Combo1 : 197,197,150
Combo2 : 253,255,159
Combo3 : 95,172,79
Combo4 : 182,114,114

-Bakari- wrote:

I AM SO CUTE

Hi Gabe. Hi Baka Bakari♥

random short mod

[General]
Gabe is so awesome :3 I know right.
how about tickrate 2 (for vocals)? (ticr rate 1 feels empty :<) (if you'll do it => you'll have to add more green lines o3o) <- Exactly why I won't do it. LOL
yeah 70% volume for the whole map looks lazy-mapped. Wait, what? o_o. It seems pretty good like this, seriously. Also, the song is pretty soft, I don't know why I should make it more louder D:

personally i want to say that your bg is too bright and may hurt eyes. what about something like this BG? Asked to three people to see which background was better, and they all said that the current one is better. But I like both backgrounds.

[Rain]
00:48:716 (3,4,5) - more easy patterns. (since you have AR3 it's better to make diff easier because AR3 is quite fast for beginners and 1/2 might be hard to read >.<) blanket slider? o3o (this one isn't well done and i don't feel like i should give a code for it. I tryed something similar to yours and I didn't really liked it. So I will keep this one because of 00:49:534 (1) - which it fits with the vocal and the hitsounds I've placed.
00:57:714 (2) and 00:59:896 (1) - this circle feels a bit hard for beginners, imo. what if we'll try to make something easier to play? for example 2/1 slider here? example with some weird but playable blanket sliders. o3o actually yyour map contains some similar patterns. if you want feel free to change them in the same way. but i want you to keep some of them without changes (01:24:437 (1,2) - for example). if you will change some of them it will make diff a bit more interesting for beginners and they will study some things from this diff Tryed something similar to your slider at 00:59:623 (4) -
01:57:431 (2) - overlapped with hp-bar. slider is still readable but it may confuse some beginners. OMG! WHAT'S WRONG WITH THIS SLIDER? SHOULD I CLICK AT HP BAR OR WHAT? D: SDASASDSDASDASDAD DRAMA it will stress beginners. DRAMAAA, DRAMAAAAAAAAA. Done.
02:02:339 (2,1,2) - it's quite awkward to see them . i understand that you want entertain player with some cool shapes but not here! there's no place to curve sliders this way and it looks odd. yeah. don't use this weird shapes (nazi) Well, for this part I did some uncurved shape like this one. So I won't change it :3

I expected to see more sliders in the end of map. But your rhythm is awesome, too.

[Sunshine!]
nazi: remove "!" from diff name o3o No, no, no! Q.Q. I really like the "!" for this difficulty. I don't want to delete it D:
how about HP Drain: 6? It's quite hard to keep HP during 1/1 notes >.< Erh, sure.
02:17:064 (5) - overlapped with hp-bar. can you fix it, please? Should be better now.

note: some blankets aren't perfect but still looks good.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bye Gabe.

Flask wrote:

Here's my mod for my favorite MAT /o/ ♥


[Rain]

1. 00:44:626 (1) - (nazi)Delete this note? This is too close to the spinner D: It's not too close. I saw worst, seriously. Also, it fit well because of the finish.
2. 01:01:259 (1,2) - This would be more blanket, even if you don't make a blanket here Seems to be better now
   
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   (2) > x:408 y:264
3. 01:19:529 (1) - Same as above so nazi again :\ No.
4. 01:27:436 (1,2) - It's hard too tell what of these slider make me feel... creepy. I'm just kidding. But try this if you need Lol, did another form.
   
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   240,248,87436,6,0,B|296:312|296:312|368:304|384:224,2,210,4|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0
   304,152,89618,2,0,B|248:88|248:88|176:96|160:176,2,210,4|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0

5. 01:32:617 - So why here's no finish/object? Deleted the second slider to make one reverse slider.
6. 01:56:613 (1) - meh Meow :3
   Pretty well!

