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Your patterns are messy. animask uses some symmetry when he makes his patterns, and symmetry makes his difficulty look pretty. Maybe you should add some more symmetry to your difficulties?

Some suggestions:

[Easy]
00:20:034 (4) - Almost looks like it might be on a white tick when sight-reading
00:21:079 (2,3) - Make it a slider or delete (2)?
01:14:070 (1,1) - These sliders don't look like they belong in the same song, and also they don't seem to be going anywhere. Spread them out, and make both curved or both straight. (I think curved.)

[Normal]
00:06:034 (4,1) - Line up 1 horizontally with 4?
00:03:079 (1,2,3) - Delete, copy the previous (1, 2, 3), reverse, move closer to bottom of screen?
00:25:061 (3,4) - Line up 4 vertically with 3?
00:27:006 (5) - Create symmetrical triangle with 3, 4? and then move (6,7,8)
00:31:043 (3,4,5) - Left a grid?
01:15:006 (2,3) - Line up horizontally?
01:24:070 (1,2,3) - Unstack?

[Hard]
00:10:052 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The triangles are funny-shaped.
00:54:034 (1,2,3) - ^
01:07:043 (5,6,7) - ^
01:24:070 (1,2,3) - Unstack?

[animask's Insane]
OK

If you want me to look at it again later, just PM me or post in my queue again.

[Insane]

Remove all whistles, too noisy and piercing.
I'd remove the soft claps myself but if you don't want to, meh.

Use a silenced slidertick sample. You don't have to silence sliderslide though.

00:41:097 (1) - Starting here the volume gradually increases, why don't you match that? Matching the hitsound volume to the music is a nice trick to use in parts like this.

Well it's rankable I guess @_@

[Hard]

Silence slidertick here too.

00:41:097 (1) - See above. I also recommend incremental volume with normal hits here.
00:38:070 (4) - Slightly off screen
00:40:015 (5) - Same as the above

Well...you had some nice things for arrangement so you should just spend more time really, this is not something I can tell you how to do because then I should just map it myself.

Hitsounds need a complete rework, from normal whistles and claps to soft whistles...you just need the soft whistles really and you've overused them in parts.

01:19:006 (3,4,5,6,1) - This is one strange stream, it's not a 5 hit in the song either. I'd remove this and map this part following the song instead, or use your stable pattern of beats. Oh the claps.

01:23:025 (1) - Don't put the spinner here, it should come later. Use circles/sliders instead here.
01:25:043 - Start the spinner here and gradually fade it out. You might want to consider silencing spinnerbonus.wav too.

[Normal]

00:03:006 (3) - Uhh..very offscreen
00:04:052 (3) - Slightly offscreen
00:08:088 (3) - Yeah...guess what?

I'm just going to stop pointing out all the offscreen stuff now...

Actually, I recommend remapping this difficulty after playing through it.

[Easy]

00:31:079 (4) - This is so awkward. Get rid of the whistles and try to match vocals or something, it's just out of place.
00:35:079 (1) - Gee you really love to put stuff offscreen, don't you?
00:55:097 (4) - Pretty sudden switch to normal because your normal volume is too high and didn't build up. Go back and make your combo here all normal but steadily increase volume.
00:58:034 (2) - You can probably tell me what I'm going to complain about here, can't you?

Follow what I said about hitsounds from the above here too.

Well I probably should spend more than 10 minutes on your map but...I think this is enough for now.

Overall
.osb file - What's this for? If you don't need it. Delete

Easy
No kiai time?

Normal
SO many green lines
Good

Hard
00:43:432 (1) - Remove new combo

animask's Insane
Why is the kiai time different in this diff?
Some sliders are untidy

Mod's Info: Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3 I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3

[General]
Nothing wrong :3

[Easy]
Seems fine ^^

[Normal]
00:59:068 (6) Move it 2/4 before

[Hard]
00:19:068 (4,5,6) Move them 2/4 before

[Insane]
Seems fine but recheck spacing ^^

And that's all for your map! I hope you will need my mod another time x3 Starred!

This map is so well done! And the music is so cool, too!

Here is a little nazi-mod. No need to follow it, it just feel nice this way:

[Easy]
00:34:070 (4) - Remove this, and copy 00:31:079 (4,5) here.

[Normal]
00:08:015 (1) - Place this under 00:06:034 (4)?
00:22:088 (x) - Add two notes here, to continue the uptempo?
01:25:043 (1) - Remove 4, get this 1 white tick earlier and extend 1 white tick.

[Hard]
00:39:079 (x) - Add a note here.

[animask's Insane]
This is so awesome! I loved it.

+Star, and good luck ^^

Change artist to supercell.

peppy wrote:

Change artist to supercell.

