audio and send it to you
2013-07-12 16:50 pimpG: haha, now the video is 9 mb
2013-07-12 16:50 CDFA: oh dam it does
2013-07-12 16:50 pimpG: that proves that it was audio included
2013-07-12 16:50 CDFA: o//o
2013-07-12 16:50 CDFA: And the audio is dam nice too like omg
2013-07-12 16:53 pimpG: you should contact the bats about this bug i guess
2013-07-12 16:53 pimpG: or maybe it will fix itself when you submit the new video >w<
2013-07-12 16:53 CDFA: Yay >w<
2013-07-12 16:54 pimpG: http://puu.sh/3BkPe.flv
2013-07-12 16:54 CDFA: yay thx bby <3~
2013-07-12 16:54 CDFA: ilu
2013-07-12 16:54 pimpG: : 3
2013-07-12 16:55 pimpG: did my timing gave you much trouble?
2013-07-12 16:55 CDFA: It was really good timing, even ztrot liked it <3. I had to make some changes since those said it had to be snapped to the timeline and stuff, but it was very good :3
2013-07-12 16:55 CDFA: ACTION snuggles pimpG
2013-07-12 16:56 pimpG: great ^^
2013-07-12 16:56 pimpG: it was from 5 months ago
2013-07-12 16:56 pimpG: now im even better
2013-07-12 16:56 pimpG: you can ask me for more timing checks ofc
2013-07-12 16:59 CDFA: moe :3
2013-07-12 17:00 pimpG: desu!!
2013-07-12 17:00 CDFA: mya <3
2013-07-12 17:07 pimpG: found an issue and another thing
2013-07-12 17:07 CDFA: :O
2013-07-12 17:07 CDFA: Oh noes!~
2013-07-12 17:08 pimpG: 01:36:345 - easy - spacing was messed because of bpm, you should place with your eyes judgment, not ds
2013-07-12 17:08 CDFA:
2013-07-12 17:08 CDFA: moe
2013-07-12 17:08 pimpG: compare the previous / next
2013-07-12 17:09 pimpG: 01:36:288 (4) - hard - unsnapped
2013-07-12 17:12 CDFA: Both fixed <3~ moenya
2013-07-12 17:12 pimpG: ^_^
2013-07-12 17:12 CDFA: :3
2013-07-12 17:13 pimpG: last spinner in hard is 1/16
2013-07-12 17:13 pimpG: in insane its 1/4
2013-07-12 17:13 pimpG: is that right?
2013-07-12 17:14 pimpG: only hard starts on 1/16
2013-07-12 17:15 CDFA:
2013-07-12 17:15 pimpG: oh its rebubbled 0-0
2013-07-12 17:16 CDFA: OR IS IT
2013-07-12 17:16 CDFA: NOT WHEN I'M THROUGH WITH THIS BUBBLE
2013-07-12 17:16 CDFA: RRRAAUUGHHH
2013-07-12 17:16 pimpG: lol
2013-07-12 17:18 pimpG: if you are going to pop it can i post irc mod?
2013-07-12 17:18 CDFA: sure
2013-07-12 17:19 pimpG: thx ^^
2013-07-12 17:19 pimpG: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/205331 Daniel Ingram - Becoming Popular [Normal]]
2013-07-12 17:19 pimpG: ops
2013-07-12 17:19 CDFA: ops
2013-07-12 17:19 pimpG: / savelog
good luck
ok this should be the official decision. be careful next time.
Hi again!
- [Easy]
- 00:44:156 - Snap the break here? :p nazi hueee
- 00:11:156 (4) - This slider is too short. Better finish it at 00:12:156 since this point is a much more important beat than 00:11:906.
- 01:29:709 (2) - I suggest removing this note. The guitar sounds earlier than where this note is, that's why it sounds off. Better remove it imo.
- 01:31:680 (2) - This repeat sounds awful o.o please consider making this slider shorter, end at 01:33:005 and repeat at 01:32:342. :3 it doesnt follow completely the vocal but it sounds more accurate than your current way. btw if you do this remember to add whistle at the repeat of this slider (i recommend adding only at the repeat :3).
- [Normal]
- 00:34:156 (2,3,4)- Inconsistent spacing. Fix this with DS~
- 00:41:156 (5) - How about adding a soft whistle at the repeat like you did with your Easy difficulty?
- 00:44:156 - Snap the break here? nazi again hueee
- 01:11:156 (2) - You can use this curve to blanket 01:10:656 (1). Then, you can try moving 01:12:656 (3) to 01:10:656 (1)'s place, for a more clean pattern imo. Just a suggestion though.
- 01:19:156 (6) - Nazi again :p place this note at the center of this curved pattern (x204 y164 if possible)
- 01:30:347 (4) - The end of this slider sounds too early. It's not snapped to the red line at 01:31:672. You can try removing a repeat of 01:30:347 (4) and then adding a note at 01:31:305 and then moving 01:32:334 (5) to 01:31:672.
- 01:32:342 (4) - The whistle at the end sounds too redundant. I suggest you to remove it!
- 01:34:259 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing again (by a grid or less only ><)
- [Hard]
- 00:15:531 (8) - The whistle here sounds awful and out of place. You should remove it.
- 00:15:531 (8) - I think i pointed out this already in my previous mod. This slider sounds ughhg it follows the vocals but it breaks the flow. How about adding a note 00:15:406 and a 1/2 slider at 00:15:656 - ? Sounds better with the vocals.
- 00:20:156 - How about adding a note here? that's an important beat with that piano sound. Feels awkward ignored like this ;_;
- 00:44:156 - Snap correctly? huee
- 01:32:342 (7) - This whistle at the end sounds bad. Better add the whistle at the start of the slider and remove the one at the end. :3
- 01:40:262 (1) - Is this nc really necessary? She says Should know, it's part of the same verse so you may want to make them part of the same combo. :p
- [Insane]
- 00:09:156 (5) - The whistle in this slider sounds too noisy and awful, please remove it. ;_;
- 00:10:656 (3,4) - To improve the hitsounding a bit, consider adding whistle at the end of 00:10:656 (3) and remove whistle of 00:11:531 (4).
- 00:18:656 (2,3,4) - Same here! ^
- 00:44:156 - SNAAP BREAK >:l
- 01:13:656 - This sounds odd. Try adding a note here with clap and remove the clap of 01:13:281 (2). Sounds better and adds more flow to this rhythm.
- 01:18:281 - How about adding a note here to keep following the stream??
- 01:32:342 (6) - Again, how about adding whistle at the start of this slider and removing the one at the end of it?
- 01:31:680 (5,6) - Instead of making a ugly pattern (imo thats ugly ;_; how the end gets covered by that note) you can try a better rhythm. Replace 01:31:680 (5) with a slider that ends at 01:32:342, then add to it a repeat. Sounds much better imo. I highly suggest you this. ;_;
- 01:36:334 (7,8) - Is this inconsistent spacing intentional? If so, why? It doesnt make sense imo.
Rechecking~
- Easy
- 01:34:259 (1) - Can you move this slider slightly up, just a little bit. So it doesnt look like this. Yes I'm very nazi orz
- Normal
- 00:32:156 (4) - This slider doesn't make too much sense ending at that red tick. It sounds more according to the vocals if you extend it to 00:33:156. As always, just a suggestion.
- 00:41:156 (5) - You didn't replace the clap with a softwhistle like in your other diffs?
- 00:44:156 - You didn't snap this hue~
- Hard
- 00:15:406 (8,9) - I like the pattern you used but it's the only pattern you made like this in the whole difficulty. It makes it senseless. Why not going for a 1/2 pattern like the rest used in this difficulty? The one I suggested you works pretty good: note at 00:15:406 and a 1/2 slider that starts at 00:15:656 and ends at 00:15:906.
- 00:41:156 (4) - Again about whistle at the repeat. It's not only about consistency, but making it sound better.
- Insane
- 01:18:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make this stream look more neat? sorry for being annoying, it's just a polishment. :3
- 01:31:680 (5) - Whistle at the repeat, not at the end! you forgot to change it ;_;
Bang! 
Congratz! CDFA :3!
Becoming CDFA.
snakeee i was gonna mod this now wut
anyways congratz~ (i will just nod another pending of urs i guess xD)
anyways congratz~ (i will just nod another pending of urs i guess xD)
congratulations CDFA 
more pone songs eez gud