[Gabeshine]

1. 00:17:904 - Add a note? I feel so empty here ;-; When I was with my friend, we both said no on this because it doesn't sound really good.
2. 00:50:352 (1) - You add whistle at the "slider", not the begin and ends. I don't like what you did here because it's too noisy ;_; I added one here because of when she sings: Take me awaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay. so it represent the awaaaaaaaaaaaay.
3. 01:19:529 (2) - (nazi) It's a good time to make a blanket with (1)'s end. Well I have no idea to do this so change by your own idea~ k, done?
4. 01:44:888 (1,2) - Well, you make a good slider! But you can blanket here like this. Maybe you will say: Hey! I follow spacing! But Anti jumps are great at the same time ovo The spacing, that's exactly why i will reject this suggestion since the slider 2 and 3 will overlap each others.
5. 01:46:796 (3) - ^try to make on other side Same.
6. 02:19:790 (1) - Same as above No, o3o..

I get pocketful of sunshine /o/
Awesome map, well constructed!! Have my star >w<!

23:13  *Mercurial is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/180432 Natasha Bedingfield - Pocketful Of Sunshine [Rain]]
23:13 Mercurial: As promised.
23:13 Gabe: :D
23:15 Mercurial: I don't got the best mood, so I'll try to do the best of me, and then I'll go to sleep.
23:15 Gabe: Take your time :3
23:17 Mercurial: Here or forum?
23:17 Gabe: modding.
23:17 Gabe: o-o
23:17 Mercurial: Yep
23:17 Mercurial: I mean.
23:17 Mercurial: Chat or forum.
23:17 Gabe: oh..
23:17 Gabe: irc mod
23:17 Gabe: i seeee
23:17 Gabe: well.
23:17 Mercurial: Np.
23:17 Gabe: Do what you want.
23:17 Mercurial: Irc is more easy.
23:17 Gabe: Okay
23:17 Gabe: :3
23:17 Mercurial: but is your choose.
23:17 Mercurial: choice.
23:18 Mercurial: asdf.
23:18 Gabe: I love irc mods.
23:18 Mercurial: Okay then.
23:18 Mercurial: 02:12:156 (1) - Finish in slider tail, sounds better imo.
23:18 Gabe: Rain?
23:18 Mercurial: dafuq
23:18 Mercurial: Wait.
23:18 Mercurial: Yep.
23:19 Gabe: eh.
23:19 Gabe: that's a circle
23:19 Gabe: right?
23:19 Mercurial: The previous slider.
23:20 Mercurial: I don't know why the fuck osu! is taking wrong the timings on irc.
23:20 Gabe: Eh,
23:20 Mercurial: Click on the timing signature and check where is placed the circle.
23:20 Gabe: I will say no for this one, Reason: The consistency about Finishes are in the Big White line and the second red tick.
23:20 Gabe: It won't fit great here.
23:21 Mercurial: 02:14:064 (1) - You got a finish there
23:21 Mercurial: In a red line.
23:21 Mercurial: I don't see the consistency there.
23:21 Gabe: I said the second.
23:21 Gabe: that's the second.
23:21 Mercurial: :O
23:21 Mercurial: I see.
23:22 Mercurial: Sorry for the missunderstandings.
23:22 Gabe: http://puu.sh/1egQ6
23:22 Gabe: That's okay.
23:22 Gabe: You can see the big white line,
23:22 Gabe: and two red ticks.
23:22 Mercurial: Yep.
23:22 Gabe: well, the second is the finish
