Hi there~
Can't find anything much, but here's the mods you've asked:

[Easy]
1'30''165 - The end of the slider is too high and touching the HPbar, can you lower it a little?

A nice diff!

[Hard]
A nice diff also, but this feels more like a Normal instead of a Hard...

0'26''800 - I assume that you're following Miley singing; if so, you should put this one at 0'26''660 instead to follow her.

[Tonoicutzu's Insane]
Can't find anything wrong here.

Very nice maps, and I enjoy listening to them, so one star to you guys~
All the best!

Easy
00:06:053 > bundan sonraki yeni comboları kaldırmalısın. (1-1-1)
00:54:838 > comboyu kaldır.
00:58:763 > comboyu kaldır.
01:11:660 > 3 tane geri gitmeli yapabilirsin ?
01:57:081 > comboyu kaldır.
01:59:324 > comboyu kaldır.
02:09:978 > burada bir kere daha 3 tane.

Hard
00:08:296 > burdan sonraki 2 yeni comboyu kaldır.
02:59:199 > bunu koymana gerek yok kaldır.

[Insane]
00:18:109 (4) - add a repeat?
00:21:473 (x) - add a note is better imo
00:25:959 (x) - ^
00:35:632 (4) - I think this is look better
01:33:249 (x) - add a note?
02:41:815 (1) - not stack well

[Hard]
01:13:342 (1) - remove newcombo?
01:24:277 (7) - add whistle?
01:38:997 (6) - extend 1/2 ?
02:57:516 (4) - move it to the same position with 1?

[Easy]
00:46:427 (1) - add clap
00:48:670 (3) - add clap at begin
02:01:567 (2) - ^
02:11:660 (2) - clap

good map

There's only one BG,so I'd like you to keep the same combo colours in all difficulties.

Also,fix Tags in Insane,add "Hannah Montana"

[Easy]
I'm not sure about hitsounds.They seem a little random to me At least in soft parts,I wouldn't add whistles to EVERY note..at least after each 1 white tick.
00:13:342 (1) - Finish?
00:26:800 (2) - ^
00:31:286 (2) - ^
00:37:735 (2) - Cut this slider at 00:38:296 and start spinner earlier?
00:38:997 (1) - Finish.
00:46:427 (1) - Clap?
00:48:670 (3) - ^
00:58:763 (1) - Remove NC?
01:03:249 (2) - Clap?
01:09:417 (1) - Fix distance,it's too far from previous object.
01:11:660 (1) - I'd continue this reverse-slider up to 01:13:903.
01:20:632 (1) - Finish?
01:38:576 (3) - ^
01:46:427 (1) - ^
01:57:081 (1) - Remove NC?
02:09:978 (1) - Continue repeats up to 02:12:221?
02:14:464 (3) - Fix spacing,move it few grids down and left.
02:29:187 (1) - Finish?
02:33:404 (3) - Clap?
02:39:572 - Change to finish?
02:44:058 (1) - ^
02:48:544 (1) - Finish?

[Hard]
00:20:071 - Add a note?
00:38:856 (1) - Finish?
00:49:230 - ^
00:53:716 (1) - ^
00:58:202 - ^
01:02:688 (2) - ^
01:04:931 (1) - ^
01:46:427 (1) - ^
01:52:034 (1) - ^
01:54:277 (1) - ^
01:56:520 - ^
02:07:735 (2) - ^
02:29:187 (1) - ^
02:35:086 (1) - ^
02:39:572 - ^
02:44:058 (2) - ^
02:44:479 (4) - You should cut this slider at red/white tick.Would sound much better.
02:46:301 (1) - Finish?
02:48:544 (3) - ^
02:50:787 - ^
02:53:030 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:31:286 (3) - Finish?
01:04:931 (3) - ^
01:07:174 (1) - ^
01:09:417 (2) - ^
01:11:660 (1) - ^
02:03:249 (1) - ^
02:09:978 (1) - ^
02:46:301 (5) - ^
02:48:544 (3) - ^
02:50:787 - ^
02:53:030 (1) - ^

Nice song and solid maps,good luck~
Star.

Thanks for all your helpful suggestions everybody

Fixed!
Waiting Tonoicutzu to fix Insane

the spinner skin looks not very good centered but im sorry i cant help you with that >_< maybe ask a skinner to make it look a little nicer or if you can center it yourself.

Easy:

00:16:707 (3) - whistle on end and 00:18:950 (3) - whistle on end here too would make a nice transition
00:23:997 (1) - finish here on end maybe? i thought this part sounded a bit empty until the last slider
00:33:529 (2,3) - i would put the sound on 3 instead
00:48:670 (3) - clap on the repeat sounds good
01:07:174 (2) - clap on end
01:09:978 (2) - clap on start
01:11:099 (3) - clap
01:20:632 (1) - i would remove the finish here. i think it doesnt sound good ^^;
01:27:922 (5) - whistle on start?
01:33:529 (1) - whistle on end?
01:38:576 (3) - i think the finish sound at the end is a little too much. how about removing it?
01:42:501 (1,2) - this 2 sliders sound a little empty. i suggest a whistle on end for the first one and a whistle at the repeat for the second
01:46:427 (1) - start this spinner a blue tick earlier i would say
02:05:492 (2) - clap on the end
02:29:334 (1) - i think this spinner better starts a blue tick later
02:31:161 (1) - this timing section is not on audio custom override 2. i dont know if you want it but i think the custom clap sound is alot better so you should stick to it
02:33:404 (3) - replace the finish sound here with a clap sound
02:33:965 (4) - this one sounds better with only a clap on the repeat and on the end
02:39:012 (6) - clap on start and repeat
02:40:133 (1) - this timing section is not set on custom override 2 aswell~
02:40:133 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this part sounds very weird and not fitting i think. thats because your clap sound here should belong on the red ticks. a solution would be to move 02:40:133 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so they are all only on red ticks and remove the clap sound completely from 02:44:058 (1,2,3,4) -

Hard:

00:17:548 (1) - whistle
00:35:632 (4) - whistle end
00:37:735 (2) - whistle end
00:50:632 (1) - clap
01:04:090 (2) - clap maybe but i think it might sound better without ^^
01:07:174 (3) - clap on end
01:09:978 (3) - clap
01:11:099 (2) - clap on start
01:24:277 (7) - i think it is better to remove this whistle sound here and add a new circle at 01:24:557 (8) - with whistle
01:53:997 (5) - clap
01:55:959 (3) - you should add 2 more clap sounds here like you did on the slider 00:57:642 (3) - sounds very good~
02:05:492 (3) - clap on end
02:08:296 (3) - clap on start
02:09:417 (2) - clap on start
02:27:579 (1,1) - this 2 spinners are a little off i think~ i think it would be better for the first spinner start: 2:27:432 end: 2:28:602, second spinner start at: 2:29:339
02:30:881 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - you forgot to add your hitsounds here ^^. do it how you used to before, just put claps on red ticks and don't forget to set this timing section to custom override 2 aswell.
02:39:853 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1) - oh this one aswell

~~~
Great beatmap overall- think it will be ranked soon~ Starred

also got a little tired now and didnt check the third difficulty sorry

Hi~

[General]

1. First thing to say is that I really, really, but I mean REALLY like clean and pretty sliders, and this is not quiet the case. So I'll leave you a guide for further reference on how to make pretty sliders:
   http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
   Of course, never forget to be creative! :3
2. hitcircleoverlay.png on the folder is the default one, so it isn't needed. Delete it and full submit.
3. On the kiai times, delete the fountains at 58:202, 01:56:520, 02:39:572. Believe me, the kiai should be more... plain kiai.

[Easy]

1. Uhm there are quiet a lot of unsnapped objects... (Tha means, that aren't at the correct distance from the previous ones) Of course this can be done intentionally, but it seems it's just random here. So I recommend snapping correctly every object, as I'm too f*cking lazy to list them ALL.

[Hard]

1. Again, be careful with the distances... There are too many unsnapped objects, and I think it's much better if you realize where those are by yourself:)

[Tonoicutzu's Insane]

1. Distance snapping seems more consistent.

Ok umm I can star this I guess

I used to have no idea about that custom sound. I was wondering about. Buut i fixed it!
Got it now


Still fixing Thank you

Mod request via in-game PM

[General]
-> You have a custom hitcircle in your used skin, so you should also have a hitcircleoverlay.png in your skin.
-> Offset ~ +4ms sounds better to me, not very sure though.

[Easy]
00:31:847 (3) - Add whistle at the slider's beginning?
01:11:664 (1) - Don't face this slider to the right, maybe place the reverse arrow facing left of lower-left
02:09:982 (1) - ^, face right or upper-right this time
02:18:950 (1,1) - Try finish hitsound at slider's beginning
02:35:086 (1,2) - Spacing? (Too close to each other)

[Hard]
00:13:062 (1,2,3) - Dunno why... Repeating slider seems better for me here
00:32:128 (5) - Whistle hitsound at repeat?
01:11:941 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unstack or change to repeating slider, looks ugly in play mode
01:26:099 (4) - Hitsound whistle?
01:42:501 (2) - Hitsound whistle at slider's beginning?
02:09:978 (1) - No need for new combo I guess

[Tonoicutzu's Insane]
-> Add "Hannah Montana" to the tags in this diff
01:15:305 (1) - Add hitsound whistle?
02:12:782 (1) - Add whistle at slider's beginning?
02:55:834 (1) - ^
Lovely diff

I love the [Hard] xD
The difficulty rating just fits for an [Hard]... Star definitely (:

:U

Download: Miley Cyrus - 7 Things (Debbiee) [Tonoicutzu's Insane].osu

Here's my part. :3

General info about the difficulty:

• Star rating: 5.0
  Total play length: 168s
  Maximum Score: 10 374 886
  Maximum Combo: 795
  Distance spacing: 1,0x, 1,4x, 1,5x and 2,0x
  Slider velocity: 2,00

Remember.. I will continue to update it, so it will be improved.

Version 3.0
Download here.

Last updated: 11-05-21 (16:30)

What I need now is suggestions for spinner(s) if you think it's needed and a lot of mods so I can improve it.

hello,as you requested

General:
In Easy difficulty your Preview Point is not the same as in other 2 difficulties! So,make them all the same.
100% of sound in this song doesn't sound good,better to put 75-80 %

Easy:
Slider Velocity 1,6? O_O That is TOO much! Put 1,2 at least.
Maybe you should put Approach Rate 3 and Overall Difficulty 2?
00:27:501 - 00:30:585 - I think with such low HP Drain it's not necessary to put here Break Point for such a short time.
02:15:726 - 02:18:803 - ^

Hard:
Put Overall Difficulty 5
What can I say..not bad,not bad,I like it)

Tonoicutzu's Insane:
Hp Drain 7 is pretty much for this calm song,even if this is Insane diff. 6 is better,I think
nice diff too,lol

Nice map and nice song) Star!

All fixed~ Thanks

☆彡

Version 3.0

Update: http://puu.sh/29BX

What I need now is suggestions for spinner(s) if you think it's needed and a lot of mods so I can improve it.

11-05-21 (16:30)

Also, you have to add the people in the beatmap to the tags.
ME for example. And the other dude.

OK, i did

Completed~

Nice stuff, I want this ranked
~star

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badum tssiii~

starrrrrr

Thank you all

Control point (Also CP)
If you don't know what a control point is , a control point is what we need to make a bezier or catmull slider , they appear like this : Redpoints are the red.
General
