kanpakyin wrote:

很快的看了一遍...
有幾樣東西想吐遭...
~為甚麼你這個diff和你給Joshua Lost的diff感覺有相似= =b
~為甚麼節奏都用1/2和3連猛塞?= =b 加點合適的4連的2連還是很好聽的.
~MP3音質差啊= =
沒了= =

Star.

這個帖子不要給kds..

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

General
* I suggest you to make 1 Normal/Hard diff, otherwise the average player can be boring to play Air_kannabi's diff. It doesn't matter having 3 diff in 4 min song ...3diffs with 5min length too hard to get mod..
* The end of 1st and 2nd Kiai is different on each diff

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Air_kannabi's Onions
* Change the diff name from [Air_kannabi's Onions] to [Air_kannabi's Easy]?

00:10:961 (8,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3) - I feel this part are kinda boring for me, try fill it with more circle and slider to make it interesting
00:45:247 (3,4,5) - I think it's ugly having a stack behind the slider (look this while testing the map)
00:56:880 (1,2,3) - This spacing are too small and it's confusing for beginner player
01:03:614 (4) - New combo?
02:03:614 (9) - ^
02:42:798 (1) - Too far from spinner, otherwise the beginner player can't reach this while gameplay
03:17:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing are too small and it's confusing for beginner player

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Nymph
* Change the diff name from [Nymph] to [Insane]? It doesn't make sense if the diff name and Nymph_ are same...... Also, it's not fit between this diff name and song >_> I think it is ok..

00:30:859 (B) - Add break here? Since it has large gap between 00:28:104 (1) and 00:33:921 (1)? Ok I will try
00:44:941 (6) - New combo ok
01:07:135 (7) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay ok
02:09:431 (4,5) - Don't do this, because it's confusing for player if 02:09:431 (4) stack with tail slider and they don't know where should click first ok I don't stack it
03:44:023 (7) - New combook
04:23:819 (9) - ^ (it's too long for me)ok

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This song is perfect for the people who died.......

loveFantasy wrote:

me mod

[General]
- cool, 看完 Easy 我覺得還是多做個Normal吧 4分多的图3DIFF好难要MOD。。
- tags: doriko-p 或是doriko 加上了

[Nymph]
<00:08:512..> 這段感覺太響了, normal的hitnormal本來就不小聲了, 而且背景的鼓其實最後兩拍才進來 音量-10
<01:11:880> (1) 疊著 (10)? 好的
<01:30:247> (10,11) inconsistent spacing 哎 没发现
<01:53:206> (13,14) ^ maybe fixed..
<02:40:349> (1,2) ^fixed
<03:39:431> (2,3) ^fixed
- 考慮到你的pattern已經很簡單了, 排版上下點功夫吧, 不用那麼牢的遵守spacing啊, 弄點跳出來或是在KIAI放大spacing什麼的 (尤其最後一段副歌, 都沒高潮的感覺) 恩 谢谢建议 我试试~

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

General
* I suggest you to make 1 Normal/Hard diff, otherwise the average player can be boring to play Air_kannabi's diff. It doesn't matter having 3 diff in 4 min song
* The end of 1st and 2nd Kiai is different on each diff

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Air_kannabi's Onions
* Change the diff name from [Air_kannabi's Onions] to [Air_kannabi's Easy]?

00:10:961 (8,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3) - I feel this part are kinda boring for me, try fill it with more circle and slider to make it interesting
00:45:247 (3,4,5) - I think it's ugly having a stack behind the slider (look this while testing the map)
00:56:880 (1,2,3) - This spacing are too small and it's confusing for beginner player
01:03:614 (4) - New combo?
02:03:614 (9) - ^
02:42:798 (1) - Too far from spinner, otherwise the beginner player can't reach this while gameplay
03:17:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing are too small and it's confusing for beginner player

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This song is perfect for the people who died.......

