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Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Ciao

[General]
1) The Offset and BPM is diffrent on each diff!
2) Your diff (Except [Luxary ReMiX]) is very boring, try replace 2 circle into 1 slider, so it never boring (don't too much!)
3) Your bg (Anime-Sad) need to resize to 800x600 (current 799x598)

[Easy]
Slider Velocity is too high!!!!!

00:13:557 (5) - New combo, very long for easy diff
00:34:631 (5) - ^
00:36:638 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:38:645 (1) - ^
00:39:983 (2) - New combo?
00:45:335 (4) - New combo, very long for easy diff
01:33:504 (6) - ^
01:48:222 (5) - ^
01:53:574 (4) - ^

[Hard]
*) Please check AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) to fix those stupid spacing issue, if line is Red, you have to fix it. If the line is green, it's fine.
*) The Slider Tick Rate 4 is awful, use Slider Tick Rate 2

00:12:717 (4) - Move forward to red tick
00:30:774 (5) - Not stack perfectly with 00:30:273 (4) at end
00:38:717 (8) - Move forward to red tick
01:19:932 (1) - Extend to 01:24:112
01:35:314 (1) - Extend to 01:36:485

[Luxary ReMiX]
00:20:947 (1) - Unrankable spinner (AutoPlay must have a bonus score at least 2000, current 1000)
01:10:066 (2) - Unrankable slider (Don't let the slider overlap themself, so you can't follow the fath)

Nice song
STAR
Infinity_old
286 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Infinity_old

Leorda wrote:

Nice song
STAR

thx :_D
Luxary
826 posts
Joined August 2008
Luxary

Leorda wrote:

[Luxary ReMiX]
00:20:947 (1) - Unrankable spinner (AutoPlay must have a bonus score at least 2000, current 1000)
I didn't checked it xD Fixed

Leorda wrote:

01:10:066 (2) - Unrankable slider (Don't let the slider overlap themself, so you can't follow the fath) I'm sorry, no. The slider is short enough, even if you drag the cursor at the end of the slider, you won't break the combo.
Here
Download: Nightcore - A World Without You (Skietto) [Luxary ReMiX].osu

P.S. Set this timing for all diffs
Infinity_old
286 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Infinity_old

Luxary wrote:

[attachment=0:a4d43]Nightcore - A World Without You (Skietto) [Luxary ReMiX].osu[/attachment:a4d43]

P.S. Set this timing for all diffs
riadd xDD
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Hi

[Easy]
00:00:846 (2,4,2,4) - Add whistle
00:05:864 (1,2) - Move 1/2 earlier
00:19:913 (3,2) - Add whistle
00:21:920 (1) - Remove clap at end
00:24:596 (2,4) - Add whistle
00:24:596 (2,4,1,3,5,1,3,1,3) - Remove whistle
00:40:652 (2,4,1,3,1,3,5) - Add whistle
00:51:022 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier and extand by 1/2
01:08:081 (4,6) - Remove whistle and add clap
01:10:088 (7) - Remove clap and add whistle
01:10:757 (1) - Add clap
01:11:426 (2) - Add whistle

[Hard]
00:01:096 (2,2,2,2,2) - Move 1/4 later
00:10:543 (1) - Spacing Error
00:40:138 (6) - Move 1/2 later
There are Lot of spacing error, I think you must replace all note with the distance snap

Star~
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
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Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Good map star!
Infinity_old
286 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Infinity_old

Kurai_ wrote:

Star~

kevincela wrote:

Good map star!
thx ;)
hez
80 posts
Joined February 2010
hez
:) star
Infinity_old
286 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Infinity_old

hez wrote:

:) star

THXXX *_*
Neethime
205 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
I‘m sorry,but I can't mod it under incorrect timing.

Please set timing to

BPM:179.40
Offet:175
Just as Luxary's diff,and then resnap all notes
(You can find it at Menu - Timing - Resnap All Notes).

After this done,if you still want me to mod,send a pm to me.

Good luck to your map. ;)
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
Ciao, ho voluto fare una mod accurata per darti più consigli possibili :3

Easy

Generale / Consigli :
Diminuisci il circle size di 1 (falli più grandi) (?)
Usa piu hitsound anche clap o finish o whistle da fare un bel ritmo
Migliora la qualità della slider art
Un consiglio fai sempre andare a ritmo le combo number
Diminuisci la slider velocity di un poco (è una easy)

00:14:895 (4) - L'hitsound finish ci sta male quà
00:21:920 (1) - Finiscilo a 00:23:927
00:24:596 (2) - Se vuoi rimetterlo sotto lo slider snappalo bene (devi muovere il beat nel fondo dello slider, e te lo mette in automatico bene sotto)
00:26:603 (1) - Finiscilo qua 00:28:610
00:29:279 (1) - Hitsound Finish?
00:31:955 (5) - Hitsound Finish? + new combo
00:33:293 (1) - Rimuovi new combo
00:34:631 (3) - Hitsound Finish? + new combo
00:35:969 (1) - Rimuovi new combo
00:37:307 (3) - Hitsound Finish? + new combo
00:38:645 (5) - Snappalo bene sotto 00:37:307 (3) -
00:39:816 - Aggiungi un timing senza KIAI time e nulla (?)
00:39:983 - Aggiungi un timing con KIAI time (fa l'effetto delle stelle che escono) (?)
00:39:983 (1) - Hitsound finish
00:42:659 (5) - New combo
00:43:328 (1) - Rimuovi new combo
00:45:335 (4) - Hitsound finish + New combo
00:46:004 (1) - Rimuovi new combo
00:48:011 (4) - Hitsound finish + New combo
00:49:349 (1) - Rimovi new combo
00:50:353 - New timing con il volume dell'audio a 0?
00:59:719 (2) - 01:06:074 (1) - Overspamming di clap (cioè troppi clap) puoi fare così per esempio v
00:59:719 (2) - qua un clap
01:00:388 (3) - qua lo togli
01:01:057 (4) - qua clap
01:01:726 (1) - qua lo togli
etc .. etc .. (uno si e uno no)
01:06:743 (2) - Sostituisci il clap con un finish
01:08:750 (5) - Spacing errato, snappalo
01:09:419 (6) - New combo
01:10:757 (1) - Rimuovi new combo + sto clap qui senza altro è orrendo ><
01:12:095 (3) - New combo
01:17:447 (5) - New combo
01:17:447 - Aggiungi un new timing con l'audio un pò piu basso (tipo a metà o un pò piu in su, da dare l'atmosfera)
01:17:447 (5) - Hitsound finish (solo se metterai l'audio piu basso)
01:19:454 (1) - Rimuovi new combo
01:25:476 - Aggiungi new timing con 3 in più di audio (non al massimo ancora, così dai l'efetto che si alza)
01:41:532 - Aggiungi un new timing con 1 in più d'audio (Sempre non al massimo)
01:45:546 (1) - Aggiungi new timing con l'audio al massimo :'D
01:32:166 (4) - New combo
01:33:504 (1) - Rimuovi new combo
01:34:842 (3) - Hitsound finish
01:45:546 (1) - Hitsound finish
01:54:243 (5) - New combo
01:54:912 (1) - Rimuovi new combo
01:48:222 (5) - Spacing errato
01:49:560 (2) - Sempre sbagliato
Se vuoi snappare le note piu vicine cambia il distance snaping e magari mettilo più basso per questa parte (ALT + la rotella)
01:50:898 (4) - Spacing errato fallo preciso con 01:51:567 (1) -
01:55:581 (2) - Spacing errato (usa lo snap)
01:56:250 (3) - Hitsound finish
01:56:584 (1) - Finiscilo a 02:01:602

