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Meiri

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Meiri 2010-11-03T03:59:41+00:00

Garven wrote:
As per your request:

[General]
Remove audio from video. If you don't know how to do this, please let me know and I can do it for you.

[Skin]
can you crop the edges on the comboburst.png? There's a little bit you can reduce on the left and right sides.

[My Color]
00:12:901 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. You'd be better off mapping through the spinner.
00:17:653 (1) - ^ Same thing with the next time you use this particular pattern
00:35:376 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Please, not in an easy. Simplify these rhythms or use short one-repeat sliders.

[Bima's Color]
It's all technically fine... though it felt kind of bland. The rhythms were all stagnant and felt against the swing-like beat of the song.

[KRZY's Color]
00:02:109 (4) - Think you can smooth out this curve?
01:03:396 (2,3) - This rhythm felt kind of strange to me for some reason.
01:11:118 (3,4,5) - These felt better to play with a whistle on the end of the slider. Maybe one on the end of 6 as well.
Really fun difficulty here.

[Dk's Color]
*One note* *break* wut
00:20:920 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Cool rhythm. Too bad most of it isn't even in the song.
The diff is neat, but all the made up rhythms kind of kill the mood a bit for me.

Wew . .
Bland . .

Anyway, I'll Try To Perfect It

KRZY

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KRZY 2010-11-09T16:56:12+00:00

Garven wrote:
[KRZY's Color]
00:02:109 (4) - Think you can smooth out this curve?
01:03:396 (2,3) - This rhythm felt kind of strange to me for some reason. I think I will keep these two as they are. Thanks for the suggestion though XD

Garven wrote:
01:11:118 (3,4,5) - These felt better to play with a whistle on the end of the slider. Maybe one on the end of 6 as well. Fixed.

Garven wrote:
Really fun difficulty here.

Thanks for the compliment

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-11-10T00:40:19+00:00

KRZY wrote:
Garven wrote:
[KRZY's Color]
00:02:109 (4) - Think you can smooth out this curve?
01:03:396 (2,3) - This rhythm felt kind of strange to me for some reason. I think I will keep these two as they are. Thanks for the suggestion though XD
Garven wrote:
01:11:118 (3,4,5) - These felt better to play with a whistle on the end of the slider. Maybe one on the end of 6 as well. Fixed.
Garven wrote:
Really fun difficulty here.
Thanks for the compliment

updated in school

학교에서 업뎃

Mikkuri

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Mikkuri 2010-11-12T07:37:27+00:00

Star ~

minyeob

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minyeob 2010-11-26T19:44:35+00:00

아직 자세히는 안 봤는데 일단
[My color]
나머지 난도가 다 겟난인 걸 고려하면
Shalon's color가 더 적절해 보입니다만

모딩보증용으로 쿠도별 남겨요~

HakuNoKaemi

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HakuNoKaemi 2010-12-23T14:07:49+00:00

star!

minyeob

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minyeob 2010-12-28T18:32:05+00:00

[My color]
00:36:960 (1) - 노트가 너무 위로 치우쳐져 있지 않은가 싶습니다. 예전에는 이런노트를 "offscreen"이라 칭하면서 트집이 심했는데 지금은 뭐라고 안하나 보네요. 그냥 참고

[dk]
00:01:020 (1) - 00:05:772 (1) 개인적으로 이 부분, 맘에 들지 않네요 수정을 강력히 권장합니다.
00:34:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - 여기서 올300이 뜰 수 있나 D:

Nakagawa-Kanon

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Nakagawa-Kanon 2010-12-29T06:16:27+00:00

asdasfafff

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Dk's Color].osu

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-12-29T11:06:35+00:00

updated

minyeob

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minyeob 2010-12-29T18:42:34+00:00

OK, Bubbled for now~

Zekira

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Zekira 2011-01-01T09:30:44+00:00

Fuck I totally mistook the title for Mizuiro Blood's ending

Fuck

Lol

arien666

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arien666 2011-01-01T09:31:47+00:00

Zekira wrote:
Fuck I totally mistook the title for Mizuiro Blood's ending

Fuck

Lol

Hey! that comment was mine!!! ;_;

Andrea

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Andrea 2011-01-02T20:06:56+00:00

[Overall]

Audio Lead-In is different on every difficulty. Open every difficulty as .osu in Notepad and put AudioLeadIn: 2000.

