1. Bobo's Fast (4.86 stars, 387 notes)
2. Decent (4.12 stars, 341 notes)
3. Slow (2.2 stars, 200 notes)
4. Speed Of Sound (4.88 stars, 501 notes)

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.

General:
Insert the BG in the other two diffs. (Tales/knuckles)
Needs a better difficulty between Knuckles and Sonic. BADLY Both the score gap and level gap is insanely huge.

Easy:
00:46:246 (1) - This spinner is rather long for the easiest difficulty. It would tire out beginners easily. I would remove it and map this part or add a break.
zzzz I hope you plan on mapping the entire thing for consistency. Sure AND DONE


Normal:
00:46:246 (1,1) - For a normal (at least I think it's a normal) I wouldn't put a note so close after a spinner. Move the slider back to 00:49:616?
00:50:628 (2) - I suggest removing the repeat and placing a note at 00:51:639 so players can click and kiai happens! :L
00:59:729 (1,1) - Same note as the first comment. I would suggest removing spinner and map it. No sry :/
01:04:953 (4) - This 1/1 stack could possibly be confusing because you stacked (2,3) and they were 1/2 notes.
01:52:313 (1,1) - Same comment as the first. Move slider back? No sry :/ It follows the rhythm
01:56:695 (2) - Same as second comment.
02:05:796 (1,1) - Same as third comment. Possibly map it.
02:27:032 (5,6) - Don't like how 5 is overlapped 6. Try to make 6 wrap around 5 instead?
02:39:504 (1) - Pretty long break. Maybe map half of the guitar solo?
03:11:864 (1,1) - Same as third comment. Remove spinner and map it. No sry :/
03:25:347 (1) - Break during kiai is rather useless. Just map till the end of kiai. Possibly a long slider curvy slider? ^

Hard Insane:
Somehow this is mapped quite better than the rest. :L
00:50:796 (3) - This is completely unexpected and rather useless increase of slider velocity. Just make it 1x. This is to emphasize the epicness
00:52:819 (5,6,7,8,9) - I don't like the overlap. Maybe something like this?
00:58:717 (7,8,9) - ^ But no idea how to change it.
01:56:864 (3) - Same as first comment.
02:48:942 (1,1) - It may be hard/insane but I really don't like a note 1/2 after a spinner especially with such a high AR.
02:57:706 (11) - First comment. I mention these because there's no real indication when a slider slowdown/speed up happens unless it's like after a spinner and is consistent until say a kiai time. Map slider with 1x velocity.
03:18:942 (5) - One grid up? (Nazi)
03:21:976 (11) - This slider could definitely be made better compared to your previous sliders.
03:28:380 - Doubt this break is needed. It's so short. It is better than the meter drop

No star yet sorry.


Here's my map for M4M. Any comment is good!
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/23138

RobotoRaccoon wrote:

Mod

[Knuckles]
00:43:549 (1,1) - A finish on one of these two? Like Super Sonic
01:05:459 (1,2) - Ugly for my taste, maybe make it so it does not intersect the score?
01:22:482 (1) - 1 gird left
01:30:403 (3,4) - Down 1?
01:49:616 (1,1) - A finish on one of these two? Like Super Sonic
02:03:099 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping here looks bad

[Super Sonic]
• Slider Tick Rate 2
00:15:740 (6) - Down 1 grid (Level 3)
00:16:414 (8) - ^
00:16:583 (1,2) - That'll cause you to re-space these. No worries though.
00:20:459 (4) - Left 1 grid
01:23:661 (3) - This overlap looks ugly. IMO
01:28:043 (1) - New combo? Nope
02:19:279 (1) - Add Finish
03:18:942 (5) - Up 1 grid
03:34:785 (1) - Make this more symmetrical.


Good map!
Star

Lunatic Neko wrote:

Neko Mod Go ~

[Overall]
- You don't seem to use the "BGUnfinished.jpg" and "ASTOMWUZHERE.jpg" so delete them.
- You should try to make better looking sliders.
- Seems like you have some Spacing errors at some parts, try to recheck your spacing.

[Tails]
- HP Drain + 2
00:14:223 (2) - Remove the Last Slider-Point and make it wrap around (1).
00:16:583 (5) - This Slider looks ugly. Make it sexier.
00:22:650 (2) - Make this Slider look something like that ~
00:38:156 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:42:538 (1) - ^
00:51:976 (2) - End this slider at 00:52:482
01:03:605 (3) - Make this Slider look better D: plz
01:23:324 (2) - Remove this and make circles at 01:23:324 and 01:23:661 and add a slider at 01:23:830
01:42:875 - Add Break
02:20:628 - Remove all Timing sections after this since it doesnt look like youre going to map the rest.

[Knuckles]
00:19:111 (2) - ctrl + H , ctrl + R and resnap
01:20:291 (2) - looks weird
01:44:223 (2) - ^
01:56:695 (2) - ^
02:42:201 (1) - Move the 4th Sliderpoint 1 grid to the right
03:19:953 (1) - Weird slider again

[Super Sonic]
00:22:482 (4) - Move this above the end of (3)
Also some slider problems here but i was to lazy to point them out =w=


This map needs some work, especially in design so Good Luck!

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hey~
i think i just can give some suggestion for you~

Tails
00:41:189 (2) - overlap at 00:41:358 (3) this slider?
01:34:785 (3) - make it more beautiful
01:46:414 (1) - change to a circle?