loveFantasy wrote:

me mod

[Air_kannabi's Onions]
- 4分多鐘的歌做成這樣略嫌太簡單了, 即使以給入門玩家的標準來看, density都太低, 下面有些基於此請你加note的mod
- 可以討論一下要不要多加1秒左右的audio lead-in, hp條最後還是瞬移了約1/4
<00:01:166> (1) 背景有東西, 加個finish?
<00:06:063> (2) ^
<00:29:941> 可以下note(有鼓點), 同理(3)可以repeat一次
<00:33:002..> 所有第三拍(第三條白線, 對應(1)的是00:34:839, 其他的自己推)可以下note或repeat一次 (兩種交替用變化較多)
<00:43:104> (T) 無用綠線
<01:02:390> (3) new combo
<01:21:982> (1) 沒疊好
<01:48:308> (5) ^
<01:58:717> (5,1,2) inconsistent spacing
<02:01:166> (5) new combo
<02:13:310> 綠線沒snap好導致KIAI在slider中結束了
- 聽完KIAI感覺你音效實在下太軟了, 聽的到clap的地方要不沒下要不只下了soft-whistle
<02:55:043> (1,2) 別下jump啊
<03:03:614..> (1..) 這段非常空, 加點創意? for example

<04:20:145> (7,1,2) inconsistent spacing

kurohacker wrote:

Hi there!
You sure work hard, Nymph_. Already your 4th map! XD
Nway, here's the mods:

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
I noticed that there is a lack of variety in hitsounds at the main parts, like the chorus. I think this is intentional, since the song itself provides the hitsounds somehow, but I also think you should at least put some whistles or claps around. Just an opinion anyway.

1'20''757 - Somehow I think it's better to just shorten this slider, ending at 1'21''370 instead.
4'15''859 - New combo here.
4'31''166 - New combo here.
4'35''451 - ^

Apart from that, a really nice map!

[Nymph]
About the combos, I was taught that the standard length of a combo is 10 except heavy streams. Maybe you should recheck your combos. I'll help mark down new combo locations if you choose to change them.

0'21''676 - I think this slider works better as a long slider instead of a reverse. well,I use long sliders before this so I think this time may have a change, so..
0'47''696 - Add a finish here too.well I think it is OK.
0'50''145 - New combo here. ok
1'09''737 - ^ok
1'14''635 - ^ok
1'19''533 - ^ok
1'24''431 - ^ok
1'29''635 - ^ok
1'51''370 - ^ok
2'10''961 - ^ok
2'15''859 - ^ok
2'56''268 - Sliders [3] and [4] here are really hard to read, since [4] is barely visible when [3] is hit. Maybe move [4] up a bit?ok
3'34''227 - New combo here.ok
4'03''614 - ^ok
4'28''104 - ^ok
4'33''002 - ^ok
4'38''206 - ^ok

Asides from the combo thing, this is a lovely diff.

Well, I'm not really a big fan of Miku, but this song is quite pleasant to hear, and the maps are nice as well, so a star to you guys~
All the best!

kurohacker wrote:

Hi there!
You sure work hard, Nymph_. Already your 4th map! XD
Nway, here's the mods:

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
I noticed that there is a lack of variety in hitsounds at the main parts, like the chorus. I think this is intentional, since the song itself provides the hitsounds somehow, but I also think you should at least put some whistles or claps around. Just an opinion anyway.

1'20''757 - Somehow I think it's better to just shorten this slider, ending at 1'21''370 instead.ok!
4'15''859 - New combo here.ok!
4'31''166 - New combo here.ok!
4'35''451 - ^ok!

Apart from that, a really nice map!

wcx19911123 wrote:

神触神mapper前来调教妮姆芙渣沙包渣mapper
[General]
*.osb能说说是干嘛的吗？卖萌的？

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
00:01:166 (1) - make it symmetrical
00:47:696 (1,2) - please make them look like 00:42:798 (1,2)
01:35:451 (2) - why there is a red square?
02:57:492 (3,4) - try to make them in the middle of the screen
04:36:063 (2) - ^

[Nymph]←这个难度名必须改改 这跟vocaloid没一点关系吧 不改
00:01:166 (1,2) - 不觉得违和么，1比较水平但是2却不是水平的无所谓吧..
00:02:084 (2,3) - 对准了么？重叠？准了啊？
00:03:614 (1,2,3) - 因为是复制的所以^。。没发现问题啊
00:26:574 (2,3) - 对准意思是X坐标相同？没必要啊。。
00:33:921 (1) - 这个slider的弧度跟其他不一样，为了整体感最好弄弯点哎好吧
00:37:288 (6,7) - 我不再举例了，全部重叠请你检查一遍重叠我都检查过啊
00:38:819 (1) - 弯点哦
01:07:135 (7,1) - 这两个最好跟上一个slider一样保持弧度这不是CIRCLE么
01:12:186 - 从这里开始我觉得24whistle实在太乏力了，可以考虑降音的normal-hitnormal不赞同
01:34:839 - 这里开始我感觉soft-hitclap和曲子不搭配暂时没想出好办法
01:41:880 (6,7,8) - 还是弄成弧度吧，别stack了好吧
01:43:717 (1,2,3) - 上面那个弄成这样不是很好吗。。弄了个类似的
01:44:941 (4,5,6) - 这里，[circle和slider开头]构成的弧度和[slider本身]不吻合，就是没对齐的感觉，不好看哎 换个角度
01:52:900 (5,6,7) - 前后circle都是摆成圈圈，这三个摆直干嘛？这里是过渡啊
01:56:268 (4,5) - 太可怕了，对准啊没歪啊？还可以 又对一次了
02:01:472 (7,8,9) - 别stack拿出来用三角了
02:09:431 (4,5) - 别告诉我这个你本来是想叠上的。。。如果只是遮挡，这实在不堪入目神一样的第六感
02:31:165 (2,3,4) - ^这个故意的
02:22:900 - 对了，从这里开始你的slider全部是横的直的，不觉得单调爆了么？不觉得 我喜欢干净的滑条
02:41:574 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 这个串最好缩小点DS，顺便摆好看点。。好吧 用HALF DISTANCE
02:51:982 (6,7) - 这个移到02:51:829去，然后这里02:52:288加个circle虽然你的节奏挺好 但是我这个也可以吧
02:59:941 (1,2) - 这泥马是啥。。。。。这咋了
03:34:839 (3) - 移到03:34:686不同意
03:42:798 (5,6) - 这泥马又来了。。。。。这咋了 必须叠上么？
03:48:308 (3,4) - 把之前所有的泥马弄成这个样子。。重叠控啊！
03:54:125 (7,8,9) - 别stack三角了
04:06:370 (2,3) - 我还以为泥马都消失了，但是我错了重叠控啊！！
04:07:594 (4,5) - 卧槽两个连续泥马。。。重叠控啊！！！
04:31:165 (2,3) - 把之前所有的泥马弄成这个样子也行。。太控了
04:40:043 (7,8,1) - 你很喜欢random stack么 >_>叠一起了。。
spinner末尾可以考虑闪一下KIAI（抱歉我忘记了这个技巧的英语是啥了。。似乎好主意 我试试

为啥这种按照DS摆满1/2的图就这么受欢迎呢0.0自重啊 我不会别的 渣图[/spoilerbox]

chungskale wrote:

嘿~ 話說這圖你都傳給我好久了= =;
現在來個星吧

wcx19911123 wrote:

