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~star~

Artist name is "Itou Kanako"
nicemap

Yes wrote:

hi n_n

SPOILER

hard
first timing section sounds too loud. lower please
01:16:92 timing section- raise volume a few ticks
01:44:78 (6) - finish?
03:58:02 (7) - finish at the end of slider
04:17:50 (7) - whistle?
04:53:35 (4) - new combo

^ fix all

easy
delete the timing section after it ends.
maybe add kiai time to the chorus?
00:40:10 (1) - space too far from 4
01:15:55 (x) - add note
01:17:11 (x) - ^
01:25:30 (4) - put a note here instead of slider, and start the slider at 01:26:07
01:51:40 (6) - finish

^Fix All

normal
first timing section sounds really loud. lower a little
00:24:91 (7) - new combo?
00:30:36 (1) - take off new combo
01:48:67 (4) - overlap looks weird
01:51:40 (9) - finish
01:57:44 - reinsert this break
02:01:53 (2) - new combo? not sure about these
02:03:09 (3) - ^
02:04:65 (4) - ^
02:06:20 (5) - ^
02:07:76 (6) - ^
02:09:32 (8) - ^
02:52:96 (6) - align with 4 and 8 << i use new style Thank you
02:53:74 (8) - finish
03:27:83 (1) - end at 03:29:97
03:35:42 (x) - note
03:35:81 (x) - note

^Fix all


i like the skin lots (: great job with it!
sometimes the map sounds like it needs more hitsounds but i don't really know what you should put in xD anyway, here's a star!

thank you for mod my map

cyborg wrote:

Artist name is "Itou Kanako"
nicemap

when i change artist name i can't upload my map. when i can find how to change name i will update again

thank you for mod my map too

i got that i can change artist name now.

Update it


when you edit artist name don't save just upload it work!!

ยังไม่ค่อยเข้าใจภาษา mod เท่าไหร่
แต่ชอบเพลงมากก๊ะ
มาให้ ดาว ละกันจ้า

poypk wrote:

ยังไม่ค่อยเข้าใจภาษา mod เท่าไหร่
แต่ชอบเพลงมากก๊ะ
มาให้ ดาว ละกันจ้า

ขอบคุณครับ

/me ไปขยายพุงให้ใหญ่กว่าเดิม

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mtmcl wrote:

I'm pretty sure you should remove "(Shoes of glass)" from the title since it's really just a translation. Make that change and I will consider bubbling.

For now, have a star.

ok i change title song name.

Thank you

update

add hitsound

fast and simple

starred

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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Thank you alot

Overall:only two hit colors?i advise you to add more
you have 3 .osb files.plz remove two of them

[Easy]
decrease slider tick.sound bad now.
01:06:98 (2,3,4,5) - spacing
01:36:59 (4) - move 1 grid to the down~nazi~

[Normal]
decrease slider tick

[Hard]
01:54:91 (6) - new combo
02:32:70 (5) - ^
02:33:48 (1) - remvoe new combo
02:58:41 (8) - ugly

Last things, it's sad to say, but your map is way too long, try to aim for 3 minutes. (If you're aiming for ranking)
03:42:83 could be a good end.

star*

gdeath wrote:

Overall:only two hit colors?i advise you to add more
you have 3 .osb files.plz remove two of them

[Easy] fixed
decrease slider tick.sound bad now.
01:06:98 (2,3,4,5) - spacing
01:36:59 (4) - move 1 grid to the down~nazi~

[Normal] fixed
decrease slider tick

[Hard] fixed
01:54:91 (6) - new combo
02:32:70 (5) - ^
02:33:48 (1) - remvoe new combo
02:58:41 (8) - ugly

Last things, it's sad to say, but your map is way too long, try to aim for 3 minutes. (If you're aiming for ranking)
03:42:83 could be a good end.

