JauiPlaY wrote:

HI~
一些建議

[General]
osb文件有用?

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
00:48:921(2) - x:372, y:152OK
00:50:757(1) - 起始點應該在00:51:063OK
00:56:880(1) - 移到00:56:268?
01:01:778(2) - 移到01:01:166?
01:10:349(1) - 起始點應該在01:09:890OK
01:21:370(4,1) - 最好不要遮擋OK
02:21:063(1) - 起始點應該在02:20:910OK
02:40:043(1) - 起始點應該在02:40:349OK
02:55:043(1) - 取消new comboOK
03:05:451(5,1) - 錯誤的spacingOK
03:26:880(2) - new comboOK
04:17:084(2) - 為什麼末尾會有個clap?OK
04:41:574(1) - 取消new comboOK
看得我快睡著了...抱歉

so
star~

谢谢Mod

indyinyou wrote:

Hi~

My suggestions:

[Easy]

00:03:614 : whistleOK
00:12:186: whistleOK
00:22:594 : clapOK
00:28:717 : whistleOK
00:29:329 : whistle
00:31:472 : whistle
00:33:002 : remove whistle add finOK
00:34:839 : whistleOK
00:37:288 : ^OK
00:37:900 : new combo,remove whistle add finOK
00:39:737 : whistleOK
00:42:186 : ^OK
01:07:288 : fin volum 40 %OK
01:12:798 : clapOK
01:14:023 : remove whistle add clapOK
01:16:472 : ^OK
01:17:696 : clapOK
01:20:145 : ^OK
01:22:594 : ^OK
01:25:043 : ^OK
01:25:043 : add silder to 01:25:655OK

star

Thanks mod

indyinyou wrote:

hi

i make part 02:20:757 to 02:40:961 [Nymph diff]

02:30:936 : use 1/8 Beat
02:32:390 : use 1/3
02:33:614 : ^
02:38:512 : ^
02:39:737 : ^

if you like use this part
use it and design note by youself : D

no kd for this
i make it for fun : D

Tonoicutzu wrote:

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
00:37:900 (1) - ugly.. try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/90436
01:05:451 (4,5) - pretty annoying, add whistle instead of finish
01:48:308 (5) - not stacked correctly (NAZI)



nothing else... very good
starred~

Thanks mod

FireballFlame wrote:

[Yuki]
02:52:441 - Maybe add a note here? Like that?

SPOILER

I think the rhythm feels nicer that way. yeah..I don't feel like changing.I think both are OK~so just keep it.
02:56:880 (4) - That's a littlehard to see. Could you make it so that the hitburst of (2) doesnt conceal the slider? can't think of a better way..
01:57:645 (7), 03:50:298 (7) - This is just personal preference, but I'd remove those.doesn't bother me so just keep it.
Oh and I'm not really a fan of things like 01:22:900 (5,6,7), but I guess it doesn't matter.well I think it is just OK~

Can't find anything else.
Awesome song, nice map!

KanaRin wrote:

Nice map >w</
加油~

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod

[Easy]
00:40:349 坑人新手节奏
00:54:431 连续两个的sliderwhistle都取消掉吧 不好听
04:20:757 finish位置两个互换

[Hard]
[02:52:288 add note 不想要
02:56:880 distance 注意下 否则各种233 还好啊
04:40:349 可以选择使用渐渐降低volume处理 嗯我试试
各种slider形状..... 这个还好了..不要吐槽

sweet song....Star for it.

mi sa wrote:

这是一首好歌，演唱会里的金曲，唱出了初音自己的心声。歌曲是初音存在的唯一意义，而她通过歌声传递欢乐，这种最质朴的情感往往是最容易被忽视的，仔细聆听又颇为感动。
Joshua Lost的同名图也泡了，加油。不过我看了一下，问题很多啊。easy不对着vocal的感觉还真是别扭，新人也不容易上手，中间一段kiai应该像之前一样加上clap会比较好。我试着简单改了一部分，你可以参考一下。hard要向你多学习。

Nymph_ wrote:

mi sa wrote:

这是一首好歌，演唱会里的金曲，唱出了初音自己的心声。歌曲是初音存在的唯一意义，而她通过歌声传递欢乐，这种最质朴的情感往往是最容易被忽视的，仔细聆听又颇为感动。
Joshua Lost的同名图也泡了，加油。不过我看了一下，问题很多啊。easy不对着vocal的感觉还真是别扭，新人也不容易上手，中间一段kiai应该像之前一样加上clap会比较好。我试着简单改了一部分，你可以参考一下。hard要向你多学习。

谢了~AIR现在没在 等他回来的

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Combo colors 1 and 2, and 3 and 4 are very similar, maybe mix them around so the similar ones dont come in a row really? Then I changed the colour
Why only 2 diffs? will you add another one? 3 diffs with a 5mins songs is really really hard to get modded...and my diff is actually more like a hard not insane so I think this maybe ok.

[Yuki]
Why is this the only diff with a custom name? yeah this has special meaning. I made this map for someone so this diff just follow his name.
Consider adding a break in between your current 2, since it has a playtime of 2:30 in between those. I think this is OK? because the 2nd part is very relax.
Use more whistles (specially in the beginning when there's barely any hitsounds besides finishes). ya I don't think so, because I really want this part be different from next part so I add whistles on next part and keep this part silence~
03:26:880 - Unsnapped kiai start. oops..fixed

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
Your combos get pretty long for an Easy diff, like for example 03:12:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), among others
00:07:288 (3) - Avoid short sliders that repeat multiple times on the easiest diff.
01:25:655 (6) - ^
01:37:900 (5) - ^
01:42:798 (4) - ^
I'll stop from pointing them out now, but take them in mind
03:02:390 - Unsnapped timing section, wont affect your spinner end as intended.
03:25:043 (1,1,1) - Dont spam new combos.

Pretty nice and sweet maps

Sander-Don wrote:

yay, glad someone is mapping this, i love this song xD

I love this song too~

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Combo colors 1 and 2, and 3 and 4 are very similar, maybe mix them around so the similar ones dont come in a row
Why only 2 diffs? will you add another one?

[Yuki]
Why is this the only diff with a custom name?
Consider adding a break in between your current 2, since it has a playtime of 2:30 in between those.
Use more whistles (specially in the beginning when there's barely any hitsounds besides finishes).
03:26:880 - Unsnapped kiai start.

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
Your combos get pretty long for an Easy diff, like for example 03:12:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), among othersfixed
00:07:288 (3) - Avoid short sliders that repeat multiple times on the easiest diff.Although I think this is no problem but I changed part of the sliders

01:25:655 (6) - ^
01:37:900 (5) - ^
01:42:798 (4) - ^
I'll stop from pointing them out now, but take them in mind
03:02:390 - Unsnapped timing section, wont affect your spinner end as intended.fixed
03:25:043 (1,1,1) - Dont spam new combos.fixed

Pretty nice and sweet maps

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Yuki]
00:31:931 - This break is pretty short, im sorry but your gonna need something longer or a break before the other long break you have.Delete something to make the break time more comfortable.
02:56:268 (3,4) - This is a bit of a big jump, made me trip since this is the only time spacing changes.changed to only 1 slider.

[Air_Kannabi's Easy]
You still need to use your breaks better, there's quite a bit of time after the break without any other kind of rest. Added some break times~

blissfulyoshi wrote:

T_T quite sleepy right now, will continue the mod later, but wanted to post what I had right now. (No need for kds until I at least complete the mod) Thanks for the sleepy mod^^

Air_kannabi's Easy:
02:14:023 (2) - the placement of this note looks a little messy under 02:12:186 (3) fixed the spacing and the following notes changed a little too.
02:18:921 (3) - new combo for new line of lyrics? fixed
03:14:635 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 03:20:145 (1) fixed
03:45:859 (1) to spinner - Compared to the section before it, you have double the amount of combos for similar sounding sections. Is this done on purpose? I don't think it is on purpose, but the Gd mapper is offline right now, so deleted some combos.