Hard

Generale / Consigli :
Slider trick a 2
OverallDifficulty -1 (la velocità degli app circle) troppo veloce con i cerchi piccoli e troppo veloce per una hard
HP Drain Rate -1
Attento a gli spacing, molti sono sbagliati, usa il distance snapping
Controlla le combo e gli hitsound (metti piu hitsound)

00:02:852 (1) - Spacing sbagliato Snappalo
00:07:533 (3) - Spostalo a sinistra di un quadrato
00:07:701 (4) - Spostalo a sinistra di un quadrato
00:08:871 (3) - Snappalo bene, come 00:08:202 (1) -
00:08:537 (2) - Spostalo di un quadrato a destra
00:10:209 (3) - Snappalo bene, come 00:09:540 (1) -
00:10:543 - usa piu hitsound in questa parte
00:16:061 (1) - Finiscilo a 00:17:231
00:18:234 (3) - 2 quadrati a sinistra
00:20:241 (2) - Spacing errato, staccalo
00:22:414 (4) - Spacing errato
00:22:749 (6) - Spacing errato
00:23:250 (1) - Rimuovi new combo
00:23:585 (1) - Rimuovi new combo
00:30:774 (5) - Snappalo bene sotto lo slider
00:34:620 (2) - Hitsound finish
00:38:800 (6) - Spacing errato
00:39:469 (2,3,4,5) - Devo ucciderti ? xD lo spacing è uguale e il ritmo diverso
00:39:636 (3) - Quindi stacca questo da 00:39:469 (2) -
00:50:170 (2,3,4,5) - idem
00:50:337 (3) - Staccalo da 00:50:170 (2) -
00:58:196 (2) - un quadrato a destra
01:00:369 (7) - un quadrato a sinistra
01:02:543 (7) - Staccalo è confuso messo così vicino come gli altri
01:08:061 (5) - Hitsound clap
01:09:398 (4) - Hitsound clap
01:10:067 (2,3,4) - Spacing sbagliato (Diverso)
01:12:073 (4) - Hitsound clap
01:15:083 (1,2,3) - Un pò difficile per una hard
01:19:514 (4) - Fuori ritmo, Spostalo a 01:19:597
01:28:041 (5) - Toglilo
01:27:873 (3) - Snappalo bene sotto lo slider
01:31:803 (7,8,9,1,2) - Attento allo spacing / ritmo , non usare lo stesso spacing se il ritmo è piu lento/veloce
01:39:829 (3) - Staccalo da 01:39:662 (2) -
01:45:514 (1) - Usa piu hitsounds, è un ritornello >> + un pò difficilino per una hard se non vuoi cambiarli, ti consiglio di alzare almeno la grandezza dei cerchi di 1
01:52:703 (4) - Spacing sbagliato, snappa
02:01:900 (1,2,3) - Confusing
02:04:909 (6) - Spacing errato
02:07:250 (1) - La finisci qua? :[ mappala fino alla fine! :'D

Quella di luxary l'avevo già controllata e gli avevo detto cosa non mi piaceva ..

per ogni informazione che non capisci riguardante la mod chiedimi pure :3
Infinity_old
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Infinity_old

LoweH wrote:

ciao

tvb <3

penso di non fare la fine non lo so .. non ho tempo xD
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Add "The Rasmus" to the tags because they were the original singers of the song. Also, you might want to add "Livin'" to the tags because the original song was called "Livin' In A World Without You." Sadly, I don't know what version of the song was nightcored, but I think that information will be needed for ranking this (ask ztrot if you have questions on the author since he has been putting some pressure on this subject).

Make the BPM and offset the same in all diffs.
Afterward, make sure all the timing sections are snapped to beats.
Also, make sure the every note, slider (including the ends), and spinner is snapped to a beat also
Add luxary to the tags in all diffs

Easy:
Normal mod:
00:05:529 (1) - since you did not stack any notes so far, this stack was sort of random
00:06:867 (3) - why is the spacing shortened here, please distance snap this
00:19:244 (2) - spacing?
00:25:265 (3) - ^
00:21:920 (1) - please change how this slider looks because it is barely rankable, looks terrible, and probably should be snapped to the half note (red tick)
00:39:983 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part was pretty boring with every note coming 2 whole notes after the previous one with very little variation, so please change this section
I think you get what I am looking for, so I want you to go through the map and try to fix these things

Combo mod:
00:31:955 (5,1) - to follow your pattern of having a new combo every 4 beats, remove 1's new combo and adda ew combo to 5
00:44:666 (1,2,6) - to follow your pattern of having a new combo every 4 beats, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 and 6
01:06:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I am not really sure what your new combos are following here
01:42:870 (6) - new combo?

Timing section mod:
00:00:177 - there are 2 timing sections here, both of them are unneeded, so please remove both of them
00:10:530 - unneeded timing section, please remove
00:28:883 - ^
01:06:034 - there are 2 timing sections here, please remove one of them (if you keep the kiai section, please add another inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings as the kiai section but with no kiai and make the timing section a quarter note earlier. If you have any questions about this, look at the link in my signature)

Hard:
Follow the ideas I had in normal and try to edit this diff.
The biggest problem I noticed with this diff is that there are a lot of random jumps and varied spacings that don't fit the song, so please try to fix this

Luxary ReMiX: (Wow, this was hard)
Normal mod:
00:20:905 (4) - it is not allowed to have 2 items at the same point in time, so either the spinner or 4 have to be removed/changed
00:51:011 - I personally don't like 15s breaks, so can you please map a part of this
01:10:074 (2) - sadly, sliders that overlap themselves are no allowed in rank maps anymore as far as I know

Timing section mod:
00:29:258 - snap this timing section to the beat
00:39:960 - ^
01:17:418 - move back a quarter note for the change in hitsound type
01:29:725 - unneeded timing section, please remove
01:45:508 - snap this timing section to the beat
01:56:210 - ^
02:06:922 - ^
02:17:946 - ^

Sadly, this mapset needs a lot of work on the easy and hard diff. There are numerous problems in spacing, combos, and aesthetics. Luxary's diff was quite nice though, so just fix the first 2 diffs and you will be good to go. Until then, I won't give a star but feel free to call me back for a remod.
Doomsday
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Doomsday
Hi

  1. For the timing, I got BPM: 179.40, Offset: -167 (Don't forget to change it for each difficulty.)
  2. Also, for the current timing, why does each diff have a different timing, both different Offset and BPM? They should be the same for all difficulties. I would just put in the timing I've got for each diff, since it sounds pretty much fine.
Why do all these Trance songs have Anime backgrounds? They don't fit all that well :/

[EASY]

No breaks? In an easy? It should have at least one decent-sized break. New players will get tired easily :P. Even Hard has 2 breaks, so this should.


00:06:198 (2,3) - Make this spacing the same as the beats before it? After the constant spacing before this, doing this could throw some people off, especially with the low Overall Difficulty.
00:21:920 (1) - This is a nasty slider. Doesn't look good and it hard to read. I would rebuild this slider, making sure that it doesn't overlap. If you do that, It would be perfectly fine to read, and should look alright.
00:58:046 (1) - Make this 1/4 longer? It sounds like its just a bit too short.
00:59:719 (2) - Move this closer to the end of the last slider? This creates a small, but nasty jump in an easy.
01:56:584 (1) - I think that this spinner would sound better if it ended at 01:58:926

[HARD]

Change the slider tick rate to 2 like in the other difficulties?

00:14:389 (3,1) - I would space these out the same way you did for the 3 beat line that came before this. It seems odd how it is imo.
00:39:302 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These are spaced right and all, but the way you've laid them out, it makes them awkward to read. Perhaps stacking them might help?
00:50:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:50:864 - End of Song (2) - From there to the end, the spacing it pretty much random for the most part, random jumps, and random parts with small spacing. The music doesn't change here, so the spacing should usually stay the same here. :o

[LUXARY REMIX]

00:20:905 (4,1) - Hmm. This can't be right. Just put the hitcircle here, and start the spinner 1/4 later. That should work. (I would put something else there personally, since a short spinner wouldn't fit there imo.
00:31:780 (1,1) - I'm not keen on this jumps. Sharp jumps like this that come out of nowhere are pretty dodgy. It might be hard to do, but could you try and remove this jump?
00:37:131 (1,1) - ^
00:37:967 (1) - Random super-speed sliders like this are nasty, especially since the bit before it wasn't 2x either, making it pretty much unreadable. I would just keep this as a 1x slider.
00:44:489 (1,1,1,1,1) - Jumps like this that constanty change distance are just as nasty as the 2x sliders. They're nay unreadable at first glance. Perhaps you could make the jumps here equal length each? It would make it much more readable that way I think.
01:21:278 (6) - I see you've moved it to make it clearer, but its still hard to see. Maybe you could move it a bit more so it's even easier to see?
01:48:034 (1,1) - Same as 00:31:780 (1,1)
01:53:385 (1,1) - ^
01:54:221 (1) - 2x slider. I'd switch it to 1x BPM instead.
02:00:743 (1,1,1,1,1) - Same as 00:44:489 (1,1,1,1,1)

Yeah, I ragged on the jumps a lot in this one D:

By the looks of it, this could still use a lot of work before it becomes a great map. Hard isn't too bad, and Luxary is nice apart from some dodgy jumps and some 2x sliders, but to be honest, Easy is a mess. It looks like you rushed making that one, so I recommend remaking the Easy, but taking a bit more care on it. Its solid overall really, but the little issues add up i'm afraid.

EDIT: Damn Bliss ninja'in' me :(
robot609
16 posts
Joined April 2010
robot609
star!
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
Guys this is a appeal to everyone, please don't start with "nazi-mod" to luxary difficulty, it is awesome, i don't wont the map will be deleted or something else for your nazi-mods, same kubu difficulty and others, thanks to all
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
good map~
star :)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Revived.
Infinity_old
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Infinity_old

osuplayer111 wrote:

Revived.

thx <3
Last edited by Andrea , edited 1 time in total.
Infinity_old
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Infinity_old
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Sanji
98 posts
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Sanji
star <3
Infinity_old
286 posts
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Infinity_old

kr4t0s88 wrote:

star <3
<3 tvb
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
Nella Luxary Remix non c'è Bg
Usa le stesse sezioni kiai di Luxary!

[Easy]
hai fallato alla grande qui >,<
usa questa e se vuoi completa provando a usare i miei pattern >.<
Download: Nightcore - A World Without You (Infinity) [Easy].osu


[Hard]
Cambia il nome in Insane, ci sono un po di salti e stream non proprio facile da prevedere
00:26:929 (1) - Stream a posto di questo spinner? ( uno stream di 1/4 fino 00:27:932 ) oppure accorcia lo spinner fino a 00:27:932 e metti un Hitsound Normal Finish
00:40:305 - mappa da qui in poi ( cancella lo spinner ) fino a 00:50:003 (1) -
01:19:765 (1) - cancella e mappa >.<
01:19:597 (1) - fallo partire da 01:22:607 (1)

[Luxary Insane]
essendo che non lo vedi da tempo, ho fixato quelle parti
Download: Nightcore - A World Without You (Infinity) [Luxary ReMiX].osu

Yucali
83 posts
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Yucali
yatta! <3
Mephix
39 posts
Joined February 2011
Mephix
bella canzone :lol:
giO-
giO-
star TO MAAAAAAA :lol: :lol:
Infinity_old
286 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Infinity_old

Yucali wrote:

yatta! <3
<3

Mephix wrote:

bella canzone :lol:
Grazie :D

giO- wrote:

star TO MAAAAAAA :lol: :lol:
TA MAAAAAAAAAAAA ,bottanaaa auahahaha

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]

[/attachment]
kudosu , thx
lnside_old
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lnside_old
nice map and song, the best ;)
tigna
52 posts
Joined August 2008
tigna
savvatore nightcore viaggia xD
Luxary
826 posts
Joined August 2008
Luxary
~ Italian ~

Fermi tutti.

Allora, vedo che c'è un po di confusione qui dentro.

