DragonSparta wrote:

Selee's Night Flight
01:39:513 (2) - Add finish
Good diff

My Night Flight
Approach Rate -1
01:02:675 (1) - Too near the previous note
02:26:278 (2) - Poeple will think this is a 1/2 note
The jumps in the diff are too harsh XD
Please descrease the jumps spacing

[size=150][LK's Night Flight/size]
00:18:116 (X) - This section is too soft....+20%
02:33:998 (1) - Remove new combo
03:23:631 (1) - Add finish
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Havva star~!

theowest wrote:

SPOILER

Hi there!

Selee's Night Flight:
Yaay! I found something! 03:18:337 Add finish!
It is so perfect I hardly could have mod it...

My Night Flight:
03:18:337 Add finish!
03:21:866 ^
Well that was a lot. .__.

LKs' Night Flight:
00:43:042 Add finish!
01:53:631 Do not stop using claps from here to 02:07:748. I don't see why not to use them.

That's it. I really can't find anything more wrong with your beatmap... Therefore I think this is my shortest mod I ever written. xD
Awesome work guys!
STAR!!

senaya wrote:

Nice map, nice song, nice sb. Didn't find anything wrong, just some suggestions:

[My Night Flight]
01:46:572 (1) - finish at start? no
02:57:160 (1) - ^ no ;_;...

[LKs' Night Flight]
00:41:277 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - make increasing volume like in [My Night Flight] ?
02:58:925 - add circle here or make slider repeat one more time?
03:05:984 (6) - finish?

Sandpig wrote:

selee说需要一个normal+ 顺手做了一下(￣▽￣)

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb2.jpg",320,240
_M,0,113631,,320,240
_S,0,113631,,0.8
_F,0,113631,116278,0,1
_F,0,116278,118925,1

1. Unnecessarily tricky.
2. The tricks make me very angry.
3. I think you can't expect from the people be happy for be tricked in a peaceful and nice song.

Astom wrote:

hi ^^
[SB]
-Look on your .osb and set this: -fixed

[Skin]
-Try to add to your skin lighting.png, a custom made obviously. -done
-Can I ask what is this arr.png? Oh,I fogot to delet it..

[My Night Flight]
-Add a circle in 02:35:322?, 02:35:432 (4,5) - they look a little strange when you are playing, (4) is the only 1/4 circle in the whole diff. -fixed

Most of the map looks good to me, also I like the song and the sb so~ thans XD
Star~

Selee

KSHR wrote:

modding

[My Night Flight]
HP:+1 -ok, AR:-1(? -I think AR7 can read the jumps more easy
others all fixed

Selee wrote:

这样试试
00:35:984 (T) 改红线
再插根BPM 136 Offset 4258的

NatsumeRin wrote:

[LKs]
00:45:469 (5,1,2) - 这spacing实在太非主流了。后面还有一些，简单概括就是只要有一个new combo就完全无法由spacing判断这里的节奏。实话讲我不认为这是一件好事 只要玩过一遍 这些东西就会印在潜意识里 如果不能投入到歌曲里..那就没办法了 这前一部分是我在特定情况下做出来的
01:07:748 (1) - 和前面接下来感觉还是要whistle，3倒是可以不要 额..这个是接后面了 一抑一扬所以后面一个有Whistle
01:20:983 (4,1) - 这种spacing... 所以AR降低之后这种感觉就很强烈了吧 凭借approachcircle分辨不出来了
02:46:572 (1) - 这个肯定给星数做出了很大贡献但不是分数。。 额..偷懒什么的 你懂的
02:55:285 (7) - 还是扔到6和1中间去，而且之后也是这样的 好

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Sandpig]
HP或OD其中一个拉低1，这样可以把分降下去不少，让整体分布好一些。另AR+1建议 OK
01:17:895 (5) - 不和4对齐了么。。 排图的时候眼花了
01:24:954 (8) - sliderwhistle? 没注意，去掉了o.o
02:30:248 (3) - 这音的感觉是提前1/2放 比较长的vocal，说不准位置，提前放的话有一种抢拍的感觉，前边对应的地方也是，我都是直接用slider拉过去了o.o

Kite wrote:

[LKs' Night Flight]
00:57:932 (3) - 1/4 earlier? x
01:17:454 - Add beat? x
01:21:204 - ^ x
01:20:983 (4,1) - D: spacing changed
01:25:834 - This break feeld odd, you could/should map it the note1 beforehand is the end of this part
02:15:248 - Why break? D: why not? we shouldnt always make diffs with just to follow the song, isnt it? a diff filled with 1/2 notes doesnt make ppl feel interested, you know, sometimes a few different things might attract players more, perticular after you have totally possessed an E, an H and an I did like that.
02:22:307 - ^
02:29:366 - ^
02:37:023 - ^
02:46:572 (1) - This is just silly lol

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[LKs' Night Flight]
Set Grid Level 3 or 4 and fix spacing in whole map
Example: 00:41:939 (4) - i do curious about that have you ever saw the new combo at [00:42:xxx], or do you know what a new combo mean?

01:18:116 (3) - a little off screen yea, but acceptable, osu! even allow me 1 grid left and down it .
01:36:204 (2) - remove new combo
01:36:645 (3) - add new combo no
02:26:057 (1) - remove new combo k
02:44:366 (1) - remove new combo no
02:46:572 (1) - remove new combo those two bule note 1 were set as a fold line, other notes on the both sides show you a mirroring
02:46:572 (1) - delete this repeat slider and fill that place with notes. Seriously, it dose not fit the song at all oh? so you shall teach me another fitter way?

CDFA wrote:

LK:
00:41:278 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - You could probably do something a bit more interesting here, probably like, increasing the volume on each note, and maybe using some normal hitsound >:3~. the subject before the voice insert in should be quiet, and i dont wanna do my work be similar to the most of others.
00:45:910 (1,2,3) - ITT: this spacing ;~; cry seldom works
00:46:572 (1,1) - ^
00:50:101 (10,1) - ^
00:56:719 (1) - ^
01:03:998 (4,1) - ^
01:18:998 (2) - ^
01:25:395 - Bleh, I don't like this break. It's in the middle of the musical phrase, and I'm like "what" lol again, not to get excited over a little thing, a number of you guys have had more "awesome" works than me
01:44:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - WOAH MAN PULL DOWN THE REINS
02:00:910 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:04:219 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:15:028 - These. . . breaks ;`; if you want to a reason badly, just image that i help you in making you see the lyric clearly
02:22:087 - ^
02:29:145 - ^
02:36:425 - ^
02:39:513 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I'M GOING TO PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE. 你脑残吧? sry but i really cant respond you in eng
02:42:822 - HOLY CRAP 0.5 MY PANTS. are you a virgin mapper or not?

kioukiou wrote:

Uh...[LKs' Night Flight] : AR=7 ,the spacing is not so hard to read for me.

So...Bubbled.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Just passing around~ I know you posted in the queue, sorry for being too late ;_;

Anyways, pretty nice song, and I love the storyboard! The comet touch is simply <3

Not going to pop but there are some moments where the load is a bit higher than it should be. Right at the beginning, for example, the load goes up to 5x, when you're seeing only 2 images (yellow and red). This is because you still have light and 1 in the background, behind the ones you see (besides the own background of the song, of course).

As I said, not going to pop or anything, just pointing out that

Oh, by the way, I don't think this is that bad but I had to update [My Night Flight] just when I downloaded the map, not sure if it's just me or what =x

Sandpig wrote:

帮我改了吧……

James2250 wrote:

Sorry for the long wait

Selee's Night Flight:
-Start the kiai at 02:50:101 like the other difficulties

LKs' Night Flight:
-Still have some spacing that doesn't really fit here
00:45:910 (1,2,3) - if you want a jump here keep the spacing equal for the whole combo
02:33:557 (2,3) - odd place for a jump
02:35:542 (7,1) - anti jump still looks odd here..

(don't kudosu)

1. enable 'display storyboard in front of combo fire'

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. enable 'display storyboard in front of combo fire'

and that's all James2250 is back so I'll leave this to him

and a kudosu star~