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Futurama - Opening song

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DeletedUser_39338
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DeletedUser_39338
huh. whats wrong with spacing?
combos maybe, but spacing Oo.

will try bpm and offset. wasnt easy to find that in this song.

edit: ur timing is good. im using it.

edit²: easy fixed and updated. can someone or better JarJarJacob check it and say me if its ok/better now pls?

Download: kirikuro - DJ Sharpnel - Siin [Insane] (2011-07-17) CatchTheBeat.osr
Zeek
45 posts
Joined August 2008
Zeek
Easy:
00:11:630 - the 8 and 9 should be farther apart from the 7, based off of your previous patterns
00:17:369 - 6 should be farther away from the 4

Normal:
00:03:282 - 5 should be farther away from the 4 (6 and 5 are fine, though)
00:09:543 - I think a new combo should start on the 7. Same with the 10 that comes later on.

Hard:
00:05:338 - the blue 1 and 2 should be part of this combo, and the blue three after that should start a new one, having the next two notes. (carried on throughout the intro and such; that is the phrasing, right?)
00:22:051 - The rolling is off.
00:17:099 - this phrase sounds messy. (namely the 2)
00:20:736 - the 3 and 5 sound slightly off.
00:22:593 - to me, the combo should be ascending instead of descending. But either way, the 3 and 4 aren't close enough and it sounds awkward. Perhaps just make it a long slider?
End - 4 sounds off and the final spacing is kinda weird.

For all of 'em, I don't like the ship crashing being part of the map itself, but that's just me.

Hope this helped in some fashion. I do like this show's intro very much and hope to see it polished for osu! some time soon.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
thanks zeek!
k, im going to change the bpm n offset now as from jarjarcob and then add your fixes.

btw. i thought the ship crashing would be a good place for a spinner.(the sound before the crashing) and then the "dededemmmdemmmdemmdemmdemmdemm" sounds like music imo :x. and the song would be even shorter than its now already.^^
if some more will review, say if you prefer including the crashing sounds or leaving them out. if some more say it doesnt fit ill take it out.
TheRagnarok
91 posts
Joined September 2008
TheRagnarok
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DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
k, done ragnarok.
would be great if you make some design improvements with it. yet i just did a (relative boring) background image.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
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Zeek
45 posts
Joined August 2008
Zeek
I find the map to be fine in its current form. Hopefully a BAT will come by here soon.

Because you don't have one, how about throwing in a comboburst image? 'Get some more originality and theme to the map :P . Perhaps edit out the ship from this?

EDIT: Forgot about this whole star thing. Starred!
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DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
hmm, good idea. ill do it.
how about giving the map a star zeek? ;D

done, looks good. ill think about what else could be visually edited in the map.
Jarby
2,962 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Offset is late.

Easy:

00:05:36 (6) - New combo.
00:06:67 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:10:05 (7) - New combo.
00:18:67 (7) - New combo.
00:20:76 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:24:67 (1) - One less repeat.

Normal:

00:09:51 (9) - New combo.
00:17:86 (7) - New combo.
00:22:10 (1) - Move to white tick.
00:24:64 (1) - One less repeat.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
done, even if i find your combo changes way weird.

lemme explain:
in easy for example:
(new timings)
you said new one at (7) 00:10:03
same as later at (7) 00:18:652
but therefore every 4th beats should be a new one. but before, there are 8 beats. did you forget to make 2x4 out of them or shall it be?
btw. i had the same combo system at beginning, when you said "fix the inconsistent combos". -.-
00:20:739 should also be anew one imo.
Jarby
2,962 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby

foLn wrote:

done, even if i find your combo changes way weird.
Combos should be based on a factor of time, the way the music is playing and difficulty of a section. What I was trying to say before was that it wasn't steadily following all 3 guidelines.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
well, k.
should i change them as i said? before the new combo with 4 beats starts there is a 8 beat combo which, can definitely made to two 4 if you ask me.
ill let hard as it is.


btw. anyone else has the problem, that the comboburst shows up just sometime after it should show up? i have that somehow. but i dont think its the map/the picture. some bug in osu i guess.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
bumpity bump
bat needed!
Zeek
45 posts
Joined August 2008
Zeek
Try this for the combo burst. The ship in its entirety takes up too much room.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
ur right, ty!
now we just need to get somehow a bats attention lol!
mtmcl
mtmcl
Nice map.
Artist: Christopher Tyng
Title: Futurama Theme

Change and reupload.

Starred.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
Ah, thanks for the star and for the song info mtmcl! :)
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
added new insane difficulty!
dunno. i think its good. but feels weird at the same time. but thats always at insane maps i guess.
Dranoel
122 posts
Joined April 2008
Dranoel
I could not find a flaw with your new insane mode.

Your hard mode is a bit too easy, though. You could add a little more flourish and get away with it.