Knuckles
02:04:111 (3) - up 1 grid
02:27:369 (6) - make it more beautiful
02:35:543 (1) - uh, are you lazy? xD
03:04:953 (5) - make it balance

Super Sonic
- HP -1? too high of HP...
00:13:886 (1) - make it balance
00:50:796 (3) - why here need add x1.5 speed? change back x1.0
01:05:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it can make a circle pattern.
01:09:504 (9) - make it more beautiful
01:39:841 (4,5) - up 1 grid
01:42:538 (4) - left 1 grid
01:56:864 (3) - again. why here need add x1.5 speed? change back x1.0
02:01:583 (7,8) - make them look like same.
02:15:908 (11) - make it more beautiful
02:39:841 (1) - start form here... please. make them (stream) close a bit.
03:03:774 (1) - too far from the previous slider. and your previous slider is x1.5 speed, then dont do a jump on the next.
03:21:976 (11) - make it balance

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GoodLuck~~!!
ugh.. can't shoot a little star, cause being useless

[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5

[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5
SliderBorder : 0,0,0

Bobo wrote:

Ahaha my little brother drives me crazy with this song. XD
He just loves it. :3

-General-

Remove letterbox?
I agree with Raging Bull, you need a diff between Knuckles and Super Sonic. D:
Perhaps I could help?...
A taiko diff would be nice as well.

Open the .osu in notepad and scrolldown to colours

[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5

Add SliderBorder : 0,0,0 under it:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5
SliderBorder : 0,0,0

-Tails-

Really don't think you should've mapped this along the vocals. Sorry. D:

00:32:762 - First remove the repeat. Then make the slider 1 tick longer, re-add the repeat.
00:34:111 - Delete this note BEFORE making this change. ^
00:40:515 - Move this slider 2 ticks forward, replace the finish hitsound at the end with a clap.
00:41:189 - Delete this note BEFORE making this change. ^
00:55:347 - Remove the repeat, make the slider 2 ticks shorter, move it forward 2 ticks, re-add

the repeat. You'll have to re-snap it.
00:57:032 - Shorten the slider by 2 ticks. Re-snap 2 and 3 to this edit.
00:59:055 - I'd place this under 2's tail.
01:03:605 - Shorten by 4 ticks.
01:06:133 - Remove the repeat, make the slider 2 ticks shorter, move it forward 2 ticks, re-add

the repeat. You'll have to re-snap it.
01:28:043 - Take this whole combo and throw it back 2 ticks. Shorten (5) by 2 ticks.
01:37:313 - Shorten by 6 ticks.
01:38:661 - Shorten by 2 ticks.
01:52:313 - Shorten by 4 ticks.
02:11:021 - Remove this note.
02:40:852 - Remove clap.
03:15:908 - Throw this back 2 ticks, shorten by 2 ticks, re-snap.
03:16:583 - Add a note with clap. Re-snap 3, 4 and 5 to the edited 2.
03:17:257 - Replace finish with clap.
03:29:392 - Delete this note.
03:29:729 - Make this 4 ticks longer.
03:32:088 - Delete this note.
03:32:425 - Make this 4 ticks longer.

A lot of suggestion have been taken

-Knuckles-

00:43:043 - Unstack this note.
00:52:987 - Shorten by 2 ticks.
00:55:515 - Move this forward 2 ticks. Shorten by two ticks and re-snap.
01:04:953 - Forward 2 ticks, re-snap.
01:10:178 - Remove this note.
01:41:526 - This broke my combo, it must die! >:[ (No really remove it.)
01:44:644 - Remove this timing zone.
01:44:813 - ^
01:49:279 - Remove this note.
01:49:448 - ^
01:52:313 - Shorten by 2 ticks.
01:55:347 - Move this whole combo back 2 ticks.
01:56:526 - After making this edit ^, move 2, 3 and 4 back two more ticks and re-snap them.
02:15:740 - Add a note.
02:26:695 - Move 4 and 5 back 2 ticks, re-snap.
02:48:268 - Remove this note.
03:06:302 - Forward 2 ticks.

Some suggestions have been taken

-Super Sonic-

Umm....

Circle size 4?

I'd go a little easier on the whistle hitsound, you're really over using it in the kiai times and

from 02:39:504 to 03:00:234.

03:02:425 - U mad bro? Get rid of this. ._. This is to boost the player's meter bar
03:11:864 - I see epic jumping potential. Use it. Nope
03:22:650 - Same here. ^
03:37:482 - Aaaaaand here. ^

D:

Ill redo the whistling if someone complains about it again.
This is pre good I guess... @_@
Keep it up!

Thanks of lots for modding . Btw, if you want a guest diff, sure, Hard would be nice

• offset -10(3090)
  dont forget resnap after timing changed!

• 00:43:549 (1) - end at [00:46:751] will be better
  00:52:819 (3) - I think you needn't make a repeat here
  01:35:965 (1) - spcing plz , it's a little far in easy diff
  01:44:644 (x) - delete useless green line
  01:44:813 (x) - ^
  01:55:347 (x) - ^
  01:56:695 (x) - ^
  03:29:729 (2,2) - Extend by 1/1 beat

• AR -1 or 2
  00:36:460 (1) - hitsound changed suddenly, and it makes me very uncomfortable ,I sugguest Continue using Hit-Normal
  01:42:528 (1) - ^
  00:55:337 (2) - quite a big jump
  01:21:123 (4) - advance and extend by 1/2 beat
  02:03:595 (2,3) - spacing?
  02:29:719 (2) - spacing
  02:35:618 (2) - new combo if you need make some suddenly jumps

• 01:25:262 (6) - add a circle here?
  02:00:656 (4) - ^
  01:44:560 (6,7) - hit-soft plz

Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:

General

• offset -10(3090)
  dont forget resnap after timing changed!