Tanto per cominciare, Haku, apprezzo molto la tua buona volontà nel modding, tuttavia se c'è una cosa che proprio non mi va giù è qualcuno che mette le mani nella mia difficoltà. Non sentirti aggredito, non voglio accusarti, anzi immagino che tu, non cosciente riguardo la mia attività sul gioco, ti sei basato sulle parole di Infinity e ti sei dato da fare. Grazie per l'impegno, comunque.
Tuttavia, non ho proprio capito questo fatto della mia inattività. Scusate se entro praticamente ogni giorno su osu, eh. Va bene, magari non ci sto giornate intere, ma che abbia abbandonato, proprio no. Quindi basta chiamarmi in-game o mandarmi un PM, e io rispondo. D'altra parte non vedo la fretta, visto che la mappa è stata resuscitata IERI.

Ma passiamo alla parte tecnica.
Vi lamentate tanto dei modding, ma intanto non fixate le cose più importanti.

Doomsday wrote:

  1. For the timing, I got BPM: 179.40, Offset: -167 (Don't forget to change it for each difficulty.)
  2. Also, for the current timing, why does each diff have a different timing, both different Offset and BPM? They should be the same for all difficulties. I would just put in the timing I've got for each diff, since it sounds pretty much fine.
E vedo che da allora non è stato ancora fatto.

Poi:Download: fix.rar
La mia difficoltà fixata + il BG che non si sa come si era perso.
Scompatta il rar nella cartella e ri-uppa.

E per finire, posso sapere perchè la difficoltà rimappata, Insane, adesso?
Non che abbia qualcosa in contrario, ma così la mappa ha un Diff Spread assurdo. Già Easy-Hard-Insane non era proprio dei migliori, figuriamoci ora. Quindi per lo meno crea una normal, e rendi più facile la Insane, o insomma fa come vuoi ma rendi più omogenea la mappa.

~ English ~

Some fixes.
Infinity_old
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Infinity_old

Luxary wrote:

~ Italian ~

Fermi tutti.

Allora, vedo che c'è un po di confusione qui dentro.

Tanto per cominciare, Haku, apprezzo molto la tua buona volontà nel modding, tuttavia se c'è una cosa che proprio non mi va giù è qualcuno che mette le mani nella mia difficoltà. Non sentirti aggredito, non voglio accusarti, anzi immagino che tu, non cosciente riguardo la mia attività sul gioco, ti sei basato sulle parole di Infinity e ti sei dato da fare. Grazie per l'impegno, comunque.
Tuttavia, non ho proprio capito questo fatto della mia inattività. Scusate se entro praticamente ogni giorno su osu, eh. Va bene, magari non ci sto giornate intere, ma che abbia abbandonato, proprio no. Quindi basta chiamarmi in-game o mandarmi un PM, e io rispondo. D'altra parte non vedo la fretta, visto che la mappa è stata resuscitata IERI.

Ma passiamo alla parte tecnica.
Vi lamentate tanto dei modding, ma intanto non fixate le cose più importanti.

Doomsday wrote:

  1. For the timing, I got BPM: 179.40, Offset: -167 (Don't forget to change it for each difficulty.)
  2. Also, for the current timing, why does each diff have a different timing, both different Offset and BPM? They should be the same for all difficulties. I would just put in the timing I've got for each diff, since it sounds pretty much fine.
E vedo che da allora non è stato ancora fatto.

Poi:[attachment=0:662d0]fix.rar[/attachment:662d0]
La mia difficoltà fixata + il BG che non si sa come si era perso.
Scompatta il rar nella cartella e ri-uppa.

E per finire, posso sapere perchè la difficoltà rimappata, Insane, adesso?
Non che abbia qualcosa in contrario, ma così la mappa ha un Diff Spread assurdo. Già Easy-Hard-Insane non era proprio dei migliori, figuriamoci ora. Quindi per lo meno crea una normal, e rendi più facile la Insane, o insomma fa come vuoi ma rendi più omogenea la mappa.

~ English ~

Some fixes.
No non te la prendere con haku , io gli ho chiesto solo di diminuire la velocita di 2 slider e non pensavo te la prendevi cosi' , infatti ti chiedo ancora scusa. Sono io quello inattivo infatti ti ho inviato un pm e ti ho chiamato subito su osu dato che sto lavorando su questa mappa da un sacco di tempo

passando alla mappa , ho modificato il timing e riguardo le difficoltà non sò come chiamarle . Per La mia mappa non sai darmi qualche consiglio per renderla piu' omogenea?

ah e non sò perchè , ma metto la tua immagine e quando la vado a giocare lo sfondo è tutto nero
wiimarco
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wiimarco
bella canzone
aspybio
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aspybio
star
Card N'FoRcE
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Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
Un post rapido perché mi è caduto l'occhio sulla mappa leggendo "Luxary ReMiX".

- HakuNoKaemi:
  • Rinomina con "HakuNoKaemi's Normal"
    Approach Rate +2, ora come ora è davvero troppo basso. Stessa cosa per la Overall
    Così corta la difficoltà?
    00:07:202 (6) - nuova combo e sposta più in basso
- Infinity Difficulty:
  • Approach Rate 8 e Overall Difficulty 2: dammi un perché valido.
    Slidertick rate 4 suona male.
    La prima pausa non ha molto senso: la canzone è nel pieno dell'attività. Inoltre subito dopo ci sono poche note e la vera e valida pausa.
    Sarò franco, la mappa è brutta da vedere. Il ritmo è ok per un buon 90% (alcune cose sono da sistemare di ±¼, come 00:21:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:27:598 (1)), ma alcune forme sono davvero un pugno nell'ochio e alcuni spacing sono semplicemente storti quando regolari andrebbero benissimo. Esempi: 00:12:048 (1,2,3,4) - 00:14:723 (1,2,3) - 00:17:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:18:903 (1,2,3) - 00:21:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - e potrei andare avanti per molto.
- Luxary ReMiX:
  • Molto figa.
    00:37:960 (1) - 01:54:214 (1) - magari falli a 1.5x invece di 2x? (però tocca vedere se con gli sliderticks nuovi conviene)
Ovviamente questo non è un modding completo.
@Infinity: prima di lamentarti di quanto nessuno ti dia una mano, comincia a rendere le cose interessanti da vedere, visto che ora come ora questa mappa non merita nemmeno una stella.
Lunah_old
Lunah_old

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

@Infinity: prima di lamentarti di quanto nessuno ti dia una mano, comincia a rendere le cose interessanti da vedere, visto che ora come ora questa mappa non merita nemmeno una stella.
lol
Infinity_old
286 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Infinity_old

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Un post rapido perché mi è caduto l'occhio sulla mappa leggendo "Luxary ReMiX".

