1. Source is incorrect. See FireballFlame's post.
2. Having a mix of standard diff names and custom ones is really weird. It makes the mapset inconsistent. I can't make sense out of Ai and Hana, so I'd suggest you used standard diff names.
3. Add "opening" in tags ?
4. The soft finish sounds really loud imo. Try making one that is a bit softer.

1. 00:11:463 (5) - The lack of clap on the first beat of the slider leaves a feeling that something's missing.
2. 00:18:281 (5) - The second repeat is hidden by the hitburst from (4). I don't think new players would expect the slider to repeat twice, so I think you should change the slider's placement.
3. 00:20:100 (6) - To keep following the same clap pattern, there shouldn't be anything here.
4. 00:30:100 (1) - Why did you stop with the claps from this slider ?
5. 01:03:281 (1,2,3) - This overlap looks rather bad ingame because it doesn't overlap properly - you should change the position of (2) and (3).
6. 01:08:281 (3) - Add a clap on the last beat ?

1. There are really way too many 1/2 for a Normal. And some come in confusing or long patterns.
2. 00:21:918 (1,2) - This for example: the second repeats comes a bit out of nowhere (despite matching the song) and can be surprising... I suggest you remove one repeat out of each slider.
3. 00:26:463 (3) - Same.
4. 00:38:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern is really too hard. First the repeat sliders with two repeats, then the long streak of 1/2 with sharp angles...
5. 00:48:281 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - confusing spacing: (3,1) are spaced normally, but then the spacing is halved, which makes the 1/2 hard to read.
6. 00:55:554 (1,3) - The added 1/2 due to the repeat don't really make sense to the music... Why don't you make them 1/1 sliders ? It would sound and play a lot better imo
7. 00:59:190 (1,2,3,4) - Same comments about the added 1/2
8. 01:06:236 (5,6) - Extemely confusing spacing and spacing issue. The placement looks like (5) has 3 repeats, but it only has 2, and it makes the spacing a jump that's extremely confusing to play.

1. Really, way too many added beats, 1/2 or 1/4s.

1. Same...

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. Source is incorrect. See FireballFlame's post.
2. Having a mix of standard diff names and custom ones is really weird. It makes the mapset inconsistent. I can't make sense out of Ai and Hana, so I'd suggest you used standard diff names.
3. Add "opening" in tags ?
4. The soft finish sounds really loud imo. Try making one that is a bit softer.

Easy

1. 00:11:463 (5) - The lack of clap on the first beat of the slider leaves a feeling that something's missing.
2. 00:18:281 (5) - The second repeat is hidden by the hitburst from (4). I don't think new players would expect the slider to repeat twice, so I think you should change the slider's placement.
3. 00:20:100 (6) - To keep following the same clap pattern, there shouldn't be anything here.
4. 00:30:100 (1) - Why did you stop with the claps from this slider ?
5. 01:03:281 (1,2,3) - This overlap looks rather bad ingame because it doesn't overlap properly - you should change the position of (2) and (3).
6. 01:08:281 (3) - Add a clap on the last beat ?

Ano

1. There are really way too many 1/2 for a Normal. And some come in confusing or long patterns.
2. 00:21:918 (1,2) - This for example: the second repeats comes a bit out of nowhere (despite matching the song) and can be surprising... I suggest you remove one repeat out of each slider.
3. 00:26:463 (3) - Same.
4. 00:38:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern is really too hard. First the repeat sliders with two repeats, then the long streak of 1/2 with sharp angles...
5. 00:48:281 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - confusing spacing: (3,1) are spaced normally, but then the spacing is halved, which makes the 1/2 hard to read.
6. 00:55:554 (1,3) - The added 1/2 due to the repeat don't really make sense to the music... Why don't you make them 1/1 sliders ? It would sound and play a lot better imo
7. 00:59:190 (1,2,3,4) - Same comments about the added 1/2
8. 01:06:236 (5,6) - Extemely confusing spacing and spacing issue. The placement looks like (5) has 3 repeats, but it only has 2, and it makes the spacing a jump that's extremely confusing to play.

Hana

1. Really, way too many added beats, 1/2 or 1/4s.

Kong's Insane

1. Same...

as a insane diff, I think it is ok So no.But thanks

Really, not all songs can have an Insane mapped that fits the song. It's not important to have an Insane in the mapset... Especially if you're going to "overmap" for it...

Liked the Easy and Normal but really hated Hard and Insane. Mapset is rather fine as a whole.

1. The first section (20%) sounds too low imo, Perhaps 30~35%?
2. The mapset is quite nice, just make sure you fix those major issues

1. 00:27:145 (2,3) - This stacked 1/2 feels a bit random tbh. Since you've used only "1/1" and some repeating "1/2" I suggest to remove (2). (or delete (2) and start (3) 1/2 earlier)
2. 00:29:190 (4) - This stack doesn't flow. Actually, It might be a bit disorienting for rookies, I suggest to move it somewhere else.
3. 00:36:690 - I suggest to map this break, the song is short enough so there won't be any problems, plus if you map it you'll keep the consistency with the other diffs.
4. 01:24:190 (3,4) - Why this diff ends on 01:24:418 - ? In my opinion you should end it here: 01:24:645 - like the other diffs, plus that last circle might be a bit unexpected, something like this would be much better.

1. 00:43:509 (1) - This spacing was a bit confusing, move this object closer to the last slider using distance snap please.
2. 01:04:418 (1) - ^
3. 01:17:372 (1) - Combo-break'd here, the spacing makes this object look like a fake 1/2. I know that the spacing decreased due to the slider speed change but the slow down starts from this point not before so please fix this spacing. It should be spaced like this
4. 01:17:372 - You should user 0.75x instead of 0.50x like you did in [Easy], the slider speed change from 1.0 to 0.50 feels so bad and unintuitive
5. 01:17:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The length of this combo is too long, split it up please.

1. Perhaps OD -1? Suits the map better imo.
2. 01:12:600 (8) - The 2nd repeat is getting covered by the previous hitburst which is a major issue. Move the slider somewhere else or try to re-arrange the pattern
3. 01:17:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as [Normal], 0.50x feels really bad imo, 0.75x would not affect the flow of the map plus it's more intuitive.

1. 00:02:372 (2) - This slider is not following the rhythm correctly. Players will expect only 3 repeats, the 4th repeats lands on 'nothing'. I strongly suggest to remove 2 repeats and then add a circle here: 00:02:855 -
2. 01:27:372 (6) - That last repeat doesn't sound good, if you want to keep it try reducing volume gradually for those last beats
3. 01:18:509 (2,3,4) - The hitburts are covering some repeats of the slider, which is unrankable
4. 01:19:872 (5,6,7) - Same here, I find these sliders a bit intuitive but none of the parts of the sliders should be covered so you'll have to re-arrange these patterns.
5. I find this diff is too streammy for the song, I feel that most of those streams are not mapped to any rhythm/music. Not a big fan of this diff :/

1. offset 110
   改变offset以后Resnap all notes一下

1. 00:19:190 (3,4) - 3,4可以调换下位置，毕竟3被覆盖在前面2号slider的下面感觉有点快，会按快的
   基本没什么问题，1PC SS。。。。

1. 00:50:100 - 因为连贯性的原因，每次打到这的时候都感觉差了个节奏，突然被中止有点不适应
2. 01:07:600 - 可以加个note什么的，毕竟和前面有点不合拍
3. 01:13:054 (5) - 三连用三个note感觉舒服些
   nazi一下，其实也没什么问题

1. 00:09:190 (5) - 方向上的问题，而且又被00:08:281 (3)遮住了
   如果这样的话，玩着就没那种矛盾
   
2. 01:20:895 (4) - 去掉吧，后面的节奏都开始偏慢了，所以三连也没必要了

1. 00:06:918 (7) - 覆盖在00:07:372 (1) 吧
2. 00:51:918 (1) - 突然从前面00:51:463 (4)过度到这个有点lag，不过也没多大碍

220,248,36473,6,0,B|280:296|348:248|416:200|476:248,1,270,4|8

256,240,77382,6,0,B|224:220|256:192|288:164|256:144,3,112.499996647239,4|2|0|2

Raging Bull wrote:

SPOILER

T.T I wanted to close osu.>me too

General:
Use tick rate 2? I think it really fits. >>I prefer 1
01:13:746 - End kiai here? Seems as though the song is calming down so kiai won't make sense.>>—◇— lazy to do that

Easy:
00:19:655 (4) - Perhaps move this note somewhere else? Beginners might not see it with default hitburst.>>done
00:36:473 (1) - Maybe you might enjoy this more? >>oh~great thx

220,248,36473,6,0,B|280:296|348:248|416:200|476:248,1,270,4|8

01:02:837 (1) - I think it could be better placed like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/150452 >>remain

Normal:
00:48:973 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's best if you space these out? I clicked too early since I thought they were probably 1/4s T.T >>hehe
Nothing much pretty simple and nice.

Hard:
00:57:382 (8,9) - You could possibly make these two sliders more curvier so they can blanket better? It seems like you were trying to do that for 9. Or you can do something like in the screenshot if you like. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/150454 I think it flows better but it's up to you :3 >>done
01:11:700 (6) - Remove slider and add note here.
01:11:928 (7) - Then add 1/2 slider here and NC it.>>done
01:17:382 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps you want your slider more curvier? >>x

256,240,77382,6,0,B|224:220|256:192|288:164|256:144,3,112.499996647239,4|2|0|2

Just copy and paste it 4 times for the sliders.

Insane:
01:18:519 (2,3,4) - I don't really feel like it this triple/slider makes sense here. I think it's because you start your slider half way through the held note and end it 1/1 late. Maybe move your slider like in the screenshot? Then just place whatever note you feel like the gap. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/150459
01:27:382 (6) - Can't silence slider start/repeat Only silence slider ends or spinner. Increase the volume. Maybe 25%? >>done.but 10%

Awesome song. Starred.

• 1) They should be in exactly the same place
  2) The timing sections aren't snapped to the song anyway, so fix that up too.

YGOkid8 wrote:

SPOILER

General:
- In Easy, you have a timing section with 50% volume at offset 73746, while in Normal it is at offset 77382 instead.

• 1) They should be in exactly the same place
  2) The timing sections aren't snapped to the song anyway, so fix that up too.

There's a number of other timing section discrepancies throughout your diffs, so fix those up too. Note: you don't have to do this with jameskong1's diff.
>>fixed

Easy:
00:14:655 (1,2,3,1,2) - Rearrange the beats so that they aren't touching each other. Not a major issue, but it'd looks better if you do so.
00:21:928 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:36:473 (1,1,2,1) - ^
>>All done

Normal:
00:48:973 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too hard for normal.>>done

Hard:
00:09:200 (5) - These don't fit with the song and are only here to make it harder (that or they just don't fit).>>fixed
00:10:223 (7,8) - ^>>fixed
00:11:587 (3,4,5,6) - ^>>remain
00:14:200 (3) - ^>>fixed
00:16:473 (3) - ^>>fixed
00:22:269 (2,3) - ^>>fixed
00:23:291 (5,6,7) - ^>>fixed
00:26:928 (4,5,6) - ^>>remain.to fill the blank
00:32:382 (6,7,8) - ^>>remain.^
00:37:382 (3,4,5,6) - ^>>fixed
uh and yeah pretty much all your triples in your diff.

00:53:746 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - And this is too hard for a hard.>>remain.no one says a hard can't exist stream:)

thx for your mod·□·メ

NatsumeRin wrote:

offset: +13 (113)

Breeze wrote:

SPOILER

NatsumeRin wrote:

offset: +13 (113)

我也觉得offset应该是113或者114的样子,现在110有些略早>>fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:47:382 (1) - 这里用finish感觉更好>>fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:35:110 (2), 00:35:564 (3) - 这里忘加clap了么

>>加了啊？

[Hard]

1. 00:21:928 (1) - 这里不加个finish?>>fixed
2. 00:35:564 (3) - 加clap, 背景音这里有个鼓点>>fixed,also fixed in others diff.
3. 01:02:837 (2) - 加finish>>fixed
4. 01:11:928 (7) - ^>>fixed

[kong's Insane]

1. 00:55:564 (1) - No finish here?>>fixed
2. I feel this diff. lack of hitsounds, though custom soft-hitclap similar to background drum sound, it doesn't means no need to add that.>>◎△◎

Breeze wrote:

please re-fullsubmit once
When re-download this map
It said I need upload

EDIT : uploaded, mp3 volume seems a bit low, sounds fine though
good job on this map, then here is your bubble

whymeman wrote:

Hmm....... not bad. No outstanding issues, though I never thought there would be an anime with a very long name. Anyways, i'll rank this map then.