animalbrad wrote:

arbitrary info: the artist is Shugo Chara! Egg! not just shugo chara also you might wanna put (tv size) in the title.

It plays ...ok in CtB mode but its more insane dif than hard mode in CtB...

i can splice the opening out for ya if ya wanna add it..

Mafiamaster wrote:

Pwnage lol?~ First of all, only use 1/4 Divisor. Not 1/6 please. I can't help it sometimes xD
00:01:77 (1) - Move back to 00:01:71. I thought I fixed these...oh well -goes through list-
00:03:13 (5) - Move to 00:03:19.
00:03:56 (6) - End it at 00:03:93
00:04:73 (1) - Move back to 00:04:67.
00:05:90 (6,7,8) - Select all of these and move it over a tick so 6 is on 00:05:96.
00:07:57 (1) - Move to 00:07:63.
00:08:87 (3,4,5,6) - Move all over a tick so 3 is on 00:08:93.
00:16:09 (1,2) - Move all over a 1/4 tick so 1 is on 00:16:15.
00:17:57 (5) - Move over to 00:17:63. ...what? o.O I fixed it differently...
00:19:17 (1) - Move this back to 00:19:11, then extend it to 00:19:48.
00:20:16 (4) - Move this over to 00:20:22.
00:20:47 (5) - Move this back to 00:20:41.
00:22:57 (3) - Move this to 00:22:63.
00:22:75 (4) - Move this to 00:22:82.
00:23:50 (6) - Move this to 00:23:56.
00:24:61 (10) - Move this to 00:24:67.
00:28:00 (1) - Extend this to 00:28:37.
00:28:56 (2) - Extend to 00:28:93
00:29:05 (3,4) - Move both of these over a tick so 3 is on 00:29:11.
00:31:83 (3) - Move this over to 00:31:89.
00:32:20 (4) - Move this over to 00:32:26.
00:33:13 (1) - Move this to 00:33:19.
00:34:42 (4) - Move this to 00:34:48.
00:35:04 (5) - Extend to 00:35:41
00:36:09 (7) - Move to 00:36:15.
00:40:16 (2) - Move to 00:40:22.
00:41:64 (2,3,4) - Move these all over a tick using the 1/4 divisor. So 2 will land on 00:41:71.
00:43:13 (1) - Move over to 00:43:19.
00:44:30 (1) - Extend this spinner to 00:45:04
00:45:84 (1) - Move back to 00:45:78.
00:46:52 (2) - Extend this to 00:46:89
00:48:68 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Fix these. [got it]
00:51:64 (1,2,3) - Move all these over a tick so it's on the white tick.
00:54:73 (1) - Move back to 00:54:67.
00:55:04 (2) - Extend to 00:55:41
00:56:15 (4) - Extend to 00:56:52
00:57:57 (4) - Move this to 00:57:63.
00:58:68 (2,3,4) - Move these all over a tick to the right. So 2 will be on 00:58:74.
01:07:57 (1) - Move over to 01:07:63.
01:08:87 (1,2,3) - Move over a tick to the right. So 1 will be on 01:08:93.
01:10:35 (1,2,3) - ^. So 1 will be on 01:10:41.
01:12:01 (2,3) - ^. So 2 will be on 01:12:08.
01:13:31 (2) - Move over to 01:13:37.
01:13:93 (1) - Extend the endpoint a little farther so it will end on the white tick.
01:14:79 (2) - Move to 01:14:85.
01:15:47 (1) - This slider definitely pwns me. Move back to 01:15:41.
01:17:27 (1,2,3) - These aren't snapped.
01:24:51 (1) - Extend so the endpoint ends on the white tick.

If there was that many errors in the "Pwnage" difficulty. Then there must've been quite a few in the other difficulties as well. Please recheck your difficulties and fix any problems! And remember, only use the 1/4 divisor![/b[b]] I think I can fix the other difficulties
Thanks for your hard work

Also me difficulty ----v

Quote wrote:

Mafiamaster:
-Two second audio lead-in.

Quote wrote:

Points to bring up about it:
-00:48:74 (1,1,1) - These Burai sliders are unacceptable. Change them.

Quote wrote:

Points to bring up about it:
-00:48:74 (1,1,1) - These Burai sliders are unacceptable. Change them.

