NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
you used a lot green lines with soft C1 sample to mute the slider slide, but not get a good effect (because you can still hear the slide voice at the slider's beginning and the end).
what i can suggest for you is to add a muted soft-sliderslide2.wav to the folder and change your "S" to "S C2", hope it will help.
a little curious about the "last slider", it's nice, but why edded at different point from different diffs...? 0 0
kiai is a bit long... use a re-kiai technique? (end kiai at about the half and then 1/2 or 1/4 after that restart kiai)

[Easy]
00:42:615 (2) - add finish at the end? (remove finish at 00:43:883 (1)'s beginning if you think the echo is annoying)

[Normal]
00:14:305 (1) - remove clap at the beginning?
00:43:037 (2) - switch the whistle place (at the beginning not the end), to keep the consistency with 00:40:502 (1)'s reverse. (according to the vocal)
00:44:727 (1) - whistle at the beginning?

[Hard]
00:29:939 (1) - remove new combo?
00:33:320 (3) - add finish at the beginning? (and maybe lower the volume at the next 2 notes?)
00:42:615 (3) - miss a clap at the beginning?

[[Shalon]'s Taiko]
00:15:045 - add kat?
00:26:137 - add don?
00:41:770 (114) - remove "big", cause there's no actual vocal.
00:43:038 (121) - maybe add big don here?

[Insane]
00:01:630 (1,2,3) - not sure about the triples like this (since the 2nd and 3rd circles are nearly muted), change to a slider? well... if it's just for increase the difficulty then i won't agree.
00:37:334 - add a circle?
00:53:496 (6) - remove?

nice song and map.

[Shalon] wrote:

fixed

Wiinter wrote:

Hey

Easy
00:42:615 (2) - instead of this normal slider, I think it sounds better to make a shorter one with a repeat (I mean this http://puu.sh/Lza)

Insane
00:30:362 (4) - new combo?
00:48:108 (8) - change this spacing to something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/50850?

Uhh, couldn't find much... XD It's a great mapset with this adorable skin. I just think you could improve more the begining >_< Anyways, starr'd. ^.^

Weezy wrote:

Guess I should have modded this earlier >.<

MP3 file should be between 128-192kbps

Nice map and cute song
Star Power

vincerio wrote:

hi hi
Here my suggestions

[Overall]
video - don't forget to mute the video sound :3 AFAIK this is rankable and only for decreasing file size. I tried deleting the song, but didn't get smaller filesize, so I'm leaving with sound.
timing section - don't exactly placed sound changing timing section lines on a note. It's a bit odd to hear when people do early clicking at this note yeah happened while offset change ;d fixed now
like in 00:14:306 - 00:34:165 -
color - bright yellow and white one is kinda similar .. use more dark yellow, or re-arrange the combo colour (replace other color between yellow and white) I don't think they're similar, leaving as they are
like red->white->purple->yellow = solved :3

[Easy]
00:23:179(2) - move end of slider up for a grid to make it symestry ok
00:33:320(2) - move left 1 grid lv4 stack the same place as 30:785(3)? ok
00:42:615(2) - off screen... not a big deal but beginner's mouse can go out from playing window lol... ok

[Normal]
00:34:;587 - fine...start kiai time with a spinner is not a good idea So many people had complained about this spinner already so I'm chanigng it...

[Hard]
00:23:813(1) - hm~fine... but a bit offscreen... how about replace this one~ ( you have a lot of space to deal with that )ok
00:42:193(1) - remove new combo hereno
00:42:615(3) - new combo hereno
00:45:151(3) - move the end of slider up a bit (for more smooth symestrically curve)ok

[Shalon]
vincerio doesn't know how to deal with taiko xd

[Insane]
00:48:108(8) - a bit offscreen? just a bit, it looks ok while play mode though so I'm leaving it
00:57:932 - start at 58:038? no

very nice :3
good luck~

swish wrote:

good :3

footix31 wrote:

IRC Mod :>

Nice skin, Nice song, and great map, good luck for the rank
(Star :3 )

ziin wrote:

recheck since it's been a while. I still love it.

[general]
easy/normal/hard don't end at the same time. Might I suggest 00:58:249 with a whistle on the end? The custom whistle sounds really good here.
you named your video "vid.avi" when it's a flash video. In case you didn't know, file extensions don't mean shit except to the operating system. Please properly name your videos in the future. Also, I removed the audio for you, but it's still in flash video: http://puu.sh/MIS
3.6 MB to 2.6 MB.

[hard]
This isn't exactly a hard. add some notes or call it normal+. If you follow the lyrics a little more in some parts it will help, like at 00:45:362.

[insane]
insane doesn't give you the right to overmap on the parts where there is no sound.
00:01:630 (1,2,3) - repeating 1/8 or1/4 slider or just a circle.
alternatively, 5 beats placed evenly to go with the snare brush.
00:05:010 (1,2,3) - ^
00:07:545 - you could add a note here
00:08:390 - ^
00:10:292 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - follow the lyrics. (ie get rid of both 2s)
00:19:376 (4) - no beat here, but there is on the end (guitar is really soft, and you don't map the other guitar notes)
00:21:911 (4) - no beat here (piano is really soft)
00:22:968 - (2) end the slider here
00:23:813 (1,2) - switch the order of these. nevermind
00:26:137 - beat here
00:33:742 (1,2,1) - repeating slider.
from here on do whatever the hell sounds good to you. You can get away with it because the shaker is hitting every 1/4th. Personally I think there should be at least 1-2 streams with 5+ notes in a row.
00:47:686 (7) - make it 3 circles.

ah too much stuff sorry. I'm really looking forward to this.

Selee wrote:

Yea, current timing is a little fast..offset is off for sure..

Try this?
BPM: 142
Offset: 802
ok, much better ^^

[Easy]
00:29:517 (2) - clap at reverse?ok

[Hard]
OD-2? (higher than Insane o.o?)no, since there are still people complaining this is too easy as for hard...
00:57:827 (5) - Ends at 00:58:672?ok

[Insane]
00:57:932 (1) - ^ok

You've used only 1 spinner in Insane, and it's silenced...so what's the use of spinnerbonus.wav ? Delete it?It's hearable(barely) even if silenced in-game... So I'll keep it.

Is the soft-hitwhistle2.wav same as default soft whistle? If it is, delete it.I've been told already that if someone has this sound in his custom skin, it will sound different and I want to avoid it

Nice song. Not even a full mod

BakaHuang wrote:

nice song and nice map ~

shoot star~

Odaril wrote:

General
Nice spread. Would have been better if Normal was a N and Har*shot*
Add "Shalon" to tags ?it finds "shalon" now, so there's no need
56 seconds... hum, well, try to avoid that =(what can I do?

Easy
I'm not fond of these big gaps between the sliders in the beginning. Maybe you can add a few circles in there to fill in the blank ?ok
00:57:844 (4) - Why is this not a single circle ?fixed

Normal
Same comment as for Easy, except more important here since the HP drain is higher.ok
00:57:844 (6) - Why is this not a single circle ? The slowdown actually makes it play worse than it should.ok

Hard
Same comment as for the other diffs...ok
00:57:844 (5) - Same as for Hard.ok

Insane
The jump in difficulty between Hard and this is too high. Try to make all the previous diffs a little harder (if possible)... And all the triples in this diff surprised me.ok
00:11:999 (2) - Why is there a slow down here ? The music is as fast as it was, nothing justifies it. And I personnally think it plays bad.fixed
00:23:196 (3) - Clap ? It will be a bit more consistent with your previous clap patterns.ok
00:57:949 (1) - Just like the slow downs in the previous diffs, this spinner doesn't make much sense. It might also be frustrating because of how short and surprising it is.I belive that I should leave this spinner after all

[Shalon]'s Taiko
Pretty nice, once pattern bugged me though, because it doesn't sound like the rest at all:
00:39:675 (104,105,106,107,108) - ddkdk would sound better to me

Odaril wrote:

[Shalon]'s Taiko
Pretty nice, once pattern bugged me though, because it doesn't sound like the rest at all:
00:39:675 (104,105,106,107,108) - ddkdk would sound better to me

• • 00:00:802 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:14:323 (x) - ^

• • 00:00:802 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:06:928 (1) - Add a repetition (otherwise you could add a circle here 00:07:562)

• • 00:00:802 (x) - Add a circle

• • HP Drain Rate: 5
  • 00:00:802 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:11:787 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
  • 00:57:949 (1) - Delete this spinner

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Source should be: "Kimi ni Todoke 2nd Season: Kataomoi" Nope. It's just a 0 episode, series starts from ep 1 and it's correct source
You are not allowed to mute hitsounds.
Ekhm, I'm pretty sure I've seen this many times before in ranked maps

[Insane]
This difficulty feels like a hard tbh.
Yeah, I'm aware. Let's call it an easy mapset ;d

xxheroxx wrote:

[Easy]

• • 00:00:802 (x) - Add a circle no, it's hard for me to hit so will be for newbies
  • 00:14:323 (x) - ^ this is fine with me

[Normal]

• • 00:00:802 (x) - Add a circle ok
  • 00:06:928 (1) - Add a repetition (otherwise you could add a circle here 00:07:562) I preffer the way it is now.

[Hard]

• • 00:00:802 (x) - Add a circle okie

[Insane]

• • HP Drain Rate: 5 there are people complaining that it's hard, not insane(look previous post ;p), so no
  • 00:00:802 (x) - Add a circle oki
  • 00:11:787 (1) - Remove the "New Combo" oki
  • 00:57:949 (1) - Delete this spinner I want to keep it so people can get different scores with SS

ziin wrote:

im back

green timing sections on red timing sections is a bad practice. Delete the green one on all difficulties except for taiko (where it doesn't exist) and make the red timing section custom soft 2.

On silencing hitsounds: the only sound your'e silencing is the spinner at the end of insane, correct? I can't find any guidelines/rules on the hitsounds stuff. All you've done is eliminate the spinner sound, slider sound. There shouldn't be a problem with it. Generally, you use a custom time with 0 volume to mute actual hitsounds though.

minor thing: whistle every other beat in kiai on beats 1 and 3.

Mok wrote:

Damn, this is fucking cute. *___*

Mok wrote:

Damn, this is fucking cute. *___*

YuiMugi wrote:

Just gonna say this.
Hard mode feels really awkward to play.

It's almost like if you were trying to follow three separate beats and try and combine them into one.

ziin wrote:

YuiMugi wrote:

Just gonna say this.
Hard mode feels really awkward to play.

It's almost like if you were trying to follow three separate beats and try and combine them into one.

it follows the drums, leaving out a few notes...

Granted the beginning follows the lyrics a little.

[Shalon] wrote:

congratz! very cool

eveless wrote:

congrats