渣沙包渣mapper前来膜拜妮姆芙神触神mapper
[spoilerbox][General]
*.osb能说说是干嘛的吗？

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
00:01:166 (1) - make it symmetrical √
00:47:696 (1,2) - please make them look like 00:42:798 (1,2) √
01:35:451 (2) - why there is a red square? 不明意义
02:57:492 (3,4) - try to make them in the middle of the screen√
04:36:063 (2) - ^√

val0108 wrote:

hey o/
[Nymph]
00:27:492 (3) - how about 1/3 Reverse slider?maybe good idea~
01:00:859 (5) - stack with 00:59:329 (2) - ?well maybe not necessary but ok~
01:21:982 (3) - add finish start sliderok good idea~
01:53:819 (1) - ^ok
02:25:655 (1) - many reverse lol how? >_> http://puu.sh/1TYX well..seems not necessary..so..
02:42:798 (1) - add finish start sliderok
02:51:829 - add noteok
02:56:268 (3,4) - weird slider..yeah maybe weird but can't think of a better way..
03:26:880 (4) - add finish start sliderok
03:46:472 (1) - ^ok
03:55:043 (10) - add clap reverse and lastok
04:06:063 (1) - add finishok
04:15:859 (3) - ^ok
04:25:655 (8) - ^ok

banvi wrote:

hihi~
I love this song~ <3

[General]
hmmmm there is big gap(about maximum score) between [Easy] and [Nymph]...imo
well , good luck... orz

[Easy]
01:17:696 (5) new combo
01:22:594 (9) ^
01:34:227 (T) resnap timig point
02:50:145 (3) remove whistle to silder's body
03:26:880 (T) kiai start here
04:06:063 (T) how about starting kiai again?
04:25:655 (T) kiai end here
04:28:717 (1) remove new combo

[Nymph]
00:10:961 (1) add finish at the beginning? ok
00:37:900 (7) remove whistlefixed
00:42:186 (6) remove whistle at the endfixed
00:57:492 (9) ^fixed
01:16:472 (5) remove finishok
01:17:084 (3) add finishok
01:26:880 (3) ^ok
01:34:227 (4) add finish at the beginningok
02:11:268 (2) move 1 grid right (grid lv3)yeah~ok
02:13:410 (2) add finish?ok
02:23:206 (1) add finish at the beginning?not necessary I think
02:33:002 (1) add finish?don't feel like this
02:42:645 (10,1) don't apart. keep spacing (3~10).changed to normal spacing
02:52:594 (1) add finish at the beginning?ok
02:57:492 (1) add finish?don't feel like this
03:02:390 (9) ^ok
04:06:063 (T) how about starting kiai again?ok
04:27:186 (4) more symmetry
hm , I feel number of finish hitsound is very litttle in this diff.
nice mapset

star~

ShiroKitty wrote:

Hi, here's my mod as requested in my queue

Air_Kannabi's Easy:
Nothing found, nice

Nymph:
Nothing found )

Great work on hitsounds *_* )

Pls, dont give me kudosu

Star!

val0108 wrote:

hey o/

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
OD HP -1
00:35:451 (2) - slider end 00:36:676 -
00:40:349 (5) - slider end 00:41:574 -
01:22:594 (9) - new comboOK!
01:34:227 - just kiai timeOK
03:26:880 - kiai time startOK
03:25:655 (1,1) - remove new comboOK
04:15:859 (1) - maybe slider reverse hdien >_>

:3

banvi wrote:

hihi~
I love this song~ <3

[General]
hmmmm there is big gap(about maximum score) between [Easy] and [Nymph]...imo
well , good luck... orz

[Easy]
01:17:696 (5) new comboOK
01:22:594 (9) ^OK
01:34:227 (T) resnap timig pointOK
02:50:145 (3) remove whistle to silder's bodyOK
03:26:880 (T) kiai start hereOK
04:06:063 (T) how about starting kiai again?OK
04:25:655 (T) kiai end hereOK
04:28:717 (1) remove new comboOK

star~

Debbiee wrote:

Hi~

Air_kannabi's Easy
00:33:002 (1) - Whistle or clap on start
00:35:451 (2) - ^
00:37:900 (4) - ^
00:40:349 (5) - ^
00:42:798 (1) - ^
00:44:023 (2) - ^
00:45:247 (3) - Whistle or clap
00:46:472 (5) - Whistle or clap
00:47:696 (1) - Whistle or clap on start
00:48:921 (2) - Whistle or clap on the end
03:10:349 (6) - I think you forgot this. I think Normal sounds bad on this circle. Make this Soft.
03:39:125 (3,4,5) - I think this is not for Easy diff. You should remove 4.
04:18:308 (3,4,5) - ^

Nymph
Couldn't find anything wrong ^^"

Really good. Star

Debbiee wrote:

Hi~

Air_kannabi's Easy
00:33:002 (1) - Whistle or clap on start
00:35:451 (2) - ^
00:37:900 (4) - ^
00:40:349 (5) - ^
00:42:798 (1) - ^
00:44:023 (2) - ^
00:45:247 (3) - Whistle or clap
00:46:472 (5) - Whistle or clap
00:47:696 (1) - Whistle or clap on start
00:48:921 (2) - Whistle or clap on the end
03:10:349 (6) - I think you forgot this. I think Normal sounds bad on this circle. Make this Soft.
03:39:125 (3,4,5) - I think this is not for Easy diff. You should remove 4.
04:18:308 (3,4,5) - ^

Really good. Star
All done

TorNis wrote:

Sorry, I fail to mod this.
It plays smoothly and I don't encountered problems.

wmfchris wrote:

[Nymph]
00:27:492 (3) - off vocal, use 3/8 slider don't think so,not sure about this
01:16:472 (5) - right 1 grid ok
01:56:268 (4,5) - stackwell ok
02:18:308 (1~8) - make it symmetrical? not necessary
02:52:288 (x) - add a note?don't want to
03:02:084 (8) - clap?no
03:24:584 (x) - delete break?no I think it is necessary

[Easy]
no problem for me~

_Kiva wrote:

we need some 鬼畜

JauiPlaY wrote:

HI~
一些建議

[General]
osb文件有用? 删了好几次了 结果他自己又出来了...
[Nymph]
00:44:329(5) - 移到00:44:482并增加長度到00:44:941再在這里加個note好主意..这里一直下不好
00:56:880(6) - new combofixed
01:13:104(4) - 和00:44:329(5)用一樣的方法修改一下fixed
01:18:002(5) - ^fixed
02:01:472(7) - new combofixed
02:10:349(6) - reverse selectionfixed
02:14:941(5) - 和00:44:329(5)用一樣的方法修改一下fixed
02:18:155(7) - 去掉這個note吧,我真的覺得這個note沒啥必要加上去...这里有vocal吧 还是保留
02:20:145(7) - 把這個變成一個slider,開始于02:19:992,結尾于02:20:451fixed
03:54:125(7) - new combofixed
04:08:819(6) - ^fixed
04:13:410(5) - new combofixed
04:14:023(7) - 和02:20:145(7)用一樣的方法修改一下fixed
04:28:717(2,3) - 有點難看fixed
04:40:349(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 聲音太小了,提高一些fixed

so
star~

KingsAL2 wrote:

*By Wmf's modding /taiko guest queue!

Nymph]]
02:15:553 (6) - New combofixed
02:15:859 (1) - Remove it~don't think so
02:18:002 (8) - New combofixed
02:18:308 (1) - Remove it also~don't think so
02:41:574 (X) - You can add a timing section here. By suing a samll sound of NormalBeautiful idea~
03:24:737 (X) - Reduce this break.Don't think so, keeping it for further modding

[All]
Simple. Great. STAR =]

indyinyou wrote:

Hi~

My suggestions:
[Hard]
00:08:512 : grean line use soft hit sound to 00:09:431 well..didn't see much difference so just keep for further modding
00:09:737 : use normal hitsound start here ^
star

Kanon wrote:

我来了~ star 同时附送MOD
[Nymph]
01:35:757 (6) - 去掉来回 加一个NOTE 节奏上没有区别啊 我比较喜欢这种排列
01:39:125 (1) - ^
02:23:206 (1) - 改成3个NOTE这样会增加难度吧 不要= = 我要当新人的好朋友
02:24:431 (2) - ^
02:29:329 (3) - ^
02:31:778 (3,4) - 改成 5 NOTE
03:55:043 (4) - 改成4 NOTE 红线不放NOTE这样似乎不连贯了 不太舒服
先这么多，主要是把重复太多的排列换一换 ...排列太苦手 重复就重复吧= =
加油~

JauiPlaY wrote:

HI~
一些建議

[General]
osb文件有用?