^ thank you about your avices. but i am enjoy to mapping song at begin to the end of song, i hope the players will enjoy too. I know it hard to mod very long song. thank you again.

star*

thank you about mod and star

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DJPop wrote:

กำลังซึ้งเลย จบเพลงได้โคตรแย่ =_="

~Hard~
00:46:72 (1) - repeat 5 times
00:48:28 (1) - ^
00:49:84 (1) - ^
00:51:40 (1) - ^
01:38:74 (1) - start on white tick
01:44:97 (1) - ^
02:16:72 (1,2) - don't overlapped
03:21:59 (1) - start on white tick
03:31:53 (4) - กลับด้านแล้ว -*- กลับด้าน ? คงหมายถึงเอามาใว้ด้านล่างละมั้ง
03:52:83 (1,2,3,4) - not synced

ดาวยังไม่ให้ ไว้ว่างๆจะมาดูต่อ

แก้แล้วตามนั้น ขอบคุณครับ

v
v

pete2528 wrote:

03:31:53 (4) - กลับด้านแล้ว -*- กลับด้าน ? คงหมายถึงเอามาใว้ด้านล่างละมั้ง

เปล่า ลูกศรย้อนกลับมันไม่ถูกทางน่ะ

Bump~

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Thanks for the map , it's realy great.
I'm will look forward for you map beeng ranked ^_^

Don't let this map die.... xD

i am back again XD

thank you

RIP

อยากให้มันแรงค์ฮะ (1เสียง) ว่างๆขุดขึ้นมาทำใหม่สะด้วยหล่ะ
หนูขอออออ

I really love this game, also this song... Would you mind finishing this map?

อย่าลืมเปลี่ยนเปน pending นะ
ดาว ><

ไว้จะรอเล่นงิ

>w<

seems fine

gl!

IRC Mod by dvorak
change source to Saya no Uta

thank you

move to pending and I will do a mod post later

ย้ายไป Pending Beatmaps ละ

Rank เมื่อไหร่ปิดซอยเลี้ยงนะคะ (ล้อเล่น O . O) สู้ๆงิ > w <

เมื่อใหร Bat จะมาหว่า

ข้้อความโพสแรก ในช่อง spoiler นี่ไม่เป็นภาษาเลย - -"

แล้วก็แก้ชื่อกระทู้ด้วย ป้องกันความสับสน

แก้แล้วครับ

Everytime I hear this song in my mp3 player, I remember you~~

Get it ranked ! ^.^

Star~

เอาดาวไปเลย !

You know, the proper and less retarded way of putting your song title would be just "Shoes of Glass". Why use "Garasu no Kutsu"? Don't ever use something like this for beatmaps, ever. I am surprised no one pointed this out yet.

OH-SHI- wrote:

You know, the proper and less retarded way of putting your song title would be just "Shoes of Glass". Why use "Garasu no Kutsu"? Don't ever use something like this for beatmaps, ever. I am surprised no one pointed this out yet.

thank you . about my map's name, it used to be "Itou Kanako - Garasu no Kutsu (Shoes of glass)" but i change it because .....

mtmcl wrote:

I'm pretty sure you should remove "(Shoes of glass)" from the title since it's really just a translation. Make that change and I will consider bubbling.

For now, have a star.

pete2528 wrote:

OH-SHI- wrote:

You know, the proper and less retarded way of putting your song title would be just "Shoes of Glass". Why use "Garasu no Kutsu"? Don't ever use something like this for beatmaps, ever. I am surprised no one pointed this out yet.

thank you . about my map's name, it used to be "Itou Kanako - Garasu no Kutsu (Shoes of glass)" but i change it because .....

mtmcl wrote:

I'm pretty sure you should remove "(Shoes of glass)" from the title since it's really just a translation. Make that change and I will consider bubbling.

For now, have a star.

Point taken. Oh yeah, this is a good map. Star'd.

