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Arctic Monkeys - Teddy Picker

posted 2008-11-11T13:01:12+00:00

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spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-11-11T13:01:12+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, February 21, 2009 at 7:41:47 PM

Artist: Arctic Monkeys
Title: Teddy Picker
BPM: 150.23
Filesize: 2242kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.28 stars, 59 notes)
Normal (2.74 stars, 112 notes)

Download: Arctic Monkeys - Teddy Picker
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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November 11, 2008
Yay! My first submission. Since I'm a beginner, I only made one difficulty [Normal]. I'm still confused with the timing thing for this song because at some point, the beat changes. Anyway, I hope you like it!.

November 13, 2008
- changed bpm to 150.23
- spaced out ugly overlaps
- fixed ugly curves
- added another break, more beats and spinners to lengthen play time

November 14, 2008
- added a new difficulty [Easy]
- added beats to [Normal] difficulty
- compresssed the mp3 file
- changed the size of the beats to normal

November 19, 2008
[Normal]
- 00:25:03 (4) - Snapped to red tick
- 00:43:43 (1,2,3,4) - Snapped to respective ticks
- 00:48:96 (2) - Snapped to red tick
- 00:59:37 (2) - Snapped to red tick
- 01:37:12 (6) - Moved 1/2 earlier
- 01:37:91 (7) - Moved 1/2 earlier

November 20, 2008
- re-snapped notes in 1/4 time

November 24, 2008
[Easy]
- 01:27:53 (4) flipped it horizontally
- 01:27:53 (1,2,3,4) just made the whole line straight
[Normal]
- 01:36:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6) made also into a straight line

November 26, 2008
- Changed offset to 1700

November 29, 2008
- resnapped all notes to their correct places

December 4, 2008
[Normal]
00:22:06 (2) & 00:23:66 (4) - I don't know if I got the instruction right
00:26:36 - Removed the break, and put it back in
00:44:83 (1) - Made closer to 6
01:11:99 (1) - Made farther

December 5, 2008
- 00:22:06 (2) copied the spacing of 00:23:66 (4,1)

December 11, 2008
- 00:44:83 - made 6 closer to 1

February 14, 2009 (Yay! Happy Valentines Bump!)
- 00:22:46 (3) - made closer to (2)

February 15, 2009
- Fixed spacing inconsistencies

Last edited by spiky_meteorite 2009-02-21T11:42:08+00:00, edited 42 times in total.

DawnII

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DawnII 2008-11-11T15:20:16+00:00

First of all, you are a cool ~~guy~~ person for mapping Arctic Monkeys.

Try using 150.23 for your BPM, your offset is pretty good.

As for the mapping, I really like it. Try to avoid some things like 00:05:66 (3,1) - space these out more, the overlap looks pretty ugly. This is looking good for your first attempt at mapping. Looking forward to seeing you finish this difficulty and add another.

Last edited by DawnII 2008-11-12T12:52:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-11-14T09:48:14+00:00

I see... I saw beatmaps that had overlaps similar to that that's why I made it like that. I thought it's alright. I will try to change it as soon as I can. Btw, I'm a girl.

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-11-16T10:52:38+00:00

Does my map have a chance of getting approved?

DawnII

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DawnII 2008-11-17T06:59:23+00:00

[Easy]
01:26:33 (1,2,3,4) - My only real concern. These jumps may be too much for a new player.

[Normal]
Your notes aren't snapped to the timeline. Under the menu bar, go to Timing -> Resnap All Notes. Then go back through and make sure everything is lined up properly.

00:35:21 (6) - Move this closer to (5).
01:09:56 (3) - I would flip this horizontally so it's closer to (2).
01:11:16 (4,5) - You can either new combo this or move it closer to (3). Also doesn't sound very good, but maybe it snapped wrong on my end.
01:27:53 (4) - Move this closer to (3).
01:37:12 (6) - Move this closer to (5).

I personally would cut out the spinner, since it doesn't finish at a really good point.

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-11-17T08:16:22+00:00

Here you go. When I Re-snapped the notes, some notes doesn't sound nice since at some points, I intentionally follow the vocals rather than the beat. I hope I get it this time.

DawnII

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DawnII 2008-11-19T11:19:18+00:00

Precision isn't always good. Snapping to timeline is always a good idea, even if it isn't always completely accurate, since it's more intuitive for the player. Snapping off the timeline is a bad habit and will piss people off when they can't SS.

[Normal]
00:25:03 (4) - Snap this to red tick.
00:43:43 (1,2,3,4) - Snap to respective ticks.
00:48:96 (2) - Snap to red tick.
00:59:37 (2) - Snap to red tick.
01:37:12 (6) - Sounds much better if this ends 1/2 earlier.
01:37:91 (7) - Then move this 1/2 beat earlier as well.

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-11-19T11:20:19+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

DawnII

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DawnII 2008-11-20T02:26:39+00:00

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spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-11-20T02:46:49+00:00

I re-snapped the notes now. I hope I get it right this time.

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-11-23T07:37:26+00:00

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DawnII

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DawnII 2008-11-24T03:26:52+00:00

[Normal]
01:36:92 (6) - This is too far from (5).

[Easy]
01:27:53 (4) - Too close to (3).
01:32:72 (4) - Too far from (3).

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-11-25T11:31:44+00:00

I made the ones far from one another into a straight line.

Tapdancingmetroid

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Tapdancingmetroid 2008-11-26T11:52:58+00:00

Looks pretty good. :3
I'd recommend changing the offset to 1700, though.

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-11-26T12:02:41+00:00

I changed the offset to 1700. Thanks for the suggestion.

Tapdancingmetroid

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Tapdancingmetroid 2008-11-29T02:50:05+00:00

OK, now the notes are a bit off
select all of the notes (edit -> select all) and nudge them a bit to the right (in the area at the top of the screen, not the grid) so they line up with the lines at the top of the screen correctly.

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-11-29T02:51:12+00:00

^ Oh yeah I forgot to do that. Heehee! Thanks a lot!

Tapdancingmetroid

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Tapdancingmetroid 2008-12-02T22:53:49+00:00

Everything seems alright.
bubbled. :3

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-12-04T07:54:30+00:00

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James

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James 2008-12-04T15:16:46+00:00

normal:
00:22:06 (2) - closer or farther. look at the spacing of the pink combo. if i were to choose it would be farther so that it has the same spacing like in 00:23:66 (4,1)
00:23:66 (4) - this one too.
00:26:36 - remove the break, and put it back in
00:44:83 (1) - closer to 6
01:11:99 (1) - farther

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-12-04T15:19:33+00:00

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James

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James 2008-12-05T04:44:00+00:00

use the same spacing as you did with 00:23:66 (4,1)

foulcoon

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foulcoon 2008-12-05T20:36:51+00:00

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spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-12-07T08:20:50+00:00

@ foulcoon, is it good or bad?

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-12-08T04:12:15+00:00

I already used the same spacing as I did wth 00:23:66 (4,1)

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-12-09T03:21:50+00:00

bump

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-12-10T11:17:49+00:00

Does this map have a chance of being approved?

Tapdancingmetroid

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Tapdancingmetroid 2008-12-11T03:29:51+00:00

The note at 00:44:83 is still too far away. Put it as close to 6 (00:44:63) as 6 is to 5.
Otherwise, it looks like the other stuff has been fixed. :D

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2008-12-29T09:36:01+00:00

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spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2009-01-04T11:18:32+00:00

bump

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2009-01-12T13:27:52+00:00

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Real1 2009-01-20T05:58:48+00:00

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spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2009-02-14T10:41:06+00:00

bump

DawnII

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DawnII 2009-02-14T13:51:06+00:00

[Hard]
00:22:46 (3) - Too far from (2).

That's really my only gripe.

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2009-02-14T13:53:09+00:00

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DawnII

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DawnII 2009-02-15T06:10:16+00:00

Oh yea I meant [Normal], sorry, operating on little sleep earlier. It's still a little too far from (2) in that it's not consistent with the spacing between (1,2) and (3,4).

Edit: Fizzed.

spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2009-02-21T11:42:08+00:00

^Fixed. I think they're now consistent (3 grid boxes apart.) Hope it's fine now

mtmcl

mtmcl 2009-02-24T09:06:15+00:00

Satisfactory.

I had absolutely no trouble reading spacing. Timing sounds great. I got primarily 300's. You got a background. Etc etc.

Grats on a ranked map!

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spiky_meteorite

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spiky_meteorite 2009-02-24T14:35:56+00:00

omg thanks a lot! I can't believe it's ranked!

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