backstep wrote:

Hello impossiblexu ~ XD

[General]
- I think your sound it's okay for me
- please edit nazrin to nazurin in your tag.
- add something in your tag ?

SPOILER

Title: Spring of Dreams
Vocal: 3L
Arrange: DJ Command
Circle: NJK Record
Album: TOHO EURO FLASH vol. 1
Original: 春の湊に
(At the end of spring)

Added

My Noob Suggestion O_o"
- in Easy difficulty add custom slider-tick in your beatmap ?

Easy~
01:18:975 (5) - end of slider add finish.
01:31:524 (4) - ^
01:53:484 (1) - add green timing with normal sound until 01:54:269 ? Added

Normal~
01:19:759 (3) - front of slider add finish.
01:32:308 (3) - ^
01:53:484 (1) - add green timing with normal sound until 01:54:269 ? Added

Hard~
00:49:367 (4) - x : 240 , y : 244
00:51:131 (10)- x : 496 , y : 100
01:19:759 (3) - front of slider add finish.
01:32:308 (3) - ^
01:53:484 (1) - add green timing with normal sound until 01:54:269 ?Added

SPOILER

Cirno wrote:

- Total map length (sum of all diffs) < 10mins

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[General]
BG看起来像是被纵向挤压过了 太神了 这都能看出来
(看之前的mod，应该是由正常比例改成这样的 改分辨率请按比例剪裁然后根据需要缩放，不要直接挤压)[/color]
已经调好了

[Hard]
送分送SShard <3
Map is nice~ So just some minor suggestions here
00:40:543 (7,8) - 有点浪费歌曲本身的蓝线节奏 换成00:40:543 - 00:40:837 + 1 repeat的slider? 后面有好多类似的... 现在这样也挺好 只是感觉稍微有点boring 这样一改 整个图风格就变了
00:49:955 (5) - new combo? √
00:49:955 (5,7) - 建议和00:50:739 (9,10) 一样用Normal音效 并且做一个渐强，00:50:151 (6,8) 保持soft √
00:57:406 (7) - new combo & remove new combo on 00:57:798 (1) √
01:02:504 (7) - new combo? √
01:02:504 (7,8) - 同00:49:955 (5,7)，7 8 开头用Normal ..? √
01:03:484 (11) - 有点歪 向上一点..?大概半格 √
01:27:406 (7) - 是要放到01:27:602 (8)中间的话关grid向下一点 √ （话说我做图从来不开Grid snap
02:17:798 (7) - 同00:49:955 (5,7) √
03:59:759 (7) - 叠回03:58:778 (1,2,3), 或者放四边形中间? 摆了个五边形

[Normal]
No spinners....? 按hard的位置加一个? 03:20:543 √
02:03:288 (7) - 删去从开始数第二个control point? 或者翻转一下,趋势向 02:03:680 (1) 的会比较好看 >.>
02:49:955 (7) - like this? √

SPOILER

[attachment=0:53af8]xu_sldr.JPG[/attachment:53af8]

02:56:622 (8) - 中心对称再Ctrl+R可能会好点...?
03:54:661 (3) - 删去最左边的那个control point?

Cirno wrote:

- Total map length (sum of all diffs) < 10mins

所以Easy就不看了>.> impossiblexu's Easy must be perfect
Star~

非常感谢

Tonoicutzu wrote:

[Normal]
03:09:563- map that break from here, i think it's more fun to play that instrumental part

[Hard]
01:56:622 (8) - i'm nazy now, this slider looks bad do it like this :
i wanted to paste the code. but i don't know...
03:09:563- map that break from here, like i said in normal

love the mapset. nothing to complain about..
star~.

Giorgos wrote:

hello)

delete osb file if you are not going to make here SB.
I think that offset 26442 is much better here)
02:57:014 - 03:22:112 : Break Point is more than 20 seconds..it is not allowed. Make it shorter
Nice hitcircles lol)

Easy:
Better to put HP Drain 3 and AR 3
OD 3?


Normal:
Well,it looks good but if I were you I'd increase a little Distance Spacing :/
Hp Drain 4?

Hard:
Hp drain 8 is too much for Hard diff O.O Put 5 or 6

That is all! Star!

Fixed some~ Thanks a lot

Verdisphena wrote:

Can make a taiko diff? x.x

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

沒發現什麼問題, 所以扔個星

[General]
- 建議tags只用原曲名, Nazrin 和 Undefined Fantastic Object, 其他字串應該很少人會用來蒐 Tag什么的越多越好 XD

[Easy]
- 這個notes密度建議ar+1 √

[Normal]
- cool

[Hard]
- cool
<02:56:237> (3,4,5) 擺得不太好看√
<03:58:198> (7) x:360 y:156√

太谢谢了~

Verdisphena wrote:

Taiko diff + bg
BG By Ozzy

Added~ Thanks a lot

karenying wrote:

可以的話求個diff

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for request

SPOILER

Easy

• 
  Fine.
  There are just some things about greenline.

1. 03:47:087 (x) - h'm I think separating KIAI is not needed.
2. 03:59:669 (x) - delete this green line.
3. 03:59:865 (x) - ^ and set NOT KIAI at 03:59:767. (it's mean merge them)

Normal

• 
  HP +1?
  Mapset is fine for me.
  But I feel it's difficult for normal player.
  Name this diff Normal+ ? just my suggestion

1. 03:47:087 (x) - same as Easy.
2. 03:59:669 (x) - ^
3. 03:59:865 (x) - ^

Hard

1. 00:52:120 (2,3) - looks like crowded. make them farther than now like 00:50:747 (5,6).
2. 00:53:100 (4) - close to (3)
3. 00:55:453 (3,4) - same as 00:52:120 (2,3)
4. 01:38:590 (3,4) - ^
5. 02:22:708 (1,2,4) - ^
6. 02:48:394 (5,6) - ^
7. 03:11:532 (9,10) - these notes don't follow music. move them like this↓?
   
8. 03:14:865 (6) - ^
   
9. 03:29:375 (3,4,5) - looks like crowded.
10. 03:47:087 (x) - same as Easy.
11. 03:59:669 (x) - ^
12. 03:59:865 (x) - ^

Very sweet song and nice skins <3
Playing this beatmap is also fun for me.
Star~!


btw
Have you seen the video which Nazurin dance with following this song?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rXSyyMaUSKA
If you have not, I recommend you to watch it.
You can see pretty cute Nazurin <3

Mostly fixed Thank you very much

lkp wrote:

Hi~

[Easy]

*01:06:434 (3) - 這一條slider不太好看...和其他slider襯托起來不太舒服..建議換一換這個形狀??
*01:26:826 (2) - 同上啊:D
*02:17:022 (2) - 同上啊:D
02:30:355 (4,5) - xD
*02:39:767 (3) - 同樣地,弄成彎形的slider,看以旋轉的感覺比較好??
02:49:179 (3) - xD
**Easy diff真的有必要map the end 麼??沒所謂了xD
看到有很多短的蛇slider,建議轉一轉比較好看.
不過考慮到style的問題,我也不作多說了xD
這個diff干得很漂亮xD

[Normal]

沒什麼要挑的,只是...
***Normal diff 4.5星...!?

[Hard]

00:50:551 (4,5) - Spacing,too far.
00:56:826 (6) - 加一個迴轉??看似比較好打一點...
03:11:139 (8) - New combo?
03:52:708 (12,13) - Spacing,too far.
nice.

My nazi mod

xD 改了一些 非常感谢

karenying wrote:

做渣了...><請收下

Soul-less wrote:

As per request from mod queue~ 这么好的图，怎么mod D:

[General]
- (Very minor issue) System prompt me to save after resnapping all notes.
- 加个video offset吧？现在的video没跟mp3配。大约是-10050左右（抱歉，很难精准地测量 >_<）。在[Event]下改 Video,0,"Video.avi" 这行，0就是offset。

烂mod。 跳啊跳~

James2250 wrote:

-Might want to turn off letterboxing during breaks just for the sake of the video

Hard:
-A few patterns like 00:46:826 (5,6), 01:55:257 (4,5,6) etc could look slightly nicer if not overlapping each other in my opinion but nothing major
00:50:355 (3,4,5) - keep spacing on ones like this consistent

Solid mapset as always, should probably be fine for a bubble after fixes

All fixed And waiting for Karen's reply

karenying wrote:

fixed

Uploaded~ Thanks a lot

1. "spring" isn't needed in the tags as it's in the title. Same for "of".
2. Add "ufo" to tags ?
3. Hard has a higher high score than Karen and is 5.00 star rating. Seriously, rename it to Insane. Also, having two diffs at 900+ combo and 15 million score is a bit much... Try reducing the maximum score of the "hard" (and its difficulty).

