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kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2012-10-28T11:21:41+00:00

Note that kds is only given to a helpful mod.

Athena Tennos

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Athena Tennos 2012-10-29T04:17:56+00:00

qq944364487 wrote:
http://puu.sh/1jDhr
我来自重了

偶去~好多了...至少不会papapa的好恐怖了...~>_>剩下的让modder来戳好了>_>

kanpakyin wrote:
Note that kds is only given to a helpful mod.

切~想蹭几个SP居然被发现了..>_>话说不是GD也可以给KDs么...

Last edited by kanpakyin 2012-10-29T14:34:44+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

[Mahua]

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[Mahua] 2012-10-30T04:32:37+00:00

Athena Tennos wrote:
qq944364487 wrote:
http://puu.sh/1jDhr
我来自重了

偶去~好多了...至少不会papapa的好恐怖了...~>_>剩下的让modder来戳好了>_>

求把hit换成无声 orz 我才发现传错了>_>

Athena Tennos

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Athena Tennos 2012-10-30T04:33:46+00:00

qq944364487 wrote:
Athena Tennos wrote:
偶去~好多了...至少不会papapa的好恐怖了...~>_>剩下的让modder来戳好了>_>

求把hit换成无声 orz 我才发现传错了>_>

哈？~

EDIT: Mei_Con part done~

Pokie

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Pokie 2012-11-04T06:17:04+00:00

大坑

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Strawberry 2012-11-11T10:12:09+00:00

SPOILER

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edit: 发现一点问题，06:13:218 - 这里再加一根x1.0的绿线~~刚才忘了讲，后面的slider都跑偏惹 xDD

来补上mod :3

[KayeSara]
00:12:193 (4) - add a whistle?? and add a finish on the (6), sounds good imo~:3
00:13:988 (3) - put whistle on the tail of slider for the slidertick of (1).
00:15:013 (1) - same as above for 00:16:039 (3) - 's slidertick
00:20:142 (3) - change clap to finish or just add finish on the tail of the slider? idk.. :p
00:24:757 (9) - add finish?
00:33:475 (1) - ^
00:41:167 (9) - ^
00:41:680 (1) - finish on the head?
00:46:808 (3,4) - how about add whitles? it's suitable
00:48:603 (4,5,6) - whistle (or add them on (5,6))
01:02:193 (3) - nc here? and add a finish on the start of the slider?
01:18:603 (1) - finish on the head?
01:31:936 (3) - i think the clap should be put on the end of slider rather than the start?

[raririn]
01:35:013 (4) - nc
01:43:218 (5) - add a nc here and ctrl+g? it's funny to play
01:55:526 (5) - nc here?
02:05:783 (1) - end at 02:07:321 - ? it's so closed to the next note that hard to notice
02:12:193 - ~02:13:475 - umm..idk..however i think you can remove this break for it is useless
02:21:936 (5) - add nc here
02:27:834 (4) - ^ that's reasonable
02:29:885 (4) - nc here rather than 02:30:398 (1) - ?...
02:35:783 - add a note?.. plays awkward..

[Sun Rainbow]
03:09:629 - add a note here? :3
03:15:654 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 好坑爹
03:22:193 (5) - whistle
03:25:783 (12) - finish
03:36:295 (3) - 。。这个有点鬼畜。。球减点速，不然感觉很容易拉断啊

o
03:37:577 (1) - ^
03:58:090 (4) - change to default soft finish? the custom's is so weak that hard to hear anymore..
04:02:706 (3) - nc here?

[qq944364487]
overmapped.. idk how to mod :p

[x847606653]
好像还没加音效诶:3
06:20:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 怎么和日彩虹一样坑OAQ
06:28:347 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
06:42:706 (1) - spacing.. a bit confused...

[Mei_coN]
06:56:808 (5) - move to x:100 y:304? flow better imo :3
07:15:526 (1) - touched HP bar
07:43:475 (5) - add a clap here?
07:51:424 (4) - set a clap on the tail?

[Nyan]
08:14:501 - add a circle after (5) to consistent as 08:16:552 (8) -
08:23:218 (3) - add a whistle on the end of slider? sounds better imo
08:24:244 (7) - if you changed above, also add whistle on the head of slider and (8)
08:33:475 (7) - nc here to consistent as 08:35:270 (1) -
09:06:295 (2,3,4,5,6) - awkward.. try this? --> http://puu.sh/1oWTJ

[Flask]
10:11:936 (1) - so closed to the next note.. how about end at 10:13:475 - ?

[______VOSE]
10:47:834 (2) - the nc should be set in here rather than 10:47:706 (1) -
10:55:013 (1) - nc?
11:01:167 (6) - ^
11:03:988 (4,7) - how about add nc on these circle? it's more clearly to read :3
11:09:372 (4) - nc
11:17:577 (6) - ^
11:19:629 (5) - ^

[Fionana]
这边好像也还没有下音效:3
11:25:783 (5) - nc here~
11:31:936 (5) - i would like to put a nc here :3
11:42:706 (3) - nc
11:43:731 (6) - if you followed above, also add a nc here
11:51:167 (5) - ^
12:19:629 (2) - ctrl+G? :p
12:21:167 (5) - i'd like to set a nc on here also
12:25:013 (6) - nc?