- HakuNoKaemi:
  • Rinomina con "HakuNoKaemi's Normal"
    Approach Rate +2, ora come ora è davvero troppo basso. Stessa cosa per la Overall
    Così corta la difficoltà?
    00:07:202 (6) - nuova combo e sposta più in basso
- Infinity Difficulty:
  • Approach Rate 8 e Overall Difficulty 2: dammi un perché valido.
    Slidertick rate 4 suona male.
    La prima pausa non ha molto senso: la canzone è nel pieno dell'attività. Inoltre subito dopo ci sono poche note e la vera e valida pausa.
    Sarò franco, la mappa è brutta da vedere. Il ritmo è ok per un buon 90% (alcune cose sono da sistemare di ±¼, come 00:21:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:27:598 (1)), ma alcune forme sono davvero un pugno nell'ochio e alcuni spacing sono semplicemente storti quando regolari andrebbero benissimo. Esempi: 00:12:048 (1,2,3,4) - 00:14:723 (1,2,3) - 00:17:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:18:903 (1,2,3) - 00:21:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - e potrei andare avanti per molto.
- Luxary ReMiX:
  • Molto figa.
    00:37:960 (1) - 01:54:214 (1) - magari falli a 1.5x invece di 2x? (però tocca vedere se con gli sliderticks nuovi conviene)
Ovviamente questo non è un modding completo.
@Infinity: prima di lamentarti di quanto nessuno ti dia una mano, comincia a rendere le cose interessanti da vedere, visto che ora come ora questa mappa non merita nemmeno una stella.

grazie per i consigli =) vedo cosa posso fare
HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi
>.< ti avevo detto di completarla te, infinity, seguendo il modo in cui avevo mappato io >.<

ma comunque, guesto senza richiesta >.<

Download: Nightcore - A World Without You (Infinity) [Haku's Easy].osu

grazie CnF, comunque è una Easy ( sto cercando di tenere la diff bassa ) anche se attualmente ho aumento OD e AR e messo delle new combo all'inizio >.>

non avevo fatto il resto della map perchè avevo detto a infinity di finirla seguendo quella diff ( la sua Easy era un cumolo di Hit a 1/1 con slider e spinner insignificanti ), l'ultima parte è molto più veloce del resto della map imho, non posso mapparla da Easy

tieni il nome che ho dato io e fai diventare quella Hard più facile ( checcribbio ) e posiziona gli hit in mod più leggbile ( di solito riesco a leggere una Hard ), diminuisce il tick rate che è TROPPO alto ( 1 o 2 ), aumenta OD >.< (non avevo notato fosse così basso)
Luxary
826 posts
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Luxary
Download: Nightcore - A World Without You (Infinity) [Luxary ReMiX].osu

Fixati slider 2x e un errorino di spacing.
Darteras
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Darteras
star
BlackSavy
26 posts
Joined April 2010
BlackSavy
;)
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
ayey
Thankies for the request

Haku's Easy
01:09:732 (4) - add a clap at the end of the slider
01:58:227 (1) - New combo?
02:03:578 (4) - ^
I considerate this as a Normal , idk


Infinity Difficulty
00:12:792 (5) - delete this?
01:22:776 (x) - add spinner until 01:24:113
01:24:113 (1) - if you did ^ , delete this
01:29:715 - 01:33:729 - add a break
A little bit messy for the patterns

Luxary ReMIX
00:12:709 (4) - Move 1/4 back?
01:19:598 (9) - ^
01:21:271 (6) - align it with 01:20:602 (4)

Nice Beatmap and song , need some more improvement i think
Starred~
Infinity_old
286 posts
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Topic Starter
Infinity_old

ayey wrote:

Thankies for the request


Starred~
thx kudosu =)
Ibuki Suika
1,254 posts
Joined March 2010
Ibuki Suika
Nightcore

O.O
Ignacio_old
378 posts
Joined August 2009
Ignacio_old
Artist: The Rasmus
Title: A World Without You (Nightcore Mix)

Add in tag HakuNoKaemi

:D
frankestein_old
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frankestein_old
Nice map!!!
Hitoshirenu Shourai
osu! Alumni
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Hitoshirenu Shourai
(ALL)
No preview point. Might want to remedy that.

(Haku's Easy)
I see no problems. There're a few spots that qualify for a harder difficulty, but nothing too bad.

(Infinity Difficulty)
00:49:749 (4) - Move this beat 1/4 ahead to 00:49:832.
01:46:521 (4) - Extend this slider to end at 01:46:689.
01:54:214 (2) - Extend this slider to end at 01:54:548.
01:57:224 (3) - Extend this slider to end at 01:57:391.

(Luxary ReMix)
Nice map, looks fun and difficult. The pros should love it. Well done.
loli_milk
423 posts
Joined May 2010
loli_milk
ALL
No preview point

Haku's Easy
fine

Infinity Difficulty
Approach Rate 8, Overall Difficulty 7 >,<
00:38:461 (3) - 14grid right
02:05:251 (3) - 12grid right

Luxary ReMIX
fine
I like this

Star ;)
Infinity_old
286 posts
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Topic Starter
Infinity_old
thanks , update
masadara
16 posts
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masadara
star
Mephindros
2 posts
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Mephindros
star :D
siNkz
3 posts
Joined June 2010
siNkz
Star :)
Rigeru_old
426 posts
Joined January 2009
Rigeru_old
ok

good map !

star~ :oops: :oops: :oops:
Tomoka Rin
Former osu! Champion: OWC#1
382 posts
Joined June 2009
Tomoka Rin
star~
Kodoshi
81 posts
Joined May 2010
Kodoshi
piuttosto buona, stella ^^
Daiguren
430 posts
Joined July 2009
Daiguren
General
make the tags of 3 diffs same
if you don't make StoryBoarding , delete the file "Nightcore - A World Without You (Infinity).osb" plz
make your backgrounds size 800*600 or 1024*768
make the hitcircle/slider combos and playfield background colors same

Luxary ReMiX
00:58:026 - delete this green line please
01:13:746 (X) - add a note here?