Those double taps ... ;_; I kinda like them but only on this way : not this way like Tonoicutzu did : Its make a player do a half stream and with high spacing... but meh it's only sugestion

Easy
00:14:464 Redpoint 1 grid left. :3
00:21:754 Whistle
00:22:875 Remove NewCombo
00:26:800 Remove slider and put beat with finish, but if you don't do this remove the finish at the end of the slider.
Kiai Did you just unabled distance snap , or you changed spacing?
02:14:464 Break , i lol'd.
02:24:800 Pooting wave. i know you can do it better
02:35:086 The hitsounding changed here , i don't like it , but i feel better you normal , clap , normal , clap. (not clap , normal , clap , normal)
02:46:301 Last controlpoint , 1 grid right

Hard
02:53:030 Oh my god my eyes.

Tonoicutzu's
What i said in general

theowest's utterbullshitovermapped
00:15:585 1/4 Earlier the end of the slider
00:18:810 ^
00:19:791 I see no sense on this beat. Delete
00:32:688 1/4 Earlier the end of the slider
00:51:754 Rotate -13
00:52:314 1/4 Earlier the end of the slider
Enough of overmap.


Nice map starr'd

theowest's utterbullshitovermapped
00:15:585 1/4 Earlier the end of the slider
00:18:810 ^
00:19:791 I see no sense on this beat. Delete Oh.. Forgot to delete that one..
00:32:688 1/4 Earlier the end of the slider
00:51:754 Rotate -13
00:52:314 1/4 Earlier the end of the slider
Enough of overmap. ...


Nice map starr'd[/quote]

IT'S NOT OVERMAPPED GODDAMMIT!!!!!! I'm mapping to the music. With the correct BPM. Not adding unnecessary beats, THAT'S overmapping, just making an insane diff. Except my mistake at 00:19:791.

Update: http://puu.sh/2ie4
Btw, you have to add "Insane" to the tags. So my beatmap will pop up when people search it. Y'know?

Sorry for the delay I wasn't here for a few weeks but im back now.

Debbiee wrote:

Sorry for the delay I wasn't here for a few weeks but im back now.

btw I'm working on a update. it's coming. don't worry. <3

http://puu.sh/2Ifh
there.
I didn't really changed much. Just the spacing of two or three beats.

Update:
http://puu.sh/2UCH

Thanks theowest ^^

Hyguys wrote:

Control point (Also CP)
If you don't know what a control point is , a control point is what we need to make a bezier or catmull slider , they appear like this :

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/2iaB

Redpoints are the red.
General
Those double taps ... ;_; I kinda like them but only on this way :

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/2iam

not this way like Tonoicutzu did :

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/2ian

Its make a player do a half stream and with high spacing... but meh it's only sugestion

Easy
00:14:464 Redpoint 1 grid left. :3 Ok
00:21:754 Whistle Ok
00:22:875 Remove NewCombo Ok
00:26:800 Remove slider and put beat with finish, but if you don't do this remove the finish at the end of the slider. Finish at the end of the slider has been removed.
Kiai Did you just unabled distance snap , or you changed spacing? I think i changed spacing
02:14:464 Break , i lol'd. Ok
02:24:800 Pooting wave. i know you can do it better Lol now i did
02:35:086 The hitsounding changed here , i don't like it , but i feel better you normal , clap , normal , clap. (not clap , normal , clap , normal) Ok
02:46:301 Last controlpoint , 1 grid right Ok

Hard
02:53:030 Oh my god my eyes. o.o

Tonoicutzu's
What i said in general

theowest's utterbullshitovermapped
00:15:585 1/4 Earlier the end of the slider
00:18:810 ^
00:19:791 I see no sense on this beat. Delete
00:32:688 1/4 Earlier the end of the slider
00:51:754 Rotate -13
00:52:314 1/4 Earlier the end of the slider
Enough of overmap.


Nice map starr'd

Thank you *-*
Btw sorry for giving the kudosu so late >.<

General

--Take away the comma's in the tags, they are useless
--that smile on her face in the bg is really weird... LOL

theowest's

--large spacing + high SV + 214 bpm

beginning to 00:38:997 - I don't agree with this SV actually. I would rater have it less, and then it just gets epic at the kiai time :3. It seems a little fast imo at the moment. or maybe not idk.
00:45:165 (x) - add note plz. I don't like this anti spacing, and i read it incorrectly lol.
00:56:520 (1) - remove combo
01:06:193 (x) - add note?
02:04:931 (2) - remove one repeat repeat and add a note after? i don't expect the 2nd repeat at all.
01:39:557 (x) - it flows better if you add a note here imo
01:56:240 (11) - move this slider to the left of combo 10? it kinda looks like combo 10 has only 1 repeat.
02:37:750 (x) - add note?

fun to play :3

Tonoicutzu's Insane

01:04:931 (3) - add clap to the end of slider?
01:06:193 (x) - add note with clap?
01:55:539 (x) - add note
02:04:090 (x) - ^
02:04:511 (x) - ^
02:04:791 (x) - ^
02:05:071 (x) - ^
02:05:352 (x) - ^

Hard

--The kiai time on hard is a tiny bit different than the other difficulties (at 01:47:828 (1) -, while the other diffs start 1/1 tick earlier)

00:46:146 (1) - add clap
01:13:342 (6) - you can probably do something more interesting than this lol >_>
02:14:464 (5) - silence the end of the slider?
02:26:555 (x) - add note
02:40:974 (3) - i didn't realize this note had 2 repeats. perhaps you can point the repeat slider the other way, remove 1 repeat and add a note at 02:41:395.
02:57:516 (4) - replace slider with one note. or you can end the slider at 02:58:077. it just sounds weird now.

Easy

00:22:314 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - these finishes sound weird.
00:23:997 (5) - new combo
00:42:501 (1) - remove combo
00:54:838 (1) - remove combo
00:55:959 (5) - new combo
01:11:660 (1) - >_> do something else other than this?