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • Add some Tags
  • If you could get an mp3 that is not cut off at the end, that would be awesome
  • 01:18:676 - Set current position as preview point (all diffs)
  • Delete "Ito Kanako - Garasu no Kutsu (Shoes of glass) (pete2528).osb"

[Easy]

• • Are these breaks really necessary? Delete them and add some patterns

[Normal]

• • Slider Velocity: 1,60
  • 00:02:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Delete these circles/sliders

[Hard]

• • Slider Velocity: 1,80
  • 00:57:000 (break) - Delete this break and add some sliders

Ok this map is good, nothing wrong with it, I might even say you're a good mapper.
However, the map is uninteresting. All three difficulties.
This is just my personal opinion

Revived.

^
thank you

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • Add some Tags
  • If you could get an mp3 that is not cut off at the end, that would be awesome
  • 01:18:676 - Set current position as preview point (all diffs)
  • Delete "Ito Kanako - Garasu no Kutsu (Shoes of glass) (pete2528).osb"

[Easy]

• • Are these breaks really necessary? Delete them and add some patterns

[Normal]

• • Slider Velocity: 1,60
  • 00:02:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Delete these circles/sliders

[Hard]

• • Slider Velocity: 1,80
  • 00:57:000 (break) - Delete this break and add some sliders

Ok this map is good, nothing wrong with it, I might even say you're a good mapper.
However, the map is uninteresting. All three difficulties.
This is just my personal opinion

all done and Thank you

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map.

General:
The file moesaya.jpg is too big. Maximum size is 1024x768.

Easy:
Why are you using 1/8 snap divisor ?
00:17:897 (1) - Too close to previous object.
00:21:014 (1) - ^
01:19:455 (2,3) - This might be too hard for an Easy. Extend the repeat slider ?
01:29:975 (3,4) - Ugly overlap that can be easily avoided.
You should map the rest of the song.

Normal:
I think you should use prettier sliders... Those kind of don't fit the softness of the song.
00:46:728 (1) - This one's hidden by the previous slider.
00:59:975 (3) - Too close to (2).
01:14:001 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't think you should stack objects with different timings in a Normal diff.
01:18:676 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too hard for a normal diff. Either remove them, either make them a repeat slider.
01:35:429 (4) - Move it two grids (lvl 3) right, then move 01:36:209 (5,6,7) - two grids right as well.
01:50:235 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think yo ushould stack objects with different timings in a Normal diff.
01:59:975 (1) - Move it one grid right so it lines up vertically with (2).
02:31:533 (4,5,6) - Move one grid left.
02:52:962 (6,7) - Ugly and avoidable overlap.
03:01:533 (1,1,1) - This is way too hard for a normal diff. Make it one repeat slider.
03:24:520 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed. Move it the other way around (2): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19578
03:25:300 (3,5) - Ugly overlap that can be easily avoided.
03:55:689 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't think you should stack objects with different timings for a Normal diff.
04:26:858 (5) - Move it so the end stacks correctly with (4).
04:48:287 (2,3,4,5) - I don't think you should stack objects with different timings for a Normal diff.
4:31 draining time will have to go for approval.


Hard:
HP drain rate -1.
00:27:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ugly overlap.
00:30:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Select all these and stack (1) properly under the end of the previous slider.
01:10:494 (6,7) - Ugly overlap that can be easily avoided.
01:17:118 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when you complete the spinner.
01:47:507 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing: (4) is too close to (3).
01:49:455 (1,2) - Stack properly.
4:36 draining time will have to go for approval.

thank you about your mod.
:3

>< mod via irc ><

thx termerys for irc mod

ที่จริงอยากได้รายละเอียดมากกว่านี้นะ

Sound mod check.