Senbon wrote:

Here you go ani. ^^ Sorry it took long and blahh yeah you know. I guess this is my second submitted map, technically. I hope you like it.

Vexed wrote:

Easy
I found nothing, everything seems to be well done.


Hard
Snap divisor of 1/4 seems more suitable also
all below will be based on 1/4 Divisor.
00:20:969 (1) Fix Spacing (Eh I guess the double distance change wasn't necessary)
00:23:469 (6) Comes in to early (Move to 00:23:562 and end at 00:23:932) (Didn't see that)
00:23:932 (7) Remove and correct spaceing for change. ( I think the spacing is right....and 7 fits in perfectly )
00:25:043 (1) spinner move end to 00:26:339 to match beat. Youll find it sounds best this way. ( Off by only one tick...as usual) xD
00:33:932 (1) Move end of slider to 00:34:673 and if so correct spacing between 2 and 3 of the same combo. (blah)
00:36:895 (1) spinner, move ending to 00:38:006. (blah fixed)
00:38:377 (1) Move 1,1,1 closer to the last one not only to correct spacing in that strand , but to correct spacing for the previous spinner adjustment. 2 seperate issues.(distance snap fails me ._. idk what to do...I'll just leave it)
00:39:858 (1) advance end to 00:40:228 white tick ( you forgot the other slider like it...fixed it anyways)
01:01:710 (1) MOve end of slider up to create proper spacing. I tried to hit the next combo to soon. ( I liked it on the bottom xP )
Thats it for now. That was 2 difficulties soo.......Keep in mind that i ignoted alot of spacing issue with hard only because it is somewhat expected. I only suggested change where it really was needed. At least where i thought it was. ;]. Yay for people helping me with simple errors =D


2nd Edit
Mafiamasters Difficulty
00:50:321, Remove break. Not needed.
Other than that nothing ekse seems needed.
(Mafiamaster did it not me lol no offense to Mafia')


Animask Pwnage
00:56:710 (5) Stack on fading 3. A bit confusing and move previous slider 1/2 grid to the right.
Thats really all i could find. (I also changed the sliders where the heart is in the video...its more...organized now)
p.s. I'm not sure you are allowed to stack notes the length of a slider the slider or should i say in the way you did.
Oh I see ranked beatmaps with stuff like that all the time....



Senbons Pwnage (I knew someone would find some errors in this...Senbon did a pretty good job if you only found those)
00:49:488 (5) New combo? (blah)
00:49:858 (6) New combo.
00:51:710 (1) I would really suggest removing (I changed the return so it goes throught the slider 3 times) the return and adjusting the slider as needed,(adjusted)
keep the slider start where it is and ending at 00:52:080 maybe with the 2 stacked on the end of the slider
shown below, Just an example.

That's all i have i guess.
Approximate Fixing Time 11 Minutes (excluding me typing stuff in between)

Vexed wrote:

00:38:377 (1) Move 1,1,1 closer to the last one not only to correct spacing in that strand , but to correct spacing for the previous spinner adjustment. 2 seperate issues.(distance snap fails me ._. idk what to do...I'll just leave it)
00:23:469 (6) Comes in to early (Move to 00:23:562 and end at 00:23:932) (Didn't see that)
ya i made a mistake. its actually 00:23:469 (6) need to be advanced a bit ti white tick (00:23:562) where it ends is good.

Distance snap fails you because you have grid snap on. turn off both and just move it, or keep it whateva xD.

You said somewhere up there that you moved something over a heart in the vid...:[ i just dont run video when editing.
Lagzorz.

Lizbeth wrote:

hi, cool map
this r the things i found

hard

00:31:339 (2) i think this should be closer to (1)
01:09:488 (1,2,3,4,5) this sounds better 1/2 beat earlier


senbon's Pwnage

028:006 (2) make this slider end at 00:28:377
00:28:562 (3) make this end at 00:28:932
00:35:043 (4) closer to (3)
00:42:821 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) saparate this with the same distance
00:55:87 (2) move 1/4 beat eralier

see ya and good luck

K2J wrote:

The biggest problem is spacing. It's pretty odd at times, especially when the slider speed is much, much faster.