01:29:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - these finishes sound weird.
02:09:978 (1) - yeah... >_>
02:29:334 (1) - start spinner on white tick

Nice map! :3

winber1 wrote:

General

--Take away the comma's in the tags, they are useless
--that smile on her face in the bg is really weird... LOL

theowest's

--large spacing + high SV + 214 bpm 8-)

beginning to 00:38:997 - I don't agree with this SV actually. I would rater have it less, and then it just gets epic at the kiai time :3. It seems a little fast imo at the moment. or maybe not idk.
00:45:165 (x) - add note plz. I don't like this anti spacing, and i read it incorrectly lol.
00:56:520 (1) - remove combo
01:06:193 (x) - add note?
02:04:931 (2) - remove one repeat repeat and add a note after? i don't expect the 2nd repeat at all.
01:39:557 (x) - it flows better if you add a note here imo
01:56:240 (11) - move this slider to the left of combo 10? it kinda looks like combo 10 has only 1 repeat.
02:37:750 (x) - add note?

fun to play :3

Nice map! :3

You were so right with everything there. It's an old diff so.. yeah. xD Updated and fixed now. :)

Here it is: http://puu.sh/33RC

winber1 wrote:

General

--Take away the comma's in the tags, they are useless Ok.
--that smile on her face in the bg is really weird... LOL LOL yeah XD


Hard

--The kiai time on hard is a tiny bit different than the other difficulties (at 01:47:828 (1) -, while the other diffs start 1/1 tick earlier) Fixed

00:46:146 (1) - add clap Ok.
01:13:342 (6) - you can probably do something more interesting than this lol >_> Done
02:14:464 (5) - silence the end of the slider? Ok.
02:26:555 (x) - add note Ok.
02:40:974 (3) - i didn't realize this note had 2 repeats. perhaps you can point the repeat slider the other way, remove 1 repeat and add a note at 02:41:395. Ok.
02:57:516 (4) - replace slider with one note. or you can end the slider at 02:58:077. it just sounds weird now. Sorry but no

Easy

00:22:314 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - these finishes sound weird. Removed.
00:23:997 (5) - new combo Ok.
00:42:501 (1) - remove combo Ok.
00:54:838 (1) - remove combo Ok.
00:55:959 (5) - new combo Ok.
01:11:660 (1) - >_> do something else other than this? Done
01:29:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - these finishes sound weird. Removed.
02:09:978 (1) - yeah... >_> Done
02:29:334 (1) - start spinner on white tick It used to. But i put it on when she starts singing "the 7 things i hate about you" lol.

Nice map! :3

Thank youuu ^^

edit: added some notes that winber said in his mod.

Download: Miley Cyrus - 7 Things (Debbiee) [Tony's 5th Thing].osu

Here is my little storyboard & lyrics for my friend çilem NEW LİNK



Caution: I had a problem about my program, and I fixed it, then made that SB again. [FIXED]



Burdaki şuanki SB'nin codu. http://puu.sh/3col
Eğer ötekini görmek istersen oyun için upload eder veririm.
Ki bunu beğenmediysen ötekinide beğenmezsin.
Dediğim gibi elimden gelen bu iki kere üst üste yaptım.
Beğenmezsende canın sağolsun.

[1st thing]=
00:37:735 (2) - I feel like it should end 38:436.
00:46:987 (1) - End at 00:47:969
00:55:959 (1) - End at 00:56:660
00:57:081 (2) - End at 00:57:782
01:29:043 (1) - End at 01:29:744
01:30:165 (2) - End at 01:30:866
01:44:184 (2) - Move to 01:44:043

[3rd thing]
00:16:567 (6) - Move to 00:16:427
01:04:230 (3) - End at 01:04:651
01:59:744 (3) - Shorten it to end at 02:00:305

I think the other difficulties are fine as they are but a bit repetitve towards the end.

Nice...

Katsuri wrote:

Nice...

IT'S OLD! OKAY?

Keyboard wrote:

[1st thing]=
00:37:735 (2) - I feel like it should end 38:436. no
00:46:987 (1) - End at 00:47:969 no
00:55:959 (1) - End at 00:56:660 no
00:57:081 (2) - End at 00:57:782 no
01:29:043 (1) - End at 01:29:744 no
01:30:165 (2) - End at 01:30:866 no
01:44:184 (2) - Move to 01:44:043 no

[3rd thing]
00:16:567 (6) - Move to 00:16:427 no
01:04:230 (3) - End at 01:04:651 no
01:59:744 (3) - Shorten it to end at 02:00:305 no

I think the other difficulties are fine as they are but a bit repetitve towards the end.

Thank you

[Tiny`s 3th]
00:21:053 : whistle
00:23:156 : ^
00:23:296 : ^
00:24:417 : ^

[Tiny`s 5th]

01:13:903 : try like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/118541
01:51:754 : add note
02:34:806 : ^
02:47:563 : ^
02:55:554 : ^

nice song xD

indyinyou wrote:

[Tiny`s 3th]
00:21:053 : whistle ok
00:23:156 : ^ no
00:23:296 : ^ no
00:24:417 : ^ ok

[Tiny`s 5th]

01:13:903 : try like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/118541
01:51:754 : add note
02:34:806 : ^
02:47:563 : ^
02:55:554 : ^

nice song xD

Thaaanks ^^

all fixed..

Download: Miley Cyrus - 7 Things (Debbiee) [Tony's 5th Thing].osu

Wow this song has horrible mixed messages in the lyrics. That guy sounds like a twat don't make up with him in the last chorus grrrr

General
Use tick rate 2 on all diffs
You have a few sliders that are really close to being symmetrical but aren't - I'd suggest taking a look at my slider guide.
You need an approachcircle.png and a spinner-approachcircle.png, even if they're just the defaults.

theowest's 7th thing
The BPM is double what it should be on this diff.
This is completely absurdly overmapped. The song isn't thaaat extreme, but you're using what would be SV 4.0 if the bpm was correct and ridiculously wide spacing for 1/4s.
I'd say it needs remapping or removing (The spread would be fine if this diff was removed entirely)

Tony's 5th Thing
Nothing technically wrong, but I'd suggest trying to use less square patterns in future - using almost all horizontal and vertical lines gets pretty uninteresting after a while :/