ปล.แล้วแต่ว่าจะแก้หรือไม่แก้นะครับ แนะนำเฉยๆ

[Easy]
• โดยรวมผมว่าสไลด์ไวไปสำหรับมือใหม่นะ
• ไม่ควรใส่เสียง whistle พร้อม clap ครับ (บางคนหนวกหู-.-)
• Easy ถ้าจะทำไม่เต็มเพลงตัด SB ตอนจบออกน่าจะดีกว่าครับ -.-

Aaah, sorry. ._. I had a huge mod half-done and I accidentally refreshed the page instead of resuming playtesting in osu! and killed my post. Hopefully I won't be so stupid this time around. :P

As per your awesome emote in #modReqs"

[General]
I have a slighty-higher quality MP3 if you'd like.
I really don't like the way the countdown sounds against the song itself. It's a nice slow beginning, and having some guys shouting, "Are you ready?" over it sounds kinda odd.
There are a lot of soft whistles on slider slides that I really don't like the sound of - some people like them/don't care though, so I'll just mention this here and move on.
01:20:235 - I'd start kiai time here. It's right when the band kicks into high gear and it fits the fountain much better to me.

[Skin]
The rainbow colored text on spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-spin all clash really badly with the images that you have chosen to sb with. I'd recommend you use a solid color set that matches with the dark green theme going on here.
play-warningarrow looks really bad with that green background color. Make it transparent or use something else.
I'm not sure what Arrow.png is doing in the folder either.
The comboburst made me laugh.

[SB]
Keep your SB images at 800x600 or smaller.
This applies to moesaya, and h1 (801x601, lol)
gd005 has some really bad artefacting going on, and zooming in doesn't help it at all. Maybe try to find a better source picture to work with?
03:25:592 - I dunno if you had intended for this, but having the SB zoom in on a fictitious underaged girl's underwear isn't something that should be promoted in osu!, I'm thinking. :P

[Easy]
00:52:962 (1) - This combo is reaaally long for an easy.
00:59:196 (1) - ^
01:31:533 (4) - This .5 bpm slider doesn't feel right at all to me. I'm already not much of a fan of .5 sections in easy/normals anyway, hehe.
01:31:533 - I think you accidentally stopped your kiai here too.
Aw, you didn't finish it.

[Normal]
In general, a lot of your combos run really long. :/
00:14:780 (1,1) - Interesting that you chose to do long slow sliders compared to easy where you did something more interesting. You have music to work with - don't opt for boring long sliders when you don't need to! :D
00:27:248 (1,2,1) - ^
00:49:845 (5) - New combo
01:28:222 (4,1) - Spacing might be a bit too far, though it's not too bad either. If it's intentional - don't fix it. If it wasn't, maybe keep it. :D
01:41:663 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for a normal.
01:47:507 (1) - ^ Seems to be the case for most of the notes after spinners in this diff.
03:01:144 (9,1,1,1) - I dunno about something like this in a normal. If you insist on having them, though, at least turn the repeats so they're not covering the next slider. It's hard to read the way they are now.
03:12:442 (3) - There's so much more you could do rather than a long slider here. :(
03:03:092 - Start kiai here
03:54:910 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Eeh, a giant stack... Make it move around. Less boring that way.
04:11:663 - Start kiai here. (I'm sure these'll apply to hard as well, if you choose to use them)
04:34:650 (5) - Another long slider you could do so much more with. :/

[Hard]
In general, this feels really cramped due to low slider velocity/distance snapping. Consider upping them a bit.
The streams feel kind of forced to me too.
Reduce hp drain by 2 or so. I'd also reduce OD, but I'm not that great of a judge for that sort of thing.
01:54:520 (7,1) - Spacing
02:49:455 (4,1) - Spacing?

And there you go. Sorry for taking so long. >> Call me back for a re-mod after a few others mod, if you'd like.

Do want >_<

it is great

Star star star.

สู้ๆนะเฮีย

テーさんがんばって

You may want to do a full resubmission. I'm having problems downloading the map.

star~

thank you everyone

Graveyard again ?

I'm still waiting for this...

ff, whai?

...)

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