[Normal]

00:35:41 (2) - Don't have both ends of the slider in the same spot; it might confuse the player to which direction the slider will travel.
00:51:71 (1) - Even though it's not visible when the previous note ends, it's probably best to move this a bit farther away.
01:12:45 (1) - Too close.

[Mafiamaster's]

01:10:41 (1) - Too close.

[Hard]

Not only is the spacing inconsistent, but it's also shorter than previous difficulties. This is confusing; I recommend you stick to one distance snap factor and stay there.

[Pwnage]

00:26:71 (1) - Beneath previous slider; hard to anticipate.
00:38:00 (1) - Same.

[Senbon's Pwnage]

00:26:33 (1) - No. Maybe it makes sense if I had the video on, but it's ugly in any event. Make a simpler slider.
01:00:59 (1) - Too close.
01:22:08 (1) - Same.

The spinners are also pretty short at times.

Lizbeth wrote:

looking better

Ekaru wrote:

Just some things I noticed here and there:

Normal-

00:35:41 (2) - flip vertically (under the Edit tab). This is to fix the ugly overlap you currently have there. Easy fix.

Mafiamaster's difficulty-

Nothing that matters

Hard-

00:32:45 (7) - move endpoint so that it isn't overlapping the green slider.
00:38:37 (1,1,1,1) - stack these please. People who can do the rest of the map easily would have trouble with these merely because they aren't stacked (plus it looks sorta ugly and kinda hard to read). Stacking these is an easy fix to make the map better IMO. I thought those looked nice like that...but honestly...it is easier to read as a stack

PWnage:

I would look through the map and fix any overlaps you see.

01:02:08 (1,2,3) - nothing wrong with the parts like this. Might want to reconsider putting them in, say, a row. That way they'd be more enjoyable to most people. Right now it's hard to pull off. Not many people's hands can switch direction that quickly.I like it like that...keeping it that way
01:15:41 (1) - Remove timing section (it's just randomly sped up!), and remake slider so it's readable please. It's a random speed up on a hard to read slider. ACK! Keeping my fast slider...its my pride and honor pwnful and awesome...I did the double bpm thing and made it less messy


Senbon's Pwnage:

No comment, other than that some spinners may be too short. Didn't bother to check. Just let Auto play through it once, and make sure it got a 2K+ bonus on each spinner. Since there was one spinner I couldn't react to, nor could I finish spinning it. I deleted some spinners...

STarred. Fun map otherwise.Thank you~!

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

Just a friendly reminder that what I say is mostly *suggestion* on how to possibly improve your map and not a *command* that you change your map!


[Normal]
00:09:85 (2) - delete breakI'm not deleting the only break in there
00:19:85 (2) - should start 1/2 earlier for consistancySomeone told me to change it lol it
00:38:74 (1) - not snapped oh okay
00:45:78 (1) - either stack or move out from under the fading 2 Stacking is fun
00:55:78 (3) - stack neatly under slider end okay
00:59:11 (2) - stack on the start of 1
01:17:26 (1,1) - slider overlap looks sloppy
01:18:37 (1) - end 1/4 later


[Mafiamaster's Difficulty]
00:09:85 (2) - delete and replace break keeping break...and 2
00:48:93 (2) - can you move this so its not under the fading 7? okay...looks more organized


[Hard]
00:09:85 (2) - delete and replace break
00:29:30 (3) - move this so it isnt partly under 4 I made it look better
00:55:41 (3) - line this up with the end of 2 and then stack everything following that can Gotta Stack 'em All
01:04:30 (2,3) - overlap looks sloppy I agree...fixed
01:21:24 (1) - should be 1/4 earlier ...no sounds right to me


[Pwnage]
00:04:85 (2) - stack under fading 6
00:06:33 (8,9) - stack under 3,4? hmm I don't know...makes it look a bit weird...but at the same time a little better
00:08:56 (2) - stack this on the end of the slider? its completely hidden atm hmm I fixed it better than stacking it
00:08:93 (3,4,5,6) - stacking notes on a slider both hides the slider and looks bad I think it looks awesome...and you can see it ._. want me to make a new combo to see better? -does that- and you can totally see the slider coming....second thought the new combo makes me think of ronald mcdonald...forget that
00:09:48 (6) - delete and replace break
00:16:06 (1) - move 1/4 later
00:26:71 (1) - partly hidden by previous slider
00:27:26 (4,1) - slider overlap is messyclean~!
00:29:11 (3) - line this up with the end of 2 I say the sliders are art....maybe abstract art...
00:38:00 (1) - hidden by 10
00:46:52 (2,3) - slider overlap is VERY messy
00:48:37 (5) - stack on the end of 3 blah different fix
01:12:45 (1) - move so its not partly under 3
01:17:56 (1,2,3...) - entire section needs to be snapped to the correct ticks (mostly white)
01:18:37 (3) - needs to be 1/4 shorter sounds better longer
01:22:66 (7) - should end on white tick


