Hi~

General
You could make your Kiai more than just a burst; it would suit nicely if you kept it until the end of the song
Increase you first timing point's volume by 10%

Hard
You could really improve the overall look of you sliders by increasing the amount of points

00:15:489 (2) - This dosent look too nice
00:35:115 (8) - New combo
01:15:489 (1) - Maybe stack this under: 01:14:368 (1) -
01:09:041 (2) - Move this to X:488 Y:208
01:12:405 (1) - Replace whistle with finish
01:05:396 (1) - Move new combo forward one note?
01:24:181 (1) - Replace whistle with finish

Normal
00:04:274 (1) - Remove whistle to continue pattern or add a whistle here: 00:02:031 (2) -
01:01:190 (4) - This sounds like it should be the beginning of a new pattern and combo
01:01:471 (1,2,3) - Would be nice if these were rotated a little more each time...?
01:07:919 (2) - Move to X:208 Y: 144
01:14:087 (1) - Move new combo forward one note to continue pattern
01:22:218 (4) - Spacing
01:24:181 (1) - Replace whistle with finish

Louis' Easy
No Kiai time here? Just asking~
You could add more S finishes. For example; 01:01:190 (1) - beginning of this slider

01:16:891 (3,1) - Dont like how these two finishes are right next to each other. Sounds noisy
01:24:181 (3) - New combo?

This is pretty awesome!
Star~

Elio~

General

--Add kiai time somewhere..? preferably where you had those bookmarks.. yeah..

Hard

00:12:756 (7,8) - hmm, i never knew this wast he rhythm, i still got 300's tho by playing it as 1/2 tick notes tho. lol. just commenting on this cuz people will probably not figure the real rhythm out unless they go to editor.
00:15:489 (2,3,1) - this stack feels weird to me. I also actually hesitated a bit before actually playing combo 2. I thot you might have anti spaced or something >_>.
00:43:807 (2) - move this so it is symmetrical with combo 1?
[00:54:461 (5) - new combo
00:56:424 (1) - remove combo
00:56:704 (2) - new combo] i find that these combos work a lot better.
01:01:190 (4) - new combo
01:01:471 (1) - remove combo
01:12:125 (x,x) - i actualyl really want to add a note here and at 01:12:265.
01:23:059 (4) - I feel that it sounds better if you changed the the hitsound to Default Normal, removed the clap, and added a finish. (Obviously keep the last three notes S:C1) This sounds better just cuz it seems to add on to that magical sound of the harp (or whatver that instrument is... idk) imo. you could also decrease the volume a bit there too so the finish isn't too land idk about you.

Normal

00:07:639 (1) - why is this note slightly off combo 5 of the previous combo D:. it bothers me.
00:42:686 (3,1) - this is just my personal preference, but I don't really like this jump being here in a normal diff.
01:23:059 (4) - same as hard.

Easy

--The sliderslide hitsound is kinda like... loud D:

00:00:630 (1,2) - umm.. it really bothers me how this isn't on the same level D:
01:19:695 (1) - clap instead of finish at the beginning of slider, and finish instead of whistle at the end?
01:21:938 (2) - clap instead of finish at the beginning?
01:24:181 (3) - finish kinda sounds weird imo at the end.

Nice map! :3

Star~~

[General]
Offset seems to be off .. +15/+17 make it more correct though fine now (and it's the second time that happen to...)

well, only this though ( i liked the flow of the map.. and i could really find anything that wasn't nazi...)
ah, could you rename "Denpa Onna ED.MP4.AVI" in "Denpa Onna ED.avi" ?
and add tags "Electric Wave Woman and Youthful Man", "Dengeki Bunko", "ASCII Media Works", "Shaft", "Hitoma Iruma" and "Buriki"

will give some combobursts as that mod wasn't that usefull :3
need guests?

a comboburst for you :3

Easy & Normal: Perfect

Hard:
- Why not use sliders with more than 1 waypoint once in a while?
00:12:766 (7,8) - hmm it's "right" but it's hard to hit - not an error though
01:02:041 (3,4,5) - pattern doesn't feel so natural, but it's also not an error, just want to mention it ^^
I just think something like this could be better there: 01:11:294 (5) - e.g. sliders like this one would look better with 2 waypoints

Also nicht viel zu kritisieren, musst daher auch nix von dem o.g. wirklich tun, die Map enthält meiner Meinung nach keine wirklichen Fehler.

Nettes Lied - Sweet Map P:

Resnap all notes in Normal and Louis' Easy
That's all xD
/me runs

Aleks719 wrote:

Resnap all notes in Normal and Louis' Easy
That's all xD
/me runs

Now I feel stupid for forgetting that, lol.

star

thanks request~

All Suggestion

[General]

1. this video offset +550ms?
2. same as kiai all diffs?(kiai fountain)

[Louis' Easy]

• 
  AR,OD +1?

1. 00:05:125 (1) - spacing
2. 00:18:583 (1) - 1grid right
3. 00:20:826 (3) - 1grid left
4. 00:47:742 (2) - 2grid down,3grid right. and copy&paste,ctrl+h 00:49:985 (3) -
5. 01:01:200 (1,3) - same as 00:18:583 (1,3)
6. 01:24:191 (3) - I think that the sound of finish is large...(volume adjust to 50%?

[Normal]

• 
  

  Tenshi-nyan wrote:

  The jumps are intended and I want to leave them.

  hmm.. 00:47:742 (1) - 2.50x spaing too far from object... ;_;

1. 01:24:191 (1) - 1grid left
2. 01:25:312 (3) - add a finish,volume50%?

[Hard]

1. 00:45:489 (T) and 00:52:218 (T) this green line +10ms resnap please ._.
2. 00:35:125 (1) - 1grid left
3. 00:43:256 (1,2) - 1grid left
4. 01:01:200 (4) - [suggestion]NC and use 1.2x spacing? (01:01:481 (1) - remove NC)
5. 01:12:696 (2) - x:256 y:200
6. 01:25:312 (3) - add a finish and volume50%?

star~

Great song and map~
May I make an additional diff? It's a [Hard]

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Great song and map~
May I make an additional diff? It's a [Hard]

Yeah, you can.

But note that I am picky, I may not add the diff if I don't like it.

Here you are~
Download: Yakushimaru Etsuko - Ruru (TV Size) (Tenshi-nyan) [Miu's Hard].rar
The attachment included my diff's .osu file, a background for my diff and a silenced 'soft-sliderslide.wav'
Don't hesitate to replace the background of my diff if you hated it, or delete the 'soft-sliderslide.wav' if you don't want it.

Hope you'll like my difficulty!

I'll upload it if you add claps starting at 00:52:228.
You'd also have to increase the hitsound volume a bit, 30% is too quiet.


The diff is fine besides that.

There are some minor issues which I'll fix myself before uploading the diff.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

I'll upload it if you add claps starting at 00:52:228.
You'd also have to increase the hitsound volume a bit, 30% is too quiet.


The diff is fine besides that.

There are some minor issues which I'll fix myself before uploading the diff.

Thanks for accepting my diff, and here's the updated version.
I've fixed everything you mentioned~
Download: Yakushimaru Etsuko - Ruru (TV Size) (Tenshi-nyan) [Miu's Hard].osu

Alrighty then. I made some additional adjustments to the volume and fixed the preview point, combo colours and video.
I also decrased HP drain by -1 because I think HP 7 is too high. If you're not okay with that, message me.

In other words, the diff's up.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Alrighty then. I made some additional adjustments to the volume and fixed the preview point, combo colours and video.
I also decrased HP drain by -1 because I think HP 7 is too high. If you're not okay with that, message me.

In other words, the diff's up.

I'm okay with everything, thanks again~
Here have a kudo star

Star~

EDIT: Why 'Miu Matsuoka' jumped from Tags to Source in Miu's diff? ;w;
Fix it~

R20 wrote:

Star~

EDIT: Why 'Miu Matsuoka' jumped from Tags to Source in Miu's diff? ;w;
Fix it~

oops, I'll let Tenshi-nyan fix it instead.

Oopsie daisy.

Copy pasted stuff in the wrong box.

mod~

[General]

The tag in some of the diff is not complete, e.g. in MiU's Hard miubaka forgot to tag himself lol
^ oh he put them in the source looooooooool

[MiU's Hard]

00:00:640 (1) - the beginning can be softer?
00:02:882 (4) - whistle?
00:05:686 (4) - add whistle on the first and second tick?
00:07:929 (2) - ^
00:17:182 (5,6) - it's close to (4), maybe a 1/2 slider works better?
00:26:995 (10) - remove whistle?
00:45:499 - for the following two combos, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105376 (ignore the arrangement, focus on the time line only~)
00:49:985 (s) - gradually louder?~

[Hard]

00:06:808 (6) - +whistle?
00:09:051 (5) - ^
00:14:565 (1,2) - stack them together? or it's put like that intentionally?
00:21:948 (10) -^
00:42:696 (4) - up 1 grid
00:49:985 (s) - gradually louder?~
01:25:312 (3) - make it softer

nice!

[Normal]

00:36:608 (2) - looks better if this is moved up a bit
00:45:499 (1,2,3) - if (2) is steeper than (1), then (3) should steeper than (2) also, otherwise make them to be parallel.
00:47:742 (1,2,3) - ^, make it symmetrical
00:49:985 (s) - gradually louder?~
01:21:668 (2,3,4,5) - make them into a parallelogram
01:25:312 (3) - make it softer

[Easy]

so easy~

nice map, star~

wmfchris wrote:

mod~

[General]

The tag in some of the diff is not complete, e.g. in MiU's Hard miubaka forgot to tag himself lol I'm bakamiu >///<
^ oh he put them in the source looooooooool Just fixed

[MiU's Hard]

00:00:640 (1) - the beginning can be softer? Doesn't really matter~
00:02:882 (4) - whistle? Added
00:05:686 (4) - add whistle on the first and second tick? Nah~
00:07:929 (2) - ^ [color]red]^[/color]
00:17:182 (5,6) - it's close to (4), maybe a 1/2 slider works better? You mean (8),(9) right? :3 Nope sorry
00:26:995 (10) - remove whistle? Removed
00:45:499 - for the following two combos, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105376 (ignore the arrangement, focus on the time line only~) I think the star shape might suit more~
00:49:985 (s) - gradually louder?~ Okay, increased volume gradually from 40%~70%

Thanks Chris~

Fixed Update:
Download: Yakushimaru Etsuko - Ruru (TV Size) (Tenshi-nyan) [Miu's Hard].osu

star~

---My Pending map---
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31780 - Wolf & Spice - Shippo to Dance
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/30882 - ULTRA-PRISM with Shiratama Soft Tennis Club - Rule Book wo Wasurechae
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/30007 - Sugita Tomokazu - Mousou Senshi Miyamae Kanako

General:
Make video 800x600?
Comboburst. Funny because we were talking something about these stuff at #modhelp earlier today. I rather you just change it to something less ecchi but it's really up to you.

Easy:
Seems fine. Although I think most of the options are quite low. 0.23 stars ._.
Maybe +2 OD since there's not a lot of notes so they could learn to hit more with the beat?
00:02:882 (2) - 3 grid up? (Nazi)
Normal:
00:46:621 (3,1) - So you really won't change this jump at all? I mean on easy there is no jumps or lots of notes at all and in normal you get both. :s Maybe reduce jump by vertical flip? orz

Hard:
00:14:588 (1,2) - Intentional stack? Also seems offbeat with 2.
00:17:182 (4) - Slider end seems offbeat

Miu:
00:45:780 (1,2) - I can't really hear what these notes follow. Why don't you just move these two to 00:45:500 (1) 00:45:780 (2) ?
00:48:023 (1,2) - ^ Move to 00:47:742 (1) 00:48:023 (2) ?

cannot find anything major
cute song >~<

yo
from my que

[Louis' Easy]
awesome!!!

[Normal]
CS+1
00:25:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - maybe too hard for a Normal
00:52:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
also good

[Hard]
00:02:041 (2) - newcombo plz
00:12:766 (7,8) - confusing , to slider plz
00:14:588 (1,2) - not on a line ?

[Miu's Hard]
00:06:527 (5,6,7,8) - this is werid , why 1/6 stream ? use 1/4 plz , change to only 2 circles and a slider
00:08:770 (3,4,5,6) - ^ I don't know why you do this , not follow the music and it plays bad
00:13:817 (2,3) - don't do this
01:05:125 (11) - touched the score bar 0.0
spacing on the ending is to big , it is go to an Insane ..

good luck

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Miu's Hard]
00:06:527 (5,6,7,8) - this is werid , why 1/6 stream ? use 1/4 plz , change to only 2 circles and a slider I'll just leave this alone
00:08:770 (3,4,5,6) - ^ I don't know why you do this , not follow the music and it plays bad ^
00:13:817 (2,3) - don't do this This is rankable
01:05:125 (11) - touched the score bar 0.0 Moved downwards
spacing on the ending is to big , it is go to an Insane .. The jumps are fine coz the song is slow and calm

Applied Raging Bull's and wcx's mods, updated and thanks.
Download: Yakushimaru Etsuko - Ruru (TV Size) (Tenshi-nyan) [Miu's Hard].osu

good song
good map

Miu
Disable letterboxing during breaks
00:12:789 (6,7) - Very difficult to read this
00:17:392 (9) - Snap to 1/6

Hard
00:12:766 (7) - Snap to 1/3
00:17:182 (4) - Snap to 1/6
Use kiai time just like in Miu's difficulty.

Normal
Use kiai time just like in Miu's difficulty.

Easy
Use kiai time just like in Miu's difficulty.

That's it!

(Ignore this post)

This is the final fix.
Download: Yakushimaru Etsuko - Ruru (TV Size) (Tenshi-nyan) [Miu's Hard].osu

Lesjuh wrote:

Hard
00:12:766 (7) - Snap to 1/3 k
00:17:182 (4) - Snap to 1/6 k
Use kiai time just like in Miu's difficulty.

Normal
Use kiai time just like in Miu's difficulty.

Easy
Use kiai time just like in Miu's difficulty.

That's it!

About Kiai: I do not wish to use it for my diffs.
That's it means Bubble? D:

this song is so cute ^^

Ruru >w<~ <3

Alright bubbled!

kaze hiku no

kaze hiku no

o futon etc etc

Random bubble check time.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. Offset is slightly early. Use 645. The BPM also goes off in the end... Try using 169,990 dear god that typo. I meant 106,990

Louis' Easy

• Is fine.

Normal

1. The difficulty settings are too high for a Normal. Also, the diff itself is rather hard compared to the Easy. Try making it a bit easier to have a better diff spread.

Hard

• is fine.

Miu's Hard

• It'd be better to rename it to Miu's Insane (because it IS an Insane). Also, the presence of both 1/6 and 1/4 in stacks is rather confusing.

1. 01:25:325 (2) - Why did you silence this note ? Even if it's the last note of the diff, it's expected to produce a hitsound. Also, there's a loud bass drum sound at that point, so it'd be better to use a normal finish imo.

Popping over wrong timing. The difficulties are fine by themselves; I'm willing to rebubble when you fixed the timing. Remember to resnap all notes and to resnap the timing sections for kiai times.

Odaril wrote:

Random bubble check time.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. Offset is slightly early. Use 645. The BPM also goes off in the end... Try using 169,990

Fixed the offset. I'm not so sure about the BPM though... why should I change the BPM from 107 to 169,990? That doesn't make sense....



Normal

1. The difficulty settings are too high for a Normal. Also, the diff itself is rather hard compared to the Easy. Try making it a bit easier to have a better diff spread.

Lowered HP + OD a bit, nothing else changed.

Hard

• is fine.

Miu's Hard

• It'd be better to rename it to Miu's Insane (because it IS an Insane). Also, the presence of both 1/6 and 1/4 in stacks is rather confusing.

1. 01:25:325 (2) - Why did you silence this note ? Even if it's the last note of the diff, it's expected to produce a hitsound. Also, there's a loud bass drum sound at that point, so it'd be better to use a normal finish imo.

Renamed to Iinsane and unmuted the last note myself.

Popping over wrong timing. The difficulties are fine by themselves; I'm willing to rebubble when you fixed the timing. Remember to resnap all notes and to resnap the timing sections for kiai times.

OK.