^


MV MUST BE ADDED!!>: 3
MP3 is worse than previous ranked map.

~Easy~
Fine.

~Normal~
00:11:977 (4) - stack it
00:41:977 (2) - timing sectios are exactly on the notes
01:25:432 (1) - silence the end

~Hard~
00:42:341 (3,5) - timing sectios are exactly on the notes
01:25:432 (1) - silence the end

~animask's Insane~
00:24:159 (1,2,3,4) - add hitwhistle at start and remove one at ending
00:27:068 (1) - remove hitwhistle
00:55:977 (1) - remove all hitwhistle sounds
01:07:796 (10) - misplaced
01:17:977 (7) - remove sliderwhistle
01:25:068 (1) - silence it


+Star

Eww, what's with the timing? Maybe because of a new .mp3.

BPM: 165
Offset: 918

Also change the notes on the timeline manually because it won't sound right.

PM once you've done that and I'll start modding properly.

MarioBros777 wrote:

Eww, what's with the timing? Maybe because of a new .mp3.

BPM: 165
Offset: 918

Also change the notes on the timeline manually because it won't sound right.

PM once you've done that and I'll start modding properly.

I think I forgot to full-submit after changing the .mp3, so that might explain why the offset was completely different ^^"

That's better.

[Easy]
Eww, silenced sliderticks. I think this diff would sound better without silenced sliderticks.

[Normal]
Enjoyable.

[Hard]
00:41:82 - Could you move that to the top? Maybe...

[animask's Insane]
As much as I would like to be on the contrary, this map is acceptable. I'm not a big fan of circles past the Normal tick.

I find the offset off.

After over an hour of testing, I find the offset to be around 1080.

It shouldn't be too far from the exact offset.

General:

-- "edhitagi.png" is too big please resize to 1024x768 or 800x600
-- Delete "bakemonogatari" from tags it's covered in the source.
-- Set BG color to black on all difficulties.

Easy:

00:20:898 (x) - Beat?
00:56:170 - Start Kiai here.
01:25:807 - End Kiai here.

Normal:

Delete the unused inheriting sections e.g. 00:45:159 etc.

00:56:170 -- Start Kiai here.
01:14:898 (3,4,5) - This bit feels a little empty try adding some more beats?
01:17:807 (5) - New combo here (start of new lyric).
01:20:352 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move the inheriting sections off the beats (back 1 tick), if someone hits early it ruins the effect.
01:25:443 (1) - Should sound the same as Hard.

Hard:

00:27:261 (6) - Consider ending this on a white tick.
00:56:170 -- Start kiai here.
00:56:898 -- Make the kiai start the same place as the other difficulties.
01:25:625 (1) - Should sound the same as Normal.
01:28:523 -- Unneeded inheriting section, you could probably use fewer on the spinner to.


animask's Insane:

I didn't like the small circles, but meh.

00:39:625 (6) - Sounds weird ending in soft.

Overall: The maps are ok, you need to tidy up your use of kiai and inheriting sections though. ~ Star.

yongtw123 wrote:

I find the offset off.

After over an hour of testing, I find the offset to be around 1080.

It shouldn't be too far from the exact offset.

Would it be a coincidence that this is the exact same offset as another ranked map of the same song?

yongtw123 wrote:

I find the offset off.

After over an hour of testing, I find the offset to be around 1080.

It shouldn't be too far from the exact offset.

Would it be a coincidence that this is the exact same offset as another ranked map of the same song?

That's cool~ I've never checked the ranked maps for offset. I got this one myself after some hard extensive "clicking" lol

And btw, erhm... this has bugged me for a while... how about a change in BG? A more colorful one that fills up the screen? Or maybe add a video? That should spice up this map quite a bit (runs away

(leaves a star behind

star~

[Normal]
00:07:625 (3) - move 1 grid left to align with previous (1)
00:07:625 (3,1) - align?
00:47:625 (1,2,3,4) - I think there's a little spacing problem here

other diffs are fine~

Seems Fine.

[Easy]
00:59:261 (1) - Remove new combo
01:00:716 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:08:352 (1) - Remove new combo
00:14:170 (1) - ^
01:02:170 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:12:716 (1) - Remove new combo
01:07:989 (7) - Slightly hidden slider
01:24:898 (1) - Remove new combo

[Insane]
01:07:261 (4,5,6,7,8) - Overmapped
01:13:261 (1) - Remove new combo

Taiko Diff is Done >_<


+ Can you move lyric to lower part? I can't see them when playing taiko.



p.s Special Thanks to Woodrockman '- ^

Download: supercell - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Ichigo-Sora) [youngdow's Taiko Diff].osu

youngdow wrote:

Taiko Diff is Done >_<

youngdow making taiko diffs'
OH LORD >_>
Star~

youngdow wrote:

Taiko Diff is Done >_<


+ Can you move lyric to lower part? I can't see them when playing taiko.



p.s Special Thanks to Woodrockman '- ^

Thanks for difficulty However, I didn't move the lyrics down because if I did they would look wierd in osu mode ):

I realy like this song, thx for asking for my mod =)

[easy]
-01:09:807 to 01:10:170 add a slider, 01:10:898 to 01:11:635 perhaps another here

[normal]
-I don't see problems

[hard]
-00:21:989 perhaps another circle and not break the rhythm
-01:25:261 i don't like that circle

[animask's insane]
-01:20:352 add a circle =(

Good luck and my star =3

Astom wrote:

I realy like this song, thx for asking for my mod =)

[easy]
-01:09:807 to 01:10:170 add a slider, 01:10:898 to 01:11:635 perhaps another here Fixed ^^

[normal]
-I don't see problems

[hard]
-00:21:989 perhaps another circle and not break the rhythm Fixed ^^
-01:25:261 i don't like that circle Removed (:

[animask's insane]
-01:20:352 add a circle =( Hmm, I kinda like how it is right now ^^ Sorry D:

Good luck and my star =3

Thank you ^^

[Easy]
01:06:534 (1,2,4,5) - Symetry
01:15:261 (1) - Could you make symetric this slider? Just a suggestion, if you can.
01:18:170 (1) - Move the final 1 grid up and, maybe, 1 grid left the middle point.

[Normal]
00:51:989 (2) - Move the final of the slider 1 grid left and 1 grid down.

[Hard]
00:27:261 (6) - Why don't you add a new combo?
00:58:716 (5) - Wrongly snapped. Why don't you make a square along with 00:57:443 (1,2,3)?


Good map and good song. And one thing:

Ichigo-Sora wrote:

Thanks for difficulty However, I didn't move the lyrics down because if I did they would look wierd in osu mode ):

What a shame... But you're right.

No problem on Taiko diff :3
Anyway, keep going XD

Here's my star. :3

youngdow/

Requested mod session
Some suggestions
[Easy]
Passed
[Normal]
00:01:443 (2,3) - minor spacing issue
00:02:534 (1) - remove new combo, or swap new combo with 00:03:989 (1)?
00:03:989 (1,2,3) - minor spacing issue
00:20:898 (4) - i'd put it at the start of 00:21:261 (1)
[Hard]
Passed
[Insane]
Passed
~star

[Easy]

1. I think you should lower the Slider tick rate. Why? Because if a noob misses a slider such as 00:35:984 (1), he will fail the whole map. But not if the slider tick is lower. So lower it to 0.5 for the sake of noobs around the world.
2. The last spinner starts too early and ends too late to fit with the music. You could map a bit longer and then let the spinner start at 01:23:620.Like Normal's spinner.

[Normal]
Nice play with hitsound volume!
No complaints!

[Hard]

1. 00:44:170 - The drums continue here, you could add like, two more notes to fill the drums.

[Insane]
Fine!

Don't mod taiko.

Great map. A big star for you!

Thunderstorm wrote:

Requested mod session
Some suggestions
[Easy]
Passed
[Normal]
00:01:443 (2,3) - minor spacing issue
00:02:534 (1) - remove new combo, or swap new combo with 00:03:989 (1)?
00:03:989 (1,2,3) - minor spacing issue
00:20:898 (4) - i'd put it at the start of 00:21:261 (1)
[Hard]
Passed
[Insane]
Passed
~star

Real1 wrote:

[Easy]

1. I think you should lower the Slider tick rate. Why? Because if a noob misses a slider such as 00:35:984 (1), he will fail the whole map. But not if the slider tick is lower. So lower it to 0.5 for the sake of noobs around the world.
2. The last spinner starts too early and ends too late to fit with the music. You could map a bit longer and then let the spinner start at 01:23:620.Like Normal's spinner.

[Normal]
Nice play with hitsound volume!
No complaints!

[Hard]

1. 00:44:170 - The drums continue here, you could add like, two more notes to fill the drums.

[Insane]
Fine!

Don't mod taiko.

Great map. A big star for you!

All fixed ^^ Thank you!

Request Accepted
sorry for the long delay
nothing major, just nazi


Good, STAR!

^ All fixed (: Thanks for the mod!

As your request,but i want to notice that the queue don't accept map that star above +15,i won't break the rule two times,please remember it

[Easy]
Seems good

[Normal]
Seems good

[Hard]
00:18:534-00:29:443 - Decrease the volume and try to add more whistle?
00:48:716(6) - whistle?

