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YA-KYIM - BAKUROCK ~Mirai no Rinkakusen~

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月14日 at 12:04:11

Artist: YA-KYIM
Title: BAKUROCK ~Mirai no Rinkakusen~
Source: Bakuman
Tags: wring kanpakyin holysoup sorda s_o_r_d_a collab collaboration
BPM: 170
Filesize: 5013kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.47 stars, 126 notes)
  2. Hard (4.97 stars, 425 notes)
  3. Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1015 notes)
  4. Normal (2.83 stars, 186 notes)
  5. wring (5 stars, 633 notes)
Download: YA-KYIM - BAKUROCK ~Mirai no Rinkakusen~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1
mp3 is Rapcut ver.
Thanks for mp3 cut Alace!
my first map

-mapset
Insane:wring
Hard Collab:holysoup and S o r d a Part here
SPOILER
00:01:200 ~ 01:22:030 S o r d a

01:22:030 - 01:32:939 Break

01:32:939 - 02:28:507 - hoLysoup

02:28:507 - 02:39:416 - S o r d a

02:39:416 - End hoLysoup
Normal:S o r d a
Easy:S o r d a
Taiko:kanpakyin
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Rigeru_old
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一番 :shock:
Cyril Scarlet
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二番 :shock:
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三　　 (＾o＾)　　　
　三　　<（　）>
三　　　／／

　 (＾o＾)　　三　　
<（　）>　　　三
　 ＼＼　　三
swish
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swish
:roll:
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8-)
banvi
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:cry:
DeadAlready
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DeadAlready
bakuman~ >w<

edit: a little advices on irc xD
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wring
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wring
star :)
y u c a
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y u c a
ふぁいおー(｀･ω･´)ﾉ
S o r d a
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S o r d a
Thank you all for star ;)

>>wring bakayuca quintitem
IRCmod thx chuchu>w</
>>swish
thanks for IRC mod
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Frill
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Frill
done

Download: YA-KYIM - BAKUROCK ~Mirai no Rinkakusen~ (Full ver.) (S o r d a) [Frill's Hard].osu
S o r d a
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S o r d a
thx　Frill!!
Feet
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Feet
I think good music
S o r d a
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>>mirutg
thx,IRCmod :)
taNa
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:)
H1ko
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H1ko
nice map and song ^^
Rorry
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:roll:
S o r d a
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>>taNa,H1ko
thx,star and testplay :)
>>Rorry
IRCmod thx
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CherryCherry
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CherryCherry
hey hey heyyyyyy :lol: :lol:
jadestar_old
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jadestar_old
star!! XD
gowww
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gowww
8-)
S o r d a
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>>Cherry,jadestar,gowww
Star,thx!! :)
dNextGen
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dNextGen
Source: Bakuman

ok
S o r d a
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dNextGen wrote:

Source: Bakuman

ok
yeah :)
thx,Star~
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quo
go go~ :)
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Apple
go-go- 8-)
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go-go- :!:
S o r d a
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S o r d a
mp3 changed
redownload plz
>>quo,totorin,Suzully
Star thx xD
Muya
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よっしゃ
S o r d a
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>>MuyaMuya
おっしゃ
IRCmodthx></
Cuuuuri
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Cuuuuri
ばっくばくー
Kami de shi ta.. :cry:
S o r d a
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S o r d a
12/25
BG revised
redownload plz

>>Qrool
IRCmodthx~
orioncomet
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orioncomet
I will mod only notes, won't mod hitsound ne

[General//All difficulties]
- delete red line at 00:15:739
- for offset i got
1st BPM: 170.000 | Offset: 1,709
2nd BPM: 176.000 | Offset: 15,399
and dont forgot to resnap all notes
- set a preview point to all diffs [go to where that you want to set it as preview point and then go to Menu Timing > Set Current Position as Preview point]
- add audio-lead-in to all diffs 1000ms http://uploader.sakura.ne.jp/src/up23455.jpg

[Easy]
01:21:875 (7,8) - don't stack them, make them like this look better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43444

[Normal]
00:09:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing on this combo is too big.
01:18:466 (9) - new combo, this combo color a bit long.
02:06:534 (5) - stack under 02:06:193 (4), plz don't jump on Normal.
some combo are too long, could you add some new combo on them?

