eldnl wrote:

[Bima's Easy]

02:24:820 (8) Remover ese error.

Va por buen camino

cya.

wmfchris wrote:

[insane]
0:20:295 (4,6) down 1 grid
0:28:786 (4,5) right 1 grid
1:07:253 (3) left 1 grid?
1:!2:761 (1,2,3) uneven spacing What?
1:38:791 (1~6) ^
1:51:805 (4,5) (4) up 1 grid, (5) right + up 1 grid
1:56:915 (2) left 1 grid in this section's spacing?
1:58:239 (9,1,2) uneven spacing
2:01:327 (8,9,10,11,12) ^
spacing multiple varies from 0.73x ~ 0.85x or even 0.88x which is a quite large rankge, so I suggest you do resnap them...

[hard]
0:55:590 (5) left 1 grid
1:03:035 (4) up 1 grid

star~

NotShinta wrote:

Insane
00:45:877 - 00:52:935 - This stream is too intense for a map going for ranking. Perhaps cut down on it, or remap to a more obvious rhythm.

eldnL's Hard
00:32:428 (3) - Hello random jump
00:48:973 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - In a Hard? wut
01:56:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ilu

Normal
Low spacing or a Normal...
00:47:649 (1) - No need for some of those ticks. Doesn't change the map but so you know.

Bima's Easy
Short, random breaks.

Fine.

ouranhshc wrote:

Insane
maybe use soft hitsounds during the soft section: 01:03:479

Hard
00:52:943 (1) - maybe silence the end of this?


Quik Scan:

i will go through it again when i'm not tired

eveless wrote:

[Insane]
00:25:698 (6) - add whistle in the begin
00:28:786 (4) - add whistle
00:28:896 (5) - add whistle in the begin
01:08:141 (7) - delete whistle
01:20:041 (6) - spacing
01:40:556 (9) - delete whistle
02:03:092 (6) - add whistle
02:04:857 (5) - delete whistle
02:14:121 (1) - add whistle
02:14:562 (3) - delete whistle
02:14:783 (4) - add whistle
02:15:224 (6) - how about move this in 2's position

[Hard]
00:44:340 (2) - spacing?
00:45:443 (7) - ^
01:56:915 (3,4) - what?change position each other?
02:14:562 (3,4) - ok...i think you need new combo if you really want to do these

[Normal]
00:08:825 (4) - i think you need new combo here
00:54:487 (1,2,3) - delete these whistle
01:14:967 (4,5,6) - ^

[Easy]
care the volume before kiai

IceBeam wrote:

Timing in Insane is different,fix it.
Eh,and your BG isn't actually 4:3,however black stripes fit with it,so you may leave as it is or resize to 800 x 600.

[Easy]
00:24:708 (3) - I'd add a finish,and New combo.
00:39:487 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:39:046 and finish 00:42:355 or 00:41:913.
00:52:943 (3) - I'm not sure if whistle fits the song well,change to finish?
01:10:139 (5) - Um..change this slider to single circles,cause it's messed with all these uninherited sections.
01:11:217 (x) - This break seems unnecessary,you could just add some notes to keep the rhytm on:
01:11:879 - Note.
01:12:761 - ^
01:13:644 - ^

[Normal]
Seems fine,but reduce volume,tis' wayyyy too loud.
Add more finishes.
00:21:178 (6) - Finish.
01:07:031 (1) - ^
01:38:791 - ^
01:54:710 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:54:708~ (x) - Really few hitsounds here,add more,please.
Soft whistles in moments like 00:58:899/01:05:921 fits really nice.

[Insane]
As I said above,fix Timing,it should be the same for all difficulties.
Reduce volume,as well.
00:21:177 - Finish.
00:38:820 - ^
00:52:053 (2) - Change to 1/8 reverse-slider.
00:52:935 - Finish,anyway.
01:38:791 (1) - ^

This song makes me happy,star~

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
BG is 1024*576, which is not good... find a 1024*768 or 800*600 one would be better.
1st offset: +5, 4th offset: -5. in fact i can't make sure of this timing since you changed a lot...better to find a timing expert.
maybe you want to disable countdown? annoying to me.

[Bima's Easy]
HP+1, OD+1
00:49:413 (5,1,2) - small nazi thing here.
01:24:232 (1) - shorten by 2/1 (end at 01:26:348) and use finish?
01:49:379 (6) - new combo
nice diff, though feel it's more like a Normal ww


[Normal]
00:07:943 (3,4) - better not to use such spacing.
00:09:708 (6,1) - ^
00:38:384 (7) - remove whistle at the reverse, doesn't fit if you just put a single one there.
01:21:144 (1,2) - really not good looking, just stack the two sliders' end together, players will understand.

[eldnL's Hard]
so many 1/4s 0 0. there's really a diff gap between Normal and Hard imo.
01:01:925 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:56:915 (3,4) - if it's just for increase the difficulty, i'll say no. change their position plz.
02:14:562 (3,4) - ^

[Insane]
HP 9 is too crazy, -2 or at least -1. also it's highly recommended to use OD 8 not OD 8.
00:30:660 (5,1) - spacing. people won't know it's 0.5x before hit it.
01:08:141 (7) - strange whistle.
01:51:805 (4) - 1 grid down+ 1 grid left makes it look better.
02:15:445 (7,1) - spacing

kanpakyin wrote:

Mod is come>.<
Red=I think you should fix this
Blue=Just a suggestion

[Bima's Easy]
00:15:367(1)Remove Whistle?
00:39:0509(..)spinner stop in 00:41:460?
00:42:340(..)add a spnner here and stop in 00:41:961?
01:10:281(..)Using 2 Red line?
01:56:940(4)down 1 grid?
02:15:887(6)up 1 grid?

[Normal]
00:17:618(1)left 1 grid?
01:28:176(5)up 1 grid?

[eldnL's Hard]
00:42:824(2)down 2 grid?
00:43:724(4)down 2 grid?
01:18:305(4)left 2 grid?
01:54:685(1-7)This jump is a insane jump?Not suitable for hard

[Insane]
00:43:402(6)up 1 grid?
01:13:508(6)down 2 grid?

Nice>.<
star~

darck360 wrote:

Hola~

[General]
Agregarás a - Peaceful Melody - a los tags?

[Bima's Easy]
Todo se encuentra bien.