[Athena Tennos]
14:13:731 (8) - spacing?
14:34:501 - honestly i feel shortened it to end at 14:34:501 - is more suitable..
最喜欢这段:3

好图 ( >///<

Last edited by Strawberry 2012-11-11T12:07:51+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

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Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-11T10:20:51+00:00

Strawberry wrote:

SPOILER

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edit: 发现一点问题，06:13:218 - 这里再加一根x1.0的绿线~~刚才忘了讲，后面的slider都跑偏惹 xDD fix!~

all clear~
submit!~

Flower

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Flower 2012-11-11T11:03:18+00:00

射一个。占楼待编，如果什么时候想要mod欢迎通过各种方式来找我~

Athena Tennos

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Athena Tennos 2012-11-11T11:04:50+00:00

Flower wrote:
射一个。占楼待编，如果什么时候想要mod欢迎通过各种方式来找我~

lol!~thx star~
等最后图快成型的时候再来找你mod>_<!~

Athena Tennos

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Athena Tennos 2012-11-12T00:48:38+00:00

Strawberry's mod~

Strawberry wrote:
[Athena Tennos]
14:13:731 (8) - spacing? fix~
14:34:501 - honestly i feel shortened it to end at 14:34:501 - is more suitable..fix~
最喜欢这段:3

好图 ( >///<

thx mod!~lol!~and star!~

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined July 2011

Flask 2012-11-12T00:52:19+00:00

@Strawberry: k

诶那我就不附件了 >_>> 10:11:936 (1) -結尾幫我往前移1/2

Athena Tennos

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Athena Tennos 2012-11-12T00:54:12+00:00

Flask wrote:
@Strawberry: k

诶那我就不附件了 >_>> 10:11:936 (1) -結尾幫我往前移1/2

ok~fix!~

mintong89

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Joined July 2011

mintong89 2012-11-12T01:09:54+00:00

路过送星~

Athena Tennos

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Athena Tennos 2012-11-12T01:15:39+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
路过送星~

lol！！！~thx star！~

Athena Tennos

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Athena Tennos 2012-11-18T07:46:07+00:00

Strawberry wrote:
[Athena Tennos]
14:13:731 (8) - spacing? fix~
14:34:501 - honestly i feel shortened it to end at 14:34:501 - is more suitable.. fix~
最喜欢这段:3 lol~thx!~

好图 ( >///<

lol~thx mod.....orz

jesse7419

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Joined March 2011

jesse7419 2012-11-18T08:28:34+00:00

還真的做完了

star~

Athena Tennos

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Athena Tennos 2012-11-18T09:23:31+00:00

jesse7419 wrote:
還真的做完了

star~

thx star！~

Star Stream

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Joined June 2010

Star Stream 2012-11-19T14:19:27+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

Rename to 'Collab' or something like that
Consider adding name tags SB for the diff

[Collab]

01:14:501 (1) - stack its body on 01:13:988 (4) - 's tail
01:30:911 - clap
01:32:449 - ^
01:35:013 (4) - NC
01:43:218 (5) - ^
01:53:218 (7) - your combo doesn't make sense at all, start combo from here, not 01:54:244 (1) -
02:05:013 (4,5) - ctrl+g for better movement
02:30:783 (2) - unexpected 1/4 jump, reduce its distance
02:33:860 (4) - ^
02:35:142 (2) - ^
02:43:731 (1,1) - i don't see why you NCed here, remove both or at least 02:44:116 (1) -
02:45:783 (4) - not so good to see, stack on the slider's tail
02:50:398 (2) - embrassing, no SV change or use at least 1.5x for here
03:15:654 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - too hard to play unless the player is pro. if pro, even hard when the player play it with DT. don't separate them
03:29:885 (3,4,5) - 1grid up to stack 4 on the slider
03:31:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no, it's too sharp, are you really making a 'Collab' diff or just your own part for you? don't break its diff spread
03:32:962 (4) - NC
03:36:295 (3) - 1.5x for here
03:37:577 (1) - doesn't make sense at all, i'd add a 1/6 slider from 03:37:321 - to 03:37:577 - (yes, with 2 arrows) instead
03:39:629 (5) - ctrl+g for better play
03:47:577 (2,3) - seems you're just copying other members' style, idk, but that slider doesn't make sense, maybe find other ways
04:04:757 (6) - NC
04:10:911 - idk who mapped this part. but well, for the mapper, remap this part. you're breaking its diff spread, which means you're turning this map to unrankable
05:44:116 (5) - 1grid right,down for better movement
06:09:885 (7) - NC
06:10:911 (15) - ^
06:11:936 (23) - ^
06:12:706 (1) - remove NC
06:13:218 (1,2,3) - wrong beats, here's actually 1/6
06:13:988 (4) - NC for downbeat, kiai start, mood change
06:17:065 (8,1,2) - kinda hard patterns to hit, just 5 circles or slider - slider - circle plz
06:19:116 (1) - really unexpected rhythm/distance change, NC at least
06:20:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - don't make me angry, delete
06:25:270 (1,2,3) - same as 06:17:065 (8,1,2) -
06:27:321 (3) - same as 06:19:116 (1) -
06:28:347 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - same as 06:20:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -
06:38:347 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - rhythms don't make sense at all, especially that 3/4 sliders, remap that notes
06:46:039 - slider from here to 06:46:295 - (maybe 1/2 with an arrow)
06:46:808 (2) - NC
07:02:193 (9) - ^
07:40:142 (2) - same as 06:13:988 (4) -
07:59:629 (4) - NC for jump
08:01:680 (3) - arrow is hidden by 08:00:654 (1) -
08:27:321 (5) - NC
08:47:834 (1) - NC for after spinner
08:49:116 (6,7,8) - 1/6 beats for here
09:21:680 (5) - NC
10:06:808 (9) - 2nd arrow is hidden by 10:06:295 (7) -
11:04:244 (5) - NC
11:25:013 (2,3,4) - 1/6 beats for here
11:44:244 (7) - NC
11:48:347 (4) - ^
12:51:295 (5) - delete
13:40:654 (1,2) - embarassing, too far from center

Sorry but its quality makes me lazy and i don't see any rankability with this map
Good luck then

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-20T00:58:12+00:00

Star Stream's mod~

Star Stream wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
Rename to 'Collab' or something like that hmm~~i think just ok~>_>~
Consider adding name tags SB for the diff making~
[Collab]
13:40:654 (1,2) - embarassing, too far from center fix~
Sorry but its quality makes me lazy and i don't see any rankability with this map =w=i'll slowly and fix it become to rankable~=w=
Good luck then

thx ur mod...lol..;_;~

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2012-11-23T11:57:40+00:00

[KayeSara]

00:12:193 (4,6) - whistle
00:20:142 (3) - 尾部whistle
00:21:680 (2) - 看起来好难受(趴)
00:25:270 (1) - 头finish
00:33:475 (1) - finish
00:39:629 (1) - whistle
00:40:654 (6) - ^
00:41:680 (1) - 头finish
00:46:808 (3,4) - whistle
00:48:860 (5,6) - ^
00:49:885 (1) - 头finish
00:54:501 (3,7) - whistle
01:02:193 (3) - 头finish
01:05:783 (5,1) - 这个2hit听起来不太好
01:10:398 (1) - 头finish
01:18:603 (1) - ^
01:19:372 (2) - 滑条尾巴whistle
01:21:936 (6,7) - whistle
01:22:706 (1) - 头finish
01:23:731 (3) - 头whistle
01:25:783 (7) - 末尾whistle
01:26:552 (9) - add note?
01:26:808 (1) - 头finish
01:27:834 (3) - 头whistle
01:30:911 (1,2,3,4) - 哇,好绕;_;
01:31:936 (3) - 头clap去掉
01:33:988 (3) - 头whistle

[raririn]
01:35:013 (4) - NC?
02:13:475 (1,2) - 感觉略勉强
02:18:090 (1,2,3) - ^

[Sun Rainbow]
03:11:808 (7,8,9) - ^
03:27:321 (4) - 拉好点?
03:47:577 (2,3) - 太勉强
03:54:244 (2) - REmove clap

[qq944364487]
04:26:808 (1,2,1) - 这梗尽量避免
04:27:065 (1) - REmove Nc
04:51:167 (5,1) - 间距
04:59:629 (1) - NC
05:16:039 (1) - REmove finish

[Strawberry 大草莓]
05:28:860 (1) - finish
05:40:911 (9) - REmove finish
05:41:167 (1) - 如果要加finish,就加到这

[x847606653]
噗...怎么没音效
06:42:706 (1) - 间距

[Mei_coN]
07:05:526 (2,3,4,5) - 感觉勉强
07:13:731 (2,3) - ^

[-[NYAN]- 小猫]
08:23:603 (4) - whistle
08:24:629 (8) - ^

[______VOSE]
10:52:193 (7) - 尾巴finish
10:57:834 (4) - 去掉头的whistle
11:05:270 (9,10,11) - 红线起比较好

[You/Athena Tennos]
14:11:936 (3,4,5,6) - 弄成类似0108的↑↓↑↓那种短滑条如何
14:33:603 (1) - 多余了

洗脑程度Mapper＞Moder＞Player @ @

Rotte

582 posts

Joined October 2011

Rotte 2012-11-23T16:19:10+00:00

小雅你改完就行，这都小问题，切记不要给kd

Snapping
Snapping Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
06:46:840 - snap to 06:46:808
07:03:251 - snap to 07:03:218
07:06:287 - snap to 07:06:295
07:11:456 - snap to 07:11:424
07:19:661 - snap to 07:19:629

Spinner New Combo 08:47:834 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

TheVileOne

osu! Alumni

8,431 posts

Joined March 2010

TheVileOne 2012-11-29T02:36:12+00:00

General

Difficulty name is too long/is not related to the difficulty of the song or the song itself

Diff

00:28:347 (3,4) - so weird. But I'm not exactly sure what to do about it.
00:39:629 (1,2) - IMO 1.5 snap flows better.
00:46:552 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't change from 1.3 spacing? I feel it plays just as good without need the extra reach spacing parts. also it bothers me that the triangle pattern is lopsided. Could you make a perfect triangle?
00:54:501 (3,4) - Make 1.3 snap like the other jump pairs.
00:58:860 (5) - IMO this looks better stacked under 1. I didn't symmetry check this suggestion though.
01:23:731 (3) - slider body isn't entirely aligned with next slider. It looks bad. If you can't make it better aligned, you could try this instead. http://puu.sh/1vogT
01:27:834 (3) - Move slightly higher? It looks better further away from 01:26:808 (1) - . Just a suggestion, feel free to ignore if you don't like.
01:30:142 (3) - Move to x 496 y 120?
01:32:962 (1) - add clap to start?
01:35:013 (4) - New combo.
01:37:065 (6) - ^
01:36:039 (4,5) - Plays better at around 1.8 snap IMO. Actually I don't care for the 2.0 snap for non-jump parts.
01:38:090 (8,9,10) - Spacing is too large for unimportant beats IMO. Again 1.8 would be ideal.
01:42:962 - Add note. No sense skipping it. It wont be too hard to reposition the next part.
01:43:218 (5) - New combo.
01:51:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These triples could be better. http://puu.sh/1vp0m
02:05:526 (6) - Move so that it follows the curve of 3,4,5?
02:10:911 (3) - I like this better if it ended on that white tick.
02:13:475 (1,2) - Pattern is strange looking and offbeat. I suggest starting on the red tick since your custom hitsounds are so good. you can make a much better looking pattern if the notes are like this instead http://puu.sh/1vpdb
02:23:475 (8) - Please place where 6 is so that there wont be overlap.
02:33:475 (3,4,5) - Doesn't play very good to me. It sounds overmapped, and it throws me off the beat. Same goes for 02:34:501 (1,2,3) -. If you really want triples, do them where actual triples exist like here 02:33:347 - < add a note here and there's a triple here too 02:34:372 -. i'm not sure how the potential remapping here is going to look. You might want to consider a note here 02:35:783 -. It may or may not be necessary to the beat, if you want an overmapped triple right before it, it's definitely needed. It's more or less optional otherwise.
02:43:731 (1,2,3,1,2) - Why is there two combos here? Nvrm you should just delete 02:44:116 (1) - and space the last note out. It's much better and will fix the combo.
02:50:398 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please don't randomly speed up the notes, especially from 1.0 to 2.0
02:59:629 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pattern could be cleaner. http://puu.sh/1vpQ1
03:08:347 (1,2,3,4,1) - Curve doesn't look perfect. I'm not sure if the imperfections are intentional, 03:08:731 (4,1) - is spaced greater than 1,2,3,4.
03:10:783 (4) - Too long- you should end here 03:11:167 - . You can then have a slider here 03:11:295 - extended to the white tick.
03:27:321 (4) - Slider is imperfect. Better version > http://puu.sh/1vqa6
03:30:398 (6,7,1) - Maybe use a lower spacing here. That red vocal isn't very rhythmic.
03:31:167 (3) - I think you should delete and replace with a pattern similar to the first one, since it's the same.
03:31:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really don't like this flow. IMO the spacing is too large to be abstract. You should go for a more identifiable pattern. I came up with http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/507891 The spacing is at most 2.5 here, which is easier to hit than the 3.00 you had.
03:36:039 - Do not use 2.0x with this song. It's unnecessary and unfitting. 1.5x is better IMO. As a side note, when I play this part I keep thinking that there should be two sliders. It seems just one slider sped up without a second one after without proper symmetry is missing something. Maybe a slider for this part too 03:36:808 -. What do you think?
03:37:577 (1) - When you lower to 1.5x just make this into a 1/1 slider without a repeat.
03:39:629 (5) - Slider looks different than 4
03:39:629 (5,1,2) - You should fix this small spacing difference.
03:49:372 (3) - Strange slider. I prefer a more uniform curve.
03:53:218 (11,12,1) - Looks like it flattens a tiny bit here. I would add a tiny bit more of a curve at the end. Personal preference.
04:10:911 - This part is very loud. Please lower the volumes to match other parts of the song.
04:10:911 - This green line, you should move it back. If I hit this note early enough I get a different hitsound.
This part is much Harder than the rest of the parts. You shouldn't greatly increase the difficulty in one part. It will make this song annoying to play for the target playerbase.
04:12:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is just overkill and overmapped. Not nearly as relaxing as the song has been thus far. I highly recommend scaling this back to make it more accessible. Actual beat > http://puu.sh/1vqVQ
04:15:013 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overmapped. It sounds much nicer like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/507906
^Notice i'm using 1.0 distance snap.
04:17:065 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - So much spam coming from the hitsounds. Please pick less annoying hitsounds to map blue ticks.
04:19:629 (3,4) - Bad overlap.
04:21:808 (4) - Just contributing to more hitsound spam because there is no sound there.
04:23:218 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Awful sounding and overmapped. This is the beat http://puu.sh/1vrgu I highly recommend using it.
04:26:295 (1,2,1,2) - Just a confusing stack. Vocals like that are proper best mapped with sliders or spaced out.
04:27:065 (1,2,3) - This comes off too steep off of previous stream. I really wish the vocalist wasn't singing on 1/8th. I don't think you should have a note here 04:26:936 (2) - . Check this out http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/507920 Maybe have to adjust more to get everything to fit, but it's something that needs to happen one way or another. This seems to work smoothly into your other pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/507922
04:32:962 (4,1,2) - The curve doesn't follow the curve of the slider >.<
04:34:501 (5,1,2,3) - It is quite confusing to go from anti-jumps suddenly into 1/2th. Also the curve from 04:34:244 (4,5,1) - could be better. It should look like one long continuous curve from 04:33:475 (1,2,3) -. 04:34:757 (1,2,3) - Spacing differs here.
04:37:706 (4) - Delete?
04:45:783 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds bad. Do something about slider end sounds please.
04:47:834 (5,6) - More intuitive if this was one slider.
04:49:629 (3,4,1,2) - So awkward and bad sounding. I suggest sliders instead. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/507936
You are confusing me so much with your rhythm switching. You map this with short spacing, but when you get to this very same beat 04:50:911 (2,3,4,1,2) - you decide to map the triple and space it the same.
04:59:629 (5,6,7) - Overmapped. I suggest removing those notes, and extending 04:59:629 (5) - to 04:59:885 -
05:00:142 (6) - New combo
05:04:244 (3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped, sounds and plays bad. I suggest something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/507939 It's much closer to the beat.
05:07:834 (1) - Finish sounds out of place.
05:08:090 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Just unplayable IMO. Too overmapped or the extra hitsounds are just making the beat unreadable.
05:12:321 (4) - Delete?
05:14:501 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sounds bad, please do something about the extra hitsounds.
05:40:398 (7,8) - Hard to read. I don't recommend this
05:48:090 (6) - Remove whistle?
05:53:475 (1) - This slider is very hard to see. I highly recommend moving this somewhere else.
06:06:295 (8,9,10,11) - Transition looks bad IMO. You should raise the triple and then angle it more downward. http://puu.sh/1w7OV
06:11:936 (23) - New combo.
06:12:706 (1) - Remove new combo.
06:13:988 - This whole kiai could use more audible hitsounds. I don't like trying to hit triples that have no rhythmic sound to them at all.
06:17:065 (8,1,2) - Maybe have some form of curve here.
06:20:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Abrupt increase in difficulty.
06:28:347 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ annoying when people make most of the difficulty play at one pace, and then include parts that are much more difficulty than that pace. It's poor beatmapping. I don't really have an alternative to give you, so feel free to get more opinions.
06:37:321 (7,8) - Not centered.
06:46:808 (2) - New combo.
06:53:475 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make symmetrical? (The notes being symmetrical, the sliders are okay IMO)
06:55:526 (3) - Make the symmetry better?
06:58:860 (5) - Annoying to hit IMO. Remove?
07:05:911 (4) - there's no sound under this. Harder to play with this note here.
07:07:321 (2) - Looks better if the slider points were even.
07:14:116 (3) - Same as 7:05. No sound here. Having a note here 07:14:244 - and 07:14:372 - sounds much better.
07:24:244 (3) - Why don't you have a clap here?
07:26:296 (3) - ^
07:31:680 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - nice flow here.
08:06:808 (7,1) - Mirror these notes?
08:14:372 (5) - Whistle
08:15:398 (4) - ^
08:16:295 (7,8) - I rather like it if this was a single slider. I guess personal preference. If you want to keep to maintain consistency that's fine.
08:23:603 (4) - Missing a whistle
08:24:629 (8) - ^
08:25:270 (2,3) - Better if this was exactly 1.0 ._.
08:32:193 (3,4) - ^ Although it doesn't look as good at 1.0, the flow is better. Up to you though, it works at 0.96.
08:33:475 (7,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - This doesn't work. It feels like i'm playing a fraction of the actual beat. It plays contrary to the beat by starting each part on an offbeat red tick. It needs to be white tick focused for it to play right http://puu.sh/1w9cZ
08:43:731 (2) - Whistle on start?
08:52:962 (5) - Doesn't sound right. Try this http://puu.sh/1w9lR
09:22:193 - add note here to bridge the gap. There is an awkward wait between patterns.
09:22:706 (1,2,3) - Why do you start so steeply and why downward? It plays a lot better if it started at the bottom and went upwards instead. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/510018 It plays better than what you have currently.
09:37:577 (2,3) - Strange alignment here. Could you make it better?
09:54:501 (3,4,5,6,7) - Shape is malformed. Try to make it better.
09:58:090 (6,1) - Curve starts a bit low IMO. This flows better http://puu.sh/1w9Gj If you can get this position to work I highly recommend it.
10:31:424 (3) - Personally I think this is a meh slider and should end on the white tick.
10:36:552 (1,2,3) - Exactly 1.0?
That part was borderline fair looking to me with those curves and almost overlaps, but it works.
10:45:270 (2) - Not sure about this. I think it could be made better http://puu.sh/1w9RJ
11:14:244 (7,8) - Exactly 1.1?
11:19:629 (5) - New combo?
11:24:244 (1) - Remove new combo
11:45:654 (13) - Delete?
12:26:295 (11,12) - Too far IMO. I keep missing it. 1.8 would be reachable to me.
12:26:680 (13,1) - Not perfectly stacked.
13:01:680 (1,2) - Transition looks kind of strange. I rather like this http://puu.sh/1wanD What do you think?
14:33:474 (8,9) - There are two notes here

There done. Overall it ended a lot better than it started. I liked it, although the few higher than regular difficulty parts will stop me from being able to pass it. :/

Last edited by TheVileOne 2012-12-01T01:29:32+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-29T06:57:29+00:00

[box=-[NYAN:47f50]-'s mod~]

-[NYAN]- wrote:
小雅你改完就行，这都小问题，切记不要给kd

SPOILER
Snapping
Snapping Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
06:46:840 - snap to 06:46:808
07:03:251 - snap to 07:03:218
07:06:287 - snap to 07:06:295
07:11:456 - snap to 07:11:424
07:19:661 - snap to 07:19:629

Spinner New Combo 08:47:834 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

all fix~ thx mod~

lkx_shore's mod~

lkx_shore wrote:
[You/Athena Tennos]
14:11:936 (3,4,5,6) - 弄成类似0108的↑↓↑↓那种短滑条如何太难了。。这时候打到这的人都筋疲力尽了。。orz
14:33:603 (1) - 多余了 fix！~

thx ur mod~

ssssssssssssssss

214 posts

Joined August 2011

ssssssssssssssss 2012-12-16T02:37:35+00:00

完成0.0

SPOILER

120,160,648604,5,0,0:0:0
152,124,648732,1,0,0:0:0
200,112,648860,2,0,P|260:148|336:124,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
333,130,649372,2,0,P|320:192|344:232,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,204,649885,2,0,P|440:256|428:312|384:352,1,150
392,344,650398,2,0,P|376:312|344:296|304:304,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,316,650911,2,0,P|160:288|140:240|156:184,1,150
154,187,651424,2,0,P|128:232|84:240,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
108,104,651936,2,0,P|144:56|200:44|264:76,1,150
241,66,652449,1,8,0:0:0
256,208,652706,1,0,0:0:0
116,196,652962,5,0,0:0:0
256,72,653475,1,8,0:0:0
396,196,653988,1,0,0:0:0
256,324,654501,1,8,0:0:0
444,252,655013,5,0,0:0:0
456,148,655270,1,0,0:0:0
456,148,655398,1,0,0:0:0
456,148,655526,1,8,0:0:0
372,80,655783,1,0,0:0:0
276,60,656039,2,0,P|284:116|240:160,1,100
216,168,656424,1,0,0:0:0
172,164,656552,1,8,0:0:0
132,72,656808,1,0,0:0:0
92,104,656936,1,0,0:0:0
72,144,657065,6,0,P|64:220|120:276,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
164,244,657577,2,0,P|212:284|212:352,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,144,660911,1,0,0:0:0
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204,144,662193,1,0,0:0:0
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256,232,662577,1,0,0:0:0
256,232,662706,1,8,0:0:0
304,143,662962,1,0,0:0:0
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216,320,666552,1,0,0:0:0
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372,192,669116,1,0,0:0:0
280,152,669372,6,0,P|252:192|260:256,1,100
192,140,669885,1,8,0:0:0
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192,140,670911,1,8,0:0:0
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236,312,672962,1,8,0:0:0
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156,204,673475,5,4,0:0:0
184,108,673731,1,0,0:0:0
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整段附加的音效只用一个clap就行了，http://min.us/lbaLQTFA3Zv23W

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-12-16T06:32:01+00:00

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

完成0.0

SPOILER

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整段附加的音效只用一个clap就行了，http://min.us/lbaLQTFA3Zv23W

update!~

jesse7419

405 posts

Joined March 2011

jesse7419 2012-12-30T06:35:27+00:00

Code

My code: http://puu.sh/1H76X

另外這是音效麻煩加進去謝謝

My sounds: http://puu.sh/1H71K

音效應該沒重複吧 = ="