[animask's Insane]
00:18:443(T) - 40%~45% Volume?
00:43:352(T) - change to Normal hitsound,50% Volume
00:43:898(T) - change to Soft hitsound
00:44:080(T) - change to Normal hitsound,70% Volume
00:44:898(T) - change to Soft hitsound,70% Volume
00:55:261(2,3,4) - whistle
00:56:170(1) - hitsound sounds not good but i couldn't find another better to change
01:08:352(1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Normal-Whistle sounds weird
01:15:261(1) - how about delete this circle and slider begin at this time?


ok for me,star

~[Easy]~
00:42:080(x): Delete break.
01:24:898(3): Add a finish?

~[Normal]~
Fine.

~[Hard]~
00:35:080(10): Offscreen.

~[animask's Insane]~
Great~

All fixed ^^ Thanks!

Bakemono ヾ(´￢｀)ﾉ

[Insane] :
00:01:079 (1,2,3) - align ?
00:06:898 (1,2,3) - ^
00:07:989 (4,1,2) - ^
00:18:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you really should add circles or slider in this part, it's very odd
00:46:170 (3) - ctrl+j or rotate ?
00:58:716 (6,9) - move a square down
01:00:352 (3) - add whistle ?
01:06:898 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to follow the drum, it's funnier

[Hard]
00:30:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part is really boring to play ...
00:35:989 (1,2,3) - this part too ... you should use sliders
00:45:079 (2,4) - move one of this two circles a square left ( I prefer (2) )

[Normal] :
00:03:989 (1,2,3) - same spacing between these circles
00:31:625 (1,2,3) - ^
01:21:807 (6) - remove whistle

[Easy] :
01:25:443 (1) - start on the previous white tick

the taiko diff is too hard for me, I can't mod sorry xD

Eirene wrote:

[Insane] :
00:01:079 (1,2,3) - align ? Fixed!
00:06:898 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed!
00:07:989 (4,1,2) - ^ Fixed!
00:18:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you really should add circles or slider in this part, it's very odd Hmm...I think it's fine the way it is.
00:46:170 (3) - ctrl+j or rotate ? Fixed!
00:58:716 (6,9) - move a square down Fixed!
01:00:352 (3) - add whistle ? Fixed!
01:06:898 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to follow the drum, it's funnier Fixed!

[Hard]
00:30:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part is really boring to play ... Remapped this part.
00:35:989 (1,2,3) - this part too ... you should use sliders Remapped!
00:45:079 (2,4) - move one of this two circles a square left ( I prefer (2) ) Fixed!

[Normal] :
00:03:989 (1,2,3) - same spacing between these circles Fixed!
00:31:625 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed!
01:21:807 (6) - remove whistle Fixed!

[Easy] :
01:25:443 (1) - start on the previous white tick Fixed!

the taiko diff is too hard for me, I can't mod sorry xD That's okay ^^

Thanks for the mod and star!

Hey this is great nice song the sb effect is nice too

You should have a BAT take a look at this already

Have Double Star

Nice song, excelent beatmap!

Star!

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hey this is great nice song the sb effect is nice too

You should have a BAT take a look at this already

Have Double Star

Krisom wrote:

Nice song, excelent beatmap!

Star!

Thank you so much ><

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Add "(TV Size)" to the Title. Also, remove "tv size" from the Tags.
  • The SB images contains too much unnecessary transparency.

[Easy]

• • 00:42:534 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:43:261 (x) - ^
  • 00:43:989 (x) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

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Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Add "(TV Size)" to the Title. Also, remove "tv size" from the Tags. Fixed!
  • The SB images contains too much unnecessary transparency. Fixed!

[Easy]

• • 00:42:534 (x) - Add a circle Fixed!
  • 00:43:261 (x) - ^ Fixed!
  • 00:43:989 (x) - ^ Fixed!

Thanks for the mod and star =D

Back with BAT status Orz

[Easy]
01:25:534 (1) - Please start this spinner from 1:25:443

And maybe adding spinner approaching circle would be good.

minyeob wrote:

Back with BAT status Orz

[Easy]
01:25:534 (1) - Please start this spinner from 1:25:443

And maybe adding spinner approaching circle would be good.

Finally fixed, back from a hiatus ^^

did you remove SB?

Supercell

my mod
other diff is good :3
Thismap is very nice.
star & gl

animask's insane's whistles hitsounds are not flattering to me, as well as some of the weird slider art.

Other difficulties are ok though, I would give them 6.5/10

Still live Shifty's version & Alace version (Hard only) the best. >.<

Star and good luck ! ^.^

oh wow this is still alive~

I'll try to improve my difficulty a bit unless you're graving this soon...

a post 6 years later :3

rank when

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