23:22 Gabe: :3
23:22 Mercurial: Well.
23:22 Mercurial: I can't find anything else there.
23:22 Mercurial: Let's go normal
23:22 Mercurial: Or cloud.
23:23 Mercurial: whateveritiscalled.
23:23 Mercurial: Oh no.
23:23 Mercurial: Guest diff.
23:23 Mercurial: I'll mod it later.
23:23 Gabe: L0000000L
23:23 Mercurial: I got a bullet with your name on it, sunshine! /:D/
23:23 Gabe: eh what
23:24 Mercurial: Wait.
23:24 Mercurial: Sunshine
23:24 Gabe: yup?
23:24 Mercurial: AR8, seriously?
23:24 Gabe: yup
23:24 Mercurial: 110 bpm.
23:24 Mercurial: Normal -> AR5
23:24 Gabe: It plays pretty well
23:24 Gabe: D:
23:24 Gabe: Lemme see what I can do here
23:24 Mercurial: Okay.
23:25 Mercurial: OD6 in consistency with HP Drain?
23:25 Gabe: Yeah..
23:25 Mercurial: Yey.
23:25 Gabe: If i need to change the AR,
23:25 Gabe: I must change the OD
23:25 Mercurial: AR7 OD6 then.
23:25 Gabe: Oh,
23:25 Gabe: it plays pretty well.
23:25 Mercurial: AR8 is not meant for everyone.
23:25 Gabe: Changed.
23:26 Mercurial: 00:13:813 (1,2) - That small spacing.
23:26 Mercurial: Taking in consideration the previous patterns.
23:27 Mercurial: Is like a sudden slow gameplay.
23:27 Mercurial: Which is odd.
23:27 Mercurial: Dunno.
23:27 Gabe: 00:22:539 (1,2) - 
23:27 Gabe: Same thing here.
23:27 Mercurial: Let me finish xD!
23:27 Gabe: oh.
23:27 Gabe: ok.
23:27 Mercurial: No problem .3
23:27 Mercurial: :3
23:27 Mercurial: Also, well, if you thing that's right, I'll not complain about it.
23:28 Mercurial: I'm just notice it at you.
23:28 Gabe: That's okay :3
23:28 Gabe: But also, the song seems to be more calm here,
23:28 Gabe: so I made the spacing more lower.
23:28 Mercurial: I know.
23:28 Mercurial: But if the song is more "calm".
23:29 Mercurial: then you could add a slowy slider.
23:29 Mercurial: But it's just crazy talk.
23:29 Mercurial: I really like the small jumps.
23:29 Gabe: a slowy slider?
23:29 Gabe: the jump, where?
23:29 Mercurial: Not easy nor hard enough.
23:29 Gabe: there's too much jumps.
23:29 Gabe: LOL
23:30 Mercurial: All the jumps.
23:30 Mercurial: :P
23:30 Mercurial: Are just great.
23:30 Gabe: Thank you :3
23:30 Mercurial: It reminds me at Lesjuh style :3
23:30 Gabe: ...
23:30 Mercurial: xD
23:30 Gabe: COMPARING ME TO LESJUH
23:30 Gabe: MUST I FEEL PRO RIGHT NOW?
23:30 Gabe: <3
23:30 Mercurial: Yeah, I love you too :3
23:31 Gabe: I wonder how i did that pattern 00:23:630 (3,4,5,6,7) - 
23:31 Gabe: this is fabulous!
23:31 Mercurial: 00:43:263 (2) - DAT WHISTLE.
23:31 Mercurial: AAAAAAAAARGGG Q.@
23:31 Gabe: should I delete it...?
23:31 Gabe: Breeze poked the same thing.
23:31 Mercurial: Nah.
23:31 Mercurial: Ehm.
23:31 Mercurial: Then you should delete it.
23:32 Gabe: I will try with, and without
23:32 Gabe: too see the difference
23:32 Gabe: normally,
23:32 Gabe: this wasn't eh..
23:32 Gabe: intentionnal
23:32 Gabe: it was an accident
23:32 Mercurial: No problem.
23:32 Gabe: and it sounded good.
23:32 Gabe: LOL
23:32 Mercurial: Hahahaha.
23:32 Gabe: .So I kepted it 
23:32 Gabe: c
23:32 Gabe: i kept*
23:32 Gabe: wtf.
23:32 Mercurial: Because during that section of the song.
23:32 Mercurial: You don't got any whistle.
23:33 Mercurial: And suddenly.
23:33 Mercurial: BOOM!.
23:33 Mercurial: but meh.
23:33 Mercurial: As you wish.
23:34 Mercurial: If you gonna keep it, then don't delete the other whistles like that.
23:34 Mercurial: But if you don't, then you know what to do.
23:35 Mercurial: Don't ask me why.
23:35 Mercurial: 01:44:888 (1) - Mancuso style (?
23:35 Gabe: Mancuso?
23:35 Gabe: LOLWHAT
23:36 Gabe: I've never seen him doing this.
23:36 Gabe: but that was original.
23:36 Mercurial: Yep, that's a really well done slider.
23:36 Gabe: k, it sounds really weird without normal whistles.
23:36 Mercurial: I could stay 1 or 2 entire days making it, and it will be a disaster.
23:37 Mercurial: Something like a chimera.
23:37 Gabe: Eh..
23:37 Gabe: that's easy
23:37 Gabe: really easy
23:37 Mercurial: Not for me.
23:37 Mercurial: NOT FOR ME.
23:37 Mercurial: Ok not.
23:37 Mercurial: :P
23:37 Gabe: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/60581
23:37 Gabe: Look at the Easy
23:38 Gabe: the sliders are <3
23:38 Mercurial: Seriously.
23:38 Mercurial: Don't bring me anime maps, again.
23:38 Mercurial: okay?
23:38 Gabe: ...
23:38 Gabe: kk
23:38 Mercurial: Thanks.-
23:38 Gabe: but LOOK AT THE SLIDERS
23:38 Gabe: DDD;
23:38 Mercurial: I hate them.
23:38 Mercurial: Nope.
23:38 Gabe: okay then,
23:38 Gabe: hater http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/460089
23:38 Gabe: <3
23:39 Mercurial: Bitch please.
23:39 Mercurial: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/52999
23:39 Mercurial: Take a look.
23:39 Mercurial: ikari style.
23:40 Mercurial: Just one more thing to poke out.
23:40 Gabe: Extreme, I guess?
23:40 Mercurial: Yep.
23:41 Mercurial: 02:25:789 (1) - Remove NC due consistency with previous (Entire map) patterns.
23:41 Gabe: k
23:41 Gabe: (wait, need to look)
23:41 Gabe: 02:26:335 (1) - 
23:41 Gabe: new combo here?
23:41 Gabe: right?
23:42 Mercurial: not.
23:42 Mercurial: Previous slider.
23:42 Gabe: eh, the vocal
23:42 Mercurial: Yep.
23:42 Mercurial: Look at your previous combos.
23:42 Mercurial: Scream, calm voice.
23:42 Mercurial: Scream, calm voice.
23:43 Gabe:  Going to add a new combo to 02:26:335 - 
23:43 Gabe: because of the vocal
23:43 Gabe: D:
23:43 Mercurial: Okay then.
23:43 Mercurial: That's all.
23:43 Mercurial: Sorry if my mod was poor or something.
23:43 Mercurial: It's my first mod since 2 months.
23:43 Gabe: Nothing is poor
23:43 Gabe: at least you've been helpfull
23:43 Gabe: :3
23:43 Mercurial: Thanks.
23:44 Gabe: You're welcome.
23:44 Mercurial: Well, I'm going to post and get my precious kudosu as well.
23:44 Gabe: LUUUL
23:44 Mercurial: Also, I'm too lazy right now.
23:44 Gabe: going to savlog
23:44 Gabe: kk?
23:44 Mercurial: Yes, please.