And I think you can't make the Stack Leniency as zero ,because it makes Hidden mode more difficult and it's also unrankable.
Others are good~

Infinity Difficulty
I think volume of this diff. is too high ,50%-60% is enough
Annoying hitsounds o_O , you can try using normal-hit instead of the soft-clap.
And spacing of the notes is too bad (like 00:04:180 (1) ) ,use Distance Snap to fix them up.
Kiai time suggestion : 00:29:264 - 00:50:669 ; 01:45:518 - 02:28:327 (I think only use this part of kiai time is better )
disable countdown , it doesn't work at all
Stack Leniency can't be full ,it's unrankable

00:16:266 (X) - delete this green line (here are 2 unuseful lines)
00:32:274 (7) - new combo
01:02:542 (7) - new combo
01:03:210 (1) - remove new combo
02:01:404 (6) - delete this green line
02:06:923 (6) - ^
01:29:799 (X) - ^ (here also are 2 unuseful green lines )
00:22:241 (4) - add a note here

Haku's Easy
the volume at the begining is too high
HP + 1-2
disable countdown, not fit.
Stack Leniency can't be full ,it's unrankable

00:08:361 (1,1) - these two are too close , don't suit for easy diff
00:07:190 (1) - Distance Snap
01:02:709 (4) - right 1 grid and up 1 grid
01:09:732 (4) - new combo
01:12:408 (6) - ^
01:13:913 (1) - remove new combo
02:01:906 (1) - up 1 grid
01:24:238 (X) - delete this line

That's all. (Sorry for my poor English. ;_;)

star~
KagomeKagome
28 posts
Joined August 2010
KagomeKagome
good~ ;)
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
good map!!!!!!!!!

:) :) :)
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
IRC Mod

moddata la diff

Download: The Rasmus - A World Without You (Nightcore Mix) (Infinity) [Haku's Easy].osu
Last edited by HakuNoKaemi , edited 1 time in total.
ljqandylee
Former osu!mania 7K Champion: 2016
283 posts
Joined July 2009
ljqandylee
nice map and fantastic song~
star :)
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Here since the beginning
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Bubbles~
Infinity_old
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Topic Starter
Infinity_old

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Bubbles~
<3<3
Y4kuz4_old
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Y4kuz4_old
mi diff hard :D

Download: The Rasmus - A World Without You (Nightcore Mix) (Infinity) [Y4kuz4' Hard].osu
Dark_Ai
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Joined July 2010
Dark_Ai
wow It's really well :D
I love this Song too <3 *-*

here a star :D
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Hitoshirenu Shourai
My bubble seems to have magically disappeared. Re-bubbled.
Barney Stinson
298 posts
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Barney Stinson
Nice Map :)
Chewin
osu! Alumni
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Chewin
Nella tua difficoltà la seconda parte è buona, però nella prima bisogna sistemare un po' di cose.
Non sono esperto in questo campo ma è bella, buona fortuna u.u

Star :)
xMinorinnx89
19 posts
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xMinorinnx89
good map and song....^^ STAR
Lollitagirl
4 posts
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Lollitagirl
Bella beatmap!Mi piace!
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Haku's Easy]

Aggiungi "Luxary" nelle tags di questa difficoltà.

Aggiungi un Preview Point in questa difficoltà. Puoi farlo andando in "Timing -> Set current position as Preview Point".

Disabilità il Countdown, non è necessario.

La Stack Leniency è troppo alta, riducila di uno o due tick.

00:24:247 (3) - Nuova combo.
01:01:371 (3) - ^
01:04:047 (5) - ^
02:01:906 (1) - Rimuovi la nuova combo.

[Infinity Difficulty]

Rinominala "Hard", il mapset è tuo alla fine.

Aggiungi le stesse tags delle altre difficoltà.

Aggiungi un Preview Point in questa difficoltà. Puoi farlo andando in "Timing -> Set current position as Preview Point".

La Stack Leniency è troppo alta, riducila di uno o due tick.

Lo slidertick è troppo alto per i miei gusti. Riducilo ad 1 o a 2.

00:06:521 (3,4,5) - Non segue nulla, cambialo con qualcos'altro.
00:12:040 (1,2,3,4) - Assolutamente no, spacing sbagliato e confusionario.
00:20:067 (7,8) - Cambio di spacing improvviso, difficile da leggere.
00:22:491 (6,7) - Spacing sbagliatissimo, anche qui.
00:22:909 (8,9,10) - Questi sliders sono bruttissimi, senza offesa.
00:59:197 (6) - Aggiungi una nuova combo.
01:03:210 (1,2,3) - Ancora un'altro spacing confusionario.
01:07:057 (4) - Aggiungi una nuova combo.
01:28:294 (1) - Fallo finire in un'altro posto, suona male dove finisce adesso.
01:47:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - WTF?! Non ho parole >_> Spacing sbagliato all'ennesima potenza anche qui.
01:56:889 (2,3) - Anche qui, lo spacing!

[Luxary ReMiX]

Aggiungi le stesse tags delle altre difficoltà.

Aggiungi un Preview Point in questa difficoltà. Puoi farlo andando in "Timing -> Set current position as Preview Point".

00:28:261 (x) - Rimuovi questo break, è del tutto inutile averlo qui.
02:15:618 (1,2) - Ugh, questo spacing.

Non ci siamo proprio, la tua difficoltà richiede ancora un sacco di lavoro prima di poter essere definita rankabile... Fixa ciò che ho detto intanto.

...I really want to know how this got bubbled...
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi

osuplayer111 wrote:

La Stack Leniency è troppo alta, riducila di uno o due tick.

00:24:247 (3) - Nuova combo.
01:01:371 (3) - ^
01:04:047 (5) - ^ - graficalmente odioso oltre che inutile >.<
02:01:906 (1) - Rimuovi la nuova combo. inizia il synth a suonare daccapo
Download: The Rasmus - A World Without You (Nightcore Mix) (Infinity) [Haku's Easy].osu
cesc
1,066 posts
Joined August 2008
cesc
piccola stella per supporto, ma la vedo ancora lontana dal ranking.

Adoro la Luxary ReMiX
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Infinity Difficulty]

Rinominala "Hard", il mapset è tuo alla fine. Io la rinomirei in Insane >.<
Infinity_old
286 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Infinity_old

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Haku's Easy]

Aggiungi "Luxary" nelle tags di questa difficoltà.

Aggiungi un Preview Point in questa difficoltà. Puoi farlo andando in "Timing -> Set current position as Preview Point".

Disabilità il Countdown, non è necessario.

La Stack Leniency è troppo alta, riducila di uno o due tick.

00:24:247 (3) - Nuova combo.
01:01:371 (3) - ^
01:04:047 (5) - ^
02:01:906 (1) - Rimuovi la nuova combo.

[Infinity Difficulty]

Rinominala "Hard", il mapset è tuo alla fine.

Aggiungi le stesse tags delle altre difficoltà.

Aggiungi un Preview Point in questa difficoltà. Puoi farlo andando in "Timing -> Set current position as Preview Point".

La Stack Leniency è troppo alta, riducila di uno o due tick.