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
00:48:921(2) - x:372, y:152OK
00:50:757(1) - 起始點應該在00:51:063OK
00:56:880(1) - 移到00:56:268?
01:01:778(2) - 移到01:01:166?
01:10:349(1) - 起始點應該在01:09:890OK
01:21:370(4,1) - 最好不要遮擋OK
02:21:063(1) - 起始點應該在02:20:910OK
02:40:043(1) - 起始點應該在02:40:349OK
02:55:043(1) - 取消new comboOK
03:05:451(5,1) - 錯誤的spacingOK
03:26:880(2) - new comboOK
04:17:084(2) - 為什麼末尾會有個clap?OK
04:41:574(1) - 取消new comboOK
看得我快睡著了...抱歉

so
star~

谢谢Mod

indyinyou wrote:

Hi~

My suggestions:

[Easy]

00:03:614 : whistleOK
00:12:186: whistleOK
00:22:594 : clapOK
00:28:717 : whistleOK
00:29:329 : whistle
00:31:472 : whistle
00:33:002 : remove whistle add finOK
00:34:839 : whistleOK
00:37:288 : ^OK
00:37:900 : new combo,remove whistle add finOK
00:39:737 : whistleOK
00:42:186 : ^OK
01:07:288 : fin volum 40 %OK
01:12:798 : clapOK
01:14:023 : remove whistle add clapOK
01:16:472 : ^OK
01:17:696 : clapOK
01:20:145 : ^OK
01:22:594 : ^OK
01:25:043 : ^OK
01:25:043 : add silder to 01:25:655OK

star

Thanks mod

indyinyou wrote:

hi

i make part 02:20:757 to 02:40:961 [Nymph diff]

02:30:936 : use 1/8 Beat
02:32:390 : use 1/3
02:33:614 : ^
02:38:512 : ^
02:39:737 : ^

if you like use this part
use it and design note by youself : D

no kd for this
i make it for fun : D

Tonoicutzu wrote:

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
00:37:900 (1) - ugly.. try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/90436
01:05:451 (4,5) - pretty annoying, add whistle instead of finish
01:48:308 (5) - not stacked correctly (NAZI)



nothing else... very good
starred~

Thanks mod

FireballFlame wrote:

[Yuki]
02:52:441 - Maybe add a note here? Like that?

SPOILER

I think the rhythm feels nicer that way. yeah..I don't feel like changing.I think both are OK~so just keep it.
02:56:880 (4) - That's a littlehard to see. Could you make it so that the hitburst of (2) doesnt conceal the slider? can't think of a better way..
01:57:645 (7), 03:50:298 (7) - This is just personal preference, but I'd remove those.doesn't bother me so just keep it.
Oh and I'm not really a fan of things like 01:22:900 (5,6,7), but I guess it doesn't matter.well I think it is just OK~

Can't find anything else.
Awesome song, nice map!