Also, I'm not sure about the timing... do you mind to ask someone expert for it please? I have to pop for now.

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2011-01-02T22:51:08+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
[Overall]

Audio Lead-In is different on every difficulty. Open every difficulty as .osu in Notepad and put AudioLeadIn: 2000.

Also, I'm not sure about the timing... do you mind to ask someone expert for it please? I have to pop for now.

Thx for check my map

I fixed the audio lead-in at all diffs to same. and, I'll ask the timing asap, when I got to home.(in now, I should go to school :d )

Vendemmia

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Vendemmia 2011-01-04T06:39:34+00:00

Mucha_old

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Mucha_old 2011-01-04T14:50:51+00:00

I love 七咲(´・ω・｀)

Shana

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Shana 2011-01-06T07:06:52+00:00

별이 다아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아

i like this song

AMAGAMI SS! XD

Zekira

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Zekira 2011-01-15T11:24:43+00:00

Offset-BPM
1030-101.00
10528 - 101.000
31914 - 102.000
34300 - 101.000
36676 - 101.33
43805 - 101.000
53300 - 101.000

Go fix. Don't forget to check sliders, snapped notes, location of green points, etc.

Nakagawa-Kanon

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Nakagawa-Kanon 2011-01-15T15:12:22+00:00

와츄고나두

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Dk's Color].osu

banvi

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banvi 2011-01-15T17:53:54+00:00

KRZY

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KRZY 2011-01-17T00:12:27+00:00

제키라덕분에 이 난이도에서 가장 많이 까이던 00:52:418 (9,10,11,1) 부분을 고치는데 성공

슬슬 랭크시키잣

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu

Meiri

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Meiri 2011-01-17T04:26:39+00:00

기다려 주셔서 감사합니다 !

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2011-01-17T14:53:13+00:00

unfortunately, my computer's mainboard is burned today.

So, I can't update now

Meiri

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Meiri 2011-01-18T00:26:53+00:00

[Shalon] wrote:
unfortunately, my computer's mainboard is burned today.

So, I can't update now

sorry, how that's happen D: ?!

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2011-01-18T08:11:46+00:00

- Peaceful Melody - wrote:
[Shalon] wrote:
unfortunately, my computer's mainboard is burned today.

So, I can't update now

sorry, how that's happen D: ?!

That mean I can't boot my computer.

but today, I buy new main board... my money

Andrea

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Andrea 2011-01-20T10:20:41+00:00

You still didn't fixed Audio Lead-In on Dk's Color. Please fix it >_<

Timing seems fine now, though.

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2011-01-20T10:56:43+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
You still didn't fixed Audio Lead-In on Dk's Color. Please fix it >_<

Timing seems fine now, though.

oops, that's my mistake

thx to re-check, and sorry to bother you

Andrea

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Andrea 2011-01-20T11:10:03+00:00

That's fine, let me know when you update so I can check it.

I still see "Latest version but not approved" >_<

EDIT: Seems good now.

Re-Bubbled~

James2250

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James2250 2011-01-28T03:39:34+00:00

I would double check your timing points on all the difficulties. For example why does 'Bima's Color" have a timing section with 101.33 BPM at 00:03:703 when none of the other difficulties do

Also that is some really odd timing..

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2011-01-28T04:38:06+00:00

James2250 wrote:
I would double check your timing points on all the difficulties. For example why does 'Bima's Color" have a timing section with 101.33 BPM at 00:03:703 when none of the other difficulties do

Also that is some really odd timing..

Fix bima's timing, and I'll ask about timing for other timing experts, thx a lot to check my map

Doomsday

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Doomsday 2011-01-29T15:55:07+00:00

Alrighty. For the timing, most looks alright, even though a few offsets are off, and those 101.33 BPM parts are too fast I think.

For the timing, I got:

BPM: 102.00 Offset: 1,040
BPM: 102.00 Offset: 31,924
BPM: 102.00 Offset: 34,299
BPM: 101.27 Offset: 36,686
BPM: 101.27 Offset: 43,823
BPM: 101.00 Offset: 53,324

Damn offset changing constantly

Doomsday

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Doomsday 2011-01-31T19:19:25+00:00

Oh wait. I missed something. When I posted my timing, I missed one of the points I made. Silly me.

Add this in too:
BPM: 102.00 Offset: 8,191

(Yeah, don't Kudosu this)

James2250

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James2250 2011-01-31T19:48:01+00:00

Was double checking everything and 00:46:169 (1,2,3,4,1) sounded really off on "My Color" (took me a while to see why).
BPM on that section (43,823) is 102.27 BPM on that difficulty but 101.27 on the rest. Make sure to fix that

Add that timing section doomsday gave to every difficulty then go through and make sure every offset and bpm matches up and call me back~

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2011-02-01T09:45:07+00:00

James2250 wrote:
Was double checking everything and 00:46:169 (1,2,3,4,1) sounded really off on "My Color" (took me a while to see why).
BPM on that section (43,823) is 102.27 BPM on that difficulty but 101.27 on the rest. Make sure to fix that

Add that timing section doomsday gave to every difficulty then go through and make sure every offset and bpm matches up and call me back~

fixed

James2250

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James2250 2011-02-01T21:25:50+00:00

I have talked to a few more people and the timing still doesn't seem 100% (hard to believe as it is)......only thing I can suggest now is to call Lybydose for a final check. For the most part the timing seems fine but there are still a few places it seems off

Will do my mod here anyway, mostly just suggestions~

-Capitalize the title so it is (TV Size) as that is how 99% of maps have it (Follow this thread if you need help submitting with title change)
-The current slider slide sounds out of place for this song...try and make a custom one and make it quieter?
-Lead-in time seems slightly long atm, no big deal but I would leave it at 1.5 seconds on every difficulty
-If possible remove the audio from the video to save filespace

My Color:
You don't need to have those spinners completely silenced for the entire time
00:08:098 (1) - snapped incorrectly - sounds odd placed on offset too.....(listen on 25%)
00:20:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - odd pattern but I guess its ok
00:23:003 (5,1,2) - would all look neater if not touching
00:29:537 (1,3) - separate slightly more?
00:31:924 (1,3) - ^
00:39:352 (3,4) - could look neater
00:50:537 (1,2) - incorrectly snapped and move further away from the previous combo
01:02:828 (6) - new combo and remove new combo on 01:02:828 (6,1) to follow pattern
01:07:581 (6) - new combo?

Bima's Color:
Keep HP higher than the easiest difficulty? Maybe OD + 1 too
00:02:804 (5,1,2,3,4) - keep spacing between all these equal
00:49:747 - break looks odd here while playing

KRZY's Color:
Slightly more overlaps with sliders than I like but it doesn't look too bad
00:20:032 (7) - don't have completely silent notes, players don't like them

Dk's Color:
Whistle usage here is nicely done
00:20:924 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add hitsounds to all the notes around here?
00:34:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - snapped error..? Spacing is off anyway
00:48:661 (2) - meant to be on blue tick?
00:51:031 (3) - ^
00:51:623 (5,1) - spacing
00:58:769 (4) - meant to be on blue tick?
Some snapping I am not sure of on this difficulty, I guess wait for timing check and then look at them all

Sorry for all the work, just want to make sure everything checks out nicely before this gets ranked~

Lybydose

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Lybydose 2011-02-20T15:26:11+00:00

ok wow, the timing on this song is all over the place. I made a few small changes and I think it's a bit better; it sounds good to me anyway. If someone could double check though, that would be great.

SPOILER

Offset | BPM

1040 | 101.20
8191 | 102.00
10532 | 101.00
11740 | 101.00
14690 | 101.00
15284 | 101.00
31917 | 102.00
34299 | 101.00
36686 | 101.27
38445 | 101.27
41425 | 101.27
43809 | 101.27
46196 | 101.27
53318 | 101.10
66386 | 101.10
67571 | 101.15
79448 | 101.15

heh, I say a few small changes and there are like 3x as many timing sections as before. Well, a few of them are just there to reset the metronome though.