[Frill's Hard]
- this diff look a bit too hard for a Hard diff x_x;
00:12:650 (1) - a BPM changed for only 1 silder speed change like this is already unrankable

[Patchouli's Insane]
00:13:002 delete this red line
00:50:511 (4) - add new combo?
00:53:239 (4) - ^
01:08:579 (4,5) - too far, reduce spacing a bit.
02:06:193 (1,2,3,4) - look like random jump and spacing is too big x_x maybe reduce spacing a bit.


pretty nice for first map
y u z u k i
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y u z u k i
kami humen★
KSHR
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KSHR
modding ;)

SPOILER
[Overall]
この曲のフルバージョンはラップがあるのですが
カットされているのでRap Cut ver.に直したほうがいいかもしれません


[Easy]
01:21:875(7)new combo(?)
02:35:170(5)new combo
↑次の同じメロディ（歌詞で言うと「遥かな夢を」のところ）でコンボを新しくしてるため
nice!!

[Normal]

01:21:875(4)---new combo(?)
01:51:535(6)---end at 01:52:217(?) もしわざととだったら無視してください
02:01:421(8)---1grid ↓ & →(?) ^
nice!!

[Frill's Hard]
00:51:180(1)---2grid(?)
↑前後のスぺーシングと違ったので一応書きました
nice!!


[Pachouli's Insane]
Fine!!
…:(；ﾞﾟ'ωﾟ'):

~COMMENT~
全difすごいと思いましたヽ(*´∀｀)ノ
初めはMODいらないんじゃないかと思ったくらいですw
結局合計約２時間がんばってMODするとこを見つけてもこれだけでした...orz
（ぱちぇさんdifに関しては見つけれませんでしたw ...悔しいヽ(`Д´)ﾉ ）
今後の譜面作成の参考にさせてもらいます_(._.)_


Do your best to rank this!! Star!!ヽ(*´∀｀)ノ★
S o r d a
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>>orioncomet
modthx~
I am revising it.
Wait a little more
>>YukaMi
starthx xD
>>KSHR
modthx~
All Fixed
12/27
Title Changed
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
Better mp3, maybe?

http://www.mediafire.com/?1o6rhf3aam5m2p2

Change the file name to BAKUROCK.mp3 and put in to the folder, reset your timing, and full-submit. Then I'll start making Taiko map.
S t a r e
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S t a r e
いいよーいいよー
Rusty
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Rusty
good map! :)
S o r d a
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>>lepidopudus
No Change
sorry
>>S t a r e,MForever
Star thx~ :)
m i z u k i
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m i z u k i
kami :roll:
MeLLoN
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MeLLoN
こんにちは 8-)

[General]
Offset +6~8?(304~306)
最後のスピンの終点をどれかの難易度に合わせて統一してください。

[Patchouli's Insane]
00:07:886 (4) - add whistle?
00:28:169 (5) - new combo?
00:36:180 (1,2) - 別にSoftじゃなくNormalのfinishでいいのでは？
00:52:885 (2,3) - spacing
00:53:907 (1) - ^
01:19:475 (6) - new combo
01:44:191 (x) - add note?
02:54:589 (1) - スライダーの後ろにちゃんと重ねてください。

[Frill's Hard]
00:15:725 (2) - Normal finishでもいいかもしれません。
00:29:362 (1) - spacing
01:14:873 (1) - Soft finishがあってないので変えたほうがいいかもしれません。
02:01:919 (5) - new combo?
02:42:998 (1) - spacing?

[Normal]
00:30:739 (1) - spacing
↑からspacing変更されてますが意図的でしょうか？
00:33:126 (3) - スライダーの後に重ねてください。
00:37:558 (1) - spacing
01:02:103 (7) - ^
01:03:126 (1) - ^
01:05:171 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:535 (6) - new combo,spacing
01:10:285 (1) - spacing

省略するので書きませんが2番もほとんどがSpacingミスなのでよく見直してなおしてください～。
あとCircle Sizeを最大にしてください。

[Easy]
02:08:920 (6) - new combo
02:14:716 (6) - ^
02:37:898 (4) - ^
good~

すたー(゜∀゜)
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
All suggestions :3

All

2nd red line is BPM 175.93
add 3th red line , BPM 175.93 offset 150039
remove Countdown?

Patchouli's Insane

00:19:646 - add note ?
00:25:953 (3) - change it to slider ? end at 00:26:294
00:44:021 - add note ?
00:47:260 - ^
00:48:112 - ^
00:48:282 - ^
00:53:907 (1) - move farther ?
01:15:214 (1) - start at 01:15:044 ?
01:15:555 - add note ?
01:44:191 - ^
02:50:157 - ^

Frill's Hard

00:07:885 (4) - reverse arrow is ....Orz
00:51:862 (3) - ^...
01:51:010 (1) - ^
01:56:805 (6) -
02:47:430 (2) -
02:57:657 (4) -

Normal

00:30:739 (1) - ^
00:37:558 (1) - move farther ?
00:55:285 (4) - reverse arrow
01:10:285 (1) - move farther ?
01:41:649 (1) - move closer ?
01:51:535 (6) - end at 01:52:217
01:54:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
02:08:580 (1) - move closer
02:22:558 (1) - ^
02:52:899 (1,2,3) - spacing
02:56:989 (1,2) - switch new combo ?

Easy

00:15:385 - remove this red line ?
00:13:003 (1) - end at 00:15:739
01:38:239 (1) - remove whistleslider?
01:52:557 (5) - ^
01:55:284 (1) -
02:03:807 (5) -
02:06:193 (4,5,7) - ..many whistleslider o.o

ganbare :3
Hinacle
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Star~
S o r d a
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S o r d a

MeLLoN wrote:

[Normal]
00:30:739 (1) - spacing
↑からspacing変更されてますが意図的でしょうか？ いいえ、忘れてました・・・直しました～
00:33:126 (3) - スライダーの後に重ねてください。
00:37:558 (1) - spacing
01:02:103 (7) - ^
01:03:126 (1) - ^
01:05:171 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:535 (6) - new combo,spacing
01:10:285 (1) - spacing


[Easy]
02:08:920 (6) - new combo
02:14:716 (6) - ^
02:37:898 (4) - ^
All Fixed~
thx mod MeLLoN :)

star thx~
Kitsuneko
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Kitsuneko
IRC modding and my noob modding

[Overall]
IRCでお伝えしたとおりEasy Normalのスライダーの形が全てバラバラなのでなるべく統一した方がいいです
あと難易度によってタイミングが違うのは好ましくないのでBPMを譜面セットで統一してください
patchouli's Insaneはしっかり合ってると思うので一度確認取って統一してみてください

[Easy]
00:01:709 (1) - 直線だけど何故か点が２つ? 直線なら直線に
00:48:466 (1) - ^
01:02:102 (4) - add new combo

[Normal]
00:07:356 (2) - up for 1 grid
01:02:103 (7) - add a new combo
01:03:126 (1) - remove a new combo
02:23:239 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 詰まって見えるので2,3,4,5と同じ間隔で6,7,8を並べた方がいいと思います。
03:00:058 (1) - the end to 03:05:239 and you may lower volume 全て統一してもらった方がいいですね。気にしないで下さい

[Frill's Hard]
nice diff~

[patchouli's Insane]
love this diff <3


タイミング変動の譜面は大変かも知れないけど頑張って
star~
Thite
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star~ :oops:
S o r d a
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S o r d a

Rikei wrote:

IRC modding and my noob modding

[Overall]
IRCでお伝えしたとおりEasy Normalのスライダーの形が全てバラバラなのでなるべく統一した方がいいです
あと難易度によってタイミングが違うのは好ましくないのでBPMを譜面セットで統一してください
patchouli's Insaneはしっかり合ってると思うので一度確認取って統一してみてください

[Easy]
00:01:709 (1) - 直線だけど何故か点が２つ? 直線なら直線に
00:48:466 (1) - ^
01:02:102 (4) - add new combo

[Normal]
00:07:356 (2) - up for 1 grid
01:02:103 (7) - add a new combo
01:03:126 (1) - remove a new combo
02:23:239 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 詰まって見えるので2,3,4,5と同じ間隔で6,7,8を並べた方がいいと思います。
03:00:058 (1) - the end to 03:05:239 and you may lower volume 全て統一してもらった方がいいですね。気にしないで下さい



タイミング変動の譜面は大変かも知れないけど頑張って
star~
All Fixed~ BPM,offset一回見直してみます！
thx mod~ :)
and star thx~ :D
mooai
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star~~ :)
JoJo
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Fight~~~((≧(≧▽(≧▽≦(≧▽≦)≧▽≦)▽≦)≦)))~~~
S o r d a
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>>mooai,Joshua Lost
star thx~ ganbarimasu!
leo_tano
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i love it :)
S o r d a
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S o r d a
Easy,Normal Remake

>>leo_tano
star thx~
Lalarun
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:evil: :twisted: :lol: :oops: :P
S o r d a
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S o r d a
>>Lalarun
8-)
Rucker
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Rucker
i like it xD
S o r d a
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>>Rucker
thx star>A<
MMzz
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MMzz
Can I make a taiko? :3
Well here if you want it xD

Download: YA-KYIM - BAKUROCK ~Mirai no Rinkakusen~ (Rap Cut ver.) (S o r d a) [MM's Taiko].osu
Takos
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ganbatte~
S o r d a
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S o r d a
>>MM
sorry,your map very short
Not added But nice map>.<

>>Takos
arigatou!
MMzz
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S o r d a wrote:

>>MM
sorry,your map very short
Not added But nice map>.<

>>Takos
arigatou!
I can map the rest if you want
RhaiizoN
RhaiizoN
<3
AngelNote
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hosi
Alace
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Alace
yareyare, finally i cut/time this mp3
http://puu.sh/3Xac

BPM:170.00 Offset:1200
BPM:176.00 Offset:14872
BPM:176.00 Offset:15212

that`s all
KayeSara
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Star~ :)
ignore
Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.
S o r d a
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S o r d a
http://puu.sh/bl2J
back up~
old mp3 and Frill's diff and Pachouli diff
sorry delete both mapper
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kanpakyin
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Back up

Download: YA-KYIM - BAKUROCK ~Mirai no Rinkakusen~ (S o r d a) [Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni].osu
wring
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やーもうほんとに時間かかって・・・
がんばってください＞＜
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
okok!Finally Done.

Taiko BG


Download: YA-KYIM - BAKUROCK ~Mirai no Rinkakusen~ (S o r d a) [Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni].osu
S o r d a
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S o r d a
finally 8-)
thanks for KPY taiko diff! Added~
also Added some tags please update!
hoLysoup
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DEKITA!!! :D!

Download: YA-KYIM - BAKUROCK ~Mirai no Rinkakusen~ (S o r d a) [Hard].osu
S o r d a
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S o r d a
Added! thanks soup
maybe Normal diff finished soon~
Ryafuka
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Ryafuka
from S o r d a's request

just all suggestion~

[General]
･太鼓のBGが消えてます(アップデートする際に出てくる注意事項でyes押しちゃった感じ？) :(
･NormalだけLead-inが他と違うので統一しましょう～。
･無音のSliderslideをsoft、Normal共に追加しましょう。


[Easy]
00:01:200 - ここから始まるパートは曲が静かなので100%じゃかなりうるさく思えます。30~40%程度にしてはどうでしょうか。
00:53:393 (4) - nc?
02:04:132 (4) - このタイミングのstackはEasyとしては結構難しいかも。
02:26:802 (4) - nc付けたほうが分かりやすいかも。
02:28:848 (1) - stackずれてるよん
03:00:723 - スピンで音とってるわけじゃないので終点の音量を5%？


[Hard]
00:01:200 - Easyと同じ。
IRC mod
12:34 <S o r d a> : ー
12:35 <S o r d a> : あいた
12:35 <Ryafuka> : purasu
12:35 *S o r d a is listening to (YA-KYIM - BAKUROCK ~Mirai no Rinkakusen~)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/23647]
12:35 <S o r d a> : やってくれ
12:35 <S o r d a> : はーど
12:38 <Ryafuka> : なんかきになるとこが
12:38 <Ryafuka> : あった
12:39 <Ryafuka> : まって
12:39 <S o r d a> : あの50出たとこかね
12:39 <S o r d a> : 01:55:950 (4) -
12:39 <Ryafuka> : そう
12:39 <Ryafuka> : 01:55:780 (3) -
12:39 <Ryafuka> : ここにncかな
12:39 <S o r d a> : おっけ
12:40 <Ryafuka> : ああいや
12:40 <Ryafuka> : ４のほうがいいか
12:40 <S o r d a> : 4だと微妙では
12:40 <Ryafuka> : 01:56:121 - ここあいてるから
12:40 <Ryafuka> : ４のほうがわかりやすいかなあっておもうんだけど
12:40 <Ryafuka> : どうなんだろ
12:41 <S o r d a> : 01:55:780 (1,1,2) - これ全部nc入れたら
12:41 <S o r d a> : 言われるかね
12:41 <Ryafuka> : んー
12:41 <Ryafuka> : ちょっとわかりにくいなー
12:41 <Ryafuka> : いれるんだったら
12:41 <S o r d a> : かなー
12:41 <Ryafuka> : 01:55:780 (3) -
12:41 <Ryafuka> : 01:56:291 (5) -
12:41 <Ryafuka> : かな
12:42 <S o r d a> : でもNC統一感あるんだよなあ
12:42 <S o r d a> : うーん
12:42 <S o r d a> : どっちかというとNCより配置に問題があるよなここほーりーすーぷのパートだけど
12:42 <Ryafuka> : まあせやね
12:42 <Ryafuka> : てか
12:42 <Ryafuka> : 同じような配置あったとおもうけど
12:42 <Ryafuka> : そっちは
12:42 <Ryafuka> : ncついてたきがするけどｗ
12:42 <S o r d a> : んんどこ？ｗ
12:43 <Ryafuka> : 探してます
12:43 <S o r d a> : ういす
12:43 <Ryafuka> : 00:11:788 (7) -
12:43 <Ryafuka> : あとここ
12:43 <Ryafuka> : 山なりになるように
12:43 <Ryafuka> : しましょう
12:44 <Ryafuka> : ひとつだけへこんでる
12:44 <S o r d a> : 8？
12:44 <S o r d a> : どれだ
12:44 <Ryafuka> : ７
12:44 <Ryafuka> : 下にgridさがってるでしょ
12:44 <S o r d a> : あああ
12:45 <Ryafuka> : 00:37:712 (3) -
12:45 <Ryafuka> : これ
12:45 <S o r d a> : くらっぷ？
12:45 <Ryafuka> : clap始点じゃなくて終点
12:45 <S o r d a> : だよなあｗｗ
12:45 <Ryafuka> : うん
12:46 <Ryafuka> : 00:53:734 (4,7) - このclap
12:46 <Ryafuka> : ここしかないから逆に浮いてるから削除していいかも
12:47 <S o r d a> : あの音の強いとこ？みたいなとこにクラップいれてんだけど
12:47 <S o r d a> : 変かなあ
12:47 <Ryafuka> : ん～
12:48 <Ryafuka> : カスタムとかで似たような音ならいいかもだけど
12:48 <Ryafuka> : デフォルトだからすごい浮いちゃってる感じがある
12:48 <S o r d a> : ふむふむならけしとこ
12:48 <S o r d a> : デフォルトのノーマルで音付けすんの実は
12:48 <S o r d a> : 初めてでだな
12:48 <Ryafuka> : 俺デフォルト嫌いだｗｗ
12:49 <S o r d a> : これなら多分カスタム見つけてくれば
12:49 <S o r d a> : 簡単にできただろうけど
12:49 <S o r d a> : 探すのめんどくて
12:49 <Ryafuka> : なるほど
12:49 <Ryafuka> : すごい疑問なんだけど
12:49 <Ryafuka> : BメロはソフトなのにAメロはノーマルなのはなんで？
12:50 <S o r d a> : (holysoup)
12:50 <S o r d a> : 察してくれ
12:50 <Ryafuka> : うーん
12:50 <Ryafuka> : 統一したほうがいいかもね
12:50 <S o r d a> : まあ今
12:50 <S o r d a> : かえてるｗ
12:50 <Ryafuka> : 個人的にソフトがいいかな
12:50 <S o r d a> : あっちは自由にしていいよっていってたから
12:50 <S o r d a> : マジ？
12:50 <S o r d a> : ノーマルの方があってるくね
12:50 <Ryafuka> : あー
12:50 <S o r d a> : ていうかringさんのdifがノーマルっていう理由なんだけどさ
12:51 <Ryafuka> : finishがソフトのほうがあってるきがするんだけど
12:51 <Ryafuka> : ひっとのーまるはノーマルのほうがあってるきがするな・・
12:51 <S o r d a> : だしょ
12:51 <Ryafuka> : まあここは好みで良いかも
12:52 <Ryafuka> : 01:58:507 (3) - ここにnc
12:52 <Ryafuka> : まあさっきとおなじかな
12:53 <S o r d a> : okk
12:53 <Ryafuka> : 02:13:848 (7) - ncかな
12:54 <Ryafuka> : 02:38:393 (4) - ncかな
12:54 <Ryafuka> : これは好みかも
12:55 <S o r d a> : okkなおしとく
12:55 <Ryafuka> : 02:58:933 (1) - 最後これスピンで音とってるわけじゃないから終点の音消していいんでない
12:55 <S o r d a> : おっけ
12:56 <Ryafuka> : まあこんなとこかー
12:56 <S o r d a> : せーぶろぐしとくか
12:56 <Ryafuka> : あのncのとこと同じとこなかったなｗ
12:56 <S o r d a> : りんぐさんのdiffも見てくれたり
12:56 <Ryafuka> : いいよー
12:56 <S o r d a> : 神おつ！！
12:56 <S o r d a> : あてかフォーラムで
12:56 <S o r d a> : できたり
12:56 <Ryafuka> : いいよｗ
12:57 <S o r d a> : あり！！
12:57 <Ryafuka> : じゃあセーブログ自分でとっとくわー
12:57 <S o r d a> : おっけ！

[wring]
00:15:212 (1) - nc
01:18:962 (1) - remove nc?
01:41:973 (4,1) - change nc?
02:16:234 - 緑線を02:15:893 - ここに移動して他の難易度とKIAIを統一させましょう
02:58:933 (1) - remove finish?


gomi mod sorry :(
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
S o r d a
Moved to pending~
Ready to mod!

Thanks to everyone>A</
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010


Hello :)

[Easy]

well

[Normal]

00:05:435 (7) - no overlap
00:07:729 (3) - Don't stack. It hard to read for new player.
mess hitsound, try to follow it

[Hard]

Okay :)

[wring]

AR8 easier to read
Fine for me :)

That all
NewRulerNA
1,301 posts
Joined December 2010
NewRulerNA
hi

[General]
PreviewTimeの設定がされていません

[Easy]
SliderMultiplierが0.80000000596046となっているので0.8に変更

01:21:604 - この緑線は01:21:689に移動させるべきでは？ 今の状態だとsliderslideの音が少し入ってしまいます
02:04:643 (1) - 00:57:825 (1)の時と音取りが違います　個人的には02:04:643の音取りで統一したほうが良いように思えます
02:08:393 (3,4) - Distance
03:00:638 - この緑線、Normalに合わせて03:00:552に移動

[Normal]
SliderMultiplierが1.00000000596046となっているので1.0に変更

00:04:023 (5,7) - 初心者には被っている部分が多く難易度が高いかも
00:27:484 (3,4) - Distance
01:04:302 (1,2) - ^
01:21:007 (2,3) - ^
02:27:825 (2,3) - ^
02:39:075 (7,1) - ^

[Hard]
SliderMultiplierが1.60000000596046となっているので1.6に変更

02:09:757 (5,6,7) - 01:03:280 (5,6,1)?とヒットサウンドが違います、どちらかにヒットサウンドのパターンを統一で


[wring]
SliderMultiplierが1.90000000596046となっているので1.9に変更

00:15:212 (1) - スピナー後のncが外れているので追加

1点のみ

good luck~
Fumika
1,432 posts
Joined November 2011
Fumika
As per your Request + w + ~
Here M4M ~

General

  • [list:33d02]
  1. Why you not use custom-hitsound for your map ?