KanaRin wrote:

Nice map >w</
加油~

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod

[Easy]
00:40:349 坑人新手节奏
00:54:431 连续两个的sliderwhistle都取消掉吧 不好听
04:20:757 finish位置两个互换

[Hard]
[02:52:288 add note 不想要
02:56:880 distance 注意下 否则各种233 还好啊
04:40:349 可以选择使用渐渐降低volume处理 嗯我试试
各种slider形状..... 这个还好了..不要吐槽

sweet song....Star for it.

mi sa wrote:

这是一首好歌，演唱会里的金曲，唱出了初音自己的心声。歌曲是初音存在的唯一意义，而她通过歌声传递欢乐，这种最质朴的情感往往是最容易被忽视的，仔细聆听又颇为感动。
Joshua Lost的同名图也泡了，加油。不过我看了一下，问题很多啊。easy不对着vocal的感觉还真是别扭，新人也不容易上手，中间一段kiai应该像之前一样加上clap会比较好。我试着简单改了一部分，你可以参考一下。hard要向你多学习。

Nymph_ wrote:

mi sa wrote:

这是一首好歌，演唱会里的金曲，唱出了初音自己的心声。歌曲是初音存在的唯一意义，而她通过歌声传递欢乐，这种最质朴的情感往往是最容易被忽视的，仔细聆听又颇为感动。
Joshua Lost的同名图也泡了，加油。不过我看了一下，问题很多啊。easy不对着vocal的感觉还真是别扭，新人也不容易上手，中间一段kiai应该像之前一样加上clap会比较好。我试着简单改了一部分，你可以参考一下。hard要向你多学习。

谢了~AIR现在没在 等他回来的

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Combo colors 1 and 2, and 3 and 4 are very similar, maybe mix them around so the similar ones dont come in a row really? Then I changed the colour
Why only 2 diffs? will you add another one? 3 diffs with a 5mins songs is really really hard to get modded...and my diff is actually more like a hard not insane so I think this maybe ok.

[Yuki]
Why is this the only diff with a custom name? yeah this has special meaning. I made this map for someone so this diff just follow his name.
Consider adding a break in between your current 2, since it has a playtime of 2:30 in between those. I think this is OK? because the 2nd part is very relax.
Use more whistles (specially in the beginning when there's barely any hitsounds besides finishes). ya I don't think so, because I really want this part be different from next part so I add whistles on next part and keep this part silence~
03:26:880 - Unsnapped kiai start. oops..fixed

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
Your combos get pretty long for an Easy diff, like for example 03:12:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), among others
00:07:288 (3) - Avoid short sliders that repeat multiple times on the easiest diff.
01:25:655 (6) - ^
01:37:900 (5) - ^
01:42:798 (4) - ^
I'll stop from pointing them out now, but take them in mind
03:02:390 - Unsnapped timing section, wont affect your spinner end as intended.
03:25:043 (1,1,1) - Dont spam new combos.

Pretty nice and sweet maps

Sander-Don wrote:

yay, glad someone is mapping this, i love this song xD

I love this song too~

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Combo colors 1 and 2, and 3 and 4 are very similar, maybe mix them around so the similar ones dont come in a row
Why only 2 diffs? will you add another one?

[Yuki]
Why is this the only diff with a custom name?
Consider adding a break in between your current 2, since it has a playtime of 2:30 in between those.
Use more whistles (specially in the beginning when there's barely any hitsounds besides finishes).
03:26:880 - Unsnapped kiai start.

[Air_kannabi's Easy]
Your combos get pretty long for an Easy diff, like for example 03:12:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), among othersfixed
00:07:288 (3) - Avoid short sliders that repeat multiple times on the easiest diff.Although I think this is no problem but I changed part of the sliders

01:25:655 (6) - ^
01:37:900 (5) - ^
01:42:798 (4) - ^
I'll stop from pointing them out now, but take them in mind
03:02:390 - Unsnapped timing section, wont affect your spinner end as intended.fixed
03:25:043 (1,1,1) - Dont spam new combos.fixed

Pretty nice and sweet maps

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Yuki]
00:31:931 - This break is pretty short, im sorry but your gonna need something longer or a break before the other long break you have.Delete something to make the break time more comfortable.
02:56:268 (3,4) - This is a bit of a big jump, made me trip since this is the only time spacing changes.changed to only 1 slider.

[Air_Kannabi's Easy]
You still need to use your breaks better, there's quite a bit of time after the break without any other kind of rest. Added some break times~