3rd Thing
You have unsnapped notes - Timing > Resnap all notes from the menu bar at the top.

RandomJibberish wrote:

Wow this song has horrible mixed messages in the lyrics. That guy sounds like a twat don't make up with him in the last chorus grrrr

General
Use tick rate 2 on all diffs
You have a few sliders that are really close to being symmetrical but aren't - I'd suggest taking a look at my slider guide.
You need an approachcircle.png and a spinner-approachcircle.png, even if they're just the defaults.

theowest's 7th thing
The BPM is double what it should be on this diff. No. This song is 214 bpm.
This is completely absurdly overmapped. The song isn't thaaat extreme Yes it is. It's 214 bpm., but you're using what would be SV 4.0 if the bpm was correct and ridiculously wide spacing for 1/4s. There's only 2 1/4s, and they're not wide spaced.
I'd say it needs remapping or removing (The spread would be fine if this diff was removed entirely) WHAT?! NO FUCKING WAY DUDE!!

The BPM on my diff is the correct BPM. I can S this. It's insane. It's alright as it is. I've only used 1/4 twice. And no. It won't be removed. I won't allow it. It's not overmapped. It's not extreme. And the song IS 214 BPM! Can't you hear that? Can't you see it in the edit that it truly is? Also.. The tick rate 2 do not fit in this diff. :(

Can I make a taiko for this? :l

Backfire wrote:

Can I make a taiko for this? :l

dunno... I think it's kinda too late. It's been pending for more than 4 months.

theowest wrote:

Backfire wrote:

Can I make a taiko for this? :l

dunno... I think it's kinda too late. It's been pending for more than 4 months.

o-o well ok ;~; </3

theowest wrote:

The BPM on my diff is the correct BPM. I can S this. It's insane. It's alright as it is. I've only used 1/4 twice. And no. It won't be removed. I won't allow it. It's not overmapped. It's not extreme. And the song IS 214 BPM! Can't you hear that? Can't you see it in the edit that it truly is? Also.. The tick rate 2 do not fit in this diff.

Overmappedness has nothing to do with whether you can pass it - the difficulty of this is inappropriate when compared to the song.
It isn't your choice whether it's removed - it's not your mapset. Also, whether the BPM is doubled or not (It is) It is unrankable to have different timing on different diffs.
And obviously tick rate 2 and 1/4s in my post applies to the correct BPM :/

Also it's never "too late" to add a difficulty as long as it's properly modded.

RandomJibberish wrote:

theowest wrote:

The BPM on my diff is the correct BPM. I can S this. It's insane. It's alright as it is. I've only used 1/4 twice. And no. It won't be removed. I won't allow it. It's not overmapped. It's not extreme. And the song IS 214 BPM! Can't you hear that? Can't you see it in the edit that it truly is? Also.. The tick rate 2 do not fit in this diff. :(

Overmappedness has nothing to do with whether you can pass it - the difficulty of this is inappropriate when compared to the song.
It isn't your choice whether it's removed - it's not your mapset. Also, whether the BPM is doubled or not (It is) It is unrankable to have different timing on different diffs.
And obviously tick rate 2 applies to the correct BPM, where it would be the same as you have now :/

IT'S NOT OVERMAPPED!!!!! ;_______; and.. oh fuck.. it isn't the correct bpm.. FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Is it okay if I use 2.0x slider velocity multiplier inherited timing sections so the sliders are at that speed again? ;_;
I don't see how that could be a problem.

You have no idea how much time I spent on this beatmap. I would never like it to be removed. Just look at the amount of beats and sliders and inherited timing sections!

Agreed with all that, except in Backfire's case it's too early for him.

Hurry up and get pro Back :V

RandomJibberish wrote:

Wow this song has horrible mixed messages in the lyrics. That guy sounds like a twat don't make up with him in the last chorus grrrr

General
Use tick rate 2 on all diffsFixed.
You have a few sliders that are really close to being symmetrical but aren't - I'd suggest taking a look at my slider guide. Thanks i'll take into account.
You need an approachcircle.png and a spinner-approachcircle.png, even if they're just the defaults. Fixed.


3rd Thing
You have unsnapped notes - Timing > Resnap all notes from the menu bar at the top.

Thank you

Update! Less overmapped. The corrected bpm this time..

http://puu.sh/3G2u

theowest wrote:

Update! Less overmapped. The corrected bpm this time..

http://puu.sh/3G2u

Thanks, done

Btw redownload please! I have added approach circles.

I'm not sure as to which bpm I should use. ;-;

k, theowest's diff is slightly better now so I'll actually mod it

General
Approachcircle is too blurry and bright and weird - It's best if this element has a sharp edge. I suggest using the default.

Theowest's 7th Thing
AR-1 at least. Preferably 2. Sappha who's totally cool and actually good at playing can totally back me up here




00:15:585 (2) - shorten by 1/8 - the sliderend doesn't match anything in the music as is
00:32:688 (3) - ^
00:21:754 (1,2,3) - Doubling back on yourself just makes this pointlessly difficult to sightread
02:12:782 (1,2,3,4) - Kill this antijumpin'
02:18:670 - Either lessen the spacing on this section to match the speed change or increase the speed change to match the spacing. The slider speed is too unintuitive as it is now.

Slider velocity and spacing are still ridiculously stupid but yeah whatever I guess it's technically rankable.

RandomJibberish wrote:

k, theowest's diff is slightly better now so I'll actually mod it

General
Approachcircle is too blurry and bright and weird - It's best if this element has a sharp edge. I suggest using the default. True. HEY DEBBIE! Change it. Find something cool in another beatmap.

Theowest's 7th Thing
AR-1 at least. Preferably 2. Sappha who's totally cool and actually good at playing can totally back me up here I'd take 8.

00:15:585 (2) - shorten by 1/8 - the sliderend doesn't match anything in the music as is Fix'd
00:32:688 (3) - ^ Fix'd
00:21:754 (1,2,3) - Doubling back on yourself just makes this pointlessly difficult to sightread Fix'd
02:12:782 (1,2,3,4) - Kill this antijumpin' Fix'd
02:18:670 - Either lessen the spacing on this section to match the speed change or increase the speed change to match the spacing. The slider speed is too unintuitive as it is now. Ok.

Slider velocity and spacing are still ridiculously stupid but yeah whatever I guess it's technically rankable.

Thank you!

Here's the update: http://puu.sh/3Hos there's a new update on my newer post.

how perfect! 800 combo! \:D/

[1st Thing]
00:38:856 (1,1) - This comes too soon after the spinner. because this diff is [easy]
01:40:258 (1,1) - let it stack
01:41:941 (4,2) - ^
01:46:286 (1) - start at 01:46:146 - is more better ((because it very short for new player so...
02:29:334 (1) - ^

[3rd Thing]
00:21:754 (1,2,3) - make like 00:22:875 (1,2,3,4) -

[Tony's 5th Thing]
try AR=7
00:25:959 (1,2,3) - look not stright so...you need fix it? [nazi]
01:51:754 (7) - new combo ?
01:52:034 (1) - remove new combo

[theowest's 7th Thing]
very higher SV =w=~
01:53:576 (3,6) - stack

good map~star!!!

spboxer3 wrote:

[theowest's 7th Thing]
very higher SV =w=~ Same sound volume. But 50% on Normals.
01:53:576 (3,6) - stack meh, doesn't matter but sure.

good map~star!!!

ok.. super small change with placement.

update: http://puu.sh/3Hr7

Mmm...Here you go.

Download: Miley Cyrus - 7 Things (Debbiee) [Backfire's Taiko Thing].osu

RandomJibberish wrote:

k, theowest's diff is slightly better now so I'll actually mod it

General
Approachcircle is too blurry and bright and weird - It's best if this element has a sharp edge. I suggest using the default. Sure, fixed.

spboxer3 wrote:

[1st Thing]
00:38:856 (1,1) - This comes too soon after the spinner. because this diff is [easy]
01:40:258 (1,1) - let it stack Ah, right o.o fixed.
01:41:941 (4,2) - ^ ^
01:46:286 (1) - start at 01:46:146 - is more better ((because it very short for new player so... Fixed
02:29:334 (1) - ^ ^

[3rd Thing]
00:21:754 (1,2,3) - make like 00:22:875 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed


good map~star!!!

Thank you

Backfire wrote:

Mmm...Here you go.

Nice diff ^^

REDOWNLOAD AGAIN. LOL.
-Taiko diff
-New approachcircles
-Spinner background is centered.

Debbiee wrote:

Hello
I'm going on holiday. So I won't be here for about 2 weeks. See you everybody :)

SEE YOU LATER HUN <3

Sorry. I just don't like miley cyrus.

Zelos wrote:

Sorry. I just don't like miley cyrus.

Who doesn't? LOL

Here is a star for you, I like it!

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.

theowest wrote:

Zelos wrote:

Sorry. I just don't like miley cyrus.

Who doesn't? LOL

me too...
so i lazy modded this.
[3rd thing]
02:29:334 (1,1,2) - i wonder if the spinner make the 2nd slider unreadable....
(i use the xi-style skin. if the default skin still have such a problem this is PROBABLY unrankable...)
02:53:030 (3) - align the start and the end better... temporarily use lv4 grid snap/disable grid snap if necessary.

[Tony's 5th thing]
just a complain of AR8...
it's fine though.
01:42:501 (3) - align the start and the end better...

no kds.

Oh I haven't starred this yet. Star~

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.

theowest wrote:

Zelos wrote:

Sorry. I just don't like miley cyrus.

Who doesn't? LOL

Whaaat??? I love Miley Cyrus!!!! theo bro <3

justnobody wrote:

[3rd thing]
02:29:334 (1,1,2) - i wonder if the spinner make the 2nd slider unreadable.... Fixed
(i use the xi-style skin. if the default skin still have such a problem this is PROBABLY unrankable...)
02:53:030 (3) - align the start and the end better... temporarily use lv4 grid snap/disable grid snap if necessary. Fixed

no kds.

Thank you

And thanks for starrings

Theowest's 7th thing
-Why change the combo colors on this difficulty?

HellDawn wrote:

Theowest's 7th thing
-Why change the combo colors on this difficulty?

oh.. well. I dunno. long time ago I did this.

Debbie, go and edit my diff, copy the combo colors from your diff and put them where they should be in mine.

theowest wrote:

HellDawn wrote:

Theowest's 7th thing
-Why change the combo colors on this difficulty?

oh.. well. I dunno. long time ago I did this.

Debbie, go and edit my diff, copy the combo colors from your diff and put them where they should be in mine.

Done

You can delete my guest diff. Thank you very much for everything

Tony wrote:

You can delete my guest diff. Thank you very much for everything

y? ;_;

Tony wrote:

You can delete my guest diff. Thank you very much for everything

Ok then.. Thanks for everything, too.

Güzel oldu ya taiko icin bg yoktu yaptım emre saolsun biraz yardım etti u.u

HellDawn wrote:

stuff

too stretched... And it looks better if you use a pro template.

Green? Why is it green? D:

..........................................................................................

Backfire wrote:

Green? Why is it green? D:

..........................................................................................

EXACTLY! D:

HellDawn wrote:

Güzel oldu ya taiko icin bg yoktu yaptım emre saolsun biraz yardım etti u.u
-------------bg-----------------

Thank you guys i gave you kudosu but its so green o.o
I created a new one ^_^

Hello ~

1st Thing:

AR -1?

00:31:286 (2) - New combo
00:33:529 (2) - ^
00:35:212 (1) - No New combo
00:35:772 (2) - New combo
01:04:931 (4) - ^
01:07:174 (2) - No new combo
01:11:660 (4) - New combo
01:22:875 (3) - ^
01:27:361 (4) - ^
01:38:576 (3) - ^
01:40:258 (1) - No new combo
01:40:819 (2) - New combo
02:03:249 (4) - ^
02:04:931 (1) - No new combo
02:05:492 (2) - ^
02:09:978 (4) - New combo
02:37:329 (3) - New combo
02:41:815 (4) - ^
02:46:301 (4) - ^
02:50:787 (2) - ^
02:57:516 (4) - ^

Good map, don't need more than comboing suggestion.
Decide if you want to follow them

3rd Thing:

00:16:567 (6) - Fix the last slider's waypoint, it's asymmetric. 1 grid down: http://puu.sh/4HUO
00:20:071 (5) - New combo
01:29:464 (3) - Fix the waypoint, asymmetric: http://puu.sh/4HVQ
02:03:249 (5) - New combo
02:53:030 (3) - ^

5th Thing:

00:13:062 - Add a circle?
00:16:567 (7) - Move the slider at 00:16:567 and finish it at 00:17:268.
00:20:913 (2) - Move at 00:21:053 and fix the space with next circle..
00:32:128 (4) - Add a circle and move the slider at 00:32:268
00:41:380 (5) - Move it at x:252 y:32?
00:41:660 (6,7,8) - Select 00:40:539 (2,3,4) - and copy-past-reflect horizzontaly? (Just suggestion, for more symmetry.)
00:55:258 (6) - Move it at x:432 y:140 (in grid left)
01:04:931 (7) - New combo
01:26:380 (5) - Move at 01:26:520 ?
01:27:081 (6) - New combo
01:59:604 (10) - Move at 01:59:744 and end at 2:00:445
02:03:249 (4) - New combo
02:19:827 (4) - Move at 02:19:973 and end at 02:20:558?
02:29:334 - Add a circle?
02:53:030 (3) - New combo

7th Thing:

Slider velocity so high..

00:54:557 (4,1) - exaggerated spacing.. Fix it with distance snap?
01:50:071 (8) - New combo
02:07:455 (5) - ^
02:57:516 (6) - Add a return?

Then good luck ~

[1st thing]
Well first thing...
00:34:651 (4) - Try not to stack, move it up or something, easy fix.
00:46:427 (1) - Not really a necessary new combo
02:41:255 (3) - Don't stack when you only do it twice lol.

Good diff!
[3rd thing]
Everything looks good here.

Nice job. Hard for a normal though if anything...
[5th Thing]
00:39:137 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - She starts singing a beat earlier, maybe start it there? Or maybe not. It's fine.
00:44:744 (8) - The middle isn't pretty lol.
00:55:258 (6) - One grid to the left, and make it straight down, lol.
02:35:507 (2) - One up, :3
02:53:030 (3) - End shouldn't touch the beginning but nice.

Hey, 5 things, well great job :3
[Backfire's Taiko Thing]
00:05:772 (8) - don
00:08:015 (18) - ^
00:11:660 (34) - katu?
01:46:988 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - With 1/6, kkkkkkd Follow drum.

All I can (bother to)find (and point out). Good job Backooossyeah.
[theowest's 7th thing]
Well why bother modding this..
01:02:408 (3) - End this at 01:02:595 instead?

Hmm are there unsnapped slider heads?
02:30:881 (2) - End on white tick
02:31:442 (3) - ^
02:32:002 (4) - ^
02:32:563 (6) - ^

Yep, it seems so, they all end in the wrong spot. Just fix that, nice diff.

Chewin wrote:

Hello ~ :)
7th Thing:

Slider velocity so high..

00:54:557 (4,1) - exaggerated spacing.. Fix it with distance snap? Ok.
01:50:071 (8) - New combo Ok.
02:07:455 (5) - ^ Ok.
02:57:516 (6) - Add a return? What? No.

Then good luck ~

Thanks.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[theowest's 7th thing]
Well why bother modding this..
01:02:408 (3) - End this at 01:02:595 instead?

Hmm are there unsnapped slider heads?
02:30:881 (2) - End on white tick
02:31:442 (3) - ^
02:32:002 (4) - ^
02:32:563 (6) - ^
Woops. Fix'd all that ^.

Yep, it seems so, they all end in the wrong spot. Just fix that, nice diff.

Thanks y'all.

Here's the update:
http://puu.sh/4Jdh

Chewin wrote:

Hello ~

1st Thing:

AR -1?

00:31:286 (2) - New combo No
00:33:529 (2) - ^ No
00:35:212 (1) - No New combo No
00:35:772 (2) - New combo No
01:04:931 (4) - ^ No
01:07:174 (2) - No new combo No
01:11:660 (4) - New combo No
01:22:875 (3) - ^ No
01:27:361 (4) - ^ No
01:38:576 (3) - ^ No
01:40:258 (1) - No new combo No
01:40:819 (2) - New combo No
02:03:249 (4) - ^ No
02:04:931 (1) - No new combo No
02:05:492 (2) - ^ No
02:09:978 (4) - New combo No
02:37:329 (3) - New combo Ok
02:41:815 (4) - ^ No
02:46:301 (4) - ^ No
02:50:787 (2) - ^ No
02:57:516 (4) - ^ No

Good map, don't need more than comboing suggestion.
Decide if you want to follow them
Sure, thanks

3rd Thing:

00:16:567 (6) - Fix the last slider's waypoint, it's asymmetric. 1 grid down: http://puu.sh/4HUO Ok
00:20:071 (5) - New combo Ok
01:29:464 (3) - Fix the waypoint, asymmetric: http://puu.sh/4HVQ Ok
02:03:249 (5) - New combo No
02:53:030 (3) - ^ No

5th Thing:

00:13:062 - Add a circle? Ok
00:16:567 (7) - Move the slider at 00:16:567 and finish it at 00:17:268. Ok
00:20:913 (2) - Move at 00:21:053 and fix the space with next circle.. You are right but i think its good this way
00:32:128 (4) - Add a circle and move the slider at 00:32:268 Ok
00:41:380 (5) - Move it at x:252 y:32? It's not that necessary *-*
00:41:660 (6,7,8) - Select 00:40:539 (2,3,4) - and copy-past-reflect horizzontaly? (Just suggestion, for more symmetry.) That'd be nice but next circles are hard to locate again
00:55:258 (6) - Move it at x:432 y:140 (in grid left) Ok
01:04:931 (7) - New combo No
01:26:380 (5) - Move at 01:26:520 ? No
01:27:081 (6) - New combo Ok
01:59:604 (10) - Move at 01:59:744 and end at 2:00:445 Ok
02:03:249 (4) - New combo No
02:19:827 (4) - Move at 02:19:973 and end at 02:20:558? Ok