Lo slidertick è troppo alto per i miei gusti. Riducilo ad 1 o a 2.

00:06:521 (3,4,5) - Non segue nulla, cambialo con qualcos'altro.
00:12:040 (1,2,3,4) - Assolutamente no, spacing sbagliato e confusionario.
00:20:067 (7,8) - Cambio di spacing improvviso, difficile da leggere.
00:22:491 (6,7) - Spacing sbagliatissimo, anche qui.
00:22:909 (8,9,10) - Questi sliders sono bruttissimi, senza offesa.
00:59:197 (6) - Aggiungi una nuova combo.
01:03:210 (1,2,3) - Ancora un'altro spacing confusionario.
01:07:057 (4) - Aggiungi una nuova combo.
01:28:294 (1) - Fallo finire in un'altro posto, suona male dove finisce adesso.
01:47:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - WTF?! Non ho parole >_> Spacing sbagliato all'ennesima potenza anche qui.
01:56:889 (2,3) - Anche qui, lo spacing!

[Luxary ReMiX]

Aggiungi le stesse tags delle altre difficoltà.

Aggiungi un Preview Point in questa difficoltà. Puoi farlo andando in "Timing -> Set current position as Preview Point".

00:28:261 (x) - Rimuovi questo break, è del tutto inutile averlo qui.
02:15:618 (1,2) - Ugh, questo spacing.

Non ci siamo proprio, la tua difficoltà richiede ancora un sacco di lavoro prima di poter essere definita rankabile... Fixa ciò che ho detto intanto.

...I really want to know how this got bubbled...

ho fatto tutto..manca solo luxary
Hitomi May
362 posts
Joined September 2009
Hitomi May
I promised ;]
very nice song :3

[Haku's Easy]

so much KIAI, it's not ok :(
this difficult has a lot of not EasyRhythm

00:20:067 (5) - add circle
00:37:291 (1) - delete new combo
00:37:960 (2) - add new combo
01:07:057 (2) - ^
01:15:083 (5) - isn't in the middle of the previous slide, unevenly

[Infinity Difficulty]

"so much KIAI, it's not ok", 50%.. Change this please =)

00:16:053 (1) - move to 00.15.802 and extend up to 00.17.224
00:21:404 (5) - add new combo
00:22:909 (8) - ^
00:29:348 (2) - delete, without this circle sounds better
00:32:358 (2) - ^
00:35:368 (3) - ^
00:40:301 (1) - move to 00.40.050 extend up to 00.43.980
00:50:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe delete some claps? Will be beter
01:02:207 (6) - add fnish
01:06:722 (3) - ^
01:21:940 (1) - unshapely
01:24:448 (1) - ^
01:22:776 (1) - move to 01.22.692 extend up to 01.23.779
01:39:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - "maybe delete some claps? Will be beter"

[Luxary ReMiX]

KIAI =)
too long breaks ._____. Luxary are lazy :3
it's all Oo


Good luck, I like this map ^^

S T A R
Hitomi May
362 posts
Joined September 2009
Hitomi May
Oh sory, I forget
Why only Luxary in tags? Add Haku too :)
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
Il titolo è Living In A World Without You
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
Usa questi combocolour :D inoltre aggiornata la diff

Download: The Rasmus - A World Without You (Nightcore Mix) (Infinity) [Haku's Easy].osu
Infinity_old
286 posts
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Topic Starter
Infinity_old
Thanks :D
Infinity_old
286 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Infinity_old
edit
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
just suggestion

[Haku's Easy]
00:15:552(1)-add one note :3?
00:21:906(1)-Spacing

[Insane]
00:21:572(1,2)-why add new combo :O?
00:46:321(3)-add clap
00:50:585(8,9)-you know why..xD
00:59:615(4-9)-why notes' distance spacing is different?:O
01:02:040(5,6)-I think they can be with (1-4) at the same level
01:14:080(1)-one grid right
01:14:247(2)-two grids right
01:15:418(2)-one grid right
01:15:715(3)-with (1) symmetrical
01:16:421(1,2,3)-with axis symmetrical
01:25:786(3,4,5)-distance snap
02:03:913(4,6)-one grid down
02:06:087(1-6)-distance snap

i think this diff's some places doesn't look beautiful ,beacuse it is the distance snap problems.
:3 so ,you'd better check map one time and more to adjust distance :)

[Luxary ReMix]
00:44:679(1)-one grid right
00:44:983(1)-two grids right
02:00:903(1)-the same problem^
02:01:237(1)-^

;) this is Nightcore's maps style, right?

edit: don't forget to fix this:
Timing>>set current position as preview point
3 diff set the same position
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi

BakaHuang wrote:

just suggestion

[Haku's Easy]
00:15:552(1)-add one note :3?
00:21:906(1)-Spacing
Download: The Rasmus - Living In A World Without You (Nightcore Mix) (Infinity) [Haku's Easy].osu
ShaggoN
689 posts
Joined September 2008
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General
  1. Preview points, preview points. Set preview points. x3
[Haku's Easy]
Little boring imo, but everything looks fine.

[Insane]
  1. 00:17:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - Look betweet 3 and 4 here >_> Take care of good spacing please.
  2. 00:35:618 (3,4,5) - ^
  3. 01:02:040 (5,6,7) - ^
[Luxary ReMiX]
I dont like these moments where every note is new combo, cuz it's confusing for me. But it's rather design stuff so i dont complain. Anyways this stage is great.

Good luck in ranking :3 Star from me.
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi

ShaggoN wrote:

[Haku's Easy]
Little boring imo, but everything looks fine.
how i can make it less boring?
ShaggoN
689 posts
Joined September 2008
ShaggoN
Too late now. You'd need to remap. I just prefer style with flow of rhythm. Dunno how to explain xD
Your map is not wrong, dont worry. :3
loveFantasy
526 posts
Joined August 2008
loveFantasy
hi~

[General]
- you have no prelude in this song, i'll suggest you start the notes later in [Easy] and [Insane], just like how you do in [Luxary ReMiX]

[Easy]
<00:29:264> (1,1) suggest don't stack
<01:45:518> (1,1) ^

[Insane]
- i can't say i like the spacing..
<00:12:709> (4) vocal is offbeat, adding a note on <00:12:876> makes me more comfortable
<00:17:725> (2,3,4,5) why spacing like this?
<00:22:408> (5,6,7) dislike, also vocal is offbeat on (7), makes (5,6) into a slider, makes (7) a slider start at <00:22:659> and end at <00:22:742>
<00:23:578> (3) move the last nodes 1 grid left, 1 grid up (grid level 3)
<01:00:869> (11) first you should use larger spacing between (11,1), second the blank space between (11,1) is empty for me, suggest adding notes, or make (1) a reverse slider start at <01:01:204>
<01:02:542> (7) larger spacing between (6,7)
<01:19:598> (4) same as <00:12:709>, adds a note on <01:19:766>

[Luxary ReMiX]
- abusing new combo a bit
<00:12:709> (4) same as Insane
<01:19:598> (9) same as Insane
<02:17:291> (5) spacing (5,6)?