By the way, if you want a video for it, I could get you it.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
you're right with the hard is a bit easy. that's why i added an insane.
thanks for ur review and ur star :)
to the video: can you compress it good? i dont want the map to be too big since its just an opening.
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
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DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
k, did all of yours mafiamaster. THANKS!! <3 ^^
wow i did not realize easy was wrong snapped :O
Tomatex3
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Joined January 2009
Tomatex3
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:n1 n1 n1 n1
Nice One!
SS Map
Dranoel
122 posts
Joined April 2008
Dranoel
Nevermind about the video. Sorry. I can't find the good quality one on YouTube.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
no problem. when i have some time ill search too.
Metroid
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Joined May 2008
Metroid
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DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
thank you metroid, i did all, but
"No need for complete finish spam."
makes the song more interesting if you ask me.

normal:
00:20:73 (1,2,3,4) - It needs to overlap more.
huh, i dont think so. then the overlapping would be too much. look at the other 1/2 overlaps. this fits imo.

hard
00:24:39 (1) - Add a beat or something here.
why Oo i like the reverse slider fitting better to this.

is it true maps need to include spinners to get ranked Oo
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
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DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
asked a BAT and he said you dont need to have any spinners in a map to get it ranked. so ill let it as it is.
Zeek
45 posts
Joined August 2008
Zeek
For all of them
-I think a lead-in time of 0.5s would be good, considering how fast it starts.
-Colors for beats:
[H/S/L] 133, 240, 90 [RGB] 0,128,192;
[H/S/L] 40, 240, 106 [RGB] 225,225,0;
[H/S/L] 0, 231, 91 [RGB] 200,4,4;

Easy
For the sake of it all, reduce the number of finishes. It gets very annoying after awhile. Perhaps have only the high notes get the finish moves, while the rest get the standard hit (ex: 00:10:826; the (1) slider is finish while the (2) & (3) are normal). Otherwise, it's good.

Normal:
Good.

Hard:
00:07:434 - New combo; at the (8), too.
00:15:260 - new combo; also at (12)

Insane:
00:00:000 - (7) new combo
00:15:260 - (6) new combo; [random suggestion] merge the next combo (@ 16:043) with this one, and then make the (5), (6) and (7) new combos as well.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
done all but the first color change. i made the green a bit darker instead. cause your blue is a bit bad to see in front of the background.
The finishes sound so annoying now, cause i changed the hitsounds from soft to normal. The finish sound did fit better in soft. But I feel like I should use normal. Anyway, I edited them out at easy.
thanks zeek.

I wont let this die btw.^^ I'm just to lazy to ask any BAT's yet lol.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
btw. how can I make the map start earlier??
Zeek
45 posts
Joined August 2008
Zeek

foLn wrote:

btw. how can I make the map start earlier??
Song Setup->Audio->Music Track->Lead-in.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
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rust45
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Joined May 2009
rust45
[Overall]
They all look good, but there are too many finishes and whistles IMO. Star for you!

[Easy]
Looks good enough but one thing that kinda bothers me:
00:24:65 (1) - Maybe start a red tick earlier and add a repeat. That just sounds better to me.

[Normal]
00:11:60 (6) - Check your distance snap here. Looks ugly the way it is anyway.
00:13:69 (4) - Please make this a circle, the slider ending just doesn't sound good IMO.
00:24:65 (1) - Same as easy's slider.

[Hard]
00:16:04 (2) - Move this so it doesn't overlap with the slider, it looks nicer that way, then make sure to move other notes in the combo to keep the distance consistent
00:16:82 (5,6) - ^ Except you're working with two notes.
00:24:39 (x) - Add note? Sounds better to me

[Insane]
00:11:60 (1) - I don't like this spinner, why do you need it anyway? The other maps don't have it.
00:18:91 (9,10,11) - Not sure if the huge spacing was your intention, but it's very hard to pull off.
00:24:91 (1) - This doesn't need to be a new combo.
00:25:69 (1) - This doesn't either.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
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foulcoon
osu! Alumni
1,384 posts
Joined July 2008
foulcoon
[All]
00:05:347 - move this inherited section back a bit, just as a precaution

[Easy]
a lot of the combo numbering changes don't make sense, but there's nothing blatantly wrong

[Normal]
00:08:73 (1,2,3) - don't really care for this pattern, but that's about it

[Hard]
the tick rate at 3 sounds horrible.

[Insane]
00:18:91 (9) - new combo please
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
thanks a lot for the tips and the star!
did all but normal changes, didnt really know what you meant. :O
hope this map is coming closer to ranking or just a bubble now. ;]
Epidemic_old
5 posts
Joined April 2009
Epidemic_old
Hm, just something minor that came to mind as I played it, but don't you think you should either increase the volume of the song or decrease the volume of the hitsounds? It seemed as though I could barley hear the song due to the hitsounds.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
wow good thing you replied. i almost forgot this but now got an email. gotta play osu more often again.^^
ill check the volume.

edit: the mp3 should be a bit louder now. imo it fits good now.
thanks for the info epidemic
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
bumping..
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,963 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
No excuse not to have a lossless (or 128kbps at least) mp3 for a theme this popular.

Find one. It'll take you three minutes.
DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
lol a lossless would be just useless waste of space.
and a new mp3 would totally destroy the offset :/
ill see what i can do.

but btw you dont even notice its a low bitrate imo...
jmaeshawn
170 posts
Joined May 2008
jmaeshawn
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DeletedUser_39338
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_39338
Hey, big thanks jmaesshawn!!
I already searched hours for a HQ video but I just found bad looking ones and also didn't have that much time because of some friends..

So long, added the video, awesome!
ferailo9
20 posts
Joined July 2009
ferailo9
I can't see anything wrong with this, I hope it gets ranked.
STAR!
osumike
13 posts
Joined September 2009
osumike
I enjoy short theme song type beatmaps like this and I couldn't find anything wrong. *starred*
Yoshi348
113 posts
Joined June 2009
Yoshi348
Very good. I like the well placed star fountain.

Only two pieces of advice for Insane: One is that after the sound fountain there's a bit too much finish hitsound spamming. The other is that I'd replace the back and forth slider with a spinner like on Easy and Normal.

But it's definitely not bad as it is. Star.
Billy_the_Kid
Billy_the_Kid
:)
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DeletedUser_39338
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