narakucrimson wrote:

50:984 (4,5,6) - Accelerated spacing wtf? xD There's no reason for an accelerated spacing here...

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

00:10:075 (1) - 3 grids left ?

Wiinter wrote:

Hard
00:33:257 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad spacing imo, it makes really hard to read the combo
00:36:893 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Insane
00:33:257 (1,2,3,4,5) - the same of hard about this spacing D:
00:36:893 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

1. I highly suggest to map a Normal diff, If you don't want to map it remember that you can ask for guest diffs.

1. 00:50:302 (1) - Definitely "No" for Easy, Change this for a 1/1 slider or something. (But no...)
2. 00:52:348 (1,2) - ^ , Both of them.
3. 01:07:120 (2) - I can't believe you did it again >w< . ( Try to keep notes on 1/1 and some 1/2 for easy.
4. 01:15:984 (1) - ^
5. 01:24:166 (5) - ^
6. 01:24:848 (1,2) - Why don't you turn this into a single slider to make things more simple.

1. 00:08:484 (1,2,3,4,5) - This will be easier to read if you stack (5) with the end of (2)
2. 00:25:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest to use an Horizontal flip (Ctrl + H) for this whole pattern because it looks messy if you place it right where the last pattern was placed too.
3. 00:30:075 (1) - Random New Combo, remove it~
4. 00:30:984 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Look at this as you can see, it looks messy and it's hard to read, try this instead
5. 00:55:984 (4,1,2) - Keep spacing consistent (Fix spacing between (1) and (2))
6. 01:26:211 (1) - Make this spinner end here: 01:28:257 - to keep consistency with Easy.

1. 00:33:257 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Don't reduce volume completely , reduce it by 3 or 4 ticks.

1. 00:17:348 (1) - This 0.5 is kinda unexpected , try 0.75 or remove it completely.
2. 00:54:620 (1) - ^
3. 01:10:529 (1) - ^
4. 01:14:166 (1) - ^
5. 01:26:211 (1) - Make it end here: 01:28:257 - to keep consistency with the other diffs.
6. I don't like some of those spacing changes in this diffs, consider reducing some of them or keep spacing completely regular.

theowest wrote:

01:25:312 the slider ticks becomes low in volume too suddenly. Add some more inherited timing sections to make it go out smother from that point. At least 2 is needed.

DragonSparta wrote:

Senaya's Hard
Please make a Speed Up SB

My storyboarding comprehension skills are lacking, so i'm not sure what I'm supposed to do for that, how I'm supposed to do that and why I need that. lol

kvnyaoi wrote:

★~

winber1 wrote:

1. I'm too lazy to make one 2. I can't make one 3. It's not too drastic of a change

1. 00:47:585 (3)-Add a whistle on the beginning. Trust me, It would be best if you do that.
2. 01:13:267 (3)-This finish here doesn't fit, in my opinion. =/ Remove it.

1. 00:17:812 (8)-Either add a finish on the end or add a timing point (green line) on there, set it as a Normal for the Sample Set, put the volume at 30%, and then add a finish on the end. I think the second option is the best way to go, in my opinion. If you do select the second option, then add a timing point on 00:18:040, set it as a Soft for the Sample Set, and then put the volume at 60%.
2. 00:25:540 (3)-Add a whistle on the end.
3. 01:05:539 (4)-I think you forgot to add a clap here. So, get to it!
4. 01:08:153 (2)-Add a clap on the end.
5. 01:09:176 (1)-Add a clap on the beginning.
6. 01:10:539 (6)-Why didn't you add a finish here? D:
7. 01:14:630 to 01:23:721-Add some more hitsounds please.

1. 01:10:540 (5)-Add a finish.

1. 00:03:040 (3)-Add a clap on the beginning.
2. 00:55:994 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
3. 01:10:539 (6)-Add a finish.

Colors Legend
You HAVE to do this
You should do this
You Could do this

1. Tags: Maybe you should remove "4"? Also add senaya on all diff and tags are different on Insane
2. White.jpg is wrong, it should be 800x600 (there's a ugly bar of background appearing )
3. Not really important but you should renasp kiai time points on the beats.
4. I think the last spinner should end at 01:28:959 - on all the diff

1. Offset is different here
2. 00:11:913 (3) - One more repeat fit better with the beat imo
3. 00:18:277 - This timing point should start at 00:17:822 - Also audio should be like for the kiai time, it's a bit too loud. Also I don't see why the HS change here since the music doesn't change at all, but I think it's ok.
4. 00:33:163 - This timing point should start at 00:32:368 -
5. 00:46:913 (1,2,3) - This stack is annoying for a Normal, you should move (1) somewhere else
6. 00:52:368 (1,2) - Sounds weird like this, maybe you should add a repeat on both of them or find something else, maybe beats only on the white ticks.
7. 00:56:004 (4) - Too close from the previous note, but I don't think it's so important.

1. Weird, I made a lot of stupid miss in this diff, maybe because of the spacing, don't know.
2. 00:18:168 - This timing point should start at 00:17:822 - Also audio should be like for the kiai time, it's a bit too loud. Also I don't see why the HS change here since the music doesn't change at all, but I think it's ok.
3. 00:33:168 - This timing point should start at 00:32:368 -
4. 00:38:736 (3,4,5) - Anti-spacing but it seems okay when you play it.
5. 00:55:021 - This timing point change nothing, remove it?
6. 01:09:191 (1,2) - This isn't really nice :/...but well don't know if it really can be better.
7. 01:14:645 (5,6) - Those notes are weird because of the vocal, maybe you shouldn't stack?
8. 01:25:100 (2) - The timing points and the HS for this slider fit perfectly on the Insane, why don't you do the same?

1. Hmm no custom hitsounds? Well I think it's ok if you don't use them anyway but...
2. 00:03:282 (2,3) - Fix spacing here?
3. 00:57:742 - This timing point change nothing, remove it?
4. That's all! This diff is great!

1. Seems like there's some spacing errors on your map (I'm not talking about the jumps and anti-jumps of course) you should check it.
2. Remove letter box in breaks
3. Colours are not the same on this diff :/
4. 00:18:168 - This timing point should start at 00:17:822 - Also audio should be like for the kiai time, it's a bit too loud. etc.
5. 00:24:873 (5,2) - This isn't really nice :/ You should stack them or space them more.
6. 00:27:827 (1) - Notes under a slider are bad, anyway the spacing is wrong
7. 00:31:691 (4,2) - This isn't really nice :/ You should stack them or space them more. But this one looks a bit better.
8. 00:33:168 - This timing point should start at 00:32:368 -
9. This one is great too!