1. This is seriously too hard for a Hard diff. The difficulty settings themselves are that of an Insane, the patterns and rhythms used as well. Rename this to Insane.
2. 01:01:237 (2,3) - Despite being in the song, these are surprising.
3. 02:16:532 (2,3) - Same.
4. 02:51:924 (7) - Bend the slider the other way around so that it doesn't overlap with the previous one ?
5. 03:17:610 (2,3,4) - I didn't see this triple when playing and went literally "wtf ?" when I combobroke here.
6. 03:20:355 (6) - The placement of this note breaks the pattern imo - you made a cute 5 notes pattern, and you add that 6th at a seemingly random place, which breaks the movement and the pattern. I think you should stack it under (5).

1. The difficulty settings are lower than in Hard (just saying - it helps my point for Hard).
2. I generally think that streams like 01:28:590 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - are ugly and confusing, but I could SS these ones first try. Just once, it was actually confusing: 02:18:590 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - makes the next note kind of hard to catch
3. 00:57:414 (1,2,3) - Uneven spacing.
4. 02:12:708 (1,2,3) - Uneven spacing.

Odaril wrote:

Karen

1. The difficulty settings are lower than in Hard (just saying - it helps my point for Hard).
2. I generally think that streams like 01:28:590 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - are ugly and confusing, but I could SS these ones first try. Just once, it was actually confusing: 02:18:590 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - makes the next note kind of hard to catchfixed
3. 00:57:414 (1,2,3) - Uneven spacing. This is purposely but fixed.They are 1.4ds jump now
4. 02:12:708 (1,2,3) - Uneven spacing. ^ 1.5ds

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General

1. "spring" isn't needed in the tags as it's in the title. Same for "of".Didn't removed so that others can find the original by checking the tags
2. Add "ufo" to tags ? Added
3. Hard has a higher high score than Karen and is 5.00 star rating. Seriously, rename it to Insane. Also, having two diffs at 900+ combo and 15 million score is a bit much... Try reducing the maximum score of the "hard" (and its difficulty). Renamed hard to insane

Easy
Seems fine.

Normal
This is too hard for a Normal imo. Despite being perfectly spaced and having easy patterns, the OD and AR should be reduced by 1 imo, and there are way too many 1/2 to my taste. Then it will be too easy

Hard

1. This is seriously too hard for a Hard diff. The difficulty settings themselves are that of an Insane, the patterns and rhythms used as well. Rename this to Insane. Renamed
2. 01:01:237 (2,3) - Despite being in the song, these are surprising. I think it's good
3. 02:16:532 (2,3) - Same. ^
4. 02:51:924 (7) - Bend the slider the other way around so that it doesn't overlap with the previous one ? Moved so that it doesn't overlap
5. 03:17:610 (2,3,4) - I didn't see this triple when playing and went literally "wtf ?" when I combobroke here. Fixed
6. 03:20:355 (6) - The placement of this note breaks the pattern imo - you made a cute 5 notes pattern, and you add that 6th at a seemingly random place, which breaks the movement and the pattern. I think you should stack it under (5).Fixed

Odaril wrote:

Verdi's Taiko Oni
huuuuuuuuh I hate the patterns you used, but it seems fine

Alace wrote:

revived

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

You might reduce the star rating a bit more on this difficulty so it doesn't appear as "I" on the website.
Done

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]

Center the difficulty settings.
Done

Really nice map.

Shiirn wrote:

02:19:571 (1) - extreme large jump for no reason, and for the same music pattern earlier and later you had half the size of the jump

Shiirn wrote:

Hello.
Your video extends 25 seconds beyond your mp3's length.
You end your song with almost 40 seconds of time after it.
Both contribute to a very large filesize. I highly recommend compressing it.Original video is 100MB+ and I compressded it

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
I think you could finish the final instrumental part of the map?, remember max score can go up to 18m and is still rankable, if you dont tho.
You should really crop that video, the mp3 ends way sooner than the video does, and it's not that hard to do, just use windows movie maker or something to delete the credits Cut
I would suggest you cut the mp3 if you dont map the rest, but for a rebubble that'd be a bit too much and could alter the offset.

[Insane]
03:22:316 (2) - Can't see this slider because spinnerosu (the skin thingy) is covering it. Moved

[Verid's Taiko]
Nazrin's head is cut off during the majority of the video, i dont really see any reason to have the video here, maybe remove the video from the taiko diff? XD removed

[Normal]
02:16:237 (1) - Slider track is covered Fixed

Dont be scared by all the bold stuff as it's fairly easy to fix, always loved your maps and this one is awesome, love the song as well soo enjoy these 2 stars! Call me for rebubble when fixes are done

Thanks a lot

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

GZ

now, get some attention for this map GAWD

Sallad4ever wrote:

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

GZ

now, get some attention for this map GAWD

lol impossiblexu is lazy