[Normal]
01:22:026 : No será demasiado inesperado para una normal? Sacalo del Escondite
01:31:511 : Intenta arreglar un poco este slider, para que quede un poco más prolijo. Nada más
01:37:908 : ^

[eldL's Hard]
Todo se encuentra bien, lo unico que sugiero es que en vez de hacerse llamar Hard, cambiaselo a Insane ya que parece más Insane.

[Insane]
00:25:698 : No te obligo a cambiarlo, pero esto esta raro
00:37:938 : No me gusta nada este slider, Intenta arreglarlo
01:31:732 : Slider Raro?, No quieres cambiarlo?

Muy buen mapa, Por supuesto Star.

Buena Suerte !

eldnl wrote:

darck360 wrote:

Hola~

[General]
Agregarás a - Peaceful Melody - a los tags?

[Bima's Easy]
Todo se encuentra bien.

[Normal]
01:22:026 : No será demasiado inesperado para una normal? Sacalo del Escondite
01:31:511 : Intenta arreglar un poco este slider, para que quede un poco más prolijo. Nada más
01:37:908 : ^

[eldL's Hard]
Todo se encuentra bien, lo unico que sugiero es que en vez de hacerse llamar Hard, cambiaselo a Insane ya que parece más Insane.

[Insane]
00:25:698 : No te obligo a cambiarlo, pero esto esta raro
00:37:938 : No me gusta nada este slider, Intenta arreglarlo
01:31:732 : Slider Raro?, No quieres cambiarlo?

Muy buen mapa, Por supuesto Star.

Buena Suerte !

Y si en vez de ponerle algo le pone "eldnL" a la diff?
por los sliders la verdad yo tambien se lo dije, viste que no soy el unico que piensa asi??

Verdisphena wrote:

Callate tu, mi insane, mis sliders.

SPOILER

Feo



Bonito xD



Tambien podrias arreglar todos los sliders que sean como este

SPOILER

eldnl wrote:

Verdisphena wrote:

Callate tu, mi insane, mis sliders.

Ok...

[Bima's Easy]

00:08:825 (4) Spacing
00:09:266 (5) ^
00:16:325 (2) ^
00:20:296 (5) ^
00:25:590 (2) ^
00:28:237 (1) ^
00:33:972 (3) ^
01:17:614 (1) ^
01:20:261 (4) ^
01:55:592 (2) ^

En lo personal no me gustan los sliders hechos al azar, tambien podrias mejorarlos

Ej:

SPOILER

Feo



Bonito xD



Tambien podrias arreglar todos los sliders que sean como este

[Normal]

00:20:296 (5) Spacing
00:24:928 (2)^
00:25:590 (4)^
00:31:767 (1)^
00:58:678 (1,2,3,1,2,3) Ordenalos bien, ya que llevan un orden intercalado tienen errores de 1 grid.
01:17:614 (1,2,3,4,5) ^
01:31:511 (1) Podrias darle mejor forma a este slider
01:36:144 (6) Spacing
01:37:908 (4) Sugerencia: Trata de que no se pasen del grid las notas.
01:51:144 (3) Me gustó la forma de este slider, podrias tratar de mejorarlo así.

SPOILER

01:54:232 (1) Esta muy lejos de la ultima nota, aprovecha para acercarla ya que muy a los extremos se ve mal.

[Insane]

02:08:607 (1) Quitale el new combo
02:08:827 (2) Agregalo aqui. ( Deberian haber mas jumps como este)
02:20:629 (3,4,5,6) Trata de no dejarlos dobles, el stream sigue monotono.

Bastante bien. ~

- Peaceful Melody - wrote:

Okay Here We Go

SPOILER

Bima's Easy

Fixed Spacing

Normal

00:14:119 (1) - Remove Clap & Add Finish ?
00:20:296 (2) - 1 Grid Up ?
00:21:178 (3) - 1 Grid Left & 1 Grid Up ?
01:03:479 (3) - Add Finish ?
01:10:556 (1) - Remove Clap & Add Finish ?
Other Is Fine, But There Are Some Error With Grid ? Like 00:17:649 ?
Nice HitSound !

eldnl's Hard

00:56:031 (1) - Remove All HitSound And Add With Finish At Start, Reverse & End ?
01:44:526 - Add Some Note Here ?
Okay, Other Is Fine !

Insane

00:14:561 (4) - 1 Grid Up ?
00:15:884 (3) - ^ ?
00:26:911 (3) - 1 Grid Down ?
00:32:204 (3) - ^ ?
Uh I Don't Wanna Too Nazi, It's Your Style ^.^ /

Okay, I Think That's All, Hope You Like My Mod

fartownik wrote:

Delete both "-" from the tags. They're unneeded.

[Insane]

This diff has other BPM and offset compared to other diffs. Make it 7 061.

00:25:698 (6) - Cut by 1/4 and move 1/4 forward.
00:30:660 (5,1) - Spacing.
01:27:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unexpected and unintuitive jumps.
02:15:445 (7,1) - Spacing.
02:22:945 (1) - Expand by 1/4 and silence it.

[eldnL]

Fine.


[Bima]

01:01:704 (1) - Out of place spinner.
02:02:210 (3,4) - Spacing.
02:22:945 (1) - End on the next white tick.

star

Verdisphena wrote:

fartownik wrote:

Delete both "-" from the tags. They're unneeded.

[Insane]

This diff has other BPM and offset compared to other diffs. Make it 7 061.

00:25:698 (6) - Cut by 1/4 and move 1/4 forward.
00:30:660 (5,1) - Spacing.
01:27:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unexpected and unintuitive jumps.
02:15:445 (7,1) - Spacing.
02:22:945 (1) - Expand by 1/4 and silence it.

[eldnL]

Fine.


[Bima]

01:01:704 (1) - Out of place spinner.
02:02:210 (3,4) - Spacing.
02:22:945 (1) - End on the next white tick.

star

Thanks for mod ~

DJPop wrote:

- Delete .osb file in the folder.
- Volume shouldn't be higher than 80 (8th tick).
- Some timing sections didn't place exactly on the ticks.


- Bima's Easy -
02:22:945 (1) - end on the same position as other diffs

- Normal -
00:17:649 (1,2,3) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:32:208 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:38:384 (7) - add hitfinish at the end

- eldnL's Hard -
Fine.