[Senbon's Pwnage]
HIII SENBON!
00:06:89 (7) - change direction of repeat so it doesnt partly hide 1 tricky
00:08:56 (2) - start is partly covered by 1
00:09:48 (4) - delete and replace break
00:24:67 (4) - stack under fading 2
00:26:33 (1) - this is difficult to read and *might* be illegal unless you storyboard an indicator of direction ....I'll ask Senbon to make an indicator to storyboard...or I might have to change the star slider
00:28:56 (3) - line this up with the end of 2
00:32:08 (3) - line this up with 2
00:36:33 (7) - line this up with 6?
00:38:09 (1) - start on the white tick
00:43:56 (1,2) - keep the same pattern of hitsound here as you used for the first half of the pattern
00:47:82 (1) - move this a bit farther from 4 so that the two lines are evenly spaced
01:00:59 (1) - stack on fading 6
01:01:71 (4) - 1/2 after the end feels like its missing a note repeating slider...hmm
01:04:67 (4) - stack on fading 1
01:09:58 (1) - start on white tick
01:18:56 (1) - start 1/2 earlier
01:22:63 (3) - end 1/4 later
00:50:69 (1) - is too short to meet current rankability standards (auto +2000)
00:53:65 (1) - ^
Bye Spinners =D
Thanks for the help~!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~
00:16:71 (2) - The endpoint of this isn't quite on the white tick, remake this slider. Not too hard to do
00:40:59 (2) - Move this closer to 1's endpoint. kk
01:14:67 (3) - Move this up a tick so it aligns with 1 and 2. Got it

Mafiamaster's Difficulty~
Feel free to make the circles bigger by a tick. I like how it is without the change

Hard~
00:24:67 (9) - Move this a tick downwards, so it aligns with 8. okay

Pwnage..~
00:16:06 (1) - This starts too early. Start it at the white tick.
01:18:37 (3) - This slider kind of bothers me.Fixed
01:24:51 (1) - Remake your slider, but use the 1/4 divisor. ( it sounds like a rhyme) The reverse arrow and endpoint isn't quite on that white tick.Resnapping kinda works too...

Senbon's Pwnage~
00:18:93 (2) - This spacing of this bothers me. Either move this closer to 3 or if you don't wanna do that, at least align it with 1. ok
00:53:74 (9) - Stack this on top of 8.heh forgot to stack it right...
Thanks~!

eee wrote:

[All Difficulties]
correct the timing sections please, I think that there are unnecessary timing sections or there is none in [Normal]/
Notice that there is a timing section at here in some, like mafiamaster's 00:50:414 (I think this is supposed to be an inherited kiai time) and also the other maps, I don't think the BPM changes, really, as in [Normal] doesn't have multiple sections, but if they do mean something, make it consistent throughout the other difficulties plz, cause other difficulties have timing sections at different places, supposedly they should be inherited to me.

[Normal]
00:55:78 (3) - starck with (1) plz, turn of distance and grid snap if you want to, just make sure the circles are stacked

[Mafiamaster]
00:29:48 (5) - one level 3 grid to left, that way, 3,4,5 will be equidistant
01:15:41 (5) - I <3 this e
[Hard]
01:09:99 (4,5) - how about move this 2 level 3 grids to the left, and one down, if I didn't do so good, just align (4) with (2) and (5) with (3)

[Pwnage]
00:07:63 (1) - stretch 1/4 longer
00:35:78 (6) - move 1 level 3 grid to right
01:17:270 (x) - note goes here, I think

[Senbon]
00:50:04 (3) - move one level 3 grid down

nothing particularly wrong, just some design issues and those multiple timing sections D: