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kajiyatta

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Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2012-12-17T06:53:52+00:00

from PM
General
almost suggestions
Yellow Rose
Placement
00:21:874(3,1) make blanket? maybe it seems good

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00:34::419(1,2,3,4,) like this?

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01:39:327(4) maybe this?

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Hit Sonud
00:08:237(1) add whistle at head? you already did it Blue diff.

Blue Rose
Placement
00:00:056(1) I suppose this note seems a bit high placement. it's first note in this diff, so maybe this note should be easy to hit.
02:45:327(1,2,3,1) like a star placement?

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Rhythm
01:31:418 missing note makes player confused I suppose.

Red Rose
Placement
01:26:236(1) more beautiful?

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01:52:691(4) this flow doesn't good because of stack, so you can put it like this?

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Hit Sonud
00:08:237(1) same as Yellow
00:29:510(1) finish→whistle? already did it in other diffs.

well, I don't know how to mod this kind of song (especially slow song) so maybe my modding seems suck and poor sorry. good luck & star~
EDIT: gratz become a MAT

Weez

2,318 posts

Joined February 2009

Weez 2012-12-17T18:03:19+00:00

Sorry it took more than a month to complete this M4M (just finished all my exams >.<) but hey at least I am doing it :3

First and for most congrats on becoming a MAT, more than positive you'll do great for osu!

General
- The diff names might be confusing for some, suggest you just put what they are (Easy, Normal, Hard) next to the diff names in the beatmap info page.

Red Rose
01:51:054 - Such an awkward pause and break in flow with the lyrics imo. Add a hit circle and problem solved!

01:52:418 (3,4) - Not a huge fan of this stack. Stacking 4 on 2 instead plays nicely.

annnd thats all, amazing map
sorry for the short mod >.<

HakuNoKaemi

3,828 posts

Joined October 2009

HakuNoKaemi 2012-12-21T16:04:11+00:00

Uhm, this shall resurrect :3
Good map :3, shall double star

[General]

You don't need to force SliderBorder without custom skin... though, Kotone's making the skin and it will probably have white borders, so you can leave :3
The game have different pronunciation, why don't add them to the tags ? "Eb" and "Iv"

[Yellow Rose]

[Rhythm]

01:26:782 (1) - To keep combos consistent
02:07:691 (1) - ^
02:32:236 (1) - It doesn't stay that good since there's no note in the red tick. Delete the (2) too and do this?
02:46:964 (1) - Make it a bit longer, so it ends to 02:48:782 (it's an 1/6)

[Graphics]

02:42:054 (1) - Fix either blankets?
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[Blue Rose]

[Graphics]

Curves generally flow better in those type of song, so I'll suggest many of them
00:09:601 (4) - 2 grid down, 1 right so it look curved like this?
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00:12:601 (4,5) - Curved slider have better flow there
00:16:419 (1,2) - Curving them like this?
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01:25:145 (2) - Adjust blanket? Mid waypoint 2 grid down
01:27:327 (2,3,4) - Curve it like this?
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01:56:236 (4) - Fix blanket
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02:01:691 (2,3) - Curve them?
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02:08:236 (2,3) - ^
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[Rhythm]

01:15:054 (x) - Isn't better to follow the higher volume piano notes instead of 01:15:600 (5) ? ( Add circle there and maybe delete (5))
01:30:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do this instead? Should be better to follow either voice and piano
01:34:418 (3) - Make it an 1/2 slider for the same reason as ^
02:47:100 (1) - Make it a bit longer, so it ends to 02:48:782 (it's an 1/6)

[Red Rose]

[Graphics]

there are other part that can benefit a curvy pattern
00:00:056 (1,2) - Curve those?
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01:15:327 (1) - A normal curve should flow better
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01:28:418 (1) - It's still a soft song, so blanketing the end do feel good
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[Rhythm]

00:27:874 (4,1) - An Hold slider? Just use a x0.5 Sv change
01:51:054 (x) - Add Note "to" and adjust to ?
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Aurele

osu! Alumni

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Joined January 2011

Aurele 2012-12-24T03:11:12+00:00

I can see you have troubles with your map going to Graveyard, after reviving it, make sure to update it. So it will stay in Pending.

bossandy

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Topic Starter

bossandy 2012-12-24T10:55:02+00:00

I know that when I see it I will be Resurrecting it, because I always think I can use my computer later , but in fact .... T ^ T

bossandy

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bossandy 2012-12-29T08:16:47+00:00

Fixed most!!! Thanks guys!!

Kotone

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Kotone 2013-02-11T09:16:40+00:00

老大你還做么

bossandy

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bossandy 2013-02-24T11:51:08+00:00

SB完成!! Update!!

p3n

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p3n 2013-02-24T13:18:54+00:00

[General]
SB images are almost uncompressed. I re-compressed them for you without any quality loss: http://puu.sh/27z9u

Still very busy today but I'll post the full mod later tonight!

bossandy

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bossandy 2013-02-25T12:16:43+00:00

p3n wrote:
[General]
SB images are almost uncompressed. I re-compressed them for you without any quality loss: http://puu.sh/27z9u

Still very busy today but I'll post the full mod later tonight!

Thanks p3n! , really thanks ))

popner

osu! Alumni

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Joined March 2011

popner 2013-03-14T16:28:32+00:00

Hi~

[General]
Display the epilepsy warning? Some of your SB images have a sudden appearance from completely dark.

[SB]
Move all the elements to background layer? Some part are displayed incorrectly with widescreen:

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00:45:873 - white.png - how about use '1' style for moving? It is more nature from what I see.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.jpg",320,240
 M,1,45854,47491,-318,294,620,294
 F,0,45854,55674,0.51872
 M,1,54038,55674,620,294,959,299
 F,0,55674,,0.51872

00:52:418 - sb/sb.png - these words are not moving in a vertical route, is this intentional?

[Yellow Rose]
01:32:782 (4) - may touch the score bar.

[Blue Rose]
I found that the combo length in this difficulty is longer than [Red Rose], are there some special reasons?
00:18:601 (3,4) - the slider end stack is hard to read in a Normal diff. Maybe something instead?
00:59:509 (2) - add some curve on it, just like 01:00:054 (3)? So they will looks better (and neater) here. Example:

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01:16:964 (1,2,3) - the overlay here adds some reading problem for new player. Try to make the pattern more clear?
02:46:964 (1) - the pre-spinner note is far away from the screen center. This may cause some problem to who have small round spin. You can put this note somewhere like:

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[Red Rose]
00:11:783 (2,3,4) - How about ctrl+g to each slider? I feel that the flow can be better, especially between 00:10:965 (1,2)
00:26:237 (1,2,3,4) - the anti-jump does not makes much sense imo.. But this is my personal preference.
01:40:929 (2) - unsnapped note.
01:40:929 (2,2) - try to fix it: the two notes are not stacking properly.
02:20:509 (3,4) - maybe move them up a little? So the angle can be consistent between 02:19:963 (1,2,3,4):

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02:42:054 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - the part has a very different pace from previous parts imo.. I think you should try to keep the pace here, or slow down the pace gradually.

Call me back when you are ready.

bossandy

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bossandy 2013-03-15T08:15:34+00:00

popner wrote:
Hi~

[SB]
Move all the elements to background layer? Some part are displayed incorrectly with widescreen:
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00:45:873 - white.png - how about use '1' style for moving? It is more nature from what I see.
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.jpg",320,240
 M,1,45854,47491,-318,294,620,294
 F,0,45854,55674,0.51872
 M,1,54038,55674,620,294,959,299
 F,0,55674,,0.51872
00:52:418 - sb/sb.png - these words are not moving in a vertical route, is this intentional? Waiting for Kotone

[Red Rose]
02:42:054 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - the part has a very different pace from previous parts imo.. I think you should try to keep the pace here, or slow down the pace gradually. I would like to keep it as they are , sorry ~

Call me back when you are ready.

Other fixed! Thanks for your mod~

Kotone

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Kotone 2013-03-15T10:03:43+00:00

http://puu.sh/2i1Eh

popner

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popner 2013-03-15T11:02:37+00:00

Recheck, and fix a storyboard issue.

Last edited by popner 2013-03-18T10:06:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Niva

Global Moderator

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Niva 2013-03-15T13:12:42+00:00

Did small IRC discussion:

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20:00 *Niva is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/181457 Jayn - Promise of Reunion]
20:00 Niva: checking now :D
20:00 bossandy: :D
20:00 bossandy: OwO!!!
20:01 bossandy: Thanks Niva :)))
20:14 Niva: umm
20:17 Niva:  oh, btw bossandy
20:17 Niva: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/60721
20:17 Niva: does 'Hard' shows 4.52 star rating in the web?
20:18 bossandy: 4.52 yas
20:18 bossandy: Hard = red rose
20:18 Niva: a... it should be 4.23 I think o.o
20:19 Niva: idk if it's web bug or something...
20:19 bossandy: Oh , you are right
20:19 Niva: yep, try updating again?
20:19 bossandy: ok , wait a moment
20:20 bossandy: updated
20:21 Niva: Blue Rose :
20:21 Niva: 01:40:623 (1) - snap to red line? (i know it's from my mod but after I think it again red line sounds better because of the slidertick ._.)
20:21 Niva: 01:40:623 (1) - snap to red line? (i know it's from my mod but after I think it again red line sounds better because of the slidertick ._.)
20:22 bossandy: ok
20:22 bossandy: snaped to 01:40:691 - 
20:23 Niva: oh, yellow rose also
20:24 bossandy: ok
20:24 Niva: btw
20:24 Niva: 00:58:964 (1) - yellow rose
20:25 Niva: from this point
20:25 Niva: is it supposed to be 5% o.o
20:25 bossandy: snapped too
20:26 bossandy: ??
20:26 Niva: umm, I mean the part volume :D
20:27 bossandy: oh , I think it is fine now
20:27 Niva: oh, nvm, I see it's fixed already~
20:27 bossandy: 20% is better for me
20:27 bossandy: xDD
20:28 Niva: ok~
20:30 Niva: a... I asked around and it's still shown as 4.52...
20:30 bossandy: really...
20:30 Niva: let me ask around >_<
20:30 bossandy: ok
20:34 Niva: umm, idk if this will word
20:34 Niva: *work
20:34 Niva: try to rename the diff into something (for example : Test)
20:34 Niva: upload
20:34 Niva: then rename it again to Red Rose
20:35 Niva: then upload again
20:35 Niva: it might work~
20:35 bossandy: ohoh
20:35 bossandy: let me try
20:36 Niva: ok, I'll wait (:
20:38 bossandy: done
20:38 bossandy: but ...
20:38 Niva: umm?
20:39 bossandy: didn't change anything!
20:39 Niva: ah I see... ._.

(to next BAT : yes, the issue here is that the highest diff shows as 4.52 on the listing which makes the diff spread E-E-I, while it should be 4.23 (E-E-H), I've asked around and people I asked are saying it should be fine because it's just a visual bug - I'm not really sure to send this to rank this atm although map is fine, please look at this before ranking though xD)

(PS : yep, me and bossandy already tried few methods to take care of this issue as mentioned in the chatlog, but didn't work ._.)

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Flask

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Flask 2013-03-15T13:26:55+00:00

;w; 老大又泡!

10nya

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10nya 2013-03-16T05:44:58+00:00

go rank oxo)bb

EDIT: yay new page

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