1. DC's Easy (1,83 stars, 204 notes)
2. Hard (2,17 stars, 213 notes)
3. Normal (1,91 stars, 205 notes)

1. I get the feeling that the volume until 43:462 should be a little louder. Consider rising it by a tick, or maybe a little less.
2. I'd never seen a map with 3 diffs with just two stars xD

1. 04:726 (6) - I think moving this one grid down and one grid left would look more consistent.
2. 16:924 (4) - Moving this two grids right would make it look more symmetrical.
3. 35:056 (4) - Add a whistle?
4. 01:05:386 (1-5) -
   SPOILER

   
   Also, add a whistle on (5).
5. 01:10:990 (4) - Whistle again (just in the beggining)
6. 02:16:594 (2) -1 grid right (with grid level 3 on, that is)
7. 02:40:331 (x) - Add a circle, maybe?

1. 01:759 (3) - Symmetry nazi :3
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2. 01:38:353 (2) - This could be more symmetric, too. And (4) too.
3. 01:52:858 (5) - ^
4. 01:58:133 (3) - ^

1. I suggest that you rename the diffs, you can't make a 'Hard' diff for this kind of map.

1. 01:54:836 - Add a timing section here which increases the volume of the hit sounds a little. The song gets progressively louder here and increasing the hit sound volume would sound better (not by much though).
2. 02:00:111 - ^
3. 02:02:748 - Revert back to normal volume here, the one you used before 01:54:836.

1. 00:08:353 (4) - I don't like how this slider looks. Try this.
2. 00:11:979 (7) - ^
3. 00:22:528 - Add a timing section here and increase the volume by a little.
4. 00:31:759 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing. Move 2,3,4 by 1 grid to the left. You can try using grid level 4 to space this better as well.
5. 01:05:386 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing. Use grid level 4, it will be much easier to shape a star without spacing issues. Like this.
6. 01:13:957 (1) - I don't know if this was your intention, but remove whistle from the slider. Instead, add whistle to the start, middle and end points. Sounds better.
7. 01:54:836 - Add a timing section here which increases the volume of the hit sounds a little. The song gets progressively louder here and increasing the hit sound volume would sound better (not by much though).
8. 02:00:111 - ^
9. 02:02:748 - Revert back to normal volume here, the one you used before 01:54:836.

1. AR -1. I know that you're trying to make it hard, but that just doesn't fit with the song.
2. In general I think you used too many long sliders. Most of them can be shortened and filled with circles in between them. I will not say which ones exactly cause you wanted to map like this, so it's just a suggestion.
3. 00:22:528 - Add a timing section here and increase the volume by a little.
4. 00:37:364 (7,8,9) - Spacing. I know that grid allows (9) to be placed like this, but rather mirror it with (7). So, 1 grid to the left on (9).
5. 00:43:627 (1) - (nazi) 1 grid up so it mirrors (8) from the last combo.
6. 01:15:276 (1) - I don't know if this was your intention, but remove whistle from the slider. Instead, add whistle to the start of the slider.
7. 01:17:913 (4) - ^
8. 01:31:100 (1,2,3,4) - Why stack these? Just split them up, it's 'Hard' we're talking about here. Try this.
9. 01:52:858 (5) - Remove whistle, then add whistle to the start, middle and end of the slider only.
10. 01:54:836 - Add a timing section here which increases the volume of the hit sounds a little. The song gets progressively louder here and increasing the hit sound volume would sound better (not by much though).
11. 01:58:133 (3) - Remove whistle, then add whistle to the start, middle and end of the slider only.
12. 02:00:111 - Add a timing section here which increases the volume of the hit sounds a little. The song gets progressively louder here and increasing the hit sound volume would sound better (not by much though).
13. 02:08:023 - Revert back to normal volume here, the one you used before 01:54:836.
14. 02:15:935 (5) - New combo.
15. 02:17:254 (7) - Remove this slider. Make 3 circles at 02:17:254, 02:17:583 and 02:18:243 instead.
16. 02:57:381 (5) - Remove this slider. Add a circle at 02:57:574, a circle at 02:57:958 and a circle at 02:58:343 instead.
17. 02:58:535 - Add a spinner here and make it last until 03:00:651. Also, make this spinner silent.

IceBeam wrote:

And probably 1/4 is overmap.

• - You should increase the distance snap for more jumpy diff, this is kinda slow
  - focus harder on the vocals, use more circles or faster sliders; makes map faster and more fitting for a hard diff

1. Add "DC" to the tags of all difficulties ?
2. The timing feels off... You should get someone to recheck it. D:

1. The spacing is really high for an Easy... Also, the hitsounds are really too low in the beginning and in the end.

1. Remove the countdown from this diff since the other difficulties don't have it.
2. The hitsounds are too low most of the time...
3. 00:01:100 (1,2) - Very harsh beginning for a Normal. It starts on a red tick (which is confusing) and with a stack (which is even more confusing).
4. 00:07:034 (1,2,3,4) - This placement was extremely confusing to me. I couldn't tell the rhythm at all.
5. 01:32:417 (4) - Unsnapped.
6. 01:33:408 (1) - This spinner becomes suddenly loud. It sounds really bad.
7. 01:40:331 (1) - Why is this so far from the previous object ?
8. 02:00:111 (4) - I wasn't expecting the second repeat at all
9. 02:10:660 (3) - It being stacked under (2) breaks its symmetry with (5)...

1. The hitsounds are too low most of the time.
2. 01:33:408 (1) - This spinner becomes abruptly loud. It sounds really bad.
3. 02:02:748 (1) - This spinner becomes abruptly silent. It sounds really bad.

Odaril wrote:

General

1. Add "DC" to the tags of all difficulties ? DC is something osu! site can't search, and there's already "DiamondCrash" in the tags.

1. Metadata:
   1. You might want to force the default skin because of the great amount of objects touching the scorebar, mainly on DC's difficulty.
   2. Would you mind disabling Letterbox during breaks, the top one overlaps a part of the "Regina" in the background, and honestly I don't think that it looks pretty good (well, at least it happens in DC's difficuly, which is the only one that has a break).
2. Tags:
   1. I guess you could add DC?
   2. I wonder what would happen if you remove Narnia from the tags. Wouldn't the search engine still find the map because of the source? You should ask somebody who knows better than me about that, maybe someone in #modhelp.

1. Well, mostly I would complain about the overlaps with the scorebar but if you force the dafault skin, I guess it's ok.

1. 00:27:473 (1,2) - Was this huuuge jump intentional? If it was, it totally doesn't fit the mood of the song, and you should change it to something smaller, perhaps using DS!
   Moving (1) seems like the better option, too.
2. 01:05:386 (1) - Hmm, this finish doesn't make much sense here. Rather than placing it in this circle, for consistency with you previous hitsound placing, I think the finish should be here: 01:04:726 (7) -
3. 02:31:100 (3) - Same as above, I think that the finish should be at 02:31:759 (4) - instead of here.
4. 02:56:814 - Uh... :
   
   Basically, the timing section is like inside the slider, and that can't happen
   Try this:
   
5. Tbh, DC's difficulty felt a little harder, which is weird

1. Please lower OD by at least 1. It shooouldn't be over AR, also 7 is rather hard for such a slow song