22:06 Gabe: Tu voudrais testé un truc? :3
22:06 MathiasXII: Ouaiiis je peux... il faudrait que je déménages par contre brb
22:07 Gabe: Vive les laptops.
22:07  *Gabe is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/180432 Natasha Bedingfield - Pocketful Of Sunshine]
22:11 Gabe: ...
22:11 Gabe: We need the Full Submition, seriously.
22:12 Gabe: ohnvm
22:16 MathiasXII: lol spinner spinner spinner 
22:19 MathiasXII: C'est super
22:20 MathiasXII: La seule affaire qui m'accroche vite comme ça c'est le fait que les spinners sont placés trop près de la 
22:20 MathiasXII: prochaine 1/2 note dans le facile
22:20 MathiasXII: ça va être problématique car ça porte facilement a confusion
22:20 Gabe: Hm...
22:21 Gabe: J'avais normalement suivi mes Finish
22:21 Gabe: comme dans la Hard
22:21 MathiasXII: ah ?
22:22 MathiasXII: Dans hard ça fonctionne parce que c'est pas précédé d'un spinner et c'est pas une note seule :P
22:22 MathiasXII: et c'est hard
22:23 Gabe: Je vais essayé de replacé les Spinners par des Sliders
22:23 MathiasXII: 00:44:626 (1) -  ça ça va faire rager lol
22:23 MathiasXII: dans easy :P
22:24 MathiasXII: Au pire, je dirais enleve le spinner complètement et remplace le par des notes... parce que j'ai essayer en 
22:24 MathiasXII: raccourcissant le spinner
22:24 MathiasXII: mais même là la note d'après apparait trop rapidement
22:24 Gabe: Pareil.
22:24 MathiasXII: ah ok oui c'est ce que tu as dit haha
22:25 Gabe: Et si je le racourci, foudrais ajouté une note à 00:43:808
22:25 MathiasXII: bon bin j'appuie cette démarche :P
22:26 MathiasXII: Au niveau du timing, il est parfait
22:26 MathiasXII: Je vais juste vérifier ton hard 
22:26 Gabe: D'accord~
22:32 Gabe: J'essaye de savoir quel pattern que je pourrais utilisé pour le spacing..
22:34 MathiasXII: dans le spacing ?
22:34 MathiasXII: 2 détails dans hard
22:35 Gabe: Ouais, j'veux pas faire un certain pattern pour déranger tout les autres objets
22:35 Gabe: Oui?
22:35 MathiasXII: 02:14:201 (3) - Ce slider là est un peu nowhere sur la longueur... je te conseillerais qu'il finisse plutôt sur un 
22:35 MathiasXII: red tick avant et que tu ajoutes une note entre le 3 et le 1
22:36 MathiasXII: 02:19:790 (1) - là aussi finir à un red tick, je trouvais que ça sonnait mieux, mais ça je le trouve moins 
22:36 MathiasXII: important/problématique
22:38 Gabe: 1- Fait
22:39 Gabe: 2- Je vais essayé, pour l'instant j'aime bien de la façon qu'il est placé pour le "scream" qu'elle fait
22:39 MathiasXII: hehe ok
22:39 MathiasXII: mais ouais a part ça tout est beau, tout est correct... pour le spacing hmm j'y pense encore
22:40 MathiasXII: Mais je crois que tu as déjà fait bon usage du spacing
22:40 MathiasXII: où ya des jumps dans son refrain dans les parties genre Take Me A(jump)way
22:41 Gabe: J'ai ris.
22:41 MathiasXII: A part ça, dans le couplet tu peux faire genre des jumps où ya des whistles
22:41 Gabe: Comme ça 00:44:626 (2,3,4,1) - ?
22:41 MathiasXII: oui ça
22:41 Gabe: D'accord
22:42 Gabe: OMGWTF.
22:42 Gabe: 1/16
22:42 Gabe: on as vraiment besoin de ca aufait?
22:43 MathiasXII: lol 1/16 !!!
22:43 MathiasXII: Hmmm je sais que dans Stepmania, oui il y avait des chansons qui utilisaient des 1/16
22:43 Gabe: ... lolwhat
22:43 Gabe: Do you really think someone will be able to stream a song with 1/16?
22:44 Gabe: Certainly not someone exept Cookiezi
22:44 MathiasXII: Bin si la chanson est 98BPM oui
22:44 MathiasXII: lol
22:44 Gabe: ...
22:44 Gabe: Ohyou
22:44 MathiasXII: Ouais bin desfois ya des chansons lentes qui sont mappés a double BPM justement parce que la limite était 
22:44 MathiasXII: 1/8
22:44 MathiasXII: pour accéder a des 1/12 genre
22:45 MathiasXII: Y'a rien qui va en dessous de 1/16 par exemple... si t'a besoin de plus que 1/16 sparce que ya kkchose qui 
22:45 MathiasXII: marche pas
22:45 Gabe: Ahaha xD
22:45 Gabe: Bon, je savelog, post sur le forum and give you a kudosu? :3
22:46 MathiasXII: Hahaha umm ok 
22:46 MathiasXII: Mais nnoooon c'est pas nécessaire en meme temps
22:46 MathiasXII: Tro paresseux 
22:46 MathiasXII: LoL!
22:46 Gabe: ...
22:46 Gabe: Fénéant va

296,264,61259,6,0,B|216:320|80:264|64:184,2,280,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

p3n wrote:

[Rain]
Why do I even...this *Easy* cannot be done any better. ♥

[Sunshine]
While this map is well made and perfectly executed it somehow lacks "something". I guess you could spice it up a bit by following the vocals outside the refrain a bit more. Makes it much more interesting and more intuitive to play anyway.
00:23:630 (3) - move back by 1/2 and add a repeat to match lyrics? (could be stacked with previous circle) Hm, first, I don't really think it match with the vocal and also, it may kill the flow I've did here. So I will reject this one.
00:37:673 - add note for vocal follow? I haven't added a circle, but a slider. So it will be better, done.

00:46:807 (2) - there is a slight problem with some sliders during the refrain parts...the vocals are actually in 1/6. Therefore I was hitting those sliders a bit early and felt stupid *sadpanda* The vocals are the most dominant here and you seemed to follow it before. If you want you can start this slider on 00:46:716 - but keep the ending on 00:47:353 -.
Some examples that work the same way as described above (-1/6 start, +1/6 length): 00:48:989 (2) - 01:19:529 (2) - 01:21:710 (2) - 01:23:892 (2) - 01:28:254 (2) - 01:32:617 (2) - 01:34:799 (2) - Okay, this may be a problem for certain but, I tryed with your suggestion and it feels like it's starting too quickly. Also, if you heard my hitsounds, I've added finishes to the Big white line and the second red line (Like I said to Mercurial). So I will also reject this one since I really think the current once seems to fit the song way more better.
Some examples that don't work well with the momentary beatplacement 00:53:352 (2) - 00:57:714 (2) - 00:59:896 (2) - 01:26:073 (2) -
This is not the full list but you get the idea and I don't go for a complete list as most ppl tend to ignore 1/6 timing errors or just say "nah mapping the baseline here" or "1/4 sounds close enough". This is purely a suggestion as it makes mapping this properly much, much more complicated.

01:13:257 (4) - maybe add note @01:13:121 - and move (4) to the blue tick @01:13:393 - . Mapping 01:13:666 - would complete the vocal follow but is not necessary. Playtested some different setups here and the most natural for me was this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/461634 My star pattern... my star pattern! added a slider to make fit the vocal more.
01:54:977 (1) - add finish to ending? The silenced ending feels very weird It will make two finish in a row? It may be weird but it sounds good.
02:01:794 (1) - very close to the HP-bar, probably too close. Should be better now.


Neat mapset. Almost perfectly executed. Have this~

Konei wrote:

Lol :3


Must fix

Should fix

I wanted to mention

Suggestion


[General]

* You can try to delete the osb.file as you are not using a SB. I heard that it keeps recoming, but you can try to do so ~
* Blanket Meta Data bug http://puu.sh/1eNoS >.< You will have to fix :3 (Cloud and Rain)
* Why is Beatsnap Divisor 1/16? o.o/

[Rain]