02:29:334 - Add a circle? Ok
02:53:030 (3) - New combo Ok


Then good luck ~

Thanks so much for helps

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[1st thing]
Well first thing...
00:34:651 (4) - Try not to stack, move it up or something, easy fix. Ok
00:46:427 (1) - Not really a necessary new combo Ok
02:41:255 (3) - Don't stack when you only do it twice lol. Hehe Ok

Good diff!
Thank you *-*
[3rd thing]
Everything looks good here.

Nice job. Hard for a normal though if anything...
^_^
[5th Thing]
00:39:137 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - She starts singing a beat earlier, maybe start it there? Or maybe not. It's fine. Ok
00:44:744 (8) - The middle isn't pretty lol. Sure, changed
00:55:258 (6) - One grid to the left, and make it straight down, lol. OMG how i haven't seen it :O
02:35:507 (2) - One up, :3 Lol, ok
02:53:030 (3) - End shouldn't touch the beginning but nice. Fixed, just in case *-*

Hey, 5 things, well great job :3
Thanks im really glad to hear this cause i worked hard Q_Q

Thank you so much ^^

theowest wrote:

Here's the update:
http://puu.sh/4Jdh

Updated ^_^

Applied ozzy's mod.

Download: Miley Cyrus - 7 Things (Debbiee) [Backfire's Taiko Thing].osu

Backfire wrote:

Applied ozzy's mod.

Updated ^_^

Kudosu should only be given to mods, not skin/bg/sb/guest diffs, i revoked quite a bit from here, take it in mind from now on

hello~ :3

1st Thing
01:03:249 (2) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/4V1R
01:34:791 - why here got a Drag Break
02:01:567 (2) - same as 01:03:249.
02:21:290 (1) - delete the New Combo

3rd Thing

1. Circle change to Large?

02:38:451 (3) - too much of this repeating... try to decrease it
other looks fine

5th Thing

1. AR-1 OD+1 ?
2. some stream (1/4 stream) make it close a bit...

00:39:137 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - make it close a bit...
00:43:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:48:670 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:19:511 - why here got a Drag Break
01:46:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - make it close a bit

theowest's 7th Thing
looks fine~

----
sorry for my nazi mod,
cause i'm sick now
so~~
Good Luck~

lovely,but I think 'theowest's 7th Thing' maybe too hard since the song is not too fast.Maybe AR-1?
good job

karenying wrote:

lovely,but I think 'theowest's 7th Thing' maybe too hard since the song is not too fast.Maybe AR-1?
good job

Are you kidding me? It's already AR8!!

theowest wrote:

karenying wrote:

lovely,but I think 'theowest's 7th Thing' maybe too hard since the song is not too fast.Maybe AR-1?
good job

Are you kidding me? It's already AR8!!

Low Approach Rates are innately lovelier than needlessly high ones, sir. You may as well keep 8 though because that's not nearly as nauseating as it was previously.

SapphireGhost wrote:

theowest wrote:

Are you kidding me? It's already AR8!!

Low Approach Rates are innately lovelier than needlessly high ones, sir. You may as well keep 8 though because that's not nearly as nauseating as it was previously.

I guess you agree with me but low approach rates are lovelier..? ok watever

Back back back O_O"
*Runs and starts to apply mods quickly*

[General]
That custom Clap can be used in the Soft part too, actually...
The spinner-circle isn't so circular, and the central circle is not at the center... the best result i had is this
Why not mapped the end?

[1st Thing]
Well, no problems...But...
Maybe a little use of the red tick cound have made this less boring.
Graphic part is somewhat really square ( in the sense you mostly follow the 0°-90°-180°-270* angle snaps ) an this made the diff a bit repetitive, maybe...).
For example: 00:22:875 (3,4,1) - Stacking those under the precedent notes coudl be a good idea ( http://puu.sh/6vJ4 )
00:26:800 (2) - (Default) Soft-Clap at the end of this Slider
00:30:726 (1) - (Default) Soft Clap
00:35:772 (2) - ^ at End
00:37:735 (2) - ^ at End
00:38:856 (1) - Finish
00:50:913 (2) - Finish at the end
00:59:885 (4) - Change the shape and move it as you form a diamond with 00:58:202 (1,2,3,4), like this
01:33:529 (1) - (Default) Soft-Clap at the end of this Slider
01:38:015 (2) - (Default) Soft-Clap
01:40:258 (1,2,3,4) - a more diagonalised pattern like this
01:42:501 (1) - (Default) Soft-Clap at the end of this Slider
01:44:184 (2) - ^
01:42:501 (1) - Better Shape ? like this ( change the other after as well )

Anyway, since you did Copypaste some patterns, as well apply those change to the others through the song

[3rd Thing]
00:30:726 (1) - (Default) Soft-Clap
00:35:632 (4) - ^ At end
00:37:735 (2) - ^ At end
(those three are too in the other similiar part, remember those in the 5th thing)
01:09:978 (3,4) - Angle Snap at the precendent slider ( like this)
01:13:342 (6) - A circular slider or spinner do the work better
02:26:555 (2,3) - Less Distance or add a circle at 02:27:140, since you made this part slower....

[5th Thing]
It's the 3rd diff that start the same way .-.
02:05:492 (3) - It's not an error... it's about logic... why an "Ohm" and not an "Heart" ?
02:48:544 (3) - Different shape? it's not that much good seeing the sontg and the graphic...

[theowest 7th Thing]
00:23:296 (2) - make it a bit more distanced from the 00:23:156 (1) - ? as it not overlap (it overlap a lil bit... ) like this
00:40:258 (10) - Conmplete that enneagon (simple move it under 00:38:997 (1) - )
00:38:997 (1) - Make it like this? (there was a border overlap----)
02:29:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Make the shape start and end at the center? like this