also, Dk's Color has some snapping issues in some spots (and is ridiculously overmapped imo, especially during the quiet part), and the other diffs might have some notes go off when you resnap, so watch out

eveless

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eveless 2011-02-21T02:53:27+00:00

[Dk's color]
00:07:510 (4) - Dissymmetrical with 2
00:58:967 (4) - I think it's a sudden jump , and too sudden x_x Also a slider begin in here to 00:58:967 is better than now

[KRZY]
00:56:789 (8) - a litter off :<
01:26:591 (x) - add a note here

that's all
sorry for my late , have a star here

Kuzino

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Kuzino 2011-02-22T01:48:29+00:00

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2011-02-23T14:02:02+00:00

Fixed all timing, and checked all mods on my own diff.

Waiting for other mapper's response.

and,,, If possible, I won't talk about the timing anymore.

KRZY

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KRZY 2011-02-24T00:35:06+00:00

This map really deserves a rank now, if only for all the effort the modders and the mappers put into it.

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu

Sure

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Sure 2011-02-24T02:43:56+00:00

This beatmap /var/backup/beatmaps/20674 Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size)-novid.osz has not been uploaded correctly!

Full submit again please.

Nakagawa-Kanon

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Nakagawa-Kanon 2011-02-24T08:39:24+00:00

.

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [Dk's Color].osu

April_old

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April_old 2011-02-26T07:13:34+00:00

star

LuPiiTa

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LuPiiTa 2011-02-28T04:25:54+00:00

☆

Meiri

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Meiri 2011-02-28T12:16:48+00:00

₧ 35.000

It's Complete

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2011-02-28T13:48:21+00:00

all diffs are updated, waiting for BAT or MAT 's response.

As you can see my signature, I don't have enough time to manage this map.

Semester is starts 3/2, and then, maybe I can't log Osu! regurarly.

I want to make this map perfectly, That can ranked itself without many processes.

taNa_Coppola

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taNa_Coppola 2011-02-28T13:55:28+00:00

nice song~★

arien666

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arien666 2011-03-11T13:44:02+00:00

[My Color]
00:23:897 (1,2) - Swap new combo?

[Bima's Color]
01:19:137 (2,3,4) - Weird spacing as sight ;_; I know it's due to BPM but... orz

[KRZY's Color]
:3

[Dk's Color]
00:49:010 (3) - [Nazi] how about move 1 grid right and down?

Nice set but...
I can't confirm for bubble yet ;_;
sorry orz

Meiri

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Meiri 2011-03-13T05:02:30+00:00

arien666 wrote:
[My Color]
00:23:897 (1,2) - Swap new combo?

[Bima's Color]
01:19:137 (2,3,4) - Weird spacing as sight ;_; I know it's due to BPM but... orz

[KRZY's Color]
:3

[Dk's Color]
00:49:010 (3) - [Nazi] how about move 1 grid right and down?

Nice set but...
I can't confirm for bubble yet ;_;
sorry orz

Okay Fixed

Thank's Arien !

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2011-04-01T12:58:05+00:00

Maybe I should talk with MAT or BAT one more time. I already talk with some of them..

but seems they forgot about this.

anyway, I really want to get ranked this map. this map have so many people's effort.

not only me and mappers,but all of modders, especially who checked this map's timing..

Edit: I tried to req some BAT or MAT, but I couldn't get mod. I'll try to talk with some other of them,

but.. I can't sure I can got mod.

I feel so sorry for guest-diff mappers to say like this, but I can't sure I can get ranked this.

this map seemed cursed. always lost chances.

DJPop

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DJPop 2011-04-03T14:45:27+00:00

Too fast to lose your hope

Volume should be 60% maximum imo.

~My Color~
00:35:338 (2) - sounds better with 1/4 snaps

~Bima's Color~
01:28:790 (6) - 1/6 snap

~KRZY's Color~
00:48:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds better with 1/4 snaps

~Dk's Color~
00:34:744 (2,3,4,5) - not fit to the song D:

+Star

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2011-04-03T15:55:06+00:00

fixed my map only, I'll try to fixed all diffs to talk with mappers. thx a lot, DJPopd

KRZY

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KRZY 2011-04-03T18:37:03+00:00

Fixed DJPop's mod, and what a fix that was. Thanks.

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu