yongtw123 wrote:

[Hard]
00:05:657 (2,3,5,6,7) - 注意對稱，有必要的話請用Grid Level 4(Tiny)微調
00:10:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:15:951 (5,6) - ^
00:21:245 (4) - 留點空隙，像(2)那樣會比較好看
00:40:363 (1) - finsih?
00:50:216 (2,3) - nazi spacing lol
01:08:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 這整段照spinner前面方法加clap就好了(現在下法有點亂)
01:10:951 (1,2,3) - 個人覺得不太好看...
01:18:010 (2) - whistle at beginning of slider?
01:19:775 (4) - whistle?
01:25:510 (1) - 延長到01:29:186，然後silence?

整理來說還不錯



[Taiko]
我不怎玩太鼓所以不太Pro請見諒:P
01:08:892 (4) - 感覺有點多餘?
01:18:304 (4) - ^

[Normal]
怎麼辦...我越看越想大修XD
主要是節奏不夠好
如果你同意的話我就先把節奏放好給你...
可以 改成你的diff也可是要3星以下
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之後再star
加油~

PSPDS Eddie wrote:

nice map star~

1. The website show six difficulties, but your main post show only three.
2. Why is there yongtw123 in the tags ? And who's Aoi ç_ç
3. Your mp3 is 320kbps. (inb4 VBR) You need to re-encode it to 192.
4. The website doesn't show that the map has a video. :/

1. This diff doesn't have the video enabled. Also, rename it to yongtw123's Easy or something like that.
2. 00:28:010 (1) - I really don't think this is a good idea. Such sliders are confusing for new players, since they can't expect the number of repeats. You should delete it, or make it a simple 1/2 repeat slider. :/
3. 00:38:892 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think this is hard compared to the overall difficulty of this diff. You should probably cut the stream in half or something.

1. The difficulty settings are really high for a Normal. I suggest you reduce them all by at least one tick (except circle size).
2. 01:08:010 (1) - This slider is hidden by 01:06:245 (4) -

1. Make it start at the same time as the other difficulties.
2. I don't understand why there are sliderwhistles at the end. I honestly think it would be better without them. :/

1. Rename to Kong's Hard ?
2. 01:10:951 (1,2,3) - This stack looks really bad ingame (check with F5), you should unstack them.

1. Rename to Aoi's Insane ?

Odaril wrote:

Easy

1. This diff doesn't have the video enabled. Also, rename it to yongtw123's Easy or something like that. I'll leave this to spboxer3
2. 00:28:010 (1) - I really don't think this is a good idea. Such sliders are confusing for new players, since they can't expect the number of repeats. You should delete it, or make it a simple 1/2 repeat slider. :/ hmm, i think it's fine though :/, the bpm is slow enough to let players react
3. 00:38:892 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think this is hard compared to the overall difficulty of this diff. You should probably cut the stream in half or something. Adding some spice to the map to make it a bit more fun? I've hinted this kind of 1/8 pattern before this point.

1. The timing sounds really off, I can't get the perfect timing but this offset works for me: 4501 (Ask an expert to check this)
2. Taiko: You should use AR and HP Drain Rate: "5" too, that suits most of the Taiko diffs.
3. Tags are not the same between diffs, fix this please.
4. Are you sure about capitalizing that "P" (Photos)? I tried searching for it but got no results

1. I don't see why the HP drain is "3". "2" fits this diff imo, consider changing it.
2. 00:28:010 (1) - Rookies won't expect a 1/4 repeating slider in [Easy], I feel that it's too much for the easier diff, 1/2 sliders sounds perfectly fine, consider changing it.
3. 00:38:892 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This seems more like a "Normal-ish" pattern. In my opinion it's too hard for Easy, something like this seems more acceptable. Actually placing a beat here: 00:38:892 - is so unintuitive and hard to hit, If you decide to change the pattern, start it here: 00:39:186 - please.
4. 00:56:980 (1) - The beginning of this spinner seems a bit random almost like forcing it's length, I would start it here: 00:57:128 -
5. 00:59:186 (1) - I don't have any problem with this slider starting 1/1 beat after the slider because the BPM is slow but I do care about it being too far from the center, move it closer please.
6. 01:03:304 (3,4,1) - I don't like to see lots of circles in [Easy] that are not following any specific rhythm just plain 1/2 or 1/1. I suggest to remove (4) it's unnecessary. (I would remove (3) too but I guess you'll refuse to do it :P)
7. 01:24:922 (1) - Hmm this spinner is not correctly placed, the artist starts to hold the note here: 01:25:363 - fix it please.

1. 00:08:010 (2) - This slider seems a bit forced, it sounds a bit off. You should remove it and add a circle here: 00:08:598 - instead
2. 00:36:833 (2) - This slider doesn't feel good, It's rhythm seems a bit iffy. I suggest to make it a bit longer and make it here: 00:37:422 -
3. 00:40:363 (1) - You should place a "Finish" here to re-mark the music change (and kiai)
4. 01:00:363 - 01:02:716 - These claps sound SO random, you didn't use claps for the whole map and you sudden add these. You should remove them and use whistles instead. If you decided to keep them you should add some claps to the whole chorus too.
5. 01:07:716 (1,2,3) - I don't like this pattern at all, it looks really messy because it's getting covered by the previous slider, I suggest to move the objects a bit. Perhaps something like this?
6. 01:24:922 (4) - The end of this slide is not correctly placed, It should end here: 01:25:363 -
7. Consider adding a spinner here: 01:25:510 - to match all the other diffs.

1. HP drain rate should be reduced 1 tick.
2. 00:03:010 (1) - This spinner doesn't suit this part IMO, it's way too short and not intuitive at all. I suggest to use a slider instead.
3. 00:38:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you want to use this kind of spacing place a New Combo on (3) because it's so hard to read.
4. 00:50:069 (1,2,3) - What is this 1/4 mapped to? It's not following any noticeable rhythm you should remove (2)
5. 00:52:422 (2,3,4) - Same here with (3)
6. 00:58:010 - I don't like this slider speed change at all 1.5x is too much for a song like this one. I highly suggest to use 1.20 or 1.30 instead.
7. 01:08:304 (2,3,4,5) - Those whistles on the slider bodies doesn't suit this song IMO, you should remove them.
8. 01:24:922 (4,5) - These two 1/4 are so hard to hit accurately, actually (5) seems off it should be placed here: 01:25:363 - . However I suggest to use a slider instead of 2 circles.

1. Perhaps HP Drain Rate -1 ?
2. 00:18:010 (3) - That last repeat sounds too "extra" you should remove it.
3. I don't see major problems here, but there are many streams that are not mapped to any rhythm, sorry but this song is not "streammy" at all. I'll mention some of those:
4. 00:12:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sorry but the artist is just holding a note here, I don't hear any 1/4 rhythm you should use an slider instead of a bunch of circles
5. 00:26:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here.
6. 00:51:539 (2,3,4,5) - Same for this one, this is just forcing the difficulty. (Try a slider)
7. 00:59:186 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
8. 01:00:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - Again, remember that you're mapping a song so you should follow that song. There's no 1/4 rhythm on this part.
   
9. 01:23:304 (2,3,4,5) - This last pattern is not following the music correctly, It sounds quite off. Try this.
10. 01:25:878 (1) - Why is this spinner snapped to 1/8, it's not necessary. Make it start here: 01:25:951 -that's where it should start.
11. This diff is quite nice, but I hate to see those 1/4 streams mapped to nothing.

1. You should start this diff here: 00:00:363 - to match the other diffs.
2. OD is too high, reduce it 1 tick please.
3. Quote: I don't see major problems here, but there are many streams that are not mapped to any rhythm, sorry but this song is not "streammy" at all. I won't list all the streams 'cause I'll start raging about them :P
4. I don't see any major problems here

Gonzvlo wrote:

[yongtw123's Easy]

1. I don't see why the HP drain is "3". "2" fits this diff imo, consider changing it. done
2. 00:28:010 (1) - Rookies won't expect a 1/4 repeating slider in [Easy], I feel that it's too much for the easier diff, 1/2 sliders sounds perfectly fine, consider changing it. fixed
3. 00:38:892 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This seems more like a "Normal-ish" pattern. In my opinion it's too hard for Easy, something like this seems more acceptable. Actually placing a beat here: 00:38:892 - is so unintuitive and hard to hit, If you decide to change the pattern, start it here: 00:39:186 - please. hmm, it plays out quite nice to me and I'd like some variations even if this diff is an easy. So..probably nope.
4. 00:56:980 (1) - The beginning of this spinner seems a bit random almost like forcing it's length, I would start it here: 00:57:128 - done
5. 00:59:186 (1) - I don't have any problem with this slider starting 1/1 beat after the slider because the BPM is slow but I do care about it being too far from the center, move it closer please. ok...
6. 01:03:304 (3,4,1) - I don't like to see lots of circles in [Easy] that are not following any specific rhythm just plain 1/2 or 1/1. I suggest to remove (4) it's unnecessary. (I would remove (3) too but I guess you'll refuse to do it ) nah, these two correspond to a hitsound in the background.
7. 01:24:922 (1) - Hmm this spinner is not correctly placed, the artist starts to hold the note here: 01:25:363 - fix it please. but that would create a large space in timeline...but i really think the spinner is ok :/

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Aoi's Insane]

1. You should start this diff here: 00:00:363 - to match the other diffs.
2. OD is too high, reduce it 1 tick please.
3. Quote: I don't see major problems here, but there are many streams that are not mapped to any rhythm, sorry but this song is not "streammy" at all. I won't list all the streams 'cause I'll start raging about them
4. I don't see any major problems here

1. The timing sounds really off, I can't get the perfect timing but this offset works for me: 4501 (Ask an expert to check this)
2. Taiko: You should use AR and HP Drain Rate: "5" too, that suits most of the Taiko diffs.
3. Tags are not the same between diffs, fix this please.
4. Are you sure about capitalizing that "P" (Photos)? I tried searching for it but got no results

1. 00:08:010 (2) - This slider seems a bit forced, it sounds a bit off. You should remove it and add a circle here: 00:08:598 - instead
2. 00:36:833 (2) - This slider doesn't feel good, It's rhythm seems a bit iffy. I suggest to make it a bit longer and make it here: 00:37:422 -
3. 00:40:363 (1) - You should place a "Finish" here to re-mark the music change (and kiai)
4. 01:00:363 - 01:02:716 - These claps sound SO random, you didn't use claps for the whole map and you sudden add these. You should remove them and use whistles instead. If you decided to keep them you should add some claps to the whole chorus too.
5. 01:07:716 (1,2,3) - I don't like this pattern at all, it looks really messy because it's getting covered by the previous slider, I suggest to move the objects a bit. Perhaps something like this?
6. 01:24:922 (4) - The end of this slide is not correctly placed, It should end here: 01:25:363 -
7. Consider adding a spinner here: 01:25:510 - to match all the other diffs.

1. HP drain rate should be reduced 1 tick.
2. 00:03:010 (1) - This spinner doesn't suit this part IMO, it's way too short and not intuitive at all. I suggest to use a slider instead.
3. 00:38:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you want to use this kind of spacing place a New Combo on (3) because it's so hard to read.
4. 00:50:069 (1,2,3) - What is this 1/4 mapped to? It's not following any noticeable rhythm you should remove (2)
5. 00:52:422 (2,3,4) - Same here with (3)
6. 00:58:010 - I don't like this slider speed change at all 1.5x is too much for a song like this one. I highly suggest to use 1.20 or 1.30 instead.
7. 01:08:304 (2,3,4,5) - Those whistles on the slider bodies doesn't suit this song IMO, you should remove them.
8. 01:24:922 (4,5) - These two 1/4 are so hard to hit accurately, actually (5) seems off it should be placed here: 01:25:363 - . However I suggest to use a slider instead of 2 circles.

Aleks719 wrote:

Easy
00:06:853 (3,4) - spacing fixed
00:21:559 (3) - 1 grid right
00:28:030 (1) - add whistles to the start and to the end end only
00:56:265 (2) - add whistle to the end
01:00:383 (3) - add whistle
01:00:971 (1) - remove whistle from the start and add whistles to the end
01:02:148 (2) - add whistle to the end
01:10:971 (1) - add whistle to the end
01:12:736 (2) - remove whistle

Aleks719 wrote:

Aoi's Insane
- Add "Letterbox during breaks" =no the beatmap with video shouldn't use this
- Try to avoid long combos (over 10). Cut it, where that possible. As example:
00:00:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I guess you could add new combo at 00:02:736 (5) . As for me, this is nazi suggestion, you can ignore it =max combo under 14 is all fine
01:21:559 (5) - add whistle to the start =ignore
01:22:736 (6) - ^ =done
01:23:912 (8) - add whistle to the start, remove whistle from the end =done
01:24:942 (9) - add whistle =done

Sakura Hana wrote:

[yongtw123's Easy]
00:33:912 (2) - The current combo appears to be following the lyrics but this note feels off, is this following anything in the lyrics? it's a white tick beat i add myself. fits well IMO
00:38:912 (2,3,4,5,6) - 5 note stream for an Easy? sorry, remove the middle notes here or make an slider. allright
00:57:148 (1) - This spinner feels off, if it's following the lyrics it should be moved 1/2 back, however that's where the slider ends, so maybe remove the repeat on the slider?. nope, if listened carefully the spinner should start at the previous blue tick, but i don't think that's a good idea for an easy diff, so I move it to the position as of now. and besides, removing the repeat on the slider won't be following the vocal anymore. so...retained.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Aoi's Insane]
Note density is a bit high, and hp regain is pretty easy to do, i'd recommend hp drain +1 to increase the difficulty a bit.
00:16:853 (3) - I'm pretty sure you could try something prettier with this slider, if it totally must end there to avoid spacing issues this will have to do: http://puu.sh/2IBp, otherwise try using a better arc like this: http://puu.sh/2IBt
01:24:942 (9) - Pretty hard to hit note, as the previous slider ended on a white tick and it's 3/4 on to this note, maybe remove it? (or move it 1/8 later like it was done in [Hard])
Fix by xykbear (all Done)

[Jameskong1's Hard]
01:16:265 (5) - Hard to spot repeat, considering the angle of the previous stream and the next slider.
Fix by spboxer3 (all Done)

[Taiko Oni]
Increase hitsound volume, notes are pretty hard to read.
Try slider velocity 1.4x
Fix by spboxer3 (all Done)

[Normal]
Why is there no kiai here?
00:08:618 (2,1) - A pretty big anti-jump, i recommend you put (1) farther away.
01:17:442 (1,2) - Separate these a bit more?
Fix by spboxer3 (all Done)

[yongtw123's Easy]
00:33:912 (2) - The current combo appears to be following the lyrics but this note feels off, is this following anything in the lyrics?
00:38:912 (2,3,4,5,6) - 5 note stream for an Easy? sorry, remove the middle notes here or make an slider.
00:57:148 (1) - This spinner feels off, if it's following the lyrics it should be moved 1/2 back, however that's where the slider ends, so maybe remove the repeat on the slider?.
Fix by yongtw123 (all Done)

Sakura Hana wrote:

Recheck~
[General]
There's 2 spaces between Photograph and ending on the tags, alternatively i'd recommend you remove ending from the tags, it's too general and unnecessary.
Set slider tick rate to 2, fits the song better

[Taiko Oni]
01:24:991 (4,5) - I think the timing works better like this:


[yongtw123's Easy]
The slider tick rate 2 suggestion is strongly recommended in this difficulty since it has the longest sliders.

Good job, almost there~

James2250 wrote:

-There should be a space between " Photos " and "TV Size" on the title in-game (only minor but still should be fixed)

Normal:
00:16:853 (3) - extend to blue tick? fix
01:19:206 (2,1) - could look slightly nicer if not overlappingm fix

Hard:
00:16:853 (1) - extend to blue tick? (Same for the other diffculties) fix
01:08:912 (3) - silenced slider end doesn't fit fix
01:08:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add some hitsounds to this part? fix

Jameskong1's Hard:
00:05:089 (7,1) - switch new combo to follow the music more fix

Aoi's Insane:
-I really wouldn't suggest HP Drain 9 for a song as calm as this fix HP Drain=8?

Everything else looks good~ Thanks>"<

Sakura Hana wrote:

Download is broken!

No kudosu

Edit: Well ok seems like all the stuff James mentioned has been fixed so

Cherry Rebubble~

James2250 wrote:

Oops, I didn't notice this before but the metronome is not set to the correct beat. I would just make it 383 on every difficulty as that fixes the problem and stops any notes being before it. (You shouldn't need to resnap anything but double check anyway)

PM me after that quick fix and I will rank~

xykbear wrote:

哦～竟然rank了。恭喜～

PSPDS Eddie wrote:

Congrats spboxer3 !

yongtw123 wrote:

恭喜啊~

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