Tails

• 00:43:549 (1) - end at [00:46:751] will be better
  00:52:819 (3) - I think you needn't make a repeat here
  01:35:965 (1) - spcing plz , it's a little far in easy diff
  01:44:644 (x) - delete useless green line
  01:44:813 (x) - ^
  01:55:347 (x) - ^
  01:56:695 (x) - ^
  03:29:729 (2,2) - Extend by 1/1 beat
  
  Some suggestion has been taken

Knuckles

• AR -1 or 2
  00:36:460 (1) - hitsound changed suddenly, and it makes me very uncomfortable ,I sugguest Continue using Hit-Normal
  01:42:528 (1) - ^
  00:55:337 (2) - quite a big jump
  01:21:123 (4) - advance and extend by 1/2 beat
  02:03:595 (2,3) - spacing?
  02:29:719 (2) - spacing
  02:35:618 (2) - new combo if you need make some suddenly jumps
  
  Some suggestion have been taken

Super Sonic

• 01:25:262 (6) - add a circle here?
  02:00:656 (4) - ^
  01:44:560 (6,7) - hit-soft plz
  
  I only take the third one :/

That's all : D

DragonSparta wrote:

If you want a guest diff, sure, Hard would be nice

Bobo wrote:

DragonSparta wrote:

If you want a guest diff, sure, Hard would be nice

25% Done as I'm typing this.
I'm a slow mapper. :L

EDIT: Weee~ 70% done! ^^
Should be finished by Thursday, school's been stacking a fair bit of work on me and I'm not getting much time to work on this.

1. You can change the sliderborder colour by add code adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values, black is 0,0,0, which I think would fit your skin) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file, since you use a custom hitcircle, change sliderborder colour could fit them
2. Remove sonic from tag since it's already in the source

1. 01:55:337 (1) - 1/2 beat forward, add a note at 01:56:348 with a finish sound, remove whistle of 01:56:179, so that fit the music
2. 02:05:112 (4) - 1 grid up to line 3

1. 00:50:796 (3) - Uh, unexpected 1.5xBPM slider, maybe you should add a SB warning
2. 01:56:864 (3) - ^

Breeze wrote:

Oh, pal, I love your font, but you only post a preview ;_;
Could you please send me the font <3 Sure

[General]

1. You can change the sliderborder colour by add code adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values, black is 0,0,0, which I think would fit your skin) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file, since you use a custom hitcircle, change sliderborder colour could fit them
2. Remove sonic from tag since it's already in the source

[Knukles]

1. 01:55:337 (1) - 1/2 beat forward, add a note at 01:56:348 with a finish sound, remove whistle of 01:56:179, so that fit the music
2. 02:05:112 (4) - 1 grid up to line 3

Done

[Super Sonic]

1. 00:50:796 (3) - Uh, unexpected 1.5xBPM slider, maybe you should add a SB warning
2. 01:56:864 (3) - ^

I'll try >_<"

nice map
star

Breeze wrote:

[Super Sonic]

1. 00:50:796 (3) - Uh, unexpected 1.5xBPM slider, maybe you should add a SB warning
2. 01:56:864 (3) - ^

DragonSparta wrote:

Bobo (Made by Bobo) (Done) Thanks for the diff~~~~ *Suggest changing the diff name >_<"

theMikeAG wrote:

You asked me What You're Made Of? Well, here it is!

~Tails~
01:20:281 (2) - Fix this slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/139618 I am the OCD slider master.
01:29:213 (5) - This sounds better ending at 01:30:056.
02:25:337 (2,3) - Replace these with a slider? Same with 02:30:730 (1,2).
03:34:775 (1,2) - Move these two so that (1) isn't overlapped.

~Knuckles~
00:42:528 (4,5,6,7) - I'm not a big fan of these streams to be honest. Maybe replace 00:42:696 (5,6,7) with a slider?
01:39:325 (3) - Finish at the end?
01:41:011 (1,2,3,1,2) - Honestly, I think it would be cool if you mapped the echoes.
01:48:089 (5,6,7,8) - Doesn't really match the music.
02:15:056 (2,3,4,5,6) - See above. Not a fan of the streams.
03:17:584 (1) - Doesn't match the music.

~Bobo~
Bobo is Bobo.

~Super Sonic~
00:59:729 (1,2,3,4) - Eh, slowdown sections are kind of odd.
01:02:762 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical?
01:29:729 (1,2,3,4) - ^^^

Th-th-that's all, Folks.

theMikeAG wrote:

~Bobo~
Bobo is Bobo.

Frozen wrote:

Do you need another diff? I can make one if you want; I'm not busy at the moment

This looks better to me...

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-tick rate 1? (all diffs)
-Gap between tails and knuckles seems big due to spacing/sv...

Tails:

00:38:146 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider
00:59:550 (1) - start it 1/2 later
01:58:876 (3) - goes off the edge of the playfield
03:09:831 (2,3) - (nazi) 1 level 3 grid down
03:16:573 (3) - too close to (2)
03:17:584 (1) - too close to (5)
03:20:281 (3) - new combo

Knuckles:

00:14:213 (2) - too far from (1)
00:16:573 (1) - too far from (6)
00:39:494 (3) - too close to (2)
00:42:022 (3,4,5) - uneven
01:59:719 (4,5,6) - uneven

Bobo:

-AR 7, 8 is fast for a hard
-map the rest of it?

00:40:842 (5,1) - switch NCs
01:04:944 (9) - too far from (8)
01:07:809 (1) - jump is pretty big for a hard
01:22:472 (1) - ^
01:46:909 (5,1) - switch NCs
02:11:516 (1) - wow, huge jump out of nowhere O.O
02:38:483 (1) - this 1.5x is really unexpected and is really hard for a hard
03:19:943 - 1.5x+jumps is really hard for a hard
03:21:460 (1) - interesting...perhaps you could find some way to work this colorhax into the other diffs? I only saw it in this one

Super Sonic:

-HP drain 6 or 7?
-CS 4?

00:51:639 - I really think that the 1.2x is too much with this high slider velocity, perhaps remove it?
00:59:055 (9) - offscreen >.<
01:07:397 (2) - remove whistle
01:25:347 (6) - new combo?
01:28:043 (8) - new combo
01:57:706 - same
02:11:864 (7) - new combo?
02:12:875 (10) - goes off the edge of the playfield
02:13:886 (5) - new combo?
02:39:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wow these streams are spaced really far apart, perhaps change it?
02:43:549 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:57:032 (9) - new combo
03:03:774 - same...
03:09:167 (1,2,3) - too many whistles...remove some of them please >.<
03:18:942 (5) - (nazi) this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140237

Sorry if it's mostly trivial issues, was really tired when modding this You're off to a good start but the map needs a bit more work before it can get ranked, good luck!

Thanks for modding~. Very helpful

pieguy1372 wrote:

Bobo:

-AR 7, 8 is fast for a hard AR 7 it is~
-map the rest of it? Done~!

00:40:842 (5,1) - switch NCs Done~!
01:04:944 (9) - too far from (8) Fixed~!
01:07:809 (1) - jump is pretty big for a hard Fixed~!
01:22:472 (1) - ^^
01:46:909 (5,1) - switch NCs Done~!
02:11:516 (1) - wow, huge jump out of nowhere O.O Fixed~!
02:38:483 (1) - this 1.5x is really unexpected and is really hard for a hard Changed to x1.25~
03:19:943 - 1.5x+jumps is really hard for a hard Made the jumps smaller and changed to x1.25~
03:21:460 (1) - interesting Hehe, thnx :>...perhaps you could find some way to work this colorhax into the other diffs? I only saw it in this one

Sorry if it's mostly trivial issues, was really tired when modding this D: Don't do that to yourself! :C You're off to a good start but the map needs a bit more work before it can get ranked, good luck!

OMG a box! :O

o.o'

DragonSparta wrote:

Frozen wrote:

Do you need another diff? I can make one if you want; I'm not busy at the moment

This looks better to me...

Umm..what type of diff?
Can you also help me make a meter bar too?

Charles445 wrote:

whoop

General
Kiai time should be consistent on all difficulties. Right now it's not.

Tails
Why are combo colors different on this?
02:32:752 (1) - Position the points like this for better symmetry http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141126

Knuckles
00:42:528 (4) - Move this up one
01:05:449 (1,2) - Space these out more
01:28:370 (3) - There are a lot of spacing issues like this in the map. See how the three is closer to the 2 than the 4? You can fix these kind of things by using Grid 4. I won't be pointing out all spacing issues like this because there are many.
01:41:348 (3,4) - I suggest reducing the spacing between these. It's a pretty big jump for a normal.
02:42:191 (1) - Position the points like this for better symmetry http://puu.sh/54b1

Super Sonic
Feels very overmapped. Streams are used with no indication from the music.
HP Drain -1 seems like a good idea, but that is entirely up to you.
00:13:886 (1) - Adjust the points like this for better symmetry. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140704
 [b]This difficulty has the wrong offset! Change it to 3090!
02:39:841 - This stream section is an unexpected and rather absurd difficulty change. The first part of the guitar solo should be mapped in 1/3.

DragonSparta wrote:

To Frozen,

1. Can you create a diff something in between "Tails" and "Knuckles"?
2. Never mind about the meter bar already Bobo created it for me xD

Charles445 wrote:

whoop foowhap

General
Kiai time should be consistent on all difficulties. Right now it's not.
DragonSparta, could you fix this before updating plz?

Bobo
This difficulty has the wrong tags! It's inconsistent with the other difficulties. Fixed
There is also missing Slider Layout code, but that doesn't matter much. Dunno what that is tbh D:
I don't think the color hacking added very much to the map. It will make changing combos a hassle. I would get rid of that extra combo color. Aww... Done...
Hitsounds are far too loud, make them quieter! Reduced the volume by 10%
Feels very overmapped. Streams are used with no indication from the music. Taken out most of the streams.
00:34:438 (1) - Remove new combo Done~!
00:34:775 (1) - ^^ , combo spam like this is never a good idea. It messes up the hp drain for the entire map. Mmm, didn't know that~!
01:11:179 (2) - Position the points like this for better symmetry http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141118 I tried~! ^^'
01:40:505 (1) - Remove new combo Done~!
01:40:842 (1) - ^^
02:17:247 (2) - Position the points like this for better symmetry http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141121 I tried~! D:
02:39:325 - Add a hitcircle Done~!
03:20:449 (1) - Remove new combo Done~!
03:20:955 (1) - ^^
03:37:303 (1) - This spinner should start at 03:37:472 Done~!
03:39:494 - Make this inheriting section use Soft volume instead of Normal. It will prevent sound popping. aaaand done~!

Bobo wrote:

Charles445 wrote:

whoop foowhap

General
Kiai time should be consistent on all difficulties. Right now it's not.
DragonSparta, could you fix this before updating plz?

Thnx 4 the mod~!

SapphireGhost wrote:

Hi.

[General]
- Your slider border should be 0,0,0, not 255,255,255.
- Having breaks during kiai time is odd to me. Kiai time is supposed to highlight the sort of epic, awesome parts. So you probably wouldn't want to use it during a break.
- Keep consistent kiai between your (the uploader's) difficulties.
- You have some unsnapped inheriting sections, I don't have the specific ones but they should be fixed.
- For the future, I advise mapping with Distance Snap 1.0x to prevent little overlaps. It looks cool, really.

[Tails]
HP Drain -1
00:59:382 (1) - Start spinner one white tick later. Kays
02:46:573 (2,3) - *nazi* This could be centered.^
03:29:382 (1,2,1,2) - For this sort of blanket, you'll want to make a symmetrical arc that blankets the circle, then use Ctrl+Shift+R to rotate it however much, and then it will look a lot better. Try it out!Fun ^

[Knuckles]
HP Drain +1 or 2 +1
02:44:213 (3,4,1) - Perhaps it's just me, but this pattern seems a little confusing at this Approach Rate. Perhaps you could change it a bit. Move it to somewhere else
03:04:943 (5,6) - I don't particularly recall having any other notes placed under sliderends in this difficulty. Seeing how it's a bit difficult to read, I'd recommend changing the position of (6). Moved to 1

[Super Sonic]
03:02:415 (5) - The 1/8 repeats here seem a bit spammy, as they don't really seem to follow anything. So maybe you could just use 1/4 instead. Done

Good map!

SapphireGhost wrote:

Hi. Hey~

[Bobo]
HP Drain/Overall Difficulty +1 Done~!
00:43:876 (1,1,1,1) - Three spinners isn't a very creative pattern. It's sort of tiring, though. I would map this some other way. Thanks, fixed~!
01:49:943 (1,1,1,1) - Here's the spinner thing again. Shazabam a few edits and it's 99 times better~!
02:46:909 (7) - This slider having more repeats than the others could be confusing? Maybe? Not much. I'm tired. Changed it a bit~!
03:21:460 (4) - Symmetry across the x-axis would be beautiful. Beautified~!

Good map! c:

O_O

THAT GIRL HAS A MOLE ON HER ARM!!! D;
XD

klubek wrote:

hi

[Knuckles]
03:07:303 - add a circle? it will be the same like in this part 03:04:606~03:04:775 and sounds better imo Very well

[Bobo] Let Bobo decide
01:22:302 (6,1) - spacing?

[Super Sonic]
01:46:404 (6) - add new combo
01:46:741 (1) - remove new combo
Nah seems fine to me
yay! more sonic songs :3 very good map
star*

klubek wrote:

hi :) Lolhey
[Bobo]
01:22:302 (6,1) - spacing? I dont see the problem... :o

pieguy1372 wrote:

no kds~ you srsly deserve it :3

Tails:

01:29:213 (5) - whistle on start
01:35:955 (1) - too far from (3)
03:15:730 (2) - too far from (1) and too close to (3)
03:17:584 (1) - it looks like you were going for a line here, so move it 1 level 3 grid left?
03:34:775 (1) - remove whistle?

Knuckles:

00:27:359 (1) - too close to (6)
00:28:370 (3) - clap on end
01:29:719 (1) - too close to (4)
01:55:168 (1) - make the start of this use normal hitsounds? it sounds odd with a soft whistle/sliderslide
02:27:191 (6) - too far from (5)
02:37:809 (1) - too far from (5)

Bobo:

00:27:359 (1) - jump seems huge for a [Hard], perhaps reduce it?
00:32:415 (1) - ^
00:35:112 (1) - ^
00:44:044 (2) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/145691
00:46:740 (2) - ^
00:50:617 (5) - unfortunately, this is unrankable >.> you'll have to change it...
01:05:449 (1) - again this jump is large for a [Hard]...I'll stop pointing it out here, if you agree with me please go through the rest of the map and change all the big jumps
01:50:110 (2) - same
01:52:806 (2) - ^
02:47:584 (1) - a 1/4 jump in a hard? you should really change that, it's too hard for a [Hard] o.o
03:11:854 (1,2,3,4) - given what you did in previous parts, space these farther out?
03:19:943 (1,2,3,4) - this speed change seems a bit unnecessary, especially because you didn't do this in previous parts

Super Sonic:

00:40:000 (1,2) - perhaps remove finishes from ends?
00:59:045 (9) - part of this is offscreen
01:28:033 (8) - new combo
02:12:865 (10) - goes off the left edge of the playfield

pretty nice, better the last time I looked at it~

pieguy1372 wrote:

no kds~

Bobo:

00:27:359 (1) - jump seems huge for a [Hard], perhaps reduce it? Sure~!
00:32:415 (1) - ^^
00:35:112 (1) - ^^
00:44:044 (2) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/145691 I dont see the problem. o.o soz...'
00:46:740 (2) - ^ D:
00:50:617 (5) - unfortunately, this is unrankable >.> you'll have to change it... Ohshi- fixed, lol. :P
01:05:449 (1) - again this jump is large for a [Hard]...I'll stop pointing it out here, if you agree with me please go through the rest of the map and change all the big jumps :? Looked at it~
01:50:110 (2) - same Whata you mean??? D:
01:52:806 (2) - ^
02:47:584 (1) - a 1/4 jump in a hard? you should really change that, it's too hard for a [Hard] o.o Fixed~
03:11:854 (1,2,3,4) - given what you did in previous parts, space these farther out? Hmm... ok~
03:19:943 (1,2,3,4) - this speed change seems a bit unnecessary, especially because you didn't do this in previous parts :cry: Lol, got rid of the speed up~

pretty nice, better the last time I looked at it~

you srsly deserve it :3

00:44:044 (2) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/145691 I dont see the problem. o.o soz...'
00:46:740 (2) - ^ D:

01:50:110 (2) - same Whata you mean??? D:
01:52:806 (2) - ^

pieguy1372 wrote:

randomly browsing the forums and I came across this thread again o.o Lolhey~

you srsly deserve it :3

You really do :D Your mods are really detailed!
I already got one from the last time I posted in here :? thanks anyway~ TAKE IT! >:D

00:44:044 (2) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/145691 I dont see the problem. o.o soz...'
00:46:740 (2) - ^ D:

Ah
I suggested this because the slider you had was a bit uneven, and IMO the one in the screenshot looks a bit better... it's not much of a problem though :? I dont see any difference between the two tbh D: sorry...

01:50:110 (2) - same Whata you mean??? D:
01:52:806 (2) - ^

For these two suggestions, they're the same as the ones in the quote box above this (just copy+paste+flip the same slider) :? Had a play around and changed the shape of the sliders :D

Bobo wrote:

Hi there~!
Listen carefully, the edits are a bit confusing.

GO! PICKY MOD!

-General-

I'd remove Amy, Omega, Rouge and Eggman from the tags.


-Tails-

Why are the colours in this diff different from the others?
00:16:572 - Make this slider 2 ticks longer then add an extra repeat. Yes
00:22:640 - Add 2 repeats. ^
00:24:662 - Move this whole combo forward 4 ticks. ^
00:27:696 - Then make this slider 2 ticks longer and add one repeat. ^
00:33:426 - Add 2 repeats. No sry :/
00:38:145 - Shorten this slider by 4 ticks and add another repeat.
00:40:336 - Move this whole combo forward 2 ticks.
00:42:864 - Make this here two ticks longer and move it back 2 ticks.
00:43:370 - Delete this note.
00:52:808 - Make this slider look more sexy and add 2 repeats.
00:56:010 - Turn this into a 5 tick slider with one repeat.
01:03:595 - 2 ticks forward, 2 ticks longer.
01:23:314 - 2 ticks longer, one repeat.
01:30:730 - Add a note.
01:31:404 - 2 ticks longer.
01:37:303 - 4 ticks shorter.
01:38:651 - 2 ticks shorter.
01:58:876 - 2 ticks forward, 2 ticks longer.
02:01:572 - 2 ticks forward.
02:09:831 - 2 ticks forward.
02:15:898 - 2 ticks shorter.
02:17:246 - Pull this back to 02:16:572 and end it at 02:19:269.
02:25:336 - Back 4 ticks, 4 ticks longer.
02:26:685 - These patterns always confused me when I was a newbie, can you move the (6) so it isn't a back and forth pattern please? K
02:30:730 - 2 ticks longer.
02:31:235 - 2 ticks forward.
03:07:640 - Add a repeat.
03:25:336 - End kiai here.

Phew >.> That took a while... D;
1 diff down, 2 to go~

-Knuckles-

00:23:819 to 00:24:831 - Fill this little gap. Yep
00:53:482 to 00:54:325 - ^
00:56:179 to 00:56:853 - ^
01:23:988 to 01:24:831 - ^
Basically I want you to fill in any gaps like that.
01:33:932 - 2 ticks longer.
01:34:269 - Delete this note.
01:34:606 - 2 ticks longer, remove the whistle at the end.
01:49:100 - Delete (6) and (7) then add a note here. Why?
02:13:876 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/147299
02:27:190 - Delete this note.
02:46:235 - Add a repeat. Yep
02:47:584 - 2 ticks longer.
02:48:089 - Delete this note.
03:06:460 - New combo.
03:06:797 - Delete NC.

-Super Sonic-

00:48:932 - Go a little easier on the finish hitsounds in this combo.
00:51:291 - Delete the new combo.
00:54:325 - Straighten out (1), (2) and (3), these types of triplets can be a bitch.
00:55:168 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/147302
00:59:718 - DRAGONSPARTA WHY U NO USE JUMP POTENTIAL???
01:23:145 - Play around with the slider points so it doesnt overlap (3).
01:26:516 - Vertical flip.
01:54:999 - Go a little easier on the finish hitsounds in this combo.
01:57:359 - Delete NC.
02:08:145 - Ah! Ugly antijump! Fix it.
02:40:505 - Straighten (1), (2) and (3).
The whistles and triplets in the speed up zone do feel really spammy.
02:42:190 - ^
03:02:415 - Change the hitsound style to soft. Make this a 1/8 slider and make it repeat until 03:03:763. Now using many timing sections, make the volume of the slider slowly increase. Finish the slider with a finish. Copy the timing sections from the attatchment. Should look like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/147310
03:04:100 - New combo.

Some Yes Some No here

Wow... Lol, there you go! \:D/

Nyquill wrote:

Can't really find much to complain about, so no kds, just going to toss some suggestions your way.

[Knuckles]
01:05:786 (1) - Remove clap from middle of this slider. Clap in the middle of (2) instead. Yep

[Bobo]
00:35:112 (1) - You really should find a way to get this slider to be half a beat earlier.
Otherwise, Excellent diff. Let Bobo decide

[Super Sonic]
01:02:078 (1,2,3) - This sounds like it should be half a beat earlier. Move (1,2,3) half a beat earlier and have a note at 01:02:246?
03:09:157 (1,3) - Having whistles on these reverse sliders is just ear rape. How about having them only at the beginning of (1,3) and have one on (5)?
03:19:143 (1,3) - ^

Nyquill wrote:

Can't really find much to complain about, so no kds,You're getting kuds whether you like it or not XD just going to toss some suggestions your way.
[Bobo]
00:35:112 (1) - You really should find a way to get this slider to be half a beat earlier. Don't see the issue ^^' Sorry
Otherwise, Excellent diff. It's not that good... ><

Bobo wrote:

EDIT 2: FFFF noticed an error, please redownload. Sorry... ><

HellDawn wrote:

Bobo
More than three unique slider speeds are used in this diff so unrankable. Oh shi- thnx. I dont even use the 4th one.
01:52:301- object isnt snapped Umm... ok...
01:55:166- ^ They're stacks. D:
01:55:503- ^
01:55:671- ^
pro DS's diffs are pro, wouldn't say the same about mine.

HellDawn wrote:

Tails
01:03:426- spacing, because too farYep
01:24:325 - ^
02:25:336 (2,3,4,5,6)- spacing
02:01:067 (2,3,4)- spacing
01:04:437- spacing *-* K

Knuckles
00:19:775- clap ? Kays
00:21:123- ^

Bobo
More than three unique slider speeds are used in this diff so unrankable.
01:52:301- object isnt snapped
01:55:166- ^
01:55:503- ^
01:55:671- ^
pro

Bobo wrote:

HellDawn wrote:

Bobo
More than three unique slider speeds are used in this diff so unrankable. Oh shi- thnx. I dont even use the 4th one.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Well my mod:
General:
Try to delete the breaks in the kiai time, add notes

Tails:
00:32:752 (5): New Combo
02:48:932 (spin): Maybe this spinner start on 02:48:763 and finish in 02:50:437 ^

Knuckles:
Circle size-1
To mantain consitance remove the break in 00:49:185 or add a break in 01:54:999 Yep
02:36:291(3): New combo np
I think that this sequence is very difficult knowing that is a normal difficulty

Bobo:
01:16:286: Remove this break is too short
02:50:617: Maybe a spinner sound good here and finish in 02:52:977

Super Sonic:
03:28:286: Remove this break it's really short and unnecesary Add notes
03:30:561(6): New Combo K

Really nice beatmap kudos star
Good Luck [/color]

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Well my mod:
Bobo:
01:16:286: Remove this break is too short
02:50:617: Maybe a spinner sound good here and finish in 02:52:977

ziin wrote:

[general]
What's up with the black overlay and white slider border?
If I mention something but missed it somewhere else, don't assume it's fine. Double check the map yourself so you didn't make that error again. Songs tend to repeat, so if I only mention something once, chances are it fits in every difficulty multiple times.

[tails]
Map was full of lazy sliders all noticeable on first play through (without access to the nodes). If you could, especially on the long sliders, make them as symmetrical as possible, that would be good.
I noticed an awful lot of notes on 1/2 beats, which is all well and good, but it's confusing on the easy difficulty, especially if you don't follow the lyrics almost completely.
There's a lot of sliders which end on the long white tick, or slide over them. Pay better attention to it, so that any that DO slide over are on purpose.
2x repeating sliders play poorly in general unless they are very long or very short. Keep them to a minimum.
00:03:089 (5) - you could put this slider above instead of below so that it isn't covering the next slider. Yep
00:08:819 (1) - take off a repeat, add circle or something Yep
00:11:179 (4,5) - I thought this played better as one long slider ^
00:16:573 (5) - shorten by 1/2 to map vocals ^
00:23:651 (3) - this didn't fit because the first note doesn't map what the last 3 seem to map. k
00:29:718 - add ^
00:32:921 - add 2x repeating (you could split it up into 2x normal sliders too) Did your second opinion
00:51:629 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - why are these 2 rhythms different? Ok~
01:58:876 (3) - why is there a repeat? Change to no reverse
02:01:573 (4) - ^ This one has rhythm in the last hit
03:17:584 (1) - keep an eye on things that are too high or too low. Generally I don't put anything y<16 or it might hit the hp bar. Agree
03:29:382 (1,2) - I think you can do a much better job than this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151427 Changed a bit

[knuckles]
Using 1.2x for 1/2 notes and .8x or 1x for 1/1 notes is downright confusing. Then again, the spacing is all over the place so I guess I need to use other means of trying to figure out these rhythms. There's a lot to fix before I can mod it decently. I just don't have the patience to find everything. Take the general suggestions and apply them yourself. Aww T-T
03:33:089 (3) - what? LOL~~~ I DIDNT NOTICE THAT!!! THANKS
03:37:471 (1,2,3,4) - why is there a decrescendo in the hitsounds if there isn't one in the music? Seems ok?

[bobo]
don't forget slider border in this one.
oh the spacing is such a relief in this one...
but then the combo colours make me go "wtf". Mind explaining this one because I'm really baffled.
00:21:292 (6) - these super short 1x repeating sliders don't really need to be curved at all.
00:23:314 (5) - (this one obviously does, ignore ^, use your own judgement)
00:39:325 (10) - move 1/2 later, start new combo
00:42:191 (5) - remove clap
00:43:033 - add clap
00:44:044 (2,2) - I like to put the red nodes on the slider tick, I think it works better, but whatever.
00:49:100 (2,2,3,5) - finishes
01:18:595 (1,2,3,4) - ugh
01:22:303 (6,1) - strange jump
01:28:033 (2,3,4) - if you want to map lyrics here (which you clearly do, otherwise you wouldn't have this new combo pattern) then you should put the sliders on the red tick.
01:40:168 (2,3,4) - these really didn't make sense to me either time. I didn't hear anything in the music doing this so it seemed random.
01:44:213 (9) - new combo
01:46:404 - new combo. fix sliders so it works.
02:46:236 (5) - quit it, you know this doesn't fit.
02:49:101 (6,7) - move back 1/2
03:05:449 (5) - seems silly to completely hide a slider start like this.
03:14:550 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't fit. It fit 1/2 before, but not now.
03:39:494 - stupid timing point

[supersonic]
00:20:449 (4,5) - I'm going to let you in on a secret. Ctrl C will copy a note, ctrl v will paste a note, and ctrl h will flip it horizontally. Thanks
01:02:163 (2) - you can put this 1/2 before or 1/2 later, but not here. Seems ok
01:07:809 (5,6) - you could have mapped the lyrics here by using 1x repeating sliders Ill see 1st
02:05:786 (1,2,3,4) - this part was bland in every difficulty. You don't have to map the lyrics, you can put in groups of 3 to map the guitar?
02:30:055 (6) - new combo. Also, nobody will complain about new combos if you put new combos on the first note of a phrase or on the long white tick of every other measure. k
02:39:157 (1,2,3) - don't put these on top of a whirling distraction, and not of a similar colour of said whirling distraction. Place on top
02:39:831 - I don't know what you're mapping here. If you're mapping the guitar solo, do it. If you're making something up, then how in the world are we supposed to follow it, especially at 1.25x? You should also start the kiai on the downbeat. It's for epicness



Here's some automated warnings for you. You don't have to fix everything, but it will make your map that much better if you do put the time and effort into making it closer to perfect. You can also download it yourself so you can check in the future. the program isn't perfect, so use your judegment on what needs fixing.

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[General]
No problems found.

[Storyboard]
Unused Image Files:
comboburst-3.png
comboburst-2.png
comboburst-0.png
comboburst-4.png
comboburst-1.png

Epilepsy Warning:
A storyboard was detected, you may want to include an epilepsy warning.


[All .osu Files]
Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Bobo] :
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5

- [Knuckles] :
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

- [Super Sonic] :
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

- [Tails] :
Combo1 : 68,255,68
Combo2 : 64,64,255
Combo3 : 255,255,87
Combo4 : 251,62,62
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Bobo] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:639, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:03:774, ends on 03:25:421

- [Knuckles] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:639, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:504, ends on 02:39:588
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:763, ends on 03:28:043

- [Super Sonic] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:629, ends on 01:13:202
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:696, ends on 02:19:269
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:594, ends on 02:57:686
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:754, ends on 03:25:327

- [Tails] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:544, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:504, ends on 02:39:588
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:774, ends on 03:28:043


[Difficulty: Bobo]
Snapping:
01:52:301 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:166 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:503 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:671 (2) - Unsnapped circle.

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:51:639
01:13:212
01:57:706
02:19:279
02:39:504
03:03:774

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:639, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:03:774, ends on 03:25:421


[Difficulty: Knuckles]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:13:886
00:34:953
00:35:291
00:51:639
01:13:212
01:19:953
01:41:358
01:57:706
02:19:279
02:39:504
02:39:588
03:28:043
03:38:071
03:38:746
03:39:420

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:639, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:504, ends on 02:39:588


[Difficulty: Super Sonic]
Snapping:
02:52:977 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:19:937
01:49:600
02:39:594
02:57:686
02:58:360
02:58:670
03:03:754
03:25:327
03:39:404

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:594, ends on 02:57:686
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:754, ends on 03:25:327


[Difficulty: Tails]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:13:886
00:35:291
01:13:212
01:19:953
01:41:358
01:57:706
02:19:279
02:39:504
02:39:588
03:03:774
03:28:043
03:38:071
03:38:746
03:39:420

Breaks:
00:11:885 - The break here is 551 ms long, which is shorter than the recommended 750 ms.

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:544, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:504, ends on 02:39:588
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:774, ends on 03:28:043