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HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi

loveFantasy wrote:

hi~

[General]
- you have no prelude in this song, i'll suggest you start the notes later in [Easy] and [Insane], just like how you do in [Luxary ReMiX]
 the prelude is good to map, sorry
[Easy]
<00:29:264> (1,1) suggest don't stack
<01:45:518> (1,1) ^
like them as they are now, sorry :D
HeatKai
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[general]
better make normal diff.
All diff should end at the same time.
[Haku's easy]
00:07:190 (1) - spacing
00:19:565 (3,4,5,6) - change pattern? for easy kinda hard to play like this.

[Insane]
all of the circle after slider , why Whistle + Clap ? put clap only better.
00:05:184 (2) - whistle + clap + Finish ? better put finish only
01:40:501 (x) - add a circle ?

[Luxary remix]
00:31:103 (1,1,1,1,1) - waa , flying colours . better change =.='' because some MAT or BAT didn't like this " New combo " thingy.
00:33:779 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
00:36:455 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
00:44:481 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
00:47:157 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
00:49:832 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:21:271 (6) - hidden slider ? better move it to other place.
01:47:358 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:50:033 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:52:709 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:00:736 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:03:411 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:06:087 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:11:438 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:20:970 (1,1,1) - ^

[Overall]
still need mods :3
Starred from me ~ *
HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi

heatwave95 wrote:

[Haku's easy]
00:07:190 (1) - spacing i should go out of bonds?
00:19:565 (3,4,5,6) - change pattern? for easy kinda hard to play like this. Hit(1/2)Hit = 1/2 Slider
[Insane] <- this need mods seriously(you did mod it less than less)
[Overall]
still need mods :3 <- should say.. i did not received "large mods" or "important mods" for my guest, Luxary one too. MAT and BAT know his style of mapping and won't lament new combo spam
aggiornata
HeatKai
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HeatKai

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

heatwave95 wrote:

[Haku's easy]
00:07:190 (1) - spacing i should go out of bonds?
00:19:565 (3,4,5,6) - change pattern? for easy kinda hard to play like this. Hit(1/2)Hit = 1/2 Slider
[Insane] <- this need mods seriously(you did mod it less than less)
[Overall]
still need mods :3 <- should say.. i did not received "large mods" or "important mods" for my guest, Luxary one too. MAT and BAT know his style of mapping and won't lament new combo spam
aggiornata
I just checked like that only, I'm not pro.
=.=
I'm newbie modder , I can check normal error , hidden error , hard to find for me , So don't talk to me like that .
Luxary
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Luxary
Nazi mods: fix'd something, about 01:21:271 (6) someone told me to align it with the previous slider, someone else to move it away... I think it's good now as it's quite clear but requires attention to recognize.

For everyone who hurrderp'd about combo colours in kiai: lots of people told me "Damn those jumps" "I ragged a lot on this part" and so on. Since it's so difficult for many, let's say these new combos will give a "HP boost" to players. If required, I'll lower even more the HP Drain, but I hope it won't be necessary.
AdRon Zh3Ro
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AdRon Zh3Ro
Hmm... Well, let's make this an exception.

I'll just do a general mod, i'm not in the mood nor patience.

Skin:
Em... I suppose you copied the skin elements from http://osu.ppy.sh/s/25366. Ask for permition (if you did, ignore this).

Insane:
Hitsounds doesn't make sense at all, seriously. Mostly, circles placement neither.

Some unrankable stuff like 1:51:204 (1,2,3,4,5) that doesn't make sense at all too. Unrankable because it's not intuitiveand it's goddamn ugly.

The thing that most bugged me is the general circle placement, which is very intuitive... not.

2:12:274 Continue? Eh?

Insane 2:

Hmm, hitsounds here make more sense. Although, circle placement is one of sadness too.

Ah, some sliders could be shaped better.

Also, those repetitive 47:157 (1,1,1,1,1,1) make noooo sense.

.,;,.

I don't want nor have spair time to explain and make significant improvements to your map.

Generaly, this mapset could've be better worked on. But as it is your first, seems... resoanable (my first one sucked as well...).
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HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi
Skin elements by osuplayer111, thanks
had talked with ...

no kudosu for you :D
Ayeen_old
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Ayeen_old
Tommorow, 2nd of April. I had enough Nightcore for today
NicoKun_old
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NicoKun_old
Nightcore FTW^^
~Star
Infinity_old
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Topic Starter
Infinity_old

NicoKun wrote:

Nightcore FTW^^
~Star
thx
ziin
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ziin
You really need a normal or a hard difficulty to balance out the spread. Insane is confusing and hard.

[haku's easy]
no preview point set. Make sure you update each time you do mods so you don't accidentally delete any updates infinity made (preview point is something trivial which you don't really have any say in on a guest difficulty anyway)
00:50:752 (1) - aimod is giving this a hard difficulty. It doesn't change much to just make it on the red tick after.
01:15:083 (5) - new combo? could use a whole combo double check.

[insane]
These anti-jumps are killing me. Unless you have a really good reason to make the spacing ridiculous, it would be better to properly space everything and manually put in your jumps. Nobody likes anti-jumps.
00:01:170 - don't map silence
fix kiai times so they begin and end on a white tick.
00:21:906 (1) - http://puu.sh/1G8Q

[luxury]
01:20:602 (4,6) - while this is probably fine, it looks bad, and really shouldn't overlap.
too much kiai time
HakuNoKaemi
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Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
Comunque
ho dato un controllatina all'Offset sarebbe più giusto usare -159
inoltre Prewiev Point a 105526(01:45:526)

Scegli tu se seguire il consigli sull'offset e se aggiungere il prewiev point al punto che ho detto

Followed both ziin suggestion, all diff don't have the prewiev point (just read the 3rd row of this post for my suggestion for the prewiev point).
Completed my diff with the last Part ... ( just duh >.< Star Rating increased to 2,71 )

Download: The Rasmus - Living In A World Without You (Nightcore Mix) (Infinity) [Haku's Easy].osu
ColdChester
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ColdChester
Star * Epic Map ^.^
Angeloid_Alpha
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Angeloid_Alpha
Star :)
Acrith
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Acrith
Star~~
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