Ono's Taiko Oni
- Patterns are overally, pretty random.
- Try to use big notes more regulary, and spare them for some epic parts. Currently it's just in everywhere.
00:17:327 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I prefer kkkkkkkd in 1/6 starting at 00:17:441. You can add don in 00:17:355, but that makes a pattern a little bit hard, so consider it.
00:54:812 (1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - Im kinda negative about this stream. Make it more easier, or split up to 'x xxx xxxxx x x x'.
01:08:184 (2) - K?
01:09:384 (2,1,2,3) - 'xxx x' or 'x xxx' would be better.
01:11:955 (x) - Consider adding don here?
01:18:127 ~ 01:27:555 - I personally think big notes are spammed here. Reconsider them?
01:39:727 (1,2,3,1) - Actually this part is not for 1/3s, but whatever.
01:49:669 (3) - Remove finish?
01:54:469 (1,2,3,1) - Similar issue with 01:39:727, but it's not that impressive this time.
02:00:641 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 'x xxx xxxxx x x x' would be better, same as 00:54:812.
02:10:069 (1,1,2,1) - 'xxx x' or 'x xxx' would be better.
02:18:469 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3) - This kind of rhythm isn't suit well with music, if you asked me.
Hmm, at least patterns flow somewhat good with the music, but it's not that suit well, I think. I'd say, integrity of the map is kinda low.
Patterns are too changing so the map lacks representative parts or patterns. Consider total composition of the song next time. (Actually most songs are quite repetitive, so it's not that strange that the patterns become somewhat repetitive sometimes.)
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