Oriental ST8 - Dear My Lady · forum

Wizard Of Orz

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Wizard Of Orz 2009-09-24T23:17:16+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, October 29, 2009 at 7:02:16 PM

Artist: Oriental ST8
Title: Dear My Lady
Tags: DJMAX Black Square orz
BPM: 128
Filesize: 2307kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Easy Style (2.18 stars, 97 notes)
Hard Style (4.99 stars, 298 notes)
Normal Style (4.36 stars, 161 notes)

Download: Oriental ST8 - Dear My Lady
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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OK i finished.

Last edited by Wizard Of Orz 2009-10-30T02:02:12+00:00, edited 23 times in total.

mm201

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mm201 2009-09-25T03:02:13+00:00

Needs more Finishes. =P And silent hitsounds wtf. (Slider ends are fine)

Lilac

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Lilac 2009-09-25T03:37:56+00:00

Hitsounds recommendation...

JUST A RECOMMENDATION!

Download: Oriental ST8 - Dear My Lady (supergarlic) [Maximum Style].osu

Wizard Of Orz

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Wizard Of Orz 2009-09-25T03:41:25+00:00

thx but no thx :[

kudosu for trying

AeonWing

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AeonWing 2009-09-26T05:30:05+00:00

Normal Style:
00:09:480 (1): Finish?
00:30:690 (1): That spinner comes like instantly after (5). Might want to delay it a bit, or something.
00:58:698 (2,3,4,5): Jumps? If not, spacing.
00:59:870 (1): That spinner comes like instantly after (5). Might want to delay it a bit, or something.
01:06:198 (5): Spacing?
01:14:987 (1): That spinner comes like instantly after (2). Might want to delay it a bit, or something.

Maximum Style:
00:11:589 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1): Some crazy jumps... Try placing them maybe a little closer or use the 2x BPM Spacing

happy30

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happy30 2009-09-26T11:45:24+00:00

[Normal Style]

good

[Maximum Style]

00:54:48 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this kills the flow imo

01:16:98 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Can u make something more interesting here?
01:24:48 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

good map.

Wizard Of Orz

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Wizard Of Orz 2009-09-26T19:36:26+00:00

happy30 wrote:
[Normal Style]

good

[Maximum Style]

00:54:48 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this kills the flow imo mk
01:16:98 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Can u make something more interesting here? changed it. it's not that good though :/
01:24:48 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ sort of changed

good map.

i sort of made it more interesting i guess

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Wizard Of Orz

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Wizard Of Orz 2009-09-28T01:13:19+00:00

AeonWing wrote:
Normal Style:
00:09:480 (1): Finish? no
00:30:690 (1): That spinner comes like instantly after (5). Might want to delay it a bit, or something. I don't see how this is a problem
00:58:698 (2,3,4,5): Jumps? If not, spacing.I don't see how this is a problem
00:59:870 (1): That spinner comes like instantly after (5). Might want to delay it a bit, or something.I don't see how this is a problem
01:06:198 (5): Spacing? color=#FF0000]I don't see how this is a problem[/color]
01:14:987 (1): That spinner comes like instantly after (2). Might want to delay it a bit, or something. I don't see how this is a problem

Maximum Style:
00:11:589 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1): Some crazy jumps... Try placing them maybe a little closer or use the 2x BPM Spacing why would i use 2x bpm for that and the jumps are fine.

thx for trying though :[

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2009-09-28T07:12:50+00:00

max style.
00:07:60 (1) - spacing? or maybe it's supposed to be a jump idk. just pointing it out.
00:16:74 (8) - finish at the end of this slider
01:01:98 (1) - finish?

normal
all good!

that's all >__< cool map!

Wizard Of Orz

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Wizard Of Orz 2009-09-28T23:23:50+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2009-09-29T02:50:54+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Wizard Of Orz

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Wizard Of Orz 2009-09-29T04:04:32+00:00

DJPop wrote:
~Normal Style~
00:30:69 (1) - on red tick does it reallly matter >_>
00:54:48 (1,2,1,2) - hitfinish mk
00:59:63 (5) - delete note follows the drums
01:14:98 (1) - on white tick does it reallly matter >_>

~Maximum Style~ <<< I don't feel like it suits "Maximum" changed to hard style
00:02:68 (1) - delete note ok
00:07:37 (3) - ^ no
00:11:00 (2) - ^ no
00:39"245 - add note ok
00:43:11 (9) - delete note no
00:54:48 (1,2,1,2) - hitfinish on start points no
00:59:98 (1) - on white tick does it reallly matter >_>
01:16:159 - add note no

Aoitenshi

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Aoitenshi 2009-10-02T17:15:36+00:00

Normal :
I don't like the kiai placement, it's not rhyme with the enthuastic part.