- Insane -
00:14:340 (2) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:25:698 (6) - should be started on red tick
00:30:550 (4,5,1) - unexpected the spacing was changed D:
02:22:062 (5) - end on white tick


+Star

lepidopodus wrote:

Bima's Easy
02:02:210 (3,4) - Spacing...
02:02:651 (4,1) - Jump in Easy? Personally I don't like this.
02:11:033 (4) - How about whistle on the 2nd return?
02:02:210 (3,4) - How about whistle in 02:15:445?
02:18:092 (3) - How about whistle in the end of the slider?

Normal
00:17:649 (1,2,3) - How about moving these one grid left?
00:46:767 (2,3,1) - Try aligning them to the end of 00:45:884 (1)?
01:16:732 (6) - Remove whistle from the slider body?
01:51:144 (3) - How about moving the start point of the slider one grid down?

eldnL's Hard
01:09:695 (2,3) - How about moving these slightly (less than a grid?) right?
01:56:474 (1~7) - Isn't it too hard for Hard?
02:06:622 (6) - How about moving this one grid left and one grid up?
02:11:033 (3,4) - Spacing? (You can arragne these somewhat similar like 02:08:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6))
02:14:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Isn't it too hard for Hard?

Insane
00:20:295 (4,6) - How about moving these one grid down?
00:39:372 (3,4) - How about making these symmetric to 00:39:041 (1,2)?
01:08:141 (7) - remove whistle from the slider body?
02:13:680 (5) - ^

What a crappy modding lol

MemeChii wrote:

Seriously not good at modding but here I go.


[Normal]

1- 00:17:649 Spacing? (1,2,3)
2- 00:19:414 ^
3- 00:28:678 Spacing (1-6)
4- 00:31:767 ^
5- 00:33:090 (5) I'm not sure you intended it to be like that but move it down?
6- 00:33:531 Spacing
7- 00:34:414 (7) If you done 5 , try changing the direction of the slider.
8- 00:35:269 (1-7) Spacing
9- 00:56:031 (3) Not sure if slider should be placed there.
10- 01:02:591 Spacing
11- 01:07:031 ^
12- 01:07:191 (2) Move to different direction?
13- 01:08:807 (3,4) Spacing
14- 01:10:522 (1-6) ^
15- 01:14:085 (1-6) ^
16- 01:17:614 (1-6) ^
17- 01:21:144 (1-2) ^
18- 01:23:350 (2,3) ^
19 01:28:203 (5,6) ^
20- 01:29:085 (1) ^
21- 01:36:585 (1-4) ^
22- 02:00:445 (3,4) ^

Whoas... It takes patiences to mod orz;;; .

Oh wells everything seems fine after that.

Free Star powaa for yu~~

Revengexsoyah wrote:

~Normal~

00:28:678 : agrega "whistle" a los seleccionados. Le agrege a algunos el whistle


SALUDOS.

Roddie wrote:

Hi

Bima's Easy:
00:07:060 (1)-Add a finish. Ok
00:12:796 (4)-Put a New Combo here? No
01:39:637 (3)-Remove that clap from the 1st reverse arrow and add a clap on the last reverse arrow. Ok

Normal:
00:07:061 (1)-Remove that clap. Add a finish instead. Ok, but only i added a finish
00:12:355 (5)-Remove that clap from the end of that slider. Add a finish instead. Ok
02:08:386 (4)-Add a finish on the end of that slider. Ok

eldnL's Hard:

No problems I encountered

Insane:
00:07:063 (1)-Remove that clap. Add a finish instead. Only i added a finish ~
00:24:706 (1)-^ ^

Hm. Not bad.

Good luck getting this ranked! <3

Star!

• - Go DJ Go~

• - Volume is too low D:

• - AR7 would be better imo

Pokie wrote:

General

• - Go DJ Go~

Bima's

• - Volume is too low D:

eldnL's Hard

• - AR7 would be better imo

00:48:973 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ahhh steams on Hard Q_Q it doesn't really fit imo... No ^



Insane
[list:79d25]00:30:660 (5,1) - spacing is weird, don't use 0.5x spacing on this point ;_; Ok




Nice music

Krisom wrote:

RANDOM MOD BECAUSE I FELT LIKE!!!

General-
· Beep! Insane has a different Offset and a different BPM!!!! D:
· Beep! 01:10:332 (5) - in eldnl's Hard is not snapped!!! D:
· Beep! Normal has a different preview point!!! D:
· Combocolors are WAY too similar. Change one? No
· Who timed this? I feel is a bit (a lot) off in some sections. Maybe get an expert timer for this?
· That'd be all, let's see the gameplay, I'll just mod your diffs because this is a random mod.

Insane-
01:27:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Jump that feels out of place D:
02:22:945 (1) - Change this to soft hitsounds, it has a weird "Pop" at the end when it should be silenced. Ok
That'd be all, I dont like the repeatsliders though, the make the diff more streamy than it should, but meh, it's your style.

Normal-
00:39:267 - What? A break? it's totally anticlimatic and it doesnt flows well with the music, I suggest mapping this. Ok
00:39:267 - Make it look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/38482 Ok
Kiai time is not snapped correctly to the red line at 114.710 offset D:
02:22:945 (1) - Change this to soft hitsounds, it has a weird "Pop" at the end when it should be silenced. Ok
About the break, I strongly suggest you to follow the breaks you used on insane Ok

Other things I noticed:
Bima's Easy has the kiai time not snapped correctly to the new red line, look at the timeline more carefully D:

Good luck, if you don't understand something poke me in-game chat

Combo1 : 251,28,28
Combo2 : 188,2,215

lovhin456 wrote:

Hola ! Aqui esta mi mod :3

General;
- El preview time de "eldnL's Hard" no es el mismo al de las demas Ok, tambien no deberia ser "eldnl's Hard" ?? pero eso no es tan importante =w=
- Umm, usa estos colores ?? ok

Combo1 : 251,28,28
Combo2 : 188,2,215

Bima's Easy;
- 00:08:825 >> New combo then remove new combo at 00:10:149 and finally new combo at 00:11:031 ok
- 00:31:766 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note ok
- 00:39:049 >> End at 00:41:913 no
- 00:49:413 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note ok
- 00:52:943 >> Remove whistle, add finish ok
- 01:07:031 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note ok
- 01:09:695 >> ^ ^
- 01:24:673 >> End at 01:28:644 no
- 02:19:415 >> New combo ok
- 02:22:945 >> Lower the sound gradually please ?? ok
- 02:27:577 >> What is this inheriting timing section doing ?? Remove it ?? ok

Normal;
- Me gusta el ritmo que hiciste pero tus sliders estan raros, algunos estan un poco feos y no me gusta como pusiste las notas en el campo de juego, pudiste haberlo hecho mas creativamente
- 00:17:649 >> Align with (5)'s end ?? ok
- 00:50:958 >> Agrega una nota ?? no
- 01:07:031 (1,2) >> Podrias hacer algo para que el slider (1) no este encima del (2) ok
- 01:16:732 >> Nuevo combo y quitale el nuevo combo a lo que sigue ok
- 01:22:908 >> Quita el nuevo combo y pon un nuevo combo en 01:24:232, despues quitale el nuevo combo a lo que sigue ok
- 01:30:850 >> Nuevo combo y quitale el nuevo combo a lo que sigue ok
- 01:31:511 >> Este slider esta un poco feo ... Cambiado
- 01:44:526 >> Whistle ?? YES!
- 02:22:945 >> Este timing section no esta bien puesto Ready

eldnl's Hard;
- Me parece muy dificil para un Hard ... no se =w=
- 01:19:379 >> Remueve el nuevo combo
- No me gusta tanto esta diff ... ;w;

Insane;
- 01:06:143 (3,4) >> Unrankable, yo lo intente en una guest diff para un mapa y me dijieron que era unrankable, no estoy segura Preguntare
* Star ~

WikiLeon wrote:

[Timings]
00:24:708 - Raise the hitsound volume to at least 70%. ok
00:52:943 (4) - Add a new timing section, reduce the hitsound volume back tot he way it was before and use soft hitsounds. ok
01:54:710 (1) - Raise hitsound volume to at least 70% and change the offset time to 114,673ms. This makes sure the fountains hit right when the beat starts. no -w-

[Bima's Easy]
00:13:678 (5) - I think this should be a single reverse slider, then the last beat be its own hitcircle. no
02:01:768 (1,2) - Triple hits on an easy map is pretty difficult for beginners, try turning these two circles into a slider. Ok
02:04:636 (3,4) - Same here. Ok

[Normal]
00:24:708 (1,2,3) - These triple hits take me by surprise, and they are the only ones in the section. Try to add more or move this further in the section, probably at 00:29:119.
00:42:355 (1,1) - The spinner is too close to the circle. Fixed

Lizbeth wrote:

Hola ^^/

eldnL's Hard
00:57:576 (1,2) - Esto suena raro, que tal si lo pones así: http://puu.sh/z0X ?
01:56:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Confuso, no pude hacerlo bien... Te recomiendo que hagas este patrón mas predecible
02:14:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - igual aquí.

Insane
00:40:590 (1,2) - sabes que pienso? Que quedaría muy bien transformar estos dos círculos en un slider ^^ Me gusta tal como esta D:
Igual en las demás situaciones similares :3 pienso que es mas fácil de leer, pero es solo una sugerencia porque no está mal como los pusiste.
00:45:884 - 00:52:943 - Me sacó de onda totalmente orz. No diré que tienes que quitarlos, pero recomendaría que empezaras un poco mas tarde esos streams, que tal en este punto: 00:51:178 ? No >w< (Es lo que yo haría y lo digo como mi opinión, es tu decisión que hacer)
00:57:575 (7) - agrega un new combo aquí~ Ok <u<
01:02:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Que te inspiró? ;_; La música esta totalmente calmada en esta parte>< Fixed
Esta dificultad necesita un break D: Nevah~

Bima's Easy & normal
Todo en orden
:3

Star~

Wiinter wrote:

Modding as requested~

General
Add the name of who made the easy diff on tags of all diffs >w<

Insane
01:06:587 (4) - change this spacing >.< invisible slider orz Fixed

And nothing else, lol. Cool map, liked your hard diff xD

Wiinter wrote:

Modding as requested~

General
Add the name of who made the easy diff on tags of all diffs >w<

Insane
01:06:587 (4) - change this spacing >.< invisible slider orz

And nothing else, lol. Cool map, liked your hard diff xD

eldnl wrote:

Wiinter wrote:

Modding as requested~

General
Add the name of who made the easy diff on tags of all diffs >w<

Insane
01:06:587 (4) - change this spacing >.< invisible slider orz

And nothing else, lol. Cool map, liked your hard diff xD

Si queri que cambie esa parte dime nomas verdis, y podriai decirme como te llamai porque verdis me suena rarito xD

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Insane
01:24:342 (9) - move out from under the (7) No :e

rest is fine, have a star!

1. Los colores son solo dos mientras el fondo es algo colorido, puedes agregar el Verde y Amarillo? para que se vea bien con el fondo y no sea tan "monotono".

1. Increase volume for the 5 first timing sections at least 2 ticks (Including the 1st offset)
2. 01:44:967 (4) - Change this slider for a single circle. then:
3. 01:45:850 (X) - Add a note here.
4. 01:48:938 (5) - Remove this note, it sounds off.

1. 00:08:384 (X) - Agrega una nota aqui ? (Por el "Go!")
2. 00:10:149 (X) - ^ (Si sigues la sugerencia, Lo mismo para los siguientes streams)
3. 00:39:267 (1,2,3) - Hitsounds~
4. 00:52:061 (6) - "Empty" termina aquí: 00:53:164 , puedes agregar un repeat más , para que se escuche mejor.
5. 01:31:511 (1) - Este slider puede ser mejorado, talvez una curva simple?

1. Sube el volumen del primer offset 1~2 ticks.
2. 01:38:791 - El ritmo que seguiste en esta parte no suena bien con la canción, corrige estos errores:
3. 01:39:011 (2) - Elimina esta nota, no suena bien.
4. 01:39:453 (X) - Agrega un circulo aqui.
5. 01:42:541 (2) - Esta tampoco se escucha bien.
6. 01:42:982 (X) - Otro circulo aqui.
7. ~
8. 01:53:129 (X) - "empTY" - Agrega un circulo.
9. 02:23:165 (X) - ^

1. 00:53:163 - "empTY" - Agrega un circulo. (Sugiero usar soft hitsounds para esta nota)
2. 01:28:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Este combo es muy largo, usa New Combo en (8).
3. 01:40:556 (1) - 1ro el spinner debería terminar aquí: 01:41:438; 2do Por qué está este spinner silenciado? Al menos quita el silencio del final del spinner y 3ro agrega Whistle al final (El 3ro no es necesario).
4. 01:44:085 (1) - ^
5. 02:07:724 (3,4) - Alinea (4) con el final de (3) ó muevelo a un lado, posiblemente salga fuera de la pantalla por el stack leniency.
6. 02:23:000 (1) - Terminalo aquí: 02:27:357 , como en Easy y Normal.

