So maybe something like Swedish in tags or something...

1. 00:23:862 (T) - mute the slider is a good idea, but the notes'd better have some volume, try normal 40 at 00:23:862, normal 50 at 00:24:095, normal 60 at 00:24:328.
2. 00:32:002 (1) - cancel newcombo
3. 01:15:258 (6) - use normal-clap here
4. 01:16:188 (3,1's first circle) - ^
5. 01:52:700 (7) - 2 grids left
6. 01:52:234 (5) - 2 grids right

1. Don't forget to add "Bass-chan" to tags when his diff is ready.

1. 00:09:552 (5) - This note is not following the rhythm at all, move it to: 00:09:436 - , It sounds way better.
2. 00:17:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - The jump between (4) and (5) feels so forced, try reducing it a bit so that doesn't break the flow.
3. 00:22:692 (4) - I suggest to don't reduce the volume at all It sounds weird. (Increase it by 2+ ticks).
4. 01:16:413 (1) - Lol I must point out this slider, Why don't you give it a smoother shape.
5. 02:22:692 (1,2,3) - I suggest to reduce spacing a bit, because those repeat sliders finish facing the opposite side of the next note.
6. 02:37:575 (1,2) - I feel that you're trying to force the diff a bit with this kind of jumps, reduce spacing a bit.
7. 02:37:808 (X) - Also a note should be here to follow the vocals.
8. Overall It was fun to play this diff, good job.
9. I almost forget this: The playtime is 3:06 and I can't see one single break, I highly suggest to add at least a short one.

Louis Cyphre wrote:

thanks for modding

I don't see Why I got Kudosu if you didn't follow any of my suggestions even though these are things that you should really fix.
I'll remark again the lack of breaks in this diff which is 3:08 long. Well it's up to you to change things or not.
Somebody deny that kudosu.

And good luck with the map.

Shiirn wrote:

I bloody hate normal-whistles. I'll put that aside.

ShaggoNormal
02:21:761 (1) - wat is this. Even if you can explain why it's there, make the zigzag a bit more even. This is called a slider. And if you listen close to the song you'll know why it's there.
02:41:994 (6) - This works better stacked on the slider end if you ask me. In my opinion works the same, and looks terribly when stacked. Your call Louis, but i'd leave it as it is.
02:43:855 (3) - ^ ^

winber1 wrote:

Normal
01:28:826(3,4,5) make them symmetric about the center vertical line? Good idea. :3
02:23:662(1) I kind of want to put a soft finish here. Soft finish added.
02:41:994(6) Maybe just put it at the end of the slider? same with 02:43:854 Nah, it gets stacked then, and looks uuuuuugly D: , besides...come on, it's not so confusing >.< NOTE: Changed with cool idea by Wiin-chan

Wiinter wrote:

cool mapset and song ^_^ Hey Louis, please give Wiin-chan kudos, cause she did great mod which made my diff a lot better <3

Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total.

And come on...3,22 star difficulty is not so tragic. Besides...is this map too hard for beginners? Srsly? x3