Easy

  • Setting


    1. Fine
  • Mapping


    1. 00:08:258 (2) - remove this note and 00:07:905 (x) - add slider with reverse 1/1 end at 00:08:611 this ?
    2. 00:08:964 (3) - Delete this note.
    3. 00:34:302 (4) - NC.
    4. 00:58:848 (1) - Use soft finish here instead normal finish ?
    5. 01:12:484 (3) - NC.
    6. 01:17:939 (3) - ^
    7. 01:19:984 (1) - Remove NC.
    8. 01:21:348 (3) - NC.
    9. 01:46:575 (3) - Add finish at start of slider.
    10. 01:52:030 (4) - NC
    11. 02:05:666 (1) - Remove NC
    12. 02:08:393 (4) - NC here.
    13. 02:28:848 (1) - a little overlapped by 02:27:484 (2)
  • Timing


    1. Fine

Normal

  • Setting


    1. Fine
  • Mapping


    1. 00:07:199 (2) - Too hard to read for new player.
    2. 00:58:848 (1) - Use soft finish here instead normal finish ?
    3. 01:05:325 (2) - Wrong spacing.
    4. 01:07:030 (5) - NC.
    5. 01:17:939 (4) - ^
    6. 01:20:666 (1) - Remove NC.
    7. 01:21:007 (2) - Remove this note ? there was silence here.
    8. 01:21:348 (3) - NC.
  • Timing


    1. Fine
That's all I can find , sorry ; w ;
There are already more than +8 SP ,then I don't need to shoot my star here ~ w ~
wring
596 posts
Joined February 2010
wring
some mods fixed thank you :)

Download: YA-KYIM - BAKUROCK ~Mirai no Rinkakusen~ (S o r d a) [wring].osu
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
request from in-game :)

Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice


wring

  1. 00:11:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this ?
  2. 01:17:427 (4) - move to (x:280,y:156),it looks better
  3. 01:42:143 (1,2,3,1) - this part flows not good,(2,3) - ctrl + R can be flows better and more exciting
  4. 02:28:166 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should increase the spacing to emphasize the music
  5. 02:58:933 (1) - the finish here sounds off,remove it
  6. fun diff ~ <3


Hard

  1. 00:27:484 (6) - this notes destroy the flow,place it to other location
  2. 00:54:246 (5) - the slider looks not good
  3. 00:57:314 (7,1) - I think you should keep more spacing between them because of 3/4 beats
    move 00:57:825 (1) to (x:76,y:220) and make this pattern to emphasize the vocal ?
    (distance snap between (1,2,3) is 1.5x)
  4. 01:21:007 (5) & 01:22:030 (2) - stack them completely
  5. 02:27:484 (5) - I think you can add NC here to emphasize the music
    btw,I'm bored with 02:27:484 (5),change it to 3 notes and increase their spacing will be better
  6. 02:58:848 (1) - I think it stack on 02:57:825 (2) looks more clean

Normal

  1. 00:11:435 (4) -
  2. 01:21:689 - add a "N" grean line here to follow the drum as well
  3. 02:58:848 (1) - the spinner should end at 03:00:212 to compare for Hard & Insane diffs
    and why is it silent here ? the music still works,isn't it ?

Easy

  1. 01:07:030 (3) - uh..the slider looks so strange
  2. 01:20:666 (3) - don't stack it under the slider's tail in Easy diff,really orz
  3. 01:35:666 (3) - Can you make it prettier ? I feel uncomfortable with that :?
  4. 01:41:121 (4) - why is the clap on the slider's reserve ?
    as your hitsound setting,01:32:939 ~ 01:54:075 shouldn't add any clap
  5. 02:24:757 (3) - you know T.T
  6. 02:50:666 (2) - don't stack,the reason is the same as 01:20:666 (3)



nice song & good mapset
stars in this beatmap are enough so I don't shoot a star
good luck ~
:)
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