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. Los colores son solo dos mientras el fondo es algo colorido, puedes agregar el Verde y Amarillo? para que se vea bien con el fondo y no sea tan "monotono".

Easy

1. Increase volume for the 5 first timing sections at least 2 ticks (Including the 1st offset)
2. 01:44:967 (4) - Change this slider for a single circle. then: No ~
3. 01:45:850 (X) - Add a note here. No
4. 01:48:938 (5) - Remove this note, it sounds off. No

Normal

1. 00:08:384 (X) - Agrega una nota aqui ? (Por el "Go!") No
2. 00:10:149 (X) - ^ (Si sigues la sugerencia, Lo mismo para los siguientes streams) ^
3. 00:39:267 (1,2,3) - Hitsounds~ ~
4. 00:52:061 (6) - "Empty" termina aquí: 00:53:164 , puedes agregar un repeat más , para que se escuche mejor. Ok
5. 01:31:511 (1) - Este slider puede ser mejorado, talvez una curva simple? Le agrege spinner

eldnL's Hard

1. Sube el volumen del primer offset 1~2 ticks.
2. 01:38:791 - El ritmo que seguiste en esta parte no suena bien con la canción, corrige estos errores:
3. 01:39:011 (2) - Elimina esta nota, no suena bien.
4. 01:39:453 (X) - Agrega un circulo aqui.
5. 01:42:541 (2) - Esta tampoco se escucha bien.
6. 01:42:982 (X) - Otro circulo aqui.
7. ~
8. 01:53:129 (X) - "empTY" - Agrega un circulo.
9. 02:23:165 (X) - ^

Insane

1. 00:53:163 - "empTY" - Agrega un circulo. (Sugiero usar soft hitsounds para esta nota) Ok
2. 01:28:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Este combo es muy largo, usa New Combo en (8). Ok
3. 01:40:556 (1) - 1ro el spinner debería terminar aquí: 01:41:438 No ~; 2do Por qué está este spinner silenciado? No me gusta el sonido del spinner cuando gira y menos en esa parte >< Al menos quita el silencio del final del spinner No .-. y 3ro agrega Whistle al final (El 3ro no es necesario).
4. 01:44:085 (1) - ^ ^
5. 02:07:724 (3,4) - Alinea (4) con el final de (3) ó muevelo a un lado, posiblemente salga fuera de la pantalla por el stack leniency. Ok
6. 02:23:000 (1) - Terminalo aquí: 02:27:357 , como en Easy y Normal. (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Ese star priority o.o , +1~

Gonzvlo wrote:

eldnL's Hard

1. Sube el volumen del primer offset 1~2 ticks.
2. 01:38:791 - El ritmo que seguiste en esta parte no suena bien con la canción, corrige estos errores:
3. 01:39:011 (2) - Elimina esta nota, no suena bien.
4. 01:39:453 (X) - Agrega un circulo aqui.
5. 01:42:541 (2) - Esta tampoco se escucha bien.
6. 01:42:982 (X) - Otro circulo aqui.
7. ~
8. 01:53:129 (X) - "empTY" - Agrega un circulo.
9. 02:23:165 (X) - ^

Verdisphena wrote:

Rank this, the map is very awesome ಠ_ಠ !

artpiggo wrote:

Normal
00 33 090 new combo no
00 34 414 ^ no
00 48 973 remove whistle no
00 51 178 new combo no
00 53 164 ^ no

Hard
01 39 691 left some grid (according to distance snap in this combo set, it should be)
01 43 203 ^

Insane is OMG

Star then

KenezzEdward wrote:

Hey Verdi o/

Bima's Easy
-01:10:139 (2) - Finish en la repeticion? ok
-01:39:673 (3) - Clap en la primera repeticion? ok
-01:52:467 (2) - Clap Al inicio? no
-02:04:857 (3) - ^ no

Normal
-01:03:479 (1) - Finish? ok
-01:10:556 (1) - ^ ok
-01:17:614 (1) - ^ ok
-01:21:144 (1) - ^ ok
-01:58:680 (1) - A partir de aqui hay un cambio en el patron de Claps, deberias revisarlo bien (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

eldnl's Hard
-A mi parecer todo bien~

Insane
-Lo mismo que en Hard

Buen Map Verdi : D
Starred~

Gonzvlo wrote:

eldnL's Hard

1. Sube el volumen del primer offset 1~2 ticks. Fixed
2. 01:38:791 - El ritmo que seguiste en esta parte no suena bien con la canción, corrige estos errores: Fixed
3. 01:39:011 (2) - Elimina esta nota, no suena bien. Fixed
4. 01:39:453 (X) - Agrega un circulo aqui. Fixed
5. 01:42:541 (2) - Esta tampoco se escucha bien. Fixed
6. 01:42:982 (X) - Otro circulo aqui. Fixed
7. ~
8. 01:53:129 (X) - "empTY" - Agrega un circulo. No
9. 02:23:165 (X) - ^ No

artpiggo wrote:

Hard
01 39 691 left some grid (according to distance snap in this combo set, it should be) Fixed
01 43 203 ^ Fixed

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[Bima's Easy]

A good one. Gratz.

[Normal]

00:24:708 (1,2,3) - Stack them? No

[eldnL's Hard]

1/8 for a Hard?

00:26:031 (5,6,7,8) - Remove the 6.
00:27:796 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:31:325 (7,8,9,10) - Remove the 8.
00:34:855 (4,5,6,7) - Remove the 5.
00:45:884 (1) - Replace with a circle in the start and in the end of the slider.
00:46:325 (2) - ^
00:46:767 (3) - ^
00:47:208 (4,5,6,7) - Remove the 5 and 7.
00:47:649 (1) - Replace with a circle in the start and in the end of the slider.
00:48:090 (2) - ^
00:48:531 (3) - ^
00:48:973 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - This section fits... in an Insane. Remove 5, 7, 2, 4, 6, 8.
01:28:864 (2) - Replace with a circle in the start and in the end of the slider.
01:29:747 (4) - ^
01:30:629 (2) - ^
01:45:850 (1) - ^
01:46:291 (2) - ^
01:46:732 (3) - ^
01:47:173 (4,5,6,7) - Remove the 5 and 7.
01:47:614 (1) - Replace with a circle in the start and in the end of the slider.
01:48:056 (2) - ^
01:48:497 (3) - ^
01:48:938 (4,5,6,7) - Remove the 5 and 7.
02:19:415 (1,2,3) - Stack.
02:19:857 (4,5,6) - ^
02:20:298 (7,8,9) - ^
02:20:739 (10,11,12) - ^

Sorry for the mod, but you made an Insane, not a Hard.

[Insane]

I'll skip this one. Sounds fine to me, and I think you exaggerated a little bit in the streams. A more experienced modder should have a proper mod for this one. ;-;

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Sorry the delay.

Krisom wrote:

adjhaskdhaskdjhsakdjhkas Hola :>

General-
· Ya que cambiaste el fondo (hace tiempo), por que no cambias el "Background color" a algo que calze con el? Recuerda que sea el mismo en todas las diff :> Respecto al fondo, lo volvi a cambiar, me gusto mas el nuevo que el de antes, no se, solo que me gusto y como que le va mejor al tema, no se si lo apruebas, pero esta lindo :c

Easy-
I strongly recommend you to map the first short break, it's super weird, it doesn't fits in any musical way, and cookies.
02:04:857 (3) - Forgot to add a whilte? Your other patterns have a whistle at this point. ~

Normal-
01:16:732 (6) - Se spunoe que esto tenga el normal-sliderwhistle? Suena mal desu o3o Ok

Hard-
Sweet

Insane-
00:25:590 (4) - No muy seguro de que esto sea rankeable, despues de todo, es un burai slider. Muevelo un poco para estar seguros ok? Kya
00:53:163 (10) - Troll, muevela a otro lado para que sea visible o eliminala. Ok
01:22:026 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Troll, no le puedes dar otra fomra? forma* ok
01:24:122 (7,8,9,10) - ^ ok
02:21:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Super troll. ^? No u (?

Me encantaría dar bubble cuando arregles, pero como regla auto-impuesta, no estoy dando bubbles a cosas que no puedo pasar, y no soy capaz de pasar Insane D:

Gomen, dejo MAT star eso si, suerte

Krisom wrote:

Hard-
Sweet

rust45 wrote:

Sorry for the late mod!

[Insane]
00:45:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The random sliders in this stream make it really annoying as your slider velocity is faster than the spacing and so when you get to a slider (which will be hard to see what is and isn't a slider) you'll combo break out of your mouse moving too slow. Meh, it's fine

All the other map IMO are great, I just don't agree with the streams in Insane. But I shall shoot a star.

Verdisphena wrote:

rust45 wrote:

Sorry for the late mod!

[Insane]
00:45:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The random sliders in this stream make it really annoying as your slider velocity is faster than the spacing and so when you get to a slider (which will be hard to see what is and isn't a slider) you'll combo break out of your mouse moving too slow. Meh, it's fine

All the other map IMO are great, I just don't agree with the streams in Insane. But I shall shoot a star.

Sorry but nothing fixed, but thank you so much. About the slider velocity in that stream, imo the velocity it's fine, in my case that did not break my combo when I play, and if I low down the speed of the slider in that stream, it may be harder to recognize if it's a slider or a note

senaya wrote:

[Insane]
00:28:458 (2) - this one little slider is all straight when every other slider around him is curved. poor guy :'(
00:41:472 (5) - and this one is probably sick so he can't curve as good as others..
01:08:585 (7,8,1,2) - maybe it would be better to follow lyrics here somehow?
Oh, and those 0:45 -streams- are fine, I've seen something like that before.

Good luck, you've spent a lot of time on this

ErufenRito wrote:

Timing:

First timing section on normal and hard is not exactly 136,000 like the other diffculties. Although small differences like this one can be omitted, but it's just better for you to change it anyways.

Theres a timing section that hard doesn't have while the others do:

70332,441.176470588235,4,1,1,100,1,0
Translated as:
BPM: 136,000
OFFSET: 70.332

All difficulties should have the same red timing sections cause you're using the same mp3 file. So either add it on the hard difficulty, or take it out on the other difficulties. Bear in mind that you should do it depending on what timing is the correct >_>

Insane:

00:13:127 (4) - Ugly overlap. And it's also very hard to see during gameplay. If that's not your intention, then i suggest to make it more visible. It's fine =w=
01:09:029 (9) - Jump intencional? Yes
01:10:139 (3,4,5,6,1) - I strongly suggest you to eliminate them. This stream alone contains 3 different timing sections. And it doesn't exactly fit the songs anyways. Ok
01:10:556 (1) - Consider adding a finish hitsound ok
01:38:570 (4,1) - Don't really like this antijump. This can be easily confused with a doble. Although i guess it can be forgiven because (1) is a slider.
01:51:144 - Completely Optional: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/54186. Check timeline. Orange combos are 8 circles separated by 1/4, and pink combos are 2 repeat sliders separated in 1/8.

Easy:

01:02:147 (3) - Consider moving this to 01:01:925 -

No complains on the others diffs!

KillerRind wrote:

Hi ;D


[eldnL's Hard]
00:56:031 (5) - add 1 repeat time of dementia

Nice Hard guest diff map
Have a Star~

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Different offsets through the difficulties. Please make sure to use the same offsets for every difficulty.

[Difficulties]

[Bima's Easy]

9 Unsnapped notes, please make sure to resnap them all.

[eldnL's Hard]

+2 HP Drain Rate, +1 Overall Difficulty and +1 Approach Rate? Suits better for a Hard to me.

[Insane]

5 Unsnapped notes, please make sure to resnap them all.

01:08:808 (8,9) - Not a big fan of this sudden jump.
01:38:571 (4,1) - This is seriously confusing!

That's all..... I guess.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Insane]

5 Unsnapped notes, please make sure to resnap them all. ok

01:08:808 (8,9) - Not a big fan of this sudden jump.
01:38:571 (4,1) - This is seriously confusing!

That's all..... I guess.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Insane]
00:43:679 (6) - Possibly a new combo here because of the anti-jump? Or you could move it farther away. Added a new combo

osuplayer111 wrote:

[eldnL's Hard]

+2 HP Drain Rate, +1 Overall Difficulty and +1 Approach Rate? Suits better for a Hard to me. Ok

Mafiamaster wrote:

[eldnL's Hard]
01:10:361 (5) - Unsnapped. It'd be better to change 01:10:139 (4,5) into a slider like [Insane]'s in my opinion. Ok/No

eldnl wrote:

Bubbled ?

K i R a wrote:

Bueno, te doy star porque esta bastante bien, se ve buena la cancion y me gusto el map

A ver, aqui va mi mod xD.

General
-El offset lo he comprobado y queda en ms 0 (osea, perfecto) si le subes 10. Es decir: 7061

Easy
-En song options pon always stack, en advanced. No lo creo necesario
-Te falta un kiai time, se suelen poner en los coros de las canciones, y a ti te falta el primero en: 00:24:708 (1) - , acaba en 00:52:943 (4) -
-Por cosas de spacing este slider: 00:11:913 (2) - debe ir un cuadrito mas arribaEsta bien
-00:12:796 (3) - A ese le tienes que subir en la grid mas pequeña un cuadrito para que quede a la misma altura que el slider. (Spacing tambien). Esta bien ;w;
-Por consiguiente 00:13:237 (4) - el 4 tambien tienes que ponerlo en su sitio xD. Esta bien
-00:26:472 (3,4,1) - idem. ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^
-00:29:561 (2) - Ajusta el spacing con el distance snap, las siguientes notas tambien tienes que ajustarlas, no estan en su sitio.
-Se que es meterme un poco en tu estilo y tal pero... 00:52:943 (4) - esa nota esta fuera de ritmo, lo puedes solucionar eliminandola y haciendo una vuelta mas al slider, pero... ya te digo, esta fuera de ritmo.
-01:01:999 (3) - Esa nota en una easy = 50 o 100 xDD. Esa nota no va bien ahi, tienes que ponerla en la linea blanca que viene. Cada vez que la pruebo, solo 300
-01:10:139 (2) - Te falta una vuelta, si no dejas un hueco en el ritmo. Asi lo quiso el mapper
-02:22:945 (1) - Este timing point no funciona porque le has puesto en 0 y el editor no admite 0, el minimo es 5, revisalo. Esta bien .-.
Normal
-Tambien tienes que hacerle el kiai time igual que la easy xD, igual para lo del stack. No lo creo necesario
-00:39:267 (1) - Esta mal puesta, la distancia de el circulo de un slider a otro debe ser equivalente (el mismo). Esta bien
-00:53:164 (7) - Igual que en la easy esa nota es un 50 o 100 asegurado, quitalo y cambialo por una vuelta mas del slider. Esta bien asi
-01:05:699 (5,6,1) - No estan a la misma altura, ponlos bien. Asi los quiero ;w;
-01:09:695 (4) - Haz bien el stack. ok
-01:31:511 (1) - Si lo que pretendias era que el spin no sonara (que es lo que deberia hacer, no sonar xDD) lo pusiste demasiado pronto, si pones el timing justo encima del final del spin sonara, muevelo una raya alante para que no suene el spin y lo siguiente si. Esta bien asi
-01:42:320 (1) - En mi opinion queda mejor esa parte si a el inicio de ese combo le haces igual que en otros lugares un finish + clap, igual para el otro 1 (pruebalo y si crees que no queda bien pues nada xD). ok
-02:08:386 (4) - Spacing again xD, no está coordinado tanto con la anterior nota como con la siguiente. Spacing esta bien ;w;
-02:12:798 (1) - Igual, no te lo digo en todos pues algunos son del estilo y a veces es dificil diferenciarlos.
-El spin final igual que en el easy mira lo del sound. Esta bien asi
EldnL's Hard
-Lo mismo que lo que dije en la easy y el normal, el kiai y el stack. No
-01:52:026 (2) - Creo que (segun la musica) ese slider deberia ser 1/8 y no 1/4 xD, prueba a ver.
-02:21:180 (1) - Igual.
-Deberias mirar un poco mas los sounds, no he oido ningun whistle y yo creo que deberias ponerle alguno xD. En los inicios de combo suelen quedar bien.
Insane
-02:23:001 (1) - Wtf, si el spin no suena cuando esta haciendose y solo suena cuando termina, para que tantos timing points? Ese es el efecto que quiero que tenga, para eso son las timing points
-Lo mismo de kiai time y stack. dont
-00:07:503 (2) - Es algo confuso empezar por una azul, deberias poner una nota mas en la raya roja justo antes de la otra, para que asi sea mas entendible, ya que si no garantizas que la gente no entienda el ritmo que has hecho. Asi esta bien ;w;
-00:09:157 (2) - Ahi igual
-00:10:922 (2) - Igual, se que es algo un poco del estilo, pero es muy confuso.
-Una lista de lo mismo...00:14:451 (2) - 00:16:216 (2) - 00:17:981 (2) -
-00:20:959 (8,9) - Creo que con tantas notas asi mezcladas con sliders y tal va ser confuso sacar eso 300 tambien, yo cambiara el 8 y 9 por un slider y el 10 lo dejaria en circulo, asi seria menos confuso. Esta bien asi
-00:25:591 (4) - Haz bien el stack si puedes. ready
-Otra lista... Te falta un circulo antes...00:39:157 (2) - 00:40:922 (2) - 00:42:686 (2) - no thanks
-00:52:944 (9) - El stream le faltan unas cuantas notas, terminalo hasta la raya blanca. o_O, esta bien asi
00:56:032 (1) - Igual que haces un poco mas adelante, intenta corregir el offset ahi tambien pues esta un poco... PUFF. El offset es Perfecto
-00:59:451 (4) - , nada que decir, igual que antes. ^ ^ ^
-01:15:851 (1) - Haz bien el stack (tendras que volver a mover seguramente el stream). Esta bien asi
-01:35:483 (1) - No se que has hecho ahi pero esta muy fuera de ritmo, aparte de laconfusion del "duo-stream" neh
-01:38:130 (2,3) - Un jump sin sentido... Los jump se hacen cuando la musica tiene golpes fuertes o cambios brucos, ahi esta practicamente en silencio. ;_;, no necesariamente
-01:52:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - En vez de eso deberias p oner un slider de repeticion de 1/8 (escucha la musica, no es 1/4).okay

Y bueno, creo que por ahora es todo lo que puedo hacer, mucha suerte, a ver si rankeas este bonito map , te doy mi star que te la mereces xD.

K i R a wrote:

Bueno, te doy star porque esta bastante bien, se ve buena la cancion y me gusto el map

A ver, aqui va mi mod xD.

General
-El offset lo he comprobado y queda en ms 0 (osea, perfecto) si le subes 10. Es decir: 7061

Easy
-En song options pon always stack, en advanced.
-Te falta un kiai time, se suelen poner en los coros de las canciones, y a ti te falta el primero en: 00:24:708 (1) - , acaba en 00:52:943 (4) -
-Por cosas de spacing este slider: 00:11:913 (2) - debe ir un cuadrito mas arriba
-00:12:796 (3) - A ese le tienes que subir en la grid mas pequeña un cuadrito para que quede a la misma altura que el slider. (Spacing tambien).
-Por consiguiente 00:13:237 (4) - el 4 tambien tienes que ponerlo en su sitio xD.
-00:26:472 (3,4,1) - idem.
-00:29:561 (2) - Ajusta el spacing con el distance snap, las siguientes notas tambien tienes que ajustarlas, no estan en su sitio.
-Se que es meterme un poco en tu estilo y tal pero... 00:52:943 (4) - esa nota esta fuera de ritmo, lo puedes solucionar eliminandola y haciendo una vuelta mas al slider, pero... ya te digo, esta fuera de ritmo.
-01:01:999 (3) - Esa nota en una easy = 50 o 100 xDD. Esa nota no va bien ahi, tienes que ponerla en la linea blanca que viene.
-01:10:139 (2) - Te falta una vuelta, si no dejas un hueco en el ritmo.
-02:22:945 (1) - Este timing point no funciona porque le has puesto en 0 y el editor no admite 0, el minimo es 5, revisalo.
Normal
-Tambien tienes que hacerle el kiai time igual que la easy xD, igual para lo del stack.
-00:39:267 (1) - Esta mal puesta, la distancia de el circulo de un slider a otro debe ser equivalente (el mismo).
-00:53:164 (7) - Igual que en la easy esa nota es un 50 o 100 asegurado, quitalo y cambialo por una vuelta mas del slider.
-01:05:699 (5,6,1) - No estan a la misma altura, ponlos bien.
-01:09:695 (4) - Haz bien el stack.
-01:31:511 (1) - Si lo que pretendias era que el spin no sonara (que es lo que deberia hacer, no sonar xDD) lo pusiste demasiado pronto, si pones el timing justo encima del final del spin sonara, muevelo una raya alante para que no suene el spin y lo siguiente si.
-01:42:320 (1) - En mi opinion queda mejor esa parte si a el inicio de ese combo le haces igual que en otros lugares un finish + clap, igual para el otro 1 (pruebalo y si crees que no queda bien pues nada xD).
-02:08:386 (4) - Spacing again xD, no está coordinado tanto con la anterior nota como con la siguiente.
-02:12:798 (1) - Igual, no te lo digo en todos pues algunos son del estilo y a veces es dificil diferenciarlos.
-El spin final igual que en el easy mira lo del sound.
EldnL's Hard
-Lo mismo que lo que dije en la easy y el normal, el kiai y el stack.
-01:52:026 (2) - Creo que (segun la musica) ese slider deberia ser 1/8 y no 1/4 xD, prueba a ver.
-02:21:180 (1) - Igual.
-Deberias mirar un poco mas los sounds, no he oido ningun whistle y yo creo que deberias ponerle alguno xD. En los inicios de combo suelen quedar bien.
Insane
-02:23:001 (1) - Wtf, si el spin no suena cuando esta haciendose y solo suena cuando termina, para que tantos timing points?
-Lo mismo de kiai time y stack.
-00:07:503 (2) - Es algo confuso empezar por una azul, deberias poner una nota mas en la raya roja justo antes de la otra, para que asi sea mas entendible, ya que si no garantizas que la gente no entienda el ritmo que has hecho.
-00:09:157 (2) - Ahi igual
-00:10:922 (2) - Igual, se que es algo un poco del estilo, pero es muy confuso.
-Una lista de lo mismo...00:14:451 (2) - 00:16:216 (2) - 00:17:981 (2) -
-00:20:959 (8,9) - Creo que con tantas notas asi mezcladas con sliders y tal va ser confuso sacar eso 300 tambien, yo cambiara el 8 y 9 por un slider y el 10 lo dejaria en circulo, asi seria menos confuso.
-00:25:591 (4) - Haz bien el stack si puedes.
-Otra lista... Te falta un circulo antes...00:39:157 (2) - 00:40:922 (2) - 00:42:686 (2) -
-00:52:944 (9) - El stream le faltan unas cuantas notas, terminalo hasta la raya blanca.
00:56:032 (1) - Igual que haces un poco mas adelante, intenta corregir el offset ahi tambien pues esta un poco... PUFF.
-00:59:451 (4) - , nada que decir, igual que antes.
-01:15:851 (1) - Haz bien el stack (tendras que volver a mover seguramente el stream).
-01:35:483 (1) - No se que has hecho ahi pero esta muy fuera de ritmo, aparte de laconfusion del "duo-stream"
-01:38:130 (2,3) - Un jump sin sentido... Los jump se hacen cuando la musica tiene golpes fuertes o cambios brucos, ahi esta practicamente en silencio.
-01:52:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - En vez de eso deberias p oner un slider de repeticion de 1/8 (escucha la musica, no es 1/4).

Y bueno, creo que por ahora es todo lo que puedo hacer, mucha suerte, a ver si rankeas este bonito map , te doy mi star que te la mereces xD.

K i R a wrote:

To Bima:
Easy
-00:12:796 (3) - 1 grid up . (Spacing .
-00:13:237 (4) - ^
-00:26:472 (3,4,1) - ^
-00:29:561 (2) - check the spacing with the distance snap.
00:52:943 (4) - This note sounds bad
-01:01:999 (3) - Hard at moment to play
-01:10:139 (2) - Add a repeat to the slider

Verdisphena wrote:

K i R a wrote:

To Bima:
Easy
-00:12:796 (3) - 1 grid up . (Spacing .
-00:13:237 (4) - ^
-00:26:472 (3,4,1) - ^
-00:29:561 (2) - check the spacing with the distance snap.
00:52:943 (4) - This note sounds bad
-01:01:999 (3) - Hard at moment to play
-01:10:139 (2) - Add a repeat to the slider