Hard:
I don't like the kiai placement, it's not rhyme with the enthuastic part.

Sorry. No star.

Hanyuu

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Hanyuu 2009-10-05T23:06:04+00:00

Normal:

fine for me but this slider speed slowdown happens a bit fast for me i allmost missed it because of that (maybe make a break before you use this slowdown 1 beat)

overall this can can be seen as a hard it is not normal ^^

Hard:

you should increase the spacing between the slow sliders, if it is so close together it loses its style

^_^

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-10-07T03:30:57+00:00

[Normal]
00:12:29 (1) - why no whistle on endpoint?
00:48:85 (1) - move to 00:48:73
00:52:60 (1) - move to 00:52:48
01:03:62 (4) - finish? Owo i recommend you whistle.
01:11:58 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - too many 1/2 notes on normal
01:20:49 - add note? just opinion
01:27:99 - ^

[Hard]
00:11:00 (2) - delete?
00:29:87 (1,2) - spacing is confuse me. @_@ but not bad
00:43:11 (9) - delete?
01:03:62 (3) - same with normal
01:20:26 (4) - i recomed add clap on the end of slider
01:27:76 (4) - ^

Shinde

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Shinde 2009-10-08T05:16:11+00:00

I like Hard Style more each time I play it. I feel like I'm forgetting something though.. Hrm.

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blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2009-10-08T07:09:38+00:00

Easy Style:

SPOILER

Combo mod:
00:26:35 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:54 (1) - ^
01:13:23 (8) - new combo?

Normal Style:

SPOILER

Combo mod:
00:38:54 (1) - remove new combo?
01:23:54 (1) - ^

Timing section mod:
00:55:18 - I think it is a little weird to have 2 hitsounds that vary greatly in volume to be so close to each other, so if you press the note early, you will get a very different hitsound than the hitsound created by hitting the note late. I advise you move one of the hitsounds or remove one of them
00:57:05 - ^
01:01:98 - ^

Hard Style:

SPOILER

Combo mod:
01:10:88 (4) - new combo?

Timing section mod:
01:01:98 - same as Normal Style

Great map. Star.

Wizard Of Orz

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Wizard Of Orz 2009-10-08T23:19:09+00:00

i only fixed the combo thing in easy style.

The silent section with three notes are emphasizing the music and not the hitsounds. I want your ears to pay attention to the music yet still click some stuff.

The silent slider areas feel like something should be in the areas i assigned the silent parts to but should not make a sounds.

SecksyJennie

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SecksyJennie 2009-10-12T18:00:20+00:00

It's great, really, I love it.
+Star~

gp0_old

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gp0_old 2009-10-20T01:00:36+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

anonymous_old

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anonymous_old 2009-10-20T02:33:58+00:00

orite

There's that one stream near the beginning in Hard which ends in a slider. Spacing is inconsistent (slider and last note are 1/4 apart but have 1/2 spacing)...

Wizard Of Orz

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Wizard Of Orz 2009-10-24T21:06:22+00:00

woo one kudosu star

anonymous_old

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Here since the beginning

anonymous_old 2009-10-30T01:53:20+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Wizard Of Orz

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Wizard Of Orz 2009-10-30T02:02:11+00:00

Loogiesquared wrote:
Easy Style
SPOILER

00:07:60 (4,1,2) : Copypasta the same slider as in 00:04:32. nah
00:09:48 (1) : Finish hitsound. nah
00:29:16 (3,4) : You're going near the edge of the screen. Flip 3 vertically. it's still playable and technically placed on the grid
01:24:48 (1) : Finish hitsound. nah

Normal Style
SPOILER

01:13:69 (2) : New combo. nah
01:13:69 (2,3,4) : Spacing. ok

Good.

Hard Style
SPOILER

00:16:74 (8) : Finish hitsound. you will barely notice it's sound effect

Excellent.