alvisto wrote:

Hi Pete2528, since I like this map and song really much (even play the game because of this), I guess I shall remod using all the mod knowledges that I have gained since the last time I mod this.

General :
1. Remove these unnecessary files from your folder, and then full resubmit
Ito Kanako - Garasu no Kutsu (Shoes of glass) (pete2528).osb
Itou Kanako - Garasu no Kutsu (Shoes of glass) (pete2528).osb
2. Whistles are generally too loud in all the difficulty, and in some places, it sounds not appropriate to the music in my humble opinion. (listed below) =D

HARD
General :
1. Many inherited timing sections not fall on the exact tick problem. Please recheck them yourself to see which are the important ones to fix, and which are not...
2. The first part before the first chorus are too loud in hitsounds compared to other parts of the song in my opinion. Either soften out the hitsound or increase the chorus' hitsound volume maybe ? :3
3. All these are just purely suggestions (mainly the hitsounds), you don't have to change these if you are not feeling comfortable doing so as different ears have different view. =P
00:15:55 (3) - Clap
00:16:33 (4) - Remove clap at the start of the slider only
00:17:89 (5) - Remove clap
00:19:45 (8) - Remove clap
00:21:01 (6) - Remove clap
00:24:52 (1) - Finish
00:36:59 (2) - Remove clap
00:56:858 - Map this part too instead of the break ?
01:24:52 (5,6) - Remove clap at the start of each slider only
01:29:97 (4,5,6) - ^
01:32:31 (7) - ^
01:42:44 (3,4,5) - ^
02:17:11 (2,3,4,5,6) - Whistle too loud and too many. XD
02:19:45 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:35:527 - This weird inherited timing section is not on any tick ? Hrm... ( EDIT : Seems that a lot do not fall on ticks, never mind then XD )
02:44:39 (7) - Spacing
03:08:93 (7) - I really think whistle is not suitable here, ruin the beautiful voice, XD
03:13:61 (5) - ^
03:27:63 (6) - ^
03:33:87 (7) - ^
03:40:10 (3) - ^
03:43:611 - This inherited timing section must fix so that it falls on the tick since you are changing the BPM speed here.
03:44:19 (1) - 1 tick earlier ?
03:54:91 (1,2,3,4,5) - XD Too many whistles... XD
04:17:50 (7) - Whistle not suitable ?
04:50:23 (3) - Slider end at 1 tick earlier ?

Too tired to do Normal and Easy, maybe next time.... XD Goodnight ! It's late here... XD

And as always, great map !

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map.

General:
The file moesaya.jpg is too big. Maximum size is 1024x768.

Easy: all fix
Why are you using 1/8 snap divisor ?
00:17:897 (1) - Too close to previous object.
00:21:014 (1) - ^
01:19:455 (2,3) - This might be too hard for an Easy. Extend the repeat slider ?
01:29:975 (3,4) - Ugly overlap that can be easily avoided.
You should map the rest of the song.

Normal:
I think you should use prettier sliders... Those kind of don't fit the softness of the song.
00:46:728 (1) - This one's hidden by the previous slider. fix
00:59:975 (3) - Too close to (2). fix
01:14:001 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't think you should stack objects with different timings in a Normal diff. NO!!
01:18:676 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too hard for a normal diff. Either remove them, either make them a repeat slider.ok it change
01:35:429 (4) - Move it two grids (lvl 3) right, then move 01:36:209 (5,6,7) - two grids right as well.fix :3
01:50:235 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think yo ushould stack objects with different timings in a Normal diff. NO!!
01:59:975 (1) - Move it one grid right so it lines up vertically with (2). fix
02:31:533 (4,5,6) - Move one grid left. fix
02:52:962 (6,7) - Ugly and avoidable overlap. lol it fix
03:01:533 (1,1,1) - This is way too hard for a normal diff. Make it one repeat slider. it will fun if it has something hard,not change
03:24:520 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed. Move it the other way around (2): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19578ok
03:25:300 (3,5) - Ugly overlap that can be easily avoided. done
03:55:689 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't think you should stack objects with different timings for a Normal diff. yes but it ok for me
04:26:858 (5) - Move it so the end stacks correctly with (4). ok :3 done
04:48:287 (2,3,4,5) - I don't think you should stack objects with different timings for a Normal diff. NO!!
4:31 draining time will have to go for approval.


Hard:
HP drain rate -1. XD i don't change it again
00:27:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ugly overlap. love it. not change :3
00:30:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Select all these and stack (1) properly under the end of the previous slider. done
01:10:494 (6,7) - Ugly overlap that can be easily avoided. fix
01:17:118 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when you complete the spinner. done
01:47:507 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing: (4) is too close to (3). fix
01:49:455 (1,2) - Stack properly. hm... i will change it ♥
4:36 draining time will have to go for approval.