TAG請重新改過感恩~

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-12-30T07:32:46+00:00

jesse7419 wrote:
Code
My code: http://puu.sh/1H76X

另外這是音效麻煩加進去謝謝

My sounds: http://puu.sh/1H71K

音效應該沒重複吧 = ="

TAG請重新改過感恩~

update！~

Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2013-01-10T07:08:41+00:00

http://puu.sh/1LUSU
~~獲得成就：拖稿大師~~

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-01-10T08:50:47+00:00

Evil_Twilight wrote:
http://puu.sh/1LUSU
~~獲得成就：拖稿大師~~

lol update~~~
白金~all complete~

cirno-_old

cirno-_old 2013-01-13T02:10:19+00:00

01:12:962 (2,3) - Move 3 farther away from 2 for flow http://i.imgur.com/ZKnuh.png
01:42:449 (1) - I don't think this plays well. I think normal blanketing would be better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/566888
12:27:065 (1) - Stack under the other 2? Yes I seriously made it this far in the song ...

I love it lol. Take a star or 2 :3

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-02-02T09:13:10+00:00

cirno- wrote:
01:12:962 (2,3) - Move 3 farther away from 2 for flow http://i.imgur.com/ZKnuh.png
01:42:449 (1) - I don't think this plays well. I think normal blanketing would be better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/566888
12:27:065 (1) - Stack under the other 2? Yes I seriously made it this far in the song ...

I love it lol. Take a star or 2 :3

lol！~thx ur star!~and ur mod~=w=~

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-02-02T09:29:15+00:00

Strawberry's mod~

Strawberry wrote:

SPOILER

Timing points:
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76,260,346039,5,0,0:0:0
116,260,346167,1,0,0:0:0
156,272,346295,2,0,B|208:296|232:336,1,100
272,328,346680,1,0,0:0:0
312,324,346808,6,0,B|416:308,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
452,300,347193,1,0,0:0:0
492,296,347321,1,4,0:0:0
360,208,347577,1,0,0:0:0
336,176,347706,2,0,B|308:132|320:76,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
320,40,348090,2,0,B|264:56,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,84,348347,2,0,B|180:104|216:148,1,100
228,272,348731,2,0,B|280:256,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
488,288,349116,6,0,B|432:304,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,332,349372,2,0,B|304:248|372:208,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
371,208,349885,2,0,B|368:156|328:120,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,184,350398,2,0,B|188:149|134:152,1,100
96,156,350783,1,2,0:0:0
56,168,350911,1,0,0:0:0
216,80,351167,1,0,0:0:0
32,308,351424,5,2,0:0:0
72,296,351552,1,0,0:0:0
112,292,351680,1,0,0:0:0
152,300,351808,1,0,0:0:0
184,320,351936,1,2,0:0:0
220,300,352065,1,0,0:0:0
244,268,352193,1,0,0:0:0
256,232,352321,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,352449,2,0,B|244:144|264:92,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,76,352834,1,0,0:0:0
340,68,352962,2,0,B|388:96|436:96,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
340,68,353475,6,0,P|240:92,1,100
46,187,353988,2,0,P|144:164,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,152,354501,1,0,0:0:0
148,252,354757,1,0,0:0:0
228,292,355013,1,0,0:0:0
304,244,355270,1,0,0:0:0
340,160,355526,2,0,P|372:116|412:92,1,100
436,84,355911,1,0,0:0:0
460,88,356039,1,0,0:0:0
312,52,356295,1,0,0:0:0
192,144,356552,6,0,P|92:124,1,100
144,248,357065,2,0,P|242:267,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,276,357449,1,0,0:0:0
300,284,357577,2,0,P|348:264|380:220,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
408,132,358090,1,4,0:0:0
340,348,358347,1,0,0:0:0
368,344,358475,1,0,0:0:0
396,340,358603,2,0,P|448:320|476:280,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
484,80,359116,6,0,P|432:100|404:140,1,100
392,160,359501,1,0,0:0:0
384,188,359629,2,0,P|296:140,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,136,360142,2,0,P|160:184,1,100
268,236,360654,1,2,0:0:0
148,236,360911,1,2,0:0:0
120,248,361039,1,0,0:0:0
96,264,361167,2,0,P|60:304|48:352,1,100,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,340,361552,2,0,P|188:316,1,50,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
320,344,361936,6,0,P|412:300,1,100
512,256,362449,1,0,0:0:0
484,236,362577,1,0,0:0:0
472,204,362706,2,0,P|448:160|396:136,1,100
360,248,363218,2,0,P|311:233|258:253,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,268,363603,1,0,0:0:0
216,296,363731,1,2,0:0:0
64,216,363988,5,0,0:0:0
136,260,364244,2,0,P|148:208|128:160,1,100
60,28,364757,1,2,0:0:0
108,96,365013,2,0,P|60:108|8:92,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,72,365526,1,0,0:0:0
232,60,365654,1,0,0:0:0
268,52,365783,2,0,P|320:40|372:56,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
480,212,366295,1,4,0:0:0
352,208,366552,1,0,0:0:0
320,196,366680,1,0,0:0:0
284,188,366809,2,0,P|232:176|180:192,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,348,367321,5,4,0:0:0
212,312,367577,1,2,0:0:0
284,188,367834,2,0,P|288:136|264:88,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,172,368347,2,0,P|108:224|132:272,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,296,368860,2,0,P|360:272|384:224,1,119.999996337891,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,52,369372,2,0,P|44:76|20:124,1,119.999996337891,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,172,369885,1,2,0:0:0
144,156,370013,1,0,0:0:0
180,156,370142,1,0,0:0:0
210,174,370270,1,0,0:0:0
230,203,370398,1,2,0:0:0
242,236,370526,1,0,0:0:0
262,265,370654,1,0,0:0:0
294,281,370783,1,0,0:0:0
329,281,370911,1,2,0:0:0
362,267,371039,1,0,0:0:0
383,238,371167,1,2,0:0:0
395,204,371295,1,0,0:0:0
390,168,371424,1,2,0:0:0
376,134,371552,1,0,0:0:0
345,114,371680,1,0,0:0:0
309,111,371808,1,0,0:0:0
274,122,371936,2,0,P|213:108|179:61,1,119.999996337891,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
274,122,372449,1,2,0:0:0
209,223,372706,2,0,P|148:237|97:213,1,119.999996337891,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

edit: 发现一点问题，06:13:218 - 这里再加一根x1.0的绿线~~刚才忘了讲，后面的slider都跑偏惹 xDD

来补上mod :3

[KayeSara]
00:12:193 (4) - add a whistle?? and add a finish on the (6), sounds good imo~:3
00:13:988 (3) - put whistle on the tail of slider for the slidertick of (1).
00:15:013 (1) - same as above for 00:16:039 (3) - 's slidertick
00:20:142 (3) - change clap to finish or just add finish on the tail of the slider? idk.. :p
00:24:757 (9) - add finish?
00:33:475 (1) - ^
00:41:167 (9) - ^
00:41:680 (1) - finish on the head?
00:46:808 (3,4) - how about add whitles? it's suitable
00:48:603 (4,5,6) - whistle (or add them on (5,6))
01:02:193 (3) - nc here? and add a finish on the start of the slider?
01:18:603 (1) - finish on the head?
01:31:936 (3) - i think the clap should be put on the end of slider rather than the start?

[raririn]
01:35:013 (4) - nc
01:43:218 (5) - add a nc here and ctrl+g? it's funny to play
01:55:526 (5) - nc here?
02:05:783 (1) - end at 02:07:321 - ? it's so closed to the next note that hard to notice
02:12:193 - ~02:13:475 - umm..idk..however i think you can remove this break for it is useless
02:21:936 (5) - add nc here
02:27:834 (4) - ^ that's reasonable
02:29:885 (4) - nc here rather than 02:30:398 (1) - ?...
02:35:783 - add a note?.. plays awkward..

[Sun Rainbow]
03:09:629 - add a note here? :3
03:15:654 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 好坑爹
03:22:193 (5) - whistle
03:25:783 (12) - finish
03:36:295 (3) - 。。这个有点鬼畜。。球减点速，不然感觉很容易拉断啊

o
03:37:577 (1) - ^
03:58:090 (4) - change to default soft finish? the custom's is so weak that hard to hear anymore..
04:02:706 (3) - nc here?

[qq944364487]
overmapped.. idk how to mod :p

[x847606653]
好像还没加音效诶:3
06:20:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 怎么和日彩虹一样坑OAQ
06:28:347 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
06:42:706 (1) - spacing.. a bit confused...

[Mei_coN]
06:56:808 (5) - move to x:100 y:304? flow better imo :3
07:15:526 (1) - touched HP bar
07:43:475 (5) - add a clap here?
07:51:424 (4) - set a clap on the tail?

[Nyan]
08:14:501 - add a circle after (5) to consistent as 08:16:552 (8) -
08:23:218 (3) - add a whistle on the end of slider? sounds better imo
08:24:244 (7) - if you changed above, also add whistle on the head of slider and (8)
08:33:475 (7) - nc here to consistent as 08:35:270 (1) -
09:06:295 (2,3,4,5,6) - awkward.. try this? --> http://puu.sh/1oWTJ

[Flask]
10:11:936 (1) - so closed to the next note.. how about end at 10:13:475 - ?

[______VOSE]
10:47:834 (2) - the nc should be set in here rather than 10:47:706 (1) -
10:55:013 (1) - nc?
11:01:167 (6) - ^
11:03:988 (4,7) - how about add nc on these circle? it's more clearly to read :3
11:09:372 (4) - nc
11:17:577 (6) - ^
11:19:629 (5) - ^

[Fionana]
这边好像也还没有下音效:3
11:25:783 (5) - nc here~
11:31:936 (5) - i would like to put a nc here :3
11:42:706 (3) - nc
11:43:731 (6) - if you followed above, also add a nc here
11:51:167 (5) - ^
12:19:629 (2) - ctrl+G? :p
12:21:167 (5) - i'd like to set a nc on here also
12:25:013 (6) - nc?

[Athena Tennos]
14:13:731 (8) - spacing?
14:34:501 - honestly i feel shortened it to end at 14:34:501 - is more suitable..
最喜欢这段:3

好图 ( >///<

almost fix!~thx ur hard mod~;w;~

Star Stream's mod~

Star Stream wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
Rename to 'Collab' or something like that
Consider adding name tags SB for the diff
[Collab]
01:14:501 (1) - stack its body on 01:13:988 (4) - 's tail
01:30:911 - clap
01:32:449 - ^
01:35:013 (4) - NC
01:43:218 (5) - ^
01:53:218 (7) - your combo doesn't make sense at all, start combo from here, not 01:54:244 (1) -
02:05:013 (4,5) - ctrl+g for better movement
02:30:783 (2) - unexpected 1/4 jump, reduce its distance
02:33:860 (4) - ^
02:35:142 (2) - ^
02:43:731 (1,1) - i don't see why you NCed here, remove both or at least 02:44:116 (1) -
02:45:783 (4) - not so good to see, stack on the slider's tail
02:50:398 (2) - embrassing, no SV change or use at least 1.5x for here
03:15:654 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - too hard to play unless the player is pro. if pro, even hard when the player play it with DT. don't separate them
03:29:885 (3,4,5) - 1grid up to stack 4 on the slider
03:31:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no, it's too sharp, are you really making a 'Collab' diff or just your own part for you? don't break its diff spread
03:32:962 (4) - NC
03:36:295 (3) - 1.5x for here
03:37:577 (1) - doesn't make sense at all, i'd add a 1/6 slider from 03:37:321 - to 03:37:577 - (yes, with 2 arrows) instead
03:39:629 (5) - ctrl+g for better play
03:47:577 (2,3) - seems you're just copying other members' style, idk, but that slider doesn't make sense, maybe find other ways
04:04:757 (6) - NC
04:10:911 - idk who mapped this part. but well, for the mapper, remap this part. you're breaking its diff spread, which means you're turning this map to unrankable
05:44:116 (5) - 1grid right,down for better movement
06:09:885 (7) - NC
06:10:911 (15) - ^
06:11:936 (23) - ^
06:12:706 (1) - remove NC
06:13:218 (1,2,3) - wrong beats, here's actually 1/6
06:13:988 (4) - NC for downbeat, kiai start, mood change
06:17:065 (8,1,2) - kinda hard patterns to hit, just 5 circles or slider - slider - circle plz
06:19:116 (1) - really unexpected rhythm/distance change, NC at least
06:20:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - don't make me angry, delete
06:25:270 (1,2,3) - same as 06:17:065 (8,1,2) -
06:27:321 (3) - same as 06:19:116 (1) -
06:28:347 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - same as 06:20:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -
06:38:347 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - rhythms don't make sense at all, especially that 3/4 sliders, remap that notes
06:46:039 - slider from here to 06:46:295 - (maybe 1/2 with an arrow)
06:46:808 (2) - NC
07:02:193 (9) - ^
07:40:142 (2) - same as 06:13:988 (4) -
07:59:629 (4) - NC for jump
08:01:680 (3) - arrow is hidden by 08:00:654 (1) -
08:27:321 (5) - NC
08:47:834 (1) - NC for after spinner
08:49:116 (6,7,8) - 1/6 beats for here
09:21:680 (5) - NC
10:06:808 (9) - 2nd arrow is hidden by 10:06:295 (7) -
11:04:244 (5) - NC
11:25:013 (2,3,4) - 1/6 beats for here
11:44:244 (7) - NC
11:48:347 (4) - ^
12:51:295 (5) - delete
13:40:654 (1,2) - embarassing, too far from center
Sorry but its quality makes me lazy and i don't see any rankability with this map
Good luck then

;w; thx ur mod~~almost fix~~~=w=~i will let's it become to rankability!~

wantuole

528 posts

Joined December 2010

wantuole 2013-02-05T00:21:24+00:00

[General]
ok
[LOOOOOOOOOOP]
00:47:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 少量叠还可以叠多了
01:00:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 推荐相同的ds
01:19:372 (2,3) - 像这个节奏

02:44:501 (1) - remove nc
03:09:373 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 换个摆法
03:53:218 (1,2) -

04:08:988 (2) - 不推荐使用蓝线开头的slider

05:19:629 (1,2,3,1,2) - 蓝线不要nc
06:13:304 (5) -

突然用了1/6 感觉不适应虽然曲子本身就有这个轨
06:20:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -
06:28:347 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 略鬼畜拿你没办法
09:06:295 - 09:21:680 略平淡了穿插点三连
11:07:321 (8) - nc
11:21:680 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 4个1组nc
12:27:065 (1) - 叠好才对
14:19:115 (1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1) - 这个梗用多了虽然也是这个节奏还是不用的好

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-02-12T04:31:18+00:00

wantuole's mod~

wantuole wrote:
[General]
ok
[LOOOOOOOOOOP]
00:47:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 少量叠还可以叠多了
01:00:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 推荐相同的ds
01:19:372 (2,3) - 像这个节奏
02:44:501 (1) - remove nc
03:09:373 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 换个摆法
03:53:218 (1,2) -
04:08:988 (2) - 不推荐使用蓝线开头的slider
05:19:629 (1,2,3,1,2) - 蓝线不要nc
06:13:304 (5) - 突然用了1/6 感觉不适应虽然曲子本身就有这个轨
06:20:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -
06:28:347 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 略鬼畜拿你没办法
09:06:295 - 09:21:680 略平淡了穿插点三连
11:07:321 (8) - nc
11:21:680 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 4个1组nc
12:27:065 (1) - 叠好才对
14:19:115 (1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1) - 这个梗用多了虽然也是这个节奏还是不用的好

almost fix~
thx ur mod~~~

japan0413

43 posts

Joined June 2012

japan0413 2013-02-13T03:06:36+00:00

nice　song

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-02-13T03:08:13+00:00

japan0413 wrote:
nice　song

lol~thx~

Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2013-02-13T07:35:57+00:00

00:20:142 (3,2) - 重叠
00:44:501 (4,6) - 分开
01:04:244 (1) - 形状改好看点
02:07:834 (1) - 这里开始忽然切换音效有点不习惯
02:16:552 (3,4,5,6,7) - 其实可以摆的更美的
02:44:501 (1) - 这里开始有点偷懒的成分呢
04:40:911 (2,4) - 重叠
04:50:399 (3,1) - 重叠
05:20:654 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 前面切那么频繁
06:13:218 (4,5,6) - BUG？不是三联吗
06:20:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 有点难读图
暂时先这样

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-02-17T11:17:56+00:00

Sun Rainbow's mod~

Sun Rainbow wrote:
00:20:142 (3,2) - 重叠
00:44:501 (4,6) - 分开
01:04:244 (1) - 形状改好看点
02:07:834 (1) - 这里开始忽然切换音效有点不习惯
02:16:552 (3,4,5,6,7) - 其实可以摆的更美的
02:44:501 (1) - 这里开始有点偷懒的成分呢
04:40:911 (2,4) - 重叠
04:50:399 (3,1) - 重叠
05:20:654 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 前面切那么频繁
06:13:218 (4,5,6) - BUG？不是三联吗
06:20:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 有点难读图
暂时先这样

change some place~
thx ur mod~lol

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2013-02-23T13:31:45+00:00

Gomen this is WIP... I'm not modding it

Athena Tennos

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Athena Tennos 2013-02-23T13:33:42+00:00

yurunneram wrote:
Gomen this is WIP... I'm not modding it

already done~but i cant move it to pending~because it only one diff~

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