00:39:445 (1,2,3) - This pattern could look a bit neater to me as it doesn't flow like your others currently. Something like http://puu.sh/1eNo3 looks great imo. Blancket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/461993
02:01:521 (1) - This shape could actually look like 3 because all Sliders are this type there. Done.
02:06:702 (2) - I think this diff is very much symmetry and so I miss symmetry here http://puu.sh/1eNuW That's a copy from the previous slider.
02:12:701 (2,1) - This diff is so beautiful, and easy! So I don't think you should give newbies a chance to rage because they can't read this stack. It's 1/1 I think you can place them nicely without stacking here Should be good now :3
02:18:427 - I don't think it's a good idea to miss this finish :3 Butbutbutbut, it sounds good without D:
02:19:790 (3) - Move a bit up, it should have the same height as 1 :3 Done!


[Sunshine!]

00:09:723 (2,3) - It could be better if they're ends would be meeting, also CTRL + H Is nice because 2 and 3 are building a new shape to 1
then http://puu.sh/1eNC1 I tryed your suggestion, unfortunataly, the flow won't be good with 00:10:269 (3,4,1) - .
00:25:811 (7) - This Sldershape looks a bit untidy to me, I would place it more to the mid for symmetry if it is not on purpose i did it this for the flow. If not I would have placed it in a random place.
00:26:629 (1) - I actually don't see a reason for this jump, the downbeat is already over, so I think this jump is a bit unexpected True but it plays pretty well.
00:31:537 (2) - Make this shape more fitting to 1? http://puu.sh/1eNKT Did some change to 1 instead.
01:03:441 (1) - Move down for better flow and triangle? http://puu.sh/1eNO0 Should be good now.
01:32:617 (2) - Can be moved more nicely for a circle with 1 Also, if you move 1,2,3 a bit so that it stacks with 2's end, it could get more epic http://puu.sh/1eNVk Did something similar
01:50:887 (6) - NC? o.o Feels somehow fitting Done.


That's all imo :3

This is really ready to go

Good luck moe Gabe <3 o/

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ M4M

[General]

1. i'd like to make a long kiai but not only two short fountains in the first part, but anyway, it's up to u :> I explained it in another mod. Well actually, I don't want to put long kiai time here since these parts are not as active as this part 01:55:795. So, no.

[Rain]

1. 00:37:264 (2) - adjust the shape to make it more smooth? like this: Done.
   
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2. 00:49:534 (1) - parallel to 00:48:716 (3) - ? i suppose it's looked better~ You meant... aligned in the same x: axis? it looks bad, to be honest D:
3. 01:25:255 (2) - try to adjust the shape for you to make it more circular Oh, thanks for the code. Done.
   
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4. 01:36:162 - i suppose end your spinner here may be better due to the vocal No, as you can see, everything ends there.
5. 01:57:431 (2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - suddenly polylines because other sliders are all curved~ i can't say it's not good... just...weird a bit That's true, this weird, but it's original :p. I also changed this slider 01:55:795 (1) -

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1. i suppose you can choose slider tick rate 2 for this diff :> Every difficulties are TickRate 1.
2. 00:17:358 - make a triplet here for transition? Hm... Not really. I tryed it and it doens't sound good. It's mostly like if you're asking me to add a triplet here 00:13:813 (1) - .
   
3. 00:17:904 - i'd like to add a note here and stack to 00:18:176 (2) - Hmkay, I am going to add a circle here, but because of the jump, I won't stack it with the slider.
4. 00:34:810 - also suggest to add a note, 296:168 may be a good place :> I prefer not adding a circle here because it will mostly kill the flow.
5. 01:08:894 (6) - a 1/2 slider here may be better than only a note Nice idea, but I deleted the slider 7 to replace it by a circle, and added a long slider to replace 6.
6. 02:04:384 - add a note here to make a triplet? Sure!
   
7. 02:11:065 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow? I would have liked if it wasn't because of the spacing, but I am going to reject this one because the spacing from this slider's end from the next slider will be too big and in my opinion, it doesn't flow that much :<

that's all~~ niice map so star & good luck~~